Sekai-nyan wrote:

OK as you requested in #modreq :3 i'll mod just 1 diff~

General:

1. Inconsistency in Leadin, countdown and letterbox
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times in all diffs~ ><

Easy:

1. 03:29:079 (2) - NC bug, plz re-add the NC in this note~

Sharlo:

Unsnapped stuff

1. 00:19:246 (4) - remove this whistle it's don't really fit here ><
2. 00:22:413 (1) - maybe move the 3rd slider point few grids up~
3. 00:23:413 (5) - ^ but 2nd slider point~
4. 00:26:413 (7) - this slider looks a bit bad, so maybe fix it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:35:413 (8) - remove this clap it's sounds bad to me ><
6. 00:39:246 (4) - why you add this? i don't think it's follows anything. Maybe do something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:43:579 (1,2) - switch those nc~
8. 00:46:079 (5) - remove clap and add a finish here it's sounds much better to me and to make consistency with the other whistles~
9. 00:48:079 (2) - same as 00:35:413 (8) -
10. 00:50:913 (4) - why clap in here? i don't think it's really fit this song >< remove it plz~
11. 00:51:746 (2,3) - those slider's really looks a bit bad but maybe you can fix them like this? (don't forget to fix the spacing on the notes :3)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:54:079 (6) - remove clap and add a whistle plz~
13. 00:57:079 (4) - remove the whistle on slider start, and add it at then end of the slider >< sounds much better~
14. 00:58:413 (1) - ^
15. 00:59:079 (3) - remove the whistle here~
16. 00:59:413 (4) - remove the clap here~
17. 01:00:246 (2) - ^
18. 01:01:413 (5) - remove the clap on slider's end it's really don't fit ></
19. 01:06:913 (6) - remove all the hitsounds on this note~
20. 01:07:746 (3) - i don't hear anything so why you added a clap here? i think you should remove it~
21. 01:13:913 (5) - remove the NC here i think it'll follow the nc before~
22. 01:16:246 (3) - I think you can make it like this 00:51:746 (2,3) -
23. 01:18:413 (9) - add a nc here so it'll make the combo shorter ></ it's too long imo~
24. 01:28:746 (6) - orz this slider sounds is annoying, if you remove the whistle at the end it'll maybe sound better~
25. 01:34:913 (5) - remove the clap at slider's start~
26. 01:40:413 (5,6,7) - WAAAAA those claps again QAQ don't add claps with whistles orz. maybe do it like this remove clap here 01:40:413 (5) - slider's start, then remove whistle here 01:40:746 (6) - slider's start, and then remove whistle 01:41:079 (7) - slider's end
27. 01:41:913 (1) - remove this clap~ (okok maybe i'll stop with hitsiunds.....maybe you got the idea now QAQ)
28. 02:08:746 (1,3) - switch the nc~
29. 02:16:579 (1,4) - ^
30. 02:18:079 (1) - remove nc
31. 02:21:913 (1,4) - same as i said here 02:16:579 (1,4) -
32. 02:24:579 (1,3) - same as i said here 02:08:746 (1,3) -
33. 02:27:246 (1,2) - switch the nc~
34. 02:29:079 (1) - remove the nc the vocal was still going~
35. 02:32:746 (1,3) - switch nc~
36. 02:43:246 (1,4) - ^
37. 02:47:746 (10) - this combo is too long maybe add nc here?
38. 02:48:579 (1) - remove the nc~

>< i think this diff needs more work on hitsounding plz try to work it out ~


SumiSola:

1. Unsnapped inherited sections at: 00:22:405 - snap to 00:22:413

>w< nyan ~ good luck with ranking~

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]

.osb删掉？貌似没看到SB。


[Easy]
没发现什么问题~


[Normal]

初见打完的感觉就是NOTE基本上在四边，中间排得相对少。

00:54:413 (1,2,3) - 这里要不要把中间那个CIRCLE挪下点，跟00:57:079 (1,2,3)的对称？
01:34:413 (1) - 我想你是有意把slider做成3拍的，要不要在下一个重拍加个NOTE，叠在这个slider尾巴上？
04:35:746 (1) - 同上


