1. Betsu's Muzukashii (4.89 stars, 840 notes)
2. Hunger! (5 stars, 66 notes)
3. Ntaiko Oni (4.89 stars, 1386 notes)
4. The Destiny (5 stars, 909 notes)

Rover_D wrote:

i'm not a pro modder.. just giving some advice. If u find it helpful kds plz

The Destiny diff: 00:23:970 (8) - this note can not really be placed there, because this is a fast map and this kind of hidden note makes the player not comfortable with it..
and the notes at 02:47:670 (4) - to 02:48:270 (8) - , try to change this jump a bit. It's too complex, it's hard to get it right in the first few trys, and fews werid when u playin it..


=v= a really awesome beatmap. It's really fun to play it.

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hello
[General]
You must work on slider's forms.
[Storyboard]
03:07:770 (5) - rings are not exactly under circle. Is it deliberately? // < all fixed
Save me:

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Hunger!:

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Destiny:

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[Save me]
Slider Velocity is too low, especially for Approve. // < change to 1.5 and all fixed in diff
Map is a bit unplayable with the current difficulty settings.
HP Drain Rate - 5
Circle Size - 4
Approach Rate - 8
Overall Difficulty - 6
The form of sliders and their placement are very random. For example:
00:51:870 (1,2) - stack the beginning and the end of sliders like this:

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01:30:570 (2) - move to 120;176 (x;y)
01:31:470 (4,5) - stack ends

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01:32:520 (1) - move to 320;104
[Hunger!]
Overall Difficulty - 7 // < all fixed
00:16:770 (5) - move to 184;248
00:18:570 (4) - move to 80;288
01:03:720 (1) - 160;136
01:03:870 (2) - 232;200
01:36:570 (1) - 240;256
02:32:970 (2,4) - stack beginnings
[Destiny]
HP Drain Rate - 7-8 // < ^
Overall Difficulty - 7
00:50:670 (4) - 372;184
00:55:320 (6) - this note covers the reverse of slider 00:55:470 (7) move it from there
From 02:34:845 (1) to 02:36:945 (10) - nice part
02:43:770 (4,1) - same problem with reverse

Good luck with map.

1. maybe you can make your sliders prettier.
   for example:
   change this kind of slider:
   http://puu.sh/1mkxf
   to this:
   http://puu.sh/1mkyg
2. kiaitime looks so long,cut off a little?

1. 00:22:770 (1) - change rhythm to this? http://puu.sh/1mkbQ
2. 01:00:120 (4) - this note is sheltered by that slider,move it out
3. 01:29:970 (1) - same as above,change rhythm to this? http://puu.sh/1mkiy
4. 01:31:470 (4,5,1,2) - strange,maybe you can change to this: http://puu.sh/1mklo
5. 01:41:370 (6,7,1) - also strange,change to this? http://puu.sh/1mkqe

1. 00:15:570 (1,2) - maybe should not put 2 sliders together
2. 00:29:970 (1) - so close to last slider,it will confuse players

1. 00:34:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe you can use larger distance spacing
2. 00:56:220 (10) - this note is a little hard to find
3. 01:16:920 (8,9,10) - why not jump here
4. 01:49:620 (7,1) - strange distance spacing
5. 01:52:170 (9) - hard to read
6. 02:08:520 (1) - move this slider a little away
7. 02:51:870 (1,2,3) - these 2 sliders almost overlap

Hikaros wrote:

i wanna cry D: why did you delete most of the map? D:

i did really love to play it how it was before ):

igloo1234 wrote:

Great map, suprised it's not ranked yet.