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jesse7419

405 posts

Joined March 2011

jesse7419 2012-10-20T05:26:14+00:00

Athena Tennos wrote:
baka 干嘛不说中文！~ 我居然没发现orz、、。好囧/。\

突然覺得我英文好弱= ="

@XCrystal: You know me XD

TheVileOne

osu! Alumni

8,431 posts

Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2012-11-04T03:34:59+00:00

Easy

00:54:138 (3,4,5,1) - Make curve more consistent?
01:49:600 - Kiai is out of place here.
02:13:802 (1,2,1) - Uneven.
02:45:062 (4) - Have it curve in the opposite direction? http://puu.sh/1mcdi
02:55:423 - Unsnapped? The green line

Normal
Structure is good.

00:17:835 (12) - Left a couple units?
00:40:020 (2,3,4) - Doesn't look right to me. Personally I wouldn't have mapped it like that but if you must, make sure the blankets are perfect http://puu.sh/1mclS
00:45:062 (9,10,11) - I would have done this http://puu.sh/1mcog Looks better.
00:57:919 (28) - You shouldn't have a note here IMO. Skip this part and have one on the next white tick.

Hard
I probably missed something somewhere, but really this is a nice difficulty.

00:21:869 (1) - (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - So spammy. 00:22:247 (2) - please delete. I would use a more spread out pattern.
01:49:600 - Same comment about kiai

Neko
2nd half of the song was a lot more consistent and of higher quality than the first part of the song.

00:01:953 (6,7,8,1,2) - I don't like how this curve changes. It would be better if the curve didn't change so dramatically the way it does.
00:17:331 (3,4) - Greater than distance snap spacing is more comfortable for me here. It would break your consistency though :/ Try 1.2?
00:21:869 (2) - Add clap to start
00:39:012 (2,3,4,5,6) - For some reason this stream doesn't look right in game ._.
00:50:608 (4,5) - Please line up better. http://puu.sh/1mcYh
00:53:382 (8,9) - Is this jump really necessary?
00:57:667 (3,4) - Too close. Better if spacing was greater here.
01:00:944 (5,1,2,3) - Please use consistent spacing.
01:19:096 - Add note?
01:19:348 (1) - Stack on next note instead?
01:21:617 (5) - There's an extra move point in this. May actually want to split this slider into notes for a better transition. What do you think?
01:23:886 (4) - Slider could be better.
01:30:945 (4,5,6) - Spacing
01:42:037 (4,5) - Looks bad. Here's a better pattern http://puu.sh/1mddK
02:05:735 - You start this kiai MUCH better than first kiai
02:13:550 (4,5,6) - Doesn't match first part of the curve.
02:20:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kind of a boring pattern IMO.

Athena
The best difficulty in the set.

00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - I guess this works because of the higher stats of this difficulty.
01:19:600 (1) - Make the slider points even?
01:49:600 - kiai >.<
02:22:121 - Feels empty.

I'll leave it to someone who regularly plays these types of maps to do a more thorough check.

Have a star.

Last edited by TheVileOne 2012-11-04T04:44:41+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-04T03:41:28+00:00

TheVileOne's mod~

TheVileOne wrote:
Easy

00:54:138 (3,4,5,1) - Make curve more consistent? >_>!~
01:49:600 - Kiai is out of place here. ~~let me think about it~~~ fix!~
02:13:802 (1,2,1) - Uneven. fix!~
02:45:062 (4) - Have it curve in the opposite direction? http://puu.sh/1mcdi fix!~
02:55:423 - Unsnapped? The green line ~~???here not note or slider...~~~ lol isee.....fix!~

Normal
Structure is good.

00:17:835 (12) - Left a couple units?fix!~
00:40:020 (2,3,4) - Doesn't look right to me. Personally I wouldn't have mapped it like that but if you must, make sure the blankets are perfect fix!~http://puu.sh/1mclS
00:45:062 (9,10,11) - I would have done this http://puu.sh/1mcog Looks better.here no my part >_>~
00:57:919 (28) - You shouldn't have a note here IMO. Skip this part and have one on the next white tick. lol~ok~

Hard
I probably missed something somewhere, but really this is a nice difficulty. lol!~thx~

00:21:869 (1) - (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - So spammy. 00:22:247 (2) - please delete. I would use a more spread out pattern. QAQ..~
01:49:600 - Same comment about kiai fix!~

Neko
2nd half of the song was a lot more consistent and of higher quality than the first part of the song. >_>~

00:01:953 (6,7,8,1,2) - I don't like how this curve changes. It would be better if the curve didn't change so dramatically the way it does. fix!~
00:17:331 (3,4) - Greater than distance snap spacing is more comfortable for me here. It would break your consistency though :/ Try 1.2? hmm..idk...orz
00:21:869 (2) - Add clap to start fix!~
00:39:012 (2,3,4,5,6) - For some reason this stream doesn't look right in game ._. fix!~
00:50:608 (4,5) - Please line up better. http://puu.sh/1mcYh orz ok~
00:53:382 (8,9) - Is this jump really necessary? lool idk!~
00:57:667 (3,4) - Too close. Better if spacing was greater here. ithink it is necessary!~
01:00:944 (5,1,2,3) - Please use consistent spacing. fix!~
01:19:096 - Add note? yiyada!~
01:19:348 (1) - Stack on next note instead? fix!~
01:21:617 (5) - There's an extra move point in this. May actually want to split this slider into notes for a better transition. What do you think?hmm...idk orz~
01:23:886 (4) - Slider could be better. fix!~
01:30:945 (4,5,6) - Spacing lol!~
01:42:037 (4,5) - Looks bad. Here's a better pattern nope~ http://puu.sh/1mddK
02:05:735 - You start this kiai MUCH better than first kiai orz!~
02:13:550 (4,5,6) - Doesn't match first part of the curve. >_>!~
02:20:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kind of a boring pattern IMO. >_>!~

Athena
The best difficulty in the set. lol .

00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - I guess this works because of the higher stats of this difficulty. >_>~
01:19:600 (1) - Make the slider points even? hmm..what is slider point orz!~
01:49:600 - kiai >.< fix!~
02:22:121 - Feels empty. ~~im up to mischief!~~~

I'll leave it to someone who regularly plays these types of maps to do a more thorough check. lol~

Have a star.

thx ur mod!~>_<~and star!!~

vose

43 posts

Joined August 2010

vose 2012-11-08T00:25:55+00:00

OvO补tags~
作词作曲:Yuuki Odagiri

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-08T00:37:07+00:00

______VOSE's tag >_>!~

______VOSE wrote:
OvO补tags~
作词作曲:Yuuki Odagiri

thx let me remind...and fix~

Lizellota

467 posts

Joined October 2011

Lizellota 2012-11-08T04:22:25+00:00

this song....this anime...i'll mod it!!!!!!!!!

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-08T04:31:24+00:00

Lizellota wrote:
this song....this anime...i'll mod it!!!!!!!!!

lol！~thx~>_<~

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2012-11-08T10:36:35+00:00

00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - I love this pattern<3
nice insane.star~

Sagisawa-Yukari

216 posts

Joined March 2009

Sagisawa-Yukari 2012-11-08T11:27:54+00:00

Only suggest

Easy
开头不放个转盘么？
01:45:819 (1) - 考虑到简单难度这个转盘最好从01:46:071 - 开始

Normal
开头同easy
01:43:550 (3) - NC
02:25:903 (4) - NC
02:26:911 (1) - 如果你按照上面这么做了，这里去掉NC
02:29:936 (4) - whistle
02:52:625 - 02:53:634 -这里感觉太空了。。放个spinner什么的更好（？

Hard collab
建议OD-1
开头同前面难度
00:21:869 (1) - 去掉NC
00:22:121 (1) - ^
00:22:625 (1) - ^
01:31:701 (1,2) - 这里直接做成一个slider吧
01:35:735 (1) - 去掉NC
02:15:819 (4,5) - 这两个里选一个NC吧
02:50:608 (1) - 去掉NC
02:54:264 (6) - 这个NOTE去掉。。。

Neko
00:43:045 (8) - NC
01:33:466 (6) - NC
01:38:508 (1) - 这个NC去掉
02:52:373 - 这里最后一句歌词不做了么？

Athena
啊老样子开头同E,N啦
01:49:600 (1) - finish
感觉这个难度NC下的有点乱，最好重新再调整下

歌曲配合Video很带感，加油吧~xD

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-08T18:40:52+00:00

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:
差点被萌晕过去了....@w@

Normal
开头同easy fix~考虑到有视频，所以不加转盘了，跟着finish的声音加了几个Note
01:43:550 (3) - NC fix~
02:25:903 (4) - NC fix~
02:26:911 (1) - 如果你按照上面这么做了，这里去掉NC fix~~~~~~XD
02:29:936 (4) - whistle fix~感觉不太明显？
02:52:625 - 02:53:634 -这里感觉太空了。。放个spinner什么的更好（？ fix~最后那里其实没什么想法的，现在改成了slider

歌曲配合Video很带感，加油吧~xD

谢谢~XD
被萌到了...萌到了....@w@

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-09T05:08:10+00:00

lucyfly wrote:
Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:
差点被萌晕过去了....@w@

Normal
开头同easy fix~考虑到有视频，所以不加转盘了，跟着finish的声音加了几个Note
01:43:550 (3) - NC fix~
02:25:903 (4) - NC fix~
02:26:911 (1) - 如果你按照上面这么做了，这里去掉NC fix~~~~~~XD
02:29:936 (4) - whistle fix~感觉不太明显？
02:52:625 - 02:53:634 -这里感觉太空了。。放个spinner什么的更好（？ fix~最后那里其实没什么想法的，现在改成了slider

歌曲配合Video很带感，加油吧~xD
谢谢~XD
被萌到了...萌到了....@w@

不是不post么~>_>!~baka！~

Saten

Global Moderator

3,863 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2012-11-09T05:19:00+00:00

hello stack

[Athena]
01:49:600 (1) - a bit louder please?
02:04:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - please don't mute hitcircles D:
02:36:491 (2) - finish on start
02:36:995 (3) - remove finish on start
02:57:037 (1) - mute it from the beginning instead, it's kinda noisy

[Neko]
00:04:222 (7,8,1) - the NC here makes it really confusing. put the NC on (7) instead
00:54:138 (1,2,1) - plays kinda weird imo
01:13:045 (7,1) - why D: such patterns are very frustrating
01:38:760 (1) - why NC?
01:40:524 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead
01:45:314 (8,1) - again. it works well with a slider, but not with a hitcircle
02:08:256 (8,1) - NC on (8) instead
02:54:138 (1) - oh my, this is way too loud. ~~lower the volume~~ mute it from the beginning

[Hard Collab]
00:08:508 (5,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:16:575 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead
00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - I would avoid this in a hard difficulty
00:33:466 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ please avoid mass-stacking
01:10:777 (3) - remove whistle from end
01:31:701 (1,2) - avoid using this?
02:05:735 - Make the collab name fade in fogether with the break?
02:21:365 (5,6) - evil but ok
02:21:995 (1) - silence this a bit?
02:38:003 - same here about the collab name
02:54:138 (5,6) - why a double?
02:57:037 (1) - mute this

[Normal]
01:49:600 - start the break here
02:54:138 (1) - no spinner here?

[Easy]
01:49:600 (1) - why a note here? I would prefer non like in Normal. you should also fix the break then
02:54:138 (1) - mute this

That's all from me~
Good luck!

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-09T05:38:02+00:00

Kotone wrote:
00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - I love this pattern<3
nice insane.star~

thx Star！！！~>_<!!!!~

Sagisawa-Yukari's mod!~

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

Only suggest

Easy
开头不放个转盘么？ for~video~
01:45:819 (1) - 考虑到简单难度这个转盘最好从01:46:071 - 开始感觉现在这样不是应该更多分么orz...唔。

Hard collab
建议OD-1 fix！~
开头同前面难度
00:21:869 (1) - 去掉NC for more easy~
00:22:121 (1) - ^ ^
00:22:625 (1) - ^ ^
01:31:701 (1,2) - 这里直接做成一个slider吧 for more playable~more interesting>_>！~
01:35:735 (1) - 去掉NC remove NC~
02:15:819 (4,5) - 这两个里选一个NC吧 choose one to NC?~
02:50:608 (1) - 去掉NC remove NC~
02:54:264 (6) - 这个NOTE去掉。。。 remove this note~

Neko
00:43:045 (8) - NC nope~because if ch.!@$#%为什么习惯性说英文。orz。如果这里改的话后面所有的都要变。。所谓的一致性把~而且这个diff不是我做的>_>~居然做完扔给我不管了。。orz
01:33:466 (6) - NC ^
01:38:508 (1) - 这个NC去掉 remove next NC~
02:52:373 - 这里最后一句歌词不做了么？ hmm.....idk

Athena
01:49:600 (1) - finish ?这里有finish的说~
感觉这个难度NC下的有点乱，最好重新再调整下唔。。这个。。。。我会说我故意的么。orz

歌曲配合Video很带感，加油吧~xD lol thx！~

lol！！thx mod！！！~

Saten's mod!~

Saten wrote:
hello stack

[Athena]
01:49:600 (1) - a bit louder please? fix!~
02:04:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - please don't mute hitcircles D: fix!~
02:36:491 (2) - finish on start fix!~
02:36:995 (3) - remove finish on start fix!~
02:57:037 (1) - mute it from the beginning instead, it's kinda noisy fix!~

[Neko]
00:04:222 (7,8,1) - the NC here makes it really confusing. put the NC on (7) instead i think he has his own ideas~
00:54:138 (1,2,1) - plays kinda weird imo change!~
01:13:045 (7,1) - why D: such patterns are very frustrating orz...idk...
01:38:760 (1) - why NC? already remove it!~
01:40:524 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead hmm...i think he want to make consistency with 01:42:289 (5,1) -
01:45:314 (8,1) - again. it works well with a slider, but not with a hitcircle lol....this..just for more interestion?~./。\...idk~
02:08:256 (8,1) - NC on (8) instead just like 01:40:524 (6,1) -
02:54:138 (1) - oh my, this is way too loud. ~~lower the volume~~ mute it from the beginning fix!~

[Hard Collab]
00:08:508 (5,1) - NC on (5) instead hmm~i feel good~/。\~
00:16:575 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead ^
00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - I would avoid this in a hard difficulty only one place~>_<!~let's become more interesting!~
00:33:466 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ please avoid mass-stacking this feel very well!~lolololol!!~
01:31:701 (1,2) - avoid using this? >~<!!!~
02:57:037 (1) - mute this this one fix!~

[Easy]
01:49:600 (1) - why a note here? I would prefer non like in Normal. you should also fix the break then fix!~
02:54:138 (1) - mute this fix!~

That's all from me~
Good luck!

thx mod!!!~

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:
Hard collab
01:35:735 (1) - 去掉NC remove NC~
02:15:819 (4,5) - 这两个里选一个NC吧 choose one to NC?~
02:50:608 (1) - 去掉NC remove NC~
02:54:264 (6) - 这个NOTE去掉。。。 remove this note~

Last edited by Athena Tennos 2012-11-09T08:04:54+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2012-11-09T06:17:14+00:00

:3
说好的normal

[Normal]

00:08:256(3)只是建议如果是我的话大概会这样放
SPOILER
00:36:743(5)重复之前的节奏很不错
SPOILER
00:45:062(3)finish?
01:07:247(3)因为之前在01:05:230用了finish感觉这再加一个finish会比较好
02:15:819(6)^
01:41:029(3)这样可能会好些
SPOILER
02:22:877(1,2,3)感觉不好看这样摆试试
SPOILER
最后一点不考虑加个转盘么

就这样大概加油~

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-09T12:23:39+00:00

Saten wrote:
hello stack

[Normal]
01:49:600 - start the break herefix~
02:54:138 (1) - no spinner here?for video~no change~XD~

Good luck!

Melt wrote:
:3
说好的normal

[Normal]
00:08:256(3)只是建议如果是我的话大概会这样放
SPOILER
fix~
00:36:743(5)重复之前的节奏很不错
SPOILER
fix~之前没重复是因为，感觉连续三下会增加难度~
00:45:062(3)finish?fix~
01:07:247(3)因为之前在01:05:230用了finish感觉这再加一个finish会比较好fix~这个...感觉加不加都有点怪怪的...orz
02:15:819(6)^fix~
01:41:029(3)这样可能会好些
SPOILER
fix~
02:22:877(1,2,3)感觉不好看这样摆试试
SPOILER
no change~挡到视频了...虽然我原来的也不好看...orz
最后一点不考虑加个转盘么
no change~就让莉兹的笑容渐渐消失吧

就这样大概加油~

谢谢~~~

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2012-11-09T21:03:41+00:00

No change to my part of the diff ;___;

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2012-11-10T02:19:03+00:00

[General]
这如此强大的阵容

[Athena]
00:56:155 (1,2,3,4) - 都加上finish
01:43:550 (1) - 感觉可以再拉圆点
02:23:886 (1) - 白线停比较好
02:26:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这梗真是...如果没有这梗我觉得可以上9.5分

[Neko]
HP5→6
00:10:272 (2) - clap的时候音量调到50%,这部分都统一
00:56:155 (2,3,4,5) - 都加上finish
01:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - 我整个人都强迫症了
01:17:835 (7,1) - 感觉这个2hit不太好
02:38:003 (3,5,7,9) - 头都加上whistle，后面一样
02:48:844 (3,4,1) - 听起来好别扭
02:52:373 (8) - 不考虑拉个心型滑条么

[Hard Collab]
00:56:407 (6,8) - finish
02:54:138 (5,6) - why use 2hit....

[lucyfly's Normal]
难度名的‘要改成'...
00:34:978 (2,4,2) - 头whistle

[Easy]
滑条拉得好美观
02:05:735 (1,2) - 这种最好还是改改，新人可能读不懂

good luck,star

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2012-11-10T03:40:12+00:00

osu file format v10

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StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:1 year 2 months 20 days
TitleUnicode:1 year 2 months 20 days
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ArtistUnicode:BRIGHT
Creator:Athena Tennos
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Source:
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Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-10T04:30:27+00:00

lkx_shore's mod!~

lkx_shore wrote:
[General]
这如此强大的阵容 /.\

[Athena]
00:56:155 (1,2,3,4) - 都加上finish TOO noise >~<...
01:43:550 (1) - 感觉可以再拉圆点 fix!~
02:23:886 (1) - 白线停比较好 >~<
02:26:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这梗真是...如果没有这梗我觉得可以上9.5分我考虑下。orz这个的确有点。。。orz

[Neko]
HP5→6 fix!~
00:10:272 (2) - clap的时候音量调到50%,这部分都统一 fix!~
00:56:155 (2,3,4,5) - 都加上finish too noise~
01:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - 我整个人都强迫症了虾米~？
01:17:835 (7,1) - 感觉这个2hit不太好唔。。这个他有自己的想法吧。orz
02:38:003 (3,5,7,9) - 头都加上whistle，后面一样整体会变。。orz其实我是懒。orz
02:48:844 (3,4,1) - 听起来好别扭压歌词。。我觉得这里也满奇葩的。。。不过他应该有他的想法。orz
02:52:373 (8) - 不考虑拉个心型滑条么 >_>....太长了。。orz

[Hard Collab]
00:56:407 (6,8) - finish too noise~

[Easy]
滑条拉得好美观 lol thx~
02:05:735 (1,2) - 这种最好还是改改，新人可能读不懂 orz...这个到时候看XAT的说法把。。orz其实打起来蛮简单的。。找了几个新手试过。。orz[/color]

good luck,star

thx!!!~mod!!!~and!!!~star!!!~

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-10T10:13:12+00:00

lkx_shore wrote:
[General]
这如此强大的阵容 orz....

[lucyfly's Normal]
难度名的‘要改成'...>_> 嗯嗯，baka快改（slap
00:34:978 (2,4,2) - 头whistlefix~虽然听不出区别（slap

good luck,star

谢谢~~~~OvO

Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2012-11-13T08:24:00+00:00

Easy

00:00:693 - 开头红线声音太大
00:39:012 (4) - finish

lucyfly's Normal

00:40:020 (2,3) - finish
02:09:265 (2) - 1/8滑条试试

Hard Collab

00:16:827 - finish音量小点吧，有点怪的感觉
00:28:928 (1) - 去掉finish好些
00:39:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用绿线渐强音效更好
00:43:045 (1) - whistle好些
00:47:079 - ^
00:51:113 (1) - ^
00:59:180 - whistle

Neko

吐槽：橘子貓刚开始就这直接上这节奏总感觉歌曲前半段缺失的样子，有点郁闷的赶脚

00:12:793 - 到 00:14:558 - 建议加绿线造成渐强音效的效果
00:14:810 (1) - finish
00:33:466 (2) - 把3包好
00:52:373 (4) - NC
01:07:247 (7) - 我感觉finish好点
01:36:491 (4) - 把3包好
02:51:617 (6) - NC

Athena

00:26:911 (1,2,1,2) - 两个2有点...我建议换个摆法试试，因为这两个note在蓝线跳起来有点不是很适合的样子尤其是第二个1...
00:39:768 (8,1,2,3,4) - 有必要的话用ctrl+d弄5边形能好看点？
02:15:062 (3,4,5) - 跟歌词就不变，跟节奏就删掉。
02:54:138 (1) - 建议和2 3在一起排列，别和2 3分开，不然有些坑

小雅GL

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-13T09:45:00+00:00

-[NYAN]- wrote:
lucyfly's Normal

00:40:020 (2,3) - finishfix~
02:09:265 (2) - 1/8滑条试试fix~换了一条比较简单的slider

小雅GL

\NYAN大人/

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-14T00:20:48+00:00

[box=-[NYAN:dab5e]-'s mod~]

-[NYAN]- wrote:
Easy

00:00:693 - 开头红线声音太大 fix~
00:39:012 (4) - finish fix~

Neko

吐槽：橘子貓刚开始就这直接上这节奏总感觉歌曲前半段缺失的样子，有点郁闷的赶脚 /。\

00:12:793 - 到 00:14:558 - 建议加绿线造成渐强音效的效果 fix~
00:14:810 (1) - finish fix~
00:33:466 (2) - 把3包好 fix~
00:52:373 (4) - NC fix~
01:07:247 (7) - 我感觉finish好点 fix~
01:36:491 (4) - 把3包好 fix~
02:51:617 (6) - NC fix~

Athena

00:26:911 (1,2,1,2) - 两个2有点...我建议换个摆法试试，因为这两个note在蓝线跳起来有点不是很适合的样子尤其是第二个1... fix~
00:39:768 (8,1,2,3,4) - 有必要的话用ctrl+d弄5边形能好看点？话说这个上次修过。orz~
02:15:062 (3,4,5) - 跟歌词就不变，跟节奏就删掉。 no change~
02:54:138 (1) - 建议和2 3在一起排列，别和2 3分开，不然有些坑 fix~

小雅GL lol thx!~

-[NYAN]- wrote:
Hard Collab

00:16:827 - finish音量小点吧，有点怪的感觉 the finish volume feel a little weird~,maybe can more lower..
00:28:928 (1) - 去掉finish好些 remove finish?~
00:39:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用绿线渐强音效更好 add green line for gradually increase volume ?~
00:43:045 (1) - whistle好些 add whistle?~
00:47:079 - ^ ^
00:51:113 (1) - ^ ^
00:59:180 - whistle ^

lucyfly wrote:
-[NYAN]- wrote:
lucyfly's Normal

00:40:020 (2,3) - finishfix~
02:09:265 (2) - 1/8滑条试试fix~换了一条比较简单的slider

小雅GL

\NYAN大人/

baka!~改完把diff放上来呀~bakabaka！~

Last edited by Athena Tennos 2012-11-14T01:36:08+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2012-11-14T00:43:01+00:00

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: www.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39768
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:1 year 2 months 20 days
TitleUnicode:1 year 2 months 20 days
Artist:BRIGHT
ArtistUnicode:BRIGHT
Creator:Athena Tennos
Version:Hard Collab
Source:
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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148,344,68760,2,0,B|123:317|131:273,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,244,69264,6,0,B|60:192|128:164|180:200,2,150,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,280,70524,1,0,0:0:0
220,264,70777,2,0,B|280:196|224:124,1,150,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,108,71533,5,2,0:0:0
168,192,71785,2,0,B|236:252|308:196,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,136,72541,1,0,0:0:0
240,48,72793,1,10,0:0:0
240,136,73045,1,0,0:0:0
196,216,73298,6,0,B|136:252,2,37.5,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,216,73802,2,0,B|344:252,2,37.5,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,136,74306,2,0,B|240:32,2,75,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,136,75062,1,0,0:0:0
372,216,75314,1,4,0:0:0
256,348,75819,6,0,B|216:352|192:316,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,188,76323,2,0,B|84:184|108:220,1,75
72,336,76827,2,0,B|36:312|40:272,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,152,77331,2,0,B|180:168|183:211,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,300,77835,5,8,0:0:0
92,240,78087,1,2,0:0:0
48,160,78340,2,0,B|12:92,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,80,78844,2,0,B|156:32,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,100,79348,2,0,B|288:124,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,188,79852,5,8,0:0:0
280,248,80104,1,2,0:0:0
192,236,80356,1,0,0:0:0
256,172,80608,1,2,0:0:0
348,188,80861,1,8,0:0:0
360,276,81113,2,0,B|368:352,2,75,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,188,81869,5,8,0:0:0
140,68,82373,1,0,0:0:0
96,148,82625,2,0,B|56:212,2,75,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,224,83382,5,4,0:0:0
468,112,83886,1,8,0:0:0
376,336,84390,1,0,0:0:0
324,260,84642,2,0,B|284:196,2,75,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,344,85398,5,4,0:0:0
60,116,85903,1,8,0:0:0
0,292,86407,2,0,B|36:312|72:300,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,244,86911,2,0,B|176:224|140:236,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,352,87415,6,0,B|272:376|356:340|360:300,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,184,88171,1,0,0:0:0
128,64,88676,1,0,0:0:0
256,268,89180,1,0,0:0:0
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184,216,89936,2,0,B|120:256,1,75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,340,90440,2,0,B|320:380,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,244,90945,2,0,B|399:170,1,75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,88,91449,1,4,0:0:0
136,108,91701,6,0,B|100:128,1,37.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,168,91953,1,8,0:0:0
80,288,92205,1,0,0:0:0
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256,88,93466,6,0,B|292:103|305:142,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,288,93970,2,0,B|219:272|206:233,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,152,94474,1,0,0:0:0
256,88,94726,1,0,0:0:0
340,88,94978,2,0,B|380:96|412:72,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,20,95482,5,6,0:0:0
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348,348,96491,5,0,0:0:0
380,264,96743,1,2,0:0:0
388,164,96995,1,8,0:0:0
348,64,97247,1,2,0:0:0
256,20,97499,6,0,B|272:56|260:96,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,152,98003,2,0,B|304:176|260:192|212:176|196:148,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,44,98760,1,2,0:0:0
36,44,99012,1,8,0:0:0
100,144,99264,1,2,0:0:0
36,244,99516,6,0,B|28:280|40:320|84:344|120:340,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,288,100272,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,100524,1,0,0:0:0
348,288,100777,2,0,B|368:252|356:216,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,152,101281,1,0,0:0:0
372,108,101533,6,0,B|412:96|444:120,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
492,260,102037,2,0,B|468:228|476:188,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
512,108,102541,1,0,0:0:0
456,40,102793,1,0,0:0:0
368,44,103045,2,0,B|332:64|324:104,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,204,103550,6,0,B|296:240|308:284|340:308|384:308,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,232,104306,2,0,B|356:267|321:290|281:288|248:272,1,150
256,140,105314,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,105566,12,2,107583,0:0:0
256,192,109600,5,4,0:0:0
256,192,125735,5,4,0:0:0
220,100,125987,1,8,0:0:0
148,32,126239,2,0,B|68:44|20:112,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,200,126995,1,2,0:0:0
144,160,127247,2,0,B|216:164|232:240,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
227,223,127751,2,0,B|288:236|232:288|288:312,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
282,309,128256,1,8,0:0:0
372,348,128508,5,2,0:0:0
464,380,128760,2,0,B|484:324|452:260|380:248,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,348,129516,1,2,0:0:0
328,260,129768,2,0,B|316:204|380:176,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,256,130272,2,0,B|464:208|448:152,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
447,151,130777,1,2,0:0:0
292,36,131281,5,8,0:0:0
252,40,131407,1,0,0:0:0
228,72,131533,1,2,0:0:0
304,136,131785,2,0,B|344:164|336:212,2,75,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,204,132541,6,0,B|200:216|192:276,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,220,133045,2,0,B|88:280|120:332|184:348,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
197,253,133802,2,0,B|245:245|277:281,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,316,134180,1,0,0:0:0
276,364,134306,1,8,0:0:0
324,280,134558,5,2,0:0:0
396,216,134810,2,0,B|436:198|492:222,2,75,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,280,135566,1,2,0:0:0
276,364,135819,2,0,B|222:345|200:267|248:220,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,184,136575,1,2,0:0:0
324,280,136827,2,0,B|316:336|244:372|192:332,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,248,137583,1,2,0:0:0
232,100,137835,5,4,0:0:0
108,32,138087,1,8,0:0:0
108,32,138592,1,2,0:0:0
156,172,138844,1,4,0:0:0
156,172,139348,1,4,0:0:0
28,96,139600,1,2,0:0:0
224,100,140104,6,0,B|196:56|132:68,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,64,140482,1,0,0:0:0
72,76,140608,1,2,0:0:0
112,156,140861,2,0,B|28:208,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,252,141365,2,0,B|16:316,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
0,328,141869,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,141995,12,6,145903,0:0:0
32,32,158003,6,0,B|24:112,1,75,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,156,158382,1,0,0:0:0
16,204,158508,1,8,0:0:0
104,248,158760,1,2,0:0:0
164,324,159012,2,0,B|104:384|20:364,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
76,280,159768,1,2,0:0:0
88,184,160020,2,0,B|168:200|172:292,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
76,280,160777,5,2,0:0:0
88,184,161029,1,0,0:0:0
152,112,161281,1,2,0:0:0
244,84,161533,1,8,0:0:0
232,180,161785,1,2,0:0:0
156,240,162037,6,0,B|111:262|39:211|52:152,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,148,162793,1,0,0:0:0
140,52,163045,2,0,B|184:29|256:80|244:140,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,148,163802,1,2,0:0:0
208,72,164054,2,0,B|264:48|336:64,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
318,60,164558,1,8,0:0:0
372,144,164810,6,0,B|408:168|464:136,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,108,165188,1,0,0:0:0
460,60,165314,1,2,0:0:0
420,32,165440,1,0,0:0:0
372,20,165566,1,10,0:0:0
368,124,165819,5,2,0:0:0
308,212,166071,2,8,B|352:304,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,328,166449,1,0,0:0:0
392,372,166575,1,8,0:0:0
248,124,166827,5,2,0:0:0
308,212,167079,2,0,B|264:304,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,328,167457,1,0,0:0:0
224,372,167583,1,8,0:0:0
136,300,167835,5,2,0:0:0
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106,235,169852,1,2,0:0:0
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144,44,171995,1,0,0:0:0
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Star Stream

2,031 posts

Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2012-11-14T09:28:42+00:00

From my queue

[General]

Inconsistency in Tags

[Easy]

02:06:743 (2) - it's a bit confusing imo, i'd make the slider like ⌒ instead

[Normal]

00:32:709 (4) - don't overlap
00:39:516 (1) - delete it to follow vocal only, it's bothering my ears

[Hard]

00:21:869 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - too confusing for a hard diff imo, mayby find other way
00:34:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - confusing too, at least NC at 5 plz
00:38:003 (2,3,4) - drag them and stack 2 on 1's tail
00:46:071 (4) - NC for readability for 00:46:449 (5) -
00:58:424 - feels too empty, add a beat here
01:00:693 (4) - there's no reason to make it as 3/4, make it as a 1/2 slider
01:11:281 - no sense, remove finish
01:49:600 (1) - delete and start break from here
02:10:272 (5) - same as 01:00:693 (4) -
02:11:029 - add a beat here
02:11:281 (1,2,3) - make them as a slider(1/2 and 1 arrow)
02:18:592 (3,5) - NC

[Neko]

00:06:239 (2) - overmapped, it should be 1/4

nothing to complain, but i'm not saying it's good. it actually needs more works

Good luck then~

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-14T09:48:07+00:00

Star Stream's mod~

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags fix!~
[Easy]
02:06:743 (2) - it's a bit confusing imo, i'd make the slider like ⌒ instead hmm let me think about it~
[Hard]
00:21:869 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - too confusing for a hard diff imo, mayby find other way only this place~;_;
00:46:071 (4) - NC for readability for 00:46:449 (5) - fix~
01:49:600 (1) - delete and start break from herefix~
[Neko]
00:06:239 (2) - overmapped, it should be 1/4 hmm i think that's ok...because it is slider~
nothing to complain, but i'm not saying it's good. it actually needs more works =w=i think too~

Good luck then~

thx mod~

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-14T09:54:06+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags
[Normal]
00:32:709 (4) - don't overlap fix~
00:39:516 (1) - delete it to follow vocal only, it's bothering my ears
fix~

Good luck then~

THX~

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2012-11-15T00:55:20+00:00

Hi~ mod 4 picture-finding~

[General]
第一个kiai前的clap可以用响指来替代
然后不是怂恿你加绿线……其实default的whistle很适合这首歌（指的是E和N基本就是啪啪啪）
第一个break在01:48:592 - 开始比较好？

[Easy]
02:05:735 (1,2) - 这是Easy所以这么摆就容易搞混不必要死抱着对称

SPOILER

差不多这样
02:38:003 (1,2) - 这边也是。怀疑你复制粘贴然后Ctrl+H

[Normal]
有点建议CS-1，因为DS叉这么大有点不爽。（其实是我沙包，按不到note）
然后好像基本上都没加音效包括clap……有点建议加上。
00:56:155 - finish
00:56:660 (3) - remove finish
01:40:524 (2) - stack 01:39:012 (6) - （如果叠不上，稍微移动一下01:39:516 (1) - ）

[Collab Hard]
00:21:869 (1,1,2,3,1) - AR7读图困难无法直视建议去掉1/4
02:10:777 (6) - Can't be read in HD mode. Please manual stack (move to somewhere e.g. x=436, y=140 so that it can be seen)
02:18:592 (3,5) - NC?
02:44:054 (5) - unrankable overlap. make sure the slider beginning is not overlapped by other slider bodies.

[Neko]
00:00:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一串不仅没加音效而且softnormal的声音也太大难以直视（闻）。建议要么加音效要么降低音量到30%，要么和其他难度统一（也就是删掉）
00:10:272 (2) - 这什么用意……如果要clap的话用S:C2 （后面的到21s左右最好都改掉）
00:13:045 (2,4,6,8) - 这四个的音量降低到40%，S:C2防止太过平淡
00:39:012 (2,3,4,5,6) - 排列建议重搞
00:40:020 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个可以用anti-jump来提示大家要进入鬼畜世界了
01:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - 怀疑你顺着前面的排列就这么摆了建议重新弄对称
02:16:323 (10,1,2,3,4) - 这5个可以用Ctrl+Shift+D弄一个正五边形
02:21:995 (1) - 在02:25:903 - 结束
02:48:844 (3,4,1) - 那个“は”是在02:49:199 - 左右出来的还是建议合并不然根本不搭调

[Atan]
00:07:751 (6) - 这里最好不要在白线用1/4
00:15:819 (5) - ^
00:25:903 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - 这段排列有点五彩斑斓怀疑摆开一点好看些
00:39:768 (8,1,2,3,4) - 可以Ctrl+Shift+D排成正五边形
01:20:356 (2,3) - 这里最好不要在白线用1/4
02:54:138 (1) - 基本看不清是往左还是往右建议分开来些或者用diff specific SB加一个箭头指示方向

mod完……轻喷

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-15T01:07:38+00:00

Flower's mod~

Flower wrote:
Hi~ mod 4 picture-finding~

[General]
第一个kiai前的clap可以用响指来替代唔。。硬伤。orz我找找看~orz
然后不是怂恿你加绿线……其实default的whistle很适合这首歌（指的是E和N基本就是啪啪啪） 0.0。。。。。。orzorzorozrozorozrozrorz
第一个break在01:48:592 - 开始比较好？压重音>_>

[Easy]
02:05:735 (1,2) - 这是Easy所以这么摆就容易搞混不必要死抱着对称我只是懒罢了。。。现在有图有真相！fix！~
SPOILER
差不多这样
02:38:003 (1,2) - 这边也是。怀疑你复制粘贴然后Ctrl+H 不用怀疑>_>就是的~fix~

[Collab Hard]
00:21:869 (1,1,2,3,1) - AR7读图困难无法直视建议去掉1/4 嘛。。一个地方而已。。而且断了可以重来~。才22s。。最后突然放这个我觉得会被黑的很惨。orz

[Neko]
00:00:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一串不仅没加音效而且softnormal的声音也太大难以直视（闻）。建议要么加音效要么降低音量到30%，要么和其他难度统一（也就是删掉） fix~30%
00:10:272 (2) - 这什么用意……如果要clap的话用S:C2 （后面的到21s左右最好都改掉） fix~
00:13:045 (2,4,6,8) - 这四个的音量降低到40%，S:C2防止太过平淡 fix~
00:39:012 (2,3,4,5,6) - 排列建议重搞 fix~
00:40:020 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个可以用anti-jump来提示大家要进入鬼畜世界了好！~ fix~
01:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - 怀疑你顺着前面的排列就这么摆了建议重新弄对称嘛嘛~转个角度就堆成了。。~
02:16:323 (10,1,2,3,4) - 这5个可以用Ctrl+Shift+D弄一个正五边形这个他故意的把。orz~
02:21:995 (1) - 在02:25:903 - 结束 fix~
02:48:844 (3,4,1) - 那个“は”是在02:49:199 - 左右出来的还是建议合并不然根本不搭调 fix~

[Atan]
00:07:751 (6) - 这里最好不要在白线用1/4 就要QAQ...
00:15:819 (5) - ^ ：P
00:25:903 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - 这段排列有点五彩斑斓怀疑摆开一点好看些 fix~
00:39:768 (8,1,2,3,4) - 可以Ctrl+Shift+D排成正五边形 fix~
01:20:356 (2,3) - 这里最好不要在白线用1/4 QAQ..
02:54:138 (1) - 基本看不清是往左还是往右建议分开来些或者用diff specific SB加一个箭头指示方向 fix~

mod完……轻喷

HakuNoKaemi

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Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2012-11-17T13:35:48+00:00

Testplay mod
Remember I will say only thing that bother me, and mention pattern that bothered me a single time ( so, if you used that pattern many times, please check all similar pattern )

[General]

Since the hitcircle border is white you should use the white Sliderborder. Add
```
SliderBorder: 255.255,255
```
under the "[Colours]" section in every .osu
Though most non-significant, Video Offset seems -20ms
```
Video,-20,"www.flv"
```
Somebody could have problems with the fact the spinner-circle center is covered by the spinner meter. You can move the center in

[Easy]

00:47:079 (3) - Ctrl+J it and move at the same position
02:17:835 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do as you did in 01:09:264 (1,2,3,4,5)?

[lucifly's Normal]

There are part you can pretty much use a bit more of 1/2 (this is a 119 BPM song too), plus the score spread will be perfect if you can make this give 2mil ( +0,4mil ). Especially in the starting part which is mapped with many 1/1

02:48:087 (4) - Why not use one less repeat and do this ?

SPOILER

116,121,168087,2,0,P|77:216|107:324,1,210.000000894069
164,284,169096,2,0,P|146:224|180:156,1,140.000000596046

[Hard Collab]

In patterns like (00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1)) you should move note as they more visible. In that case moving 00:22:625 (1) - like ↓ should suffice
SPOILER
00:55:903 (4) - Use an NC here
01:02:205 (1,2,3) - It isn't better to simply follow the voice? with a simple 1/1 slider
There are parts like 01:07:247 (1,2,3,1,2) - where you actually overmapped where you shouldn't as there is a non-overmapped stream in the music.
02:07:247 (5,6,7) - You compress the spacing instead of stacking and change (6) shape to the same as (5) but mirrored
SPOILER

[Neko]

00:04:600 (8,1) - You can map the 1/8 triplet with a 1/8 repeating slider

[Athena]

When you use pattern like this (00:23:886 (1,1,2,3,1,1)) please move the note so they're more visible. In that case moving 00:24:642 (1) like ↓ should suffice
SPOILER
00:27:793 (2) - This note isn't really needed. (It's overmapped)
02:34:222 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's pretty much a bit ugly graphically, plus I can't somehow read this.... move them like this?

Kanari

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Kanari 2012-11-17T16:11:29+00:00

~

[General]
- lucy.png and Orange.png are not in use so you can remove them ~
- In the Athena diff, there is a circle with a finish at 01:49:600, so you should add a circle with a finish to all the other diffs.

[Easy]
00:41:029 - 01:13:298 - These claps are too loud. ;w;
01:15:314 - 01:15:314 - There a kiai time here but it is only on this diff.

[lucufly's Normal]
- How dont you use any hitsounds? D:
You only use finishes ;w; Add some claps
- Circle Size -1
01:40:524 (2) - Stack with 01:39:012 (6)

[Neko]
- Set music track lead-in to 2
00:00:693 - 00:06:491 - Use some whistles.
00:14:306 (7) - Lower the clap.
00:18:340 (2) - ^
00:43:298 (9) - New combo ?
01:33:466 (6) - ^

~
>w<

Athena Tennos

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Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-18T07:23:31+00:00

HakuNoKaemi's mod!~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
Testplay mod
Remember I will say only thing that bother me, and mention pattern that bothered me a single time ( so, if you used that pattern many times, please check all similar pattern ) =w=~

[General]
Since the hitcircle border is white you should use the white Sliderborder. Add
SliderBorder: 255.255,255
under the "[Colours]" section in every .osu fix!~
Though most non-significant, Video Offset seems -20ms fix!~
Video,-20,"www.flv"
Somebody could have problems with the fact the spinner-circle center is covered by the spinner meter. You can move the center in orz~let me try to fix it..orz
[Easy]
00:47:079 (3) - Ctrl+J it and move at the same position fix!~
02:17:835 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do as you did in 01:09:264 (1,2,3,4,5)? nice~ fix!~
[Hard Collab]
In patterns like (00:21:617 (1,1,1,2,3,1)) you should move note as they more visible. In that case moving 00:22:625 (1) - like ↓ should suffice nice idea!~ fix!~
SPOILER
00:55:903 (4) - Use an NC here fix!~

[Neko]
00:04:600 (8,1) - You can map the 1/8 triplet with a 1/8 repeating slider hmm...i think he has some different think about himslfe~
[Athena]
When you use pattern like this (00:23:886 (1,1,2,3,1,1)) please move the note so they're more visible. In that case moving 00:24:642 (1) like ↓ should suffice hmm...for more hard~
SPOILER
00:27:793 (2) - This note isn't really needed. (It's overmapped) change!~
02:34:222 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's pretty much a bit ugly graphically, plus I can't somehow read this.... move them like this? change!~

lol thx mod !!!~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx's mod!!~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
~

[General]
- lucy.png and Orange.png are not in use so you can remove them ~ fix!~
- In the Athena diff, there is a circle with a finish at 01:49:600, so you should add a circle with a finish to all the other diffs. just Insane~because it's the most difficult diff..........why my english look sooooooo!@#$%^&^&^$#~

[Easy]
00:41:029 - 01:13:298 - These claps are too loud. ;w; fix!~
01:15:314 - 01:15:314 - There a kiai time here but it is only on this diff. fix!~

[Neko]
- Set music track lead-in to 2 already change~!~
00:00:693 - 00:06:491 - Use some whistles. fix!~
00:14:306 (7) - Lower the clap. fix!~
00:18:340 (2) - ^ ^
00:43:298 (9) - New combo ?nice idea!~ fix!~
01:33:466 (6) - ^ ^

~
>w<

lol thx mod!!!!~

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2012-11-18T08:41:22+00:00

For the only thing you didn't accept: technically it's harder like I suggested since of the larger jump

Double Star anyway :3

Athena Tennos

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Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-18T09:15:47+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
For the only thing you didn't accept: technically it's harder like I suggested since of the larger jump

Double Star anyway :3

lolololol！！~thx！~

lucyfly

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lucyfly 2012-11-18T09:51:54+00:00

=口=...

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2012-11-21T09:02:59+00:00

朋友推薦我這map~
我覺得做得很不錯>w< 歌又好聽~~

所以...偷射個星星x3! rank加油唷<3

mintong89

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Joined July 2011

mintong89 2012-11-21T09:15:51+00:00

好好听 ♪
所以就来送个星~ x3

加油哦 <3

lucyfly

73 posts

Joined February 2011

lucyfly 2012-11-21T15:32:15+00:00

謝謝~~all ~X3~

Athena Tennos

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Topic Starter

Athena Tennos 2012-11-21T17:23:30+00:00

yanlu wrote:
朋友推薦我這map~
我覺得做得很不錯>w< 歌又好聽~~

所以...偷射個星星x3! rank加油唷<3

/。\！！！lol！！！thx！！！！

mintong89 wrote:
好好听 ♪
所以就来送个星~ x3

加油哦 <3

lol＞_＜lol〜thx so much〜 :

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2012-11-24T14:18:30+00:00

General
稍微傲娇了一下不想看GD诶
但是又不知道那个Neko难度是不是师傅做的=。=【暂时先默认为不是（>.<）
可以随时叫我回来把所有diff都看一遍嘿嘿
哦还有就是这个sp都这么高了【我知道得太晚了……】我就不射我那屈指可数的星星了昂T^T
这质量Bubble妥妥儿的没问题的时间问题而已

Athena
00:26:659 这个地方开始我觉得可读性有点差觉得可以把new combo的使用改一下
00:27:289 (3) 加new combo 00:27:415 (1) 去掉new combo
00:27:793 (2) 加new combo 00:27:919 (1) 去掉new combo
效果看上去就是让每一个在中间的note都和它之前的滑条是不同的颜色不然有点不好读图

00:53:129 (1 , 2 , 3) 这个地方的布局为什么不和前面两个相似梗一样？两个滑条首尾相接
不过其实我比较喜欢这个地方的这种都不重叠的摆放不太喜欢前面的那种……

01:09:012 (6 , 7) 或许这个地方的弧度可以稍微smooth一点？maybe like (6)：x:284, y:156 ; (7)：x:320, y:128 ?
01:42:415 (3) maybe x:340, y:216 ?

02:40:272 (1 ,2 ,3) 这个地方间距突然变大了=。= 改不改所谓不大啦改得话就是把这个3连打之前那两个单拍的距离缩短一点~

Easy
就觉得75%的音量 clap的声音有点大像Athena难度一样设成60%感觉舒服一些其他部分的音量就按相对关系适当降低一点就好
哦还有这个 02:38:003 (1) 不需要CTRL+G一下么感觉在easy里面会不会难了一点

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