1. Crazy (3,57 stars, 481 notes)
2. Relaxing (1,61 stars, 203 notes)
3. Tony's Difficult (2,76 stars, 389 notes)

1. Hitsounds could be made louder, it might be difficult to descern whether you are timing hits correctly, such as more complicated patterns like on Tony's Hard 00:36:690 to 00:38:190 or the sliders on Normal at 00:30:190 or 00:48:190

1. Generally could use more varied hitsounds like whistle or clap (that, or it's hard to hear)
2. 00:28:315 The circle that appears right after the spinner might be difficult for normal diff players to hit (including me). Could recommend it end at 00:27:690 instead, or have the entire spinner mapped normally - us normal folk are fine with normal maps after all
3. The long pause at 1:00:190 might be a bit scary for newer players due to how the health drains, recommend mapping a simple slider to it (I found a white tick-white tick slider with constant reversals good enough)

Eagle98 wrote:

Interesting map, and a tad surprised it hasn't been modded yet. Not used to this kind of mapping (spoiled by m980 perhaps) but I'll give it my best shot.

Overall

1. Hitsounds could be made louder, it might be difficult to descern whether you are timing hits correctly, such as more complicated patterns like on Tony's Hard 00:36:690 to 00:38:190 or the sliders on Normal at 00:30:190 or 00:48:190

I don't see any problems with the hitsounds there.

Normal

1. Generally could use more varied hitsounds like whistle or clap (that, or it's hard to hear)
2. 00:28:315 The circle that appears right after the spinner might be difficult for normal diff players to hit (including me). Could recommend it end at 00:27:690 instead, or have the entire spinner mapped normally - us normal folk are fine with normal maps after all
3. The long pause at 1:00:190 might be a bit scary for newer players due to how the health drains, recommend mapping a simple slider to it (I found a white tick-white tick slider with constant reversals good enough)

I agree, this is my bad, I fixed it

I'm not to the point where I can even get pass a typical hard map, so I've refrained from commenting on those difficulties.

Overall, interesting beatmap in terms of Normal - Just needs a bit of polishing and then I think it's good to go!

ShadowSoul wrote:

I don't see any problems with the hitsounds there.

Len wrote:

:3/

I don't know how to mod normal and my English is bad sry ><

[General]

1. Hitsounds are so little. Raise the volume

Okay after 2 people mentioned this now, I'll change it abit

[Tony's Hard]

1. I think AR7 is fit in this map.
2. 00:53:440 (1,2,3) 02:41:440 (1,2,3) 02:56:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe difficult for hard? It's just fine for me, hards nowadays aren't normals, get used to it <3
   
3. 01:40:690 (4) 01:46:940 (7) 01:56:690 (5) - Spacing here is better I like it more
4. 01:48:190 (4) 01:54:190 (6) - Ctrl + G Changed this one.

Yes, I am allowed to change his diff.

[Insane]

1. 01:43:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 01:59:190 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 02:03:190 (3,4,5) -
3. 02:51:190 (2,3) -

Fixed it all!
gl

1. Try to fade your colours a bit? They seem a bit too bright. Something less bright would look better and be safer for people's eyes.

1. Try AR3,5 and OD/HP 2,5. THe spread won't get too unbalanced and the diff will look better as the easiest dff of the mapset.
2. 00:13:690 (2) - sounds quite off the vocals and does not work well with the drums either. Give a chance to something like this as it will fit better.
3. 00:26:190 - start the spinner here, as the vocals start at this point and this is a very strong beat. Exactly the same thing applies for a couple more spinners.
   Note: 01:26:190 - same.
4. 00:37:690 (2,3) - try to Ctrl+G them. It will give you better rhythm and match better with the drums.
   Note: you'll have to fix the spacing afterwards, tho.
5. 00:42:940 (1) - 00:58:940 (1) - aren't these spinners are a bit too short for the easiest? I don't remember much from 2012, but even then we did not use this short spinners in E-N diffs.
6. 01:12:190 - haven't you missed a circle here? It would fit perfectly and make sense with the music, give it a try.
7. 01:14:940 - try tyo place an 1/2 slider with a repeat here/ I am sre that you can make your rhythm a bit more intense to make the diff more challlenging and to represent the rhythm better, of course!
   Note: also, try to fill the gaps like 01:17:690 - as this is still a somewhat close to Normal, you should make it a bit more difficult.
8. 01:29:190 (1,2) - quite similar with the suggestion above, try to make your rhythm a bit more intense. The BPM is low and your rhythm feels way too easy fr this kind of diffs.
9. 02:32:190 - please, do not ignore the beginning of the kiai. As I've suggested you to make the diff harder, you will map some more beats and mapping these one would be a great idea!
   
   As the diff is quite repetitive, some of the suggestions apply for similar parts/patterns. I feel like you should work a bit more on the rhythm. Also, as we've disussed in-game, improving your flow would also be a nice thing.

