1. Easy (1.78 stars, 229 notes)
2. Hard (4.75 stars, 481 notes)
3. Normal (3.5 stars, 335 notes)
4. Sharlo (4.92 stars, 715 notes)
5. Sumisola (5 stars, 731 notes)

1. Audio Lead-in去掉
2. Letterbox也统一一下

1. OD-1吧，OD比AR高怎么都觉得有点奇葩……
2. 00:33:079 (1) - 所有的像这种的做成微微带一点弧线会比较好吧（类似于日本流的那种感觉），前后间距都不用调但是感觉能让整个map变的不那么生硬，因为曲子本身其实是很柔和的
   
3. 00:55:079 (2) - 这组nc挪到这里开始？
4. 01:05:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里也是，看看能不能加一点小弧度来柔化排列，后面类似的也一样
5. 01:39:746 (5) - 加NC？
6. 02:07:747 (5) - 头位置不变的情况下尾巴向下旋转60度或者90度来跟一下光标移动的方向？
7. 03:05:080 (5) - 加NC？
8. 03:45:079 (1) - 这里finish考虑用50%的音量？感觉更舒服一些
9. 04:22:413 (1) - 头finish？

1. 反正有custom的音效，那些因为slider缘故而丢掉的2/4clap什么的不考虑用slidertick或者sb音效补上么。。？
2. 00:58:078 (2) - 252:280 ?
3. 00:59:746 (1,2) - 这种互相压了个边缘还没有压均匀的说实话不太好看……
4. 03:45:079 (1) - 用50%的音量？

1. SliderTickRate 2建议
2. Combo-colour2，在屏幕右侧的时候因为背景图颜色缘故看不清approachcircle
3. 00:22:413 (1) - 考虑加个折返？后面空拍感觉有一点长了而且00:22:746 - 有个钢琴的高音
4. 00:25:079 (1) - ^
5. 00:27:746 (1) - ^
6. 00:30:079 - 有没有可能加note？
7. 00:43:413 (5) - 做成1/2slider或者00:43:579 - 加note？
8. 01:34:079 (8,9) - 这两个有可能ctrl+r一下么？
9. 03:23:746 (1) - 加个折返？
10. 03:26:413 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 这里的节奏我自己听的是这样的：
    

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod for request~~

[General]

1. Audio Lead-in去掉 fixed
2. Letterbox也统一一下 fixed

[Easy]

1. OD-1吧，OD比AR高怎么都觉得有点奇葩…… fixed
2. 00:33:079 (1) - 所有的像这种的做成微微带一点弧线会比较好吧（类似于日本流的那种感觉），前后间距都不用调但是感觉能让整个map变的不那么生硬，因为曲子本身其实是很柔和的 fixed
   
3. 00:55:079 (2) - 这组nc挪到这里开始？ fixed
4. 01:05:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里也是，看看能不能加一点小弧度来柔化排列，后面类似的也一样 fixed
5. 01:39:746 (5) - 加NC？ fixed
6. 02:07:747 (5) - 头位置不变的情况下尾巴向下旋转60度或者90度来跟一下光标移动的方向？
7. 03:05:080 (5) - 加NC？ fixed
8. 03:45:079 (1) - 这里finish考虑用50%的音量？感觉更舒服一些 fixed
9. 04:22:413 (1) - 头finish？

直来直去的太多了……这曲子有这么硬么………… 耐力不足了

[Normal]

1. 反正有custom的音效，那些因为slider缘故而丢掉的2/4clap什么的不考虑用slidertick或者sb音效补上么。。？ 好难听啊，都没按下去
2. 00:58:078 (2) - 252:280 ? fixed
3. 00:59:746 (1,2) - 这种互相压了个边缘还没有压均匀的说实话不太好看……
4. 03:45:079 (1) - 用50%的音量？ fixed

[Sumisola]

