-Bakari- wrote:

'ello~ m4m with Hinsvar :3 link for Hinsvar hello. OMG thanks Hinsvar >w<

since I hate TV Sizes and random-anime-songs this post is going to be short

[General]

1. I'd set AudioLeadIn: 1500 - don't make plaers wait too longokay
2. Instead of using S1005 you should try N45-55% sounds better, imofix
3. That clap hitsound is annoying and doesn't fits here :V try something like custom kick-hitsound (people use it a lot in some nightcore/trance/techno tracks) or try soft whistle?fix

fix all my diff :3
[Easy]

1. Not sure if it's because of bad samplesets or because of too loud volume - your hitsounds are unfitting, imo. Try to look for custom hitsounds or something like this.
2. This is your first map and it's ok to have random (and sometimes ugly, imo) sliders. But what if you'll try to be more reasonable? for example 00:29:630 (1) - here you can try something like this
3. I really think that using slider velocity changes at [Easy] is not acceptable (at least here, where it's possible to avoid it)! Slider changes are stressful for beginners.
4. Some of your sliders are overlapped. a bit. Not so big problem but I think that if you will try to avoid it - you'll get thee way better designed map
5. 00:10:726 (5) - did you forget new combo here? It feels wrong without NC here
6. 00:11:547 - don't you think that it's a bit weird to have start of vocals in the middle of slider?
7. 00:31:684 - missed beats like this one are confusing. They doesn't make map easier - they make rhythm hard to understand :<
8. 00:34:972 (3) - it's quite clear that this slider should ends at 00:36:205 - to follow vocals.
9. 00:48:945 (2) - just saying that this slider feels random herebecause 00:49:767 - is start of another part of vocals >.</
10. 00:55:109 (1,2) - sounds unfiting to me - try to replace it with this?
11. 01:02:917 - something that i call "black hole" because beat here is missed. So.. Put circle here to fix it :V
12. 01:13:602 (1) - silince end of the spinner (put s - 5% volume section before spinners end)

[Normal]

1. AR3 on Easy and AR4 on Normal? Don't you think that it's a bit unbalanced? Try AR5 here!
2. Your 1/1 notes are placed too far from each other. I think it's because slider velocity or distance Spacing is too big :V
3. 01:04:150 (5) - it's quite clear that 01:04:561 - there's start of new sllider. So.. replace this long-unfitting slider with one circle and 1/1 slider
4. And guess what? I don't like this slowdown \:D/ I think you can map this soong good enough without breaking flow/rhythm with slowdowns.
   
   It's not so bad. I like it. But the main problem for me is ugly (in my opinion) ugly shapes of sliders/patterns and atc. But rhythm here is good!

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good rhythm! Just make some patterns neater in your diffs and you'll get awesome map :3 thanks :3

I AM GANTENG o3o ganteng lol :v

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL]
u are so pro. <3 \:D/

1. 00:13:910 (4,1) - nazi- even with new combo - spacing here is hard to understant. Why don't you just follow same DS as you have in stream? why x0.1 lower? :O It's because the slider's velocity is changed starting from 00:14:013 (1), so the calculation for the spacing is... different.
2. 00:14:424 (2,3) - try to avoid overmap/overdose/overwhatever - convert it into 1/1 slider to give us some rest and folow vocals :O I don't really see anything wrong here, and I'm sure enough I've been following the vocal well here...
3. 00:16:479 (3,1) - NC swap to make jumps funnier and to follow vocals here? ;V I think it looks good Only added an NC on 00:16:479 (1); a swap isn't necessary, IMO.
4. 00:20:178 - you're trying to give us a good flow. but don't forget about consistent rhythm! missed circle here :< This is intentional; no worries.
5. 00:21:410 (1) - can't understand meaning of some new combos. for example here. It's Extra - you can jump wherever you want without any NC/Signs. It'll be a bit more interesting to play It's used to denote a new pattern. Can't really be helped, I guess... Also, this is still around Insane+, so yeah...

-Bakari- wrote:

I AM GANTENG o3o

- M i K u - wrote:

OMG thanks Hinsvar >w<

eLtigreXXx wrote:

HI ^^ mod Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1500
- [Hinsvar's WILL] : 2000
- [Normal] : 1500
- [syaoran's Insane] : 1500

Ah damn; that problem's from my side. Fixed.

[Hinsvar's WILL]
01:13:628 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:13:628 - snap to 01:13:602

These two things are intentional. The spinner starts 1/16 beats after 01:13:602 (5), and thus the green timing point is there.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

HI ^^ mod Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 1500
- [Hard] : 1500
- [Hinsvar's WILL] : 2000 hinsvar fix this :3
- [Normal] : 1500
- [syaoran's Insane] : 1500

[Normal]
00:55:520 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. sorry but i not changed this

:3 thank 4 modding >w<

yanlu wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL]

- in this diff..I think it has put too many nc in diff I don't think so. Some NCs are there to denote a new pattern.
00:00:863 (1) - remove NC Nope; we're on a new stanza. It feels really weird, seriously...
00:03:534 (1) - remove nc ^
00:04:561 (1) - ^ This is used to emphasize the start of a new pattern.
00:15:041 (1) - ^ ^
00:21:410 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:260 (1) - ^ ^
00:31:273 (1,2,3,4,1) - make it like this :3? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/499090 Nope; I'm okay with what I have now.
00:32:917 (2,3,4) - put other way, no overlap (5)>< Uh... I don't really think it needs to be. It's good as is.
00:46:068 (4,1) - don't overlap.. This one's intentional and I like it very much (:
00:52:438 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:53:465 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like you put it that way :<... I do, though; I think it fits with the atmosphere of the song.
00:58:397 (1,2,3,1,2) - strange.. I can't see anything wrong with this.
01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - unsnap D; What? They're snapped to the 1/4 ticks.

cirno- wrote:

Hinsvar's Will
This is pretty good. ikr
00:52:438 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Consider making a star pattern out of this ^_^ Nope; see my reply to yanlu's mod.

M4M

1. Raise volume 10% higher maybe?

1. CS3 still works properly imo
2. 00:14:013 - 00:19:767 - Soft sampleset should be better here. Those normal-hitwhistles are a bit annoying here ><
3. 00:20:589 (1) - Curve shape will works better, trust me
4. 00:27:164 (1) - Not symmetrical
5. 00:28:808 (2) - Spacing
6. 00:36:616 - Add note here and move the spinner to 00:37:027 -
7. 00:41:547 (1) - Don't... please, this is a bit dangerous on Easy. Just add circle on 00:41:958 -
8. 00:44:013 (4) - Remove finish?
9. 00:50:589 (5) - Not symmetrical.
10. 01:06:205 (3,4) - Merge into one slider?

