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Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
路过233
每次看到标题都想到膝盖
SPOILER
[L4D's Nee]
00:45:806 (7,1) - 这两个要不拉开点吧 我一直想松开7就直接按上1。。
01:26:822 (5) - NC?
01:46:158 Kiai忘结束了。。

[Weiren's Ass]
这尼玛太销魂了（拍桌
我喜欢

01:18:619 (9) - NC个?

ASS♂WE♂CAN！

你看我就说我不会mod 233

Edit: 帕秋莉是Patchouli吧
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Irie Miyuki wrote:

路过233
每次看到标题都想到膝盖
SPOILER
[L4D's Nee]
00:45:806 (7,1) - 这两个要不拉开点吧 我一直想松开7就直接按上1。。
01:26:822 (5) - NC?
01:46:158 Kiai忘结束了。。

[Weiren's Ass]
这尼玛太销魂了（拍桌
我喜欢

01:18:619 (9) - NC个?

ASS♂WE♂CAN！

你看我就说我不会mod 233

Edit: 帕秋莉是Patchouli吧
卧槽忘了有人回复了 明天MOD THX
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Strawberry wrote:

[General]

[L4D's Nee]

00:18:857 (4) - (nazi)x:468 y:296
00:19:091 (6) - +clap
00:19:795 (1) - 结尾+clap （和00:21:904 (3) - 一样
00:41:123 - 既然前面00:40:185 (1,3) - 都叠了这里为什么不多叠一个呢
00:58:466 (4,5) - 感觉没有必要特意加音量突出吧 反而感觉有点吵..
01:31:045 - ~01:46:045 - O.O?

好多clap啊。。看起来好nazi.. LOL
真挺好的 star ☆~
嗯，缺少Clap的地方已经添加。

00:41:123 开DS放上了一个...我觉得重复那个重叠的地方不怎么有趣。

00:58:466 (4,5) 将音效做了降低

01:31:045 - ~01:46:045 做完了。

回复太晚真是对不起。
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
All fixed
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
ねえ、少年、やらないか
Perfume的歌用兄贵音效毫无人性
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Breeze wrote:

ねえ、少年、やらないか
Perfume的歌用兄贵音效毫无人性
怒跪B爷 话说我是在N站上一个叫“【歪み】 ねぇ 【Perfume】”的视频得到灵感的2333
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[L4D's Nee]

  1. 00:45:806 (7) - 用normal音效挺好的, 很合音乐
  2. 01:14:166 (1,2,3) - 这几个完全stack的其实不太好看得出来是1/4拍重叠, 建议是不要完全重叠而用小spacing隔开重叠, 这样更好判断一点
  3. 01:15:572 (4) - 这个跳太远了
其他都挺好的
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Breeze wrote:

[L4D's Nee]

  1. 00:45:806 (7) - 用normal音效挺好的, 很合音乐
  2. 01:14:166 (1,2,3) - 这几个完全stack的其实不太好看得出来是1/4拍重叠, 建议是不要完全重叠而用小spacing隔开重叠, 这样更好判断一点
  3. 01:15:572 (4) - 这个跳太远了
其他都挺好的
00:45:806 (7) → 已修改 不过音效略调低了。

01:14:166 (1,2,3) → 加上了一定的间隔。

01:15:572 (4) → 开DS处理了

十分感谢呢。 :)
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
好然後就是Request from queue的 mod

[General]
  1. Ass嚇死我233
  2. Audio Lead-In 不一致, 1000感覺不夠
  3. Preview Time 不一致, L4D那diff不一樣
  4. Countdown個人認為關掉比較好
  5. 感覺你真應該做個warning
[Normal]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:14:166 (3) - (end)clap 你大概是故意的但是聽了沒clap真不舒服 \\
  3. 01:08:541 - S的finish真不好聽, 轉N試試
  4. 01:18:384 (3,4,1) - 這樣放比較合適 > http://puu.sh/10h12
因為種種原因所以跳過Ass

[L4D]
  1. 00:05:259 (5,1) - switch nc?
  2. 00:06:900 (7) - 這裡nc, 00:07:837 (1) - 去nc
  3. 00:08:775 (5) - nc
  4. 00:11:822 (1,2) - (1)去nc, (2)nc
  5. 00:17:447 (8) - 放個正常點的slider嘛 像00:16:041 (1) -
  6. 00:18:384 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 如果說要用這種clap下法 那就這一段全部都用這種下法 不然听了很詭異
    另外這邊clap下法不太一 說好的24下clap呢 雖然這樣好有特色
  7. 00:45:806 (7) - 不懂轉N的意義在哪 不過竟然都轉了就在00:46:041 - 上個finish
  8. 01:08:541 - 這裡轉回N
其他還行
啊啊 陪罪+超nice hitsound 送你兩顆星星好了
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
[General]
为啥没kiai

