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sunshy wrote:



文件夹里有多余的Hatsuni Miku - Crack (tine30sakura).osb,删掉它

我可以吐槽这个错字吗ww
这个貌似是SB文件?他做了SB所以这个应该是必须的
sunshy_old

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

sunshy wrote:



文件夹里有多余的Hatsuni Miku - Crack (tine30sakura).osb,删掉它

我可以吐槽这个错字吗ww
这个貌似是SB文件?他做了SB所以这个应该是必须的
有两个osb文件

这个是打错字更正之后遗留的吧...
ssssssssssssssss
normal mod

所有难度的preview time应该是相同的,现在你的两个不同0.0
normal里最好别跳?在file 里开aimod,试着检查所有的spacing里的问题


00:09:117 - 这里加个圈?因为你在这一句都用了比较紧凑的节奏所以这样做比较连贯
00:52:182 - 这里的圈可以删除,因为这是Miku一句歌词结束换气的时候,通常也是整个乐曲有停滞感的时候,所以给玩家一个休息会比较好
00:54:117 - 这边的长长滑条改到00:55:730 - 比较好,前面几拍我还是推荐用比较平稳的节奏
00:57:666 - 像这里就可以加个一拍的长滑条
01:01:859 - 同52秒处
02:03:150 - 这里也考虑用个长滑条?

聊天记录里的我就不贴了…反正你也知道了…=w=
Topic Starter
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ssssssssssssssss wrote:

normal mod

所有难度的preview time应该是相同的,现在你的两个不同0.0 一樣了嗎? 我不知道要怎麼改...
normal里最好别跳?在file 里开aimod,试着检查所有的spacing里的问题 有問題的全改了


00:09:117 - 这里加个圈?因为你在这一句都用了比较紧凑的节奏所以这样做比较连贯 fix
00:52:182 - 这里的圈可以删除,因为这是Miku一句歌词结束换气的时候,通常也是整个乐曲有停滞感的时候,所以给玩家一个休息会比较好 fix 你沒講我都沒發現
00:54:117 - 这边的长长滑条改到00:55:730 - 比较好,前面几拍我还是推荐用比较平稳的节奏 fix
00:57:666 - 像这里就可以加个一拍的长滑条 fix
01:01:859 - 同52秒处 fix
02:03:150 - 这里也考虑用个长滑条? fix

聊天记录里的我就不贴了…反正你也知道了…=w=
8-)


Thx
pw384
0v0第五次mod图。。如果不好的话还是无视了吧
上面众人说过的问题就不重复了0v0

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[Hard]
02:00:892 (1) - 这个stream容易让人以为是1/8。。间距从0.3x调到0.5x吧
01:00:730 - 这里加一个hitcircle怎么样._.

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[Normal]

这个normal有些偏难..

00:09:117 - 00:09:924 这一段对音有点问题._.
01:55:085 对normal来说有点难了。。(标一个normal+也好wwwwwwwwwww

另外,这个是normal难度吧。。那么stack最好少一点。。不然会太难的(标一个normal+也好wwwww
觉得这些重叠有点不适合normal难度,适当挑几个调整一下位置,当然也可以留三四个stack让这个难度好玩一些
00:15:085 (3) 、 00:44:762 (7) 、 00:50:892 (8) 、 01:04:440 (6) 、 01:06:053 (3) 、 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 、 01:27:988 (8) 、 01:29:601 (3) 、 01:47:021 (1) 、 01:53:795 (6)
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ps.我比较喜欢这个地方wwwwww 01:59:279 (6)
但是 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 这个用在hard里是很好的梗,在normal里却有点过头了

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[General]
有hitcircle.png和hitcircleoverlay.png但是缺少approachcircle.png。。

引用http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&l=cn#:“如果您要使用自制的皮肤,请确保您制作了全部的元素。”

如果想使用默认的approachcircle.png的话,直接从默认皮肤里copy过来。。但是hitcircle的三个元件必须成套出现。。不然是unrankable的._.

我把这个文件放在百度网盘上了,单击此处下载该文件



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BG好美。。wwwwwwwwwwwwwww
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi www


General

  1. 只有一半的话切下mp3
Hard

  1. 00:09:924 (6) - 有点弧度w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393899
  2. 01:10:408 (4) - 往右一格
  3. 00:57:666 (4) - 这样比较好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393903
  4. 01:00:246 (4) - 中间空间大点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393904
  5. 01:03:150 (4) - 对称w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393909
  6. 01:11:537 (7) - 这里节奏这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393890
  7. 01:20:730 - add note
  8. 01:29:601 (6) - 中间的slider point往里一格
  9. 01:36:375 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393913
  10. 01:45:408 (5) - 上面那部分柔和一点
  11. 01:57:666 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393914
  12. OD>AR自重._.
Normal

  1. 看着还行, 不过和hard差别不大啊, 建议再做简单点2diff算了 三连好多我觉得没必要。。。
嗯就这样吧, 最近天赋mapper好多233

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Azure

384059043 wrote:

0v0第五次mod图。。如果不好的话还是无视了吧
上面众人说过的问题就不重复了0v0 恩恩

-------------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]
02:00:892 (1) - 这个stream容易让人以为是1/8。。间距从0.3x调到0.5x吧 fix

01:00:730 - 这里加一个hitcircle怎么样._. fix

-----------------------------------------------------------

[Normal]

这个normal有些偏难..

00:09:117 - 00:09:924 这一段对音有点问题._. fix 不過好像還是怪怪?
01:55:085 对normal来说有点难了。。(标一个normal+也好wwwwwwwwwwwfix

另外,这个是normal难度吧。。那么stack最好少一点。。不然会太难的(标一个normal+也好wwwww
觉得这些重叠有点不适合normal难度,适当挑几个调整一下位置,当然也可以留三四个stack让这个难度好玩一些
00:15:085 (3) 、 00:44:762 (7) 、 00:50:892 (8) 、 01:04:440 (6) 、 01:06:053 (3) 、 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 、 01:27:988 (8) 、 01:29:601 (3) 、 01:47:021 (1)、 01:53:795 (6) 都改了,除了01:47:021 (1),因為那我好喜歡 (?)
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ps.我比较喜欢这个地方wwwwww 01:59:279 (6) 謝謝 :D
但是 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 这个用在hard里是很好的梗,在normal里却有点过头了 fix

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[General]
有hitcircle.png和hitcircleoverlay.png但是缺少approachcircle.png。。

引用http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&l=cn#:“如果您要使用自制的皮肤,请确保您制作了全部的元素。”

如果想使用默认的approachcircle.png的话,直接从默认皮肤里copy过来。。但是hitcircle的三个元件必须成套出现。。不然是unrankable的._.