1. 00:00:863 (1,2) - Blanket plz.
2. 00:02:506 (3) - Not symmetrical >< just use 3 points here and blanket 00:02:095 (2) -
3. 00:04:150 (1) - Not symmetrical either.
4. 00:30:863 (2) - Same here.
5. 00:42:369 (2) - e_e
6. 00:42:369 (2) - how about http://puu.sh/1wgZo?
7. 00:48:123 (1) - e__e
8. 01:11:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels hard on Normal, try simpler pattern please

1. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section! This is unrankable.
2. 00:26:753 (1) - Add finish on end?
3. 00:33:328 (1) - Try simpler curve here
4. 01:10:315 (1) - Curve plz ><

1. 00:01:337 - hi. AR -1 plz.
2. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section ! whyyyy
3. 00:07:849 (2,3) - Unstack plz.
4. 00:10:109 (3,4,5) - Misleading bro. Players might think that there's no (3) and suddenly hit (4) since they think it was placed like that.
5. 00:14:835 (3,1) - Unstack plz.
6. 00:16:479 (1,2) - i think it'll be better if http://puu.sh/1whbf
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - will be better if like http://puu.sh/1whe8 (streams)
8. 00:28:808 (7,8) - Unstack plzzz
9. 00:40:417 (1,2) - Remove these plz, feels unecessary
10. 01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a 1/8 kickstream here, hitsound is up to you

inverness wrote:

[Hinsw3w3w3w /o/]

1. 00:01:337 - hi. AR -1 plz. Nope; the map's pace is too fast for AR8.
2. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section ! whyyyy This is to follow the vocal. I'm sure enough it's rankable.
3. 00:07:849 (2,3) - Unstack plz. This plays really well, IMO. I think there's no need to change it.
4. 00:10:109 (3,4,5) - Misleading bro. Players might think that there's no (3) and suddenly hit (4) since they think it was placed like that. They won't. Don't worry.
5. 00:14:835 (3,1) - Unstack plz. Why?
6. 00:16:479 (1,2) - i think it'll be better if http://puu.sh/1whbf I'm okay with what I have now.
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - will be better if like http://puu.sh/1whe8 (streams) Did something similar.
8. 00:28:808 (7,8) - Unstack plzzz I don't see any reason to do that.
9. 00:40:417 (1,2) - Remove these plz, feels unecessary I'm sure enough they're necessary here.
10. 01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a 1/8 kickstream here, hitsound is up to you idk... I think using a short stream works better here.

inverness wrote:

M4M

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]

1. Raise volume 10% higher maybe? i think it's okay now with this volume

[Easy]

1. CS3 still works properly imo hmm okay
2. 00:14:013 - 00:19:767 - Soft sampleset should be better here. Those normal-hitwhistles are a bit annoying here >< fix
3. 00:20:589 (1) - Curve shape will works better, trust me okay
4. 00:27:164 (1) - Not symmetrical changed
5. 00:28:808 (2) - Spacing hueee gw gk teliti pas buat QwQ
6. 00:36:616 - Add note here and move the spinner to 00:37:027 - okay
7. 00:41:547 (1) - Don't... please, this is a bit dangerous on Easy. Just add circle on 00:41:958 - wokeh2
8. 00:44:013 (4) - Remove finish? fix
9. 00:50:589 (5) - Not symmetrical. fix
10. 01:06:205 (3,4) - Merge into one slider?

Well that's all. thanks

[Normal]

1. 00:00:863 (1,2) - Blanket plz.
2. 00:02:506 (3) - Not symmetrical >< just use 3 points here and blanket 00:02:095 (2) - hmm i not follow this but i changed because i got other idea, thanks
3. 00:04:150 (1) - Not symmetrical either. changed
4. 00:30:863 (2) - Same here. okay copas di 00:27:575 -
5. 00:42:369 (2) - e_e QwQ
6. 00:42:369 (2) - how about http://puu.sh/1wgZo? long slider, no QwQ . kyk nya salah tempat deh ness o3o mgkn maksudmu wkt yg 00:46:479 - ini <_<
7. 00:48:123 (1) - e__e >___>
8. 01:11:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels hard on Normal, try simpler pattern please okay

.w.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:657 (1) - Starts before downbeat and before red section! This is unrankable. | i agree with hinsvar's quote, it's just follow the vocal
2. 00:26:753 (1) - Add finish on end? hmm.. okay
3. 00:33:328 (1) - Try simpler curve here changed a little
4. 01:10:315 (1) - Curve plz >< okay

.w.)b

That's all Xinely. Good luck~ thank you so much for modding inverness >w<

1. The background of the map looks like too calm.. it gives like a relaxing feel. I think it doesn't fit with such a "energetic" and kinda fast song like this one. I suggest you to search for another background.
2. The combo colours you choosed are too dull and look bad with the background o.o well if you're going to change that ^ then try to find some better colours for your possible next bg. I'll not make u a pallette of colours to suggest you because you might change the bg :3
3. The timing sounds off specially in the kiai. Try to ask some pro timer to check it.
4. AIBat found some problems. Try to fix them asap.

1. 00:02:506 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. Try rotating this a tad like this to make the pattern look better:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:027 (3,4,1,2) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff imo. I think it would be better if you add a repeat to 00:05:794 (2). Perhaps leaving a empty space between 00:05:794 (2,1) is a good idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:945 (3) - I highly suggest you to remove the clap of this slider. Sounds too out of place imo. Also, this slider shape looks a bit bad :< could you do something better with it? Here's a idea for you of what would be good to do:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:589 (1) - ^ Same here, this curve looks bad :< please do better curves! with the new slider tool you just need to have 1 sliderpoint to make perfect shapes, so I suggset you to remove this slilder and re-do it more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:876 (1) - This clap at the end of this slider sounds too off. You don't use claps constantly so don't place few of them randomly like this. It doesn't sound nor feel right imo.
6. 00:27:164 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish at the start.
7. 00:29:630 (1) - Wrong spacing. o.o also, try imrpoving this shape more! The shape itself looks too.. random and out of place. I would rather remove it and add a curved slider instead to make it look fine with the rest of the map. Also, here's missing a hitfinish at the end!
8. 00:31:684 (3,4,5,1) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff. Try adding long sliders in easy diffs. Patterns like this one should be done in a Normal diff, not in a Easy one. I'll stop mentioning this problem, but please consider simplifying parts like this one with long sliders. The kiai is way too hard and has lots of consecutive notes so please consider remapping a bit parts like this one :< take this as an example!
9. 00:37:027 (1) - It is much better to end this spinner at 00:40:315. It at least follows something.. It ends just when the song gets like "more calm" before the kiai.
10. 00:54:698 (1) - You should remove this note, you didn't leave time for beginners to recorver their hands from spinning. Also, try to place the note after the spinner close to the spinners centre so it is more easy to click.
11. 01:08:260 (1) - Missing finish :< it would fit perfectly with the music.
12. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this green line to soft. The normal hitsound of the spinner sounds soooooo unfitting and loud lol~
    
    Well this is like a short, ehh.. resumed mod about this diff >< it really needs more mods! and a remap of some mentioned parts in the mod is very recommended :< (sorry Miku) because this plays completely like a Normal diff. Leaving this aside, this is a very good work compared to your other beatmap. You've improved a lot!