1. I'd use AR 6,5 or 7 as your current AR seems a bit too slow.
2. 00:26:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - try to reducethe DS of the jumps in general as they don't really work well in slow songs and look quite weird with low AR. I'd go with x1,5-x1,6 DS as it looks neater and more logical, a specially with this part of the song.
   Note: obviously, these are not the only jumps that should be reduced.
3. 01:16:190 - you have a missed hitobject here, I am quite sure that this beat shouldn't be empty. Besides, the transition from 1/4s to 1/1 feels unnatural in this part, adding a circle should solve the problem.
   Note: 01:22:940 - quite the same thing. How about smething like this?
4. 01:31:940 (4) - such sliders may be rather uncomfortable and hard to read as the second repeat appears really late and is totally unexpected. Two 1/2 sliders or something like this.
5. 02:00:940 (4,1) - 02:02:940 (4,1) - the jumps here were not really reasoanble, I could not feel them in the music, I would highly suggest you to avoid them and re-arrange the pattern in another way. I like the way it's placed, but, unfortuanately, it does not work rhythmically.
   Note: 02:09:940 (4,1) - same, this one is insanely exaggerated, by the way.
6. 02:25:565 (3) - this one sounds really off music to me + polarity breaks here. Simly try something like this to fix hte rhythm
7. 02:56:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great! ♥
   
   Just as I've said, you should think about the jumps and work more with the diff settings. Also, some parts feel really weird in terms of rhythm, so, check it once again carefully, please. Not bad, but could use some work.

1. OD 7 would be a better choice, if you ask me. The diff standards have gone higher, it shouldn't be a problem. Well, you know it better, don't you?
2. 00:12:190 - to be honest, I've expected these beats to be mapped. As your rhythm is based on both vocals and music, mapping the downbeats won't hurt. In fact, you've alrady mapped 00:20:190 (1) - why not do it again?
3. 00:26:190 (1) - try to use two sliders instead and place a jump between them. A pattern with gradually increasing DS would be great. example
4. 00:43:690 (3) - as the 1/4 jump feels quite tricky, a new combo to separate the stream from this jump would work well. Give it a try, it even looks better.
5. 00:58:440 (5,6,1) - sorry, but the DS change does not really fit here. It seems a bit out of place, I believe.
   Note: 01:43:690 (3) - you've got the idea, right?
6. 01:45:190 (2,3) - I've missed those whistles in the first kiai, don't you feel the same way? Try to keep your hitsounding a bit more consistent?
7. 02:02:690 (1,2) - according to the jump pattern you've had before, these two should be Ctrl+D'd.
8. 02:25:690 (2) - having the strong beat in the middle of a slider feels weird. A crhythm like would fit better, wellm at least try to consider changing your rhythm at this part.
   
   Yay, you could make it even better, but it's okay.

streeteelf wrote:

A little mod from me. Nice song btw.

[General]

*Check AIMod, there are different names in different diffs

[Normal]

*00:36:690 - Circle
*00:44:690 - ^
*00:52:690 - ^
*00:54:190 (3) - Change into 1 beat long slider - between 2 white ticks
*01:00:690 - Insert Break time
*01:11:190 (4) - Change to 1 beat long slider and add 01:12:190 circle
*01:15:190 - Circle
*01:17:690 - 1 beat long slider
*01:28:690 - Circle
*01:36:690 - 1 beat long slider and remove this circle: 01:37:190 (1)
*01:44:690 - Circle
*01:52:690 - ^
*01:54:190 (3) - Change to 1 beat long slider
*02:00:690 - Circle
*02:11:190 (4) - Add reverse
*02:14:190 - Circle
*02:48:690 - ^
*02:59:190 (4) - Add reverse
*03:02:190 - Circle
No changes for normal, I prefer it the way I did it.
[Tony's Hard]

*01:43:690 (3,1) - Confusing - map it in different way Fixed that one.

*After all IMO this diff is unrankable as Hard, because you use too much parts: slider(3/4)-circle or something like that, it's too hard for people who starts playing hards. It's good in Insane, but too hard for Hard. (sounds a little funny )

[Insane]

*No suggestions, for me it's good.

Generally good map. Good luck~

ShadowSoul wrote:

Yes, I am allowed to change his diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

[Tony's Difficult]

