Gero wrote:

Mod Request From My Queue O3O
Nice Song *·* Thanks~
Since i don't see any map of this song ranked i made up my proper ver ><


[Easy]

00:18:021 (4) - This slider is inconsistent X.X No isn't inconsistent, because previous slider have round slide shape.

[Normal]
00:24:760 (1) - ^ Ok
01:01:824 (3) - removes the clap Same reason as in pimpG mod, following vocal.
01:05:531 (2) - ^ ^

Nice Job :3 And Nice Map
is all I could find I hope will be useful Just fixed oxe thing but your mod is good

1. Nothing here~ Congratulation.. you win a Kdstar.

1. 00:16:673 (1) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:388|y:44 [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 00:19:369 (5) - NewCombo (?
3. 00:24:760 (1) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:88|y:144 [Grid lvl: 4]
4. 00:29:477 (4) - NewCombo (?

1. HP & OD to 6
2. 01:20:019 (5) - NewCombo.

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
xxxholic? Where is the xxx.. false advertising.. lol

Easy:

1. Nothing here~ Congratulation.. you win a Kdstar. YAY![/color]

Normal:

1. 00:16:673 (1) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:388|y:44 [Grid lvl: 4] Ok
2. 00:19:369 (5) - NewCombo (? Ok
3. 00:24:760 (1) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:88|y:144 [Grid lvl: 4] Ok
4. 00:29:477 (4) - NewCombo (? Ok

Hard:

1. HP & OD to 6
2. 01:20:019 (5) - NewCombo. Ok

OKAY- That is all.. Wanna see this map ranked :33 Looks very good..~ Good luck! Thank you very much!

• 
  * Except for Easy maybe, it would be a lot better if there was a spinner at 00:32:847 Even if you don't add the spinner, its missing something on the lyric "goo" or whatever on the red tick afterwards and it doesn't feel right.

• 
  00:10:608 (3,1) I think if you change 3 to just a circle on the starting point, move 1 a beat early, and extend 1 to a 4 beat slider, it would sound better (maybe).
  * 00:15:999 (3) It feels like there should be a circle here. I think you should shorten 3 by a repeat, move it over a beat, and then add a circle here. It would make more sense rhythmically.

• 
  00:04:880 (3) A bit picky, but this isn't the same as (3,4) just before it. I just feel like there should be some symmetry rhythm wise.
  01:10:922 It feels so missing without a circle here.

• 
  Hmm... I think Overal Difficulty may be a bit too low, but you should raise HP Drain Rate to at least 5.
  * 00:21:390 (7,8,9) I don't think the distance spacing is the same as other notes that are 1/4 beats apart in this difficulty. Was this intentional? Well anyways, it just looks too weird and odd.
  * 00:23:412 (3,4,5,6) Look at the distance spacing.
  01:21:030 (4,5) Looks odd when stacked, but would probably look weird unstacked so nvm.

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there, from my modding queue.
* = A bit more stressed than others.

[General:]

• 
  * Except for Easy maybe, it would be a lot better if there was a spinner at 00:32:847 Even if you don't add the spinner, its missing something on the lyric "goo" or whatever on the red tick afterwards and it doesn't feel right. I think is fine, don't think something is missing here.

[Easy:]

• 
  00:10:608 (3,1) I think if you change 3 to just a circle on the starting point, move 1 a beat early, and extend 1 to a 4 beat slider, it would sound better (maybe). Current rhtyhm is fine for a Easy
  * 00:15:999 (3) It feels like there should be a circle here. I think you should shorten 3 by a repeat, move it over a beat, and then add a circle here. It would make more sense rhythmically. ^

[Normal:]

• 
  00:04:880 (3) A bit picky, but this isn't the same as (3,4) just before it. I just feel like there should be some symmetry rhythm wise. I think i undertand what you means here, fixed.
  01:10:922 It feels so missing without a circle here. No, goes well with bgm.