• 
  *This diff has lots of unsnapped sliders. Please fix them:
  
  SPOILER

  00:37:438 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:38:260 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:43:602 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:44:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:48:123 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:082 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:493 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:04:150 (1) - Veeery nazi~ move this sliders some grids to x:160 y:168 (where 00:02:095 (2) was). Stacking like this makes the map look more clean~ also, this curve looks a bit bad too, please improve it with the new sliders tool.
2. 00:09:493 (3) - Instead of placing this slider like this, I would rather recommend you to try this pattern out. I think it plays and looks much better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:726 (4) - Here's missing a hitfinish
4. 00:11:547 (1) - This sliders sounds odd with the repeat at a red tick. I suggest you to make it longer, to avoid that red tick. Make it larger till the repeat is at the white tick (00:12:369). Well if you do this you'll obviously have to add a note at 00:13:602 to fill up that space!
5. 00:14:013 - I recommend you to change the sample set of this green line to soft since this part is very calm and normal hitsounds sound too noisy. If you do this, consider adding another green line tochange the samples back to normal at 00:23:876.
6. 00:14:013 (1) - Too weird and unfitting slidershape. Consider making a blanket with it like this (changing the shape to a simple curved one):
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:16:479 (3) - This hitfinish is very.. unfitting. There's not a high/loud/emphasized sound so it doesn't make sense. It would be better if you remove it.
8. 00:21:410 (2) - This slider placement looks odd. I suggest you to move it a tad to the right. If possible to x:240 y:200 to make a blanket with the previous slider.
9. 00:23:876 (1) - Missing hitfinish here too
10. 00:31:685 (3) - Ctrl+J this slider and then rotate it a bit to make this pattern more like this. I think it looks and plays better:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:33:328 (1) - Another weird and unfitting slidershape. please consider what I've recommended u to do with this kind of sliders
12. 00:37:849 (2) - Uhmm this note doesn't make much sense imo. I think it would be better just to keep doing patterns like your previous ones by making 00:37:438 (1) end where (2) is and then delete (2). Same thing applies to 00:38:260 (2,3).
13. 00:41:547 (1) - Again.. no time for hand recovery. I recommend u to remove this slider and then add a circle at 00:41:958.
14. 00:48:123 (1) - Why is this slider end unsnapped? fix it~
15. 00:49:767 (4) - Missing finish at the end of this slider.
16. 00:51:821 (3) - ^
17. 00:53:465 (1) - ^
18. 00:55:520 (1) - No time for hand recovery again.. You should remove this slider to leave some time for it and then add a note at 00:55:931-. If you will keep this slider, add nc to it since this note follows a spinner.
19. 01:00:041 (6) - Missing finish
20. 01:04:972 (1) - ^
21. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this greenline to soft. Same stuff mentioned in your easy diff.
    
    Needs more work too. Try to consider what I told you about this diff too. It's very important imo.

1. 00:03:534 (5,6) - This flows badly, how about placing notes in a more intuitive way?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:04:561 (2) - More lazy slidershapes! please improve those in this difficulty too
3. 00:05:383 (3) - ^
4. 00:11:136 (1) - Another note placed in a non intuitive way.. please try to place it in a similar way mentioned about 00:03:534. Also, I suggest you to remove this nc and add it to the next slider to follow the vocals with it.
5. 00:16:068 (6,7) - These hitfinishes don't make sense since theres not a loud sound so would be better if you remove them.
   
   I'm sorry but I feel too lazy.. I mean, this difficulty has the exact same problems as your Easy and Normal. Lazy slidershapes, some messy patterns, unintuitive placement of notes.. Could you take a good look at what I've pointed above about your other 2 difficulties? I don't want to write walls of text about the same thing over and over again.. that's why. Just, try to consider everything I wrote about your other two diffs and if you agree, apply that to this diff too since it has the exactly same problems, okay? :3

• 
  *Why is this difficulty called like this? The editor doesn't even recognize the "/" symbol lol

1. 00:03:123 (4,5,6) - This spacing is too odd. I suggest you to place these notes with distance snap. Is that a.. small jump between them? it just plays and looks too odd, really :<
2. 00:10:931 (7) - I highly dislike this slider because it feels awkward to click because it's placed at a red tick. Since this isn't really necessary, I suggest you to replace it with notes or something else.
3. 00:11:342 (8) - Is this note not stacked properly in purpose? I would rather stack it correctly to the slider end to make your patterns look more clean.
4. 00:13:191 (8) - This slider has some extra repeats than it should have. I recommend you to remove some repeats, leaving just 3, and then add a note at 00:13:808.
5. 00:14:013 (1) - Here a loud sound in the song can be heard, so a hitfinish would fit perfectly.
6. 00:16:479 (3) - I would rather remove this whistle since you're following that silly sound of the instrumental with whistles, and here that sound cannot be heard.
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - This part feels very weird without a note at 00:20:178. Perhaps add a repeat to (2) to keep following the instrumental?
8. 00:27:986 (3,5) - This a very minor detail: these notes hitburst get overlapped with the hp bar. Consider moving them a tad down to avoid this.
9. 00:31:376 (3) - This clap sounds odd o.o why is it here? it doesn't seem to be even following something.. I think it sounds better if you remove it away
10. 00:34:356 (4) - If you were following the vocals in this pattern, keep following them, don't start following the instrumental like this all of a sudden :< I suggest you to shorten this slider to 00:34:458 and then add a note at 00:34:253.
11. 00:35:589 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:37:027 (1) - This spinner feels.. ehrm I don't know how to explain it. It skips a completely mappable part ._. I suggset you to map this part or add a note here and then move the spinner forward to 00:37:232.
13. 00:41:547 (3) - Another random and unfitting clap :< Consider what I've said about a similar case mentioned above.
14. 00:42:164 - Add a note here to keep following the music constantly like any Insane?
15. 00:52:130 (2) - Stack properly too :3?
16. 00:55:109 (1) - Missing hitfinish
17. 01:03:945 (6) - This pattern sounds too.. overcharged with claps. Consider removing this clap to make it sound less.. like this
18. 01:08:876 (4) - Missing hitfinish at the end
19. 01:13:602 (1) - Same thing about 00:37:027 (I suggset you to add a note here and then move the spinner forward to the next red tick).
    
    Nice job, interesting hitsounding, and rhythm. I like it. You just need to polish a bit more your difficulty to make it better!

• 
  *How about writting "WILL" without caps.. like "Will"?

