Actualiza, creo me llevare 1 o 2 dias mas para darle un pequeño toque a mi diff x3
Very nice mania diffsI agree, Xin did an excelent job!
yo you got a mod requested from my queue so let's get started .Of course I wont give up! Thanks for your mod!!!
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but i's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Opinions, or other.
00:10:024 (1,2,1) - i think you can re-arrange this pattern so that the wave slider blankets (1), as well as the curved (1) blanketing (4) because i think that it'll make the diff fun and smoother to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO like this.
00:16:024 (1,2,3) - the flow in this part feels awkward to follow because of the transition between (1,2). it takes a sharp left turn and that might feel awkward for beginners to follow, so i highly suggest that you make (1) looks like the red (2), and follow it up by adjusting (2,3) to a triangular pattern like this. Fixed.
00:20:024 (1) - remove the finish here because it sounds too distracting and unfitting to follow during gameplay. Ok.
00:20:524 (2) - align this to 00:19:524 (2) - so that the flow in this is steady and smoother to follow as well during gameplay IMO. I didn't really get this one, but I think I fixed it.
00:22:024 (1) - i highly suggest that you re-adjust this slider like this. same reason as above. I did a remap of that little part, now it follows the music better and has a improved flow.
00:32:024 (1) - i think that you can replace this repeat slider for a 1/1 slider and a circle to follow the music more accurately during gameplay IMO. Ok!
00:36:024 (1) - same as 00:20:524. Ok!
00:36:524 (2) - i think that you can align this note to (2) for a triangular pattern as well as smoothness and neatness in this pattern during gameplay. Ok!
00:38:024 (1) - same as 00:20:524. Ok!
00:44:024 (1) - ^ Ok!
00:45:024 (3) - how about adjusting so that the ends of this slider are aligned to 00:43:524 (2,2) - ? the pattern would be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay like i said on one of my suggestions. Ok!
01:02:024 (1) - the finish on this spinner sounds too quirt and may be inaudible for beginners, so i suggest increasing the volume between 55%-70% so that it'll play along with the piano in this part of the song. Ok!, but I changed it to 40% so it isn't that loud.
01:09:024 (2) - remove the clap at the end because it doesn't fit with this part. you can hear the clap at the beginning of you listen carefully but not at the end since it breaks the flow in the hitsounding here, also the clap it too loud, so add a timing point to match--i mean show emphasis in the clap in the BGM. Ok!
01:10:024 (3) - replace the finish for a whistle. it's more fitting and the finish is distracting like i said before. Ok!
my main concern is the hitsounding, especially the finishes like i said on my mod because they sound too loud and they don't fit with the music at times. i think that the flow can be better, but that can be improved yourself overtime . Okay, I think I'll take a second look at the hitsounds, I also changed a lot of circles and sliders for better flow c:
decrease the AR to 4 because i feel that the flow with AR5 is too forced to follow for players since this song is a slightly low BPM song IMO.
00:09:024 (3) - *nazi* move this 1 grid to the left because it'll be align to (2), and the square will be perfect since it's aligned properly. Nice catch.
00:15:024 (3) - you should move (3) here since i believe that going this would be a lot easier to follow since it forms a shape of a triangle as you see during gameplay IMO. Ok!
00:19:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ik that you can make this flow with creativity in this, so i'll help you out in this. i highly suggest that you do this and try doing it creatively like this or something similar to this pattern so that it'll be easier and fun to follow during gameplay. Thank you!! I just couldn't get the right ryhthm.
00:32:024 (1,2) - i highly think that this note can be stacked together because right now, the flow here feels really awkward considering the transition between this pattern. You're right. Fixed
00:44:024 (1) - do Ctrl+J on this slider because the overlap on the circle looks bad and also the spacing here is inconsistent which breaks the flow and it'll be hard to follow and awkward as well for players. Ok!
00:55:024 (2) - move this note between (the end of (3,1) because it'll form a triangle and it'll be a lot smoother and there's nothing overlapping in this part as well during gameplay. Ok!
same comment about the finishes and also the flow and structure needs work since it doesn't feel comfortable to follow IMO.
Will check the flow. At least the rhythm is ok I guess.
00:08:024 (1) - add a finish here because you can clearly hear the finish and it'll emphasize the beginning of this part of the song.
00:08:774 (4,5,6,7) - keep your spacing consistent here because the rhythm is the same and different spacing would break the flow in this part during gameplay. Ok!
00:18:024 (1) - try straightening this slider to keep the flow steady, or i highly suggest that you make a new slider for this note so that the flow is smoother and easier to follow as well, or you can remove the repeat and add a circle. same reason. Ok!
00:43:524 (1) - remove the finish here because it sounds too loud and distracting to follow during gameplay. Ok!
00:45:399 (2) - it'll be a lot better if you align this to (1). just hold shirt and move the slider around until you see a line. that's where (1) should be for that smooth transition to the diff IMO. ...?! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU COULD DO THAT WITH THE SHIFT KEY!!! Also, Fixed and thanks for letting me know that.
00:46:274 (1) - same as 00:43:524. Ok!
00:52:024 (9,1) - add a NC on (9) because that's where the new phrase in the music begins. if you do this, then remove the NC on (1) to continue that rhythm in the BGM. Ok!
01:26:524 (1) - remove the NC here because the music continues from the previous (1) since nothing changes in this part of the song. Ok!
01:27:524 (6,7) - same as 00:43:524. Ok!
01:29:274 (2) - the spacing is inconsistent because players might assume that this is a 1/4 kick slider and they could hit this note too early, so space it out to make it less confusing. Ok!
01:35:524 (8,9) - same as 00:43:524. Ok!
same comment as Imp. Ok!
and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .
a note in 7k diff is missing.Added! Will update soon.