forum

SoundTeMP - Rose of Sharon

posted
Total Posts
37
show more
cirno-_old
General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reverses
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.

Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png

Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.

01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Louis Cyphre
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Topic Starter
altc3000

Flower wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~ mod from the queue~

咦第一张图么 要有的改了(无雾)
仙境传说 话说我也在做这游戏的歌……

[General]
现在的质量离rank还挺远,除了normal基本都要remap
现在rank图最差的质量是这张:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33761 (多做几次完爆它应该是没什么压力的吧)
一些要点:作图的时候把Grid调成最小或者干脆关掉;Easy Normal Hard在做的时候基本都不应该关掉Distance Snap;DS的设置按照外观来看的话最好能做到note基本不重叠。
offset改成00:03:720 - 因为你有在红线之前的note
把Tsusuko加入tags

[Hitsound]
现在的打击音太吵了,请把声音调小到50%左右
或者改成Soft,那么音量应该在70%左右
可以做到的难度(N,H,I)每两个白线(也就是次重拍)加一个clap,慎用Normal Whistle,除非你很有把握。改成Soft的话会好掌握得多。
有些whistle可以用clap和finish来代替,一般来说whistle都是在kiai来加强节奏,但是这里kiai部分不够燃好像不是很搭配……

[Easy]
DS全程1.0,重新摆放。
New Combo方面,建议每两个长白线加一个NC,否则这种迪西梗容易让人困惑
00:03:720 (1) - 这种形状的slider请用新的P算法slider(也就是随便拉一条新的三点slider)做好看
Example:

00:24:292 (1,1) - 这种音效尽量避免
00:31:149 (1,1) - 转盘太短了,后面的note也靠的太近 建议至少留两拍的空,并且保证转盘auto转到9000分
00:48:292 (1,1) - 不要有这类的重叠,尽量分散方向让玩家看清

[Normal]
reduce all hitsound volume to 50% (including kiai) because the whole song is kinda flat, and your current effect volume is a bit noisy.
others OK.

[Hard]
这个难度太简单了,明显是Normal的难度。
参考http://osu.ppy.sh/b/43679
CS改成4
HP5 OD5 左右(酌情处理)
AR的话看你自己,打着嫌慢不HR就没法FC的话就AR7。
SV1.0就太慢了 除非适合音乐 或者你喜欢鬼畜mapper Snowy Dream的那种慢滑条乱跳 1.3-1.6左右都比较适合
尽量把半拍的note摆开,偶尔加点小跳。(例子:SV1.4,DS1.1)

[Insane]
AR→8
1.3有点小慢,1.5-1.8都不错。(不过还是看你自己,喜欢慢滑条的话就要注意放一些跳)
00:04:149 (2) - 像这种最好要么和前面的滑条尾stack,要么摆开,第一次玩还以为是1/4拍。
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆不开就显得难看
00:30:292 (9,13) - finish
00:29:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串就摆的很丑,所以摆的时候就要把grid snap关了 或者从slider转换
00:36:292 (1) - 这一串也是,而且和前面的离得太近太过胆小
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 这什么……
另外串请在00:58:578 - 结束
这个难度的圈用的太多了忽视了slider而且很有overmap嫌疑 最好重做的时候想想怎么摆看着舒服 打着舒服
Good luck~
全部都改了~~ 謝謝~

cirno- wrote:

General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reversesI think these 4 notes are better
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
All Done!
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.
Still considering, maybe I will change it later
Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png
Done~
Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.
Did it as stick together on the previous one
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Done~!

Thanks for modding :)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

SPOILER
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Have changed the mp3. I re-converted a new one ~ Thanks
Tag added
Thanks for the BG but i think my BG is better~

Thanks for modding :)
yurunneram
Easy
00:29:006 (2) - Don't hide the circle under the slider. Novices can't see them.
00:30:720 (2) - ^
00:33:720 (1) - Erm... I don't suggest you do this cuz you have to give them time to find their cursor.
00:37:149 (1) - ^

No prob in norm

Hard
00:17:435 (1,2) - Why don't add one repeat to each slider? It goes with the music and all...
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
00:33:292 (2,3,4) - Overlap a bit more

That's all ^^
you have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Topic Starter
altc3000

yurunneram wrote:

Easy
00:29:006 (2) - Don't hide the circle under the slider. Novices can't see them. Sorry but I think its OK, will reconsider it if someone say it too
00:30:720 (2) - ^
00:33:720 (1) - Erm... I don't suggest you do this cuz you have to give them time to find their cursor. Did this and reduced the time of spinner
00:37:149 (1) - ^

No prob in norm

Hard
00:17:435 (1,2) - Why don't add one repeat to each slider? It goes with the music and all... I think this suits the song better... Will need some consideration
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
00:33:292 (2,3,4) - Overlap a bit more Done!