[Hard]

看了下是AR8，打的时候觉得slider有点不舒服，有种AR很高的感觉。
要不考虑调成AR7，OD调高点？

01:29:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个跳有点突然，排成这样如何？ => image001
03:15:079 (6,1,2) - 这里超坑不解释233差点就断了


[Sharlo]

我猜这个难度是Sharlo做的www

先说下初见的感觉，节奏、排列和DS都有点乱，建议先用固定DS排一遍，再去拉出不同的间距来。（才不会说我被坑了四个X呜…）
然后跟歌词跟得太紧，连着的CIRCLE比较多，让人觉得无法放松，会有图很紧凑的错觉。
不过前几个难度都是澄空取的节奏，夏萝这个难度有个新节奏也挺不错的呢。

00:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用的DS应该是1.2？但00:14:413 (1)的prev是0.85，我觉得刚开始还是先按DS排好点，先让玩家进入下状态。
00:14:413 (1,1) - 这两个NOTE之间感觉有点空，如果是中间break的时候这么放倒是没问题
00:16:080 (1,2) - 这两个NOTE没叠好
00:16:746 (3,1) - 同第一条
00:18:079 (1) - 这个slider是在那几下连着的钢琴声之中的，从这一小段钢琴声开始排会比较好。比如说这样 => image002
00:19:246 (4,5) - 这里其实应该放三连，钢琴声有三下。
00:24:746 - 至少在这个地方加一个CIRCLE，不然中间会莫名空出一段，而且钢琴声很明显。
00:29:579 - 同上
00:31:913 (3,4) - 建议还是像前面那个二连那样排开，比较好看。另外实际上这里的钢琴声仍然是三连的……第一下从00:31:246开始。后面也有这样放二连的却不会有违和感，因为有其他的节奏和人声，这里就只有钢琴了。
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8) - 这一段咱试着排了下，仅供参考 => image003
00:39:079 - 这里最好还是不要空着，因为音乐很连续。
00:39:246 (4) - 这个slider设置得不好，跟歌词太紧，长音可以考虑用短slider来代替，一般这种三四次来回的短slider都用在颤音或者节奏特别强烈的地方。
00:39:746 (1) - 这里也可以放个短slider，配上"どーち"的歌词
00:40:413 (3) - 也显得有些突兀
00:51:746 (2) - 还是想吐槽一下这种slider不太好看ww让人想到魔杖什么的……
01:17:913 (8) - 加个New Combo
02:05:746 (2) - 同之前所说的
02:09:912 (6,7) - 6换成不回转的slider好点
02:28:746 (4) - 同上
02:29:746 (3) - 同上
02:46:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打不太合适，还是换成两个slider+circle比较好
02:56:746 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
02:57:579 - 加一个circle
03:12:413 (1) - 换成几个小跳的CIRCLE会更好
03:25:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里会坑到人w（虽然我没被坑）
03:30:413 (1) - 这个减速有点奇怪
03:31:579 (1,1,1) - 这三个没有跟上音乐的说。应该这么说吧，你前面的slider跟的是人声，紧接着突然变成跟背景音乐会让人反应不过来。
04:09:413 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面所说
04:19:579 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个我倒是觉得换成短的回转slider不错
04:21:579 (1,2,3) - 同上
04:29:746 - 加个NOTE


唔，重新把中间空掉的地方填一下，DS也统一起来，之前有个MAPPER和我说，可以考虑平时用1.0，KIAI用1.2这样，总之还是先保证玩家打得舒服比较好。
然后跟人声还是跟音乐最好有个主次，比例适当打起来就不会有违和感。大概就是在同一个阶段里，同样的节奏取同样的梗？
夏萝加油ww



[Sumisola]

妈呀果然是AR9 wwww

00:18:413 (2,3) - 没叠好
00:28:079 - 加个NOTE？
04:03:746 (1,1,2) - 这个DS是用来坑人的吗ww

开50%看了一遍，其他没发现什么问题，就是觉得有些1/4的回转短slider有点不顺手~




于是以上~

Kite wrote:

