From our queue \( ^_^)/

1. Song bitrate 320 kbps which leads to 11.7 mb filesize. Please reduce it into 128kbps which has smaller filesize but same quality .w.)b

1. You're using a kick sound for soft-hitwhistle right?
2. 00:18:465 (4) - Remove whistle from slider end
3. 00:27:541 (3) - Rotate from selection centre -15 degree? for better flow .w.
4. 00:54:263 (2) - will be better if changed into a slider that starts from 00:54:011 - 00:54:263 - . Also this one has better polarity
5. 01:02:835 (1) - Hmm... bad flow here, rotate from selection centre -153 degree? So you could make a blanket here and the flow's better
6. 01:18:969 (1) - Place this on x:308 y:88 instead? A stack here is not really readable for newbies imo
7. 01:43:171 (1,2,3) - Bad polarity here (i mean, the spacing between notes here doesn't really provide much information for polarity change, hence might cause the players to hit the note too early/too late) how about combining these notes into a slider with one reverse?
8. 01:47:204 (1,2,3) - Confusing! Arrange these better plz
9. 02:15:944 - Add note here so polarity won't get ruined
10. 02:17:457 (1) - O.o what shape is this? besides, add something like regular soft-hitwhistle on the end, a muted end here just unfitting
11. 02:27:036 (2,3) - If you could, please unstack these since it ruined flow. Changing this will break the slider bow art though, but I know that you could rearrange the sliders into another shape and keep the flow smooth .w.)b
12. 02:38:381 (2) - If you could make the slidertick here more audible it'll be great and followed the music better
13. 02:45:188 (1) - Why low volume finish here? Just keep the volume as the way before please
14. 02:47:709 (5) - Not symmetric here ._.
15. 02:59:809 (5) - NC
16. 03:04:599 (1) - Instead of adding note here, why don't you just expand the spinner until here. It'll follow the music better imo
17. 03:18:465 - Add note here for better polarity plz
18. 03:35:356 (2) - Remove clap from end and change it into finish or regular soft-whistle
19. 03:37:625 (3) - Add regular soft-hitwhistle here?
20. 04:11:406 (3) - Remove the redpoint please >< it'll make the slider-cut looks better
21. 04:14:431 (1) - imo if placed like this, players might hit the reverse (not the slider start), especially with FL. Re-move please
22. 04:37:625 (1,2,1) - Confusing especially because overlap. How about a slider from 04:37:625 - 04:38:129 and with one reverse?

1. Some notes seems spaced too short, please recheck the notes' spaces
2. 00:22:499 (1,2,3,4) - Breaks pattern. Please keep using triplets here.
3. 01:14:431 (6) - Move to x:104 y:188 plz for better flow
4. 02:00:062 (2) - Move 3 grid to the left?
5. 03:06:868 (2,3,4) - Unstack please
6. 03:15:440 (3,1) - Try to move 3 a little bit to the left
7. 04:12:919 (5) - Add whistle on slider end?

1. Rename into alacat's Hard? .w.)b
2. 00:21:490 (2,3,4) - O.o this is a very strange placement, even for experienced players. Try a slider with reverse instead or make these circles form a triangle.
3. 00:27:793 (6,7) - Spacing?
4. 00:34:347 (5,6) - It'll follow music better if you could combine these into one slider
5. 00:36:616 (1,2) - Confusing spacing and bad jump. Rearrange please
6. 00:38:129 (3,4) - Bad flow, unstack please
7. 00:39:389 (7) - Move into x:272 y:292 for better flow?
8. 00:40:146 (9) - Spacing. and unstack please
9. 00:52:751 (1,2,3,4) - how about http://puu.sh/1t1kL ?
10. 01:01:322 (1) - Remove clap from slider start please, unfitting with the music
11. 01:05:356 (5) - Add whistle on end?
12. 01:09:389 (5) - ^
13. 01:16:952 (5) - Add whistle on start?
14. 01:21:490 (5) - Add whistle on end?
15. 01:24:767 (4,5) - unstack plz
16. 01:46:449 (6,7) - spacing ._.
17. 01:48:213 (3,4,5,6) - Confusing! Rearrange plz
18. 01:59:809 (4) - Move into x:44 y:156 for better flow
19. 02:04:347 (3,4) - bad flow, unstack please.
20. 02:10:146 (7,8,9) - Unstack these. Pretty bad flow
21. 02:24:263 (6) - Add whistle?
22. 02:43:423 (4,5) - Unstack please.
23. 02:48:213 (3) - Remove reverse please (end this slider on 02:48:465 - )
24. 02:58:801 (1) - unecessary spinner that breaks pattern flow. I strongly suggest you to change this into a slider or a note, but please not spinner.
25. 03:05:860 (1,3) - These straight slider are just... unfitting your current patterns here, try curving them .w.
26. 03:14:683 (2,3) - Unstack pelase.
27. 03:20:482 (6,7) - This jump breaks flow pretty much ><
28. 03:24:515 (6,7) - Pretty confusing spacing since 03:24:011 (4,5) - doesn't like this
29. 03:35:860 (4) - Remove reverse please
30. 04:21:490 (9,10,11) - If you could make these jumpy, it'll be more fun and fits the music imo