1. SliderTickRate 2建议 爆分
2. Combo-colour2，在屏幕右侧的时候因为背景图颜色缘故看不清approachcircle 故意的
3. 00:22:413 (1) - 考虑加个折返？后面空拍感觉有一点长了而且00:22:746 - 有个钢琴的高音 故意的
4. 00:25:079 (1) - ^ 故意的
5. 00:27:746 (1) - ^ 故意的
6. 00:30:079 - 有没有可能加note？ 不想加欸....
7. 00:43:413 (5) - 做成1/2slider或者00:43:579 - 加note？ 不想加欸....
8. 01:34:079 (8,9) - 这两个有可能ctrl+r一下么？ 9 1的小段开始正好放小跳欸....
9. 03:23:746 (1) - 加个折返？ 听一下嘛
10. 03:26:413 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 这里的节奏我自己听的是这样的： 故意跟前面一样的欸...不然排列就没了
    

差不多就这些了～～绕啊绕啊绕啊绕～～～给星支持～～

Steph De Chine wrote:

来自Steph's Queue
抱歉晚了点……好吧，其实也没Mod出啥东西……

Easy
03:45:079 (1) - 这个太孤独了点~删掉或者在03:46:413，03:47:746等等的位置加个note，每小节一个就好了 不加比较好，本来那儿就一个重音，而且play time太长，顺便休息
04:01:079 (1) - 考虑往后延长到04:06:079或者缩短到04:03:079 Easy这样对player太难
04:33:079 (1,2,3) - 考虑像04:27:746 (1,2,3)那样把它们分开 跟后面节奏对应的

Normal
02:31:746 (3) - Vertical Flip一下或许会好看些
03:14:079 - 加个note吧，这里确实空了一拍，而且和前后接不上 跟后面节奏对应
03:45:079 (1) - 这个太孤独了点~删掉或者在03:46:413，03:47:746等等（每小节的开始重拍的位置）加个note 不加比较好，本来那儿就一个重音，而且play time太长，顺便休息
04:01:079 (1) - 考虑缩短到04:03:079，并在后面04:03:746加note
04:38:413 (4) - 考虑换成Spinner

不错，好听~~听这货睡着的~~

Sumisora
03:02:413 (1,2,3) - 摆得不是很好看啊，考虑换成像是01:43:079 (2,3,1)那样的 故意的
03:45:079 (1) - 这个太孤独了点~删掉或者在03:46:413，03:47:746等等（每小节的开始重拍的位置）加个note 不加比较好，本来那儿就一个重音，而且play time太长，顺便休息
04:38:413 (4) - 考虑换成Spinner

-[NYAN]- wrote:

sumisola早啊，今天天气真好
真的不知道能mod出来啥东东，sumisola的难度无力mod..，或者说已经做得很好了？



Easy

00:11:746 (1) - 加上finish
00:14:413 (1) - whistle
00:17:079 (1) - whistle
00:19:746 (1) - finish
00:23:079 (2) - nc
01:36:996 - 绿线是不是移动下？那个位置是在1/4的位置下吧
03:02:329 - ^
03:12:996 - ^
03:23:663 - ^
03:55:663 - 这根绿线调整下位置比较好吧
04:16:996 - 绿线= =b
04:27:663 - ^

音效如果加太多finish，会太吵了，绿线的话，其实是拿来喷泉用的

Normal

00:11:746 (1) - 换成finish
00:59:746 (1) -
01:10:413 (1) -
01:21:079 (1) -

按照你这么加，有点违和

能力有限...... ，
射星星...

Sharlo wrote:

(｡ρω-｡) 我是来晒签名的.