That's all ^^
you have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Thanks for modding~ and thanks for the star :)
Low
General

- Your timing is off by a decent amount. You should get someone's help with that, since I'm not good with timing.
- You need to set a preview point for all difficulties. I suggest putting it at 00:58:578
- Capitalize the word "online" in the source.
- The tags are inconsistent in the difficulties. Make them the same as suko's Normal, those kiai times are nice. Also, you don't need "Ragnarok Online" in the tags since it is in the source already.
- The kiai times start at weird places and are inconsistent throughout the difficulties. Please make them the same.

Easy

00:25:149 (1) - You don't need a new combo here. It looks silly.
00:27:720 (1,2) - Don't stack circles under sliders in an easy difficulty. It's a bit hard to read for newer players.
00:29:435 (1,2) - ^
00:31:148 (1,1) - Two long spinners here? I don't really think this is suitable, neither does it fit well. It seems like you just got lazy when mapping here. Please map this out.
01:02:862 (1) - Remove this new combo.
01:04:577 (1) - ^
01:34:577 (2) - Please space this a bit farther by using distance snap.
01:41:434 (1) - You should not have slider speed changes anywhere in an easy difficulty. I highly suggest making these normal speed due to the difficulty.
01:50:434 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't have random spacing changes in an easy difficulty either. This seems too hard.

Normal

00:54:720 (1) - This doesn't follow the rhythm well at all. I suggest starting it one white tick later and putting a beat where it used to be. Don't forget to delete 00:56:434 (2) if you do this.
01:30:720 (2) - Don't make this slanted. Make it vertical, since the previous slider was vertical as well.

This difficulty was pretty well constructed. Good job.

Hard

- This has a bunch of unsnapped stuff in it.
- Make either the HP drain or overall difficulty higher. 5 for both is too easy.
00:51:720 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't add a new combo to every one of these. It looks silly.
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

This difficulty felt rather linear and boring, especially at the beginning. It needs some work.

Insane

- There's a lot of objects that are unsnapped.
- Be careful with random new combo notes.

Same thing as hard, this needs some work and remapping. Don't worry, it's only your first map.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
altc3000

Jacob wrote:

General

- Your timing is off by a decent amount. You should get someone's help with that, since I'm not good with timing.
- You need to set a preview point for all difficulties. I suggest putting it at 00:58:578
- Capitalize the word "online" in the source.
- The tags are inconsistent in the difficulties. Make them the same as suko's Normal, those kiai times are nice. Also, you don't need "Ragnarok Online" in the tags since it is in the source already.
- The kiai times start at weird places and are inconsistent throughout the difficulties. Please make them the same.

Easy

00:25:149 (1) - You don't need a new combo here. It looks silly.
00:27:720 (1,2) - Don't stack circles under sliders in an easy difficulty. It's a bit hard to read for newer players.
00:29:435 (1,2) - ^
00:31:148 (1,1) - Two long spinners here? I don't really think this is suitable, neither does it fit well. It seems like you just got lazy when mapping here. Please map this out.
01:02:862 (1) - Remove this new combo.
01:04:577 (1) - ^
01:34:577 (2) - Please space this a bit farther by using distance snap.
01:41:434 (1) - You should not have slider speed changes anywhere in an easy difficulty. I highly suggest making these normal speed due to the difficulty.
01:50:434 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't have random spacing changes in an easy difficulty either. This seems too hard.

Normal

00:54:720 (1) - This doesn't follow the rhythm well at all. I suggest starting it one white tick later and putting a beat where it used to be. Don't forget to delete 00:56:434 (2) if you do this.
01:30:720 (2) - Don't make this slanted. Make it vertical, since the previous slider was vertical as well.

This difficulty was pretty well constructed. Good job.

Hard

- This has a bunch of unsnapped stuff in it.
- Make either the HP drain or overall difficulty higher. 5 for both is too easy.
00:51:720 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't add a new combo to every one of these. It looks silly.
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

This difficulty felt rather linear and boring, especially at the beginning. It needs some work.

Insane

- There's a lot of objects that are unsnapped.
- Be careful with random new combo notes.

Same thing as hard, this needs some work and remapping. Don't worry, it's only your first map.

