Satellite wrote:

こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
Normalはどこに。。。？ I think the Hard diff is easy enough like a Normal...0.0

[Insane]
AR+1 OD+1 agree
CS+1...? ﾏｷﾞで？
00:43:706 (5) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:45:445 (1) - ^ added
00:54:359 (6,7) - リズムの提案 nice!accept

00:57:619 (1) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:58:924 (4) - Ctrl+G? accept
01:04:793 (6) - Newcombo? 確かに..俺のミスだ
01:28:272 (8) - Ctrl+G? なんで？
02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - cooooooooooooool :>　:>

[Hard]
00:21:750 (6) - Newcombo? fixed
00:28:706 (2) - 00:28:272 (1) - ここを反転させたものを使うといいでしょう changed
02:14:793 (3) - リズムの提案 accept


[Easy]
looks fine~

good luck~

Thanks your mod.Good luck you too

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
Your mp3 quality is low, you should try to find better one Okay,I'll change if I found better one
You need Normal diff for good spread Got it

Easy:
00:49:793 (2,3,4) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/2u7QB plays better I changed here
02:16:098 (1,2,3,4) - is this intend to be symmetrical? It's like a circle now
02:34:359 (1) - nc ok
Your chosen SV\DS is not so good, next time try to choice that you have not this tiny overlaps all over the map. Got it.I'll work hard to learn about mapping.

Hard:
AR OD +1 ok
00:21:750 (1) - 00:34:359 (6) - did you forget to add HS? Yeah...haha
00:30:445 (6) - to make perfect stack under slider, turn off grid snap http://puu.sh/2u8c7 ok
00:31:315 (8) - ^ and so on ^
01:25:663 (1,2) - ^ same for sliders ^
00:41:750 (9) - lower down this to make something like flow? http://puu.sh/2u8dr Remapped these notes.
01:03:054 (1,1) - double spinners not a good style Remapped first spinner.

Insane:
00:27:402 (3) - make new 3 point slider instead, looks 20% cooler http://puu.sh/2u8l1 How to map a slider like that only with one stick
00:29:793 (4) - ^ fixed
00:36:750 (6,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/2u8pY ok seems this was mapped long ago, i suggest to rework ALL such sliders into new ones, don't be lazy That's true...I mapped these slider long ago.
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmap I think it's okay
02:34:249 (3,4) - this kind of blue-white plays so bad, consider to make this http://puu.sh/2u8zU or http://puu.sh/2u8A9 Seems the second one is better.Changed.
02:37:728 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:41:206 (3,4) - ^^
I don't really like such style

That's all, mapset definitely need more hard work. Good Luck with this!

Thanks your mod.It's really helpful.Good luck you too.

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi From My Queues~
Sorry I'm late T.T

Easy

1. 00:30:880 - Add Note? Sounds better.Added.
2. 00:33:924 - ^ ^
3. 00:40:445 (8) - Try This? Remapped here.
   
4. 00:43:054 (2) - How About This Patten? Seems too hard in Easy diff.
   
5. 00:49:793 (2) - Do you like this slider? changed
   
   00:53:272 (5) - ^ ^
   

Hard

1. 00:16:532 - Add Note? agree
2. 00:21:750 (1) - Twice sys-ply with the slider. No,seems a little too hard.
3. 00:29:141 (3,4) - Overlap do you see bad, I think better out separately Remapped here.
4. 00:29:793 (5) - Try This Accept.Looks well.
   
   00:31:532 (1) - ^ ^
   
   

Good Luck~

Thanks HaHo.It's a nice mod.Good luck you too.

bigfrog wrote:

是首好歌 因為是新手所以希望不要期待太多,可能會有許多錯誤的mod...

Easy
00:23:924(5,6,1) 變成這樣? 我擺彎了=_=..fixed

01:22:185(1) 看起來有點奇怪? 是要對稱嗎?
01:22:185(1,2,3) 都貼合會不會比較好看? 我的想法→ 確實 已調整

01:25:663(1,2,3) and 02:05:663(1,2) 跟上面這個一樣的疑問 ^
然後 02:07:402(3) 往下移一個距離讓它跟下一個circle平行? 樓上調整過後 這顆剛好平行了XD
02:23:054(1) 移到X:352 Y:284 ? 我移到X:350 Y:282囉
02:36:532(3,1,2) 讓3,2的距離變成跟3,1的一樣? 同意!