1. Inconsistency in Leadin, countdown and letterbox
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times in all diffs~ ><

1. 03:29:079 (2) - NC bug, plz re-add the NC in this note~

Unsnapped stuff

1. 00:19:246 (4) - remove this whistle it's don't really fit here ><
2. 00:22:413 (1) - maybe move the 3rd slider point few grids up~
3. 00:23:413 (5) - ^ but 2nd slider point~
4. 00:26:413 (7) - this slider looks a bit bad, so maybe fix it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:35:413 (8) - remove this clap it's sounds bad to me ><
6. 00:39:246 (4) - why you add this? i don't think it's follows anything. Maybe do something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:43:579 (1,2) - switch those nc~
8. 00:46:079 (5) - remove clap and add a finish here it's sounds much better to me and to make consistency with the other whistles~
9. 00:48:079 (2) - same as 00:35:413 (8) -
10. 00:50:913 (4) - why clap in here? i don't think it's really fit this song >< remove it plz~
11. 00:51:746 (2,3) - those slider's really looks a bit bad but maybe you can fix them like this? (don't forget to fix the spacing on the notes :3)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:54:079 (6) - remove clap and add a whistle plz~
13. 00:57:079 (4) - remove the whistle on slider start, and add it at then end of the slider >< sounds much better~
14. 00:58:413 (1) - ^
15. 00:59:079 (3) - remove the whistle here~
16. 00:59:413 (4) - remove the clap here~
17. 01:00:246 (2) - ^
18. 01:01:413 (5) - remove the clap on slider's end it's really don't fit ></
19. 01:06:913 (6) - remove all the hitsounds on this note~
20. 01:07:746 (3) - i don't hear anything so why you added a clap here? i think you should remove it~
21. 01:13:913 (5) - remove the NC here i think it'll follow the nc before~
22. 01:16:246 (3) - I think you can make it like this 00:51:746 (2,3) -
23. 01:18:413 (9) - add a nc here so it'll make the combo shorter ></ it's too long imo~
24. 01:28:746 (6) - orz this slider sounds is annoying, if you remove the whistle at the end it'll maybe sound better~
25. 01:34:913 (5) - remove the clap at slider's start~
26. 01:40:413 (5,6,7) - WAAAAA those claps again QAQ don't add claps with whistles orz. maybe do it like this remove clap here 01:40:413 (5) - slider's start, then remove whistle here 01:40:746 (6) - slider's start, and then remove whistle 01:41:079 (7) - slider's end
27. 01:41:913 (1) - remove this clap~ (okok maybe i'll stop with hitsiunds.....maybe you got the idea now QAQ)
28. 02:08:746 (1,3) - switch the nc~
29. 02:16:579 (1,4) - ^
30. 02:18:079 (1) - remove nc
31. 02:21:913 (1,4) - same as i said here 02:16:579 (1,4) -
32. 02:24:579 (1,3) - same as i said here 02:08:746 (1,3) -
33. 02:27:246 (1,2) - switch the nc~
34. 02:29:079 (1) - remove the nc the vocal was still going~
35. 02:32:746 (1,3) - switch nc~
36. 02:43:246 (1,4) - ^
37. 02:47:746 (10) - this combo is too long maybe add nc here?
38. 02:48:579 (1) - remove the nc~

1. Unsnapped inherited sections at: 00:22:405 - snap to 00:22:413

Sekai-nyan wrote:

OK as you requested in #modreq :3 i'll mod just 1 diff~

General:

1. Inconsistency in Leadin, countdown and letterbox
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times in all diffs~ ><

Easy:

1. 03:29:079 (2) - NC bug, plz re-add the NC in this note~

Sharlo:

