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One Direction - What Makes CDFA Beautiful

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Shohei Ohtani
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Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 29, 2013 at 10:39:50 PM

Artist: One Direction
Title: What Makes CDFA Beautiful
Tags: Up All Night Kiddo-Kun
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5210kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.67 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4.68 stars, 321 notes)
  3. Kiddo's Normal (4.21 stars, 252 notes)
Download: One Direction - What Makes CDFA Beautiful
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks so much to SapphireGhost for the combo color help!

If you're a huge One Direction fan, you'd know why they are what they are

Because I'm the biggest OD fan there is
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 30 times in total.
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
REVIVE THIS MOTHER FUCKER BECAUSE MY DIFFICULTY IS DONE
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: swigging.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 34354
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 174274
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:What Makes You Beautiful
TitleUnicode:What Makes You Beautiful
Artist:One Direction
ArtistUnicode:One Direction
Creator:CDFA
Version:Kiddo's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kiddo-Kun
BeatmapID:170188
BeatmapSetID:56253

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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2,89034,95464
2,146154,158824
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Mercurial
Mercurial
No.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yes.
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hi~ m4m from your mod queue
Mainly, most of my mods are suggestions, so it's up to you to follow my suggestions or not. I hope this'll help ^^

Easy
idk but the countdown seems a bit off. And i experimented a bit with the offset and i think it should be 484 (it's up to you to use it or not)

00:25:924 (5) - this reverse slider could confuse some beginners. (My suggestion : end the reverse slider here 00:26:884 - and add a circle here 00:27:364 - )
i actually wanted to say this slider 00:52:324 (3) - should mirror this slider 00:50:404 (1) - so it looks beautiful. But because of distance snap, so nope
01:24:964 (6) - add nc
02:42:244 (2) - add nc

Your combo consistency suddenly changed at the last chorus, so my suggestions are:
02:42:274 (2) - add nc
02:45:634 (6) - ^
02:49:474 (2) - ^
02:48:994 (1) - remove nc

Kiddo's Normal
the offset's suggestion is still the same. Up to you to use it or not
Great diff :)

Hard
nice diff :D i'm not good at modding hard diff =w=

Here's my map : Younique Unit - Maxstep
Because this mapset is already perfect, so kudosu star for you~ :)
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
ah uhm.. halo CDFA~
I want to have M4M with you, but I'm sorry if the quality of my mod is not on your expectation lol
mod
[General]
perhaps when you make a curved slider please use 1 point for neat curved slider

[Hard]
  1. 00:35:074 (3,5) - Only a suggestion, could you move it to x:296 y:140
  2. 00:35:074 (4) - and also this one, to x:224 y:200 it will look more neat this way
  3. 00:48:514 - Ah yeah, this streams I think drum sampleset will fit more instead of normal it will match the drum from the song and if you want, you can put whistle if you agree to use drum sampleset. It would be nice I think, don't forget lower the volume by 10~15% so the whistle will not dominate the song
  4. 00:50:434 (1) - a finish? kiai start without it feels empty lol
  5. 01:36:274 (3,4,5) - same with 00:35:074 (3,5) for (3) and (5) to x:204 y:140 and (4) to x:288 y:204
  6. 01:49:954 - same with 00:48:514
  7. 01:51:874 (1) - same with 00:50:434 (1)
  8. 02:39:874 - same with 00:48:514
  9. 02:56:194 - ^
[Kiddo's Normal]
  1. 00:49:954 (1) - I think finish here would not fit the song because the next object already have finish too, so.. double finish looks a little bit not comfortable to me, moreover it is not following the song
  2. 02:08:194 (3) - move to x:104 y:108, umm it looks more neat I think
  3. 02:14:434 - Miss a clap here?
[Easy]
  1. I think you can have custom slidertick sound for this diff because it seems you can increase the creation of hitsound by put clap/whistle on the tick
  2. 00:38:914 (1,2,3) - I suggest to have something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624346 or you can switch place between (1) and (3)
  3. 00:46:114 (3) - Clap here?
  4. 01:01:954 (3) - Finish!
  5. 01:19:714 (5) - clap here and also here 01:20:674
  6. 01:40:354 (1,2,3) - same with 00:38:914 (1,2,3)
  7. 01:55:714 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 02:13:474 (3) - the slidertick here, I'mreally suggesting to put clap instead
  9. 02:17:314 (1) - ^
  10. 02:21:154 (4) - ^


I think beatmap like this would be nice if there are storyboard like this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/48922 but it only my opinion lol

anyway goodluck CDFA!!
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
this song plays like everyday in my university cafeteria jesus

General
- Put "up all night" in tags since that's the album i think

Easy
00:44:674 (3) - make it neater/more natural i guess, it looked like it had an angle at the end at first
00:50:434 (1,3) - i think you can make a better overlap than this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/625702 Code if you want for (1,2,3):
SPOILER
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60,208,51874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,340,52354,2,0,B|184:364|240:352|292:312|308:252|300:208,1,280
if you do there's another one at 01:51:874 (1,3) -
01:00:034 (3) - Finish at end, hear bg music
01:03:874 (1) - Clap at end
01:05:794 (2) - NC, you had one combo note before
01:24:514 (5) - NC
02:01:474 (3) - Finish at end
02:07:234 (2) - NC
02:19:714 (3) - Curve it the other way, i think it's better cursor flow into (4)
02:42:274 (2) - NC maybe?
02:45:634 (6) - NC, you had it before
02:48:994 (1) - Clap
02:53:314 (1) - Finish at beginning, hear bg music
02:57:634 (2) - Clap
03:00:514 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note
03:04:354 (1) - ^
03:02:913 (4) - AIMod said that this was unsnapped looked fine to me lol