Good luck!
Done! Thanks for modding :)
-Neipezi
Hi~ Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:11:434 (2,4) - remove Clap
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:24:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:29:005 (2) - Clap
00:29:435 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:32:862 (3,4) - Slide the tail section Clap
00:36:291 (3,4) - ^
00:43:149 (3) - Slide the tail section Finishi
00:44:863 (1) - slide the head Finish on, the tail section of Craps
00:47:434 (4) - remove Clap
00:48:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:50:863 (4) - ^
01:02:005 (1,2,1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
01:06:291 (3) - Slide the tail section Clap
01:08:005 (3) - ^
01:09:720 (2) - remove clap
01:09:935 (1) - Finishi here
Besides this night I beat a billion Clap change please.

[suko's Normal]
00:24:505 (2) - remove
01:39:720 (7) - NC
01:40:148 (1) - remove NC
01:47:434 (2,3,4) - slider change (Arrow 1 add)
01:52:577 (5) - Slide the tail section Finish

[Hard]
00:27:720 (1,2) - remove Whistle
00:28:148 - Combo add?
00:29:005 (1) - 00:28:791 - move (Accrete interval.)
00:34:577 (1) - ~ 00:38:005 (1) - Please add to the notes in between the combo.
00:39:291 (2) - Combo and Clap add?
00:41:005 (4) - ^
00:43:148 (3) - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:44:220 - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:47:862 - Combo and Clap add?
00:51:291 - 1/2 Slider add?
00:55:148 (1) - clap
01:42:720 (11) - combo add?

[Insane]
00:56:112 (6) - 1/2 Slider chenge
00:55:148 - ~ 00:58:362 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
64,32,55148,5,8,0:0:0
144,192,55362,1,8,0:0:0
24,152,55577,1,8,0:0:0
184,72,55791,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56005,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56112,2,0,P|360:64|416:56,1,99.9999940395356
432,80,56434,1,0,0:0:0
444,108,56541,1,0,0:0:0
444,136,56648,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,56755,1,0,0:0:0
420,188,56862,1,0,0:0:0
404,212,56969,1,0,0:0:0
396,240,57077,1,0,0:0:0
400,268,57184,1,0,0:0:0
416,296,57291,1,0,0:0:0
432,320,57398,1,0,0:0:0
436,348,57505,1,0,0:0:0
420,372,57612,1,0,0:0:0
392,384,57719,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,57934,5,0,0:0:0
280,324,58041,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58148,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58362,1,0,0:0:0
01:50:005 - ~ 01:53:434 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
152,28,110005,5,0,0:0:0
16,104,110219,1,0,0:0:0
176,120,110434,1,0,0:0:0
40,196,110648,1,0,0:0:0
72,276,110862,2,0,P|52:332,1,49.9999970197678
152,360,111184,1,0,0:0:0
172,332,111291,1,0,0:0:0
204,320,111398,1,0,0:0:0
240,324,111505,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,111612,1,0,0:0:0
296,364,111719,5,0,0:0:0
304,328,111827,1,0,0:0:0
332,308,111934,1,0,0:0:0
368,304,112041,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,112148,1,0,0:0:0
436,312,112255,1,0,0:0:0
464,292,112362,1,0,0:0:0
476,260,112469,1,0,0:0:0
492,228,112577,5,4,0:0:0
460,212,112684,1,0,0:0:0
436,188,112791,1,0,0:0:0
424,156,112898,1,0,0:0:0
428,120,113005,5,4,0:0:0
388,108,113112,1,0,0:0:0
352,92,113219,1,0,0:0:0
320,68,113327,1,0,0:0:0
296,36,113434,1,4,0:0:0
The other thing is all good. :oops:
Do not jump too. Please specify the lot.

That I can see here.
Ranked Hope~ :oops:
Topic Starter
altc3000

-Kirito wrote:

Hi~ Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:11:434 (2,4) - remove Clap
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:24:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:29:005 (2) - Clap
00:29:435 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:32:862 (3,4) - Slide the tail section Clap
00:36:291 (3,4) - ^
00:43:149 (3) - Slide the tail section Finishi
00:44:863 (1) - slide the head Finish on, the tail section of Craps
00:47:434 (4) - remove Clap
00:48:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:50:863 (4) - ^
01:02:005 (1,2,1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
01:06:291 (3) - Slide the tail section Clap
01:08:005 (3) - ^
01:09:720 (2) - remove clap
01:09:935 (1) - Finishi here
Besides this night I beat a billion Clap change please.
Done~
[suko's Normal]
00:24:505 (2) - remove
01:39:720 (7) - NC
01:40:148 (1) - remove NC
01:47:434 (2,3,4) - slider change (Arrow 1 add) Um I think 3 notes are better
01:52:577 (5) - Slide the tail section Finish
Done~
[Hard]
00:27:720 (1,2) - remove Whistle
00:28:148 - Combo add?
00:29:005 (1) - 00:28:791 - move (Accrete interval.)
00:34:577 (1) - ~ 00:38:005 (1) - Please add to the notes in between the combo.
00:39:291 (2) - Combo and Clap add?
00:41:005 (4) - ^
00:43:148 (3) - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:44:220 - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:47:862 - Combo and Clap add?
00:51:291 - 1/2 Slider add?
00:55:148 (1) - clap
01:42:720 (11) - combo add?
Done~
[Insane]
00:56:112 (6) - 1/2 Slider chenge
00:55:148 - ~ 00:58:362 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
64,32,55148,5,8,0:0:0
144,192,55362,1,8,0:0:0
24,152,55577,1,8,0:0:0
184,72,55791,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56005,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56112,2,0,P|360:64|416:56,1,99.9999940395356
432,80,56434,1,0,0:0:0
444,108,56541,1,0,0:0:0
444,136,56648,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,56755,1,0,0:0:0
420,188,56862,1,0,0:0:0
404,212,56969,1,0,0:0:0
396,240,57077,1,0,0:0:0
400,268,57184,1,0,0:0:0
416,296,57291,1,0,0:0:0
432,320,57398,1,0,0:0:0
436,348,57505,1,0,0:0:0
420,372,57612,1,0,0:0:0
392,384,57719,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,57934,5,0,0:0:0
280,324,58041,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58148,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58362,1,0,0:0:0
01:50:005 - ~ 01:53:434 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
152,28,110005,5,0,0:0:0
16,104,110219,1,0,0:0:0
176,120,110434,1,0,0:0:0
40,196,110648,1,0,0:0:0
72,276,110862,2,0,P|52:332,1,49.9999970197678
152,360,111184,1,0,0:0:0
172,332,111291,1,0,0:0:0
204,320,111398,1,0,0:0:0
240,324,111505,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,111612,1,0,0:0:0
296,364,111719,5,0,0:0:0
304,328,111827,1,0,0:0:0
332,308,111934,1,0,0:0:0
368,304,112041,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,112148,1,0,0:0:0
436,312,112255,1,0,0:0:0
464,292,112362,1,0,0:0:0
476,260,112469,1,0,0:0:0
492,228,112577,5,4,0:0:0
460,212,112684,1,0,0:0:0
436,188,112791,1,0,0:0:0
424,156,112898,1,0,0:0:0
428,120,113005,5,4,0:0:0
388,108,113112,1,0,0:0:0
352,92,113219,1,0,0:0:0
320,68,113327,1,0,0:0:0
296,36,113434,1,4,0:0:0
The other thing is all good. :oops:
Do not jump too. Please specify the lot.

That I can see here.
Ranked Hope~ :oops:
Done~~ Thanks for modding~
oob360
[Easy]
00:21:720 (2) - should be clap if consistent with last measure
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:32:005 (2) - ^
00:35:434 (2) - ^
00:47:434 (4) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4) - Clap, none, none, Clap
01:15:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - none, clap, none, none, clap
01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:005 (1,1) - none, clap
01:32:862 (1,2) - ^
01:39:720 (1) - none or finish

[suko's Normal]
00:54:720 (5) - clap
00:55:148 (1) - none
01:24:291 (3,4,5,6) - confusing to me because the five is under the three. preference

[Hard]
00:38:005 (1) - slide tail clap
01:44:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is there any reason you don't have the whistles from before here?

I couldn't play Insane :oops:
Topic Starter
altc3000

oob360 wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:720 (2) - should be clap if consistent with last measure
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:32:005 (2) - ^
00:35:434 (2) - ^
00:47:434 (4) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4) - Clap, none, none, Clap
01:15:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - none, clap, none, none, clap I changed this in my way cause I think that will suits better
01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:005 (1,1) - none, clap
01:32:862 (1,2) - ^
01:39:720 (1) - none or finish
Done~
[suko's Normal]
00:54:720 (5) - clap
00:55:148 (1) - none
01:24:291 (3,4,5,6) - confusing to me because the five is under the three. preference
Done~. I think the 5 is clear enough so I didnt change that
[Hard]
00:38:005 (1) - slide tail clap
01:44:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is there any reason you don't have the whistles from before here?
Done~
I couldn't play Insane :oops:
Thanks for modding~
blackabyss
hi there, mod from my queue :D

