Azure wrote:

既然已經完成了，就上傳到Pending Beatmaps唄.. (OK)
BPM:119 (我覺得原來的比較好...)
offset:1996 (我覺得原來的比較好...)
最好再重新聽音樂做一次... (已經試了 )

cmn_891127 wrote:

因为不能超过三个slider speeds (fixed)
easy不建议用多重slider speeds (fixed)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
   
   
   - [(0 `-')~] : 18863 [/color]fixed to 18640)[/color]
   - [0_0] : 18640
   - [Easy] : 18640
   - [Normal] : 18640
   
   
2. Inconsistency in Countdown:
   
   
   - [(0 `-')~] : 0 (I think is ok now)
   - [0_0] : 1
   - [Easy] : 1
   - [Normal] : 1
   
   
3. Inconsistency in Source:
   
   
   - [(0 `-')~] :
   - [0_0] :
   - [Easy] : BRIGHT (delete already)
   - [Normal] :
   
   
4. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   
   
   - [(0 `-')~] :
   
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:20:122, ends on 00:29:189 (fixed to starts on 00:18:640, ends on 00:33:629 )
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:36:242, ends on 00:52:361 (fixed to starts on 00:35:700, ends on 00:50:885)
   
   - [0_0] :
   
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:18:640, ends on 00:33:629
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:35:700, ends on 00:50:885
   
   - [Easy] :
   
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:18:640, ends on 00:33:251
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:35:770, ends on 00:50:885
   
   - [Normal] :
   
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:18:640, ends on 00:34:007
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:35:700, ends on 00:50:885
   
   
5. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
   
   
   - [(0 `-')~] Red timing sections at:
   
   00:01:988, BPM of 119,110 (fixed to 119.090)
   
   - [0_0] Red timing sections at:
   
   00:01:511, BPM of 119,090
   
   - [Easy] Red timing sections at:
   
   00:01:511, BPM of 119,090
   
   - [Normal] Red timing sections at:
   
   00:01:511, BPM of 119,090

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Timing]
四个难度timing不一致

1. bpm: 119.00
2. offset: 1985
3. kiai: I recommend you set spring/flash instead of normal kiai
   00:20:136 ~ 00:20:262
   00:36:270 ~ 00:36:396

snap timing and note!!!!!!!!
以下mod基于未改动的时间

[General]
[*]这样的难度名真的大丈夫么 (0_0 change the diff name to insane)
[*]因为改过红线，也就是小节开始的重音拍，所以前三个难度NC都很奇怪 (紅線改過一次,現在應該不奇怪了)
[*]从难度上看，最难的是[(0 `-')~]，但是这个难度sv1.5，而[0_0]是2.0 (0_0 change to 1.5)

[(0 `-')~]
00:10:049 (1) - snap tail (不明白snap 的意思/_>\)

[0_0]
00:01:511 (1) - 一开始没有音乐就开始hit很奇怪，不如在00:01:762放一个stack note. (fixed)
00:15:617 (7,1) - (7)变成1/2slider，spinner 00:16:121 ~ 00:18:137(fixed)
00:52:648 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 最后音乐结束的太突然了，建议跟其他难度结束时间一样(fixed)

[Easy]
00:01:511 (1) - ^ (fixed)
00:18:640 (7,8,1) - (fixed)
00:33:251 (4,5,6,1) - too far (fixed)
00:46:351 (9,1) - too far (fixed)
easy难度不建议出现jump，而且全谱面间距最好一致 (fixed)

[Normal]
00:01:511 (1) - ^(fixed)

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~


[General]
- Bpm is 119 ? owo ~
- Everything in the tags, "one year two month twenty day 1 2 20 japan good song bright" delete it all because it is already the artist and title or not needed.
- Clap sounds too loud. ><
- Check off enable countdown.
- Add (Short Ver.) to the title since more than half of the song is cut off. (fixed)


[Easy]
- Approach Rate -1 (fixed)
- Overall Difficulty +2 (fixed)


[Normal]
- HP Drain Rate -1 (fixed)
- Overall Difficulty +1(fixed)


[Insane]
- Approach Rate -1 (fixed)
- Overall Difficulty +1(fixed)


[(0 `-')~]
- Use slider tick rate 2 like other diffs ~
- Snap all timing points.

