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Topic Starter
Walaaa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月22日 at 下午 08:48:35

Artist: Aoba Ringo
Title: Hirogaru Hoshizora no Shita de
Source: Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi
Tags: feng anime gal pc game ed ending
BPM: 138
Filesize: 4196kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. bigfrog's Hard (3.1 stars, 343 notes)
  2. Easy (1.25 stars, 143 notes)
  3. Insane (3.82 stars, 461 notes)
  4. Normal (2.15 stars, 248 notes)
Download: Aoba Ringo - Hirogaru Hoshizora no Shita de
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd map.
PC game「星空へ架かる橋」
ED1【広がる星空の下で】
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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General

The bitrate of your mp3 is very low (64 kBit/s ). You should get one with at least 128 kBit/s.
Your background image is too tiny (768x768). Get a new with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768.

Easy

You should set the distance snap a bit higher, maybe 1.0, because the circles are too close to each other.

00:20:039 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod)
00:27:430 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner.
00:33:517 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is too hard for Easy.
00:48:300 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod)
00:57:865 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is too hard for Easy.
00:59:604 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner.
01:06:560 (1,2,3,4) - Could be too hard for easy.
01:10:039 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:20:473 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod)
01:22:213 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod)
01:23:952 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner.
02:07:430 (3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Easy.
02:17:864 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod)
02:19:604 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod)
02:21:343 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner.
02:28:734 (4) - ^
02:33:952 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod)
02:35:691 (4) - New Combo
02:38:952 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner.
02:44:387 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for beginner.

Normal

00:42:213 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:43:082 (2) - New Combo
00:42:430 - 00:43:517 Why so empty here?
00:52:647 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:53:300 (2) - New Combo
00:56:126 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:56:778 (2) - New Combo
01:15:256 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:15:691 (2) - New Combo
02:12:647 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:13:082 (2) - New Combo
02:44:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for Normal!
Topic Starter
Walaaa

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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General

The bitrate of your mp3 is very low (64 kBit/s ). You should get one with at least 128 kBit/s. ok
Your background image is too tiny (768x768). Get a new with 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. ok

Easy

You should set the distance snap a bit higher, maybe 1.0, because the circles are too close to each other. 1.1 now

00:20:039 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) fixed
00:27:430 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
00:33:517 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is too hard for Easy. fixed
00:48:300 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) seems fine
00:57:865 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is too hard for Easy. fixed
00:59:604 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
01:06:560 (1,2,3,4) - Could be too hard for easy. fixed
01:10:039 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed
01:20:473 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod) fixed
01:22:213 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) no spinner now
01:23:952 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:07:430 (3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Easy. fixed
02:17:864 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy (Check AiMod) fixed
02:19:604 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) no spinner now
02:21:343 (3) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:28:734 (4) - ^ fixed
02:33:952 (1) - This circle comes too soon after the spinner. Not allowed in Easy. (Check AiMod) fixed
02:35:691 (4) - New Combo ok
02:38:952 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for a beginner. fixed
02:44:387 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for beginner. fixed

Normal

00:42:213 (1) - Remove New Combo make
00:43:082 (2) - New Combo some
00:42:430 - 00:43:517 Why so empty here? change
00:52:647 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
00:53:300 (2) - New Combo ok
00:56:126 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
00:56:778 (2) - New Combo ok
01:15:256 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
01:15:691 (2) - New Combo ok
02:12:647 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
02:13:082 (2) - New Combo ok
02:44:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for Normal! make some change
Thanks your mod
It's helpful :)
Phish_old
hey there~

General:
> delete unused .osb in folder

[Easy]
01:13:489 (3) - that shape is kinda ugly
01:27:402 (3) - 1smallgrid left
01:32:185 (5) - also some kind of weird sliderbody ._. find a better shape please
02:29:793 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:10:880 (1,2,3) - dont like this pattern, try this for example:
00:17:837 (1) - clap on spinnerend?
00:20:445 (2,3,4,5) - move everything 1smallgrid up and 1smallgrid to the right
00:48:272 (1,2,3) - this blue tick circles are hard to read for beginner players, so they don't fit into a normal map, even if the music is like "blue-tick".. you can use a slider with a reverse arrow here:

^ this is even readable for beginners
01:01:315 (1,2,3) - pls move this more up or something, cause the overlapping with 00:59:359 (4,5) - looks strange :x
02:24:793 (3) - adjust that slider to the previous sliderend, just like this:
SPOILER

looks better :p
02:29:359 - add note
02:29:576 - ^

[Insane]
00:45:011 (8) - this slider is not perfectly horizontinal *nazi*
00:52:619 (1) - symmetrical plz
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i don't like this random stream, maybe replace it with a spinner or at least symmetrical somehow!
nice diff though..