Unsnapped stuff

1. 00:19:246 (4) - remove this whistle it's don't really fit here ><
2. 00:22:413 (1) - maybe move the 3rd slider point few grids up~
3. 00:23:413 (5) - ^ but 2nd slider point~
4. 00:26:413 (7) - this slider looks a bit bad, so maybe fix it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:35:413 (8) - remove this clap it's sounds bad to me ><
6. 00:39:246 (4) - why you add this? i don't think it's follows anything. Maybe do something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:43:579 (1,2) - switch those nc~
8. 00:46:079 (5) - remove clap and add a finish here it's sounds much better to me and to make consistency with the other whistles~
9. 00:48:079 (2) - same as 00:35:413 (8) -
10. 00:50:913 (4) - why clap in here? i don't think it's really fit this song >< remove it plz~
11. 00:51:746 (2,3) - those slider's really looks a bit bad but maybe you can fix them like this? (don't forget to fix the spacing on the notes :3)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:54:079 (6) - remove clap and add a whistle plz~
13. 00:57:079 (4) - remove the whistle on slider start, and add it at then end of the slider >< sounds much better~
14. 00:58:413 (1) - ^
15. 00:59:079 (3) - remove the whistle here~
16. 00:59:413 (4) - remove the clap here~
17. 01:00:246 (2) - ^
18. 01:01:413 (5) - remove the clap on slider's end it's really don't fit ></
19. 01:06:913 (6) - remove all the hitsounds on this note~
20. 01:07:746 (3) - i don't hear anything so why you added a clap here? i think you should remove it~
21. 01:13:913 (5) - remove the NC here i think it'll follow the nc before~
22. 01:16:246 (3) - I think you can make it like this 00:51:746 (2,3) -
23. 01:18:413 (9) - add a nc here so it'll make the combo shorter ></ it's too long imo~
24. 01:28:746 (6) - orz this slider sounds is annoying, if you remove the whistle at the end it'll maybe sound better~
25. 01:34:913 (5) - remove the clap at slider's start~
26. 01:40:413 (5,6,7) - WAAAAA those claps again QAQ don't add claps with whistles orz. maybe do it like this remove clap here 01:40:413 (5) - slider's start, then remove whistle here 01:40:746 (6) - slider's start, and then remove whistle 01:41:079 (7) - slider's end
27. 01:41:913 (1) - remove this clap~ (okok maybe i'll stop with hitsiunds.....maybe you got the idea now QAQ)
28. 02:08:746 (1,3) - switch the nc~
29. 02:16:579 (1,4) - ^
30. 02:18:079 (1) - remove nc
31. 02:21:913 (1,4) - same as i said here 02:16:579 (1,4) -
32. 02:24:579 (1,3) - same as i said here 02:08:746 (1,3) -
33. 02:27:246 (1,2) - switch the nc~
34. 02:29:079 (1) - remove the nc the vocal was still going~
35. 02:32:746 (1,3) - switch nc~
36. 02:43:246 (1,4) - ^
37. 02:47:746 (10) - this combo is too long maybe add nc here?
38. 02:48:579 (1) - remove the nc~

>< i think this diff needs more work on hitsounding plz try to work it out ~


SumiSola:

1. Unsnapped inherited sections at: 00:22:405 - snap to 00:22:413

>w< nyan ~ good luck with ranking~

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]

.osb删掉？貌似没看到SB。


[Easy]
没发现什么问题~


[Normal]

初见打完的感觉就是NOTE基本上在四边，中间排得相对少。

00:54:413 (1,2,3) - 这里要不要把中间那个CIRCLE挪下点，跟00:57:079 (1,2,3)的对称？
01:34:413 (1) - 我想你是有意把slider做成3拍的，要不要在下一个重拍加个NOTE，叠在这个slider尾巴上？
04:35:746 (1) - 同上


[Hard]

看了下是AR8，打的时候觉得slider有点不舒服，有种AR很高的感觉。
要不考虑调成AR7，OD调高点？

01:29:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个跳有点突然，排成这样如何？ => image001
03:15:079 (6,1,2) - 这里超坑不解释233差点就断了


[Sharlo]

我猜这个难度是Sharlo做的www

先说下初见的感觉，节奏、排列和DS都有点乱，建议先用固定DS排一遍，再去拉出不同的间距来。（才不会说我被坑了四个X呜…）
然后跟歌词跟得太紧，连着的CIRCLE比较多，让人觉得无法放松，会有图很紧凑的错觉。
不过前几个难度都是澄空取的节奏，夏萝这个难度有个新节奏也挺不错的呢。

00:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用的DS应该是1.2？但00:14:413 (1)的prev是0.85，我觉得刚开始还是先按DS排好点，先让玩家进入下状态。
00:14:413 (1,1) - 这两个NOTE之间感觉有点空，如果是中间break的时候这么放倒是没问题
00:16:080 (1,2) - 这两个NOTE没叠好
00:16:746 (3,1) - 同第一条
00:18:079 (1) - 这个slider是在那几下连着的钢琴声之中的，从这一小段钢琴声开始排会比较好。比如说这样 => image002
00:19:246 (4,5) - 这里其实应该放三连，钢琴声有三下。
00:24:746 - 至少在这个地方加一个CIRCLE，不然中间会莫名空出一段，而且钢琴声很明显。
00:29:579 - 同上
00:31:913 (3,4) - 建议还是像前面那个二连那样排开，比较好看。另外实际上这里的钢琴声仍然是三连的……第一下从00:31:246开始。后面也有这样放二连的却不会有违和感，因为有其他的节奏和人声，这里就只有钢琴了。
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8) - 这一段咱试着排了下，仅供参考 => image003
00:39:079 - 这里最好还是不要空着，因为音乐很连续。
00:39:246 (4) - 这个slider设置得不好，跟歌词太紧，长音可以考虑用短slider来代替，一般这种三四次来回的短slider都用在颤音或者节奏特别强烈的地方。
00:39:746 (1) - 这里也可以放个短slider，配上"どーち"的歌词
00:40:413 (3) - 也显得有些突兀
00:51:746 (2) - 还是想吐槽一下这种slider不太好看ww让人想到魔杖什么的……
01:17:913 (8) - 加个New Combo
02:05:746 (2) - 同之前所说的
02:09:912 (6,7) - 6换成不回转的slider好点
02:28:746 (4) - 同上
02:29:746 (3) - 同上
02:46:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打不太合适，还是换成两个slider+circle比较好
02:56:746 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
02:57:579 - 加一个circle
03:12:413 (1) - 换成几个小跳的CIRCLE会更好
03:25:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里会坑到人w（虽然我没被坑）
03:30:413 (1) - 这个减速有点奇怪
03:31:579 (1,1,1) - 这三个没有跟上音乐的说。应该这么说吧，你前面的slider跟的是人声，紧接着突然变成跟背景音乐会让人反应不过来。
04:09:413 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面所说
04:19:579 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个我倒是觉得换成短的回转slider不错
04:21:579 (1,2,3) - 同上
04:29:746 - 加个NOTE


唔，重新把中间空掉的地方填一下，DS也统一起来，之前有个MAPPER和我说，可以考虑平时用1.0，KIAI用1.2这样，总之还是先保证玩家打得舒服比较好。
然后跟人声还是跟音乐最好有个主次，比例适当打起来就不会有违和感。大概就是在同一个阶段里，同样的节奏取同样的梗？
夏萝加油ww



[Sumisola]

妈呀果然是AR9 wwww

00:18:413 (2,3) - 没叠好
00:28:079 - 加个NOTE？
04:03:746 (1,1,2) - 这个DS是用来坑人的吗ww

开50%看了一遍，其他没发现什么问题，就是觉得有些1/4的回转短slider有点不顺手~




于是以上~

Kite wrote:

[Sumisola]
AR8 fits the song more imo
OD+1
00:43:079 (4) - New combo fits here imo, else it might be mistaken for a jump because of the previous pattern
01:18:079 (8) - partly hidden because of previous hitburst, imo triplet doesnt fit here, try 1/2 instead it sounds better to me
01:25:746 (1,2) - ctrl+r seems better
01:28:746 (8) - again triplet seems out of place, 1/2 fits better imo
02:19:079 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:246 (6) - might be better to remove this beat, whatever you like more
03:24:246 (1) - remove new combo
03:26:579 (2) - 1/2 later seems better to me
03:27:079 (2) - maybe remove this beat?
03:28:079 - add beat
03:33:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - might be asking for too much but removing 03:33:829 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - would fit the song so much more and you could continue mapping the break calmly following the melody until 03:45:079 (1) -
04:10:579 - add beat stacked on slider end
04:12:246 - add beat at x:44 y:285

