Static Noise Bird wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:630 (1) - Move 2 squares right (Grid level 4)

[Normal]
00:59:116 (4) - You could make it prettier (especially now since there's the new slider system)
01:09:401 (6) - Move on y:324

[Hard]
00:39:916 (1) - Slider start x:230 y:348, slider end x:310 y:233 (same as 00:39:059 (2) )
01:12:830 (1) - Rather weird slider shape (also noticed that 00:53:630 (1,2) are same, but not as distracting)
01:27:916 (1) - Make it more open
02:12:659 (2) - Make it repeat only once and add note at 02:13:173

[Insane]
00:25:687 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:201 (2) - Add new combo
00:42:659 (8) - ^
01:17:630 (2,3,4,5) - Use 0,8x or 0,4x spacing

That's all, good luck!

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Deni wrote:

General

normal : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

Hi, Gamerleinchen ! (＾∇＾)

Folder seems to be all right!

You can polish some sliders up and make them more symmetrical in General...

Easy

00:29:973 (2,3) - I would try to avoid using stacks in Easy since they can be very confusing for beginners! fixed
00:38:544 (1,2) - This is definitely not readable for beginners, I highly suggest you to unstack this. fixed
00:48:144 (1) - Remove whistle on the slider head, or add it to 00:49:516 (3) - slider head to keep the consistency. fixed (added a whistle

Normal

00:26:201 (5) - I would extend this slider to the white tick (00:26:887) so that it follows the rhythm better. yea
00:28:944 (3) - Same here! yea
00:33:059 (5) - Curve this slider a bit more with the new slider system, will look better imo. yea
00:38:544 (4,5,6) - This breaks the rhythm you used before, I suggest you to remove that and for example only use 1 long slider from 00:38:544 - to 00:39:230- since this is a normal, not a hard! yea
00:39:916 (6) - Curve this a bit more with the new system, It will look a lot better.. (Example in box) Ok

hi

00:41:287 (1) - Delete whistle from the slider bottom, add it to the slider head and to keep the whistle consistency add a whistle on 00:43:344 (3) - and 00:44:030 (4) - Slider Head. fixed
00:50:887 (1) - I would curve this slider more with the new system, will look better! Ok
00:52:259 (2) - Same as above! Ok
01:27:916 (7) - Make this more symmetrical and curve it more for a better looking slider! Ok
01:29:287 (1) - Same as above! Ok
02:09:059 (4,5,6) - This pattern really doesn't look that nice, I suggest you something like that: yea that's a nice pattern

awesome box

02:17:287 (4) - This slider could be a bit more curved too.. Ok
02:37:859 (1,2) - If you curve 1 a bit more you could create a blanket with (1) and (2) yea

Hard

00:24:487 (3) - You get a better symmetrical slider shape with the new system.. fixed
00:34:430 (1,2) - Same for these two! Ok
01:24:487 (2) - Add a curve to this slider, fit's better imo. no
02:03:573 (4) - I would move this circle a bit up so that it flows better with the next circle. Ok
02:33:744 (1,2) - I suggest you to use a pattern with more curved sliders, it will fit better.. Ok

Insane

I think the beginning of Insane is mapped a bit too heavy for that calm part, maybe try to make it a bit more Easy but that's up to you.. i made some of the 1/4 parts easier

00:31:859 - Don't make these gaps, it just breaks the rhythm you used before.. no , because it fits great to the guitar
00:32:544 (6) - If you keep this ^ move (6) to 00:32:716 - ^
01:14:544 (5) - Curve this slider a bit more? Will look better imo. Ok
01:47:116 (4) - This slider doesn't fit so well with 5, I made a better one for you (Example and Code in Box) yea. thx

Example + Code

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02:00:144 (1,2,3) - Could be more curved in general... ok

That's it! If you have any question ask me via PM or ingame!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 23.456ms BPM: 175,00 is more correct
Resnapp after and move the timing points[/color]

Easy

00:39:398 (2) - For a player its a little confusing when playing this map, unstack it and move the other next elements away too ok
00:53:284 (5) - Move this one grid right for symmetry ok
01:14:198 (3) - Two repeats are unexpected for new players, reduce it to one or make two sliders instead
01:19:684 (2,4) - I think when they overlapp it looks a bit forced. Move them so that they are not overlapping like this maybe[/color] fixed

