OSUtoto wrote:

BPM:176
offset:1459(-34)

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

OSUtoto wrote:

BPM:176
offset:1459(-34)

/.\ 你確定你沒在開玩笑...

1. 删蓝线书签

1. 00:17:856 (1) - 这个note露出来o.o
2. 00:59:788 (4) - X:424 Y:256(?
3. 01:04:220 (5) - NC
4. 01:15:981 - +note
5. 02:16:493 (4) - 下移一点 和(6)不要挨太近
6. 02:38:993 (7) - NC
7. 02:46:152 (4,5) - 超难读坑爹梗求挪出来换滑条

1. 00:09:674 (1) - 删NC
2. 00:10:356 (3) - NC
3. 00:11:038 (1) - 换成2连o.o
4. 00:13:850 (1) - 删NC
5. 01:06:265 (1,1) - 蓝线改红线结束或者只改第二个到红线结束
6. 01:15:640 (2) - 换成2连
7. 02:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4还是露出来好一点(?
8. 02:33:538 (1,1) - 蓝线改红线结束或者只改第二个到红线结束
9. 02:46:493 (1) - 露出来比较好
10. 02:47:686 (9) - X:200 Y:344(?
11. 03:17:515 (1) - 删NC

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req from QQ groupPM.

[General]

1. 删蓝线书签

[A32's Hard]

1. 00:17:856 (1) - 这个note露出来o.o
2. 00:59:788 (4) - X:424 Y:256(?
3. 01:04:220 (5) - NC
4. 01:15:981 - +note
5. 02:16:493 (4) - 下移一点 和(6)不要挨太近
6. 02:38:993 (7) - NC
7. 02:46:152 (4,5) - 超难读坑爹梗求挪出来换滑条

[Lunatic]

1. 00:09:674 (1) - 删NC 好
2. 00:10:356 (3) - NC 好
3. 00:11:038 (1) - 换成2连o.o 這玩著挺順啊 而且三連總覺得沒有一個短滑條的氣勢來得足...
4. 00:13:850 (1) - 删NC 現在這樣還不錯啊..(其實是這個remove了之後後面全要重新弄QAQ
5. 01:06:265 (1,1) - 蓝线改红线结束或者只改第二个到红线结束 到時候看看別人怎麼說LOL
6. 01:15:640 (2) - 换成2连 2連感覺不好看...
7. 02:09:674 (1,2,3,4) - 2和4还是露出来好一点(? 這...露出來反而奇怪吧QAQ
8. 02:33:538 (1,1) - 蓝线改红线结束或者只改第二个到红线结束 到時候看看別人怎麼說LOL×2
9. 02:46:493 (1) - 露出来比较好 露了0.0
10. 02:47:686 (9) - X:200 Y:344(? 現在這樣有氣勢多了啊...
11. 03:17:515 (1) - 删NC 這個是為了和之前保持一致/.\

话说最后这段加速和spacing真凶残orz
这图好难mod阿!!!因为图本身好难完全打不来
就这些了其实也说了不少没用的
soGL☆

sherrie__fay wrote:

[A32's Hard]

1. 00:17:856 (1) - 这个note露出来o.o感觉还好吧0.0
2. 00:59:788 (4) - X:424 Y:256(? ok
3. 01:04:220 (5) - NCfixed
4. 01:15:981 - +note这里空个拍应该也可以0.0
5. 02:16:493 (4) - 下移一点 和(6)不要挨太近fixed
6. 02:38:993 (7) - NCok
7. 02:46:152 (4,5) - 超难读坑爹梗求挪出来换滑条

没改滑条不过移出来了

qoot8123 wrote:

Could I make taiko diff?

SPOILER

196,56,1493,2,0,B|196:132|116:176|48:136,1,200,4|8

SPOILER

360,56,5583,5,2
300,136,5754,1,2
316,236,5924,1,8
388,304,6095,1,0
416,208,6265,5,2
288,328,6436,1,2
288,328,6521,1,0
288,328,6606,1,8
112,332,6777,1,0

LKs wrote:

做slider时要确保中点到头尾的距离一样 可以借助的参照物有slidertick和sliderball http://puu.sh/10DWc

SPOILER

凹了好多遍 打出一次真·FC好难

Strawberry wrote:

yo random mod here o/

完全是个人的建议 不过还是希望能认真看完(反正也不太长啦)
[General]
·http://puu.sh/13ioo删掉这个 好!!