[Hard:]

• 
  Hmm... I think Overal Difficulty may be a bit too low, but you should raise HP Drain Rate to at least 5. Ok
  * 00:21:390 (7,8,9) I don't think the distance spacing is the same as other notes that are 1/4 beats apart in this difficulty. Was this intentional? Well anyways, it just looks too weird and odd. E-eto...i really don't think is nothing too weird here, it's intentional and really plays well with next slider (9).
  * 00:23:412 (3,4,5,6) Look at the distance spacing. [/color]
  01:21:030 (4,5) Looks odd when stacked, but would probably look weird unstacked so nvm. Just deleted the (5)

Sorry for the small mod, couldn't find much. Its a nice song. Good luck. [color=#FF0000]Thanks for mod./color]

copolah123 wrote:

Random mod
All Suggestion (Ignore it if you don't like it

[General]
The offset is only 500,you can consider to increase audio lead-in to 2 seconds Will be the same if i do this
Star Differences between Easy and Normal is too far (IMO),consider making more "harder" easy? No because this is my representation of easy

[Easy]
HP Drain,OD&AR +1? Since bpm is low will keep and AR+1 is too hard for easy i think
00:22:064 I think the slider is better end at 00:23:412 and add note at 00:24:086 Slider ticks cover the vocals so will keep it
00:24:760 ^ end at 00:26:108, add note 1 beat after it ^
00:33:015 I think break here is not necessary i think this break is fine
00:38:238 pretty much same pattern like 00:22:064 Remapped one slider here
00:43:629 ^ ^
00:49:020 ^ ^

[Normal]
CS +1? No
00:18:695 do you do this intentionally? If not you can move to x:104 y:124 Orz, no but i think my current place is better than yours.

Note: If you change this you may need to do re-spacing starting from 00:18:695

[Hard]
AR -1? No because this is a easy diff
00:16:673 finish sound at the beginning Ok
00:19:031 if you follow my suggestion above add finish here too ^
00:26:781 remove the finish sound No, stronger sound here.
00:33:183 add note here Following BGM here

finished..
Good luck with your map

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

hello from your friend KuronumaSawako's request Will thank her later
i love the background image btw Me too

[General]

SPOILER

tick rate works fine

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:01:847 (4) - and 00:03:869 (3) - , its a bit confused to change the spacing, i mean in the later part, your spacing for this pattern is 0.6, so i recommend you to make it 0.6x also Ok
00:21:390 (3,4) - same here ^
00:31:162 (3) - move right by 1 or 2 would be better Ok
you may add a spinner from 00:33:183 to 00:35:542 Kay

[Normal]

SPOILER

you may add a spinner from 00:33:183 to 00:35:542 Ok

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:10:608 (3) - ends on the white tick It's already ended in white tick
00:13:977 (2) - i think you may miss clicked this. ? Can't undesrtand
00:22:064 (1) - and 00:24:760 (2) - ends on the white tick Goes well with vocals because slidertick covers well with vocals
you may add a spinner from 00:33:183 to 00:35:542 Ok
00:51:716 (2) - the turning point sounds weird, i highly recommend you to change this. maybe like this Ok

nice work and good luck

Wolf wrote:

Olá ♪ Oieeeee
From my Modding Queue

General
Tudo em ordem aqui.

Easy
00:11:956 (1) - Hmm, levando o fato que esse slider tá um pouquinho fora do grid (no fim do slider) que tal abaixar ele um pouco mais? Ficaria legal na minha opinião. Ah, e se você for aceitar essa sugestão, não se esqueça de verificar o spacing das outras notas (já que você vai mudar esse slider de lugar) Ok
00:20:043 (5) - Já que no final do slider anterior você colocou um finish, que tal um new combo aqui? o (5) no caso dá continuação ao vocal do slider anterior (5 está seguindo esse trecho: "Sou me to me ga atta")
00:20:716 (1) - Se aceitar a sugestão acima, remova o new combo, pra ficar consistente. Como não segui a sugestão acima vou deixar assim mesmo.
00:43:629 (1) - Bom, dava pra ter feito esse slider simétrico, mas se isso for te dar muito trabalho pode deixar ele assim mesmo. Não nem tanto trabalho assim, mas acho que esse slider fica bem desse jeito então vou deixar ele assim mesmo.
00:51:716 (3) - New Combo?
01:07:889 (1,2,3) - Eu teria feito eles assim. Ficaria visivelmente melhor eu acho, já que estariam simétricos. Boa sugestão concordo, eu acho que simetria deixa tudo visivelmente melhor imo. Mas não quero estragar o flow entre o final do 1 e a curva do 2.
Só pra constar, depois de ter feito qualquer mudança não se esqueça de checar com o distance snapping pra ver se tem alguma nota fora do lugar.