1. 00:00:863 (1) - Unnecessary nc imo. Since the song starts here I don't see it so necessary.
2. 00:04:561 (1) - ^ o.o this combo is part of the same verse of the vocals so.. I suggest you to remove this combo too.
3. 01:09:801 (8) - This circle is kinda overmapping this part. I think this part sounds better if you remove it.
4. 01:13:628 (1) - This spiner stars way too soon after 01:13:602 (5). There's no need to do this. I suggest you to move it to the next red tick OR if you really want to keep it close, then use the blue tick.
5. 01:18:945 - Consider decreasing the volume of this section a bit. The soft hit of the spinner sounds kinda loud.
   
   No problems with this difficulty. I love it awesome job! I don't understand most of your short combos of 2, that's the only thing I disliked. I don't like very much short combos in Insane difficulties.

Kei wrote:

[General]

1. AIBat found some problems. Try to fix them asap. That's caused by me. This happens often if I'm making a GD because... Uh... I'm a weird guy, if you could say it like that *cough* Fixed by myself... Eh, I don't really know... w/e.

[Hin/Ely's Insane]

1. 00:14:013 (1) - Here a loud sound in the song can be heard, so a hitfinish would fit perfectly. Done.
2. 00:16:479 (3) - I would rather remove this whistle since you're following that silly sound of the instrumental with whistles, and here that sound cannot be heard. ^
3. 00:19:972 (2,3) - This part feels very weird without a note at 00:20:178. Perhaps add a repeat to (2) to keep following the instrumental? Fine.
4. 00:42:164 - Add a note here to keep following the music constantly like any Insane? Fine.
5. 00:52:130 (2) - Stack properly too :3? I can't see anything wrong with that...

[Hinsvar's WILL]

• 
  *How about writting "WILL" without caps.. like "Will"? It's a part of my personality... Kind of. Nope, won't change it.

1. 00:00:863 (1) - Unnecessary nc imo. Since the song starts here I don't see it so necessary. ...Okay then.
2. 00:04:561 (1) - ^ o.o this combo is part of the same verse of the vocals so.. I suggest you to remove this combo too. ^
3. 01:09:801 (8) - This circle is kinda overmapping this part. I think this part sounds better if you remove it. Huh? I think it goes well with the vocal, so I'll keep it for now.
4. 01:13:628 (1) - This spiner stars way too soon after 01:13:602 (5). There's no need to do this. I suggest you to move it to the next red tick OR if you really want to keep it close, then use the blue tick. Fine, I guess. Changed.
5. 01:18:945 - Consider decreasing the volume of this section a bit. The soft hit of the spinner sounds kinda loud. Wait... 80%? Oh dang it... Okay, 5%'d.
   
   No problems with this difficulty. I love it awesome job! I don't understand most of your short combos of 2, that's the only thing I disliked. I don't like very much short combos in Insane difficulties. About those short combos, I sometimes place NCs to denote a new pattern, so yeah...

Kei wrote:

[General]

1. The background of the map looks like too calm.. it gives like a relaxing feel. I think it doesn't fit with such a "energetic" and kinda fast song like this one. I suggest you to search for another background.
2. The combo colours you choosed are too dull and look bad with the background o.o well if you're going to change that ^ then try to find some better colours for your possible next bg. I'll not make u a pallette of colours to suggest you because you might change the bg :3
3. The timing sounds off specially in the kiai. Try to ask some pro timer to check it.
4. AIBat found some problems. Try to fix them asap.

[Easy]

1. 00:02:506 (2) - Kinda nazi lol. Try rotating this a tad like this to make the pattern look better:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:027 (3,4,1,2) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff imo. I think it would be better if you add a repeat to 00:05:794 (2). Perhaps leaving a empty space between 00:05:794 (2,1) is a good idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:945 (3) - I highly suggest you to remove the clap of this slider. Sounds too out of place imo. Also, this slider shape looks a bit bad :< could you do something better with it? Here's a idea for you of what would be good to do:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:589 (1) - ^ Same here, this curve looks bad :< please do better curves! with the new slider tool you just need to have 1 sliderpoint to make perfect shapes, so I suggset you to remove this slilder and re-do it more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:876 (1) - This clap at the end of this slider sounds too off. You don't use claps constantly so don't place few of them randomly like this. It doesn't sound nor feel right imo.
6. 00:27:164 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish at the start.
7. 00:29:630 (1) - Wrong spacing. o.o also, try imrpoving this shape more! The shape itself looks too.. random and out of place. I would rather remove it and add a curved slider instead to make it look fine with the rest of the map. Also, here's missing a hitfinish at the end!
8. 00:31:684 (3,4,5,1) - Too many consecutive notes for a Easy diff. Try adding long sliders in easy diffs. Patterns like this one should be done in a Normal diff, not in a Easy one. I'll stop mentioning this problem, but please consider simplifying parts like this one with long sliders. The kiai is way too hard and has lots of consecutive notes so please consider remapping a bit parts like this one :< take this as an example!
9. 00:37:027 (1) - It is much better to end this spinner at 00:40:315. It at least follows something.. It ends just when the song gets like "more calm" before the kiai.
10. 00:54:698 (1) - You should remove this note, you didn't leave time for beginners to recorver their hands from spinning. Also, try to place the note after the spinner close to the spinners centre so it is more easy to click.
11. 01:08:260 (1) - Missing finish :< it would fit perfectly with the music.
12. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this green line to soft. The normal hitsound of the spinner sounds soooooo unfitting and loud lol~
    
    Well this is like a short, ehh.. resumed mod about this diff >< it really needs more mods! and a remap of some mentioned parts in the mod is very recommended :< (sorry Miku) because this plays completely like a Normal diff. Leaving this aside, this is a very good work compared to your other beatmap. You've improved a lot!

[Normal]

• 
  *This diff has lots of unsnapped sliders. Please fix them:
  