[Easy]

01:14:862 - add note here?
01:18:291 - ^
01:14:005 - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/1wdL4
if you like the patterns, here's the code:
104,120,14005,6,0,P|192:48|272:120,1,240.000001788139
271,199,15720,2,0,P|350:270|438:198,1,240.000001788139
01:18:291 - add note?
01:21:720 - ^

[Normal]

btw, hi tsusuko xD

00:51:720 - add finish? in the head of sliders?
00:55:148 - ^
01:22:577 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:577 - add finish?
00:17:434 - ^ just in the head
00:44:862 - add finish?
01:05:005 - add whistle?
01:10:577 - add finish in the end of sliders
01:42:934 - NC
01:43:148 - remove NC

[Insane]

00:16:577 (7) - add finish on the head
00:17:005 (8) - add finish :|
01:11:434 (1, 5) - ^
01:12:291 (1) - ^
01:38:862 (3, 4) - ^ on the head sliders
01:39:720 (1) - ^

Really beautiful maps. :)
here stars for you xD
Topic Starter
altc3000

blackabyss wrote:

hi there, mod from my queue :D

[Easy]

01:14:862 - add note here?
01:18:291 - ^
01:14:005 - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/1wdL4
if you like the patterns, here's the code:
104,120,14005,6,0,P|192:48|272:120,1,240.000001788139
271,199,15720,2,0,P|350:270|438:198,1,240.000001788139
01:18:291 - add note?
01:21:720 - ^
I think thats the style for my maps so I didnt change this sorry
[Normal]

btw, hi tsusuko xD

00:51:720 - add finish? in the head of sliders?
00:55:148 - ^
01:22:577 (1) - ^
Done~
[Hard]

00:16:577 - add finish?
00:17:434 - ^ just in the head
00:44:862 - add finish?
01:05:005 - add whistle?
01:10:577 - add finish in the end of sliders
01:42:934 - NC
01:43:148 - remove NC
Done except the NC part cause I think that is a new sentence for the music. Will consider it if someone suggest it again
[Insane]

00:16:577 (7) - add finish on the head
00:17:005 (8) - add finish :|
01:11:434 (1, 5) - ^
01:12:291 (1) - ^
01:38:862 (3, 4) - ^ on the head sliders
01:39:720 (1) - ^
Done~
Really beautiful maps. :)
here stars for you xD
Thanks for the mod and the star~ :)
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●try to change bit rate of mp3 file? 192kbps is best :3

[Easy]
●Approach Rate +1
●00:03:720 (1,2,3,4) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:11:433 (2,4) - add clap
●00:14:005 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:17:435 (1) - add finish
●00:14:005 (1,2) - 1 grid left ?
●00:19:148 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:22:577 (3) - ^
●00:24:292 (1,2,1) - try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/513634
●00:39:720 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:47:434 (4) - add clap
●00:50:005 (3) - this note is confusing many beginners >_< Please dont overlap
●00:50:863 (4) - add clap
●00:51:505 (1) - try to put spinner's start here ? 00:51:720 -
●00:58:578 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:03:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●01:09:720 (2) - add clap
●01:14:434 (3) - ^
●01:15:720 (1) - remove clap
●01:19:148 (1) - ^
●01:20:006 (2) - add clap
●01:24:292 (1) - new combo is unnecessary here
●01:27:720 (1) - ^
●01:40:578 (2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:434 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:44:863 (1,2) - ^ and remove clap head
●01:49:791 - This green line is unnecessary
●01:50:006 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too close (1.50x) it is better to use DS1.0x

try to put sound with constant rhythm :)

[suko's Normal]
●00:17:434 (6,1) - switch these newcombos ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:31:148 (5,1) - ^
●00:58:577 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:16:148 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's repeat
●01:36:291 (4) - add new combo
●01:41:005 (4) - add clap on the slider's head

[Hard]
●OD7 is not suitable at all. at least reduce OD please, because it's same as Insane diff
●00:28:577 (2) - add clap
●00:35:862 (4) - add whistle
●00:36:291 (5) - add new combo
●00:37:577 (8) - add whistle
●00:39:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●00:47:862 (6,1) - not stack better imo~ maybe , confusing this note
●00:55:148 (1) - add finish
●01:03:291 (3) - try to move to x:224 y:60 ?
●01:04:577 (2) - remove finish from the end since it follows nothing.
●01:11:862 (2) - add finish
●01:12:291 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:23:541 (1) - add finish
●01:39:077 (2,3) - ^
●01:39:719 (1) - add finish on the slider's head and add clap end
●01:43:148 (1) - add clap on the slider's end

[Insane]
●00:04:148 (2,4,6,8) - add clap
●00:07:577 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:11:005 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:14:434 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:17:434 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●00:20:434 (1) - remove new combo
●00:20:541 (1) - ^
●00:24:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try to put more hit sound here
●00:31:041 (16) - remove note ?
●00:56:434 (7,11,15) - add clap
●00:59:648 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●01:10:362 - add whistle
●01:15:719 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●01:41:434 (7) - add new combo because you changed slider speed here.