Normal
00:13:641 (1) - Remove New Combo? Ok
00:14:314 (4) - New Combo aqui, se tiver aceitado sugestão acima. ^
00:32:847 (1) - Remove New Combo. A não ser que você queira ter dado ênfase nesse circle. Exatamente por isso vou deixar o NC desse jeito.

Hard
00:52:389 (3) - Mover pra x:432 y:256 pra ficar alinhado com 00:52:052 (2) - ? Ok
Fora isso, essa diff ficou muito boa. *---------------* Arigato <3

Boa sorte! Obrigado pelo o mod

1. Are you sure that the BPM is 89,034? Decimals are rarely used.
2. If you look into the .osu you'll see that there are decimals on the SliderMultiplier. This is not really an issue
   Changing this to non-decimals might mess up your sliders, so there's no need for this to be changed. just a reminder

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

Saten wrote:

[General]

1. Are you sure that the BPM is 89,034? Decimals are rarely used. When i asked help popner give me this BPM so i think is right.
2. If you look into the .osu you'll see that there are decimals on the SliderMultiplier. This is not really an issue
   Changing this to non-decimals might mess up your sliders, so there's no need for this to be changed. just a reminder If will mess up with my sliders i will not fix

[Hard]
I think you should increase the difficulty settings a bit. The current settings are pretty low imo Ok
00:09:260 (2,3) - claps I will keep this for now, finish here doesn't sounds so bad.
00:24:254 (6,7) - I think this fit better if it starts on a red or white tick instead Good, fixed

SPOILER

00:28:129 (2) - curve this slider a little bit more Fixed i think, a code is better

SPOILER

00:50:368 (3) - replace the clap with a whistle instead Ok
01:01:150 (3) - whistle instead Well, now i start to feeling this clap here isn't right here...will consider
01:03:846 (3) - same here on the start. Claps fit best on upbeats for the regular pattern Ok
01:06:204 - add a note here to make a more steady flow? Kay
01:11:932 (3) - whistle instead Ok
01:14:291 (3) - whistle instead of a clap Ok
01:16:987 - same as before. Add a note here Following the vocals here and i don't think sounds bad
01:17:155 (3,4) - make something similar like you did on 01:06:373 (4,5) - Okay

[Normal]
00:05:217 (4) - add a clap here. I guess you missed it Okay
00:09:260 (2,3) - claps emphasizing the BGM sound here
01:01:824 (3) - add a clap on start ^
01:01:824 (3) - whistle on end fits better than a clap imo Ok removed here
01:05:531 (2,3) - clap fits better on 3 imo Ok
01:14:628 (5) - whistle on starts fits better Ok

[Easy]
00:05:891 (1) - The rest is symmetrical. So why not this as well? Seems Symmetrical to me

SPOILER

00:10:608 (3) - a clap in the beginning instead of a finish Ok
01:18:672 (2) - You could've made something more interesting here otherwise~ Changed the rhythm a bit


Nice and calm
I wish you good luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

random mod~
General
delete .osb file Ok
umm, this combo color doesn't seem clearly because of the video, maybe you can use bright one better. changed one combo colour
and slider multiplier isn't correct, you should edit .osu file and fixed from 1.00000000596047 to 1.0, of course all diffs. Will mess up with my sliders so will keep this.
Easy
Placement
00:13:977(2) make beautiful~ Er...what's the difference of this slider from mine?

SPOILER

00:46:325(3) wrong spacing Fixed
Rhythm
00:52:727(2,3) current seems fine but it's quite easy diff, so maybe like this? Ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:22:604(1,2) delete finishes at end and add whistle better, it's loud It's fine since i'm emphasizing the sound used here.
01:06:542(2) delete finish at end ^
01:15:302(3) delete finish at head, and add crap added clap but don't removed whistle

Normal
Placement
00:13:641(3,1,2) a bit weird, like this? Made something similar

SPOILER

00:39:586(3,4) make symmetrical Okay

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:31:499(2,3,4,5) for newbie it's a bit difficult imo, you can try this? Ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:41:944(6) delete finish at head and add whistle No
00:48:346(6)^ ^