我把这个文件放在百度网盘上了,单击此处下载该文件

載了,fix 謝謝 :oops:

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BG好美。。wwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Thx :D
Topic Starter
Azure

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi www


General

  1. 只有一半的话切下mp3
已full submission更正

Hard

  1. 00:09:924 (6) - 有点弧度w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393899 fix
  2. 01:10:408 (4) - 往右一格 fix
  3. 00:57:666 (4) - 这样比较好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393903 fix
  4. 01:00:246 (4) - 中间空间大点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393904 fix
  5. 01:03:150 (4) - 对称w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393909 fix 但是間距大丈夫0.0 ?
  6. 01:11:537 (7) - 这里节奏这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393890 fix 音效不變
  7. 01:20:730 - add note fix
  8. 01:29:601 (6) - 中间的slider point往里一格 fix 好厲害 0.0
  9. 01:36:375 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393913 fix
  10. 01:45:408 (5) - 上面那部分柔和一点 fix
  11. 01:57:666 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393914 fix
  12. OD>AR自重._.
已修正ww

Normal

  1. 看着还行, 不过和hard差别不大啊, 建议再做简单点2diff算了 三连好多我觉得没必要。。。
因為想把節奏保留 :cry:

嗯就这样吧, 最近天赋mapper好多233

Good luck~

THx
Topic Starter
Azure
讓新手房玩的結果:
ssssssssssssssss

tine30sakura wrote:

讓新手房玩的結果:
晒第一可耻XD
Topic Starter
Azure

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

tine30sakura wrote:

讓新手房玩的結果:
晒第一可耻XD
應該的 XD (被打)
ssssssssssssssss
这条别给Kd了,一张图换三个KD总觉得太奢侈了…

preview time 和normal hard 不一样
AR-1?
00:03:472 (6) - 最好不要给新手这样的折返次数障碍
00:57:666 (6) - 这个滑条的评分遮挡了00:59:279 (1) - ,会对新手造成读图障碍,既然是easy咱就善良点嘛~
同样的地方还有01:02:827 (2,4,1) -

01:17:343 (3,5) - 这个地方的回折也不够善良!另外我建议把这两个滑条换成另外形状,类似http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394477
02:00:892 (2) - 像这样让三个Note的弧线更圆润些?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394480

easy真没啥好Mod的,难度越简单出错的概率越少
good luck
sunshy_old

FL真的是一点都不好玩;_; _(:зゝ∠)_
ACC怎么也上不去;_;

好困~≥O≤~~
banvi
Hello. modreq from forum-PM.

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]
This map needs less than ☆3 diff. Try to make more easily the easy diff.
remove "s" of vocaloids in the tag.
lrc20.png and lrc30.png are unused. Remove them.

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
Easy : 84924
Hard : 124762
Normal : 124762

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 02:07:070

Hard :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

Normal:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

[Easy]
This is not an easy diff... I think this is a normal diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 0.8~1.0 in easy diff.
Resnap some green timing point.

Try to make more easily the easy diff. For example...
Avoid to place on the red tick.
00:05:730 (1) - Avoid to use a slider like this.

[Normal]
Umm, I think this is a hard diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 1.4.
Resnap some green timing point.

Try to make more easily. For example...
Avoid to place on the blue tick.
Avoid to use stream like 01:15:408 (4,5,6)

[Hard]
  1. Resnap some green timing point.
  2. 00:08:633 (2) - move 1 grid right because the spacing is close a bit.
  3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
  4. 00:44:762 (8) - new combo
  5. 00:49:924 (7) - ^
  6. 00:52:504 (3) - add finish at the beginning?
  7. 00:54:601 (1) - remove this? This note doesn't fit the music imo.
  8. 00:55:730 (6) - touches with HP bar. I suggest to move another place.
  9. 00:58:956 (7) - change to the silder like this↓?
  10. 01:02:504 (3) - add finish at the end
  11. 01:15:730 (6) - looks ugly. You can make cleaner this?
  12. 01:20:730 (11) - remove this and start a spinner here.
  13. 01:25:408 (2) - move 1 grid up
  14. 01:27:666 (1,2,3) - move 2 grid up due to spacing
  15. 01:36:375 (1) - move 3 grid up and 1 grid right
  16. 02:00:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Umm, looks very ugly... try to make another pattern?
  17. 02:10:246 - a spinner should be end here
Umm, this map needs more work. Particularly, you should remake easy and normal diff. :<
But I can't advice anymore. Sorry... :cry:
If you don’t know how to make these, look at the easy and normal diff of the recently ranked map, and you will know and learn (I think...)
And I hope you can try to make things look pretty in every diff.

Btw, I like this song <3 Good luck with your mapping. ;)
Topic Starter
Azure

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

这条别给Kd了,一张图换三个KD总觉得太奢侈了…

這個難度直接就normal了,我重做easy...
preview time 和normal hard 不一样
AR-1?
00:03:472 (6) - 最好不要给新手这样的折返次数障碍fix
00:57:666 (6) - 这个滑条的评分遮挡了00:59:279 (1) - ,会对新手造成读图障碍,既然是easy咱就善良点嘛~
同样的地方还有01:02:827 (2,4,1) - fix

01:17:343 (3,5) - 这个地方的回折也不够善良!另外我建议把这两个滑条换成另外形状,类似http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394477 fix
02:00:892 (2) - 像这样让三个Note的弧线更圆润些?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394480 fix

easy真没啥好Mod的,难度越简单出错的概率越少 I got it
good luck


Thx
Topic Starter
Azure

banvi wrote:

Hello. modreq from forum-PM.

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]
This map needs less than ☆3 diff. Try to make more easily the easy diff.
remove "s" of vocaloids in the tag.
lrc20.png and lrc30.png are unused. Remove them.

all fix :oops: Thank you!!

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
Easy : 84924
Hard : 124762
Normal : 124762

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 02:07:070

Hard :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

Normal:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

all check and fix :oops: Thank you!!

[Easy]
This is not an easy diff... I think this is a normal diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 0.8~1.0 in easy diff.
Resnap some green timing point.