very well done for your 2nd map :0! my second map was biggest rubbish ever created by humans..
good luck~ hope my mod helped~
Topic Starter
Walaaa

Dick wrote:

hey there~ hi~

General:
> delete unused .osb in folder I just saw one .osb in folder :?:

[Easy]
01:13:489 (3) - that shape is kinda ugly fixed
01:27:402 (3) - 1smallgrid left fixed
01:32:185 (5) - also some kind of weird sliderbody ._. find a better shape please ok
02:29:793 (5) - ^ ok

[Normal]
00:10:880 (1,2,3) - dont like this pattern, try this for example: like your pattern,thanks
00:17:837 (1) - clap on spinnerend? sounds good!
00:20:445 (2,3,4,5) - move everything 1smallgrid up and 1smallgrid to the right fixed
00:48:272 (1,2,3) - this blue tick circles are hard to read for beginner players, so they don't fit into a normal map, even if the music is like "blue-tick".. you can use a slider with a reverse arrow here:

^ this is even readable for beginners that's true...fixed
01:01:315 (1,2,3) - pls move this more up or something, cause the overlapping with 00:59:359 (4,5) - looks strange :x fixed ;)
02:24:793 (3) - adjust that slider to the previous sliderend, just like this: ok
SPOILER

looks better :p
02:29:359 - add note ok
02:29:576 - ^ ok

[Insane]
00:45:011 (8) - this slider is not perfectly horizontinal *nazi* haha~~fixed :P
00:52:619 (1) - symmetrical plz fixed
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i don't like this random stream, maybe replace it with a spinner or at least symmetrical somehow!
I replace it like 02:44:576(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) maybe looks better
nice diff though..

very well done for your 2nd map :0! my second map was biggest rubbish ever created by humans.. but you are a great modder now ;)
good luck~ hope my mod helped~ ofcourse
thanks your mod,it's considerate ;)
Deni

Walaaa wrote:

Dick wrote:

hey there~ hi~

General:
> delete unused .osb in folder I just saw one .osb in folder :?:
If you don't use storyboard, delete the .osb in your folder and full submitt. ! ;)
Topic Starter
Walaaa
OK~Thanks!! ;)
Xierra
Hey there, this one is from our tiny modding queue. Thanks for requesting! Alright, second modding ever, here I go!
Here's the mod. My modding are mostly suggestions, so you may ignore this.

General
Clean! Nothing wrong with the files.
Make a Hard diff?

Easy
00:50:011 (2,4) - Add whistles here.
00:53:489 (2,4) - ^
00:59:793 (1) - Add whistle on the repeat.
01:23:924 (3) - Add whistles on start and end of slider.
02:21:315 (3) - ^
02:28:706 (4) - Add whistle here.

Normal
00:10:445 - Add a hitcircle with whistle.
00:13:924 (4) - Add Whistle here.
00:29:793 (3,4) - Add whistle on slider end.
01:15:011 (4) - Remove whistle?
02:12:402 (4) - Remove whistle?
02:12:402 (3,4) - Unsnapped hitcircle!
02:36:098 (5) - Add another repeat with whistle.
02:40:880 (2) - Add whistle here.

Insane
01:01:315 (3) - Add whistles on both ends.
01:02:619 (6) - Add whistle.
01:19:141 (2,4) - Remove finish?
01:32:619 (1,5,9) - Add whistles here.
01:33:271 (7) - Remove whistle.
02:16:532 (2,4) - ^
02:29:793 (3) - Remove whistle on slider start, add whistles on the upbeats.
02:44:793 (3,11) - Add whistles here.

Good luck and hope it gets ranked! ;)
PS: This is not my favourite type of song, but never mind. It's pretty good too, hehe :oops:
CTB Fia
Easy
change bacground picture 1024x768 to 800x600
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

Normal
change slider tick rate to 2
change overall diff to 6 and apporach rate to 7
01:41:016 - put spinner
01:50:445 - fill it with notes
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

since the song is >2 minutes so i only mod 2 diff
that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!! ;)
Topic Starter
Walaaa

Xierra wrote:

Hey there, this one is from our tiny modding queue. Thanks for requesting! Alright, second modding ever, here I go!
Here's the mod. My modding are mostly suggestions, so you may ignore this.