[Sharlo]
Remove Audio Lead-in
00:32:913 (8,1) - looks a bit ugly having different spacing from 8 to 1
00:40:246 - add beat?
02:04:746 (5) - triplet sounds weird here, just place 1 circle on white tick?
02:05:579 - add beat?
02:46:162 (2) - imo it would be better to remove this and respace the combo (like this for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440387)
02:49:079 (1) - remove new combo
02:54:079 (6) - triplet sounds weird here, try 1/2
02:56:829 (2) - same as before
03:12:413 (1) - not sure about this one it sounds a bit loud and out of place for me, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440390
03:18:413 (1) - remove new combo imo
03:22:079 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:25:413 - add a beat here and remove 03:25:579 (1) - imo
03:30:413 - this slowdown is really sudden, try to use less slow here, 0,75x maybe
03:31:579 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - i suggest to remove all this, it doesnt fit the song; a spinner fits better her start from 03:31:746 - end 03:34:079 -
03:34:496 - you can map this break just following the melody
04:07:746 (1) - remove new combo
04:09:413 (1) - ^
04:13:079 (1) - ^
04:18:412 (1) - ^
04:19:413 - add a beat here?
04:38:413 (5) - finish hitsound?

[Hard]
Remove Audio Lead-in
03:02:413 - Kiai time is missing till break, you have it in all other difficulties
03:15:079 (6,2) - this is not good, it's deceiving for the player; i suggest to place beats on white tick where 03:15:079 (6) - starts and ends

[Normal]
00:58:078 (2) - move to x:258 y:295 so it will be 0,8 from previous and 0,8 to next object

I like this mapset and song, Sharlo has a nice voice
If you have any questions feel free to pm me

KingsAL2 wrote:

By AL2 modding queue
Sorry for late map
==General==
By only mapping Sharlo

==Sharlo==
-- Combo Problem --
01:40:413 (5) - New combo ?
02:59:246 (5) - New combo and remove 02:59:746 (1) -
03:13:079 (3) - New combo ? A Kaia time started?
03:26:413 (1) - remove new combo and start at 03:27:413 (2) -
04:10:579 (6) - Spacing changed New combo.
-- Sound --
00:19:246 (4) - Remove wistle
00:29:913 (1) - Clap?
00:41:579 (2-2nd) - The clap too odd...
00:47:746 (1-1st,2-1st) - Remove wistle
00:50:413 (1) - Missing clap
]00:50:913 (4) - Remove clap
01:01:079 (4-1st) - Clap?
01:03:746 (1-1st) - ^
01:06:413 (5-1st) - ^?
01:06:913 (6) - Remove clap
01:07:746 (3-1st) - Clap? (-2nd) remove clap
01:09:079 (3-1st) - Clap?
01:25:746 (5) - Clap?
01:27:746 (3-1st) - Clap? 5-1st remove clap
01:30:413 (1) - Missing clap
... Not gonna mod sound :3
-- Spacing --
02:05:079 (6) - Just think the spacing quite strange
-- Other(S) --

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Nice song X_X
UNLIKE :
1. Sound : You need to check that you do not have any extra notes that always wistle and clap in a wrong way...
2. New combo : Check that the new sentence should be a new combo and a new spacing also...

jogfi2002 wrote:

[Sharlo]