[Lunatic]
00:01:493 (1) - (nazi)这个不知道是故意拉成这样的还是怎么...你可以试试这个 好

SPOILER

196,56,1493,2,0,B|196:132|116:176|48:136,1,200,4|8

00:02:345 (1) - (nazi)如果上面改的话这里记得重新对齐一下~ 別當我baka啊OAO
00:02:856 (3,1) - ctrl+H一下前面的
00:05:583 (1,2,3,4) - 打起来感觉这里拉开间距打起来更顺一点而且感觉和BGM那个类似笛声一样的音比较和，而且后面建议从(1)就转过去和前面的(3,4)组成一个三角,然后后面这组combo也就可以摆成一个弧线感觉flow更好些(语言表达能力不好..还是附图附code吧..) 神梗給跪

SPOILER

360,56,5583,5,2
300,136,5754,1,2
316,236,5924,1,8
388,304,6095,1,0
416,208,6265,5,2
288,328,6436,1,2
288,328,6521,1,0
288,328,6606,1,8
112,332,6777,1,0

00:07:458 (4) - (nazi)这个slider也是, 建议从开头数第二个锚点向右移三格 懂
00:08:311 (1) - 为什么不移到x:320 y:240 和(2)做个blanket, 而且整体看上去也更整洁 當時還比較笨嘛>_>
00:10:186 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这里的(1,2)之间的跳感觉略突然, 而且按着bgm来说的话也感觉等距比较好 http://puu.sh/13iJH 可...可以不改嗎OAO
00:13:850 (1,2,3) - +whistle? lol 好 不過全加太嚇人了 只加了2
00:16:152 (4,5,6,7) - 现在的感觉和bgm不太合诶o.o 感觉NC1的whistle就够了..用鼓的话有点.. o.o...?這裡不是有鼓點嗎?
00:27:061 (4) - 尾部+whistle, 听起来很好:3 真是太好:3
00:29:106 (2) - 每次打这里都断尾..感觉没必要3/4的样子，打起来有很黏的感觉 不舒服，1/2就很合适了，然后尾巴+whistle 真是太好:3 ×2
00:46:493 (1) -

LKs wrote:

做slider时要确保中点到头尾的距离一样 可以借助的参照物有slidertick和sliderball http://puu.sh/10DWc

建议下面的slider有的也调一调比较好，而且不会太麻烦 真是太好:3 ×3
00:52:970 (5,6) - ctrl+R换下位置。现在这样打起来实在不爽 這個是故意的..
01:09:674 (1) - 这个ctrl+R的话感觉flow很好，如果觉得不够鬼畜了的话就连同2稍微转点角度那样.. 想了想為了好看還是改了
01:12:828 (2,3) - 每次打这里都觉得这两个跟在slider后面不光很挡而且打起来总是有点别扭..换成一个1/4slider感觉好很多，而且这里听节奏的话怎么都应该是这样的啊http://puu.sh/13j24，这样摆倒是感觉不错http://puu.sh/13j2X 改了你的節奏不過排列按自己的弄法了 現在看看? :3
01:13:424 (4) - 上边改了的话这个也得改，建议http://puu.sh/13j42，分成两个note也感觉可以强调下前面(3)结尾的finish ^
01:28:765 (1) - 感觉有点多余的whistle.. 哦草還好你提醒 其實本來這個whistle是個鑼聲的... 已改finish
01:28:765 - ~ 01:49:220 20s的break..好浪费啊; A; 不过会爆分还是算惹:3
02:18:538 (3) - (nazi)spacing..右上各一格 fixed
02:20:243 (5) - 这里感觉和(4)角度相同就好..其实这样也蛮不错http://puu.sh/13jeh,现在的让人感觉有点随意。。感覺還好o.o
02:22:799 (3,4) - 打起来也觉得有点别扭..觉得完全按照1/2就好了。 可以试试http://puu.sh/13jiX 刪了藍線感覺良好
02:23:822 (2) - 感觉多余的whistle.. ...不會啊...
02:27:402 (1) - slider开头的whistle也是。。......^
03:22:885 (5) - 这种梗。。每次都读不好。。坑 wo gui chu

SPOILER

凹了好多遍 打出一次真·FC好难 aaaaaahhhhh!!!shen chu!!!!!

一个diff整了一个多小时。。我真是够。。 没力气mod别的diff了以后有空再补好了 完全好图deserve☆我爱的大草莓星星神

应援mod
[General]
Lunatic 第一个kiai结束和其他难度不同
[Beren]
需要新的难度名
00:23:311 (1,2) - 有点拥挤的感觉 改变1的形状
02:08:311 (2) - 旋转45度，

SPOILER

[img]02:08:311%20(2)%20-[/img]

[A32's Hard]
00:47:515 (6,7) - 交换 ，延续前面4，5的倒退梗
01:18:368 (2) - 还往角落里挤。。
02:45:640 (3) - 换个位子，降的太多了

SPOILER

[Lunatic]
01:28:083 (1,2) - 结尾音乐变了，继续堆叠不太好
01:50:243 (1) - ctrl+r 和前面的音乐不同，有点变化会好点
02:55:356 (1,2) - ^

intoon wrote:

SPOILER

18:54 AmamiyaYuko: In original version it is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/464528
18:55 AmamiyaYuko: =A=
18:55 intoon: now is better for me >w<
18:56 AmamiyaYuko: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/57126 You can see this. Used special combo colors too
18:56 AmamiyaYuko: and it is first
18:56 AmamiyaYuko: in last kiai part >_>
18:58 intoon: using special color is good idea i think.......
18:59 AmamiyaYuko: yes
18:59 intoon: 00:56:038 (1) - (nazi) #2 point x416 y 292
19:00 AmamiyaYuko: fixed o.o
19:01 intoon: kinda look like you love this rhythm, like this : 01:24:674 (1,2) -
19:01 intoon: :3
19:01 AmamiyaYuko: >w<
19:02 intoon: 03:36:265 (5) - x156 y64 is better >A<
19:03 intoon: prevent anti-jump in high speed kiai time..
19:04 intoon: i think you become good mapper in future.....
19:04 AmamiyaYuko: ...thank you >_>
19:05 AmamiyaYuko: do you still want to AFK?
19:06 intoon: nah
19:06 AmamiyaYuko: T_T
19:06 intoon: my afk mean "i watching anime now~" but i don't want to see anime now...
19:07 intoon: or really afk
19:11 AmamiyaYuko: ah..
19:11 intoon: updated ww
19:11 intoon: 00:11:720 (1,2,3,4) - ....orz
19:12 AmamiyaYuko: ...
19:12 AmamiyaYuko: oh
19:12 AmamiyaYuko: haha
19:12 intoon: 00:11:974 (2,3) - >w<
19:13 AmamiyaYuko: I know =w=
19:16 AmamiyaYuko: oh god
19:17 intoon: lol
19:17 AmamiyaYuko: oh god 1pc
19:17 intoon: not fc.... orz
19:18 intoon: not much to say, very good map, imo

your map is so funny, wwwwwwww
star.

Mystica wrote:

Mod via irc

x847606653 wrote:

Hi，我来骗KDS惹>_>

General
Tag里面加个ZUN

Lunatic
01:26:038 (1) - 怎么都不好看。。改成5錨點了
01:26:549 (2) - ^ ^

A32's Hard
00:28:765 (1) - 第二点向上拉一下
01:08:311 (5) - 微调一下形状。。
02:01:493 (1) -- RNC
怎么感觉GD做的比自己图好orz

Normal
貌似有多余的绿线，能删则删
00:14:447 (4) - 这一段都没有这种节奏，放到00:14:618 - No. 這裏音樂有變化
00:29:447 (2,3) - 尽量不要这种overlap,我已被吐槽过很多次了0.0 ...這有啥問題
00:32:856 (3) - 斜一点 嗯

Easy
fine

就这么多。

1. Rename "Beren" diff in "Beren's Easy".
2. Honestly I think tick rate 2 fits much better

1. 00:26:038 (3) - New combo like you did for 00:31:493 (1)
2. 02:20:583 (4) - New combo
3. 02:31:493 (4) - ^ also to keep consistency with 00:20:583 (1)
4. Just these small suggestions about comboing. This map is really well done.

1. OD -1, maybe also AR-1? It's high and looks too fast atm IMO
2. 00:05:583 (3) - To advice player about hitsounds changes you should use New combo here or it'd be confusing since it's a Normal diff.
3. 00:09:674 (1,2) - Switch new combo for the same reason above
4. 00:39:674 (1,3,4) - Try to improve these 2 blankets, making something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   448,256,41038,2,0,B|444:312|384:332,1,99.9999999999998,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   292,324,41720,2,0,B|296:268|352:244,1,99.9999999999998,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   448,256,42402,5,6,0:0:0

5. 01:07:288 (1) - This circle is too soon after the spinner. According to this just reduce 01:04:220 (1) till 01:06:265 following the vocal sound
6. 03:08:311 (6) - This blanket is really ugly.
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   384,244,188311,2,2,B|444:248|464:312,2,99.9999999999998,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

7. Too hard for a Normal diff, IMO ;(

1. 00:14:958 (3) - This circle is awkward to play where it's placed. You could move it to x:320 y:324 making so a triangle together with 00:14:618 (1,2) http://puu.sh/1iSpg
2. 01:47:004 (3) - This slider breaks the flow of the map during gameplay. Try to improve its shape making it more curved.
3. 01:53:311 (1,2,3,4) - Considering the slowdown I don't agree about the spacing you used for 1/4. It's too huge IMO.
4. 01:57:061 (3) - CTRL + G to reduce the spacing
5. 01:58:765 (1,2,3,4) - Same of 01:53:311 (1,2,3,4)
6. 02:09:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have tested this part more times and I feel it's really awkward to play. I'd suggest you to make something different here to make it more enjoyable to play
7. 02:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - Still awkward square ç_ç
8. 03:29:703 (4,5) - - Improve this blanket
9. I liked the last part.