[Normal]
00:05:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - clap全部去掉会不会好点 你现在加clap也加不全 又觉得clap入得太早了
00:31:509 (1) - 新手可能反应不过来 去掉这个比较好
00:44:166 (4) - 折返加clap
00:59:634 (1) - 开头移到00:59:283

[Weiren's Ass]
00:14:869 - 其实这里可以加个f@ck you或者啊~~~什么的
00:25:416 (9) - 加长1/4拍
01:15:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这后面为啥没有前面那个啊啊啊啊的音效
01:33:970 (4) - 1/8? 我觉得没啥必要就是了
01:35:962 (7,8) - 复制前面456的节奏反而比较流畅
怎么说呢 感觉不够哲学...

[L4D's Nee]
timing里面有不少没用的绿线记得删
前面14秒没音效?
00:18:384 (3) - clap为啥扔红线...
00:27:759 (2) - ^
00:58:462 (8) - 加个new combo
01:29:166 (1) - 移到01:29:048
01:33:619 (4) - 移后面蓝线

take it boy
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Flask wrote:

[L4D]
  1. 00:05:259 (5,1) - switch nc?
  2. 00:06:900 (7) - 這裡nc, 00:07:837 (1) - 去nc
  3. 00:08:775 (5) - nc
  4. 00:11:822 (1,2) - (1)去nc, (2)nc
  5. 00:17:447 (8) - 放個正常點的slider嘛 像00:16:041 (1) -
  6. 00:18:384 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 如果說要用這種clap下法 那就這一段全部都用這種下法 不然听了很詭異
    另外這邊clap下法不太一 說好的24下clap呢 雖然這樣好有特色
  7. 00:45:806 (7) - 不懂轉N的意義在哪 不過竟然都轉了就在00:46:041 - 上個finish
  8. 01:08:541 - 這裡轉回N
感谢。

除了【00:18:384 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 如果說要用這種clap下法 那就這一段全部都用這種下法 不然听了很詭異
另外這邊clap下法不太一 說好的24下clap呢】这一条，其他条目都已完全修正。

对应的是 我把00:19:087 (6)的Clap取消了。

:? 那一段的音效很头疼。
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]

[L4D's Nee]
timing里面有不少没用的绿线记得删
前面14秒没音效?
00:18:384 (3) - clap为啥扔红线...
00:27:759 (2) - ^
00:58:462 (8) - 加个new combo
01:29:166 (1) - 移到01:29:048
01:33:619 (4) - 移后面蓝线

take it boy
·前14秒音效已添加，依旧是隔白线的Whistle。诶嘿嘿忘记了~ :D （装傻
·00:18:384 (3) 加在白线上了，最后部分也是差不多，音效有略修改。
·除了01:33:619 (4) 我觉得有点奇怪没有修改，其他都修改了。


Thank You Sir (ﾐ´ω`ﾐ)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
玛德终于传上去了


Flask wrote:

[General]
  1. Ass嚇死我233
  2. Audio Lead-In 不一致, 1000感覺不夠
  3. Preview Time 不一致, L4D那diff不一樣
  4. Countdown個人認為關掉比較好
  5. 感覺你真應該做個warning
    以上Fixed，Lead-in时间加到3s，做了个SB提醒
[Normal]
  1. OD-1
    Fixed
  2. 00:14:166 (3) - (end)clap 你大概是故意的但是聽了沒clap真不舒服 \\
    Fixed
  3. 01:08:541 - S的finish真不好聽, 轉N試試
    Fixed
  4. 01:18:384 (3,4,1) - 這樣放比較合適 > http://puu.sh/10h12
Fixed

因為種種原因所以跳過Ass

其他還行
啊啊 陪罪+超nice hitsound 送你兩顆星星好了
跪谢两颗星和MOD <(_ _)>
[割]

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
为啥没kiai
有啊，只是没持续而已

[Normal]
00:05:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - clap全部去掉会不会好点 你现在加clap也加不全 又觉得clap入得太早了
去掉不大好听啊