Hard
AR-1 better for the music Ok
Placement
00:20:716(5,6) to be nice flow, you can move rotationally. e.g) Changed a bit

SPOILER

01:18:671(1,2,3,4) like this? Ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:56:096(2) delete whistle maked one thing to avoid delete whistle here.

consider using so much finishes, it's lou and some are useless I suppose. good luck

Broccoly wrote:

Hey. From my queue

[Hard]
00:21:390 (7,8,9) - consider place these more close to each other as in other sections of the song like 00:19:537 (1,2,3,4) here or 00:15:999 (4,5,6) here. No, made this intentionally because i think this pattern is fun to play and doesn't looks bad.
01:17:155 (3,4) - ^ same. Or you could just stack 3 on 4's head. Ah, ok since was planning to change this pattern.

[Normal & Easy]
Couldn't find anything..Really.. I'm sorry, and Good job! Thanks <3


I'm pretty surprised that this is your first mapset.. i expected a lot less because my first map was horrible. ":o re-really?
Nice flow and neat patterns. I'll give a star for an apology for a poor mod and for your nice map & song. Oww this commentary made my day! *----* Thanks for the star <33333333

1. add xxxholic at tags since you cant find it at osu!direct if you search ×××HOLiC.
2. Hard's offset is 499.585049611938……dont ask me why, check your hard.osu files with txt then you can find this..., the other diffs are 500, so i think you should keep the same offset.

1. 00:22:064 (1) - use clap instead of finish at the tail, i think here is clap, and gong is 00:23:749. It sounds odd if you use finish.
2. 00:24:760 (2) - same with it^

1. AR is a bit fast, maybe -1
2. 01:06:542 (4) - since you make a clap spam at 01:05:531 (2,3), so why dont you make the same hitsounds at 01:06:542 (4)? It make me confused that you use a random hitsounds.
3. 01:16:313 (2) - also this, if you do wanna change ^, at least i think you should add clap at this.

1. Because this slow bpm i think ar6 is better.
2. Dont you think sv too high? I think 2.4 is an insane but not a hard.
3. 00:38:237 (1) - especially this, try add a 0.75x timing section at it?
4. 00:15:999 (4) - i always miss it cuz the vocal "te" is in 00:15:830.
5. 00:50:368 (3) - move the clap from the beginning to the end. it's odd now :<
6. 01:01:150 (3) - clap at the this really make me confused...i think it's whistle but not clap.
7. 01:06:710 (5,6) - also these, i'd you add clap at 6, but not 5's tail.
8. 01:12:438 - try to add an note here or remake this part? I found you're follow music in general, there is a vocal "mo".

goodbye wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[general]

1. add xxxholic at tags since you cant find it at osu!direct if you search ×××HOLiC. Okay
2. Hard's offset is 499.585049611938……dont ask me why, check your hard.osu files with txt then you can find this..., the other diffs are 500, so i think you should keep the same offset. orz didn't noticed, fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:22:064 (1) - use clap instead of finish at the tail, i think here is clap, and gong is 00:23:749. It sounds odd if you use finish. I think finish sounds more good imo, fits with the bgm.
2. 00:24:760 (2) - same with it^

[Normal]

1. AR is a bit fast, maybe -1 Okay
2. 01:06:542 (4) - since you make a clap spam at 01:05:531 (2,3), so why you dont make the same hitsounds at 01:06:542 (4)? It make me confused that you use a random hitsounds. Added a clap in the repeat
3. 01:16:313 (2) - also this, if you do wanna change ^, at least i think you should add clap at this. kay

[Hard]

1. Because this slow bpm i think ar6 is better. feels so slow to me
2. Dont you think sv too high? I think 2.4 is an insane but not a hard. In the beginning, this was a mistake of mine because i used a high sv in hard and a low in normal, but actually i think is fine keep that sv in hard, because i think will be too slow with a sv lower than this. (sorry for poor english)
3. 00:38:237 (1) - especially this, try add a 0.75x timing section at it? Well, okay.
4. 00:15:999 (4) - i always miss it cuz the vocal "te" is in 00:15:830. Ok
5. 00:50:368 (3) - move the clap from the beginning to the end. it's odd now :< Okay
6. 01:01:150 (3) - clap at the this really make me confused...i think it's whistle but not clap. okay
7. 01:06:710 (5,6) - also these, i'd you add clap at 6, but not 5's tail. Okay
8. 01:12:438 - try to add an note here or remake this part? I found you're follow music in general, there is a vocal "mo". Okay