I want more hit sound >_<

good luck ~ :P
Topic Starter
altc3000

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●try to change bit rate of mp3 file? 192kbps is best :3

[Easy]
●Approach Rate +1
●00:03:720 (1,2,3,4) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:11:433 (2,4) - add clap
●00:14:005 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:17:435 (1) - add finish
●00:14:005 (1,2) - 1 grid left ?
●00:19:148 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:22:577 (3) - ^
●00:24:292 (1,2,1) - try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/513634
●00:39:720 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:47:434 (4) - add clap
●00:50:005 (3) - this note is confusing many beginners >_< Please dont overlap
●00:50:863 (4) - add clap
●00:51:505 (1) - try to put spinner's start here ? 00:51:720 -
●00:58:578 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:03:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●01:09:720 (2) - add clap
●01:14:434 (3) - ^
●01:15:720 (1) - remove clap
●01:19:148 (1) - ^
●01:20:006 (2) - add clap
●01:24:292 (1) - new combo is unnecessary here
●01:27:720 (1) - ^
●01:40:578 (2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:434 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:44:863 (1,2) - ^ and remove clap head
●01:49:791 - This green line is unnecessary
●01:50:006 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too close (1.50x) it is better to use DS1.0x

try to put sound with constant rhythm :)

[suko's Normal]
●00:17:434 (6,1) - switch these newcombos ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:31:148 (5,1) - ^
●00:58:577 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:16:148 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's repeat
●01:36:291 (4) - add new combo
●01:41:005 (4) - add clap on the slider's head

[Hard]
●OD7 is not suitable at all. at least reduce OD please, because it's same as Insane diff
●00:28:577 (2) - add clap
●00:35:862 (4) - add whistle
●00:36:291 (5) - add new combo
●00:37:577 (8) - add whistle
●00:39:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●00:47:862 (6,1) - not stack better imo~ maybe , confusing this note
●00:55:148 (1) - add finish
●01:03:291 (3) - try to move to x:224 y:60 ?
●01:04:577 (2) - remove finish from the end since it follows nothing.
●01:11:862 (2) - add finish
●01:12:291 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:23:541 (1) - add finish
●01:39:077 (2,3) - ^
●01:39:719 (1) - add finish on the slider's head and add clap end
●01:43:148 (1) - add clap on the slider's end

[Insane]
●00:04:148 (2,4,6,8) - add clap
●00:07:577 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:11:005 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:14:434 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:17:434 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●00:20:434 (1) - remove new combo
●00:20:541 (1) - ^
●00:24:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try to put more hit sound here
●00:31:041 (16) - remove note ?
●00:56:434 (7,11,15) - add clap
●00:59:648 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●01:10:362 - add whistle
●01:15:719 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●01:41:434 (7) - add new combo because you changed slider speed here.

I want more hit sound >_<

good luck ~ :P
All done~ and added some more hit sound on Insane~

Thanks for modding~ :)
XinCrin
Hi altc3000 ~

[Easy]

• 00:10:578 (1) This circle lost the spacing distance of 1.0 x you're carrying, in conclusion fix the spacing to be consistent
• 00:18:292 (2) Move it to x: 256 y: 92, for that line in the grid mapping and will look more orderly
• 00:19:148 (3) Prefer to exploit the system symmetrical slider with only 3 points to form this slider, so will look more symmetrical and beautiful
• 00:38:863 (2) Move this circle to x: 256 and: 68 for that is perfectly aligned to the center grid
• 00:50:863 (4) Follow the same advice above, in conclusion moves this to x:256 y:208
• 01:03:720 (1) You forgot to put a clap at the end of the entire slider, plus you have to keep your consistency with hitsouds (claps) in conclusion adds a clap at the end of the slider
• 01:14:434 (3) I do not like your patterns to follow your claps but hitsounds patterns, put a clap here
• 01:22:577 (1) Do not do so bored, try to give it a curved shape
• 01:24:292 (2) ^
• 01:41:434 (1) Put a clap at the end of the slider to go with your patterns hitsounds
• 01:53:434 (Inherited Point) Correct the inherited point as they put x1.50 in the speed slider, just change it to x1.00