General
Clean! Nothing wrong with the files.
Make a Hard diff? I'll consider or find a GD ;)


Easy
00:50:011 (2,4) - Add whistles here. ok
00:53:489 (2,4) - ^ ok
00:59:793 (1) - Add whistle on the repeat. nice
01:23:924 (3) - Add whistles on start and end of slider. ok
02:21:315 (3) - ^ ok
02:28:706 (4) - Add whistle here. fixed...miss this guy..thanks ;)

Normal
00:10:445 - Add a hitcircle with whistle. sorry I won't add it
00:13:924 (4) - Add Whistle here. ok
00:29:793 (3,4) - Add whistle on slider end. ok
01:15:011 (4) - Remove whistle? ok ;)
02:12:402 (4) - Remove whistle? ok ;)
02:12:402 (3,4) - Unsnapped hitcircle! fixed thanks :)
02:36:098 (5) - Add another repeat with whistle. add the repeat will make two slider too close(only 0.218s)too hard for a beginner :|
02:40:880 (2) - Add whistle here. nice

Insane
01:01:315 (3) - Add whistles on both ends. add (3) end only
01:02:619 (6) - Add whistle. ok
01:19:141 (2,4) - Remove finish? ok
01:32:619 (1,5,9) - Add whistles here. hmmm ok
01:33:271 (7) - Remove whistle. fixed
02:16:532 (2,4) - ^ ok
02:29:793 (3) - Remove whistle on slider start, add whistles on the upbeats. sorry I won't change it.
Maybe you can heard from 02:26:532 :arrow: 02:30:880 again and you will agree with me :oops:

02:44:793 (3,11) - Add whistles here. ok

Good luck and hope it gets ranked! ;)
PS: This is not my favourite type of song, but never mind. It's pretty good too, hehe :oops:
Thanks your mod.I fixed lots of hitsounds :)
And good luck for you too ;)
KonataN
Hey from my modding queue.

This will be a short mod, because your map is pretty good, sorry.

Normal:


OD=5

01:43:706 (2) - I'd recommend not stacking this circle, its more clear to play if you put it next to the slider
01:45:228 (4) - ^
02:27:619 (1,2,3) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative?
02:28:489 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:359 (1,2,3) - ^
02:33:924 (1) - objects that appear fast after a spinner + in the middle are not easy to hit by new players
02:40:445 (1) - Maybe don't stack this one?
02:44:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative?

Insane:

The Objects are not that nice arranged as from the other diffs. Maybe more symmetric stuff and more shapes?

02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see you put much effort in this one. But it's not good to play :(


Easy:

Looks fine!


Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Walaaa

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
change bacground picture 1024x768 to 800x600
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better ok
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

Normal
change slider tick rate to 2 ok
change overall diff to 6 and apporach rate to 7 OD5 AR7
01:41:016 - put spinner ?
01:50:445 - fill it with notes ???
try to put some clap or finish sound effect at KIAI time it will fit the song better ok
well anyway all the beats seems to fit the song so i have no comment

since the song is >2 minutes so i only mod 2 diff
that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!! ;)
Thanks your mod
Though this mod is strange :(
Topic Starter
Walaaa

KonataN wrote:

Hey from my modding queue.

This will be a short mod, because your map is pretty good, sorry.

Normal:


OD=5 fixed

01:43:706 (2) - I'd recommend not stacking this circle, its more clear to play if you put it next to the slider fixed
01:45:228 (4) - ^ fixed
02:27:619 (1,2,3) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative?
02:28:489 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:359 (1,2,3) - ^
if so..that means 01:30:228(1,2,3,1,2,3)are too hard?
02:33:924 (1) - objects that appear fast after a spinner + in the middle are not easy to hit by new players fixed
02:40:445 (1) - Maybe don't stack this one? fixed
02:44:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is pretty hard for a Normal diff, Maybe think about an alternative? ok

Insane:

The Objects are not that nice arranged as from the other diffs. Maybe more symmetric stuff and more shapes?

02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see you put much effort in this one. But it's not good to play :( I think it's ok in Insane


Easy:

Looks fine!