pimpG wrote:

ola

fazendo recheck, como eu havia prometido

geral

mude artist para "フォノジェニコ" mantenha Fonogenico em romanised artist
use esse bg. é o mesmo q vc ta usando, mas nao tem o email na parte inferior esquerda Ok
considere usar esse slider tick para as batidas que voce nao pode usar clap por estar usando sliders longos na easy[/color] Ok

easy

00:15:999 (3) - new combo
01:15:302 (3,1) - new combo na 3 e remova new combo da proxima nota
01:18:672 - new combo

00:11:956 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:40:260 (2,3) - ^
00:45:651 (2) - faça o spacing o mais proximo possivel de 1x
01:13:955 (2,3) - spacing
01:18:672 (2) - spacing, mova 1 grid pra baixo

00:57:107 (1) - remova o finish ?
01:20:694 (3) - ter um finish aki seria inconsistente a 00:32:173 (2) apesar de que eu acho q soa bem das duas formas...

Fixei tudo.

normal

00:13:641 (3,1) - new combo no 3 e remova o da proxima nota
00:16:336 (5,1) - ^
00:48:346 (6,1) - ^
00:53:738 (6) - new combo
00:54:411 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:335 (5) - new combo
01:20:357 (1) - talvez eu esteja errado mas eu acho q esse nc nao é necessario

00:01:510 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:05:217 (4) - ^ deixe mais proximo de 1x
00:05:891 (1,2,3) - deixe mais proximo de 1x
00:15:999 (4) - spacing
00:21:053 (3) - spacing
00:24:760 (1) - ^
00:28:129 (2) - deixe mais proximo de 1x
00:54:411 (1) - ^
01:03:846 (3,4) - spacing
01:04:520 (5,1) - porque de repente usou 0,8x aki?
01:05:868 (3) - deixe mais proximo de 1x
01:12:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:15:639 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:18:335 (5,6) - porque de repente usou 0,9x aki?
01:20:357 (1,2) - spacing

00:06:565 (2,3) - mova o whistle pro final do 2 ou use whistle assim em 00:01:510 (2,3) - e tambem em 00:04:206 (2,3) - pra manter consistencia
00:42:955 - a normal é a unica com whistle aki
00:45:988 (3) - adicione whistle aki pra fazer 00:45:314 (2,3) - ficar consistente a 00:39:586 (3,4) - ?
00:57:107 (1) - remova o finish ?
01:04:857 (1) - whistle pra representar o vocal melhor?
01:05:868 (3) - troque o clap por whistle pelo mesmo motivo acima
01:16:650 (3) - troque o clap por whistle pelo mesmo motivo acima
01:17:324 (4) - troque o whistle da repeat por um clap pra ficar consistente a 01:06:542 (4) Clap funciona melhor nessa parte imo
01:17:324 (4) - remova o clap no final do slider, deixe sem finish tambem, pra dar destaque ao finish em 01:18:672 (6) -

Ignorei as sugestões de spacing porque remapeei essa diff mas usei todas as de nc e a maioria de hitsound
hard

00:13:641 (6,1) - new combo no 6 e remova o da proxima nota
00:16:168 (6) - new combo
00:16:673 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:032 (7,1) - new combo no 7 e remova o da proxima nota
00:24:254 (6) - new combo
00:25:097 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:119 (6,1) - new combo no 6 e remova o da proxima nota
01:02:161 (7,1) - new combo no 7 e remova o da proxima nota
01:04:688 (6) - new combo
01:05:194 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:205 (3) - new combo ?
01:07:553 (7,1) - new combo no 7 e remova o da proxima nota
01:15:639 (7,1) - ^
01:17:156 (3) - new combo?
01:18:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - esse combo ta inconsistente a 00:29:814 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Eu tentei usar essa sugestão, mas não gostei muito do jeito que ele ficou visualmente, então vou deixar ele assim

00:00:836 (2) - remova esse whistle pra ficar consistente a 00:03:532 (2) - e a 00:05:891 (1) -
00:04:037 (4) - adicione whisltle ao final do slider pra ficar consistente a 00:01:679
00:06:733 (3) - ^
00:09:260 (2) - nas outras diffs isso era um finish, apesar de que eu acho que soa bem como clap tb
00:15:325 (3) - whistle no começo?
00:16:336 (7) - ^
00:40:091 (4) - whistle no começo?
00:45:314 (4) - mova o whistle pro final?
00:50:368 (3) - o clap no final nao combina, remova e deixe sem nada aki
00:50:874 (4) - whistle no começo?
00:57:107 (1) - remove finish?