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
use distance snap to re-arrange your beats(fixed)
all beats seems to be in place then

Normal & Fantasi
THEY'RE PERFECT!YOU ARE GOOD BEATMAPPER AREN'T YOU? (Oh ,really ?! ,thx )

Fantasi 0_0
change slider tick rate to 2 (ok)
all beats seems to be in place then

that's all i can mod
thank you and i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!! (thanks ><)

happy623 wrote:

fb看到來略略看下ヽ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

以下是短Mod w
紅色是unrankable的,必須要改,其他也是建議w
General的也希望盡量改一下w
[General]
Remove 1 2 20 year months days short ver (有左佢osu 入面會易D搵歌..為方便,所以唔刪住)
背景圖的尺寸一定要是1024x768或800x600 (已修改)
BG圖可以再清晰點
一般來說clap應放在第2跟第4的白線上,不然不好聽,特別是Easy跟Normal diffw (已盡量修改)
建議在storyboarding那欄去掉Enable countdown 0v 0 (全難度已修改)
建議把slider再扭圓滑一點w (已盡量修改)
[Easy]
- Easy的diff請不要出現不跟snap的情況 (開ai mod排一下就好(?! (已修改一些不跟snap 的circle /slider)
- Slider Tick Rate建設去1 (已修改)
- 00:15:113(5) - 這個Slider可以扭好點 (已盡量修改)
- 00:52:396(1) - 這個spinner有點長,建議縮短下0 0 (easy 我覺得都係spinner 搶分,所以變成3條較短的spinner ,btw 已修改~)
[Normal]
- 00:25:693(8) - NC (已修改)
- 00:26:953(1) - Remove NC (一般來說也是白線nc) (已修改)
[(0 `-')~]
- 00:33:251(5) - 感覺slider可以再扭好點w (個diff 唔係我整的,所以我唔方便改-.-)
- 00:38:290(6) - NC (已修改)
- 00:52:397(2) - NC (已修改)
[Insane]
- 00:56:426(8) - NC (已修改)

Foreverends wrote:

Paul Chan gogogo :3

首先offset幾有問題=A=
頭嗰個紅線offset由2012改去1951
加多條紅線,offset係19143
再加多條紅線,offset係20600
再再再加多條紅線,offset係39250
每個diff都要加架 (offset 好多人都叫我點轉點轉 , 有時轉左一樣,另一mod 又見我轉番第2樣,有時都唔知點算好= =,所以先hold 住,有第2個叫轉先改)

仲有個tag全部删哂佢 (同happy623 ge 回應一樣,都係為我方便...)
因為歌名入tag係冇意思架 [/color]

Easy
00:01:951 (1,2,3,4) - 試下用兩條長slider代替呢度,easy黎講D slider擺得都幾密 0.0 試下錦樣 :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439833 (已局部性修改)
00:12:027 (3) - 扭得好怪 0.0 (我都知= =,所以盡量改左)
00:14:042 (4) - NC (已修改)
00:20:150 - kiai條timing放去呢度 (因為全難度統一,所以唔打算改)
00:19:143 (1) - NC (已修改)
00:19:647 (2) - del NC,個尾add clap (已修改)
00:20:600 (3) - add clap (已修改)
00:23:623 (2) - ^ (已修改)
00:27:653 (2) - ^ (已修改)
00:28:157 (3) - 個尾add clap (已修改)
00:30:676 (1) - add clap (已修改)
00:30:676 (1) - del NC (已修改)
00:33:195 (8) - NC (已修改)
00:31:684 (7) - 個頭同尾都add clap (已修改)
00:33:699 (9) - add clap (已修改)
00:34:203 (10,1,2) - add finish (已修改)
00:35:714 (3) - 個尾add clap (已修改)
00:52:349 (1) - 喺00:59:918 - 呢度停 (全難度統一結束時間,所以唔改了...)

我係只mod easy的廢柴XD
nice one呀Paul ;3
good luck for rank gogogo~ (thanks~)