I will remake a Easy diff, and this will save as Normal diff... :o

Try to make more easily the easy diff. For example...
Avoid to place on the red tick.
00:05:730 (1) - Avoid to use a slider like this.

ok

[Normal]
Umm, I think this is a hard diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 1.4.
Resnap some green timing point.

Try to make more easily. For example...
Avoid to place on the blue tick.
Avoid to use stream like 01:15:408 (4,5,6)

I save this diff as Normal+ 8-)


[Hard]
  1. Resnap some green timing point. fix
  2. 00:08:633 (2) - move 1 grid right because the spacing is close a bit. fix
  3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning? fix
  4. 00:44:762 (8) - new combo fix
  5. 00:49:924 (7) - ^ fix
  6. 00:52:504 (3) - add finish at the beginning? I didn't add, the finish sounds too frequent :?
  7. 00:54:601 (1) - remove this? This note doesn't fit the music imo. fix
  8. 00:55:730 (6) - touches with HP bar. I suggest to move another place. fix
  9. 00:58:956 (7) - change to the silder like this↓? fix
  10. 01:02:504 (3) - add finish at the end fix
  11. 01:15:730 (6) - looks ugly. You can make cleaner this? fix
  12. 01:20:730 (11) - remove this and start a spinner here. fix
  13. 01:25:408 (2) - move 1 grid up fix
  14. 01:27:666 (1,2,3) - move 2 grid up due to spacing fix
  15. 01:36:375 (1) - move 3 grid up and 1 grid right fix (very painstaking :) )
  16. 02:00:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Umm, looks very ugly... try to make another pattern? fix xDD
  17. 02:10:246 - a spinner should be end here
fix

Umm, this map needs more work. Particularly, you should remake easy and normal diff. :< I think so...
But I can't advice anymore. Sorry... :cry: no no , your suggestions are very constructive!! :oops:
If you don’t know how to make these, look at the easy and normal diff of the recently ranked map, and you will know and learn (I think...)
And I hope you can try to make things look pretty in every diff. ok xDDDDD

Btw, I like this song <3 Good luck with your mapping. ;)

THx 8-)
ssssssssssssssss
别给kudosu了w

00:42:182 (2,3) - 弄得圆滑点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396171
01:00:246 (8) - 触到右上角的信息了,最好不要这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396174
01:16:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这组做成这样我觉得比较好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396175,这图的其他地方也看看能不能用这种圆滑排列?我个人比较倾向于这个
01:23:472 (2) - 原曲这里有很强的鼓点,我建议拆成圈来增强打击感
01:54:440 (3) - 和01:00:246 (8) - 一样,不过这个比较安全,所以不改也没啥…
02:01:537 (6) - 往右移一格?这样456的间距就都一样了
02:10:246 - 如果你是想消掉转盘最后的那个音的话我建议直接把绿线插到02:10:569 - ,现在这样插的话会把转盘最后的嗡嗡音也一起消掉=w=

总之排列方面再改进点?滑条前后的note最好接着滑条的弧度摆,或者放到滑条中心比如这样:(只是顺手用你的图举了个例子,不是建议你在这用这个排列w)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396188

其实我觉得@sunshy排列做得很好,问问他的经验?
Loneight
早灣 >w<
Request from Crystal.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. letter box 或許可以取消打勾
  2. 咱看不出來bookmark的功用...OTZ
  3. 嘛~ 慢歌用1.5x的加速感覺有點違和 ~(個人感覺)

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:569 -

  2. 00:57:666 (6) - NC 因為00:47:343 (1) - 這NC了
  3. 01:11:859 (4,1) - 間距~
  4. 01:27:988 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]

  1. 嘛~ 建議統一間距 ~不要一下1.2x , 一下1.3x 或是1.1x ~ , 不過好像因為黏在一起似乎沒差 OAO

  2. 00:10:892 (1) - 間距~
  3. 01:15:730 (5,6) - ^
  4. 01:27:666 (6) - NC
  5. 01:35:408 (5,1) - 交換NC然後01:36:375 (3) - NC

[Normal+]

  1. 01:12:827 - 這裡開始 請好好檢查 www

  2. 00:46:375 (10) - NC 因為00:56:698 (1) -
  3. 00:57:666 (4,1) - 交換NC
  4. 01:02:182 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:07:988 (8,1) - ^
  6. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC

[Hard]

  1. 00:14:117 (2) - 結尾加個whistle?
  2. 00:55:085 (9) - NC 因為00:44:762 (1) -
  3. 01:07:988 (7,1) - 交換NC 然後01:11:698 (8) - NC
  4. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC
  5. 01:38:633 (7) - NC
good song & good luck ~
就這些了~
加油~~
Topic Starter
Azure

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

别给kudosu了w

00:42:182 (2,3) - 弄得圆滑点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396171 fix
01:00:246 (8) - 触到右上角的信息了,最好不要这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396174 fix
01:16:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这组做成这样我觉得比较好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396175,这图的其他地方也看看能不能用这种圆滑排列?我个人比较倾向于这个 fix
01:23:472 (2) - 原曲这里有很强的鼓点,我建议拆成圈来增强打击感 沒改,雖然鼓點很強但是節奏不好抓。

01:54:440 (3) - 和01:00:246 (8) - 一样,不过这个比较安全,所以不改也没啥…
02:01:537 (6) - 往右移一格?这样456的间距就都一样了 fix
02:10:246 - 如果你是想消掉转盘最后的那个音的话我建议直接把绿线插到02:10:569 - ,现在这样插的话会把转盘最后的嗡嗡音也一起消掉=w= fix

总之排列方面再改进点?滑条前后的note最好接着滑条的弧度摆,或者放到滑条中心比如这样:(只是顺手用你的图举了个例子,不是建议你在这用这个排列w)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396188
排列沒多大變動,因為有sb所以排列不想再改太麻煩。


其实我觉得@sunshy排列做得很好,问问他的经验?