Example

01:19:684 (2) - I dont suggest making the slider start on a red tick, it is too sudden and also might cause a miss or combo break. Maybe just add a circle at 01:19:684 (2) -
02:03:398 (4,6) - These two break the flow here fully, they dont fit with anything of the song anyway. Try to just add a circle at 02:03:570 - then a slider starting at 02:04:256 - till 02:04:598 - and then another circle at the next whitetick[/color] yea, i used your rhytm

Example

02:40:598 (1) - NC not needed i like it how it is

Normal

General
This diff should be a Normal not a Normal + or Hard. Players are now able to play more element but that doesnt mean they are just as experienced as Insane players. Make it easier. Insane?! I don't understand, why you think that this is so hard... Nevertheless i will try to make it easier

Overall
00:39:916 (8) - NC here remove next since of a new vocal start ok
00:42:144 (2) - This doesnt fit with the song and has no rythm to it. Maybe delete it and make a reserve at the preview slider and then add a circle at 00:42:659 -
00:48:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Way too many circles after another, add 2 sliders to them to make the players give more time and not rush with playing[/color] fixed
00:53:630 (4) - NC here for consistance and then remove next NC Ok
00:59:116 (4) - NC Ok
01:04:601 (4) - ^ Ok
01:56:201 (3) - I wouldnt stack them since the players would play it as a 1/2 not 1/1, as in the 2nd circle will be played as it was here 01:56:030 - fixed
02:40:601 (1) - NC not needed i like it how it is

Hard

00:28:944 (5) - NC here for new vocal and remove next NC Ok
00:38:544 (1) - NC not needed Ok
00:55:001 (3) - I played this as a one repeat slider, it is odd to play imo, delete one repeat, the other slider is fine
01:06:487 (6) - I would delete this circle it doesnt fit here and without it sounds and plays better[/color] same^
01:27:916 (1) - Remove NC since its still part of the preview songpart and add NC at 01:29:287 (3) - for new part ok
01:29:973 (4,5) - The spacing is broken here, you had it consistant and now broke it, move them closer by making them slider start and end points get closer to the middle fixed
01:59:459 (1) - Remove NC, its still part of the preview songpart and pattern yea
02:00:659 (2) - NC here then for new part ok
02:09:573 (6) - Wouldnt stack this, it seems so forced and without flow when playing fixed
02:10:430 (8) - NC for new part Ok
02:11:801 (1) - Remove NC here Ok
02:13:173 (3) - NC here then again Ok
02:39:230 (1,1) - This spinner usage is more welcome in Insane than Hard, make it one spinner
02:44:716 (7) - NC for consistance because you also did on the preview patterns yea
03:01:173 (1,2,3) - Broken spacing again, way too much spacing, make them closer[/color] fixed

Insane

00:23:801 (3,4) - , 00:25:173 (8,9) - This circle after the slider doesnt even fit to the song, why did you place it, i wouldnt make this when not fitting
00:25:001 (7) - NC it is welcome because its a long pattern ok
00:29:459 (5,6) - This doesnt fit at all and breaks the flow of the rythm, replace this with another pattern, like circles[/color] fixed
01:01:344 (1) - Remove NC and add here 01:01:859 (6) - for consistance ok
01:06:487 (4) - Even though for pattern, but this circle doesnt fit and there is not beat in the song which could fit it, its just a placeholder for symmetry nope. i can hear a sound at this point
01:18:316 (6) - NC here since its a new part remove next NC ok
01:21:059 (6) - NC here then ok
01:27:573 (6) - Broken spacing, move it a little lower so also the transition is better when playing its still a jump, but now a smaller one
02:02:201 (8) - NC for constistance and remove next NC ok
02:04:944 (4) - NC here then ok
02:09:230 (3) - I would make NC here for a new kind of pattern which would be more readable to the player yea
02:48:144 (3,4) - The are just a placeholder right? Imo they are so random and not fitting that it couldnt be otherwise o.o
02:54:316 (7,8,9) - ^ These too ;w;, what i wanna say is, change this to the rythmn of the song, not for random
03:03:573 (5,6,7,8,9) - Place them a little closer to the preview object since it would cause a miss for such a sudden jump and then streaming[/color]

Thats it

Raging Bull wrote:

Hello hello! Took me long enough to finally get to my mod, but better late than never! Mods are suggestions, if you don't agree with them please explain why instead of just "No"

General:
Preview points are inconsistent, please set them the same! Changing them to 49513 would be good since that's where the downbeat is and not 39516.

Easy 49516
Normal 49516
Hard 49513
Insane 49513 Whooops. forgot to fix them since I changed the Offset.

