DJNightmare wrote:

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Blue - Suggestion
Green - Comments

[General]
- Good SB!~
- Great Map
- Nice Song
- Some parts have different spacing, unless it's suppose to be that way, you might want to fix it.
[Easy]
01:57:694 (2) - Move < by One Grid
Nicely done!~

[Normal]
Nicely done, no errors to me :3

[Normal+]
01:24:791 (6) - Move it to x:192 y:172

[Hard]
00:50:597 (3,4) - The space between this two hitcircles are a little far away from each other, it's up to you if you want it that way :3
01:10:597 (1) - Move it to x:96 y:20

Overall, Awesomely done!~

And sorry for the long wait for my mod... and i hope my modding will help you on your way to a ranked map! I also want a ranked map XD

-[NYAN]- wrote:

ATTENTION
plz have a habit:you had better do the node in slider's end circle center

General

AR-1 except Normal+ fix

Easy

00:21:565 (1) - add whistle add

Normal

00:08:501 (4) - 2 overlap notes instead？ 不想那麼難w
01:49:630 (3) - how about this slider?i think it need to adjust ??

Normal+

00:18:178 (4) - it is not fit this music fit vocal 0_0

Hard

00:13:823 (1) - add whistle add
00:14:145 (2) - remove whistle fix
00:17:371 (2) - use slider repeat? fix
00:17:694 (3) - this slider not fit this music fit vocal 0_0
02:05:758 (1,2,3,4) - clap add


好图~星星上

wcx19911123 wrote:

from here

[General]
you need to add sliderborder in .osu files fix,thank you
use Vocaloid as source, and composer's name as astist, put Hatsune Miku to tags fix~

[Easy]
HD-1, it's too high now

[Normal]
01:02:210 (2,3,1,2) - spacing too huge here, use 1.4x plz
02:03:178 (4) - this slider can blanket better

[Normal+]
00:17:371 (2) - change to a slider end at 00:17:533 - ? fit vocal better. and if you changed, plz delete 00:17:694 (3) -
00:57:694 (1) - this slider can blanket better
01:12:855 (4,1) - why jump here? don't fit the song imo, also it's kinda confusing to read/play
01:23:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this spacing is not a Normal+ diff now, its totally a Hard. also I don't think huge spacing here fit the song
01:31:887 (3,4) - same as 01:12:855 (4,1) -
01:35:758 (6,7,8,9) - change to 2 sliders or this is really hard to play as a Normal+ diff
01:38:984 (1) - this slider can blanket better

[Hard]
00:17:371 (2) - change direction on this slider plz, it's now hard to read how many time it repeat, really confusing
00:18:178 (4,1) - better not to jump too huge, or it's kinda hard to read 1 is start at a blue line
00:42:049 - add a note here? sound nice

[Overall]
Normal+ and Hard need some more works, they can be better
pay attention to slider blanket in that 2 diffs(I didn't point out in my modding, you should check and fix them by yourself)
that's all for now

thank you for mod

1. 00:21:242 (3) - Try 60%-80% volume, now it sounds too quiet

1. Why not rename this diff to "Hard" and rename your Hard to "Insane"? Normal+ looked odd :/
2. 00:21:243 (3) - Slider end finish, raise volume to 60%-80%
3. 01:46:727 (1,2) - Exchange NC

1. 00:21:243 (5) - Finish, 60%-80% volume
2. 01:12:210 (6) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:12:532 (8) slider start
3. 01:45:759 (5) - Reverse point, add finish

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:21:242 (3) - Try 60%-80% volume, now it sounds too quiet

fix

[Normal+]

1. Why not rename this diff to "Hard" and rename your Hard to "Insane"? Normal+ looked odd :/ ok
2. 00:21:243 (3) - Slider end finish, raise volume to 60%-80% fix
3. 01:46:727 (1,2) - Exchange NC

fix

[Hard]

1. 00:21:243 (5) - Finish, 60%-80% volume fix
2. 01:12:210 (6) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:12:532 (8) slider start fix
3. 01:45:759 (5) - Reverse point, add finish

fix

Send me a forum PM for recheck when you have reply

MMzz wrote:

Random mod for you!

Thank you

[General]
Your folder has two .osb files! You need to delete one.

deleted~

[Insane]
00:07:856 (1,2) - New combo should start on 2 not 1. Follows the downbeat. (And sorta helps the overlap become more readable.)
00:57:694 (4) - New combo here, follows the downbeat and vocals! Then remove combo from 00:59:468 (1) - and add combo to 01:00:274 (4) - .

[Hard]
01:15:758 (6) - New combo here, again on the downbeat. Then remove from 01:16:726 (1) - and add to 01:18:662 (5) - .
01:56:403 (1,2) - Remove combo from 1 and add it to 2. Or you can keep the new combo on 1 but 2 will still need a combo.
02:01:565 (1,2) - Remove combo from 1 and add it to 2.

[Normal]
01:18:661 (5) - new combo here? Combo feels pretty long.

Sorry for it just being combo mods! That is all that's wrong with this map to me.

Look this over and call me back.

all fix, thank you for mods

Chewin wrote:

Oh wait.
Source should be "Vocaloid" or "VOCALOID" and not "vocaloid".

fix, Thank you

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

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