THx
Topic Starter
Azure

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
Request from Crystal.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. letter box 或許可以取消打勾 fix (這是做甚麼的= =)
  2. 咱看不出來bookmark的功用...OTZ fix??? 不知道在哪按到?
  3. 嘛~ 慢歌用1.5x的加速感覺有點違和 ~(個人感覺)

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:569 -
    fix
  2. 00:57:666 (6) - NC 因為00:47:343 (1) - 這NC了 fix
  3. 01:11:859 (4,1) - 間距~ fix
  4. 01:27:988 (3,4) - ^
fix

[Normal]

  1. 嘛~ 建議統一間距 ~不要一下1.2x , 一下1.3x 或是1.1x ~ , 不過好像因為黏在一起似乎沒差 OAO

  2. 00:10:892 (1) - 間距~ fix
  3. 01:15:730 (5,6) - ^ fix
  4. 01:27:666 (6) - NC fix
  5. 01:35:408 (5,1) - 交換NC然後01:36:375 (3) - NC
fix

[Normal+]

  1. 01:12:827 - 這裡開始 請好好檢查 www fix sorry!!!!QAQ

  2. 00:46:375 (10) - NC 因為00:56:698 (1) - fix
  3. 00:57:666 (4,1) - 交換NC fix
  4. 01:02:182 (1,2) - ^ fix
  5. 01:07:988 (8,1) - ^ fix
  6. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC
fix

[Hard]

  1. 00:14:117 (2) - 結尾加個whistle? fix
  2. 00:55:085 (9) - NC 因為00:44:762 (1) - fix
  3. 01:07:988 (7,1) - 交換NC 然後01:11:698 (8) - NC fix
  4. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC fix
  5. 01:38:633 (7) - NC
fix

good song & good luck ~
就這些了~
加油~~

THx
TTTTTTTTTTTT
From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

PreviewTime is inconsistency

Tags are inconsistency

Skin files lack a reversearrow.png

[Easy]

01:18:956 - 这串好长,建议这里加个NC
kiai停在02:07:343

[Normal]

00:08:311 - remove 了 sliderwhistle
00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的
00:59:279 - spacing error
01:02:827 - (2)(3)(1)这三个最好用等距,即使是缩短距离的话,这样看起来会更好,而且打起来也更直观
第一kiai停在01:35:085?
kiai停在02:07:343

[Normal+]

00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的
第一kiai停在01:35:085?
kiai停在02:07:343

[Hard]

fine

这个的kiai不相同,而且我觉得这里是疏忽造成的。。因为其余都一样的。
kiai停在02:07:343

good luck..

edit:做好的图。。咋传到w.i.p
Topic Starter
Azure

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

PreviewTime is inconsistency fix
Tags are inconsistency fix
Skin files lack a reversearrow.png fix

[Easy]

01:18:956 - 这串好长,建议这里加个NC fix
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Normal]

00:08:311 - remove 了 sliderwhistle fix
00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的 fix
00:59:279 - spacing error fix
01:02:827 - (2)(3)(1)这三个最好用等距,即使是缩短距离的话,这样看起来会更好,而且打起来也更直观 fix
第一kiai停在01:35:085?
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Normal+]

00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的 fix
第一kiai停在01:35:085? fix
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Hard]

fine

这个的kiai不相同,而且我觉得这里是疏忽造成的。。因为其余都一样的。
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

good luck..

edit:做好的图。。咋传到w.i.p
謝謝...沒注意到 :?


THx
banvi
Recheck as your request~ ;)

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
    Easy : 84924
    Hard : 124762
    Normal+ : 124762
    Normal : 84924
[Easy]
  1. Set letterbox during breaks as with other diffs.
  2. Remove whistle at some slider's body.(00:00:892 (2) . 00:11:214 (2)..etc) They sound noisy imo :<
  3. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
  4. 01:08:633 (1,2,3,4) - How about changing to this rhythm? It sounds better for me.
  5. 01:20:892 (2) - replace a slider?
  6. 01:35:246 - move this timing point to 01:35:085 as with other diffs.
  7. 01:36:375 - start kiai time here as with other diffs
  8. 01:54:440 (3,4) - How about changing to this? It sounds better for me.
  9. 02:07:988 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
  10. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
[Normal]
  1. Ummmmm, SV is the same as in the [Easy]. It's not good, so I recommend to change to SV1.2 *_*;
  2. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
  3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning
  4. 00:50:891 (6) - remove one repeat. because it doesn't follow the music.
  5. 00:52:182 (1) - add finish at the end
  6. 01:13:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing is not good... please fix >_<
  7. 01:44:762 - add a note?
  8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
  9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
[Normal+]
  1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
  2. 00:59:601 (2) - Hmm, changing to like this? It sounds better imo.
  3. 01:25:730 (3,1) - The spacing is not good because of speed changing. Change to like this
  4. 01:28:311 (6,1) - I think it is better not to stack.
  5. 01:37:988 (4) - This arrangement is not good in the normal+ diff...
  6. 01:38:956 (6) - Hmm, I don't think this speed down is good... because I think some player will be confused.
  7. 02:04:117 (5) - I think the speed should be ×1.00. The reason is same as above.
  8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
  9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
  2. 01:55:085 (7) - add new combo
  3. 01:56:053 (1) - remove new combo
  4. 01:57:343 (9) - add new combo
  5. 02:06:698 (9,10,11,1) - How about changing to this?
  6. 02:07:343 (1) - extend to 02:10:892 as with other diffs
  7. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
  8. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Azure

banvi wrote:

Recheck as your request~ ;)
Thank you :cry:

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
    Easy : 84924
    Hard : 124762
    Normal+ : 124762
    Normal : 84924
I don't know how to fix it... :o I open the "osu. in notepad" to fix it, but it didn't work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Easy]
  1. Set letterbox during breaks as with other diffs.
  2. Remove whistle at some slider's body.(00:00:892 (2) . 00:11:214 (2)..etc) They sound noisy imo :<
  3. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
  4. 01:08:633 (1,2,3,4) - How about changing to this rhythm? It sounds better for me. indeed
  5. 01:20:892 (2) - replace a slider? fix
  6. 01:35:246 - move this timing point to 01:35:085 as with other diffs. fix
  7. 01:36:375 - start kiai time here as with other diffsfix
  8. 01:54:440 (3,4) - How about changing to this? It sounds better for me. fix
  9. 02:07:988 - move this timing point to 02:10:569fix
  10. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
fix

[Normal]
  1. Ummmmm, SV is the same as in the [Easy]. It's not good, so I recommend to change to SV1.2 *_*;
    indeed... I fix it all 8-)
  2. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
  3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning fix
  4. 00:50:891 (6) - remove one repeat. because it doesn't follow the music. yep
  5. 00:52:182 (1) - add finish at the end fix
  6. 01:13:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing is not good... please fix >_< fix wwww
  7. 01:44:762 - add a note? fix
  8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%? fix
  9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
fix

