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Camellia ft. Ayakura Mei - Integration under the moon of cod

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deepsea
jysb
Shinkuu
jysb
CSY the corrupt
jysb
Axey
鸡爷冲冲冲 :arrow:
LKs
asdfghjkl
vivicat
\我的偶像门禁哥/
gdeath
这年头当兵的伤不起。 :)
Kodora
<3

star~
Kodora
00:23:696 (1,2) - discussed with BAT - overlap. Must be fixed for get ranked :V
02:55:060 (1,1,1) - maybe remove new combo?
03:38:241 (1) - it was so suddenly, maybe fix?
05:22:332 (1,1,1) - remove new combo?
05:28:696 (5,6,7,1) - i asked a lot of people for playtest and many people did combobreak here. Maybe make this part in other way?

Awesome map for me. But, during to new rules this map need 2.5/3 star diff and another not insane diff. But i hope this map will be ranked.
Good luck :3
SapphireGhost
testplay (sightread)
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/552373[/img]
Keeping this here because I can. Good luck, kiddly!
Topic Starter
kiddly

SapphireGhost wrote:

testplay (sightread)
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/552373[/img]
Keeping this here because I can. Good luck, kiddly!
THX :D
Appreciate for good playing skill!
Natsu
gansijiye:

SPOILER
00:10:195 Unsnapped slider
00:10:422 ^
00:10:650 ^
move spinner to 04:41:975 and add a circle here 04:41:900 sound better since u cant add a hitsoun in the start of spinner
06:35:195 add finish

sory about short mod but this song is so much for me x_x
SamiPale
据说你要我用英文

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]
Artist: Alstroemeria Records.
Should capitalize the T in Source.
Add ZUN Camellia Ayakura Mei and blablabla to tags.
Make your KIAI timelines at downbeats.
It's better that remove countdown.

[gansijiye]
  1. Important stuff
    1. 00:10:233 (6,7,8,9) - I think you wanna put 1/6 here but you missed checking it after a resnap.fix it.
  2. Map designing
    1. 02:55:081 (1,1,1) - these new combos are useless.
    2. 05:22:354 (1,1,1) - cancel new combo.
    3. 05:18:831 (1) - cancel new combo,I think you have missed checking it?
    4. 05:24:627 (1) - cancel new combo,I think you have missed checking it?
    5. 05:30:536 (1) - ^
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 02:18:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad flowing here.make a new pattern?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. None.
star for mianbaoche
SamiPale
edit
Topic Starter
kiddly

Natsu wrote:

gansijiye:

SPOILER
00:10:195 Unsnapped slider fixed.
00:10:422 ^ fixed.
00:10:650 ^ fixed.
move spinner to 04:41:975 and add a circle here 04:41:900 sound better since u cant add a hitsoun in the start of spinner I want to keep this cause other spinners in this part have mo notes at beginning.
06:35:195 add finish there is no finish in background so I will keep this.

sory about short mod but this song is so much for me x_x

thx for coming~
Topic Starter
kiddly

SamiPale wrote:

据说你要我用英文

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]
Artist: Alstroemeria Records. y
Should capitalize the T in Source. y
Add ZUN Camellia Ayakura Mei and blablabla to tags. y
Make your KIAI timelines at downbeats. y
It's better that remove countdown. y

[gansijiye]
  1. Important stuff
    1. 00:10:233 (6,7,8,9) - I think you wanna put 1/6 here but you missed checking it after a resnap.fix it. y
    y
  2. Map designing
    1. 02:55:081 (1,1,1) - these new combos are useless. n
    2. 05:22:354 (1,1,1) - cancel new combo. n
    3. 05:18:831 (1) - cancel new combo,I think you have missed checking it? y
    4. 05:24:627 (1) - cancel new combo,I think you have missed checking it? y
    5. 05:30:536 (1) - ^ y
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 02:18:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad flowing here.make a new pattern? y
  4. Hitsounds
    1. None.
star for mianbaoche