00:31:509 (1) - 新手可能反应不过来 去掉这个比较好
善

00:44:166 (4) - 折返加clap
听着不大舒服

00:59:634 (1) - 开头移到00:59:283
Fixed

[Weiren's Ass]
00:14:869 - 其实这里可以加个f@ck you或者啊~~~什么的
试过，加上很别扭

00:25:416 (9) - 加长1/4拍
加了不和原曲节奏

01:15:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这后面为啥没有前面那个啊啊啊啊的音效
啊？

01:33:970 (4) - 1/8? 我觉得没啥必要就是了
去掉了

01:35:962 (7,8) - 复制前面456的节奏反而比较流畅
好

怎么说呢 感觉不够哲学...
妹的 音效包都7M了不能再加了

take it boy
跪谢星和MOD <(_ _)>
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
L4D's Nee的Tags里Pachuri改成Patchouli。

[Normal]
SV稍微有点高，不过无大碍，可以考虑用大圈。
00:01:509 (2,3,4,5) - 没有clap?
00:44:166 (4) - 这种程度的扭放在Normal里可能有点问题
00:59:283 (1) - 从00:59:400开始
01:19:322 (4,2) - overlap到一点

[Weiren's Ass]
Orz

[L4D's Nee]
00:06:900 (1,2) - nazi - 不是完全对称，用复制？
00:12:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用多边形+Scale功能重新做一下？
00:14:166 (2) - 前面一个NC移到这里如何？这里Anti-jump要有NC
00:16:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream的形状不是很好看，可以考虑用slider→stream功能做得圆滑一些
00:22:603 (7,8,9,10,11) - 以中轴对称？
01:07:134 (3) - 加NC?

That's all I can find. GL~
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

[L4D's Nee]
① 00:06:900 (1,2) - nazi - 不是完全对称，用复制？
② 00:12:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用多边形+Scale功能重新做一下？
③ 00:14:166 (2) - 前面一个NC移到这里如何？这里Anti-jump要有NC
④ 00:16:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream的形状不是很好看，可以考虑用slider→stream功能做得圆滑一些
⑤ 00:22:603 (7,8,9,10,11) - 以中轴对称？
⑥ 01:07:134 (3) - 加NC?
开学没什么时间看...
①已修改。
②手工瞄准了一下..应该没差了。
③已修改。
④有关这一项...我直接重新制定DS..所以整张图大部分的连打都用新的DS处理过了。
⑤已修改。
⑥已修改。

THX！ :)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
L4D's Nee的Tags里Pachuri改成Patchouli。
Fixed

[Normal]
SV稍微有点高，不过无大碍，可以考虑用大圈。
暂时不Fix 如果还有人提出的话就改

00:01:509 (2,3,4,5) - 没有clap?
加了不好听的 背景音里面没有

00:44:166 (4) - 这种程度的扭放在Normal里可能有点问题
重画了

00:59:283 (1) - 从00:59:400开始
Fixed

01:19:322 (4,2) - overlap到一点
这样……不好吧？换了一种排列

That's all I can find. GL~
THX
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
<3 Weiren's Ass Diffs
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
m4m from my queue~

[General]
  1. Audio Lead In 2 second is fine to me tough~
  2. than Short Ver., I think its "Cut Ver." tough~
[Normal]
Rhythms
  1. 00:31:509: add circle?
  2. 00:55:416: add whistle on the slider head?
  3. 01:41:587: suggestion, how about add circle here and add clap on it?
Weiren Ass diff is so funny and perfect ahaha lol xD

[L4D's Nee]
Rhythms
  1. 01:14:634: clap on the head?
  2. 01:15:572: add clap?
thats all from me~ good luck :3
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[L4D's Nee]
Rhythms
  1. 01:14:634: clap on the head?
  2. 01:15:572: add clap?
Fixed.

THX :)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

- t e n n y a - wrote:

m4m from my queue~

[General]
  1. Audio Lead In 2 second is fine to me tough~
    Well, the warnning SB in Ass diff shows at -2.07s, So AL can't be set to 2 sec
  2. than Short Ver., I think its "Cut Ver." tough~
    Will fix this if anyone mentioned else
[Normal]
Rhythms
  1. 00:31:509: add circle?
    Someone said that it would appear too fast after a spinner for beginner if add a circle
  2. 00:55:416: add whistle on the slider head?
    Fixed
  3. 01:41:587: suggestion, how about add circle here and add clap on it?
    Changed to a slider with repeat and clap
Weiren Ass diff is so funny and perfect ahaha lol xD

thats all from me~ good luck :3
THX~
Purist_old
32 posts
Joined August 2012
Purist_old
说好的那什么
总之先跪一个