我猜这个难度是Sharlo做的www Sharlo都写着了当然是Sharlo做的了AHO> <

先说下初见的感觉，节奏、排列和DS都有点乱，建议先用固定DS排一遍，再去拉出不同的间距来。（才不会说我被坑了四个X呜…）
然后跟歌词跟得太紧，连着的CIRCLE比较多，让人觉得无法放松，会有图很紧凑的错觉。
不过前几个难度都是澄空取的节奏，夏萝这个难度有个新节奏也挺不错的呢。

00:13:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用的DS应该是1.2？但00:14:413 (1)的prev是0.85，我觉得刚开始还是先按DS排好点，先让玩家进入下状态。
00:14:413 (1,1) - 这两个NOTE之间感觉有点空，如果是中间break的时候这么放倒是没问题
00:16:080 (1,2) - 这两个NOTE没叠好 fixed
00:16:746 (3,1) - 同第一条 这里和第一条的DS都已经被澄空改过了
00:18:079 (1) - 这个slider是在那几下连着的钢琴声之中的，从这一小段钢琴声开始排会比较好。比如说这样 => image002 嗯这样节奏挺好的不过因为前两个小节的这个地方都是不下note的所以想这里也一样^^
00:19:246 (4,5) - 这里其实应该放三连，钢琴声有三下。
00:24:746 - 至少在这个地方加一个CIRCLE，不然中间会莫名空出一段，而且钢琴声很明显。 fixed,改成了折返
00:29:579 - 同上 /w\其实我不想从头到尾都踩钢琴声并且为了减少分数才这样放的
00:31:913 (3,4) - 建议还是像前面那个二连那样排开，比较好看。另外实际上这里的钢琴声仍然是三连的……第一下从00:31:246开始。后面也有这样放二连的却不会有违和感，因为有其他的节奏和人声，这里就只有钢琴了。 fixed
00:32:413 (5,6,7,8) - 这一段咱试着排了下，仅供参考 => image003
00:39:079 - 这里最好还是不要空着，因为音乐很连续。 这里我压的是歌词,歌词这里没有唱词,所以空一下觉得更好
00:39:246 (4) - 这个slider设置得不好，跟歌词太紧，长音可以考虑用短slider来代替，一般这种三四次来回的短slider都用在颤音或者节奏特别强烈的地方。 fixed,明白了w
00:39:746 (1) - 这里也可以放个短slider，配上"どーち"的歌词 这里1,2,3都是对称的1/1拍节奏,如果1变成1/2slider的话就不对称不好听了/.\
00:40:413 (3) - 也显得有些突兀
00:51:746 (2) - 还是想吐槽一下这种slider不太好看ww让人想到魔杖什么的…… 2333,不知道怎么拉又不想普通弯曲
01:17:913 (8) - 加个New Combo fixed
02:05:746 (2) - 同之前所说的
02:09:912 (6,7) - 6换成不回转的slider好点 这里跟Sumisola难度下一样的节奏了
02:28:746 (4) - 同上 同上
02:29:746 (3) - 同上 同上
02:46:079 (1,2,3,4) - 这个连打不太合适，还是换成两个slider+circle比较好 改成了circle+cirle了
02:56:746 (1,2,3,4) - 同上 同上
02:57:579 - 加一个circle 感觉再加note会太密啦
03:12:413 (1) - 换成几个小跳的CIRCLE会更好 这里是故意下的个人风格> <
03:25:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里会坑到人w（虽然我没被坑） 这里就是故意坑人的=L=,不过已经把DS改过了w
03:30:413 (1) - 这个减速有点奇怪 这里其实是澄空的建议w
03:31:579 (1,1,1) - 这三个没有跟上音乐的说。应该这么说吧，你前面的slider跟的是人声，紧接着突然变成跟背景音乐会让人反应不过来。
04:09:413 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面所说
04:19:579 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个我倒是觉得换成短的回转slider不错 fixed,正想这么改(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ
04:21:579 (1,2,3) - 同上 fixed
04:29:746 - 加个NOTE fixed


唔，重新把中间空掉的地方填一下，DS也统一起来，之前有个MAPPER和我说，可以考虑平时用1.0，KIAI用1.2这样，总之还是先保证玩家打得舒服比较好。
然后跟人声还是跟音乐最好有个主次，比例适当打起来就不会有违和感。大概就是在同一个阶段里，同样的节奏取同样的梗？
夏萝加油ww 谢谢镜子(*´˘`*)♥

Faust wrote:

On request.

