On request.
Sharlo:Mm, mixed feelings about the mapping structure, buuuuuut taking into account that this is a first-off, I actually have a good opinion of where Sharlo stands as a mapper (terms of experience, mapping intuivity and with or without assistance)
Not so much of technical modding from me.
- 00:39:246 (5) - Not sure as to why this has to be in 1/4, 1/2 does pretty nicely, but I do notice the slider sticks out like a sore thumb if you do so, so I guess you could shape it to minimalize the effect.
- 00:41:079 (1) - Could remove the New Combo here. But as I've seen, you have a tendency to place NC's every half-way through a line of the lyrics. Consistent I suppose.
- 02:29:746 (3) - Shift this a little left so that small part isn't covered up.
- 03:12:413 (1) - Don't feel that this should be applied here.
- 03:24:579 (2) - Deserves a note. From here on, I would suggest you connect a majority of the notes to par since it gets a little more intensive on the vocals.
- 03:29:913 - ^
- 03:30:413 (1) - Kind of off-handed. The only indication (still pretty vague at best) is that it's of a different combo color, which doesn't help much.
So this can be replaced with hitcircles instead of having to suffice with a slowed slider.
- 03:31:579 (1,1,1) - These in particular are quite unsettling, I cannot quite perceive any one of them to positively accentuate the song/map/playing.
Especially when - 03:31:746 - is such a good spot for a nice down-beat hitcircle.
The constant 1/2 tempo of the song doesn't give these 1/4 sliders a chance to work.
- 04:06:913 - Add a note? Shouldn't be leaving so many gaps in-between vocals for the next few parts, even more so when it's the last stretch of the map.
- 04:19:413 (1) - Maybe you put this for some variety. Here's a suggestion for you:
- 04:24:413 - Why u no put note ????????????????
- 04:37:746 (3) - I considered having a slow running slider here instead. You could give it a try and see if you like it.
That's all I have. Nice singing.