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:509(x)add note
  2. 00:33:384(4)感觉这note别和3放一起比较好
    SPOILER
  3. 01:25:884(5)感觉这段可以多一个note
    SPOILER

[Weiren's Ass]
  1. OD -1 (个人习惯orz
  2. 00:05:962(1)右移一格
  3. 00:07:369(x)add note
  4. 00:16:861(x)加个note变成3连如何
  5. 00:25:884(10)叠好
  6. 00:53:541(5)^
  7. 01:42:056(6)^
[L4D's Nee]
  1. 00:05:259(1,2,3,4,5)这排列不好看 不试着换一个么
  2. 00:33:853(3)叠好
  3. 00:46:978(3)上移一格左移一格
  4. 00:52:134(1)改成直的好看些orz
差不多就这些了 ~
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Purist wrote:

[L4D's Nee]
  1. 00:05:259(1,2,3,4,5)这排列不好看 不试着换一个么
  2. 00:33:853(3)叠好
  3. 00:46:978(3)上移一格左移一格
  4. 00:52:134(1)改成直的好看些orz
呃..
第一条我没改..因为手感还不错。
第二条已修正。
第三条已修正。
第四条的确有点不好看，我让它没这么棱角分明了，但是没有做直。

THX :)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Purist wrote:

说好的那什么
总之先跪一个

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:509(x)add note
  2. 00:33:384(4)感觉这note别和3放一起比较好
    SPOILER
  3. 01:25:884(5)感觉这段可以多一个note
    SPOILER
    All fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
  1. OD -1 (个人习惯orz
    Fixed
  2. 00:05:962(1)右移一格
    Fixed
  3. 00:07:369(x)add note
    Fixed
  4. 00:16:861(x)加个note变成3连如何
    Fixed
  5. 00:25:884(10)叠好
  6. 00:53:541(5)^
  7. 01:42:056(6)^
    没叠好是OSU的问题 关GS用0XDS排出来的
差不多就这些了 ~
THX
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
[L4D's Nee]
感觉上前面和后面的电音部分的的连打有点硬套上去，试一下跟音乐吧
00:36:197 (2,3,4) - 好怪的spacing...

[Weiren's Ass]
00:57:408 (x) - 这个时间点上我认为用短些的音效会好点。
SB音量我认为太大声了...调小一点不要让音效把歌本身遮掉了。
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

abalee wrote:

[L4D's Nee]
感觉上前面和后面的电音部分的的连打有点硬套上去，试一下跟音乐吧
00:36:197 (2,3,4) - 好怪的spacing...
美观方面已做修正。
:) THX
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

abalee wrote:

[Weiren's Ass]
00:57:408 (x) - 这个时间点上我认为用短些的音效会好点。
换成Van的Ah了

SB音量我认为太大声了...调小一点不要让音效把歌本身遮掉了。
SB音效音量-15
THX
Twice_old
Twice_old
怂炸 必须rank
Twice_old
Twice_old
[General]

没看出什么问题\.-./

[Normal]

没什么好说的，感觉很完美了(／・ω・)／

[Weiren's Ass]

00:52:369-(1)(2) (／・ω・)／如果是我我觉得我会让他们都叠在(3)上面
00:53:541-(5) 嘛如果是我会加nc (／・ω・)／
01:21:431-(5) 很纠结到底要不要nc 因为没nc我第一次打的时候没反应过来._.

[L4D's Nee]

00:03:619-(1) 取消nc 00:03:348-(7) nc
00:32:916-(1) 取消nc 00:33:853-(3) nc
01:15:572-(4) (」・ω・)」不和之前那些连击用同样的ds吗？虽然现在这样也不会误判.

我真心不会mod音效，(」・ω・)」请猥姥爷饶命
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Twice wrote:

[General]

[L4D's Nee]

00:03:619-(1) 取消nc 00:03:348-(7) nc
00:32:916-(1) 取消nc 00:33:853-(3) nc
01:15:572-(4) (」・ω・)」不和之前那些连击用同样的ds吗？虽然现在这样也不会误判.
Fixed。

感谢并且掏二次两次
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Twice wrote:

[Weiren's Ass]

00:52:369-(1)(2) (／・ω・)／如果是我我觉得我会让他们都叠在(3)上面
改了下前面的排列

00:53:541-(5) 嘛如果是我会加nc (／・ω・)／
Fixed

01:21:431-(5) 很纠结到底要不要nc 因为没nc我第一次打的时候没反应过来._.
Fixed

我真心不会mod音效，(」・ω・)」请猥姥爷饶命
掏二次两次
THX
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Pink Agate
MOD