[Normal+]
  1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
  2. 00:59:601 (2) - Hmm, changing to like this? It sounds better imo. fix
  3. 01:25:730 (3,1) - The spacing is not good because of speed changing. Change to like thisfix
  4. 01:28:311 (6,1) - I think it is better not to stack.fix
  5. 01:37:988 (4) - This arrangement is not good in the normal+ diff...fix
  6. 01:38:956 (6) - Hmm, I don't think this speed down is good... because I think some player will be confused.fix
  7. 02:04:117 (5) - I think the speed should be ×1.00. The reason is same as above.fix
  8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?fix
  9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
fix

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117fix
  2. 01:55:085 (7) - add new combo
  3. 01:56:053 (1) - remove new combo
  4. 01:57:343 (9) - add new combo
    all fix
  5. 02:06:698 (9,10,11,1) - How about changing to this?fix
  6. 02:07:343 (1) - extend to 02:10:892 as with other diffs I can't understand this :?
  7. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?fix
  8. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
fix

Good Luck! :D

banvi~
Thank you for your mod again
Your mods always worked :D

THx!!
Licnect
首先 希望你下次可以先看Queue的"版主最後文章" 任何Queue都要注意 免的被black list
因為本來不是要你M4M我的圖,而且有特殊規則


Overall:
offset:920 記得Resnap all note
break time太長
記得SB的時間軸也要校正

Easy&Normal:
slider上的鼓聲 可以用slidertick聲音+綠線 來達成節奏感 不會的話可以看別人的圖
note的落點 建議可以不要全部在vocal上,可適當的創造節奏感

Hard:
01:11:859 這邊加note比較好聽 看時間軸 就不裁了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404780
01:26:053 這邊slider速度有點快 1.2或1.3比較適合
00:59:279 slider尾巴離太遠

第一次做盡量避免SB 熟了在做
很多因素會因為你要修來修去
一點自身經驗

然後我不太喜歡管太多別人怎麼排
因為那是STYLE
建議的地方不多 請見諒

基本上都不錯 繼續加油
Topic Starter
Azure

Licnect wrote:

首先 希望你下次可以先看Queue的"版主最後文章" 任何Queue都要注意 免的被black list
因為本來不是要你M4M我的圖,而且有特殊規則

對不起..._(:зゝ∠)_ 因為可能是因為我習慣跳行 (被打)

Overall:
offset:920 記得Resnap all note fix 全部綠線已改
break time太長 咦咦咦咦????
記得SB的時間軸也要校正

Easy&Normal:
slider上的鼓聲 可以用slidertick聲音+綠線 來達成節奏感 不會的話可以看別人的圖
note的落點 建議可以不要全部在vocal上,可適當的創造節奏感
完全不會。

Hard:
01:11:859 這邊加note比較好聽 看時間軸 就不裁了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404780 fix
01:26:053 這邊slider速度有點快 1.2或1.3比較適合 fix
00:59:279 slider尾巴離太遠 fix

第一次做盡量避免SB 熟了在做
很多因素會因為你要修來修去
一點自身經驗
因為很無聊就試著做了 :?

然後我不太喜歡管太多別人怎麼排
因為那是STYLE
建議的地方不多 請見諒
沒事...←已經被罵排列醜n次

基本上都不錯 繼續加油

Thx
mintong89
这。。。太完美了。。

送Star :D :D
Topic Starter
Azure

mint_ong89 wrote:

这。。。太完美了。。

送Star :D :D

謝謝
(可以給你kd嗎???) >_>
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
打開這張譜的file 你會看到2個.osb,刪掉那個舊的...

Audio Lead-in 太短 每個diff都去多調一下

[Inconsistency in PreviewTime:請把每個diff的預覽點都設置成同一個]
- [Easy] : 84762
- [Hard] : 124762
- [Normal+] : 124762
- [Normal] : 84952

[Inconsistency in Kiai Times: 把Easy diff的kiai time設置成和其他diff一樣的]
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 02:07:694

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:920
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694


[Easy]
Excellent


[Normal]
Easy diff你的整體設置是HP3 CS3 AR3 OD3 ,Normal diff就自然應該加一點難度 可以把HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
01:23:178 (1) - 直接刪除 作為一個normal難度 spinner後面最好不要馬上跟一個note
01:23:500 (1) - 再注意下這裡按一下newcombo
01:46:081 (3,4) - 建議先把slider放前面 circle單個放後面 交換下位置(時間上)


[Normal+]
00:15:113 (3,4) - 邊緣被擋住就有些不好看了 建議放在空曠的地方
00:42:210 (2) - 開頭finish
00:49:952 (5) - newcombo

[Hard]
01:02:855 - 這裡重音 finish
--------------------------------------------------
w 不错 作为一个还没有rank图的已经非常好了
Great Mapset
Good Luck
sherrie__fay
mod req via forum PM ☆

[General]

  1. 把所有的书签(蓝线)拿掉o.o
  2. 所有结尾的转盘结束点必须一样o.o
  3. 因为我是I→H→N→E倒着mod的所以E和N的NC问题就省略了 NCmod真的很无聊……
  4. 自己把NC改到长白线或者长白线后一个音就OK 所有diff都是
  5. 音效加太少啦 24白线的clap或者whistle都行啊 你加的soft-whistle我用两只手就数得过来啊
[Easy]

  1. 00:00:920 (2) - 去掉sliderbody的沙沙的whistle音
  2. 00:13:823 (4) - ^
  3. 00:16:403 (2) - ^
  4. 00:18:984 (4) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:46:081 - +note
  2. 00:51:565 - 和00:51:887 - 加节奏
[Normal+]