  SPOILER

  00:37:438 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:38:260 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:43:602 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:44:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  00:48:123 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:082 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  01:09:493 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:04:150 (1) - Veeery nazi~ move this sliders some grids to x:160 y:168 (where 00:02:095 (2) was). Stacking like this makes the map look more clean~ also, this curve looks a bit bad too, please improve it with the new sliders tool.
2. 00:09:493 (3) - Instead of placing this slider like this, I would rather recommend you to try this pattern out. I think it plays and looks much better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:726 (4) - Here's missing a hitfinish
4. 00:11:547 (1) - This sliders sounds odd with the repeat at a red tick. I suggest you to make it longer, to avoid that red tick. Make it larger till the repeat is at the white tick (00:12:369). Well if you do this you'll obviously have to add a note at 00:13:602 to fill up that space!
5. 00:14:013 - I recommend you to change the sample set of this green line to soft since this part is very calm and normal hitsounds sound too noisy. If you do this, consider adding another green line tochange the samples back to normal at 00:23:876.
6. 00:14:013 (1) - Too weird and unfitting slidershape. Consider making a blanket with it like this (changing the shape to a simple curved one):
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:16:479 (3) - This hitfinish is very.. unfitting. There's not a high/loud/emphasized sound so it doesn't make sense. It would be better if you remove it.
8. 00:21:410 (2) - This slider placement looks odd. I suggest you to move it a tad to the right. If possible to x:240 y:200 to make a blanket with the previous slider.
9. 00:23:876 (1) - Missing hitfinish here too
10. 00:31:685 (3) - Ctrl+J this slider and then rotate it a bit to make this pattern more like this. I think it looks and plays better:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:33:328 (1) - Another weird and unfitting slidershape. please consider what I've recommended u to do with this kind of sliders
12. 00:37:849 (2) - Uhmm this note doesn't make much sense imo. I think it would be better just to keep doing patterns like your previous ones by making 00:37:438 (1) end where (2) is and then delete (2). Same thing applies to 00:38:260 (2,3).
13. 00:41:547 (1) - Again.. no time for hand recovery. I recommend u to remove this slider and then add a circle at 00:41:958.
14. 00:48:123 (1) - Why is this slider end unsnapped? fix it~
15. 00:49:767 (4) - Missing finish at the end of this slider.
16. 00:51:821 (3) - ^
17. 00:53:465 (1) - ^
18. 00:55:520 (1) - No time for hand recovery again.. You should remove this slider to leave some time for it and then add a note at 00:55:931-. If you will keep this slider, add nc to it since this note follows a spinner.
19. 01:00:041 (6) - Missing finish
20. 01:04:972 (1) - ^
21. 01:18:123 - Change the sampleset of this greenline to soft. Same stuff mentioned in your easy diff.
    
    Needs more work too. Try to consider what I told you about this diff too. It's very important imo.

[Hard]

1. 00:03:534 (5,6) - This flows badly, how about placing notes in a more intuitive way?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:04:561 (2) - More lazy slidershapes! please improve those in this difficulty too
3. 00:05:383 (3) - ^
4. 00:11:136 (1) - Another note placed in a non intuitive way.. please try to place it in a similar way mentioned about 00:03:534. Also, I suggest you to remove this nc and add it to the next slider to follow the vocals with it.
5. 00:16:068 (6,7) - These hitfinishes don't make sense since theres not a loud sound so would be better if you remove them.
   
   I'm sorry but I feel too lazy.. I mean, this difficulty has the exact same problems as your Easy and Normal. Lazy slidershapes, some messy patterns, unintuitive placement of notes.. Could you take a good look at what I've pointed above about your other 2 difficulties? I don't want to write walls of text about the same thing over and over again.. that's why. Just, try to consider everything I wrote about your other two diffs and if you agree, apply that to this diff too since it has the exactly same problems, okay? :3

[Hin/Ely's Insane]

• 
  *Why is this difficulty called like this? The editor doesn't even recognize the "/" symbol lol

1. 00:03:123 (4,5,6) - This spacing is too odd. I suggest you to place these notes with distance snap. Is that a.. small jump between them? it just plays and looks too odd, really :<
2. 00:10:931 (7) - I highly dislike this slider because it feels awkward to click because it's placed at a red tick. Since this isn't really necessary, I suggest you to replace it with notes or something else.
3. 00:11:342 (8) - Is this note not stacked properly in purpose? I would rather stack it correctly to the slider end to make your patterns look more clean.
4. 00:13:191 (8) - This slider has some extra repeats than it should have. I recommend you to remove some repeats, leaving just 3, and then add a note at 00:13:808.
5. 00:14:013 (1) - Here a loud sound in the song can be heard, so a hitfinish would fit perfectly.
6. 00:16:479 (3) - I would rather remove this whistle since you're following that silly sound of the instrumental with whistles, and here that sound cannot be heard.
7. 00:19:972 (2,3) - This part feels very weird without a note at 00:20:178. Perhaps add a repeat to (2) to keep following the instrumental?
8. 00:27:986 (3,5) - This a very minor detail: these notes hitburst get overlapped with the hp bar. Consider moving them a tad down to avoid this.
9. 00:31:376 (3) - This clap sounds odd o.o why is it here? it doesn't seem to be even following something.. I think it sounds better if you remove it away
10. 00:34:356 (4) - If you were following the vocals in this pattern, keep following them, don't start following the instrumental like this all of a sudden :< I suggest you to shorten this slider to 00:34:458 and then add a note at 00:34:253.
11. 00:35:589 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:37:027 (1) - This spinner feels.. ehrm I don't know how to explain it. It skips a completely mappable part ._. I suggset you to map this part or add a note here and then move the spinner forward to 00:37:232.
13. 00:41:547 (3) - Another random and unfitting clap :< Consider what I've said about a similar case mentioned above.
14. 00:42:164 - Add a note here to keep following the music constantly like any Insane?
15. 00:52:130 (2) - Stack properly too :3?
16. 00:55:109 (1) - Missing hitfinish
17. 01:03:945 (6) - This pattern sounds too.. overcharged with claps. Consider removing this clap to make it sound less.. like this
18. 01:08:876 (4) - Missing hitfinish at the end
19. 01:13:602 (1) - Same thing about 00:37:027 (I suggset you to add a note here and then move the spinner forward to the next red tick).
    
    Nice job, interesting hitsounding, and rhythm. I like it. You just need to polish a bit more your difficulty to make it better!

Good map overall. Just like -Bakari- said: try to make your map more clean visually and you'll end up with an awesome map! good luck!
If you really want to talk with me about the Hard diff catch me ingame and I'll be glad to talk with you about it

• 
  00:09:493 I would see a 4 beat long slider working very nicely right here instead of what you currently have.
  00:22:232 (2) You could change this to a 4 beat long slider instead of a lot of emptiness.
  00:29:630 (1) I think a 1 beat slider with a repeat would work better here.

• 
  00:16:890 (1) This slider doesn't flow well with the rhythm since it is too long. I suggest that you shorten it to a beat long and then add a circle before/after.
  00:33:328 (1) Maybe its just me, but this doesn't look very nice.
  00:34:972 (3) This doesn't match the pattern of (1,2) and doesn't really sound good in the first place.. You should shorten it to 3 beats and add a circle afterwards to keep symmetrical rhythms.
  00:37:849 (3,4) To me, it would sound better if 3 was a slider and 4 was a circle.
  00:39:493 (1) This spinner is starting too early and doesn't flow well. You should start it at 00:40:315 and then make arrangements from there.
  00:46:479 (5) I suggest that you shorten this to a beat and then add a circle afterwards. A long slider like this (especially when followed by short sliders) just breaks the flow of the rhythm.
  00:55:520 I know there's supposed to be nothing here because of the spinner but it just seems awkward to me.

