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AsprikaQ

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

P A N's Normal
  1. I prefer AR-3 because its easiest diff and bpm is low
  2. 00:12:962 (1) - missed finish
  3. 00:52:661 (4) - tail whiste ( same as 00:45:443 (2) - )
  4. 00:54:466 (1) - i think 40% normal hit fits better then soft because it following drumms
  5. 01:03:037 (2) - touching health bar
  6. 01:10:706 (1) - missed finish
  7. 01:23:338 (1) - i think 40% normal hit fits better then soft because it following drumms
Hard
  1. 00:11:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making them symmetric ? http://puu.sh/25wuV
  2. 00:15:218 (1) - i dont like when pattern starts in the middle after spinnner because first circle is completely hidden by spinners hitburst, i prefer to do something like this http://puu.sh/25wEE
  3. 00:16:571 (5) - ctrl+g better for me
  4. 00:20:631 (5) - i think this placement is very bad for H diff because slider completely hidden by hitburst + previous slider http://puu.sh/25wHM, so maybe this ? http://puu.sh/25wJz
  5. 00:21:985 (1) - grid up for better blanket and if you applied previous suggestion move 00:21:759 (6,1) - to x-252 y-144)
  6. 00:23:789 (5) - hmm maybe smth like this http://puu.sh/25wMm
  7. 00:23:789 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - just placement suggestion for whole part \oo/
    444,140,23789,2,0,P|400:88|352:100|352:100|312:136,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,180,24466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    192,129,24691,2,0,P|160:100|160:100|112:88|68:140,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    20,208,25368,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    48,288,25594,6,0,P|107:338|184:309,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,288,26270,2,0,P|308:260|348:280|348:280|372:308|392:352,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    379,324,26947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  8. 00:29:654 (1,2,3) - and again i think its plays not good for hard diff, you can easily move them http://puu.sh/25wSe
  9. 00:33:488 (2,3) - i think it plays better http://puu.sh/25wT0
  10. 00:36:196 (6) - you should start next NC either from here or 00:36:421 (8) - , and remove NC from 00:37:323 (1) -
  11. 00:44:090 (1,2) - :3 http://puu.sh/25wUu
  12. 00:53:564 (2) - i dont think that this slider needs this sudden jump because i dont hear any changes in music or vocal, everything calm and peacefull :> http://puu.sh/25wW2
  13. 00:56:496 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a bit messy for me, maybe this o: http://puu.sh/25x0r
  14. 00:58:075 - i think finish that you used in this part is very loud and sounds not good x_x
  15. 01:01:007 (6,7) - ctrl+g? i think note then slider fits better http://puu.sh/25x4l
  16. 01:26:496 (1,2,3) - triplet after spinner plays really bad for H diff, ecpecially here when you cannot predict when spinner ends, this really needs to be changed to kickslider imo and move it away from center because spinners.....you know...
  17. 01:33:037 (1) - wistle tail or ( you can try to add 2 sections at 01:33:488 NC1-45% and 01:33:827 SC1-65%, i think normal hit fits good with drumms (+remove clap there, leave only normal hit)
  18. 01:34:165 (5) - NC
  19. 01:35:518 (7,1,2) - dont like this placement, maybe this ? http://puu.sh/25xea
  20. 01:39:127 (8,9,1,2,3) - prefer to avoid overlaps here o: http://puu.sh/25xf8
  21. 01:41:609 (1) - drumm sample set for spinners end, or soft whistle, or both
Insane
  1. 00:09:127 (7,1) - i think this jump is too big x_x, prefer easy spacing http://puu.sh/25xi3
  2. 00:20:180 (1,2,3) - hmm maybe this ? http://puu.sh/25xjh
  3. 00:32:586 (3) - whistle ?
  4. 00:42:962 (1,2,3) - hmm you can try one this patterns, i think they fits better !
    236,80,42736,6,0,P|164:92,1,42.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    112,176,42962,2,0,P|153:169,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
    268,220,43188,2,0,P|196:232,1,42.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    144,316,43414,2,0,P|185:309,1,42.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    288,300,43639,6,0,B|348:294|377:220|337:169,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    338,169,44315,1,0,0:0:0
    396,96,44541,1,0,0:0:0
    396,96,44767,1,0,0:0:0
    424,200,44992,1,8,0:0:0

    or without sliderstreams ._.

