00:15 Kyshiro: 00:06:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this stream isn't really well composed
00:16 Kyshiro: it has a little curve, i dont think it's suppsoed to be like that?
00:16 Bites: tru tru
00:16 Bites: it WAS but if you think that it was unintentional it's probably a bad decision
00:16 Kyshiro: it looks unintentional yeah
00:17 Kyshiro: 00:07:907 (3) - i suggest you make this slider faster so that the start and the end points don't overlap
00:17 Kyshiro: actually
00:17 Kyshiro: yeah, make it x1.5
00:18 Bites: i was gonna have it 0.75 and span to the next note
00:18 Bites: like this
00:18 Bites:
http://puu.sh/2cKbx00:18 Kyshiro: that works too
00:18 Kyshiro: 00:09:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't line up that well
00:19 Kyshiro: i suggest you move the stream more to the right or rearranging it
00:20 Kyshiro: 00:13:606 (9,10) - these sliders could be better, it's kind of ugly they way they're partly overlapping right now
00:21 Kyshiro: 00:14:696 (12) - not symmetric at all, try and keep the end anchor in the center of the end circle and make it at the mirrored location of the start anchor
00:21 Kyshiro: oh its actually fixed if you move it 1 grid up at medium grid
00:21 Kyshiro: lol
00:22 Bites: gg
00:22 Bites: alright moving forward :3
00:22 Bites: so far so gud
00:23 Kyshiro: to be honest i think you should remap some parts, and pay more attention to the spacing and the looks, the spacing is a major issue in this diff
00:23 Bites: that's fine
00:23 Bites: which parts tho
00:23 Kyshiro: also, unnecessary overlaps aren't that nice either
00:23 Kyshiro: lemme point that out
00:24 Kyshiro: and nother thing, the new combo's:
00:24 Kyshiro: try and put a nc every measure
00:24 Kyshiro: aka, every big white line
00:24 Kyshiro: it's pretty random the way you did it now
00:24 Bites: not really? it's just based upon the patterns instead of the timing
00:25 Kyshiro: 00:19:605 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is 1 big pattern if you ask me
00:25 Kyshiro: there's waaay too many NC's
00:25 Kyshiro: a single NC at 00:20:695 (1) - would do actually
00:25 Kyshiro: forgot a clap on this start btw 00:20:150 (1) -
00:26 Bites: the NC's there were done because they looked cool and also the follow lines
00:26 Bites: thx for the clap though
00:26 Kyshiro: well, then leave them like this, i can say every mat/bat that's gonna look at it will point it out though
00:27 Bites: if they do i guess i'll change it
00:27 Bites: but i really don't want to
00:27 Kyshiro: 00:24:104 (7) - at least NC here
00:27 Bites: i did
00:27 Bites: a bit earlier
00:27 Bites: when you were mentioning the every measure thing
00:27 Kyshiro: ah
00:28 Kyshiro: 00:27:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont think people are going to like the arrangement of this pattern
00:28 Bites: orz
00:28 Kyshiro: cause of the sudden slowdown at (4)
00:28 Bites: to be honest i dont like it that much either
00:28 Bites: yeah
00:28 Kyshiro: time for change then
00:29 Kyshiro: 00:28:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern doesn't really look good/play good
00:29 Kyshiro: tilting the square a bit would be awesome, and the jump upwards to (5) is a bit weird to play
00:30 Kyshiro: 00:30:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a tiny bit more spacing here to (6) wouldnt collide with anything would be nice, try to keep it consistent though
00:31 Kyshiro: actually
00:31 Kyshiro: i think this whole part could use a remap, cause of the flow and the overlaps
00:31 Kyshiro: 00:30:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:32 Kyshiro: 00:38:556 (4,5) - these kind of things simply dont flow
00:32 Bites: remapping that entire part even before you said that
00:32 Bites: lol
00:32 Kyshiro: lol okay