• 
  00:03:945 Missing circle here?
  00:22:849 (6,7) Kind of nazi, but these aren't exactly on the same x-axis as 5.
  00:24:904 Missing circle?
  00:43:602 (3,4,5) This triplet seems randomly thrown in. I think you could take 4 out and then respace them.
  00:56:945 There seems to be a missing circle here.
  01:06:616 (1,2,3) Just my opinion, but I think these look kind of bad while stacked.
  01:10:109 Missing circle.
  01:13:191 (1) It feels like the spinner should start at the next white tick instead.

• 
  00:37:232 (1) I think the spinner is just too weird here. It takes up a lot of time that could be spent wisely. You could start the slider where you started it in other difficulties.
  00:56:136 (5) This slider would sound better if it was cut in half.
  01:07:027 (1,2) These are too close together. It may confuse the player that the endpoint (of 1) is apart of the stream.
  01:13:808 (1) Your slider end sound is too loud because you don't have the same timing points as Hinsvar's WILL (that's where I remember it from). Its probably because its a Collab, but I'm not sure.

• 
  00:26:753 (1,2,3,4) This zigzag in the stream just look weird. You should just make it straight.
  01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm just wondering why this is so spaced out.

SpinsAlot wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL:]

• 
  00:26:753 (1,2,3,4) This zigzag in the stream just look weird. You should just make it straight. I'm just trying to make something different. Is there anything wrong with it?
  01:13:191 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm just wondering why this is so spaced out. I personally think this kind of short stream fits really well with the song, so I'll keep this.

SpinsAlot wrote:

[Easy:]

• 
  00:09:493 I would see a 4 beat long slider working very nicely right here instead of what you currently have. nope ><
  00:22:232 (2) You could change this to a 4 beat long slider instead of a lot of emptiness. hmm i guess no
  00:29:630 (1) I think a 1 beat slider with a repeat would work better here. fix

[Normal:]

• 
  00:16:890 (1) This slider doesn't flow well with the rhythm since it is too long. I suggest that you shorten it to a beat long and then add a circle before/after. i think not really
  00:33:328 (1) Maybe its just me, but this doesn't look very nice. i will keep this i think
  00:34:972 (3) This doesn't match the pattern of (1,2) and doesn't really sound good in the first place.. You should shorten it to 3 beats and add a circle afterwards to keep symmetrical rhythms.hmm i guess so, fix
  00:37:849 (3,4) To me, it would sound better if 3 was a slider and 4 was a circle.i guess so
  00:39:493 (1) This spinner is starting too early and doesn't flow well. You should start it at 00:40:315 and then make arrangements from there.i will keep this now =w=
  00:46:479 (5) I suggest that you shorten this to a beat and then add a circle afterwards. A long slider like this (especially when followed by short sliders) just breaks the flow of the rhythm. i will keep this now
  00:55:520 I know there's supposed to be nothing here because of the spinner but it just seems awkward to me.i think no, more awkward without note imo

[Hard:]

• 
  00:03:945 Missing circle here? i think no
  00:22:849 (6,7) Kind of nazi, but these aren't exactly on the same x-axis as 5.o3o
  00:24:904 Missing circle? same as 00:03:945
  00:43:602 (3,4,5) This triplet seems randomly thrown in. I think you could take 4 out and then respace them. i will keep this now
  00:56:945 There seems to be a missing circle here. i just follow the vocal
  01:06:616 (1,2,3) Just my opinion, but I think these look kind of bad while stacked. hmm i will keep this
  01:10:109 Missing circle. same as 00:03:945
  01:13:191 (1) It feels like the spinner should start at the next white tick instead. fix

[Collab:]

• 
  00:37:232 (1) I think the spinner is just too weird here. It takes up a lot of time that could be spent wisely. You could start the slider where you started it in other difficulties. okay
  00:56:136 (5) This slider would sound better if it was cut in half. not changed sorry
  01:07:027 (1,2) These are too close together. It may confuse the player that the endpoint (of 1) is apart of the stream.same DS as before note
  01:13:808 (1) Your slider end sound is too loud because you don't have the same timing points as Hinsvar's WILL (that's where I remember it from). Its probably because its a Collab, but I'm not sure. hmm okay changed

Starred. Hope this gets bubbled soon. thank you (:

Kotone wrote:

Hi,From #modreq
[Easy]
00:14:013 - 00:27:061 - Normal hitsounds are too strong here,I hope you can change it to soft.Same for Normal and Hard fix
00:10:726 (1) - I heard a finish in BGM,add it? fix
00:20:589 (1) - ^ fix
00:33:328 (1) - http://puu.sh/1Asft It just sounds better.If you want to change this,please add a finish at(2) i think i will keep long slider
00:46:479 (3) - Maybe make it more curved?It'll looks better IMO fix
00:49:767 (3,4,5) - A little bit ugly,Maybe make it to be square~? fix but not square
00:55:109 (1) - I heard a finish in BGM~ fix
01:01:273 (1) - ^same,at the end of slider fix
01:03:328 (4) - finish at the start fix

[Normal]
00:11:547 (1) - Add finish at the reverse point
00:20:589 (1) - Add finish at the start point
00:14:013 (1,2,3,1) - Make it more neat~ http://puu.sh/1Asns
00:41:958 (1,2,3) - A little spacing.Please use same spacing of them.
00:57:986 (1) - Add finish at the end point
01:13:191 (1) - Start the spinner at 01:13:602 - ,and add a circle here sounds better.And please end the spinner at 01:18:945 - as other diff.
fix all :3

[Hard]
00:04:150 (1) - Add finish fix
00:09:082 (3) - ^ ^
00:26:753 (4) - Remove NC and add NC on the next notecfix
00:31:273 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1AsF2 Just suggestion.Sounds better for me hmm nice idea, fix
00:35:999 - Why dont add a note here?Since you had a note at 00:34:356 (2) - ops i forgot. fix
00:39:287 - Maybe Add a note here? hmm not bad but i want to keep this
01:18:123 - Change to soft hitsounds set. fix

In these 3 diff ,Some hitsounds are different(eg.:00:04:150 (1) - finish in Easy;Whistle in Normal;clap in Hard)
Please make them similar.

[Collab]
00:10:726 (6) - I cant read this...00:10:726 (6,7) - They just like 00:10:315 (4,5) - ,please try to make it more easy to read fix
00:27:164 (1) - Add finish at the start point fix
00:30:452 (3) - ^ ^
00:34:972 (1) - Add finish at the end point.I can hear it in BGM cleanly okay

good luck thanks (:

Kotone wrote:

[Hinsvar's WILL]
00:04:561 (3) - This NC is useless.Please remove it. Swapped with 00:04:767 (2) instead.
00:06:616 (1,1,1) - Same.I cant see any reason to add NC on them. Because their spacing is different, and I think it's okay...
00:11:547 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
00:25:315 (1) - ^ Okay.
00:46:890 (1) - ^ The slider's speed changes there...
00:51:821 (1) - ^ Nope, this one's a pattern-based combo placement.
00:58:397 (1) - ^ Same as 00:46:890 (1).