1. 00:13:424 - Without a circle here the rhythm is too odd, really.
2. 01:53:311 (6) - New combo
3. 01:58:765 (5) - ^ removing it from 02:00:129 (1)
4. 02:44:277 (5) - This slider follows nothing. This rhythm would fit much better: http://puu.sh/1iSzb
5. 03:27:231 (4) - ^
6. 03:28:424 (7) - CTRL + G maybe? It flows finer

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

beren see this

19:26 Mystica: beren的难度名直接统一掉 没问题 mapper直接改吧
19:26 AmamiyaYuko: 我記得他diff好像都是beren?
19:27 AmamiyaYuko: 改了會不會不太好/.\
19:27 Mystica: 等我先调下分辨率这个有点蠢
19:27 Mystica: 不不挺正常的 毕竟你别的都用hard luna之类了
19:27 AmamiyaYuko: 好
19:28 Mystica: beren的那个我给你说然后你post了让她改就行
19:28 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯我發PM跟她說
19:30 Mystica: 01:04:902 - 个人觉得加个2/1slider 好点 位置有点难摆 不放了
19:30 AmamiyaYuko: 2/1是啥..
19:30 Mystica: 就是两拍白线的slider
19:31 AmamiyaYuko: 嘛這裡跟了鼓點感覺可以skip掉
19:31 Mystica: 因为空拍的感觉不是很好233
19:32 Mystica: 02:16:833 - 加个note多个变化 加了
19:32 AmamiyaYuko: 2和3之間加?
19:32 Mystica: 嗯
19:33 AmamiyaYuko: 後面已經三連了這裡又三連好像聽奇怪略怪
19:33 Mystica: 不不因为后面同等的梗又有一次所以肯定这边加个note会好点
19:33 AmamiyaYuko: 好像行

Chewin wrote:

Hi, mod request from my modding queue

[Beren]

1. 00:26:038 (3) - New combo like you did for 00:31:493 (1)
2. 02:20:583 (4) - New combo
3. 02:31:493 (4) - ^ also to keep consistency with 00:20:583 (1)
4. Just these small suggestions about comboing. This map is really well done.

Chewin wrote:

Hi, mod request from my modding queue

[General]

1. Rename "Beren" diff in "Beren's Easy".
2. Honestly I think tick rate 2 fits much better

[Beren]

1. 00:26:038 (3) - New combo like you did for 00:31:493 (1)
2. 02:20:583 (4) - New combo
3. 02:31:493 (4) - ^ also to keep consistency with 00:20:583 (1)
4. Just these small suggestions about comboing. This map is really well done.

[Normal]

1. OD -1, maybe also AR-1? It's high and looks too fast atm IMO ok
2. 00:05:583 (3) - To advice player about hitsounds changes you should use New combo here or it'd be confusing since it's a Normal diff. Added
3. 00:09:674 (1,2) - Switch new combo for the same reason above same
4. 00:39:674 (1,3,4) - Try to improve these 2 blankets, making something like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   448,256,41038,2,0,B|444:312|384:332,1,99.9999999999998,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   292,324,41720,2,0,B|296:268|352:244,1,99.9999999999998,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   448,256,42402,5,6,0:0:0

5. 01:07:288 (1) - This circle is too soon after the spinner. According to this just reduce 01:04:220 (1) till 01:06:265 following the vocal sound right
6. 03:08:311 (6) - This blanket is really ugly. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   384,244,188311,2,2,B|444:248|464:312,2,99.9999999999998,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

7. Too hard for a Normal diff, IMO ;(

[Lunatic]

1. 00:14:958 (3) - This circle is awkward to play where it's placed. You could move it to x:320 y:324 making so a triangle together with 00:14:618 (1,2) http://puu.sh/1iSpg It's a quadrilateral http://puu.sh/1iSZp
2. 01:47:004 (3) - This slider breaks the flow of the map during gameplay. Try to improve its shape making it more curved. Changed
3. 01:53:311 (1,2,3,4) - Considering the slowdown I don't agree about the spacing you used for 1/4. It's too huge IMO. I think it's fun to play
4. 01:57:061 (3) - CTRL + G to reduce the spacing No, it will break the pattern.
5. 01:58:765 (1,2,3,4) - Same of 01:53:311 (1,2,3,4) same
6. 02:09:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have tested this part more times and I feel it's really awkward to play. I'd suggest you to make something different here to make it more enjoyable to play Can't find other way and I always hit 300 at this part...? will change if anyone can give a good pattern.
7. 02:54:674 (1,2,3,4) - Still awkward square ç_ç ok changed..
8. 03:29:703 (4,5) - - Improve this blanket ok
9. I liked the last part. thank you

[A32's Hard]

1. 00:13:424 - Without a circle here the rhythm is too odd, really.
2. 01:53:311 (6) - New combo
3. 01:58:765 (5) - ^ removing it from 02:00:129 (1)
4. 02:44:277 (5) - This slider follows nothing. This rhythm would fit much better: http://puu.sh/1iSzb
5. 03:27:231 (4) - ^
6. 03:28:424 (7) - CTRL + G maybe? It flows finer

That's it, good luck (:

1. Tags里除了a32的名字外全部改成大写字母开头，ZUN用全大写
2. 将 Immaterial and Missing Power 加入Tags里
3. 2个GD的combo colour和你自己的diff的不一样，如果不是专门选用的话建议用统一的combo colour
   - Inconsistent Combo Colours, recommend to make them the same unless it's on purpose
   