Good luck :)
Thanks your mod
I'll consider your suggestion
Good luck for you,too ;)
DarkDunskin
Hi!
Here's your requested Mod from Kin's Lair~

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:402 (2) - Remove Finish.
  2. 00:07:837 - Add Note + Finish.
  3. 00:10:880 (1) - Remove Finish.
  4. 00:11:315 - Add Note + Finish.
  5. 00:14:359 (1) - Remove Finish from Sliderstart, add Finish on Sliderend.
  6. 00:43:924 (3,4) - Replace with a Slider from 00:43:706 to 00:44:576. Add Finish.Like this
  7. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:45:445.
  8. 00:48:272 (1) - Ugly Slider, make it straight. Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow.
  9. 00:57:837 (3,4) - Replace with slider on the left red Tick like above!
  10. 00:59:793 (1) - Replace with slider from 00:59:359 to 01:00:228. Add Finish.
  11. 01:00:880 (5) - Move this Note to 01:01:098 and add Finish.
  12. 01:49:141 (4,5) - Nazi: Not properly stacked lol, disable grid snap and distance snap and move (5) under (4).
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:880 (3,4) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
  2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619.
  3. 00:29:793 (3,4) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix. Should look like this afterwards: http://puu.sh/YZYg
  4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
  5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445.
  6. 00:48:272 (1) - Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow.
  7. 00:54:141 (2,3) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix.
  8. 00:57:619 (2,3,4,5) - Same here :<
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:880 (1) - Nazi: Disable Gridsnap and move note to x:106.
  2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619.
  3. 00:20:554 (3) - Delete Note, doesn't fit there imo.
  4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
  5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445.
  6. 02:38:924 (1,2,3,4) - This is okay btw. Here appears stacking ingame, you can compare with the other points i mentioned if you want.
Okay everything else is fine it seems.
The Sliderbug I mentioned is just an error in the Editor.
When you don't fix it and play it ingame it will look like you used stack-leniency 0 and stack leniency 0 is unrankable lol.
But its easy to fix so dont worry.

That's all.
Good luck and have fun mapping!
Aldwych
Hello! walaaa!

[General]

This beatmap has lot of finish note, do you have a finish hitsound for it? Because your finish hitsound is a whistle in a soft hitsound, and we can't hear it.

Be carefull when you put NC, sometimes, they are not at the same time for all diff.

Why Distance snap in easy = 1,1 , normal = 0,8 and insane = 1,5 ? You should stay at 1,0 it's better.

Imo, Slider velocity is too lazy.
For easy : 1,0
For normal : 1,30
For insane : 1,70

Slider tick rate must be the same at all diff.

00:17:837 Spinner should start at 00:17:619
02:31:315 Spinner should strat at 02:31:532
02:46:976 Spinner shoud start at 02:47:185

[Easy]

Hp drain -1

00:09:141 I'm sorry but i don't see what note is here? At 00:08:924 yes but here no. If you make a circle here, add finish.
Why not make something like that :
00:12:142 : ^

[Normal]

AR = 4

00:43:906 Use lot of reverse arrow in a slidder is ugly. Use juste one reverse and finish it at 00:44:576, it follows the lyrics and it's better.
00:49:793 Same like previous slider, finish it at 00:50:228
00:51:532 Finish the slider at 00:51:597
00:52:619 Move the circle to 00:52:402
01:15:228 NC Should be here
02:14:793 Use one arrow for this slider.
02:19:793 I prefer see a long slider here (imo) for lyrics.

[Insane]

HPd -2

00:34:141 Slider should start at 00:34:359
00:57:619 Curve more these 3 sliders.
01:10:011 Delete NC
01:15:228 Same for NC
01:45:663 Tornado combos? t/48512
02:07:402 Delete NC
02:14:359 ^
02:35:228 ^

I think you will work hard for this map for rank it.

Good luck to you! ;) (and sorry for nazi mod)
h-728

thank you for request

[General]
  • according to the ranking criteria, the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. so I highly recommend you to make Hard.
    also, I think the gap of diffyculty between Insane and Normal is large. you should adjust the gap of difficulty to more people can enjoy this map.
    slidertickrate of normal is 2, and others are 1. do you have any reason to this? if not, you should unify them.
[Easy]
  • through of this diff, you should keep a certain distance. for example, beginning of the song, you use about 1.2x distance, but middle, you use about 1.0x.
    00:07:402 (2,3,4) - I think these notes don't follow the music at all. listen the melody more.
    00:20:445 (1) - too short slider for Easy. and be corvered with the hitburst of previous spinner, newbie players may not be able to consider this note as a slider.
    00:23:924 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider. the short slider isn't kind for newbie players.
    00:48:272 (1) - you shouldn't use blue tick. this is Easy.
    00:59:793 (1) - this note(put on red tick) break the flow of rhythm and may cause the mistake.
    02:37:837 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is too hard.