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Collab]
00:22:027 (2) - no whistle on slider end? (i see you used the drum whistle, but i still think soft whistle fits better) Okay, used soft.
00:24:904 (3,4,5) - this stacking before and after makes it very confusing to read, please take 00:25:520 (5) out of stack Did things around here...

[Hinsvar's WILL]
gg hitsounds \o/
00:04:561 (1) - take off NC See my response to Kotone's mod.
00:19:972 (2) - reverse selection on this flows better Hmm, idk... I think this looks good, though.
00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - this setup flows better imo:

SPOILER

00:33:328 (5) - i would unstack this with the triplet, really tempted to hit early and break combo when they are in stack I still think this is fine in my eyes; will look for more opinions on this, I guess...
00:43:191 (2) - stack this on the start of 00:41:547 (8)? Nope; I'm okay with what I have now.
01:02:815 (2) - reverse selection ^

jonathanlfj wrote:

modding as requested~
accel world i want second season naoo

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
all good

[Easy]
hmm only this diff has stack leniency 6...change it to 7? (if you'd like to)
00:02:506 (2) - i think the whistle sounds better on the slider end
00:07:438 - add a note here, newbies will be really tempted to hit on a down beat like this
00:23:876 (1) - whistle on slider end
00:31:273 (4) - NC (or on 00:29:630 (3))
00:50:589 (5) - this slider looks kinda distorted compared to others, can you make it smoother?
00:58:397 (1) - whistle on slider head
01:09:904 (4) - try to center this and make it symmetrical?

SPOILER

96,224,69904,2,0,P|256:122|416:224,2,400

01:18:123 - make this timing section 10% or 5% in volume to mute the ending sound of the slider

[Normal]
00:05:794 (3) - take whistle off slider body if it wasnt intentional
00:07:438 (6) - NC should be on this note
00:10:726 (4) - ^ and stacks are evil in normal, if you would please bring it out of stack
00:23:054 (4) - three whistles sound too noisy, take off the one in the middle
00:35:383 (4) - this is touching the hp bar, please move it down
01:00:452 (7,8) - change this into 3 notes or a repeat slider, the current setup is too tricky for a normal imo (and its the only one)
01:04:150 (5) - add whistle to slider head sounds nice
01:10:315 (1) - whistle off slider body
01:11:136 (2) - i would move this down as well, looks kinda dangerous
01:18:123 - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:08:465 (2) - the vocal actually starts at 00:08:568, so i recommend this setup:

SPOILER

00:07:849 (1,2,3)

00:09:493 (1,2,3) - same setup as above i will keep this
00:23:054 (7) - the finish sounds random, consider taking it off
00:37:335 (2) - take the whistle off this and put it on 00:37:643 (3,4) sounds better
00:40:315 (2) - whistle off slider body
00:43:602 (3,4,5) - random triplet, i recommend just use regular rhythm here
01:00:452 (7) - add whistle
01:09:082 (2) - this is not stacked properly with the tail of 01:08:260 (1)
01:18:123 - same as Easy

[Collab]
00:11:136 (7) - move this to 00:11:034, right now it is too confusing to play since the stack before had rhythm in 1/4
00:11:239 - ...and you can add a note here stacked with 00:11:342 (8) for consistency
00:22:027 (2) - no whistle on slider end? (i see you used the drum whistle, but i still think soft whistle fits better)
00:24:904 (3,4,5) - this stacking before and after makes it very confusing to read, please take 00:25:520 (5) out of stack
00:27:164 (1) - the normal sampleset works better from this point imo, and please add finish to the slider head
00:37:027 - add a note here for the heavy downbeat
00:55:931 (4) - add whistle here and remove on 00:56:136 (5)
01:01:273 (1) - add a repeat on this repeat slider to make flow onto the next slider better
01:07:027 (1,2) - the spacing here is wayy to confusing, you should move the whole stream lower to indicate that its 1/2 break in the middle
01:17:917 - 10% or 5% volume
fix all :3

Great mapset, good luck on ranking ^_^ thanks (:

1. I really like to see more tags in my opinion

• - 00:07:438 (3) - New combo on the downbeat, also remove here 00:07:849

• - 00:09:493 (2,3,4) - I really expect to see a pattern like this

• - 00:46:068 (4) - Make this slider like (6) to keep the symetry
  - 01:11:547 (5) - New combo to follow your combo pattern

• -- Claps sounds a little annoying in my opinion the question is why you put a soft-hitsounds in this part 00:26:342?

• -- Lol'd, craazy

MoodyRPG wrote:

Oh hi. hi :3

General

1. I really like to see more tags in my opinion just add collab in tag because this map have collab diff o3o

Easy

• - 00:07:438 (3) - New combo on the downbeat, also remove here 00:07:849 okay

Normal

• - 00:09:493 (2,3,4) - I really expect to see a pattern like this hmmm okay

Hard

• - 00:46:068 (4) - Make this slider like (6) to keep the symetry fix
  - 01:11:547 (5) - New combo to follow your combo pattern fix

Collab

• -- Claps sounds a little annoying in my opinion the question is why you put a soft-hitsounds in this part 00:26:342? fix

Hinsvar's WILL

• -- Lol'd, craazy ikr lol

Good luck

blackabyss wrote:

Hi xinelyaan~ Special Mod for you eee
thanks for Mod my maps too o// urwelcome \o\

[Easy]

00:05:383 - coba taruh note? seharusnya sih bisa tp gk ada placement yg tepat orz
00:16:890 (1) - di ekor lebih baik whistle di ganti dengan clap fix
00:18:945 (3) - hanya kepalanya yang diganti dengan clap. terdengar lebih halus, imo. ok
00:26:342 (4) - NC ngikutin stanza doang
00:27:164 (1) - hapus NC same ^
00:32:917 (3) - ganti dengan whistle fix
00:34:972 (2) - clap di kepala dan whistle di ekor fix
00:35:794 (3) - tambahkan clap di sini fix
00:36:205 (4) - whistle di kepala, dan di ekor ditambah clap fix
00:41:958 - kalo mau sih yang bagian ini volume-nya jadi 55% terus yang bagian ini 00:44:424 jadi 60% abis agak keras imo. kiai time itu bagian epic.. harus kesar dan semangat \o/, hinsvar aja 75% lho o3o
00:59:630 - coba taruh note? ok

[Normal]