4. Kiai还是建议统一一下比较好，看了下两种方案感觉上差不多的，而我个人比较建议a32的kiai选择

1. 00:17:856 (1,1) - 这2个感觉没有前面几个那么好看，有没有可能做出一点弧度来？
2. 01:12:402 (2) - 这里因为vocal的缘故感觉可以做个形状，比如：
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:15:129 (2) - ^，类似于上面那里
4. 01:50:583 (1) - 我觉得可以考虑把soft的起点放到这个slider开头，然后连slider头带轨道全放上soft-whistle的那个效果~~
5. 02:34:220 (3,4) - 在想这2个的blanket有没有可能做的更舒服一点，比如：
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:39:675 (2) - 和前面类似可以考虑做个带点造型的～
7. 02:42:402 (2) - ^

1. 我只能说真的不推荐这么玩降星，唔……先放着吧。
2. 00:08:311 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 对于Normal来说强烈不建议放这种遮挡
   - highly recommend to avoid this kinda stack & overlap in a Normal diff
   
3. 01:02:856 (3,4,5,6) - 这里考虑做个正方形的梗感觉flow会更好
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:56:038 (1,2,3) - 把这里blanket的弧线调整的更平滑一点吧
5. 02:17:004 (4,5) - 实话实说，我觉得Normal里面完全不用为了做节奏的变化而放成类似的连续1/2的节奏——不止这一个地方，而是有很多。偶尔放这么一个未尝不可，但是过多的使用令这个diff有些时候看起来更像是Hard而不是Normal了，虽然实际上难度并不高——我想这也是你为什么最后不得不用SV降星的方法来控制难度。说实话，我觉得这办法很不好，因为至少从某种角度来说，这意味着你没有办法很好的控制图的难度。
6. 03:19:220 (3) - 我倾向于把这个做成弧线和前面的(2)保持平行
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:13:424 - 感觉这么重的鼓点跳过去了不是很舒服，考虑加个note？
2. 00:26:038 (1) - 建议加个note来保持节奏的连续性
3. 00:42:402 (1) - 嗯……这里其实我更倾向于这种节奏因为Spinner正好横跨了Vocal的前后两句，不过没所谓啦～
   
4. 00:47:004 (5) - 这slider形状明显没有做好，弄对称了 - ugly slider, make it symmetrical
5. 00:49:902 (6) - 考虑放个NC？
6. 00:55:697 (5) - 放到260:372?
7. 00:57:402 (4) - 听着不是很舒服的节奏……建议做成这样：
   
8. 01:02:686 - 考虑加个note作为节奏的过渡？
9. 01:21:777 - ^
10. 02:00:129 (1,2,1) - 这里建议调整一下，去掉第一个(1)的NC，然后把第二个(1)的NC放到中间的(2)上，这样前后两句的Vocal会层次更清晰一些～

1. 00:08:652 (2) - 考虑做成这样？感觉flow会变好（尾巴的位置不变）
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:038 (1) - 有点坑……感觉还不如做成三连www
3. 00:21:947 (1,1,1,1) - 这4个slider我在想有没有可能做成长度逐渐加长的那种来配合音乐的变化，比如SV 0.5->0.6->0.7->0.8这样变化之类，感觉会更有味道。后面几个类似的地方也是同样的建议我就不一个一个说了
4. 00:52:799 (4,5,6) - 这个折返跳总觉得有点说不出的别扭……感觉我更倾向于将(5,6)交换位置
5. 01:08:822 (3,4) - 这里因为vocal的缘故，先Note再Slider感觉会更舒服一点
6. 01:16:152 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
7. 01:19:902 (6,7,8,9) - 这里也是个排列有些别扭的地方……vocal很流畅的地方感觉上不适合放突然的停顿——不建议(6)的Stack，我宁可放一个更大间距但是等间距的1/2跳
8. 01:55:356 (2,3) - 分别ctrl+g?依然是flow建议
9. 01:56:720 (2) - 继续ctrl+g的flow建议～而且建议放到76:308。画了个图大概描述了一下移动轨迹的思路。。能理解吧……
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:58:424 (3) - 依然ctrl+g建议
11. 03:17:174 (1,2,1,2) - 我觉得这种地方我宁可看到一串1/3的note。。。

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from baka sp3's lucky queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

Since mapper has some trouble with English reading, i choose to mod in chinese and attach a english translation of major issues.

[General]

1. Tags里除了a32的名字外全部改成大写字母开头，ZUN用全大写 fixed 雖不明 但覺厲(slaps
2. 将 Immaterial and Missing Power 加入Tags里 fixed
3. 2个GD的combo colour和你自己的diff的不一样，如果不是专门选用的话建议用统一的combo colour 多出的2個顏色是我用來警告Lunatic最後那段的speed up的...所以其他diff沒用也無所謂
   - Inconsistent Combo Colours, recommend to make them the same unless it's on purpose Combo colors 5 and 6 are used to hints the speed up in the last part in Lunatic diff.
   