  1. 00:44:790 (7) - +NC
  2. 00:46:403 (1) - 去掉NC
  3. 00:56:726 (1) - ^
  4. 00:59:307 (1) - ^
  5. 00:58:661 (2) - 和(3)重叠了 把方向改一下
  6. 01:02:210 (1) - 去掉NC
  7. 01:02:855 (2) - +NC
  8. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
  9. 01:31:242 (7) - +NC
  10. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
  11. 01:33:823 (6) - +NC
  12. 01:38:984 (6) - 变速slider要加NC
  13. 01:46:726 (7) - NC
  14. 01:47:049 (1) - 去掉NC
  15. 02:01:887 (2) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 00:00:920 (3) - 开头加finish
  2. 00:04:790 - 这个空格里放点东西进去;至少00:04:790 - 和00:05:436 - 要有拍子在
  3. 00:09:307 (4) - 开头加whistle
  4. 00:10:274 - 同上,00:10:274 - 和00:10:597 - 要下节奏
  5. 00:18:178 (1) - 去掉NC
  6. 00:19:629 (7) - 开头加whistle
  7. 00:20:113 - 其实这有个1/8小连打o.o
  8. 00:41:565 - +note
  9. 00:59:468 (1) - 去掉NC
  10. 01:00:274 (4) - +NC
  11. 01:02:371 (2,3) - 这里的节奏应该正好是slider和note反过来
  12. 01:10:597 (8) - NC
  13. 01:11:887 (1) - 去掉NC(这里NC乱了
  14. 01:13:500 (9) - NC
  15. 01:13:823 (1) - 去掉NC;建议节奏
  16. 01:18:984 (6) - NC
  17. 01:25:113 (1) - 去掉NC
  18. 01:27:694 (1) - 去掉NC
  19. 01:28:661 (8) - NC
  20. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
  21. 01:31:242 (6) - NC
  22. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
  23. 01:34:145 (8) - NC
  24. 01:40:597 (1) - 去掉NC
  25. 01:41:565 (7) - +NC
  26. 01:45:436 (5) - 调整滑条位置,让他和01:46:403 (6,7,8) - 不要挨太近
  27. 01:47:049 - 这后边的NC求自己调到长白线或者长白线后一个短白线
  28. 02:07:532 (1) - 为啥要在蓝线结束……
[SB]

  1. SB\Lrc02.png:位置略偏左 考虑往中心移一点
  2. SB\Lrc06.png:^
  3. SB\Lrc11.png:位置略偏右 考虑往中心移一点
  4. SB\Lrc22.png:被人物挡住了o.o 22要改23也要跟着一起挪位置
图很不错啦☆
歌也很不错啦☆
好运☆
Topic Starter
Azure

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
打開這張譜的file 你會看到2個.osb,刪掉那個舊的... 刪掉了~

Audio Lead-in 太短 每個diff都去多調一下 都改成3秒

[Inconsistency in PreviewTime:請把每個diff的預覽點都設置成同一個]
- [Easy] : 84762
- [Hard] : 124762
- [Normal+] : 124762
- [Normal] : 84952

fix

[Inconsistency in Kiai Times: 把Easy diff的kiai time設置成和其他diff一樣的]
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 02:07:694

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:920
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694

fix


[Easy]
Excellent


[Normal]
Easy diff你的整體設置是HP3 CS3 AR3 OD3 ,Normal diff就自然應該加一點難度 可以把HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
01:23:178 (1) - 直接刪除 作為一個normal難度 spinner後面最好不要馬上跟一個note
01:23:500 (1) - 再注意下這裡按一下newcombo
01:46:081 (3,4) - 建議先把slider放前面 circle單個放後面 交換下位置(時間上)

fix~

[Normal+]
00:15:113 (3,4) - 邊緣被擋住就有些不好看了 建議放在空曠的地方
00:42:210 (2) - 開頭finish
00:49:952 (5) - newcombo

fix~

[Hard]
01:02:855 - 這裡重音 finish
fix~
--------------------------------------------------
w 不错 作为一个还没有rank图的已经非常好了
Great Mapset
Good Luck
really ;A;?


THx
Midasmens
小米來看圖~
Request from my queue

General
記得紅線前面不能有note的說(offset不對)建議改成-1660
Hard難度的PreviewTime沒有統一起來~~這個可不行哦 >.<
因為所有diff都是你一個人完成的~~Kiai就要一致才行
感覺上可以關掉Letterbox~因為影響了SB的效果~當然個人感覺啦
~~~~~~

Easy
00:00:920 (2) - Slider上有whistle略吵~~一開始很安靜~~只要slider頭上有whistle就行了(語無倫次~不知能不能聽懂)>.<
00:41:887 (1) - whistle
00:49:952 (3) - 結尾用whistle
00:52:210 (1) - whistle
01:18:984 (1) - 感覺上不好看~~對稱一點
01:20:920 (2) - 這個slider真不好看的說 :o 用4點弄一下吧
01:43:500 (2) - x:48 y:168? 別忘了後面spacing
02:07:371 (1) - 感覺在 02:09:952 這裡就結束了
~~~~~~

Normal
00:09:307 (7) - slider這樣還不如直線好看呢~
00:10:920 (1,2,3) - 略微感覺3被壓著不好~放開一點看看
00:18:016 (2) - 開頭移到x:312 y:256(和前面的8疊起來)
00:21:242 (8) - finish
00:50:919 (6) - 有點太短感覺突然~~結尾到 00:51:242 這裡會好多
01:12:210 (3,5) - clap 5開頭
01:23:500 (1) - finish
02:07:371 (1) - 和easy一樣~
~~~~~~


Normal+
00:18:178 (1) - 去掉NC~
00:18:823 (2) - NC
00:54:468 (4,5) - 把4,5位置調整到5和之前的2疊起來~~會比較好
01:15:113 (3) - 感覺和Slider有點近~~分開一點
01:16:726 (1) - 跟前面的Slider結尾疊起來好點
01:29:307 (2) - ^
01:48:984 (4) - ^
02:07:371 (1) - 跟之前一樣www
~~~~~~