Hard
00:15:880(4) 讓這個slide頭跟尾到00:15:228(2,3)的距離一樣? 做了點變化
00:24:793(1,2) 擺成這樣? 不錯 拿來用囉

(純個人想法)
00:48:272(1) 改成來回到00:48:924? 疏忽了 本來這是為了Normal難度拿掉的折返 現在做Hard忘了改 3Q
01:14:359(4,5,6,7,8) 是為了美觀而擺成這樣的?,改成這樣呢? 我也不知為何之前這樣擺=_=

01:15:228(8,1) 然後(1)改成這樣? 我改到更左邊跟4,7切齊了

01:31:098(1,2,3) 擺成這樣呢?不過我必須承認我實在沒什麼審美觀QAQ.. 不了 這樣跟前三顆一模一樣 過於單調

01:31:967(1,2,3) 也讓這1,2,3成三角形排列? ^同理
02:13:924(2,3) 這裡的距離是對的,可是看起來有點怪,要不要改一下? 改了 以前做的太粗糙
01:49:141(4,5) 往右移一格在往下移一格? 讓距離看起來跟1,2,3相等? 已修正
02:37:837(3) 讓這個slide跟02:36:098(4)對稱? 我覺得平行就夠了
02:46:098(2,3,4) 讓1,2,34變成三角形? 不了 我刻意讓他們重疊 因為這四拍節奏感很強 讓開HD的玩家玩起來比較有挑戰性

Insane
look fine


另外normal呢
這是全部~希望對你有幫助~good luck 有空會開始做Normal

謝謝囉H蛙 果然很有美感 而且觀察細心 是個很棒的mod唷

smallbeans wrote:

因為自己手殘已經跳到別的頁面兩次
所以懶得再打第三次英文mod...

還是個mod新手，以下只是建議

[Easy]
I think this is very well.

[Hard]
再難一點點吧，4.20對Hard來說有點低 hmm..I'll consider
00:28:706(2) 滑條沒有跟(1)疊好 fixed
01:45:663(4,5) 這兩個滑條用成對稱會比較好看 seems ok
02:11:750(4,5,6,7,8) 用成正五角形會美觀一些，像是x:424 y:196，x:397 y:250，x:336 y:242，x:326 y:182，x:380 y:153 fixed
02:28:924(3) x:420 y:264 會比較整齊一些 fixed
02:29:793(3) x:236 y:240 會比較整齊一些 fixed
02:38:924(5) 很奇怪的一個滑條，折返點的地方似乎不太適合下在藍線上 same as Insane

[Insane]
00:33:272(1) 距離沒有錯，可是看起來會覺得兩個滑條擠在一起不太好看 跟哪個擠在一起?
00:34:141 加個circle會比較流暢一些 agree
01:26:532(3) 移到 x:284 y:136 比較好看，不過距離會稍微拉大一點點 fixed.It looks better now.
02:38:924(1,2,3,4) 嗯...如果這裡的聲音真是這樣那可以忽略Hard的最後一條，不過滑條串在一起會判斷錯誤，能不能讓滑條依照間距擺放呢? I think it's okay in Insane


我能做的就這樣了

bigfrog wrote:

Resurrect!~Resurrect!~Resurrect!!!~ :3b
抱歉我來亂的 lol (逃

Walaaa wrote:

bigfrog wrote:

Resurrect!~Resurrect!~Resurrect!!!~ :3b
抱歉我來亂的 lol (逃

less than a minute ago
Aoba Ringo - Hirogaru Hoshizora no Shita de has been revived from eternal slumber.

我做...我做就是了!!

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:26:098 (3,4) - same as Normal no,i don't think so..
00:38:489 (1,2,3) - does not fit, put 00:38:706 (3) - starting at 00:38:489 and 00:38:489 (1,2) - at 00:39:032 and 00:39:141 ok
00:40:228 (1,2) - slider start 00:40:228 - hold the vocals...... 00:40:228 (1) - at 00:40:880 instead hold the vocal o.o ok
00:47:185 (5,6) - swap, slider before circle your suggestion is fit too,but i prefer mine
01:15:880 (2,3) - vocals again, slider before circle okay
01:17:402 (6) - remove, put a circle at 01:17:402 and move 01:17:837 (7) - to 01:17:619 and add a note at 01:18:272 i really don't want to change any there notes,sorry
01:22:185 - you have 2 inherited points here, remove one it's intentional..