    I point out only a certain section, but please review through this diff.
overall, I want you to review the rhythm.
two things. first, listen the melody more well and follow it better. second, make the rhythm more easy to read visually.
newbie players may not be able to judge the rhythm by seeing approach circle. please consider this.
and about spinner, I can say same things as Insane.

[Normal]
  • I wrote that you should make Hard, but you can rename this diff as Hard if you add a few notes and make this diff a little harder.
    first I want to ask you how you want to do, so I can't mod this diff now.
    one thing, if I regard this diff as Normal, you use too many red tick and the rhythm is difficult for Normal imo...
    anyway, I want your reply.
[Insane]
  • I think SV 1.4 is too slow for Insane. how about use 1.8 or so.
    00:17:837 (1) - this spinner should be started from 00:17:619.
    00:24:793 (3,4,5) - this stream doesn't match with the song imo. shorten the slider and move this stream like this and it follows the song well.if you accept this, you should put note at 00:25:445.
    00:34:141 (2) - listen the song more well. the melody starts at 00:34:359, not at 00:34:141. so you should put slider at 00:34:359.
    if you do this, please shorten the slider.
    00:36:750 (6,7,1) - how about this rhythm? I think you should put some note at 00:37:619, because there is enough sound to put note.00:45:663 (1) - I don't like to put spinner on the lyrics. and this is Insane, so I want you to make this section more atractive.
    00:57:619 (1,2,3) - almost same as 00:34:141. you should be attention to when the lyrics starts and ends more.
    01:03:054 (1,1) - same as 00:45:663
    01:15:772 (2) - remove this. this stream doesn't match with the song imo.
    01:21:750 - don't to be silent the end of spinner. I couldn't find the reason enough to be silent this.
    01:29:685 (3) - same as 01:15:772
    01:30:337 (6) - ^
    01:31:206 (2) - ^
    01:33:924 (1) - same as 00:45:663
    02:08:163 (6,7) - how about move these note 1/2 later and make stream with 6~8?
    02:13:163 (2) - same as 01:15:772
    02:19:141 - same as 01:21:750
    02:27:076 (3) - same as 01:15:772
    02:27:728 (6) - ^
    02:31:315 (1) - same as 00:45:663. how about put spinner form 02:29:793 to 02:30:880, and put some notes from 02:31:315 ~?
    02:46:967 (1) - listen the melody more. this spinner should be started from 02:47:185.
that's all. if you have any trouble, please ask me in game or forum PM.
Topic Starter
Walaaa

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi!
Here's your requested Mod from Kin's Lair~

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:402 (2) - Remove Finish. I want
  2. 00:07:837 - Add Note + Finish. to keep
  3. 00:10:880 (1) - Remove Finish. these like
  4. 00:11:315 - Add Note + Finish. Normal and
  5. 00:14:359 (1) - Remove Finish from Sliderstart, add Finish on Sliderend. Insane,sorry.
  6. 00:43:924 (3,4) - Replace with a Slider from 00:43:706 to 00:44:576. Add Finish.Like this ok
  7. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
  8. 00:48:272 (1) - Ugly Slider, make it straight. Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow. agree
  9. 00:57:837 (3,4) - Replace with slider on the left red Tick like above! ok
  10. 00:59:793 (1) - Replace with slider from 00:59:359 to 01:00:228. Add Finish. ok
  11. 01:00:880 (5) - Move this Note to 01:01:098 and add Finish. hard to judge?
  12. 01:49:141 (4,5) - Nazi: Not properly stacked lol, disable grid snap and distance snap and move (5) under (4). fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:880 (3,4) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
  2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619. fixed
  3. 00:29:793 (3,4) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix. Should look like this afterwards: http://puu.sh/YZYg fixed
  4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
  5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
  6. 00:48:272 (1) - Remove Finish from Start and Reverse-Arrow. removed
  7. 00:54:141 (2,3) - Unrakable Stack bug: No stacking appears in-game when sliderend and sliderstart are at the same point. Use grid level 4 and move (4) one grid down and one to the right to fix. fixed
  8. 00:57:619 (2,3,4,5) - Same here :< ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:880 (1) - Nazi: Disable Gridsnap and move note to x:106. fixed
  2. 00:17:837 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:17:619. fixed
  3. 00:20:554 (3) - Delete Note, doesn't fit there imo. agree
  4. 00:42:185 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart. ok
  5. 00:45:663 (1) - Let the Spinner start at 00:45:445. fixed
  6. 02:38:924 (1,2,3,4) - This is okay btw. Here appears stacking ingame, you can compare with the other points i mentioned if you want. It looks fine when I test.
Okay everything else is fine it seems.
The Sliderbug I mentioned is just an error in the Editor.
When you don't fix it and play it ingame it will look like you used stack-leniency 0 and stack leniency 0 is unrankable lol.
But its easy to fix so dont worry. thanks for teaching this sliderbug :D

That's all.
Good luck and have fun mapping! You too!