Hard
00:02:210 (5) - 美觀一點的說~~ >.<
01:29:629 (6) - 跟3疊起來~
01:32:855 (1,2,3) - 可以緩和一點~~2不用那麼高~現在的這種梗有點不好打呢
01:35:436 (9) - NC
01:37:694 (3) - 被Slider遮擋了不是很好~~可以放到Slider頭部或者尾部疊起來
01:38:016 (4,5,6) - 這個3連和之前的spacing不同了~~不夠統一的感覺呢~~最好改一下
01:44:145 (1,2,3) - 一開始的2連不好看~可以分開順滑一點
01:47:049 (1) - 跟前面5開頭疊起來
02:07:532 (1) - 最後spinner同一www
~~~~~~

嗯~就這些啦
新人作圖節奏什麽的下的還不錯~~~flow和美觀程度上加把油的說!>_<


希望能幫上忙~

Love~ Hatsune Miku >3<

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶
Phish_old
hey there~

Folder seems fine

[Easy]
> mapping on tinygrid is recommanded, especially for low spacing diffs (easy, normal)
00:04:790 (4) - whistle
00:09:952 - ^
00:56:403 (5) - 1smallgrid left
02:02:855 (2) - pls move the middlepoint of the sliderbody 1-2 smallgrids to the right

[Normal]
00:04:468 (7) - whistle
01:27:694 (4) - 1smallgrid to the right
01:37:694 (5) - 1smallgrid up and right
01:46:726 (4) - adjust spacing ._. the gap between 01:46:081 (3) - and (4) is too short. that's why you should map on tinygrid for the future
02:03:823 - clap?

[Normal+]
00:06:081 (3) - 1smallgrid right
01:05:758 (2) - ^
01:48:984 (4) - stack with end of (3)
hmm :/ there are many more spots where i don't like the spacing.. stupid smallgrid i hate you when used in easy/normal diffs ._.

[Hard]
> AR8 pls?
00:20:597 (1,2) - claps?
00:56:081 (4) - 1smallgrid up
01:29:629 (6) - 1smallgrid right to stack with the other circle (maybe adjust spacing from (5) also)

nice mapset :)
Topic Starter
Azure
SPOILER

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via forum PM ☆

[General]

  1. 把所有的书签(蓝线)拿掉o.o 原來你們看的到嗎= =;;;
  2. 所有结尾的转盘结束点必须一样o.o
  3. 因为我是I→H→N→E倒着mod的所以E和N的NC问题就省略了 NCmod真的很无聊……
  4. 自己把NC改到长白线或者长白线后一个音就OK 所有diff都是
  5. 音效加太少啦 24白线的clap或者whistle都行啊 你加的soft-whistle我用两只手就数得过来啊
fix 音效的部分是配合歌曲...?

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:920 (2) - 去掉sliderbody的沙沙的whistle音
  2. 00:13:823 (4) - ^
  3. 00:16:403 (2) - ^
  4. 00:18:984 (4) - ^
第一個弄不掉 orz

[Normal]

  1. 00:46:081 - +note
  2. 00:51:565 - 和00:51:887 - 加节奏
fix

[Normal+]

  1. 00:44:790 (7) - +NC
  2. 00:46:403 (1) - 去掉NC
  3. 00:56:726 (1) - ^
  4. 00:59:307 (1) - ^
  5. 00:58:661 (2) - 和(3)重叠了 把方向改一下
  6. 01:02:210 (1) - 去掉NC
  7. 01:02:855 (2) - +NC
  8. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
  9. 01:31:242 (7) - +NC
  10. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
  11. 01:33:823 (6) - +NC
  12. 01:38:984 (6) - 变速slider要加NC
  13. 01:46:726 (7) - NC
  14. 01:47:049 (1) - 去掉NC
  15. 02:01:887 (2) - ^
fix

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:920 (3) - 开头加finish
  2. 00:04:790 - 这个空格里放点东西进去;至少00:04:790 - 和00:05:436 - 要有拍子在
  3. 00:09:307 (4) - 开头加whistle
  4. 00:10:274 - 同上,00:10:274 - 和00:10:597 - 要下节奏
  5. 00:18:178 (1) - 去掉NC
  6. 00:19:629 (7) - 开头加whistle
  7. 00:20:113 - 其实这有个1/8小连打o.o 我不想那麼殘忍..orz
  8. 00:41:565 - +note
  9. 00:59:468 (1) - 去掉NC
  10. 01:00:274 (4) - +NC
  11. 01:02:371 (2,3) - 这里的节奏应该正好是slider和note反过来 為了音效...
  12. 01:10:597 (8) - NC
  13. 01:11:887 (1) - 去掉NC(这里NC乱了
  14. 01:13:500 (9) - NC
  15. 01:13:823 (1) - 去掉NC;建议节奏 這裡沒改,感覺好亂|||
  16. 01:18:984 (6) - NC
  17. 01:25:113 (1) - 去掉NC
  18. 01:27:694 (1) - 去掉NC
  19. 01:28:661 (8) - NC
  20. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
  21. 01:31:242 (6) - NC
  22. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
  23. 01:34:145 (8) - NC
  24. 01:40:597 (1) - 去掉NC
  25. 01:41:565 (7) - +NC
  26. 01:45:436 (5) - 调整滑条位置,让他和01:46:403 (6,7,8) - 不要挨太近
  27. 01:47:049 - 这后边的NC求自己调到长白线或者长白线后一个短白线
  28. 02:07:532 (1) - 为啥要在蓝线结束……
fix

[SB]

  1. SB\Lrc02.png:位置略偏左 考虑往中心移一点
  2. SB\Lrc06.png:^
  3. SB\Lrc11.png:位置略偏右 考虑往中心移一点
  4. SB\Lrc22.png:被人物挡住了o.o 22要改23也要跟着一起挪位置
图很不错啦☆
歌也很不错啦☆
好运☆

SB 我會再改...
Topic Starter
Azure
SPOILER

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
Request from my queue

General
記得紅線前面不能有note的說(offset不對)建議改成-1660
Hard難度的PreviewTime沒有統一起來~~這個可不行哦 >.<
因為所有diff都是你一個人完成的~~Kiai就要一致才行
感覺上可以關掉Letterbox~因為影響了SB的效果~當然個人感覺啦

offset改了,非常感謝~
PreviewTime 還是不一樣嗎?? 我都改了...orz
Kiai 應該是一樣了... :?


~~~~~~

Easy
00:00:920 (2) - Slider上有whistle略吵~~一開始很安靜~~只要slider頭上有whistle就行了(語無倫次~不知能不能聽懂)>.<
00:41:887 (1) - whistle
00:49:952 (3) - 結尾用whistle
00:52:210 (1) - whistle
01:18:984 (1) - 感覺上不好看~~對稱一點
01:20:920 (2) - 這個slider真不好看的說 :o 用4點弄一下吧
01:43:500 (2) - x:48 y:168? 別忘了後面spacing
02:07:371 (1) - 感覺在 02:09:952 這裡就結束了
~~~~~~

Normal
00:09:307 (7) - slider這樣還不如直線好看呢~
00:10:920 (1,2,3) - 略微感覺3被壓著不好~放開一點看看
00:18:016 (2) - 開頭移到x:312 y:256(和前面的8疊起來)
00:21:242 (8) - finish
00:50:919 (6) - 有點太短感覺突然~~結尾到 00:51:242 這裡會好多
01:12:210 (3,5) - clap 5開頭
01:23:500 (1) - finish
02:07:371 (1) - 和easy一樣~
~~~~~~