00:32 Kyshiro: 00:40:056 (9,10) - bad spacing/flow
00:33 Kyshiro: 00:42:373 (6,7) - ^
00:33 Kyshiro: ^Just the flow i mean
00:33 Kyshiro: 00:44:146 (3,4,5) - spacing
00:34 Bites: well shit i just realized it's all gonna be off now since i've been creating a few new circles and rearranging some
00:34 Kyshiro: 00:51:645 (4,5) - spacing again, you might have to rearrange the pattern after this to make this spacing correct tho
00:34 Kyshiro: well, if you think it's necessary you could remap the whole diff too
00:35 Kyshiro: it really does help remapping things, I remapped my insane at Stan SB - Airwalk 2 times to
00:35 Kyshiro: too *
00:35 Bites: no way in hell i'm remapping this haha
00:35 Bites: if i do it'll be a new diff or separate mapset
00:36 Kyshiro: i suggest a new mapset then lol
00:36 Bites: that was my way of saying "no"
00:37 Bites: sorry
00:37 Kyshiro: lol don't worry
00:37 Kyshiro: 00:54:509 (8) - NC
00:38 Kyshiro: 00:56:144 (12,1) - a bit more spacing between the slider and the tripple would be better so that it doesnt look like it continues in 1/4 after the slider
00:38 Kyshiro: 00:58:053 (9) - all the finished sound a bit noisy here
00:38 Kyshiro: finishes*
00:39 Kyshiro: 01:09:233 (9,10) - should be lined up better
00:40 Kyshiro: 01:09:914 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:40 Kyshiro: 01:18:503 (8) - nc
00:41 Kyshiro: 01:19:594 (1) - remove nc
00:41 Kyshiro: 01:20:685 (4) - NC
00:41 Kyshiro: 01:22:866 (4) - NC
00:41 Kyshiro: 01:23:957 (10) - ^
00:42 Kyshiro: 01:25:048 (16) - ^
00:42 Bites: all done
00:43 Kyshiro: okay, update it
00:43 Kyshiro: i'll recheck right after
00:43 Bites: gimem a sec
00:43 Bites: playing through
00:43 Kyshiro: okay
00:44 Bites: btw
00:44 Bites: when after i update it
00:44 Bites: 00:35:966 (7,8,9,10) -
00:45 Bites: that part im not certain about
00:45 Bites: so suggestions would be good
00:45 Bites: updating now
00:45 Kyshiro: okay, i'll check
00:45 Bites: done
00:46 Kyshiro: 2 things
00:46 Kyshiro: hitsounds
00:46 Bites: o
00:46 Kyshiro: and the flow from that last note to 00:37:056 (1) - isn't good
00:47 Bites: just gonna change the order of the four sliders to follow then
00:47 Bites: flows really well now
00:47 Kyshiro: yeah
00:47 Kyshiro: you didnt fix 00:06:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - though
00:48 Bites: not yet, i'll do that now
00:48 Kyshiro: 00:11:861 (14,15,16) - overmapped, there's actually supposed to be 2 notes
00:50 Kyshiro: 00:28:740 (5,6) - really bad flow and unrankable because the repeat is hidden
00:50 Kyshiro: also check your hitsounds in the remapped part, it's a bit messy now
00:51 Kyshiro: 00:51:645 (4,5) - still dont agree with this spacing
00:51 Kyshiro: 00:57:780 (8,9) - ^
00:52 Kyshiro: 01:14:140 (11) - missed clap
00:52 Kyshiro: 01:18:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - hitsounds
00:53 Kyshiro: tell me after you fixed/updated
00:56 Bites: updated
00:56 Bites: also i realized there's an extra note on the very first stream in the song
00:56 Bites: gotten rid of that
00:56 Kyshiro: okay
00:57 Kyshiro: testplaying it with standard skin
00:58 Kyshiro: did you even look at the things i suggested
00:59 Bites: yes? lol
00:59 Bites: some of them seemed really odd before and i had thought it was off because i had made adjustments before checking them
00:59 Bites: and i told you that
00:59 Kyshiro: theres no change in the hitsounds i just told you
00:59 Bites: what
00:59 Bites: i just made hitsound for all of that part
00:59 Kyshiro: 00:11:935 (14,15) - and theres this
01:00 Bites: i literally just fixed that, it slipped my mind
01:00 Kyshiro: i said ''also check your hitsounds in the remapped part as it's messy now''
01:00 Kyshiro: 00:30:512 (1) - missing clap
01:00 Kyshiro: 00:30:921 (4,5) - double clap?