[suko's Normal]

• 00:12:720 (4) Move the slider third point to x:148 y:300 to be symmetrical
• 00:14:862 (1,2,3) Align the two circles and the slider also looks better and plays better
• 00:54:720 (5) Forgot to put a clap here, must continue their patterns
• 00:56:862 (2) Please fix the spacing here, has to maintain a constant spacing throughout the diff especially easy and normal
• 01:08:005 (5) The shape of this slider looks very ugly, try to make it more symmetrical look simple and beautiful

Sorry I have no time for modding the other diffs. This mod again as soon as I can

Good Luck ~
popner
M4M request.

Since this is your first map, I will give you some suggestion on the whole map, and then mod Insane diff to tell you the details.

The first thing you need to know is, the rhythm you used is a little monotonous. Indeed, they fit the music well(and it is good in lower diffs), but players will be boring when they play your map. One way to solve this is to use various pattern to make players' attention on reading map. The other way is to use your own rhythm track(but this is difficult).

Another thing is, symmetric is a good way, but only when they are used reasonably. I think you use too much copy so the whole mapset seems similar.

[General]
Current timing is off. Offset = 3788 is much better. The mod below based on new timing.

[Insane]
00:03:788 (1) - add finish on slider head. I can clearly hear a finish sound here.
00:10:645 (1,2) - repeating this 1/2 rhythm is boring. You can use more 3/4 slider(like 00:27:788 (1,2)) in this music.
00:20:930 (1) - finish on head is better imo.
00:24:359 (1) - 00:31:216 (1) - ^ I think adding finish on all similar position won't hurt.
00:31:216 (1,2,3) - since this triple is after a long stream, maybe changing it to a repeating slider is better:
00:43:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - the stream is not in good shape. You can try the 'convert slider to stream' in compose menu to make it perfectly round.
00:56:073 (5,6,7) - this is the best part in this diff. That means, you may need to improve the creativity of the other parts - I see many rhythms and patterns repeat again and again. For such a simple-rhythm music, you should try to use various rhythm to make the map more interesting.
00:58:645 (1) - miss a finish
01:24:359 (1,2,3,4) - as above(00:56:073 (5,6,7)), I made a simple example for this part:

GL~
KokoroStudiox3
offcet:3808 all diff >resnap all notes

AIBat
[Easy]
01:13:149 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[Insane]

Snapping
00:33:291 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:291 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:291 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:720 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:720 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:720 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:34:148 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:34:148 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:39:720 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:39:720 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:39:720 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:148 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:40:148 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:40:148 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:577 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:40:577 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:40:577 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:41:005 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:41:005 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:00:612 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:612 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:612 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:01:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:577 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:01:577 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:02:862 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:291 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:719 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:03:719 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:148 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:148 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:04:577 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:04:577 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:05:005 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:05:005 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:24:291 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:24:291 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:24:719 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:24:719 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:148 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:25:148 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:25:577 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:25:577 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:31:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:31:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:31:577 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:31:577 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:31:577 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:32:005 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:32:005 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:32:005 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:32:434 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:32:434 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:32:434 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:43:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:43:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:44:005 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:44:005 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Topic Starter
altc3000

XinCrin wrote:

Hi altc3000 ~

[Easy]

• 00:10:578 (1) This circle lost the spacing distance of 1.0 x you're carrying, in conclusion fix the spacing to be consistent
• 00:18:292 (2) Move it to x: 256 y: 92, for that line in the grid mapping and will look more orderly
• 00:19:148 (3) Prefer to exploit the system symmetrical slider with only 3 points to form this slider, so will look more symmetrical and beautiful
• 00:38:863 (2) Move this circle to x: 256 and: 68 for that is perfectly aligned to the center grid
• 00:50:863 (4) Follow the same advice above, in conclusion moves this to x:256 y:208
• 01:03:720 (1) You forgot to put a clap at the end of the entire slider, plus you have to keep your consistency with hitsouds (claps) in conclusion adds a clap at the end of the slider
• 01:14:434 (3) I do not like your patterns to follow your claps but hitsounds patterns, put a clap here
• 01:22:577 (1) Do not do so bored, try to give it a curved shape
• 01:24:292 (2) ^
• 01:41:434 (1) Put a clap at the end of the slider to go with your patterns hitsounds
• 01:53:434 (Inherited Point) Correct the inherited point as they put x1.50 in the speed slider, just change it to x1.00

