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Dali - Moonlight Densetsu

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Silivren
[size=85:1337]This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 июня 2023 г. at 7:47:03[/size:1337]

[b:1337]Artist:[/b:1337] Dali
[b:1337]Title:[/b:1337] Moonlight Densetsu
[b:1337]Source:[/b:1337] 美少女戦士セーラームーン
[b:1337]Tags:[/b:1337] anime opening pretty soldier bishoujo senshi
[b:1337]BPM:[/b:1337] 140
[b:1337]Filesize:[/b:1337] 2336kb
[b:1337]Play Time:[/b:1337] 01:20
[b:1337]Difficulties Available:[/b:1337]
[list:1337][*:1337][url=https://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/Dali%20-%20Moonlight%20Densetsu%20(Silivren)%20%5bEasy%5d.osu:1337]Easy[/url:1337] (1,47 stars, 96 notes)
[*:1337][url=https://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/Dali%20-%20Moonlight%20Densetsu%20(Silivren)%20%5bHard%5d.osu:1337]Hard[/url:1337] (3,38 stars, 205 notes)
[*:1337][url=https://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/Dali%20-%20Moonlight%20Densetsu%20(Silivren)%20%5bInsane%5d.osu:1337]Insane[/url:1337] (3,98 stars, 259 notes)
[*:1337][url=https://osu.ppy.sh/web/maps/Dali%20-%20Moonlight%20Densetsu%20(Silivren)%20%5bNormal%5d.osu:1337]Normal[/url:1337] (1,88 stars, 131 notes)
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Hi there~
This is my 2nd beatmap revived from the slumber. Maybe it will have a chance to get ranked now :D
Hope you'll like it~ :3
kajiyatta
hi from #modreq
General
it's so old and popular in Japan.
almost suggestion. if you don't like, please skip it.
Easy
SV 1.10? I think it's a bit rapidly for newbie.
try to 1/2 beat snap divisor? I think 1/1 can't make accurate rythem.

Placement
00:38:939(1,2,3,4,1,2) make consistantly?
Rythem
00:11:082~ a bit weird for me. try this rythem?
00:17:802(1) I think it's short for newbie. make longer or replace notes better
01:14:725(1) tr this?
01:17:510(3) ^
Hit Sonud
01:18:796(1) whistle→finish?

Normal
Placement
00:20:725(3,4,5,1) I think it's not clear for Normal. a bit confused so replace better.

Rythem
00:53:082(1,2,3,4) try this rythem?
01:11:725(1,2,3,4) I think this stack makes a bit confused. try this rytem?
01:15:153(1,2,3,4)^
Hit Sonud


Hard
Placement
00:16:010(4,5,6) try this placement?(like star}
00:21:796(4) NC
00:45:796(5)^
00:23:510(1) removed NC
01:09:153(1,2,3,1) try this placement?
Rythem
00:05:510 add a note?
Hit Sonud

Insane
Placement
00:43:867(6) so far I think :0
Rythem
Hit Sonud
00:37:010(1) remove finish at the end?
01:08:189(2) remove whistle?

that's all. Good luck~
Topic Starter
Silivren

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from #modreq

Easy
SV 1.10? I think it's a bit rapidly for newbie. Maybe. But for now i want it to be 1.10. if there will be more suggestions to decrease SV, I will remap it ;) Thanx

Hit Sonud
01:18:796(1) whistle→finish? all other diffs has whistle here. I think it fits music better

Normal

Rythem
00:53:082(1,2,3,4) try this rythem?
If I make it so, then the note after spinner will appear too soon for Normal, I think. So let it be as it is now. :)



Hard
Rythem
00:05:510 add a note? No use. There is no music at all in this moment. But I changed placement and spacing so now it is not confusing when playing (I guess x]]). Thanx for pointing it out :)
All other mods are fixed ;) Thank you a lot! Your mod was really useful! And thanx for the star ^__^
Finelai
Approve it. Great map for great song. <3
Topic Starter
Silivren
Edit this someone pls~
Topic Starter
Silivren
Up!
Blan_C
Hello, NM from queue