00:03:195 (1,2) - spacing, intencional?
00:08:586 (1,2) - faça ficar mais perto de 1,2x vou fixar se mais pessoas apontarem isso porque pra mim o spacing não parece errado
00:11:282 (1,2) - spacing, intencional?
00:19:537 (1,2,3,4) - faça ficar mais perto de 0,6x
00:39:249 (2,3) - faça ficar mais perto de 1x
00:42:618 (3,4) - spacing, intencional? sim
00:52:053 (2,3) - spacing, intencional?
01:03:846 (3,4) - spacing acho que ele fica melhor perto do 3
01:10:585 (1,2) - faça ficar mais proximo de 1x
01:12:270 (4,5) - faça ficar mais proximo de 0,60x

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

A further modding here!

• 
  Red: Unrankable issues or Highly recommended
  Black: Opinions

　General

1. Timing is sightly off'd, please move the offset section to 508 (+8 ms) (Please take in mind I'll keep your current timing setting while modding, and, Please don't forget a resnap after timing changes)
2. Swap the unicode source thing "×××HOLiC" to tags, "xxxHOLiC" to source. As an unicode text, "×××" isn't recommended for using as a source.
3. Since you've added a hitsound for sliderticks, it's suppose has a louder sound than normal hitsounds. So I recommend for reducing around 15% volume for every SC1 sections (Which you've used for activating slidertick hitsounds)

　Easy

• 00:08:586 (2) - Missing a clap on slider's reverse? I don't know if it's intentional or not... But from my own opinion, a clap should be added here.
  00:15:999 (1) - The finish from slider's head isn't necessary imo, you've added other finishs along with the 'cymbal sounds' from music, but there's nothing at this timing point.
  00:22:064 (1) - According to the reason from previous line, the finish from slider's end should be removed and replace with a clap
  01:06:542 (2) - Similar things, please use clap instead of finish on slider's end

　Normal

• 00:23:749 (3) - Missing a clap on slider's reverse, and also a whistle on slider's head.
  01:05:194 (2) - The slider's end is on the 4th beat, shouldn't be a clap for hitsound instead of a whistle?

　Hard

1. AR,OD -1. Same opinion with goodbye's modding, AR6 could serve a comfortable gameplay for songs which are under BPM 100
   01:05:876 (6,1,2) - The spacing between these notes are kinda confusing, players can't really catch up the rhythm here. To solve this problem, I'll suggest a pattern like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

Please call me back via Forum PM once you've finished this modding

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
I suggest to add a silenced custom sliderslide hitsound, or the slider sounds really odd imo Ok
I'm a bit worry about the spread, the gap between Normal and Hard is really huge Working on another diff to balance the spread.

[Easy]
00:59:811 (1) - this slider is kinda far from the spinner, and its body is hidden by the hitburst, this is hard/confusing to play imo, hope you can fix the spacing and change a direction of the slider Ok

[Hard]
01:06:213 (1,2,3) - I suggest to use the same spacing at here, or it's kinda confusing to play Ok
01:16:658 (3,1) - this anti-jump is really too sudden, and doesn't fit the song well. I hope you can use normal spacing here Ok

I need to say, this map's quality still has huge room to be improved
first, please make your slider shape better, especially the long arc sliders in Easy diff. please try to make them looks much more smooth
second, the patterns in this map is a bit boring imo. you can try to use some blanket patterns or symmetrical patterns, or put the notes in regular geometry. then the map will looks much better imo

Well i will not remap because the map looks good for me and i really want to keep this style in my first map
but i will save this for future maps, thanks for mod. Will remap!
anyway, rhyme and hitsounds are not bad, keeping working on this. good luck