4. Kiai还是建议统一一下比较好，看了下两种方案感觉上差不多的，而我个人比较建议a32的kiai选择 習慣kiai結束弄一下噴泉...至於a32改不改就看他了

[Normal]

1. 我只能说真的不推荐这么玩降星，唔……先放着吧。已經改回來了
2. 00:08:311 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 对于Normal来说强烈不建议放这种遮挡 這個真沒注意 fixed
   - highly recommend to avoid this kinda stack & overlap in a Normal diff fixed
   
3. 01:02:856 (3,4,5,6) - 这里考虑做个正方形的梗感觉flow会更好 嗯
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:56:038 (1,2,3) - 把这里blanket的弧线调整的更平滑一点吧 嗯
5. 02:17:004 (4,5) - 实话实说，我觉得Normal里面完全不用为了做节奏的变化而放成类似的连续1/2的节奏——不止这一个地方，而是有很多。偶尔放这么一个未尝不可，但是过多的使用令这个diff有些时候看起来更像是Hard而不是Normal了，虽然实际上难度并不高——我想这也是你为什么最后不得不用SV降星的方法来控制难度。说实话，我觉得这办法很不好，因为至少从某种角度来说，这意味着你没有办法很好的控制图的难度。 改了 連續的1/2也沒用太多 我看了下NTR的normal大概也是這難度...降星大法我也說了即使不用也是4星 不能算沒控制好吧 本來是4.5的
6. 03:19:220 (3) - 我倾向于把这个做成弧线和前面的(2)保持平行 嗯
   
   SPOILER

   

[Lunatic]

1. 00:08:652 (2) - 考虑做成这样？感觉flow会变好（尾巴的位置不变） 感覺沒差太多 主要想跟後面的搞對稱 而且這樣jump幅度有點過
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:038 (1) - 有点坑……感觉还不如做成三连www 這個膜姐之前提過了 一個短滑條打擊感比較不同嗯
3. 00:21:947 (1,1,1,1) - 这4个slider我在想有没有可能做成长度逐渐加长的那种来配合音乐的变化，比如SV 0.5->0.6->0.7->0.8这样变化之类，感觉会更有味道。后面几个类似的地方也是同样的建议我就不一个一个说了 試了試 不太好看 漸增的話還是要排成一條直線比如NTR那張
4. 00:52:799 (4,5,6) - 这个折返跳总觉得有点说不出的别扭……感觉我更倾向于将(5,6)交换位置 嗯 索性整個改掉了lol
5. 01:08:822 (3,4) - 这里因为vocal的缘故，先Note再Slider感觉会更舒服一点 我看行
6. 01:16:152 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow? 中
7. 01:19:902 (6,7,8,9) - 这里也是个排列有些别扭的地方……vocal很流畅的地方感觉上不适合放突然的停顿——不建议(6)的Stack，我宁可放一个更大间距但是等间距的1/2跳 將滑條改掉了
8. 01:55:356 (2,3) - 分别ctrl+g?依然是flow建议 嗯
9. 01:56:720 (2) - 继续ctrl+g的flow建议～而且建议放到76:308。画了个图大概描述了一下移动轨迹的思路。。能理解吧…… 這裏不太想改 就是想弄同一個方向的感覺...
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:58:424 (3) - 依然ctrl+g建议 嗯
11. 03:17:174 (1,2,1,2) - 我觉得这种地方我宁可看到一串1/3的note。。。 這個我要解釋一下 03:17:288 (2) - 到03:17:515 (1) - 之間間距比較大 如果是全用circle的話 非常容易斷 很不人性 而用slider代替的話因為尾巴判定比較松的原因可以較早的跳過去 所以...

that's all. call me back to recheck when you're ready.

Normal多看看吧，我觉得现在的底子还是不错的，虽然看起来很难但是实际打起来难度不是什么问题，把节奏可以调整的地方再弄弄，这种2.0SV的压星法真的不好。

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

292,12,8140,1,0,0:0:0

312,8,8225,1,0,0:0:0

336,12,8311,38,0,B|380:36|380:96,1,100

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from PM Req

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[Lunatic]
00:08:140 (6,7,1) - not so good flow fixed

292,12,8140,1,0,0:0:0

312,8,8225,1,0,0:0:0

336,12,8311,38,0,B|380:36|380:96,1,100

SPOILER

01:16:152 (5) - ctrl+G [I think this could make a good flow on 01:16:493 (1)] fixed (本來就是這樣 然後sco叫我ctrl+g 現在又ctrl+g回來ww
If you want to keep , plz try this

SPOILER

01:19:902 (6) - Newcombo to read 01:19:902 (6,7,8,9) easily. 不了因為顏色梗的問題動一個就要全動 比較累
01:53:311 (1,2,3,4) - Not big issue,but ppl commonly think these are 1/2 sliders. funny pattern, no change.
01:58:765 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
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That's all.
Excellent Mapset
Fix these then I'll give you a bbl where's my bbl

1. 能不能加一個slidertick的clap那種custom hitsound 然後哪邊缺clap就用slidertick補上>_>?
2. Add tags: skystar (你的GD都有(吧?)