[Sumisola]
AR8 fits the song more imo
OD+1
00:43:079 (4) - New combo fits here imo, else it might be mistaken for a jump because of the previous pattern
01:18:079 (8) - partly hidden because of previous hitburst, imo triplet doesnt fit here, try 1/2 instead it sounds better to me
01:25:746 (1,2) - ctrl+r seems better
01:28:746 (8) - again triplet seems out of place, 1/2 fits better imo
02:19:079 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:246 (6) - might be better to remove this beat, whatever you like more
03:24:246 (1) - remove new combo
03:26:579 (2) - 1/2 later seems better to me
03:27:079 (2) - maybe remove this beat?
03:28:079 - add beat
03:33:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - might be asking for too much but removing 03:33:829 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - would fit the song so much more and you could continue mapping the break calmly following the melody until 03:45:079 (1) -
04:10:579 - add beat stacked on slider end
04:12:246 - add beat at x:44 y:285

[Sharlo]
Remove Audio Lead-in
00:32:913 (8,1) - looks a bit ugly having different spacing from 8 to 1
00:40:246 - add beat?
02:04:746 (5) - triplet sounds weird here, just place 1 circle on white tick?
02:05:579 - add beat?
02:46:162 (2) - imo it would be better to remove this and respace the combo (like this for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440387)
02:49:079 (1) - remove new combo
02:54:079 (6) - triplet sounds weird here, try 1/2
02:56:829 (2) - same as before
03:12:413 (1) - not sure about this one it sounds a bit loud and out of place for me, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440390
03:18:413 (1) - remove new combo imo
03:22:079 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:25:413 - add a beat here and remove 03:25:579 (1) - imo
03:30:413 - this slowdown is really sudden, try to use less slow here, 0,75x maybe
03:31:579 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - i suggest to remove all this, it doesnt fit the song; a spinner fits better her start from 03:31:746 - end 03:34:079 -
03:34:496 - you can map this break just following the melody
04:07:746 (1) - remove new combo
04:09:413 (1) - ^
04:13:079 (1) - ^
04:18:412 (1) - ^
04:19:413 - add a beat here?
04:38:413 (5) - finish hitsound?

[Hard]
Remove Audio Lead-in
03:02:413 - Kiai time is missing till break, you have it in all other difficulties
03:15:079 (6,2) - this is not good, it's deceiving for the player; i suggest to place beats on white tick where 03:15:079 (6) - starts and ends

[Normal]
00:58:078 (2) - move to x:258 y:295 so it will be 0,8 from previous and 0,8 to next object

I like this mapset and song, Sharlo has a nice voice
If you have any questions feel free to pm me

KingsAL2 wrote:

By AL2 modding queue
Sorry for late map
==General==
By only mapping Sharlo

==Sharlo==
-- Combo Problem --
01:40:413 (5) - New combo ?
02:59:246 (5) - New combo and remove 02:59:746 (1) -
03:13:079 (3) - New combo ? A Kaia time started?
03:26:413 (1) - remove new combo and start at 03:27:413 (2) -
04:10:579 (6) - Spacing changed New combo.
-- Sound --
00:19:246 (4) - Remove wistle
00:29:913 (1) - Clap?
00:41:579 (2-2nd) - The clap too odd...
00:47:746 (1-1st,2-1st) - Remove wistle
00:50:413 (1) - Missing clap
]00:50:913 (4) - Remove clap
01:01:079 (4-1st) - Clap?
01:03:746 (1-1st) - ^
01:06:413 (5-1st) - ^?
01:06:913 (6) - Remove clap
01:07:746 (3-1st) - Clap? (-2nd) remove clap
01:09:079 (3-1st) - Clap?
01:25:746 (5) - Clap?
01:27:746 (3-1st) - Clap? 5-1st remove clap
01:30:413 (1) - Missing clap
... Not gonna mod sound :3
-- Spacing --
02:05:079 (6) - Just think the spacing quite strange
-- Other(S) --