Aldwych wrote:

Hello! walaaa!
I think there is something wrong when you mod.Maybe redownload when you saw these message.
[General]

This beatmap has lot of finish note, do you have a finish hitsound for it? Because your finish hitsound is a whistle in a soft hitsound, and we can't hear it.

Be carefull when you put NC, sometimes, they are not at the same time for all diff. Some NC for preventing of long combo

Why Distance snap in easy = 1,1 , normal = 0,8 and insane = 1,5 ? You should stay at 1,0 it's better.

Imo, Slider velocity is too lazy.
For easy : 1,0
For normal : 1,30
For insane : 1,70

Slider tick rate must be the same at all diff.

00:17:837 Spinner should start at 00:17:619 fixed
02:31:315 Spinner should strat at 02:31:532 fixed
02:46:976 Spinner shoud start at 02:47:185 fixed

[Easy]

Hp drain -1

00:09:141 I'm sorry but i don't see what note is here? At 00:08:924 yes but here no. If you make a circle here, add finish.
Why not make something like that :
00:12:142 : ^

[Normal]

AR = 4 Maybe this Normal will become Hard soon.

00:43:906 Use lot of reverse arrow in a slidder is ugly. Use juste one reverse and finish it at 00:44:576, it follows the lyrics and it's better.
00:49:793 Same like previous slider, finish it at 00:50:228
00:51:532 Finish the slider at 00:51:597
00:52:619 Move the circle to 00:52:402 nope,sorry.
01:15:228 NC Should be here makes two color at same place?
02:14:793 Use one arrow for this slider. I'll consider if I keep this as a Normal
02:19:793 I prefer see a long slider here (imo) for lyrics. ??

[Insane]

HPd -2

00:34:141 Slider should start at 00:34:359 nope,sorry.
00:57:619 Curve more these 3 sliders. agree
01:10:011 Delete NC
01:15:228 Same for NC
01:45:663 Tornado combos? t/48512 I want to make hidden player confused here.I've use this combo at 02:28:054(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:07:402 Delete NC
02:14:359 ^
02:35:228 ^

I think you will work hard for this map for rank it. Yes,thank you! :D

Good luck to you! ;) (and sorry for nazi mod)
Thanks your mod :)
Sun Rainbow
开学了=A=
这图你把DS搞好了你可以再来找我吧……
Topic Starter
Walaaa

h-728 wrote:


thank you for request

[General]
  • according to the ranking criteria, the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. so I highly recommend you to make Hard.
    also, I think the gap of diffyculty between Insane and Normal is large. you should adjust the gap of difficulty to more people can enjoy this map.
    slidertickrate of normal is 2, and others are 1. do you have any reason to this? if not, you should unify them.
got it.I'll make Normal become Hard.And slidertickrate has no reason...it's 1 now~~

[Easy]
  • through of this diff, you should keep a certain distance. for example, beginning of the song, you use about 1.2x distance, but middle, you use about 1.0x. fixed
    00:07:402 (2,3,4) - I think these notes don't follow the music at all. listen the melody more. fixed
    00:20:445 (1) - too short slider for Easy. and be corvered with the hitburst of previous spinner, newbie players may not be able to consider this note as a slider. changed
    00:23:924 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider. the short slider isn't kind for newbie players. changed
    00:48:272 (1) - you shouldn't use blue tick. this is Easy. agree..fixed
    00:59:793 (1) - this note(put on red tick) break the flow of rhythm and may cause the mistake. changed
    02:37:837 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is too hard. changed

    I point out only a certain section, but please review through this diff.
overall, I want you to review the rhythm.
two things. first, listen the melody more well and follow it better. second, make the rhythm more easy to read visually.
newbie players may not be able to judge the rhythm by seeing approach circle. please consider this.
and about spinner, I can say same things as Insane. okay

[Normal]
  • I wrote that you should make Hard, but you can rename this diff as Hard if you add a few notes and make this diff a little harder.
    first I want to ask you how you want to do, so I can't mod this diff now.
    one thing, if I regard this diff as Normal, you use too many red tick and the rhythm is difficult for Normal imo...
    anyway, I want your reply.
I decided to make this as Hard.I'll pm if I finished this.