1. I'd use AR 6,5 or 7 as your current AR seems a bit too slow. Alright, changed to 7.
2. 00:26:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - try to reducethe DS of the jumps in general as they don't really work well in slow songs and look quite weird with low AR. I'd go with x1,5-x1,6 DS as it looks neater and more logical, a specially with this part of the song. Hmm, 1.6 still feels too close. I mean she is definitely shouting "WHERE DO YOU THINK YOURE GOING BABY?", this part needs to be as crazy as she is LOL. Anyway I reduced the DS to 1.7
   Note: obviously, these are not the only jumps that should be reduced. Oh boy, I'm so lazy.. Okay fixed.
3. 01:16:190 - you have a missed hitobject here, I am quite sure that this beat shouldn't be empty. Besides, the transition from 1/4s to 1/1 feels unnatural in this part, adding a circle should solve the problem. Considering that I followed vocals there, and it's the same rhythm as 01:13:940 (5) -, I dont think I should add a note there
   Note: 01:22:940 - quite the same thing. How about smething like this? Me no licky
4. 01:31:940 (4) - such sliders may be rather uncomfortable and hard to read as the second repeat appears really late and is totally unexpected. Two 1/2 sliders or something like this. Fixed in my own way, lol.
5. 02:00:940 (4,1) - the jumps here were not really reasoanble, I could not feel them in the music, I would highly suggest you to avoid them and re-arrange the pattern in another way. I like the way it's placed, but, unfortuanately, it does not work rhythmically. Alright, fixed
   Note: 02:09:940 (4,1) - same, this one is insanely exaggerated, by the way. Alright, fixed
6. 02:25:565 (3) - this one sounds really off music to me + polarity breaks here. Simly try something like this to fix hte rhythm The rhythm you suggested feels a little bit too boring imo. I just used the same rhythm as in other parts.
7. 02:56:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great! ♥
   
   Just as I've said, you should think about the jumps and work more with the diff settings. Also, some parts feel really weird in terms of rhythm, so, check it once again carefully, please. Not bad, but could use some work.

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  all good but where Video?? owo
  Video : http://puu.sh/bqXgF/a8537085fd.rar (.....)

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  02:12:190 - circle?
  02:32:190 - maybe 2nd Kiai Time open "circle" ?
  03:04:190 - 30% volume

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  Yay is very good

1. The stack leniency is a little bit too low for my tastes...
2. 00:11:190 (3) - Try adding a whistle at the end of this slider and not only on the reverse. Same for 00:19:190 (2) - this one.
   
3. 00:26:690 (2) - Here is missing a whistle on its head.
4. 00:42:940 (7) - This new combo is really unneeded, you should remove it.
5. 00:44:190 (5) - Add a finish on this note, it sounds really good since it's the second part of the chorus.
6. 00:44:690 (1,2) - I'd suggest to increase the distance between these two object, they are a little bit too close imo.
7. 00:58:690 (6,1,2) - I'm not sure about the spacing you used between these notes, I think you should fix it by fixing the whole pattern by yourself.
8. 01:27:190 (1,2,3,4) - A bit nazi, but I'd pref if you'd make this square perfect!
9. 01:54:440 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's unneeded since you have followed the voice until now.
10. 02:00:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It's not unplayable, but the flow you made between these two squares is really bad and annoying to play.
11. 02:48:190 (10) - In this case add a new combo on this note and remove the new combo from 02:48:440 (1) - here.

1. You've misplaced the whistles from the beginnning until 00:20:190. You should add them at 00:04:690 (2), 00:06:190 (4), 00:08:690 (1) and so on.
2. 00:13:440 (2) - I'd suggest adding a curve for this one, two straight sliders look kind of weird for this pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:690 (1) - Distance snap? Also, move to x:120, y:224 for a better blanket.
4. 00:38:190 (3) - To avoid interfering with the following blanket that you made for 00:41:190 (1), how about you move this here (turn it a bit so that the head and tail of the slider has the same angle as the two circles before):
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:18:690 (1) - Did you make this be one grid below the previous circle on purpose? Maybe do this for the following objects:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:57:190 (4) - Just go with a symmetrical pattern here, copy and flip 01:55:690 (2), then put 01:58:190 (5) somewhere around.
7. 02:32:190 - This place asks for a note. Up till now you had one of these parts thanks to the spinners, but since there's no spinner here, you either add it, or a circle instead. Choose one of these options:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   or
   
   
8. 02:45:190 (6) - NC here? Kind of a too long combo otherwise.

1. 00:06:690 (1) - A slight distance snap error here.
2. 00:19:190 (3) - Might be just me, but this looks kind of weird, just make it wider:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:54:690 (1) - Like this perhaps, should look better and won't leave a big impact on the following pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:15:190 (1) - How about moving this to x:140, y:184? Will reduce the jump distance, but at the same time this and the following jump will have the same distance and the pattern will look better.

1. 00:42:690 (6,1) - A symmetrycal little jump should work here, move the first circle to x:152, y:312 and the second one to x:360 ,y: 312, or somewhere else as long it's symmetrical.
2. 00:42:940 (1) - I doubt the new combo here is necessary. You didn't use it anywhere else for this part.
3. 00:53:940 (6) - Not a big deal, but I'm sure you wanted the curve for this to be in the middle since the following slider is there.
4. 01:09:440 (4) - I KNOW YOU WANTED THIS TO BE AT x:256, y:88!! You might have to fix the 01:08:690 (1,2,3,4) to have the same distance if you do this.
5. 01:36:190 (4) - Add NC like at 00:36:190 (1).
6. 02:57:940 (5) - I think it's better to flip it, just use the shape of the previous slider here:
   
   SPOILER