[gansijiye]
* 00:08:718 (8) - A note here wouldn't be bad
* 00:10:460 (7) - I don't know so I tell... is this higher SV voluntary?
* 00:15:082 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Set the playback rate to 25% and hear the voice. This 1/6 is totally wrong, if you want to see the voice the right rhythm is this:
* 00:29:627 (5,1) - Same ^
* 00:30:309 (2) - A note here wouldn't be bad, 00:30:082 (1,2) - this rhythm is hard to play, and with this double it will be better.
* 00:48:718 (4,1) - This distance should be fixed, it's really different from the other jumps (00:45:536 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - )
* 00:54:172 (13) - This rhythm is incorrect. You should continue the 1/4 stream to 00:54:286 (14) - and put a 1/6 slider with reverse 00:54:400 (15) - here.
A 1/8 slider is a great idea too;
* 00:55:991 (13) - Same ^
* 00:56:900 (5) - This is 1/8 not 1/6
* 00:57:809 (5) - Same ^
* 00:58:263 (1) - Here starts a 1/6 rhythm and it finishes at * 01:00:081 (1) -
* 01:01:900 (1) - This beat is a lot strange... if you move it at * 01:01:824 (1) - sounds better, but it plays terrible with the next beats, so idk
* 01:05:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Not a good spacing but it's playable/readable...
* 01:09:513 (5) - This beat should be moved to 01:09:400 (5) -
* 01:17:809 (1,2) - I don't like this overlay ans you should increase the spacing
* 01:25:536 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All these beats/sliders are 1/6, so fix all the 1/4
* 01:44:400 (4,5,6,7) - As I said a 1/4 rhythm should be better
You should fix the patterns in these parts:
From 01:43:718 (1) - to 01:58:263 (1) -
From 06:07:354 (1) - to 06:35:195 (3) -
* 02:21:445 (5) - CTRL + G
* 02:37:809 (7) - This is 1/4 like the sliders (02:36:672 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
* 02:38:263 (1) - From here there is a 1/6 rhythm and it finishes at 02:40:006 (6) -
* 02:42:241 (3,4) - I don't understand this distance
* 03:09:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This rhythm is wrong. The right rhythm is:
Sincerly it sucks, but I needed to say xD
* 03:38:263 (1,2,3) - Remove 03:38:831 (3) - , remove 1/4 from the slider and add a note 03:38:604 (2) - here
* 04:06:445 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - This isn't 1/6 but 1/8. Fix it
* 05:01:445 (13) - I don't hear 1/6, but if you want a fast slider reverse a 1/8 should be better
* 05:13:491 (4) - 1 square up in the grid (4)
* 05:36:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
This rhythm sucks too, but it is D:
* 06:06:331 (1,2,3,4) - As Charles said, this is 1/4