explained on irc.
thx for star~
Heatherfield
aiaiclala fans club presents
mod in English because I can(
03:36:445 (3) - new combo cuz sudden speed changed here.
03:42:809 (2) - whistle in slideslide sounds jysb
03:44:627 (2) - ^
04:09:172 (8) - add finish?
04:38:263 - 04:50:991 - a serial of long spinners make a map boring.maybe you can use long sliders?
05:04:627 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I'm not saying it's too hard,but it's looks bad in that bug distance.try a new arrangement.
06:08:036 (4,5,6) - I think it's a little misleading, players would think it's a 2+1.
jysb
jysb
jysb
jysb
我书读的少 门禁哥忽悠我什么你们还是不要找我
tsuka
source:Touhou.
ehh...change a new diff name?"gansijiye" makes no sence.
02:31:672 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g and keep the hitsounds the same.it more funny in my opinion.
02:32:127 (1,2,3) - ^
02:33:491 (1,2,3) - ^
02:33:945 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:809 (1) - useless new combo.

silence the soft sliderslide sounds better?
00:23:718 (1,2) - bad overlap.
01:51:445 (3,2,2,2) - add claps sound better since your used it all this part.
02:01:445 (4) - I think you just missed a clap at here?
02:08:718 (5) - ^
05:33:718 (5) - add a whistle.
06:17:203 (7,8) - add whistles.

我书读的少 门禁哥忽悠我什么你们还是不要找我
Topic Starter
kiddly

Heatherfield wrote:

aiaiclala fans club presents
mod in English because I can(
03:36:445 (3) - new combo cuz sudden speed changed here. fixed.
03:42:809 (2) - whistle in slideslide sounds jysb fixed.
03:44:627 (2) - ^
04:09:172 (8) - add finish? fixed.
04:38:263 - 04:50:991 - a serial of long spinners make a map boring.maybe you can use long sliders? fixed.
05:04:627 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I'm not saying it's too hard,but it's looks bad in that bug distance.try a new arrangement. fixed.
06:08:036 (4,5,6) - I think it's a little misleading, players would think it's a 2+1.
jysb
jysb
jysb
jysb
thx~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi, just pass by

02:44:400 (4) -
03:17:354 (1,2) - ctrl+g
03:17:809 (1,2) - ctrl+g
05:33:150 (2,3) - 0,0 overlap djb?
05:43:945 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - why no new combo like before
06:34:627 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593206

bybf
SamiPale
你好歹挑点别的国旗的来啊
Nymph
Topic Starter
kiddly
hi, just pass by

02:44:400 (4) - wat did you mean o.o
03:17:354 (1,2) - ctrl+g cool idea!fixed.
03:17:809 (1,2) - ctrl+g ^
05:33:150 (2,3) - 0,0 overlap djb? djb :D
05:43:945 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - why no new combo like before fixed.
06:34:627 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593206 It's cool but I want to remain my version :P

bybf
thx~
Natteke
This map is so confusing for me to play :(

The artist is: Camellia ft. Ayakura Mei

More info here: http://vgmdb.net/album/33321

I'm not sure if this stack leniency is allowed or not, could someone confirm?

00:00:991 (1) - - remove new combo from here?
04:07:354 (1) - add a normal hitfinish in the beginning of this slider !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
05:47:354 (5) - new combo?

nothing much, sorry, good map
BCI
according to Natteke's link Mystic Oriental Dream Ancient Temple Konpaku Youmu Perfect Cherry Blossom PCB th07 goes in tags lol
Kodora
stack leniency 3 is rankable, no need to change it

00:00:082 (1,2,1) - why did you unstack it? in previous version it was better ;_;

06:13:491 (1,2,3) - stack it?
06:20:991 (1,2,3,4) - as propose:


04:38:263 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - back spinners please, it looks better for me.
also, 04:44:854 (1,2,3) are hidden
05:07:809 (2,3,4) - stack please
Lally
hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥
well i can't mod for approval really but let's try