1. O.o why is diff using 1/6? owait, i think this 1/6 snapper works better imo. then why don't you tell other mappers to use 1/6 too?
2. CS4 works better, seriously. CS5 just feels too much
3. 00:27:541 (5) - Remove whistle from start to follow music better?
4. 00:33:591 (2,3) - unstack please
5. 00:38:129 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:39:893 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The placement here is truly random and very confusing. Try using more sliders here or try rearranging these notes
7. 00:44:936 (2) - Remove whistle since it doesn't fit with the song
8. 01:57:288 - Add note here please >< feels awkward without it
9. 01:59:305 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Another confusing notes. Rearrange these, for the sake of the players
10. 02:22:246 (2,3) - If you could make this slider curved, it'll be better imo
11. 02:27:036 (4,5) - Just... make this real straight. I don't know what is this called, 0.1337 degree rotation? lol jk
12. 02:33:591 (2,3) - Not paralleling correctly. Fix 02:34:347 (3) -
13. 03:00:566 (1,3,5) - Stack these, seriously. If you don't, the flow's gonna get seriously ruined here
14. 03:15:944 (1,2,3,4) - Make these form a diamond shape please, it'll works better .w.)b
15. 03:36:364 (5) - Remove this. Doesn't follow music imo
16. 03:55:020 (2,1,1) - Confusing!
17. 04:20:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another confusing notes. Rearrange these
18. 04:32:583 (5,1) - Stack please

inverness wrote:

[Mickey's Normal]

1. Some notes seems spaced too short, please recheck the notes' spaces I know, some spacing is 0.6x. just a bit, because I keep the flow
2. 00:22:499 (1,2,3,4) - Breaks pattern. Please keep using triplets here. ok~
3. 01:14:431 (6) - Move to x:104 y:188 plz for better flow no, but fixed more flow at next slider :3
4. 02:00:062 (2) - Move 3 grid to the left? no, but fixed more flow
5. 03:06:868 (2,3,4) - Unstack please ok~
6. 03:15:440 (3,1) - Try to move 3 a little bit to the left It's ok
7. 04:12:919 (5) - Add whistle on slider end? no :3

O.o nice diff here mickey, good job! thanks \:D/

Saten wrote:

Yo~

[General]
You should stick with the kiai fountains on the choruses only imo. I don't get that special feeling from those //I think they are good...):

[DNA]
AR 8 would be nice for the hardest difficulty imo. alacat is using 7 already which would make more sense if you used 8 on this one
//AR8 doesn't match the song,even the map.
00:12:453 (1) - Finish on start //og I forgot this,added
01:45:479 (1,2,3) - this is actually 1/6, not sure if you wanna use it. but the bpm is pretty low anyway //uh,I know it is 1/6,but there are beats on 1/4,too.
02:35:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find this pattern neat

SPOILER

//fixed
03:20:773 (8) - finish on start //although there is the symbal,I think it doesn't fit very well...
after considering,added for the symbal.
03:38:042 - snap the break to 03:38:168 - //oh well,fixed
04:20:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This patter plays neat as well (I hope you can see, (8) is there (4) is and (9) is at the centre)

SPOILER

//wanna keep the pattern,seems good for me.
04:37:664 (5,6) - Reverse this? (Ctrl+G) I think forth and back plays really good imo //k

[alacat]
wut, you forgot to resnap on this difficulty
03:38:042 - snap the break to 03:38:168 -
//they are my fault,I fixed them by myself because of offset changed.