00:09:082 (3) - lebih baik diganti sama whistle
00:11:547 (2) - tambah whistle di reverse slider?
00:16:479 (3) - tambah whistle?
00:18:123 (2, 4) - ^
00:19:767 (6) - pada kepala slider clap diganti dengan whistle
00:21:410 (2) - tambah whistle di kepala
00:32:917 (4) - tambah whistle?
00:32:917 (1) - imo, sebaiknya ga usah pake whistle di kepala sliders ini
00:34:561 (2) - whistle?
00:41:136 - coba tambah finish di spinner ini
00:43:602 (4) - whistle?
00:46:068 (4) - ^
00:48:534 (1) - di kepala tambah finish
00:49:767 (3) - di kepala coba tambahkan whistle
00:53:465 - buat spinner yang berhaenti di sini 00:54:698
00:55:109 - yang ini di isi slider aja kaya gini : http://puu.sh/1Cj63 jadi pada kepala slider (1) dikasih whistle dan ekor-nya diberi clap
01:02:917 (3) - di kepala slider coba beri whistle

fix some
imo, pattern & rythm udah bagus, tapi untuk hitsounds harus diperbaiki lagi. sebenernya hitsounds juga ada pattern-nya lho ;3

[Hard]

00:02:712 (3) - di kepala ganti clap dengan whistle?
00:09:493 (1) - tambah whistle di kepala slider?
00:22:027 (4) - tambah clap?
00:24:287 (3) - di kepala tambah whistle?
00:32:095 (3) - whistle?
00:42:369 (2) - hapus NC
00:52:027 - beri note, dan bisa di stack di kepala slider ini 00:52:643
00:54:082 (4) - bagian yang ini ekren <3
01:00:246 - taruh note
01:07:232 - ^

fix some~

[Collab]
Xinely : semua part hinsvar , oke saya mewakili jawaban respon dari dia
00:16:068 (2,3) - di tiap kepala slider diberi whistle cuma slider ke 3
00:16:890 (4) - NC nope, ikutin stanza
00:17:301 (1) - hapus NC ^
00:19:356 (2) - beri whistle di kepala nope too
00:41:958 - coba volume Kiai-nya turunin ke 65%, abis kalo 75% suara clap-nya kaya ledakan. imo :'3 nope >___<

gogo rank~

P.S: maaf ya kalo mod-nya panjang dan ga guna :"D[/color] gk jg kok :3

Usui Kazuyoshi wrote:

numpang lewat tukang mod abal >_<

Easy

00:42:369 (2) - coba di pendekin 4 tick hmmm i just want keep long slider because easy diff
00:43:191 - coba masukin slider dari sini sampai 00:43:602 - terus note nomor 3 di hapus di ganti sama itu tuh nope >_<
01:18:123 - offset nya? napa bung? o.o
01:18:554 - offset nya? ^


Normal

00:10:726 - Circle di ganti slider mungkin, kan si KOTOKO ngomong "sky" nya panjang klo di gnt rasanya gk pas orz
00:48:123 - nambah 1 circle disini mungkin, soalnya kan situ ngikutin vokal sama dgn 00:41:547 - . ngikutin stanza
00:55:520 - slider dari sini sampai 00:55:931 - kayanya lebih bagus dari circle di 00:55:931 - iee no >_<
01:10:315 - sama slider 01:11:136 - lebih greget di gabung, reverse 1x still keep that u doing now
01:18:123 - offset? =3=
01:18:524 - offset? =w=

Hard

00:04:356 - Mungkin nambah 1 circle disini biar agak greget become insane imo >___<
00:05:178 - Dan disini juga nambah circle biar greget ^
00:43:602 - Beat ke 4 sama 5 kalo bisa ngak nempel gitu biar greget tambah susah kyk insane mas =___=
00:43:808 - Menurut saya sih 6 & 7 enak nya pake slider biar greget, soalnya timing nya agak jauh, kalo ga sabaran yang main mungkin bisa miss nope >__<
buat collab sama hinsvar's will gak bisa mod nya, ngak ngerti yang cepet" XD o3o

I hope this beatmap will more greget and be a ranked map

Xinely wrote:

Usui Kazuyoshi wrote:

numpang lewat tukang mod abal >_<

Easy

00:42:369 (2) - coba di pendekin 4 tick hmmm i just want keep long slider because easy diff
00:43:191 - coba masukin slider dari sini sampai 00:43:602 - terus note nomor 3 di hapus di ganti sama itu tuh nope >_<
01:18:123 - offset nya? napa bung? o.o
01:18:554 - offset nya? ^


Normal

00:10:726 - Circle di ganti slider mungkin, kan si KOTOKO ngomong "sky" nya panjang klo di gnt rasanya gk pas orz
00:48:123 - nambah 1 circle disini mungkin, soalnya kan situ ngikutin vokal sama dgn 00:41:547 - . ngikutin stanza
00:55:520 - slider dari sini sampai 00:55:931 - kayanya lebih bagus dari circle di 00:55:931 - iee no >_<
01:10:315 - sama slider 01:11:136 - lebih greget di gabung, reverse 1x still keep that u doing now
01:18:123 - offset? =3=
01:18:524 - offset? =w=

Hard

00:04:356 - Mungkin nambah 1 circle disini biar agak greget become insane imo >___<
00:05:178 - Dan disini juga nambah circle biar greget ^
00:43:602 - Beat ke 4 sama 5 kalo bisa ngak nempel gitu biar greget tambah susah kyk insane mas =___= biar keliatan ._. a little stream bro XD /plak
00:43:808 - Menurut saya sih 6 & 7 enak nya pake slider biar greget, soalnya timing nya agak jauh, kalo ga sabaran yang main mungkin bisa miss nope >__<
buat collab sama hinsvar's will gak bisa mod nya, ngak ngerti yang cepet" XD o3o

I hope this beatmap will more greget and be a ranked map

anyways thx 4 modding

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

SPOILER

Easy
Fine~

Normal
01:01:273 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1Do69 flows better fix

Hard
00:09:493 (1) - add whistle on end fix
00:43:602 (4,5,6) - oh.. stack each other plz fix
01:01:684 (3) - add whistle but delete here fix
01:13:191 (4) - maybe NC? fix

Collab
00:11:239 (8,9) - stack with 00:11:136 (7) - this? i think not now >_<
00:25:058 (4) - i think this is not good idea plz deletet this add 1/4 slider with 1 repeat 00:25:109 (4) - here
00:27:164 ~ 00:37:027 there are so many missed claps ;( plz adding them added
00:36:821 (9) - add finish on end fix
00:53:465 (1) - finish
01:13:191 (7) - NC fix

Good luck for rank!! xD thank you

HelloSCV wrote:

Hinsvar's WILL
00:20:178 (1) - add clap? and delte NC Added clap, but kept the NC to denote the jump.
00:54:698 (5) - NC Why?
01:00:862 (4) - add clap on start Done.
01:11:136 (3) - NC For what?
01:11:547 (1) - delete NC ^