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Nice song X_X
UNLIKE :
1. Sound : You need to check that you do not have any extra notes that always wistle and clap in a wrong way...
2. New combo : Check that the new sentence should be a new combo and a new spacing also...

jogfi2002 wrote:

[Sharlo]

我猜这个难度是Sharlo做的www Sharlo都写着了当然是Sharlo做的了AHO> <

先说下初见的感觉，节奏、排列和DS都有点乱，建议先用固定DS排一遍，再去拉出不同的间距来。（才不会说我被坑了四个X呜…）
然后跟歌词跟得太紧，连着的CIRCLE比较多，让人觉得无法放松，会有图很紧凑的错觉。
不过前几个难度都是澄空取的节奏，夏萝这个难度有个新节奏也挺不错的呢。

00:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用的DS应该是1.2？但00:14:413 (1)的prev是0.85，我觉得刚开始还是先按DS排好点，先让玩家进入下状态。
00:14:413 (1,1) - 这两个NOTE之间感觉有点空，如果是中间break的时候这么放倒是没问题
00:16:080 (1,2) - 这两个NOTE没叠好 fixed
00:16:746 (3,1) - 同第一条 这里和第一条的DS都已经被澄空改过了
00:18:079 (1) - 这个slider是在那几下连着的钢琴声之中的，从这一小段钢琴声开始排会比较好。比如说这样 => image002 嗯这样节奏挺好的不过因为前两个小节的这个地方都是不下note的所以想这里也一样^^
00:19:246 (4,5) - 这里其实应该放三连，钢琴声有三下。
00:24:746 - 至少在这个地方加一个CIRCLE，不然中间会莫名空出一段，而且钢琴声很明显。 fixed,改成了折返
00:29:579 - 同上 /w\其实我不想从头到尾都踩钢琴声并且为了减少分数才这样放的
00:31:913 (3,4) - 建议还是像前面那个二连那样排开，比较好看。另外实际上这里的钢琴声仍然是三连的……第一下从00:31:246开始。后面也有这样放二连的却不会有违和感，因为有其他的节奏和人声，这里就只有钢琴了。 fixed
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8) - 这一段咱试着排了下，仅供参考 => image003
00:39:079 - 这里最好还是不要空着，因为音乐很连续。 这里我压的是歌词,歌词这里没有唱词,所以空一下觉得更好
00:39:246 (4) - 这个slider设置得不好，跟歌词太紧，长音可以考虑用短slider来代替，一般这种三四次来回的短slider都用在颤音或者节奏特别强烈的地方。 fixed,明白了w
00:39:746 (1) - 这里也可以放个短slider，配上"どーち"的歌词 这里1,2,3都是对称的1/1拍节奏,如果1变成1/2slider的话就不对称不好听了/.\
00:40:413 (3) - 也显得有些突兀
00:51:746 (2) - 还是想吐槽一下这种slider不太好看ww让人想到魔杖什么的…… 2333,不知道怎么拉又不想普通弯曲
01:17:913 (8) - 加个New Combo fixed
02:05:746 (2) - 同之前所说的
02:09:912 (6,7) - 6换成不回转的slider好点 这里跟Sumisola难度下一样的节奏了
02:28:746 (4) - 同上 同上
02:29:746 (3) - 同上 同上
02:46:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打不太合适，还是换成两个slider+circle比较好 改成了circle+cirle了
02:56:746 (1,2,3,4) - 同上 同上
02:57:579 - 加一个circle 感觉再加note会太密啦
03:12:413 (1) - 换成几个小跳的CIRCLE会更好 这里是故意下的个人风格> <
03:25:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里会坑到人w（虽然我没被坑） 这里就是故意坑人的=L=,不过已经把DS改过了w
03:30:413 (1) - 这个减速有点奇怪 这里其实是澄空的建议w
03:31:579 (1,1,1) - 这三个没有跟上音乐的说。应该这么说吧，你前面的slider跟的是人声，紧接着突然变成跟背景音乐会让人反应不过来。
04:09:413 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面所说
04:19:579 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个我倒是觉得换成短的回转slider不错 fixed,正想这么改(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ
04:21:579 (1,2,3) - 同上 fixed
04:29:746 - 加个NOTE fixed


唔，重新把中间空掉的地方填一下，DS也统一起来，之前有个MAPPER和我说，可以考虑平时用1.0，KIAI用1.2这样，总之还是先保证玩家打得舒服比较好。
然后跟人声还是跟音乐最好有个主次，比例适当打起来就不会有违和感。大概就是在同一个阶段里，同样的节奏取同样的梗？
夏萝加油ww 谢谢镜子(*´˘`*)♥

Faust wrote:

On request.