Sharlo:

Mm, mixed feelings about the mapping structure, buuuuuut taking into account that this is a first-off, I actually have a good opinion of where Sharlo stands as a mapper (terms of experience, mapping intuivity and with or without assistance)

Not so much of technical modding from me.

Actually thank u for your support.^^

- 00:39:246 (5) - Not sure as to why this has to be in 1/4, 1/2 does pretty nicely, but I do notice the slider sticks out like a sore thumb if you do so, so I guess you could shape it to minimalize the effect.

Before I think that 1/4 makes the rhythm be more interesting, but there're other people hold the same opinion with you so I put it to a 1/1 slider.

- 00:41:079 (1) - Could remove the New Combo here. But as I've seen, you have a tendency to place NC's every half-way through a line of the lyrics. Consistent I suppose.

Just I think that place a NC at the begginning of the section will be better^^.

- 02:29:746 (3) - Shift this a little left so that small part isn't covered up.

OK~

- 03:12:413 (1) - Don't feel that this should be applied here.

I tried to place two 1/2 slider instead of the original note.

- 03:24:579 (2) - Deserves a note. From here on, I would suggest you connect a majority of the notes to par since it gets a little more intensive on the vocals.

OK.

- 03:29:913 - ^

^

- 03:30:413 (1) - Kind of off-handed. The only indication (still pretty vague at best) is that it's of a different combo color, which doesn't help much.
So this can be replaced with hitcircles instead of having to suffice with a slowed slider.

- 03:31:579 (1,1,1) - These in particular are quite unsettling, I cannot quite perceive any one of them to positively accentuate the song/map/playing.
Especially when - 03:31:746 - is such a good spot for a nice down-beat hitcircle.
The constant 1/2 tempo of the song doesn't give these 1/4 sliders a chance to work.

- 04:06:913 - Add a note? Shouldn't be leaving so many gaps in-between vocals for the next few parts, even more so when it's the last stretch of the map.

If I add notes in the same positions, this diff will be overmap./w\

- 04:19:413 (1) - Maybe you put this for some variety. Here's a suggestion for you:

SPOILER

Yours is pretty, and I replaced it by my way.

- 04:24:413 - Why u no put note ????????????????

/.\

- 04:37:746 (3) - I considered having a slow running slider here instead. You could give it a try and see if you like it.

That's all I have. Nice singing.

Thanks a lot.

abalee wrote:

[sumisola]
AR9有点水土不服 Orz 因为整个图遮掩程度很大，不用AR9，很多地方读图会出错，所以orz
00:43:079 (4) - 考虑下将这个和(3)再拉开一点， spacing好辨认些。 fixed
01:18:079 (8) - 这个slider的reverse arrow会被01:17:079 (5) - 的hit300挡到，换一下方向吧。 fixed
03:55:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的长白线上的音效可以试试加clap或者将whistle改成clap。 长白线是最强拍，因此我觉得在最强拍上加轻音效会比较好，而在3白线（次强拍）加重音效，听起来会更好，可能是个人习惯，不过这里还是不改了orz
04:09:746 (3) - 这个clap是不是忘了删... fixed

[sharlo]
话说不少奇怪的spacing啊...没看出排这些spacing的梗...
00:31:413 (1,2,3,4) - 推荐对称放置 fixed

[hard]
02:07:579 (5) - 这个不必拘泥于位置，和上一个垂直对称也好，反正要位置重叠的那个note也差不多看不见了 。 fixed