现在大标题好像不准放 Short Ver. 这样的词汇了
Weiren's Ass

这是Hard? OD-1?
00:21:197 (2) - ctrl+g?
00:33:853 (1) - 略跳，prev2.69x,太高了点？
00:48:384 (5) - 转00:48:619 (1) - 这里的三连感觉略跳
00:51:431 (8) - 这种把circle放在回转的slider尾端的方法好像不太有趣的样子
01:24:009 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:25:416 (6) - ^
01:27:291 (1) - 放在转盘前这个粉红的new combo让人有点分辨不出来，换个颜色?
01:28:697 (1) - remove，这个circle好像是有点多余的，你去掉试试看似乎更加顺畅

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tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[Normal]
00:02:447 (3,5) - 这俩的开头不加clap？
00:24:478 (2,3) - 这俩尾巴部分靠太近了看着有点...[nazi]
00:29:166 (1) - 建议在00:30:572 结尾吧
00:44:166 (4) - 可以在尾巴这里加whistle
00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - 头总觉得靠太近了看起来有点挤
00:59:166 (5) - 其实可以把后面的spinner拉到这里开始，把这个5去掉，因为就算要加note也应该是在前面的那个红线加
这里加了后还加whistle强调有点怪怪的，所以把spinner拉过来吧
然后spinner在01:00:572 end
01:05:259 (5) - 不加个NC？
01:27:291 (6) - 同00:59:166 (5) -
然后spinner在01:30:572 end
spinner在最低难度里可能有些太难了...

[L4D]
00:30:337 (4) - 移到x424 y148
00:30:103 (3) - +NC
这个难度有些间距真的很猎奇.......应该说我不知道你是故意的还是手滑摆的......
00:31:041 (1,2) - 我觉得间距相对于前后来讲太短的
00:32:681 (5,6) - 干嘛在这里跳?
00:37:134 (4,5) - 从5这边开始短没问题，从4这边开始短就有点猎奇
00:49:322 (4,5) - ...这个其实不是短的问题...是看起来不爽的问题...试试把5放在3和4的中间比如x220 y184,另外这个slider太丑了建议重拉
01:11:587 (6,1) - 相对于前面是否有点远？
01:14:166 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段根本没感觉跟到节奏
01:21:431 (1) - 跟节奏的话这个应该和前面的5，6，7一样跳一下
01:28:815 (4) - 这个音多余了
01:29:048 (1,1) - 可能离的有点远
相较于前半部分后半部分难度有点太高，到最后基本上都是连击了吧，尽量维持一下平均难度，因为这首歌BPM也不是很高
然后这个难度可能要稍微调节一下间距问题，有的间距真的和左右一比太小了...........偶尔开下DS调节下吧.......

我觉得除了这三个难度你可能还需要一个较为简单的难度做缓冲，说实话我看了一眼ass，然后完全判断不出来是L4D难一点还是ass难一点=_=...
要考虑到ass难度的接受程度以及L4D和normal难度之间的难度水平跨越....我还是建议你再加个简单点的hard比较好
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

tutuhaha wrote:

[L4D]
00:30:337 (4) - 移到x424 y148
00:30:103 (3) - +NC
00:49:322 (4,5) - ...这个其实不是短的问题...是看起来不爽的问题...试试把5放在3和4的中间比如x220 y184,另外这个slider太丑了建议重拉
THX，以上的条目已修正..
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LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi

[general]

I was about to suggest renaming and converting all the sb hitsound to you but after checking in the editor I found that they mingled naturally with the music and there is no influence to gameplay so I'd like to keep them all as what they are now rather than letting you spend a bunch of time on dealing with them.

The normal is fine as easiest diff in the mapset but it's exploit that there is missing a transitional diff. In other words the diff spread isn't appropriate. L4D's nee is way too hard as a diff between easiest and hardest diff. So you'd add another diff.

remove letter box in all diffs

abridge lead-in to 2000ms

[Weiren's Ass]

00:06:666 (9,11) - replace your original codes with this 
96,184,6666,2,0,B|64:216|45:266|72:320|144:328|184:288,1,230,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,184,7603,2,0,B|448:216|467:266|440:320|368:328|328:288,1,230,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:09:009 (1,3) - I'm not sure but maybe these two sliders are not very recommended as wiggle slider. cause you used slider nodes to manipulate slider speeds
00:59:400 (1) - ^ maybe just set up an inherited section to slow it down
01:20:259 (2,3) - 
115,45,80259,1,8,0:0:0
230,45,80494,1,0,0:0:0
01:26:939 (6) - clap?