Sharlo:

Mm, mixed feelings about the mapping structure, buuuuuut taking into account that this is a first-off, I actually have a good opinion of where Sharlo stands as a mapper (terms of experience, mapping intuivity and with or without assistance)

Not so much of technical modding from me.

Actually thank u for your support.^^

- 00:39:246 (5) - Not sure as to why this has to be in 1/4, 1/2 does pretty nicely, but I do notice the slider sticks out like a sore thumb if you do so, so I guess you could shape it to minimalize the effect.

Before I think that 1/4 makes the rhythm be more interesting, but there're other people hold the same opinion with you so I put it to a 1/1 slider.

- 00:41:079 (1) - Could remove the New Combo here. But as I've seen, you have a tendency to place NC's every half-way through a line of the lyrics. Consistent I suppose.

Just I think that place a NC at the begginning of the section will be better^^.

- 02:29:746 (3) - Shift this a little left so that small part isn't covered up.

OK~

- 03:12:413 (1) - Don't feel that this should be applied here.

I tried to place two 1/2 slider instead of the original note.

- 03:24:579 (2) - Deserves a note. From here on, I would suggest you connect a majority of the notes to par since it gets a little more intensive on the vocals.

OK.

- 03:29:913 - ^

^

- 03:30:413 (1) - Kind of off-handed. The only indication (still pretty vague at best) is that it's of a different combo color, which doesn't help much.
So this can be replaced with hitcircles instead of having to suffice with a slowed slider.

- 03:31:579 (1,1,1) - These in particular are quite unsettling, I cannot quite perceive any one of them to positively accentuate the song/map/playing.
Especially when - 03:31:746 - is such a good spot for a nice down-beat hitcircle.
The constant 1/2 tempo of the song doesn't give these 1/4 sliders a chance to work.

- 04:06:913 - Add a note? Shouldn't be leaving so many gaps in-between vocals for the next few parts, even more so when it's the last stretch of the map.

If I add notes in the same positions, this diff will be overmap./w\

- 04:19:413 (1) - Maybe you put this for some variety. Here's a suggestion for you:

SPOILER

Yours is pretty, and I replaced it by my way.

- 04:24:413 - Why u no put note ????????????????

/.\

- 04:37:746 (3) - I considered having a slow running slider here instead. You could give it a try and see if you like it.

That's all I have. Nice singing.

Thanks a lot.

abalee wrote:

[sumisola]
AR9有点水土不服 Orz 因为整个图遮掩程度很大，不用AR9，很多地方读图会出错，所以orz
00:43:079 (4) - 考虑下将这个和(3)再拉开一点， spacing好辨认些。 fixed
01:18:079 (8) - 这个slider的reverse arrow会被01:17:079 (5) - 的hit300挡到，换一下方向吧。 fixed
03:55:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的长白线上的音效可以试试加clap或者将whistle改成clap。 长白线是最强拍，因此我觉得在最强拍上加轻音效会比较好，而在3白线（次强拍）加重音效，听起来会更好，可能是个人习惯，不过这里还是不改了orz
04:09:746 (3) - 这个clap是不是忘了删... fixed

[sharlo]
话说不少奇怪的spacing啊...没看出排这些spacing的梗...
00:31:413 (1,2,3,4) - 推荐对称放置 fixed

[hard]
02:07:579 (5) - 这个不必拘泥于位置，和上一个垂直对称也好，反正要位置重叠的那个note也差不多看不见了 。 fixed

LKs wrote:

hi

[Sumisola]