[Insane]
  • I think SV 1.4 is too slow for Insane. how about use 1.8 or so. agree..1.8 now
    00:17:837 (1) - this spinner should be started from 00:17:619. fixed
    00:24:793 (3,4,5) - this stream doesn't match with the song imo. shorten the slider and move this stream like this and it follows the song well.if you accept this, you should put note at 00:25:445. accept!
    00:34:141 (2) - listen the song more well. the melody starts at 00:34:359, not at 00:34:141. so you should put slider at 00:34:359.
    if you do this, please shorten the slider. okay
    00:36:750 (6,7,1) - how about this rhythm? I think you should put some note at 00:37:619, because there is enough sound to put note.agree..added00:45:663 (1) - I don't like to put spinner on the lyrics. and this is Insane, so I want you to make this section more atractive. hm..changed
    00:57:619 (1,2,3) - almost same as 00:34:141. you should be attention to when the lyrics starts and ends more. fixed
    01:03:054 (1,1) - same as 00:45:663 changed
    01:15:772 (2) - remove this. this stream doesn't match with the song imo. removed
    01:21:750 - don't to be silent the end of spinner. I couldn't find the reason enough to be silent this. okay
    01:29:685 (3) - same as 01:15:772 removed
    01:30:337 (6) - ^ ^
    01:31:206 (2) - ^ ^
    01:33:924 (1) - same as 00:45:663 sorry I want save this...cause It's hard enough from 01:31:098
    02:08:163 (6,7) - how about move these note 1/2 later and make stream with 6~8? sorry I don't like.It's easier to read by 3.1.3.1
    02:13:163 (2) - same as 01:15:772 removed
    02:19:141 - same as 01:21:750 okay
    02:27:076 (3) - same as 01:15:772 removed
    02:27:728 (6) - ^ ^
    02:31:315 (1) - same as 00:45:663. how about put spinner form 02:29:793 to 02:30:880, and put some notes from 02:31:315 ~? removed spnner and put some notes
    02:46:967 (1) - listen the melody more. this spinner should be started from 02:47:185. hmm..fixed
that's all. if you have any trouble, please ask me in game or forum PM.
h-728
[Insane]
  • 00:13:054 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - spacings are too narrow and they look like a stream.
    00:30:445 (5,1,2,3) - ^
    00:35:880 (2,3,4) - this stream doesn't look good in game play.00:40:880 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:13:054
    00:45:445 (9) - NC here. the combo seems too long.
    00:48:054 (4,5) - these notes aren't connected well. how about rotate (5) like this?00:49:141 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:13:054
    01:04:793 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
    01:27:402 (7,8) - this overlapping doesn't look good.
looks really good, but one thing, your map is less finish hitsound and it causes lack of swell.
consider to add "finish" especially to Kiai Time.

[Easy]
  • 01:03:054 (1) - start at 01:02:837.
    01:05:663 - Idk why you silent the end of this slider. the song goes swell.
    01:32:185 (5) - this slider should be staredt at 01:32:402 to follow the lyrics.
    01:33:924 (1) - should be started at 01:34:141.
    02:31:315 (1) - should be started at 02:31:532.
about hitsound, same as Insane.

you've surely improved your map. now looks really good.
please get more mod to improve the detail placement or rhythm.
good luck for rank.
riffy
requested timing check?

i got



not sure but i think 180.00 is getting a bit off in the end :/
Topic Starter
Walaaa
哇啦啦目前當兵中

雖然時間很少但還是希望能把這張圖做好

希望路過看到這張圖的能不吝指教 或者給點支持 ;)

Edit:What a busy Feb.Maybe I can't reply your posts soon :|
P o M u T a
tag: ending add?
Satellite
こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
Normalはどこに。。。?

[Insane]
AR+1 OD+1
CS+1...?
00:43:706 (5) - 最初にFinishを追加
00:45:445 (1) - ^
00:54:359 (6,7) - リズムの提案

00:57:619 (1) - 最初にFinishを追加
00:58:924 (4) - Ctrl+G?
01:04:793 (6) - Newcombo?
01:28:272 (8) - Ctrl+G?
02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - cooooooooooooool :>

[Hard]
00:21:750 (6) - Newcombo?
00:28:706 (2) - 00:28:272 (1) - ここを反転させたものを使うといいでしょう
02:14:793 (3) - リズムの提案


[Easy]
looks fine~

good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Walaaa

Satellite wrote:

こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
Normalはどこに。。。? I think the Hard diff is easy enough like a Normal...0.0