[gansijiye]
  1. use tickrate 2 because you have fast and slow slider and it will be mor easier to read they
  2. unsnapped inherited points at:
    love my box♥
    00:31:041 - snap to 00:30:991
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    01:46:411 - snap to 01:46:445
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    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    01:47:434 - snap to 01:47:468
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    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah >u<
    02:01:411 - snap to 02:01:445
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    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah @w@
    02:40:275 - snap to 02:40:309
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    05:07:787 - snap to 05:07:809
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    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah omg owo
    05:38:923 - snap to 05:38:945
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    06:34:719 - snap to 06:34:741
    06:34:832 - snap to 06:34:854
    06:34:946 - snap to 06:34:968
    06:35:060 - snap to 06:35:082

    now you can love or hate my box <3
  3. 00:20:536 (3) - personally i don't like this slider
  4. 02:55:082 (1,1,1) - remove new combo for this 3 circles is not nedded
  5. 05:07:809 (2,3,4) - something in this way?
hope it can help :X
kanpakyin
From my queue:

[General]
  1. 建議延長leadin到2.5秒

[gansijiye]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:23:945 - 感覺這邊加一個圈圈會好聽一點, 打起來也比較順手
    2. 00:57:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得這邊的間距可以再放大一點, 因為前面的間距都是越來越大的, 而且音樂的氣氛有上升的趨勢
    3. 01:43:718 ~ 這邊的1/3感覺有點危險, 可能會被西洋bat/mat說不適合音樂
    4. 05:40:991 (1) - 在這邊加個new combo?
    5. 05:48:263 (9) - ^

沒什麼好挑的, 給一下reply就可以拿泡了
Topic Starter
kiddly

kanpakyin wrote:

From my queue:

[General]
  1. 建議延長leadin到2.5秒 fixed.

[gansijiye]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:23:945 - 感覺這邊加一個圈圈會好聽一點, 打起來也比較順手
    2. 00:57:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得這邊的間距可以再放大一點, 因為前面的間距都是越來越大的, 而且音樂的氣氛有上升的趨勢 fixed.
    3. 01:43:718 ~ 這邊的1/3感覺有點危險, 可能會被西洋bat/mat說不適合音樂
    4. 05:40:991 (1) - 在這邊加個new combo? fixed.
    5. 05:48:263 (9) - ^ fixed.

沒什麼好挑的, 給一下reply就可以拿泡了

其他几个个人还是想要保留。
thx~!
kanpakyin
Bubbled.

#1 for approval.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Natteke

Natteke wrote:

The artist is: Camellia ft. Ayakura Mei

More info here: http://vgmdb.net/album/33321
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kiddly

Natteke wrote:

Natteke wrote:

The artist is: Camellia ft. Ayakura Mei

More info here: http://vgmdb.net/album/33321
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oops,I forgot to reply you.

We think use circle name is normal for a Touhou map(I asked for several mapper),so no change sorry.
Faust
Except Camellia doesn't belong to Alstroemeria Records at all.
Scorpiour
ALR is the circle, but in common like we use IOSYS, SOUND HOLIC or SYNC.ART's as artist but not arranger/vocals, i think it is fine :>
BCI

Scorpiour wrote:

ALR is the circle, but in common like we use IOSYS, SOUND HOLIC or SYNC.ART's as artist but not arranger/vocals, i think it is fine :>
really? i can't say this is even ALR-related by looking at this link (http://vgmdb.net/album/33321)

[quote="http://vgmdb.net":619ec]
> 04 Integration under the moon of codes
> Masayoshi Minoshima (2, 3, 5~7, 9, 10 -- Compose Tr. 1) (<= do you see here (4) number?)
> Arrangement by Camellia (4)
Aurele

Natteke wrote:

Natteke wrote:

The artist is: Camellia ft. Ayakura Mei

More info here: http://vgmdb.net/album/33321
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Let's go with it and I will be able to Bubble #2
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kiddly

Gabe wrote:

Let's go with it and I will be able to Bubble #2
Done! Also moved Alstroemeria Records into tags.
Aurele
currentlywaitingforanansweron#loungebeforerebubbling

Bubble #2
-kevincela-
Moved the map to the pending section! Good luck with the map :3
Colin Hou
01:00:048 - unsnapped KIAI ending section
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