[Mickey]
resnap notes lol
Please use AR 5. Also, I find low spacing harder than high spacing. Most will press the notes too fast. The way you use 0,5x on those is really weird imo lol
03:38:042 - snap the break to 03:38:168 -

//they are my fault,I fixed them by myself because of offset changed.

[Easy Collab]
resnap.. resnapped

Quilt wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

00:22:499 (1,2) - hm. add 1/2 slider (1 reverse)

00:23:507 (3,4) - ^

Saten wrote:

[Mickey]
resnap notes lol k
Please use AR 5. Also, I find low spacing harder than high spacing. Most will press the notes too fast. The way you use 0,5x on those is really weird imo lol no change xD
02:57:832 (1,2,3) - you shouldn't stack when your usual pattern doesn't include them k fixed
03:38:042 - snap the break to 03:38:168 - ok
04:29:596 (5,6,7,1) - this isn't very friendly, since the spacing is lower that the slider velocity here. And you made a straight light which doesn't make it any better.oh ok~

Yusura Sakurae wrote:

Nice!!!!!!!!!! Kotoko~


Good Luck 三☆

ToGlette wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

01:22:792(2) - nazi: how about placing this note at coordinate x:257 y:106?

Arnold0 wrote:

[Mickey's Normal]
00:22:538 (3) - No reverse arrow using same end as now. what do you mean? lol
00:27:075 - There is a thing in the music here, add note ? no~ I keep a space when spin is finish
00:27:832 (2,3) - The finish sound loud, maybe reduce volume? It's ok
01:16:991 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think I don't know, This follow is good but I think it's too hard
01:17:496 (4) - ^
01:18:000 (5) - ^
01:45:731 - There is a thing in the music here, add note ? same as above
02:20:017 (1) - New Combo since it's after a spinnermy mistake xD Fixed~
02:35:647 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think same as above
02:36:151 (4) - ^
02:36:655 (5) - ^
02:47:496 (3) - Remove this note (Sliders folow better vocals without it IMO) yeah, okay~
04:20:521 (3) - Replace with a slider which ends at next red tick, it folow the vocal better I think same as above
04:21:025 (4) - ^
04:21:529 (5) - ^

ykcarrot wrote:

By the way, you can write the title in Japanese now, can't you?
楓の道、ギターの奏でる丘で


EDIT : And "UZU-MAKI" is the album title, it should go into tags, not into source.

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi D.N ! , sorry for taking this so long orz..

General
seems fine !

D.N.Angel
this seems perfect to me , good job DN (enjoyed with DT well)

star here, good luck

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

D.N.Angel
03:12:201 (2) - remove slider's whistle , instead add on start? //ohhhh fixed lol
04:01:865 (3) - add whistle? //added it at other place.
04:06:151 (3) - add finish? //it doesn't make sense.

just some suggestion hope you like it~

Arnold0 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
The grid is size 1 ? o_O (Looks like you used smaller while mapping, so idk why I've go grid level 1 in my editor for this diff)
//it means mappers map without grid snap xD.
00:32:369 (1) - NC
00:33:126 (3) - Remove NC //it is wired lol
00:48:756 (2) - This slider don't looks great (Maybe try to make the 2nd point higher in the grid ?) //k.

Good luck with you map

Pokie wrote:

看見Easy collab以為眼花了 XD

Frostmourne wrote:

Mickey's Normal
... ไม่มีว่ะ -_-"

Curisu wrote:

液 \K姐/ //>///<

[D.N.Angel]
Master of grid 1没开grid啊lolMaster of grid ∞ // lol
AR+1
00:22:790 (1,3) - 末尾hitsounds有点空 //也沒東西可加了..lol
02:58:588 (3) - 还是grid2拉上去好一点这里太低 //這note剛好擺在滑條中間沒必要動呢:O
03:20:773 (8) - ctrl+G //...真的嗎 ? =.=你試試