    236,80,42736,6,0,P|164:92,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
    176,168,43188,2,0,P|104:180,3,42.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    208,252,43639,6,0,B|213:312|287:341|338:301,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    424,264,44315,1,0,0:0:0
    364,160,44541,1,0,0:0:0
    364,160,44767,1,0,0:0:0
    256,200,44992,1,8,0:0:0
    256,200,45218,1,2,0:0:0
    332,268,45443,1,4,0:0:0
  5. 00:49:729 (7) - tail whistle
  6. 00:58:075 - this finish x_x sorry but personally this makes this song more epic :D
  7. 01:01:684 (1) - too far for me x_x, maybe move it to x-172 y-192 ?
  8. 01:13:413 (3) - whistle
  9. 01:15:218 (3) - ^
  10. 01:16:571 (1) - ^ tail
  11. 01:18:827 (3) - w
  12. 01:20:631 (3) - w
  13. 01:22:436 (3) - w
  14. 01:25:594 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/25xw4, and i think its better to start NC from first kickslider 01:25:594 (1) -
  15. 01:26:496 (1) - use NC1 45% for this kickslider, match with drumms
  16. 01:28:075 (4,6) - w
  17. 01:29:879 (9,1) - switch NC
  18. 01:29:879 (9) - w
  19. 01:33:714 (5) - stack it with 01:32:812 (2,3) - ?
  20. 01:35:744 (6) - w
  21. 01:39:353 (5) - w
  22. 01:41:609 (1) - drumm sample set for spinners end, or soft whistle, or both
Melo
  1. 00:24:466 (2) - move this note little bit ? http://puu.sh/25xKy i think it plays better because after previous slider i feel that i want to move cursor ↓
  2. 00:38:000 (4) - place it like this ? http://puu.sh/25xMw or you can do simillar pattern like this one 00:44:767 (2,3,4) -
  3. 00:57:173 - +5/10 volume better for me
  4. 01:41:383 (3) - should be also finish + whistle like 00:43:639 (5) - , 01:12:511 (5) -
  5. 01:41:609 - 01:43:188 add spinner ?
    there are few suggestion about hitsounds but its too long to write them so i better give you diff with those fixes, and you will choose use them or not
    http://puu.sh/25yyY
    00:42:736 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:04:391 (5,6) -
    01:11:609 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:33:263 (5,6,7) -
    01:40:481 (2,3,4,1,2) -
Thx for modding! A lot improve here :) :)


Melophobia wrote:

@cRyo[iceeicee]:
Applied everything but the last spinner. feels better with just a circle imo :>
good mod thanks!
http://puu.sh/25zb1
Thank you! Updated :) :)
Frostmourne
ok , good luck for the first map , bubbled
Melophobia

this bitrate is unrankable, the mapper will change soon but not now. posting this to prevent BAT from ranking instantly. (somehow it doesn't show its bitrate.)
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

Melophobia wrote:


this bitrate is unrankable, the mapper will change soon but not now. posting this to prevent BAT from ranking instantly. (somehow it doesn't show its bitrate.)
Now it's fixed :) :)
Frostmourne
restored
Niva
Source should be 'jubeat knit' (both j and k is not capitalized) - or you can also use only 'jubeat' as source and move 'knit' to tags (I recommend the second one though~)

Anyway didn't found anything wrong with the map, feel free to Forum PM me when it's fixed xD

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AsprikaQ

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Congratz :3
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