1. 00:47:856 (2) - (end) 去clap? 这裡沒音啊
2. 01:26:038 (1) - finish試試 其它diff都有上finish
3. 02:53:311 (1) - ^
4. 03:36:947 (1) - ^
5. 02:31:493 (1) - 头finish怎么樣

1. 00:11:208 (3,4,5) - 略亂 建議把(5)對準(4)的end 比較好read
2. 01:43:083 (2) - 这樣有点讓人覺得(3)跟(2)只有1/2的距離 会miss啊>_> 建議把(2)的reserve換一邊 像这樣
3. 02:34:561 (1) - 去nc? 前面都是跟前面的nc
4. 03:08:311 (6) - spacing? 還是我動到了
5. 03:14:788 (1) - 這裡就什麼音都沒有嗎 好歹上個clap(?
6. 03:33:197 (4) - (end)clap呢

1. 00:18:368 (3) - (nazi)第四個dot x:224, y:156 可能比較包点
2. 01:39:674 (1) - (nazi)第三個dot x:408, y:224
3. 02:43:424 (4) - (begin)clap呢
4. 03:10:186 (2,3,4,5) - 能不能擺個像这樣的排版 讓(3)被(1)包下去
   

   36,76,190186,1,2,0:0:0
   80,172,190356,1,0,0:0:0
   180,120,190527,1,2,0:0:0
   132,20,190697,2,0,B|92:24|80:72,1,75.0000028610231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 03:17:174 (1,2,1,2) - 我擦 疊起來嘛 不然会被誤認是1/2節奏哦

1. 不是a32's Hard么
2. 00:07:799 (5) - 換成1/2折返? 怎么聽怎么不順...
3. 00:13:424 - 補個note? 這裏也怪怪的
4. 01:16:322 (4) - 直覺1/2slider放長白線 比較順 真心的。。。
5. 02:43:424 (3) - clap
6. 02:44:277 (5) - 1/2 slider 放02:44:447 - 對照vocal会比較順
7. 03:27:231 (4) - 1/2 slider 放03:27:402 - ^
8. 03:30:811 (7) - remove clap
9. 03:36:606 (4) - x:148, y:292 看起來比較正方形 (?

Flask wrote:

Request from qq群

[General]

1. 能不能加一個slidertick的clap那種custom hitsound 然後哪邊缺clap就用slidertick補上>_>? 不是很必要
2. Add tags: skystar (你的GD都有(吧?) 這個行

[Normal]

1. 00:11:208 (3,4,5) - 略亂 建議把(5)對準(4)的end 比較好read 嗯 (沒記錯的話本來就是這樣然後被淚包姐姐建議改成階梯甚麼的>_>
2. 01:43:083 (2) - 这樣有点讓人覺得(3)跟(2)只有1/2的距離 会miss啊>_> 建議把(2)的reserve換一邊 像这樣 嗯
3. 02:34:561 (1) - 去nc? 前面都是跟前面的nc 不
4. 03:08:311 (6) - spacing? 還是我動到了 chewin說拉開比較好看...雖然我也覺得比較奇怪 改回來了
5. 03:14:788 (1) - 這裡就什麼音都沒有嗎 好歹上個clap(? whistle足夠
6. 03:33:197 (4) - (end)clap呢 失誤

[Lunatic]

1. 00:18:368 (3) - (nazi)第四個dot x:224, y:156 可能比較包点 嗯
2. 01:39:674 (1) - (nazi)第三個dot x:408, y:224 不明覺厲 自己改了下
3. 02:43:424 (4) - (begin)clap呢 失誤
4. 03:10:186 (2,3,4,5) - 能不能擺個像这樣的排版 讓(3)被(1)包下去 好
   

   36,76,190186,1,2,0:0:0
   80,172,190356,1,0,0:0:0
   180,120,190527,1,2,0:0:0
   132,20,190697,2,0,B|92:24|80:72,1,75.0000028610231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 03:17:174 (1,2,1,2) - 我擦 疊起來嘛 不然会被誤認是1/2節奏哦 有四方做鋪墊 感覺還行

Scor速給泡 然後rank 然後刷分時間 \:3/
加油!!

wantuole wrote:

star~

[A32's Hard]
00:47:515 (6,7) - 交换 ，延续前面4，5的倒退梗现在这个还好吧...
01:18:368 (2) - 还往角落里挤。。这有啥问题吗0.0
02:45:640 (3) - 换个位子，降的太多了改了

SPOILER

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

Mystica wrote:

Mod via irc

a32 see this

19:59 Mystica: hard
20:00 AmamiyaYuko: @a32
20:00 Mystica: 可以考虑在00:21:095 - 和00:21:606 - 加soft嘛...我觉得现在的还好
20:00 Mystica: 我给你说到时候你给他们看就行233
20:00 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯 0.0
20:02 Mystica: 00:35:072 - 这部分节奏像这样好点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/472861感觉这样节奏更顺一点...
20:02 Mystica: 01:07:970 (4) - 可以选择反个向变化下fixed~
20:03 Mystica: 01:18:368 (2) - 滑条遮挡slider尾部有可能被抓各种233如果再有人吐槽这就改吧...其实应该问题不大...
20:03 AmamiyaYuko: 咦這怎麼會被抓的
20:04 Mystica: 会有抱怨是否折返
20:04 AmamiyaYuko: 又不是折返...lol
20:04 Mystica: 233我被抓过所以
20:05 Mystica: 剩下没什么问题

x847606653 wrote:

A32's Hard
00:28:765 (1) - 第二点向上拉一下好
01:08:311 (5) - 微调一下形状。。略微调整...貌似看不出区别?233
02:01:493 (1) -- RNC感觉加了NC更舒服些?我不知道> >
怎么感觉GD做的比自己图好orz...我该用什么表情

Chewin wrote:

Hi, mod request from my modding queue

[A32's Hard]

1. 00:13:424 - Without a circle here the rhythm is too odd, really.add~
2. 01:53:311 (6) - New combook~
3. 01:58:765 (5) - ^ removing it from 02:00:129 (1)I think the current one is fine~
4. 02:44:277 (5) - This slider follows nothing. This rhythm would fit much better: http://puu.sh/1iSzbok
5. 03:27:231 (4) - ^keep this one> >
6. 03:28:424 (7) - CTRL + G maybe? It flows finer

ok~

That's it, good luck (:

Scorpiour wrote:

[A32's Hard]

1. 00:13:424 - 感觉这么重的鼓点跳过去了不是很舒服，考虑加个note？加了~
2. 00:26:038 (1) - 建议加个note来保持节奏的连续性我觉得现在这个还好了~
3. 00:42:402 (1) - 嗯……这里其实我更倾向于这种节奏因为Spinner正好横跨了Vocal的前后两句，不过没所谓啦～
   改了
4. 00:47:004 (5) - 这slider形状明显没有做好，弄对称了 - ugly slider, make it symmetricalfixed
5. 00:49:902 (6) - 考虑放个NC？ok
6. 00:55:697 (5) - 放到260:372?改了
7. 00:57:402 (4) - 听着不是很舒服的节奏……建议做成这样：好
   
8. 01:02:686 - 考虑加个note作为节奏的过渡？add
9. 01:21:777 - ^add
10. 02:00:129 (1,2,1) - 这里建议调整一下，去掉第一个(1)的NC，然后把第二个(1)的NC放到中间的(2)上，这样前后两句的Vocal会层次更清晰一些～cool idea~

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from PM Req

[A32's Hard]
00:11:379 (2) - Do not touch 00:11:038 (1) fixed
00:16:492 (1) - ^fixed
01:26:123 (1) - Finishadd finish and keep the whistle~

Fix these then I'll give you a bbl雪梦快上MAT!

Flask wrote:

[A32's Hard]

1. 不是a32's Hard么 我的几个gd都是大写命名呢0.0 其实我也不知道怎么回事233
2. 00:07:799 (5) - 換成1/2折返? 怎么聽怎么不順...感觉还好
3. 00:13:424 - 補個note? 這裏也怪怪的好...第三个吐槽这里的
4. 01:16:322 (4) - 直覺1/2slider放長白線 比較順 真心的。。。现在这样和vocal更契合点吧> >
5. 02:43:424 (3) - claporz thanks
6. 02:44:277 (5) - 1/2 slider 放02:44:447 - 對照vocal会比較順fixed~
7. 03:27:231 (4) - 1/2 slider 放03:27:402 - ^这个保留
8. 03:30:811 (7) - remove claporz这都看出来了 貌似复制时忘去掉了...
9. 03:36:606 (4) - x:148, y:292 看起來比較正方形 (?fixed!

Scorpiour wrote:

discuss some placements with mapper via irc and make a change in Lunatic diff.

the usage of hitsounds is outstanding, and also solid beat and placement.

enjoy your bubble and good luck with rank ~~~

MMzz wrote:

Really nice song (I love d&b <3) and the map is very interesting too. Your choice in sliders really makes this map unique. The only downside is you use 3/4 rhythm A LOT, and it gets kinda old after awhile. (For Lunatic that is.)

Red = Needs to be changed.
Black = Just a suggestion.

[General]
Add "Drum and Bass" to the tags, it's the song's genre. Added

[Lunatic]
00:09:163 (3) - Move this note closer to 4. I kept breaking on this thinking it was right after 2. Fixed
00:22:970 (1) - I would remove this and turn it into a jump that leads into the next combo instead. It will really bring out the build up in the kick drums. Sorry I'll keep it. Because it will be inconsistent with other parts if I change this.
00:28:424 (5) - Make this slider a regular 1 beat slider. This is the one of the few places the 3/4 rhythm feels very uncomfortable to play. Fixed
01:06:265 (1,1) - This 3/4 rhythm doesn't work either, it's really hard to explain but it's uncomfortable. Doing what you did here: 00:21:947 (1,1,1,1) - Would work way better, and the player already knows the rhythm so there will be no confusion. Changed to 1/2 sliders
02:33:538 (1,1) - ^ ^
03:17:174 (1,2,1,2) - Space these closer so the 1/3 is more recognizable. And since in the next section is almost the same spacing but 1/4 there can be confusion. Fixed

Other diffs are fine. Fix this up and we're ready to rank!

MMzz wrote:

Ranked!