I think CS of 4 is lot more better here. And also, you are using too much straight sliders. Try to create blankets, and if you must use the straight slider, at least make a small curve, like 10 degrees.
00:14:793 (2,5,7) - Here is one example of overusing straight sliders. (I know you intended to make this pattern, but is pretty boring, especially with longer lengths.
00:21:750 (1,2,3) - Another one.
00:23:924 (1,2,3) - Yet again.
00:30:445 (5) - Either move this 2 or 3 grids up, or make it aligned horizontally with 00:29:793 (4). OR you can decide to curve this. Reason is because the flow is weird here.
00:31:532 (4,5,6,7) - Another example of straight sliders.
00:36:532 (5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern plays out weird. Make (8) blanket onto (6). Do not try to stack too much circles on sliders, or stack too much on slider ends.
00:39:359 - There could be a note here.
00:43:706 (5,6,7,8) - Another example of straight sliders.
So you see now. Not going to mention everything cause there is a lot.
00:47:945 (3) - This should be to the right to match the flow.
01:04:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is no-good pattern. Either make these as jumps, or something like this:
(added new combo to have constituency)
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Combo is way too long. Add new combo at (8).
01:49:576 (5) - Add new combo.
02:37:837 (7) - Add new combo.
02:45:228 (7) - Add new combo.
02:46:532 (1) - Remove new combo.
One tip: Don't add too many circles on the end of sliders, or at the start of sliders. It is pretty boring... For triplets, it is better to stack them.