Easy:
01:21:056 (3,4,5) - I know you're going for symmetry, but perhaps doing slider slider note instead of note slider slider? Your current pattern leaves the downbeat unstressed because of the slider ending there. If you change it to slider slider note, it enhances downbeat by being able to "click" it. Lol I hate explaining these cause i can't word it. fixed. I found a new pattern, which also includes symmetry
01:53:970 (3) - Perhaps remove one repeat and place one hit circle with NC instead? Keeps combo consistent with 01:49:856 (1). yea
02:01:341 (1) - Perhaps like screenie? http://puu.sh/1VwzP You've been following a consistent pattern throughout this part of the music and in easy I think it's nice to keep a consistent pattern/rhythm. Ok
02:04:856 (6) - I assume this one is an accident? Move it one tick later! Oh yea you're right. fixed.
02:13:170 (4) - Remove NC and 02:14:541 (1) - Add NC here instead for consistent NCing pattern Ok
02:17:284 (6) - Add NC for consistent pattern here. Ok
02:57:741 (4) - Minus one repeat and add a note with NC on downbeat instead? Keeps NCing pattern consistent and clicking beats on downbeat sounds way better. ywa

Normal:
00:42:656 (4) - Unsnapped circle. fixed
02:05:627 (5) - Perhaps something like screenshot instead? I think it sounds weird that it has nothing mapped besides slider end when a slider plays well here. http://puu.sh/1VwMc works great
02:07:170 (8) - remove one repeat and add note with NC on downbeat instead? It gets rid of two things for me, sliders with more than one repeat that may be confusing for beginners who can't read AR too well just yet and the downbeat thing I mention! fixed
02:12:656 (2) - Same thing as ^? fixed
02:15:570 (7) - http://puu.sh/1VwQb The whole downbeat thing still. Sorry lol. It just irritates me for some odd reason. Plus slider sounds better since it follows the lyrics (which I can't tell what he's saying lol) by clicking and holding instead of only a click. fixed
02:18:141 (5) - One last time haha. Same suggestion as earlier? fixed, i just wonder, if this Diffs insn't too hard for a normal?

Hard:
01:23:456 (8) - Remove one repeat and add note with NC? Downbeat thing for me. fixed
01:59:456 (5) - Perhaps Ctrl+G? I think it would be played better since the movement from the pattern is diagonal and will curve upward to the next note at 02:00:656 (1) No because the spacing wouldn't fit anymore with this pattern
02:09:570 (6) - Perhaps move this to 02:09:741 instead? I think at 02:09:741, vocal is way more prominent than music at 02:09:570. yea. also added a note, where the started before i changed it.
02:52:256 (4) - Minus one repeat and add one note with NC instead? Downbeat thing and that the previous sliders had only 2 repeat, this one has 3 so it feels rather weird. fixed

Insane:
00:23:798 (3,2) - Nothing wrong here, but it just feels weird on blue ticks, is it intentional? yea, it fits perfectly to the drums in the background. Some modders don't hear them, because they don't have subwoofer/ headset with bass - maybe you too?
00:59:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Lol I'm gonna have a hard time hitting these. orz I like how it is. Also it fits to the music...
02:53:284 (2,3,4) - This part seems rather awkward to me. People will jump to 2 and then jump back to 3 (and it's a pretty big jump no problem with that) then move to 4 and then continue the movement and normal distance snap , it just has a weird movement for me, perhaps you could try to change the pattern a bit so it has a more natural feel and jump? Just an example how it could be better, but I'm horrible at making jumps! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/592478 looool. this is an accident. There shouldn't be a jump: fixed xD
02:58:427 (6) - NC here? Kinda the start of a new bass(?) here.yea

Good luck!

Starz0r wrote:

Gonna mod this again.

Insane
00:36:227 (2) Slider a bit offscreen.
00:51:398 (2) Hitcircle ^
01:01:684 (9) Add NC.
01:26:884 (2) Move to center of screen.
01:28:170 (2) Hitcircle is a bit offscreen here too.
01:51:227 (1) ^
02:33:411 (7) Remove NC and Move to center of screen.

Hard
00:36:141 (4) Hitcircle is a bit offscreen.
00:36:484 (5) ^
00:50:541 (4) Move Hitcircle to center of screen.
00:56:370 (1) OFFSCREEN AGAIN.
00:58:427 (6) ^
01:21:056 (1) Remove NC.
01:23:456 (8) Add NC.
01:23:798 (1) Remove NC.
02:13:170 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) Somehow make them symmetrical.
02:15:913 (1) Move to center of screen.