我给你微调了好多 全是stack和blanket形状 你直接带入就好了 http://puu.sh/1cCHF 谢谢LKs这么耐心:) 还有其他一些没对齐的地方我也对齐了
00:18:913 (3) - 00:18:413 (2) - 感觉slider的弧度和stack都可以在做的更好
00:26:579 (5,6,7) -
00:30:913 (5) -
00:38:413 (1) - 00:39:246 (1) -
00:40:246 (5) -
00:41:079 (1) -
00:46:413 (1) - 00:47:913 (6) -
00:52:913 (4) -
01:16:246 (3) -
01:27:746 (5) -
02:14:413 (1) -
02:15:079 (3) -
02:16:746 (8) -
02:44:746 (3) -
02:54:746 (3,5) - 02:56:079 (7) -
04:25:579 (2) -
04:31:746 (1) -

[Normal]

00:46:413 (1) - 这个建议微调一下 把中间的node往右上一点 fixed
04:16:413 (3) - 这其实没必要做弧度？直接一个斜直线感觉够了 fixed


夏萝大哥下次唱tv size 累死了

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

Sharlo: 今天osu更新乱七八糟我不知道我这是不是最新版本 但我这显示的是latest ver所以 aimod告诉我:

02:28:746 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). fixed
02:28:746 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed

Spinner New Combo
01:57:746 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fixed
04:05:246 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fixed

[Sharlo]

00:20:079 (2) - 这个倾斜度感觉和右边不一样 往逆时针转一点 fixed
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - 这个比较不好 fixed
00:35:413 (8) - 不要clap 之后所有的这种都不要clap fixed
00:49:079 (2) - 这slider有点猎奇 做成这样http://puu.sh/1cCIx fixed
01:03:746 (1) - 这slider窝着有点难受 fixed
01:05:079 (1,4) - 这种意在对称的slider应该做的更对称一点 现在明显偏向尾部了 fixed
01:07:746 (3) - 01:12:413 (4) -01:28:246 (5) - 一样的问题 之后不赘述 fixed
01:13:913 (1) - 不要clap fixed
04:06:413 (1,2,1,2) - 这节奏感觉作为hard+没必要这么1/1 太死板了 fixed
04:19:747 (3,1) - 这个blanket fixed

hmm这两个难度都需要你和澄空多自我检查一下 澄空这slider也略不靠谱 把角度太尖锐的 不对称的blanket没弄好的都检查一下调整一下 尽量 /.\

夏萝大哥下次唱tv size 累死了

LKs wrote:

yo

[Sharlo]

01:34:413 (4,5) -
01:37:079 (4) -
01:38:413 (4) -
01:40:413 (1,2,3) -
01:42:413 (4,5) -
01:45:079 (3,4,5,6) -
02:10:412 (1) -
02:29:079 (1) -
02:30:412 (1) - 其实这么短的slider没必要用五点 四点足矣
02:31:246 (3,4) -
02:37:746 (9) -
02:58:412 (3,4) -
03:00:246 (5) -
03:10:412 (3,4) -
03:11:412 (5,6) -
03:24:746 (3) -
04:19:747 (3,1) -
04:26:246 (6) -

http://puu.sh/1h44i

微调时间点

老样子覆盖我给你的文件 no kd

[sumi]

03:34:246 (7) - 放到x183y72

LKs wrote:

03:23:746 (1) - arrow is totally obstructed(hidden). please make it visible fixed


no kd

Scorpiour wrote:

Popped the bubble due to an unrankable stuff:

The slider end snapped to wrong place cause two object apart less than 10ms in Easy diff


please fix it and call me back

those wrote:

Bpm is still doubled ever since my post earlier.

those wrote:

Here's why you should not base it on the piano, but the rhythm instead:
Melodies are made out tones. These tones have a set length defined by the bpm (you don't know whether they are eighth notes or sixteenth notes, for example). However, drums are not based on tones in the same way; generally, the bass>snare>bass>snare makes one 4/4 measure. With that in mind, the bpm is clearly doubled in your map.