[suko's Normal]

• 00:12:720 (4) Move the slider third point to x:148 y:300 to be symmetrical
• 00:14:862 (1,2,3) Align the two circles and the slider also looks better and plays better
• 00:54:720 (5) Forgot to put a clap here, must continue their patterns
• 00:56:862 (2) Please fix the spacing here, has to maintain a constant spacing throughout the diff especially easy and normal
• 01:08:005 (5) The shape of this slider looks very ugly, try to make it more symmetrical look simple and beautiful

Sorry I have no time for modding the other diffs. This mod again as soon as I can

Good Luck ~
Done~ Thanks~
TheVileOne
Mod 4 you

Easy
It's an alright difficulty.

00:03:788 (1) - Start with finish?
00:15:788 (2,1) - Make 1.0 snap (Currently 0.97)
00:20:931 (1,2,3) - Why is this pattern straight when the previous pattern wasn't straight?
00:26:074 (1) - Move this away from the slider end. It's too close.
00:30:788 (2) - Have a clap here.
00:38:931 (2,3) - Why is the spacing here not 1.0?
00:56:503 (4) - Move so that 1,2,3,4,5 make a solid curve?
00:57:788 (6) - Maybe curving in the other direction would create a better transition. http://puu.sh/1IcLM also notice that the end is centered with 00:58:645 (1) - . Make sure you do that.
01:08:930 (1) - Make into a slider?
01:09:788 - Starting the spinner here would be more comfortable IMO.
01:13:217 (1) - Don't have a clap here, it's not 2 or 4. Actually I don't like your patterns here, you shouldn't skip hitsound beats and then hitsound the downbeat. The beat should look like this http://puu.sh/1Igci The downbeats aren't that important here, you could skip over most of them if you wanted to. Just don't skip the 2,4 hitsound ticks.
01:44:931 (1,2) - Hitsounds should be on the ends. This is distracting.

Normal

00:03:788 (1,2) - It would be nice if this were a blanket. I'm not a fan of the slider shape as well. also start with a finish?
00:04:216 - Why is this hitsound part skipped?
00:19:646 (4) - Looks bad not being stacked where 2 is.
00:21:360 (2) - Try moving last point to x 33 y 86 and then reapplying distance snap with next note. It looks better that way.
00:31:646 (2,3) - Make this blanket better?
00:55:217 (1) - You forgot a clap on the end.
01:15:360 (5,1) - Looks better aligned. Unsure how it will affect parts after it though.

Hard
some parts felt unique while other parts just felt bland. I felt this map suffered from some over simplification. But towards the end the beat got very complex. It wasn't the nicest looking beatmap once you started adding the triples in.

00:03:788 (1) - Start with finish?
00:18:359 (2) - Something looks wrong with this slider curve, like it's not like the first one.
00:28:216 - Please don't skip hitsound ticks. This sound is more valuable than 00:28:646 (2) - . Clap should go there as well.
00:28:860 (1,1) - Finishes? Other parts like this, you had finishes for in the easy)
00:32:074 (4) - Better if this was symmetrical.
00:33:360 (2,3,4) - Spacing is closer than 00:31:646 (2,3,4) - . (0.5 vs 0.53) I prefer the latter.
00:37:217 (3,4,1) - It would be nice if this didn't change so much from the pattern you were making. you can flattern the transition to achieve similar results without jeopardizing pattern consistency. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/552405
00:46:645 (5,6) - The flat part of the slider makes this transition look bad.
01:02:074 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These should be parallel.
01:22:645 (1,2) - Center?
01:42:574 (10,11,1) - Doesn't seem like a proper transition to me.
01:46:003 (10,11,1) - ^

Insane
I would get more opinions on this.

00:03:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't this be a mirrored pattern? Why is one higher than the other?
00:37:859 (15,1) - I don't like how you dip here. In fact you could lower this whole pattern 00:35:502 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - so that it's more in the center.
00:56:073 (5) - I suggest starting the slider here instead.
00:59:716 (3) - Forgot a clap on the repeat.
01:05:502 - Okay after having claps on the first pattern that is exactly the same as this one, this pattern is devoid of claps?
01:28:645 (4) - Whistle is distracting IMO.
01:33:573 - clap?
01:34:430 - ^
01:35:930 (4) - clap on end? What do you think of that as a clap rhythm?
01:41:502 (1,2,3,4) - Slowdown is out of place and I didn't expect it.
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply