Quilt wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

00:22:499 (1,2) - hm. add 1/2 slider (1 reverse)

00:23:507 (3,4) - ^

Saten wrote:

[Mickey]
resnap notes lol k
Please use AR 5. Also, I find low spacing harder than high spacing. Most will press the notes too fast. The way you use 0,5x on those is really weird imo lol no change xD
02:57:832 (1,2,3) - you shouldn't stack when your usual pattern doesn't include them k fixed
03:38:042 - snap the break to 03:38:168 - ok
04:29:596 (5,6,7,1) - this isn't very friendly, since the spacing is lower that the slider velocity here. And you made a straight light which doesn't make it any better.oh ok~

Yusura Sakurae wrote:

Nice!!!!!!!!!! Kotoko~


Good Luck 三☆

ToGlette wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:22:792(2) - nazi: how about placing this note at coordinate x:257 y:106?

Arnold0 wrote:

[Mickey's Normal]
00:22:538 (3) - No reverse arrow using same end as now. what do you mean? lol
00:27:075 - There is a thing in the music here, add note ? no~ I keep a space when spin is finish
00:27:832 (2,3) - The finish sound loud, maybe reduce volume? It's ok
01:16:991 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think I don't know, This follow is good but I think it's too hard
01:17:496 (4) - ^
01:18:000 (5) - ^
01:45:731 - There is a thing in the music here, add note ? same as above
02:20:017 (1) - New Combo since it's after a spinnermy mistake xD Fixed~
02:35:647 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think same as above
02:36:151 (4) - ^
02:36:655 (5) - ^
02:47:496 (3) - Remove this note (Sliders folow better vocals without it IMO) yeah, okay~
04:20:521 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think same as above
04:21:025 (4) - ^
04:21:529 (5) - ^

ykcarrot wrote:

By the way, you can write the title in Japanese now, can't you?
楓の道、ギターの奏でる丘で


EDIT : And "UZU-MAKI" is the album title, it should go into tags, not into source.

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi D.N ! , sorry for taking this so long orz..

General
seems fine !

D.N.Angel
this seems perfect to me , good job DN (enjoyed with DT well)

star here, good luck

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

D.N.Angel
03:12:201 (2) - remove slider's whistle , instead add on start? //ohhhh fixed lol
04:01:865 (3) - add whistle? //added it at other place.
04:06:151 (3) - add finish? //it doesn't make sense.

just some suggestion hope you like it~

Arnold0 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
The grid is size 1 ? o_O (Looks like you used smaller while mapping, so idk why I've go grid level 1 in my editor for this diff)
//it means mappers map without grid snap xD.
00:32:369 (1) - NC
00:33:126 (3) - Remove NC //it is wired lol
00:48:756 (2) - This slider don't looks great (Maybe try to make the 2nd point higher in the grid ?) //k.

Good luck with you map

Pokie wrote:

看見Easy collab以為眼花了 XD

Frostmourne wrote:

Mickey's Normal
... ไม่มีว่ะ -_-"

Curisu wrote:

液 \K姐/ //>///<

[D.N.Angel]
Master of grid 1没开grid啊lolMaster of grid ∞ // lol
AR+1
00:22:790 (1,3) - 末尾hitsounds有点空 //也沒東西可加了..lol
02:58:588 (3) - 还是grid2拉上去好一点这里太低 //這note剛好擺在滑條中間沒必要動呢:O
03:20:773 (8) - ctrl+G //...真的嗎 ? =.=你試試

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ DarknessAngel :3
nice mapset !
i will just give you some suggestion.

[General]
fine

[D.N.Angel]
01:57:327 - you should add note with whistle. that sounds better. //I follow vocals here,so I don't want to add a note for voice through. o:
02:28:084 (5) - If you use 1/2 beat instead of this, have more fun. also add note here 02:27:832 //I don't want to break the symmetrical pattern,but I'll consider this suggestion.

Gl ~ star KOTOKO!

EmPao wrote:

路過射星 ~ xDD

Sonnyc wrote:

Mickey's Normal:

-- Why did you pulled the Break time at 03:52:916? I don't know ;_; it pulled itself lol

00:53:546 (2) - (260,64)? To make 0.52x... no, It's already ok :3
00:55:563 (5) - 1 Grid down? Similar reason ^
02:57:832 (1,2,3) - Making them more a line? sure
03:21:277 (5) - I see reasons for using Finish at (4) and (1), but not here.. Consider deleting it oh, fixed
04:19:260 (2,3) - 1 Grid Right and down : This will make a consistent distance and more smoother patternno, It's already ok :3

Wiinter wrote:

[Mickey's Normal]
03:01:865 (1) - this is just a suggestion but this spinner is soo long x_x I'd make it shorter by adding a 1/2 slider at this point and moving the spinner to 03:02:622 (1) - , but if you wanna keep it it's understandable no, but fixed to other pattern with shorter spinner
04:34:638 (1) - boooring ok fixed ._.

p3n wrote:

From my queue~


[Easy Collab]
You should add a small SB for the names. Doesn't have to be anything fancy...but I spoke with Kevin ingame about this already

//I think it's okay since I wrote some imformation about Easy Collab on Creator's Words,but if the SB is really needed,I can make it. :O

[D.N.Angel]
This is a perfect example of a well crafted CS5 map with interesting patterns and no-grid spacings. I am impressed.

//thank you for your compliment. ><

00:42:201 (7) - in the flow of the pattern I expected this note to have a higher spacing to the previous and then the exact same spacing to the following slider in the new combo. I recommend moving this note either to the same spot as 00:40:941 (2) - or only a slight change like this to carry the flow of the movement into the next combo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532897

//yes,you're right,but it would be empty if I moved this note to the same spot as 00:40:941 (2).
and it would look not very good if I move the note down a bit because of incomplete overlapping.
I feel the flow for now is not that awkward imo,so I don't want to move the note in order to keep the part pretty.


Nice mapset. Great work so far! have some stars...and expect to see me again here....soon

p3n wrote:

00:24:554 (1) - why is there a break after this note? The only thing this break does is flash the BG and the arrows are showing even BEFORE the break starts. Please remove this break.
02:16:235 (2) - the beatplacement is very misleading especially for the target group of this difficulty. I recommend adding a circle @02:15:983 to match the vocals. You use 1/2 notes later anyway (like 02:29:092 (4,5,1)) so it should be fine. I would even accept the slightly higher spacing to the previous note as the missing note weighs much more than a slightly increased spacing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532845
//I changed the slider to larger one to follow vocals and drums instead :p

Some parts seemed a bit "overtuned" for an easy diff but I had my beginner-guinea-pig play this map and he did FC it first try...so no concerns here



[Mickey's Normal]
01:41:193 - the break should either be with a standard timing or you could end it on this timing. The strange custom ending now makes no sense at all.

p3n wrote:

[alacat]
I'd like to see the difficulty in the name of this map aswell -> alacat's Hard? ok :3

00:55:563 (8,9) - the beat placement seems a bit odd here. I was expecting a vocal follow for the whole combo but you leave out the vocal on 00:56:571. If you want to follow the vocals in a more intuitive way you could try something like this (will also prevent boring 1/2 spam): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532935
fixed.
04:13:714 (8) - not a real problem but this could be alligned better to 04:13:462 (7,9) (move it to ~222/43)
mm , no problem imo >.<