[Insane]
AR+1 OD+1 agree
CS+1...? マギで?
00:43:706 (5) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:45:445 (1) - ^ added
00:54:359 (6,7) - リズムの提案 nice!accept

00:57:619 (1) - 最初にFinishを追加 added
00:58:924 (4) - Ctrl+G? accept :D
01:04:793 (6) - Newcombo? 確かに..俺のミスだ :P
01:28:272 (8) - Ctrl+G? なんで?
02:38:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - cooooooooooooool :> :>

[Hard]
00:21:750 (6) - Newcombo? fixed
00:28:706 (2) - 00:28:272 (1) - ここを反転させたものを使うといいでしょう changed
02:14:793 (3) - リズムの提案 accept


[Easy]
looks fine~

good luck~ :)
Thanks your mod.Good luck you too :)
Sieg
Hello

General:
Your mp3 quality is low, you should try to find better one
You need Normal diff for good spread

Easy:
00:49:793 (2,3,4) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/2u7QB plays better
02:16:098 (1,2,3,4) - is this intend to be symmetrical?
02:34:359 (1) - nc
Your chosen SV\DS is not so good, next time try to choice that you have not this tiny overlaps all over the map.

Hard:
AR OD +1
00:21:750 (1) - 00:34:359 (6) - did you forget to add HS? :)
00:30:445 (6) - to make perfect stack under slider, turn off grid snap http://puu.sh/2u8c7
00:31:315 (8) - ^ and so on
01:25:663 (1,2) - ^ same for sliders
00:41:750 (9) - lower down this to make something like flow? http://puu.sh/2u8dr
01:03:054 (1,1) - double spinners not a good style

Insane:
00:27:402 (3) - make new 3 point slider instead, looks 20% cooler http://puu.sh/2u8l1
00:29:793 (4) - ^
00:36:750 (6,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/2u8pY ok seems this was mapped long ago, i suggest to rework ALL such sliders into new ones, don't be lazy
01:32:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmap
02:34:249 (3,4) - this kind of blue-white plays so bad, consider to make this http://puu.sh/2u8zU or http://puu.sh/2u8A9
02:37:728 (5,6) - ^
02:41:206 (3,4) - ^
I don't really like such style

That's all, mapset definitely need more hard work. Good Luck with this!
HabiHolic
Hi From My Queues~
Sorry I'm late T.T



Easy

  1. 00:30:880 - Add Note?
  2. 00:33:924 - ^
  3. 00:40:445 (8) - Try This?
  4. 00:43:054 (2) - How About This Patten?
  5. 00:49:793 (2) - Do you like this slider?

    00:53:272 (5) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:16:532 - Add Note?
  2. 00:21:750 (1) - Twice sys-ply with the slider.
  3. 00:29:141 (3,4) - Overlap do you see bad, I think better out separately
  4. 00:29:793 (5) - Try This

    00:31:532 (1) - ^


Good Luck~
bigfrog
是首好歌 :roll: 因為是新手所以希望不要期待太多,可能會有許多錯誤的mod... :?

Easy
00:23:924(5,6,1) 變成這樣?
01:22:185(1) 看起來有點奇怪? 是要對稱嗎?
01:22:185(1,2,3) 都貼合會不會比較好看? 我的想法→
01:25:663(1,2,3) and 02:05:663(1,2) 跟上面這個一樣的疑問
然後 02:07:402(3) 往下移一個距離讓它跟下一個circle平行?
02:23:054(1) 移到X:352 Y:284 ?
02:36:532(3,1,2) 讓3,2的距離變成跟3,1的一樣?

Hard
00:15:880(4) 讓這個slide頭跟尾到00:15:228(2,3)的距離一樣?
00:24:793(1,2) 擺成這樣?
(純個人想法)
00:48:272(1) 改成來回到00:48:924?
01:14:359(4,5,6,7,8) 是為了美觀而擺成這樣的?,改成這樣呢?
01:15:228(8,1) 然後(1)改成這樣?
01:31:098(1,2,3) 擺成這樣呢?不過我必須承認我實在沒什麼審美觀QAQ..
01:31:967(1,2,3) 也讓這1,2,3成三角形排列?
02:13:924(2,3) 這裡的距離是對的,可是看起來有點怪,要不要改一下?
01:49:141(4,5) 往右移一格在往下移一格? 讓距離看起來跟1,2,3相等?
02:37:837(3) 讓這個slide跟02:36:098(4)對稱?
02:46:098(2,3,4) 讓1,2,34變成三角形?

Insane
look fine :D


另外normal呢 :?:
這是全部~希望對你有幫助~good luck :)
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