BRIGHT - 1 year 2 months 20 days · forum

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2012-12-28T02:20:50+00:00

Athena?#%……*?#%? ?? how about Athena's Broken Heart?

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-12-28T04:27:07+00:00

Harez wrote:
Athena?#%……*?#%? ?? how about Athena's Broken Heart?

lol。。。just.for.test~~~
i will delete it~

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2012-12-28T16:56:22+00:00

Hi, Athena

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod very delay)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

You ever said Harez had "Athena?#%……*?#%? diff" was just for test. So don't forget delete it

Easy

00:53:634 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:432 y:216, and move (3) to x:396 y:140. It will be able to played more smoothly.
01:21:365 (3,4,5) - Maybe move notes are equilateral triangle by move (5) to down 3 grids.
01:28:424 (2) - Spacing before and after this is little far. I suggest that move it to up and right 1 grid.
02:19:348 (3,4) - It isn't beautiful for me. I think that move notes by this be better.
SPOILER

lucyfly's Normal

00:24:390 (2) - I think that you may forgot add clap here. So add it because it hasn't the hitsound on this rhythm.
02:32:961 (2) - Make to curve slider by this be better and played more smoothly.
SPOILER

Hard Collab

00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - I think it too hard for this diff. Maybe have to fix those.
02:04:978 (1) - Why you add NC here? I think that it doesn't involve any rhythm and vocal.

Neko

02:20:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Reduce spacing between (3,4,5) to 1.1x. It will be able to played more smoothly.

Athena

Good diff.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-12-29T08:00:21+00:00

Nichiyouki's mod~

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Athena

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod very delay)

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General
You ever said Harez had "Athena?#%……*?#%? diff" was just for test. So don't forget delete it >~<okey~

Easy
00:53:634 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:432 y:216, and move (3) to x:396 y:140. It will be able to played more smoothly. fix~
01:21:365 (3,4,5) - Maybe move notes are equilateral triangle by move (5) to down 3 grids. fix~
01:28:424 (2) - Spacing before and after this is little far. I suggest that move it to up and right 1 grid. fix~
02:19:348 (3,4) - It isn't beautiful for me. I think that move notes by this be better. fix~
SPOILER

lucyfly's Normal
00:24:390 (2) - I think that you may forgot add clap here. So add it because it hasn't the hitsound on this rhythm. fix~
02:32:961 (2) - Make to curve slider by this be better and played more smoothly. no change~
SPOILER

Hard Collab
00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - I think it too hard for this diff. Maybe have to fix those. for fun~

Athena
Good diff.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

thx~ur mod~

EDIT: ATHENA!@#$%^& ALREADY DELETE~

EDIT2: Update hc diff~

Last edited by Athena Tennos 2013-01-09T09:59:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-01-06T17:16:27+00:00

~

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cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2013-01-12T05:18:25+00:00

Hard Collab
02:43:045 (3) - Consider CTRL+G

Since you have a spinner at the end, maybe try to have those final circles closer to the center maybe?

Neko
00:29:684 - Why not focus on the guitar instrumentation here. 3 1/8 sliders and 1 1/2 slider like this http://i.imgur.com/dACoM.png is what I like. Just throwing ideas out there to try to feel useful

I couldn't really find anything too useful, sorry o.o

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ssssssssssssssss 2013-01-24T03:57:24+00:00

哇好图
给神图的渣mod，觉得没用可以无视0.0

00:20:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 乐曲刚开始就这样跳大丈夫？如果要是没听过这歌的人第一次玩的话很难预料这地方会有个强调。个人感觉在这里用易读的梗先介绍下节奏型，歌曲后面如果有相同的部分再用这样的梗比较好

00:46:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还有关于这样的梗我想重点说一下。。。这个梗比起以前的版本好像善良了一些？我记得以前好像是。。。00:50:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样把最后几note的间距增大的梗？个人来说我觉得后者比前者漂亮好多，视觉上增大的间距把后面的note和前面的note隔离开感觉也很干净利落，玩起来也是后者比前者更有味道些。当我看到在现在这个版本里你把这梗抹掉了很多的时候真是伤心欲绝23333。不过分的说这梗绝对是全图的亮点，不知道你后来为啥砍掉这么多。。。也许你是担心用太多会有点无聊？但是反复使用同一个梗并不是一件坏事啊。。。本来音乐这东西就是由很多重复构成的，而且音乐主题随着不断重复也会加强表现力www,所以对应的谱面也不必太担心过度使用同一梗。当然也得把握个度就是了。

01:00:440 (2,5) - 略坑2333

01:14:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 直线型感觉不是太好看。。。

01:43:550 (1) - 好

02:09:012 (2,3,4) - （建议）这样的单点三连改成大间距的也比较好。大间距三连因为移动的时候要稳所以适合在乐句中放，给玩家流动着的感觉。单点的三连因为有停滞感适合在乐句间或乐曲有起伏比较大的时候放。举个正面例子的话，02:11:785 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的单点二连感觉上就很棒。

02:18:592 (1,2,3) - 不考虑做得更圆滑些么。。。

02:19:348 (1,2,3) - 同上

02:53:886 - 可以加个circle？虽然看歌词这里似乎是延长上个note的音，但是初见还是觉得有个circle比较顺

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-01-27T11:58:30+00:00

cirno-'s mod~

cirno- wrote:
Hard Collab
02:43:045 (3) - Consider CTRL+G hmm~no change~

Since you have a spinner at the end, maybe try to have those final circles closer to the center maybe? lol i think her just for more flow~

Neko
00:29:684 - Why not focus on the guitar instrumentation here. 3 1/8 sliders and 1 1/2 slider like this http://i.imgur.com/dACoM.png is what I like. Just throwing ideas out there to try to feel useful hmm...idk..orz...

I couldn't really find anything too useful, sorry o.o never might~i happy u have mod it

thx ur mod~

ssssssssssssssss' mod~

ssssssssssssssss wrote:
哇好图
给神图的渣mod，觉得没用可以无视0.0 baka~

00:20:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 乐曲刚开始就这样跳大丈夫？如果要是没听过这歌的人第一次玩的话很难预料这地方会有个强调。个人感觉在这里用易读的梗先介绍下节奏型，歌曲后面如果有相同的部分再用这样的梗比较好！~我圓臉一大堆！~

00:46:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还有关于这样的梗我想重点说一下。。。这个梗比起以前的版本好像善良了一些？我记得以前好像是。。。00:50:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样把最后几note的间距增大的梗？个人来说我觉得后者比前者漂亮好多，视觉上增大的间距把后面的note和前面的note隔离开感觉也很干净利落，玩起来也是后者比前者更有味道些。当我看到在现在这个版本里你把这梗抹掉了很多的时候真是伤心欲绝23333。不过分的说这梗绝对是全图的亮点，不知道你后来为啥砍掉这么多。。。也许你是担心用太多会有点无聊？但是反复使用同一个梗并不是一件坏事啊。。。本来音乐这东西就是由很多重复构成的，而且音乐主题随着不断重复也会加强表现力www,所以对应的谱面也不必太担心过度使用同一梗。当然也得把握个度就是了。change~嘛。。重複太多了導致亮點不是亮點了。。。

01:00:440 (2,5) - 略坑2333 就是要坑死你~~>_>

01:14:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 直线型感觉不是太好看。。。實在想不出啥了。orz

01:43:550 (1) - 好 baka！~

02:09:012 (2,3,4) - （建议）这样的单点三连改成大间距的也比较好。大间距三连因为移动的时候要稳所以适合在乐句中放，给玩家流动着的感觉。单点的三连因为有停滞感适合在乐句间或乐曲有起伏比较大的时候放。举个正面例子的话，02:11:785 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的单点二连感觉上就很棒。位置不夠。orz

02:18:592 (1,2,3) - 不考虑做得更圆滑些么。。。坑！~

02:19:348 (1,2,3) - 同上麼

02:53:886 - 可以加个circle？虽然看歌词这里似乎是延长上个note的音，但是初见还是觉得有个circle比较顺fix~

thx mod！~

EDIT: change BG size to 16:9~

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-01-31T00:10:15+00:00

Really nice map. (:

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-01-31T00:12:11+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Really nice map. (:

^_^thx~

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-02-09T08:00:33+00:00

here's your ticket

[General]
video size is too big, it should be under 800x600
remove hitcircle1.png if it's useless
I suggest change all S sections to S:C3 sections, and add a soft-sliderslide3.wav. the sliders now sound really odd

[lucyfly's Normal]
01:01:701 - you need to change whistle to clap here imo, you missed a clap here
02:25:903 (1,2) - I suggest slider first and circle later, play much better
02:50:861 (2) - I suggest to use 1.1~1.2x spacing on this note, better to read the rhyme here

[Hard Collab]
00:21:869 - remove newcombo here
00:22:877 - ^, too many newcombo here makes the pattern really hard to read..

[Neko]
OD+1 plz. it's too low as an Insane diff..
00:55:272 - move the newcombo to 00:55:146 - , it should start at heavy beat, better to read the stream
01:10:777 (7) - unsnapped slider end
01:44:054 - if you want to keep this anti-jump, I highly suggest to add newcombo here, or the anti-jump is hard to read

[Athena]
00:20:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this's really too confusing, they're too hard to read. after 2 huge 1/4 jumps at 00:20:861 (1,2,1,2) - , 00:21:617 (1,2) - this one become normal spacing suddenly.. this's really hard to read. I suggest reduce 00:20:861 (1,2,1,2)'s spacing, make it stacked or use a normal spacing
00:44:810 (8,9) - this stack is kinda hard to read imo, I'd like to make them same as 00:19:096 (2,3,4) -
00:55:903 (1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read imo, I suggest stack it under 00:55:650 (5) - or use normal spacing here
01:00:945 - same as 00:44:810 (8,9) -
01:47:079 (4) - this one should repeat 1 time more, cuz the music become quiet suddenly at 01:47:457 -

that's all o.o

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-09T23:03:30+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket

[General]
video size is too big, it should be under 800x600 fix~
remove hitcircle1.png if it's useless fix~
I suggest change all S sections to S:C3 sections, and add a soft-sliderslide3.wav. the sliders now sound really odd fix~

[lucyfly's Normal]
01:01:701 - you need to change whistle to clap here imo, you missed a clap here fix~
02:25:903 (1,2) - I suggest slider first and circle later, play much better fix~
02:50:861 (2) - I suggest to use 1.1~1.2x spacing on this note, better to read the rhyme here fix~

[Hard Collab]
00:21:869 - remove newcombo here fix~
00:22:877 - ^, too many newcombo here makes the pattern really hard to read.. fix~

[Neko]
OD+1 plz. it's too low as an Insane diff.. fix~
00:55:272 - move the newcombo to 00:55:146 - , it should start at heavy beat, better to read the stream fix~
01:10:777 (7) - unsnapped slider end fix~
01:44:054 - if you want to keep this anti-jump, I highly suggest to add newcombo here, or the anti-jump is hard to read fix~

[Athena]
00:20:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this's really too confusing, they're too hard to read. after 2 huge 1/4 jumps at 00:20:861 (1,2,1,2) - , 00:21:617 (1,2) - this one become normal spacing suddenly.. this's really hard to read. I suggest reduce 00:20:861 (1,2,1,2)'s spacing, make it stacked or use a normal spacing fix~
00:44:810 (8,9) - this stack is kinda hard to read imo, I'd like to make them same as 00:19:096 (2,3,4) - fix~
00:55:903 (1) - this anti-jump is kinda hard to read imo, I suggest stack it under 00:55:650 (5) - or use normal spacing here fix~
01:00:945 - same as 00:44:810 (8,9) - fix~
01:47:079 (4) - this one should repeat 1 time more, cuz the music become quiet suddenly at 01:47:457 - fix~

that's all o.o

all fix~

EDIT: change BG。。。往下移了點。。sizs沒變~
EDIT2: change video same with another rank map~

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-02-19T02:34:25+00:00

M4M request from your queue~
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Rhythm
00::44:054 unnecessary green line

lucyfly's Normal
Placement
01:17:835(5) 1 bit away from there
Rhythm
00:31:953 unnecesarry green line
02:10:777^
Hit Sonud
00:08:760(4) delete finish at head, it's loud. maybe whistle better

Hard Collab
Placement
01:29:936(2,3,4) put like this? it's symmetrical and beautiful imo

SPOILER

01:37:499(1) make a blanket?

SPOILER

02:13:045(2) Ctrl+G? maybe it follows a flow
Rhythm
00:06:743 unnecessary green line
00:33:406(2) it's a bit weird for me, maybe like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:09:264(1) delete finish at end, if you listen carefully, the finish should be at 01:10:020.

Neko
Placement
01:24:642(2) not attached (1) nice

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:22:373 unnecessary green line
01:19:096 missing a note?

Athena
Placement
00:57:163(6) put NC better because this section is a beginning of KIAI TIME
Hit Sonud
02:04:726(2,4) add whistle like Collab Hard?
02:48:844(1) add finish at reverse. it follows your finish pattern.

sorry for tiny modding, overall fine and so good map. Good luck & star!

Poggo

1,502 posts

Joined January 2012

Poggo 2013-02-20T09:32:18+00:00

Hi from my mod queue ~

[General]

• Plz resize BG should be 1024x768 now it 1366x768
• On diff Athena you have another combo colors, check it
• Different kiai times~ Check it on hard collab

[Athena]

00:34:978 (1,2,3) - stack it better
01:20:356 - double slider sounds beter here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621088
01:22:625 - ^ same
01:31:701 - remove NC here
01:39:264(3) - put this note on x256 y 52
01:46:827 - hm I think will be better add note here, it will be more rhythmically and better follow for music
03:00:188 - volume 5%

[Neko]

02:10:777(5,6,7) - make this sliders identical and fix distance between sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621101 looks much better
02:40:020- add NC here
02:41:785 - remove nc here and add on slider 2
02:44:054 - same ^
02:47:835 - remove nc and add on next slider
02:49:600 - remove nc
02:50:104 - add NC

[Hard Collab]

00:46:071 - here better add NC bcz note 5 not visible and very hard to read
01:07:247 - remove NC
01:45:062 - add nc here >.<

[lucyfly's Normal]

00:10:272 - remove NC and add on next slider
00:12:793 - add NC
00:22:877 - add nc here and remove on next slider
00:30:693 - ^
00:34:726 - ^
00:36:743 - ^
00:55:650 - remove nc here and add on next slider

e.t.c~ Plz check all NC, Put nc on 2/1 on big white ticks, it will be better follow for music and hitsounds~

Easy looks fine~ Good luck~

Inyeon

1 post

Joined February 2012

Inyeon 2013-02-20T13:20:13+00:00

i love it, good job. ^^

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-02-20T14:58:29+00:00

必成一代神thread ？【点头

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-02-20T23:34:04+00:00

~

osu file format v12

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256,88,94726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,88,94978,2,0,B|380:96|412:72,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,20,95482,5,6,0:0:0:0:
504,104,95735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,200,95987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,296,96239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,348,96491,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,96743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,164,96995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,64,97247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,20,97499,6,0,B|272:56|260:96,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,152,98003,2,0,B|304:176|260:192|212:176|196:148,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,98760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,44,99012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,144,99264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,244,99516,6,0,B|28:280|40:320|84:344|120:340,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,100272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,340,100524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,288,100777,2,0,B|368:252|356:216,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,152,101281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,101533,6,0,B|412:96|444:120,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,260,102037,2,0,B|468:228|476:188,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,108,102541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,40,102793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,44,103045,2,0,B|332:64|324:104,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,204,103550,6,0,B|296:240|308:284|340:308|384:308,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,104306,2,0,B|356:267|321:290|281:288|248:272,1,150
256,140,105314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105566,12,2,107583,0:0:0:0:
109,276,124474,5,2,0:0:0:0:
277,296,124726,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,180,124978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,347,125230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125735,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,100,125987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,32,126239,2,0,B|68:44|20:112,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,200,126995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,160,127247,2,0,B|216:164|232:240,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,223,127751,2,0,B|288:236|232:288|288:312,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,309,128256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,348,128508,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,380,128760,2,0,B|484:324|452:260|382:250,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,348,129516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,257,129768,2,0,B|321:216|352:190,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,256,130272,2,0,B|464:208|448:152,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,151,130777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,36,131281,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,40,131407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,72,131533,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,136,131785,2,0,B|344:164|336:212,2,75,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,204,132541,6,0,B|200:216|192:276,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,133045,2,0,B|122:336|91:275|112:220,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,253,133802,2,0,B|245:245|277:281,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,134180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,364,134306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,280,134558,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,216,134810,2,0,B|436:198|492:222,2,75,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,135566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,364,135819,2,0,B|222:345|200:267|248:220,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,184,136575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,280,136827,2,0,B|316:336|244:372|192:332,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,137583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,100,137835,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,32,138087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,32,138592,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,172,138844,1,4,0:0:0:0:
156,172,139348,5,4,0:0:0:0:
28,96,139600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,100,140104,6,0,B|196:56|132:68,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,140482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,76,140608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,156,140861,2,0,B|28:208,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,252,141365,2,0,B|16:316,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,328,141869,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141995,12,6,145903,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155987,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
116,236,156995,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,192,157121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,157247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,92,157499,2,0,P|160:64|120:52,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,32,158003,6,0,B|24:112,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,156,158382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,204,158508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,236,158760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,316,159012,2,0,B|121:384|41:356,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,159768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,172,160020,2,0,B|180:188|184:280,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,160777,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,172,161029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,100,161281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,161533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,168,161785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
173,232,162037,6,0,B|125:247|56:201|69:144,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,162793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,40,163045,2,0,B|192:23|266:68|254:128,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,163802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,64,164054,2,0,B|272:40|344:56,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,52,164558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,144,164810,6,0,B|408:168|464:136,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,108,165188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,60,165314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,32,165440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,20,165566,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,124,165819,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,212,166071,2,8,B|352:304,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,166449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,372,166575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,124,166827,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,212,167079,2,0,B|264:304,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,328,167457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,372,167583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,300,167835,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,316,168087,2,0,B|28:364|88:400,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,168592,2,0,B|140:252|80:216,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,176,169096,2,0,B|40:128|120:104|168:152,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,235,169852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,240,170104,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,188,170230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,170356,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,236,170608,6,0,B|96:280|136:308,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,171113,2,0,B|256:250|284:210,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,171617,2,0,B|222:92|182:64,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,44,171995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,48,172121,1,6,0:0:0:0:
124,128,172373,6,0,B|144:181|144:181|201:180|241:234,1,168.750006437302,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,316,173382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,287,173634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,231,173886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,260,174138,1,4,0:0:0:0:
102,284,175524,5,2,0:0:0:0:
45,309,176911,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,177037,12,0,180188,0:0:0:0:

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-21T02:15:42+00:00

almost fix and submit~
thx urs mod~~~=w=

Jaizeh wrote:
i love it, good job. ^^

thx~support~

Zero__wind wrote:
必成一代神thread ？【点头

蝦米0.0?

;w;求bubble~~~
ball bubble;w;~

woairj

3 posts

Joined August 2012

woairj 2013-02-21T13:13:42+00:00

努力，虽然撞了~~但是好歌谱不嫌多~~~~~~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

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Athena Tennos 2013-02-22T19:54:05+00:00

woairj wrote:
努力，虽然撞了~~但是好歌谱不嫌多~~~~~~

;w;。。。i will

lovhin456

1,965 posts

Joined December 2008

lovhin456 2013-02-23T08:44:27+00:00

Hello and sorry for late T T

[Song's info]
- Source: This is from Sword Art Online? Wouldn't it be the source then? T T

[General]
- Fine

[Skin]
- The center of the spinner is not well-centered, the spinner is wobbling
- Hitcircle1 is necessary? lol
- Default-0 is cut and...weird
- 300k should be 300g and 300g should be 300k haha
- Size for spinner is actually 1023x692

[Easy]
- Perfect

[lucyfly's Normal]
- 01:06:239 Remove the new combo?
- 01:17:331 ^

[Hard Collab]
- Nice

[Neko]
- So good

[Athena]
- 00:22:121 Add a new combo
- 00:42:037 Remove new combo and add new combo on the next note?

Okay, so I'm hipnotized by this video, is so goooood and the song is so gooood too, and i have never seen this anime but this is just too gooooood
I will gladly bubble this! For a recheck contact me in-game or if time zones differ too much then send me a PM

Athena Tennos

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Athena Tennos 2013-02-23T09:28:54+00:00

lovhin456's mod~

lovhin456 wrote:
Hello and sorry for late T T

[Song's info]
- Source: This is from Sword Art Online? Wouldn't it be the source then? T T hmm...because the song isnt from SAO...it just for this video...;w;~

[General]
- Fine

[Skin]
- The center of the spinner is not well-centered, the spinner is wobbling
- Hitcircle1 is necessary? lol
- Default-0 is cut and...weird
- 300k should be 300g and 300g should be 300k haha
- Size for spinner is actually 1023x692

[Easy]
- Perfect

[lucyfly's Normal]
- 01:06:239 Remove the new combo?
- 01:17:331 ^

[Hard Collab]
- Nice

[Neko]
- So good

[Athena]
- 00:22:121 Add a new combo
- 00:42:037 Remove new combo and add new combo on the next note?

Okay, so I'm hipnotized by this video, is so goooood and the song is so gooood too, and i have never seen this anime but this is just too gooooood
I will gladly bubble this! For a recheck contact me in-game or if time zones differ too much then send me a PM[/color]

all fix~ and thx ur mod! and star!!~

lovhin456

1,965 posts

Joined December 2008

lovhin456 2013-02-27T02:55:57+00:00

Rechecked ~ Added a finish on Athena, that's it
Bubbled

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-27T02:57:38+00:00

lovhin456 wrote:
Rechecked ~ Added a finish on Athena, that's it
Bubbled

thx >_<~

ssssssssssssssss

214 posts

Joined August 2011

ssssssssssssssss 2013-02-27T03:48:09+00:00

哇终于泡了！

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2013-02-28T03:06:25+00:00

又泡

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-28T03:07:23+00:00

Flask wrote:
又泡

何來的又。。。

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-02-28T17:08:14+00:00

诶诶诶诶诶诶诶？？？？？？？
好厉害的样子！
我的还是没有泡
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-02-28T22:13:11+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
诶诶诶诶诶诶诶？？？？？？？
好厉害的样子！
我的还是没有泡
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

。。。。。。。。

-Neipezi

2,246 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-03-02T11:43:16+00:00

Ranked gogo!

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-03-02T11:53:54+00:00

又泡！

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-03-03T07:48:17+00:00

Athena Tennos wrote:
lovhin456 wrote:
Rechecked ~ Added a finish on Athena, that's it
Bubbled
thx >_<~

EDIT: I want to change Skin when the BAT mod it~

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-03-06T12:11:00+00:00

High SP bubble check:

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Skin]

Transparent spinner-osu & spinner-spin is not good :<

[Athena]

00:24:138 (1,2,3) - 做成直线？
00:25:146 (2) - 放到左边并且调整下后面00:25:398 (3) - 的形状？如图这样，(3)尾巴位置不变，感觉flow会更好点
SPOILER
00:26:155 (2,3,4) - 然后这三个我觉得stack不如排成向下的直线……
00:44:558 (7,8,9) - 这里相比于现在的节奏我觉得做成前面(5,6)那种2个1/4slider会更舒服～
SPOILER
01:00:693 (3,4,5) - ^
01:12:793 (4,5) - 交换下位置感觉flow会更好
01:36:743 (1,2,3,4) - 这里变间距梗的理由是…………？
01:47:079 (7) - 感觉一个连续折返不如做成note+1/4slider的节奏更干净，也会和你前面的跳梗衔接的更好，像这样：

特色梗让人印象很深刻这点很成功，不过二连的摆放“新人感”十足，抽空去看看飞翔的这张图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/52591 体会一下1/4的二连梗的使用:)

[Neko]

00:04:600 (8) - stream起点感觉有些别扭，把slider做成3/4长度如何？
00:14:306 (7,8) - 这里怎么突然不跟着前面的梗走了？停的位置有点莫名……
00:16:827 (2) - finish感觉没必要
00:19:348 (5) - 变成从下向上的方向来跟一下音乐的感觉如何？然后把后面的00:19:852 (1) - 挪动一下做个blanket :>
SPOILER
00:40:524 (4) - 放到208:200如何？要不跳的实在是太大了……
00:41:785 (4,6) - 交换下位置～?
00:44:810 (5) - 放到404:16试试看？
00:52:121 (3,1) - kiai段里这种stack感觉非常的影响flow……总之是不建议……试试这样的排列？
SPOILER
00:57:163 (1,2,3,4) - 新一段的高潮刚起步spacing一下子缩的这么小感觉很无理
01:02:205 (5,6,7) - 前后连的话稍微错开一下效果会更好一点～而且这种stack一般在3/4用的多……
01:05:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - 首先，(1,2,3)的三连间距变化比较无理；其次，(3,4)应该是一组，而(5)是和后面的(6)一组的，所以(5,6)的stack也很无理。
01:09:012 (5) - 类似于上面那条说的，把(5)和前面的(4)叠在一起会更好
01:11:785 (2,3) - 依然叠的很不好。(1,2,3)这组小跳要更合适，后面(4,5)的stack倒是没有问题
01:14:810 (4) - 考虑做成一个1/2slider来配一下vocal的变化？
01:36:995 (5) - 试试做成这样？
SPOILER
01:37:499 (6,7,8) - 接上面那组梗
SPOILER
01:43:549 (3,1,2,3) - 明明是这么煽情的地方……节奏下的真的好生硬啊……

-- 图片里的(1)是01:43:550 (1) - 的位置

说实话我觉得这diff的质量实在是有点……说是Insane没有Insane的打图时爽快的感觉……说是Hard难度又偏高……节奏和排列过于单调……唔……“技术上rankable”的程度……

[Hard Collab]

00:06:995 (2) - an 1/2 repeat slider is much better imo
00:16:827 (1,2) - i think repeat first is better than current~
00:21:617 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - this pattern may be too hard here. It's preformed nice in Insane, but not suitable for a Hard imo
00:33:466 (2) - stop it at 00:33:970 - ? (cut to 1/1 length)
01:02:205 (1) - bad blanket
01:03:087 (2,3) - also difficulty issue
01:07:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - triplets on white ticks are heard pretty odd. I think a repeat slider is enough~
01:31:701 (1,2) - combine to an 1/4 repeat slider
01:44:306 (2,3) - also.. combine to an 1/1 repeat slider?
02:07:247 (5,6) - this stack may break your flow
02:11:407 (2,3) - delete them, triplet here is unnecessary
02:38:003 (1,2,3) - i think an 1/1 slider is really enough

[lucyfly's Normal]

00:10:777 (1,2) - 这里sliderslide的音效很没必要
00:40:020 (1,2) - 这里要不2个slider，要不2个note，现在这样有点很不协调的感觉
00:44:054 (1,2) - ^，后面几处类似的也是……不多说了。而且这种节奏重复了太多次，感觉各种单调……就没别的想法了么？
02:24:894 (4) - 认真点做对称了不好么……
02:48:087 (2,3) - 边缘大面积的overlap了不好看

[Easy]

00:18:844 (1,2) - 去掉sliderslide

说真心的……上面三个diff真的感觉挺勉强的…………

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-03-06T20:07:23+00:00

bei chuo le /w\ =w=
i will come back to fix it~

~~话说l1234567叫飞翔么/w\〜~~

EDIT: change skin~

Scorpiour's mod~

Scorpiour wrote:
High SP bubble check: 又一次堆SP。。。orz

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Skin]
Transparent spinner-osu & spinner-spin is not good :<
;w;。。。嘛。在最後結束的時候勁量簡潔安靜的。。。不知道怎麼表達。orz

[Athena]
00:24:138 (1,2,3) - 做成直线？ fix~
00:25:146 (2) - 放到左边并且调整下后面00:25:398 (3) - 的形状？如图这样，(3)尾巴位置不变，感觉flow会更好点 fix~
SPOILER
00:26:155 (2,3,4) - 然后这三个我觉得stack不如排成向下的直线…… fix~
00:44:558 (7,8,9) - 这里相比于现在的节奏我觉得做成前面(5,6)那种2个1/4slider会更舒服～ fix~
SPOILER
01:00:693 (3,4,5) - ^ fix~
01:12:793 (4,5) - 交换下位置感觉flow会更好 fix~
01:36:743 (1,2,3,4) - 这里变间距梗的理由是…………？有別的想法求建議。。。orz我已經。。對著圖的靈感。枯竭了。。
01:47:079 (7) - 感觉一个连续折返不如做成note+1/4slider的节奏更干净，也会和你前面的跳梗衔接的更好，像这样： fix~
特色梗让人印象很深刻这点很成功，不过二连的摆放“新人感”十足，抽空去看看飞翔的这张图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/52591 体会一下1/4的二连梗的使用:) ;w;.....記得2連好像是最後一次大修的時候加的。orz。。柑桔沒救。orz。。。。飛翔神mapper orz。。。看了。但學不來。哭死。。。@飛翔。。。求教。。orz

[Hard Collab]
00:06:995 (2) - an 1/2 repeat slider is much better imo 不同點的節奏。。。
00:16:827 (1,2) - i think repeat first is better than current~ fix~
00:21:617 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - this pattern may be too hard here. It's preformed nice in Insane, but not suitable for a Hard imo just once time~
00:33:466 (2) - stop it at 00:33:970 - ? (cut to 1/1 length)
01:02:205 (1) - bad blanket
01:03:087 (2,3) - also difficulty issue
01:07:247 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - triplets on white ticks are heard pretty odd. I think a repeat slider is enough~
01:31:701 (1,2) - combine to an 1/4 repeat slider
01:44:306 (2,3) - also.. combine to an 1/1 repeat slider?
02:07:247 (5,6) - this stack may break your flow fix~
02:11:407 (2,3) - delete them, triplet here is unnecessary
02:38:003 (1,2,3) - i think an 1/1 slider is really enough
[lucyfly's Normal]
00:10:777 (1,2) - 这里sliderslide的音效很没必要 fix~
00:40:020 (1,2) - 这里要不2个slider，要不2个note，现在这样有点很不协调的感觉 fix~
00:44:054 (1,2) - ^，后面几处类似的也是……不多说了。而且这种节奏重复了太多次，感觉各种单调……就没别的想法了么？ ~~fix~~~no fix...GD mapper說這裡跟vocal。。
02:24:894 (4) - 认真点做对称了不好么…… fix~
02:48:087 (2,3) - 边缘大面积的overlap了不好看 fix~
[Easy]
00:18:844 (1,2) - 去掉sliderslide fix~
说真心的……上面三个diff真的感觉挺勉强的…………低難度。。能玩就行/w\。

thx mod~and chuo bubble /w\..加了3PS。。。感覺這個比星星還管用。。。囧

囧
My part almost fixed~

EDIT2: HARD Collab fixed~

Last edited by Athena Tennos 2013-03-10T02:26:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-03-07T02:08:46+00:00

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32,316,168087,2,0,B|28:364|88:400,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,168592,2,0,B|140:252|80:216,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,176,169096,2,0,B|40:128|120:104|168:152,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,235,169852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,240,170104,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,188,170230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,170356,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,236,170608,6,0,B|96:280|136:308,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,171113,2,0,B|256:250|284:210,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,171617,2,0,B|222:92|182:64,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,44,171995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,48,172121,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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224,316,173382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,287,173634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,231,173886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,260,174138,1,4,0:0:0:0:
102,284,175524,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-03-07T05:11:30+00:00

师傅你的diff
00:57:667 (3) - clap没了
01:19:600 (1) - 尾巴的clap没了
01:21:617 (2) - ^
01:40:777 (6) - ^
01:47:079 (7) - ^
02:52:373 (1) - 音效好像不对

01:35:735 - 这一段仅供参考 http://puu.sh/2dqG2 ，http://puu.sh/2dqHF 求不喷

兔兔
00:40:020 (2,3,4,5,1) - 关于SCO提到的这个我建议摆成这样 http://puu.sh/2dqne
还有这个 01:36:995 (5,6,7) - 我觉得把SCO的截图里的5反过来更好 http://puu.sh/2dqqo 后面那个7的位置你看着办吧我觉得8和1 2 叠在一起效果挺好

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2013-03-07T05:53:12+00:00

Zero__wind's mod~

Zero__wind wrote:
师傅你的diff 。。。。。
00:57:667 (3) - clap没了 fix~
01:19:600 (1) - 尾巴的clap没了 fix~
01:21:617 (2) - ^ fix~
01:40:777 (6) - ^ fix~
01:47:079 (7) - ^ fix~
02:52:373 (1) - 音效好像不对沒錯~

01:35:735 - 这一段仅供参考 http://puu.sh/2dqG2 ，http://puu.sh/2dqHF 求不喷唔。。。保留把~。。我已經。orz

thx ur mod~-=w=