[L4D's Nee]

00:08:775 (1) - The spacing here is too small, how about coverse the slider to get them farther
00:18:150 (2) - move to x 471 y118
00:21:197 (6,7) - clap 6 and remove clap from 7
00:24:009 (3) - http://puu.sh/1jANC
00:30:337 (4,5) - clap to sliderend and 5
00:30:337 (4,5) - spacing is weird
00:31:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - random spacing
00:41:353 (1) - http://puu.sh/1jAPp
00:37:134 (4,5,6,7) - such sudden slow down is way too confusing
00:46:978 (3,4,5) - poor blankets..http://puu.sh/1jARk

This diff needs more work/improvements. now some ryhthm are not clear and arrangement is the biggest problem. fixing all random spacing(not all jumps) and cusual slider shapes
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Pink Agate wrote:

SPOILER
MOD
现在大标题好像不准放 Short Ver. 这样的词汇了
再议，等MAT/BAT的说法

Weiren's Ass

这是Hard? OD-1?
Fixed

00:21:197 (2) - ctrl+g?
翻转了不好看

00:33:853 (1) - 略跳，prev2.69x,太高了点？
Fixed

00:48:384 (5) - 转00:48:619 (1) - 这里的三连感觉略跳
Fixed

00:51:431 (8) - 这种把circle放在回转的slider尾端的方法好像不太有趣的样子
看过这种梗感觉不错

01:24:009 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:25:416 (6) - ^
四个slider都是朝着中心走的

01:27:291 (1) - 放在转盘前这个粉红的new combo让人有点分辨不出来，换个颜色?
换绿色了

01:28:697 (1) - remove，这个circle好像是有点多余的，你去掉试试看似乎更加顺畅
Fixed

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tutuhaha wrote:

SPOILER
[Normal]
00:02:447 (3,5) - 这俩的开头不加clap？
加了感觉略吵

00:24:478 (2,3) - 这俩尾巴部分靠太近了看着有点...[nazi]
Fixed

00:29:166 (1) - 建议在00:30:572 结尾吧
暂时这样不然感觉spinner太短

00:44:166 (4) - 可以在尾巴这里加whistle
Fixed

00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - 头总觉得靠太近了看起来有点挤
Fixed

00:59:166 (5) - 其实可以把后面的spinner拉到这里开始，把这个5去掉，因为就算要加note也应该是在前面的那个红线加
这里加了后还加whistle强调有点怪怪的，所以把spinner拉过来吧
然后spinner在01:00:572 end
Fixed

01:05:259 (5) - 不加个NC？
Fixed

01:27:291 (6) - 同00:59:166 (5) -
然后spinner在01:30:572 end
Fixed
spinner在最低难度里可能有些太难了...

LKs wrote:

SPOILER
hi

[general]

The normal is fine as easiest diff in the mapset but it's exploit that there is missing a transitional diff. In other words the diff spread isn't appropriate. L4D's nee is way too hard as a diff between easiest and hardest diff. So you'd add another diff.
L4D will change his diff to NM(not finished yet), and NM will rename to EZ

remove letter box in all diffs
Fixed

abridge lead-in to 2000ms
Warning SB starts at -02.709 in ASS diff. Other two diffs fixed

[Weiren's Ass]

00:06:666 (9,11) - replace your original codes with this 
96,184,6666,2,0,B|64:216|45:266|72:320|144:328|184:288,1,230,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,184,7603,2,0,B|448:216|467:266|440:320|368:328|328:288,1,230,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
Fixed

00:09:009 (1,3) - I'm not sure but maybe these two sliders are not very recommended as wiggle slider. cause you used slider nodes to manipulate slider speeds
Fixed

00:59:400 (1) - ^ maybe just set up an inherited section to slow it down
Fixed

01:20:259 (2,3) - 
115,45,80259,1,8,0:0:0
230,45,80494,1,0,0:0:0
Fixed

01:26:939 (6) - clap?
Fixed
Thanks for mods.
Due to L4D is making his NM diff, I moved this beatmap into WIP.
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Revive it ;_;
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Stefan wrote:

Revive it ;_;
Sorry that I've ignored this for such a long time :(
The final examination is coming, I couldn't pay much time on mapping. But I will revive this during winter vacation.
AND I'M GONNA TO RANK IT :)
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
That are great news! \o/
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Add Melt's diff. L4D told me that he has given up on this
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