hey
you postet in my queue...
i like this song ^^ was mapping it myself a few days ago, but just for my own entertainment, not going to submit it ;D
General:> there are 2 BG.jpg files in your SB Folder, they are completely the same. it's enough to use just one File, you can use the file for all events!
> Set your Preview Point here 01:53:120 - pls ;_; this part is so awesooomee :'D
> why is there an extra difficulty called raster's mad in your map? it is not in your mapset, it is in the folder but does not belong to the other 3 diffs...
[Normal]
> you definitly need hitsounds, you didn't use any hitsounds in your map
> you messed up some slidershapes
they look ugly..
00:40:820 (3) - mirror this one? would look better
00:43:820 (2) - you can do this one better, make it symmetrical
01:21:020 (8) - this one is moe moe too :c
01:38:120 (1) - it's just ugly and unfitting D: please make the slider ending 01:38:720 - here and find a better shape, also set circles 01:39:020 - here and 01:39:320 - here after that.
01:42:620 (1) - delete note and adjust spacing after
02:37:820 (5,2) - this overlapping is not good for a normal diff
02:39:620 (4,7) - ^
[Hard]
> You definitly like stacking and overlapping ;_; this is kinda messing up this difficulty on some parts... but you will need a higher AR, i suggest AR7 or 8!!
00:22:520 (3,4) - does not look nice, you can perfectly stack the ends of the sliders with each other or change it so no slider touches each other.
00:24:320 (4,7,8) - overlapping -_- change it please
00:26:420 (4,5) - ^
00:27:470 (6,7,1,2,3) - ^
00:27:470 (6,7,1,2,3) - please replace it with something else, there is many overlapping and it doesn't look nice neither is it fun to play or anything, just a circle line, done in an ugly way
00:27:920 (1,2,3,4) - too much claps x.x maybe just the sliderends clapping plz
00:39:020 (2) - this is some kind of lazyness slider again. it looks like it took you 2,4 sek. to place it
make it more like this:
SPOILERbefore:
after:
^ i forgot the reverse arrow on my beautiful slider x3 keep that reverse arrow, i just forgot it!
00:40:520 (6,7,1) - this is some strange spacing for a hard diff, you do x1,2 and then instantly x0,6... please change this somehow ;_; maybe remap this part or something...
00:54:170 (7) - this is hurting in my eyes ;_; it just looks so... messy...
01:35:720 (5) - please not
01:53:120 (1) - what the hell went wrong with that sliderbody?
01:55:520 (5) - ;_; sliderforms are always a long discussion... some ppl think it is creativity.. other people think it looks like an accident...
02:06:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this overlapping is unrankable i guess, just move 02:06:920 (1,2,3) - 5smallgrids left and 02:08:120 (1,2,3) - 5smallgrids right.
02:09:320 (1,2) - just delete that and find something else, you have to adjust spacing anyways if you did the last ^ point.
02:30:920 (1,1,1) - delete nc pls
i guess this mapset needs much work and veeeryyy much modding until its perfect ;_;
[Insane]
> overlapping and slidershapes are big problems in this diff also
00:22:670 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - please spread this out somehow, it's just mapping objects over and over each other again, and its overlapping so harrrd ;_;
00:43:220 (1,2) - find something else please
00:45:170 (1) - ^
01:02:420 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - this does not fit and is strange to play, please just keep the cirlce - minislider thingy for that part!
01:29:195 (1) - pls do not begin the stream under the hitburst from other circles, overlapping!
01:29:945 (2,3,4) - this is just an example, there is moe moe spacing in this stream! please use tiny grid for streams, otherwise it will turn out with messed up streamspacing which is moe!
01:31:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - please don't clapspam the end, it would sound better if you just keep the normal rythym like before!
01:57:920 (9,1) - why this antijump? it feels ugly to play.
02:09:920 (3) - w-..wtf?
02:23:345 (3) - this just cant start on a blue tick, it's just wrong..
02:24:545 (6) - ^
02:35:720 (9,10) - - 1smallgrid left
02:38:120 (4) - 1 more reverse arrow
ooh ma gosh im finished ;_; i guess you will still need maaaany modding
but i like the song very much and i wish you best luck
never give up! hope my mod helped!!