Insane

  1. 00:02:510 (1,2,3) - Blankets are off
  2. 00:04:653 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:04:653 (1,2,3,4) - Okay so this is a bit weird to me. You end slider 00:05:296 - where important beat is, that should be clickable. Moreover, in 00:05:510 - and 00:06:153 - are sounds - not that important but definietly worth mapping. Try this to make every sound mapped:
  4. 00:07:010 - I would like you to map it too.
  5. 00:08:510 (2) - You can ctrl g this to make it flowy.
  6. 00:09:367 (4,5,1) - This looks bad to me - Maybe this: https://puu.sh/wDzu3/ac97ddf28a.jpg
    Also work on shape of the slider - its badly bended to me.
  7. 00:10:867 - Making this start on red ticks and ending on white is bad idea as its starting on sounds with lower importance. Try:
  8. 00:16:010 - Missed note
  9. 00:19:225 (3,4,5) - Make spacing consistant between circles and improve blanket from slider.
  10. 00:21:153 - You start sliders on red ticks again, avoid that. It seldom works. There for example its not working as beats on white ticks have more importance that red ones. Try:
  11. 00:22:867 (7,1) - Starts on red ticks again
  12. 00:25:225 (1,2) - Blanket
  13. 00:32:939 (4,6) - Make blanket here.
  14. 00:37:010 (1,2) - Starts on red ticks again
  15. 01:02:296 (1,3) - Blanket
  16. 01:03:367 (4,6) - ^
  17. 01:07:867 (1) - Importand sound on slidertail. Please make this clickable.
  18. 01:09:582 (2) - ^
  19. 01:18:796 (5) - This slider is outdated to me, most of ppl wont like it -make spin from it or improve design of slider.
Hard

  1. 00:01:225 (1,2) - Blanket
  2. 00:02:510 (1,2) - Make clickable notes with high volume.
  3. 00:08:296 (4) - ^
  4. 00:14:939 (1,2,3) - Blankets + start in on white ticks
  5. 00:20:082 (1,2) - ctrl g to follow vocals
  6. 00:21:796 (1,2) - blankets
  7. 00:28:010 (1,2) - ^
  8. 00:28:867 (3,5) - ^
  9. 00:39:367 (4,5,6) - ctrl g to start it on white ticks.
  10. 00:41:725 (1,2,3) - Blankets.
  11. 01:04:439 (1,2) - ^
  12. 01:05:725 (1,2) - ^
Topic Starter
Silivren
Everything is fixed!
Thank you a lot!
Pok0555
wtf, this map was over 5 years ago
If you wanna rank this, ask for more mod, when you have 12 kudosu in your map, call a BN to judge your map
anyway, I'm from my NM q
General
In your metadata, you have to write the sauce in Japanese (美少女戦士セーラームーン)
Easy seems fine to me so I won't mod it
Normal
00:05:510 (2) - I think you should move back to the red tick, make the slider smaller and add a reverse, so that it ends at 00:05:939 since there's no particular beats I heard at 00:05:510
00:17:082 (1) - This spinner is a bit too short for new players to achieve a good score, consider replacing it with a long slider instead
00:50:939 (1) - ^
01:18:796 (1) - ^
00:21:796 (1) - Looks better if you move it to x:260 y:156
00:45:796 (1) - Make this slider more creative, it's long so it has a lot of potential
01:01:653 (4) - Consider making this into a straight one instead, and all the other curve reverse sliders too, it looks better in my opinion

Hard
00:09:153 (7,8,9) - Consider make this jump a bit smaller, it's too hard even for hard -_-
00:16:225 (5) - This shouldn't be a jump, there's no particular strong beats here
00:23:082 (3,4,5) - Stack this on top of 00:22:439 (2) end or else put some distant between them
00:24:153 (6) - Doesn't seem like a strong beat here, don't make a jump
00:44:296 (1,2) - ^
00:35:510 (3) - Shouldn't this ends on 00:35:725 instead?
00:47:296 (3) - Shouldn't this ends on 00:47:725 instead?
00:47:939 (4) - This should also end on the red tick
01:12:153 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - You should seperate this into 2 different stacks instead, it's kinda hard to read this way

Insane
00:12:796 (8,9) - Cross screen jumps like this is only appropriate to use in Extra diffs
01:10:225 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:13:653 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:939 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - How about making this stream into a straight one instead?
01:02:939 (1) - This should end on the red tick
01:03:367 (2) - I recommend putting some distant between this circle and the slider's end, it's hard to read
Welp that's all, ask for more modders to help u rank this map
Good luck! ;)
Topic Starter
Silivren
Yeah. I had some things to do during these 5 years :D

Thank you a lot. Everything is fixed.

Yes, i am trying to ask moders to mod this maps, but this is hard since i do not know anyone in person, and it is difficult to find an open modding queue :[
Antlia-
NM from my queue
Nice

Antlia- wrote:

Easy

00:04:653 (1) Remove the kiai here
00:09:796 (1) put a note on the next white tick like this
00:20:082 (1) ctrl+G this

Antlia- wrote:

Normal

00:53:939 (1,2) Replace this pls
01:18:796 (1) Spinner here

Antlia- wrote:

Hard

00:04:010 (1,2) snap circles to the noise here
00:24:153 (6,7,8) stack all of your triplets

Antlia- wrote:

Insane

Distance snap is not need here
00:30:582 (1,2,3,4) make these jumps flow better
01:15:796 (4,5) make a stream here
GL on getting this ranked
Topic Starter
Silivren
Thank You! Everything is done except for:

Antlia- wrote:

Hard

00:04:010 (1,2) snap circles to the noise here

What did you mean?
Aniki Kensin
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