Rhythm-wise, the Insane needs a lot more work to suit the song better.

smallbeans wrote:

真是太令我驚訝了!!
這首歌竟然被大青蛙侵入了!!
改天來mod一下好了~

我不知道該怎麼mod 放棄
抱歉貼了個無用post

neonat wrote:

Normal

I suggest after every 4 white lines or so, use a new combo. Eg. NC at 00:08:924 (4) - 00:12:402 (4) - 00:15:880 (4) - 00:22:837 (4) - 00:29:793 (6) - 00:33:489 (5) - 00:36:750 (5) - 00:40:228 (4) - 00:43:706 (5) - added
00:26:098 (4,5) - change this to this to follow along the vocals: agree,changed.

SPOILER

00:45:445 (7) - NC here instead added
00:46:750 (4) - shorten to end at 00:46:967 and move 00:47:402 (5) - to 00:47:185 sounds better,changed.
00:52:619 (9) - replace with a slider from 00:52:402 to 00:52:619 replaced
01:02:837 - Kay now you can see why your 2 bar phrasing might just be too long....
01:04:576 (5) - NC added
01:33:924 (1) - start the spinner when the cymbals play, at 01:34:141 fixed.

Insane

00:26:315 (10) - NC here instead added
00:26:967 (2,3) - remove 00:26:967 (2) - and put a circle at 00:26:967 and 00:27:837 and move 00:27:402 (3) - to 00:27:185 changed
00:35:989 (3) - move to x:424 y:152 fixed
00:44:576 (7) - finish on start of slider added and removed finish at 00:45:445
01:00:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this rhythm is really bad for this part of the song, it has to be reworked, something like this: I was so lazy here,some changed.

SPOILER

01:06:424 - add a note It hits so strange,sorry.
01:07:945 - ^ ^
01:29:467 - ^ ^
01:32:076 - ^ ^
01:32:293 - ^ ^
01:32:728 (2) - remove, doesn't follow any music behind it I think it's ok.
01:32:945 (4) - ^
01:33:162 (6) - ^
01:33:380 (8) - ^
01:33:706 - add a note
01:33:924 - ^ I added combo until here.
02:09:141 (3) - make it more aligned with the previous 2 circles/ straighter: fixed

SPOILER

02:29:793 (7) - NC added
02:32:619 (4) - shorten slider to end at 02:32:837 and add notes at 02:32:945 - 02:33:054 - 02:33:163 - 02:33:380 sorry I don't like
02:33:489 (1) - change to a slider ending at 02:33:706 changed
02:36:641 - add a note changed like ^
02:38:598 (10) - remove note nope,sorry.
02:41:750 (6) - remove. Put a circle at 02:41:750 and move 02:42:185 (1) - to start at 02:41:967 and add a note at 02:42:402 seems good....changed!
02:43:489 (5,6) - swap. put 02:43:924 (6) - at 02:43:489 and 02:43:489 (5) - at 02:43:706 ^
02:44:467 - add a note nope

Rhythm-wise, the Insane needs a lot more work to suit the song better.

Thanks you mod
Fixed some slider and combo have shorten distance now.

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi from my queue

bigfrog's Hard

00:09:576 (3) - did you forgot to add whistle at the start slider ? maybe,thanks
00:15:880 (1) - ^ add finish at the start slider ? forgot hahahaha(?) fix~
00:16:750 (3) - ^ add finish at the start slider ? ^
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this good idea

SPOILER

02:40:445 (1) - add whistle at the start slider ? because you add whistle at 02:36:967 (1) okay.


Good Luck

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi from my queue


Easy

everything fine!
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this Now is fine,thx.

SPOILER

Normal

I think CS 3 is better than 4 Looks more like an Normal diff...thx
00:47:837 - add note here ? added
01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this ^

SPOILER

Insane

00:09:793 (7) - add whistle at the end slider ? I think now is fine.
01:02:619 (6) - I think you should convert slider to stream to follow the music sound I change this slider to 2 circles now.

SPOILER

01:36:315 - I think you should add breaktime at 01:37:837 like this ^

SPOILER

01:43:054 (1) - change whistle to finish nope,thx.
02:44:467 - add note here to follow music sound sry,I think now is fine.


Good Luck

Walaaa wrote:

Sorry for such a long long time to reply it

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~ modding from our queue~

General

1. Kanji name for the source is 星空へ架かる橋. Change it and move the english one to the tags.

added~

bigfrog's Hard

00:15:119 (4) - Move this to y=116. no, i prefer this pattern
00:40:880 (7) - New combo. Makes it avoid too long combos. okay
02:09:032 (2) - 1 grid up. no, why?
02:22:837 (6) - Add new combo to avoid too long combos again. okay
This difficulty is nice~ 1 suggestion though: Instead of using lots of straight sliders, try to use slider which has curves, even if its very small.

Sorry my mod was pretty short :/ You will need to do lots of work to make this ranked. GL~