01:00 Kyshiro: 00:33:239 (5) - clap?
01:01 Kyshiro: 00:33:648 (8) - why clap?
01:01 Kyshiro: etc.
01:01 Bites: ah, THAT part specifically
01:01 Kyshiro: take your time on fixing it, dont do it as fast as possible
01:01 Bites: i did the hitsounds for all the later bits that i actually fully remapped
01:01 Bites: i thought that's what you meant
01:01 Bites: i just moved around some circles for this part
01:03 Kyshiro: well, fix and update again
01:05 Bites: kkkk
01:05 Bites: i think i got it this time
01:05 Kyshiro: lets see
01:07 Kyshiro: 01:16:322 (1,2) - didnt see that these were sliders because of the hitburst from the previous notes
01:08 Kyshiro: also, in general it's a bad idea to start a slider on a red tick, i lost combo cause of that a few times because it simply doesn't fit
01:08 Kyshiro: 00:31:739 (2,3) -
01:08 Kyshiro: 00:35:557 (5) -
01:08 Kyshiro: 00:46:328 (3,4) - spacing
01:09 Kyshiro: 01:10:459 (5,6) - red tick
01:09 Kyshiro: 01:11:550 (5) -
01:09 Kyshiro: well, that's all
01:10 Kyshiro: i think that's nearly as good as it'll get in it's current state
01:10 Kyshiro: sorry i didn't mention the sliders on the red ticks before, i didn't realise it, realised it after playing it
01:11 Kyshiro: did you say anything? my internet is derping lol
01:11 Bites: nope
01:11 Bites: im working on all this
01:11 Kyshiro: okay
01:15 Bites: kkkkk
01:15 Bites: its gud
01:15 Bites: update
01:15 Bites: now i want 2 watch u play
01:15 Kyshiro: okay, final check lol
01:17 Kyshiro: wanna play 1 specific part again
01:17 Bites: that part flows pretty badly
01:17 Bites: i saw that pause
01:18 Kyshiro: 01:11:687 (6) -
01:18 Kyshiro: invisible slider
01:18 Bites: ohÉ
01:18 Bites: ?
01:18 Bites: tru
01:18 Bites: yeah i see it
01:18 Kyshiro: actually
01:18 Kyshiro: i think this slider doesnt really fit
01:19 Kyshiro: it feels too sudden
01:19 Bites: what lol
01:19 Kyshiro: maybe its because there are 2 sliders in a row
01:19 Kyshiro: not sure lemme try that
01:20 Kyshiro: just fix the hidden slider
01:20 Kyshiro: it'll be fine
01:21 Kyshiro: DAT STAR RATING LOOOOL 5.66
01:21 Kyshiro: 4.66 ***
01:21 Kyshiro: how is this not 5*
01:21 Bites: because peppy sucks at gauging difficulty
01:21 Bites: he's not good at osu at all
01:21 Bites: so why should he be the one building the formula for star rating?? IDK
01:22 Kyshiro: idno lol
01:22 Kyshiro: it's not that simple though
01:22 Kyshiro: there's a whole system behind it
01:23 Bites: k i redid a bit of that part
01:23 Bites: fixing the hitsounds
01:23 Bites: and then update
01:23 Kyshiro: okay