Normal+
00:18:178 (1) - 去掉NC~
00:18:823 (2) - NC
00:54:468 (4,5) - 把4,5位置調整到5和之前的2疊起來~~會比較好
01:15:113 (3) - 感覺和Slider有點近~~分開一點
01:16:726 (1) - 跟前面的Slider結尾疊起來好點
01:29:307 (2) - ^
01:48:984 (4) - ^
02:07:371 (1) - 跟之前一樣www
~~~~~~

Hard
00:02:210 (5) - 美觀一點的說~~ >.<
01:29:629 (6) - 跟3疊起來~
01:32:855 (1,2,3) - 可以緩和一點~~2不用那麼高~現在的這種梗有點不好打呢
01:35:436 (9) - NC
01:37:694 (3) - 被Slider遮擋了不是很好~~可以放到Slider頭部或者尾部疊起來
01:38:016 (4,5,6) - 這個3連和之前的spacing不同了~~不夠統一的感覺呢~~最好改一下
01:44:145 (1,2,3) - 一開始的2連不好看~可以分開順滑一點
01:47:049 (1) - 跟前面5開頭疊起來
02:07:532 (1) - 最後spinner同一www
~~~~~~

嗯~就這些啦
新人作圖節奏什麽的下的還不錯~~~flow和美觀程度上加把油的說!>_<


希望能幫上忙~

Love~ Hatsune Miku >3<

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶


給的建議金本上全都照做了,美觀真的要加強...orz
很有幫助 Thx :D
Topic Starter
Azure

Dick wrote:

hey there~
SPOILER
Folder seems fine

[Easy]
> mapping on tinygrid is recommanded, especially for low spacing diffs (easy, normal)
00:04:790 (4) - whistle
00:09:952 - ^
00:56:403 (5) - 1smallgrid left
02:02:855 (2) - pls move the middlepoint of the sliderbody 1-2 smallgrids to the right

[Normal]
00:04:468 (7) - whistle
01:27:694 (4) - 1smallgrid to the right
01:37:694 (5) - 1smallgrid up and right
01:46:726 (4) - adjust spacing ._. the gap between 01:46:081 (3) - and (4) is too short. that's why you should map on tinygrid for the future
02:03:823 - clap?

[Normal+]
00:06:081 (3) - 1smallgrid right
01:05:758 (2) - ^
01:48:984 (4) - stack with end of (3)
hmm :/ there are many more spots where i don't like the spacing.. stupid smallgrid i hate you when used in easy/normal diffs ._.

[Hard]
> AR8 pls?
00:20:597 (1,2) - claps?
00:56:081 (4) - 1smallgrid up
01:29:629 (6) - 1smallgrid right to stack with the other circle (maybe adjust spacing from (5) also)

nice mapset :)

All fix~~ Thank you very much~
Kanari
Haii ~


[General]
- I dont think that " at " and " dusk " are need, remove them from the tags.
- keeno is already the source, remove it from the tags as well.
- Music track lead-in 3 is to large, move it to 2
- All diffs should have the same offset.


[Easy]
02:02:210 (1) - x:464 y:176


[Normal]
00:47:371 (2) - Place where 00:46:081 (7) was.
01:35:113 (4,5,1,2,3) - How about this? Try placing it into a flower shape.

[Normal +]
- Hp Drain Rate +1
00:18:823 (1) - Spacing ~
00:19:629 (3) - ^ and line with end of (1)
01:06:403 (4) - Line with (1)
01:49:307 (6) - New combo.
01:54:145 (7) - ^
02:07:532 (1) - Move this a tick backwards and end it at 02:10:597 like all the other diffs.


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
00:03:501 - Add a circle.
00:07:049 (5) - Place where (1) was placed.
00:57:694 (4) - Place where 00:56:081 (4) was.
01:37:694 (3) - Stack properly ~
02:00:436 (8) - One grid down.


Well mapped ~
2 stars and good luck! >w<
zeroclover
General

add "Cut" to tag, yeah because original song was 4.30 right
audiolead too sudden "repost - - Music track lead-in 3 is to large, move it to 2 -, not 1
not sure, normal + is allowed or not
make all difficult have same offset, did u looked last mod post?
inconsistent kiai flow, try make it same
Hatsune Miku - Crack (tine30sakura) ,remove this in your map folder

Hard

00:13:823 (1) - should move 1 grid down
00:24:307 - remove this inherit point (ctrl + I )

others is fine

Normal +

i will skip this, because hard is enough i think

Normal

nothing found


Easy

00:00:920 (2) - remove sliderwhistle hitsound,sound bad
00:13:823 (4) - ^
00:16:403 (2) - ^
00:18:984 (4) - ^

overall fine east diff

~~
i cant mod when u not finished to fix your map from last mod u_u
CTB Fia
Easy
no comment :o
you are good beatmapper don't you?

Normal
try to put some sound effect on the notes
all beats seems to fit in the song anyway so i have no comment anyway

that's all i can mod
as my queue song for >2 minutes only modded for 2 diff
i hope your beatmap wi be ranked soon!!!
Topic Starter
Azure
SPOILER

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~


[General]
- I dont think that " at " and " dusk " are need, remove them from the tags.
"at dusk" is album name 0.0
- keeno is already the source, remove it from the tags as well. ok :oops:
- Music track lead-in 3 is to large, move it to 2 fix
- All diffs should have the same offset. sorry! fix it~


[Easy]
02:02:210 (1) - x:464 y:176


[Normal]
00:47:371 (2) - Place where 00:46:081 (7) was.
01:35:113 (4,5,1,2,3) - How about this? Try placing it into a flower shape. look pretter :oops:


[Normal +]
- Hp Drain Rate +1
00:18:823 (1) - Spacing ~
00:19:629 (3) - ^ and line with end of (1)
01:06:403 (4) - Line with (1)
01:49:307 (6) - New combo.
01:54:145 (7) - ^
02:07:532 (1) - Move this a tick backwards and end it at 02:10:597 like all the other diffs.

thank you :D fix it~


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
00:03:501 - Add a circle.
00:07:049 (5) - Place where (1) was placed.
00:57:694 (4) - Place where 00:56:081 (4) was.
01:37:694 (3) - Stack properly ~
02:00:436 (8) - One grid down.


Well mapped ~
2 stars and good luck! >w<

Thx :oops:
all fix~!!
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