Kiddo's Normal
00:35:074 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:47:554 (3) - Flip this another direction, looks weird with (1) atm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/625714
02:05:314 (4) - NC? also i think you can make the line of notes more straighter (4,5,6,7)
02:25:954 (1) - Delete NC, didn't really see the point of it
02:54:274 (3) - try to make it so the head of this is in a better blanket with (1)
02:57:154 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:04:354 (6) - Clap

Hard
00:17:794 (5) - Delete Finish, didn't really hear any emphasize in the bg music
00:23:554 (5) - NC
00:35:074 (4) - Finish at beginning
00:50:434 (1) - ^
01:36:514 (4) - ^
01:51:874 (1) - ^
02:41:794 (1) - ^
02:52:834 (7) - Move this lower so the tail isn't really touching the slider before
02:56:194 (5) - NC to indicate the change to 1/3
03:09:154 (8) - NC, you had this earlier
03:09:634 (10) - Finish at end like before
03:14:914 (3) - Clap
03:18:274 (4) - NC, like 01:07:714 (1) -
nowadays, i guess you could make some sliders neater with better blankets, etc.

Nice map. Good luck!! :D
Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
I'll mod this once the mods above are fixed. I don't want to repeat all suggestions :(
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun

Matoryoshika wrote:

[Kiddo's Normal]
  1. 02:14:434 - Miss a clap here?
There actually isn't a note here though :v and I don't want to add one to match with the vocals. I did however delete the note 02:22:114 - to be consistent
As for LunarSakuya:

02:05:314 (4) - NC? also i think you can make the line of notes more straighter (4,5,6,7) I have a combo pattern going on, and adding a NC would ruin that. I make a new combo every 2nd stanza.
THANKS FOR THE MODS!

o3o
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: swigging.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 34354
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 174274
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:What Makes You Beautiful
TitleUnicode:What Makes You Beautiful
Artist:One Direction
ArtistUnicode:One Direction
Creator:CDFA
Version:Kiddo's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kiddo-Kun
BeatmapID:170188
BeatmapSetID:56253

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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48,208,82114,2,0,B|224:208,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,83074,2,0,B|224:100,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,100,83794,2,0,B|168:56|196:24|244:24|244:24|288:24,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,24,84514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,120,84994,6,0,B|440:160|424:208|372:228|328:204,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,85954,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,208,86434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,304,86914,2,0,B|92:384,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,87874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,88354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,108,88834,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,288,96514,6,0,P|368:312|420:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,232,97234,2,0,P|328:195|288:172,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,174,97954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,68,98434,2,0,P|324:104|408:36,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,132,99154,2,0,P|409:201|445:269,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,349,99874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,324,100354,6,0,B|208:324|208:324|140:280,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,224,101074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,101314,2,0,B|240:204|240:204|308:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,316,102274,2,0,P|508:276|496:192,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,102994,2,0,P|351:218|328:147,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,103714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,80,104194,6,0,B|208:66|192:102|192:102|152:86|124:126,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,104914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,257,105154,2,0,B|152:297|192:281|192:281|208:317|264:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,264,106114,2,0,B|452:224|424:192|424:192|452:144|420:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,106834,2,0,P|320:184|160:152,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,108034,6,0,B|216:366|256:342|256:342|292:314|336:346,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,108754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,232,108994,2,0,B|296:206|256:230|256:230|220:258|176:226,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109954,12,0,111394,0:0:0:0:
256,296,111874,6,0,P|320:320|376:260,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,179,112594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,100,112834,2,0,P|324:116|316:220,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,277,113554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,304,113794,2,0,P|388:348|288:328,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,335,114514,2,0,P|122:347|82:303,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,223,115234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
82,63,115714,6,0,B|134:63|134:63|184:63|184:63|234:95,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,150,116434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,206,116674,2,0,P|309:262|209:266,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,185,117634,2,0,P|123:129|223:125,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,118354,2,0,L|420:184,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,119074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,332,119554,6,0,P|445:378|361:354,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,299,120274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,268,120514,2,0,P|329:222|245:246,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,357,121474,2,0,P|214:378|265:332,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,122194,2,0,P|196:196|100:284,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,123394,6,0,P|316:320|344:212,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,139,124114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,59,124354,2,0,P|267:31|199:71,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,131,125314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,187,125554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,243,125794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
226,299,126034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,355,126274,2,0,P|362:355|394:275,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,212,126994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,128,127234,6,0,B|362:128|334:156|334:156|306:124|258:124,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,124,127954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,108,128194,2,0,P|118:184|192:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,129154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,130114,6,0,L|256:196,2,120
328,40,131074,6,0,P|408:40|456:104,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,258,132034,2,0,P|374:258|326:194,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,132754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,199,132994,2,0,P|138:258|58:258,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,188,133714,2,0,L|184:340,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,326,134914,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,176,135394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,120,135634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,135874,2,0,P|312:128|228:112,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,136834,6,0,L|104:280,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,300,137314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,300,137554,2,0,L|156:128,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,138274,2,0,L|240:188,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,235,138754,6,0,P|360:256|416:184,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,120,139474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,139714,2,0,P|396:48|368:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,140674,2,0,B|336:320|304:344|304:344|224:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,340,141394,2,0,P|96:344|64:256,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,199,142594,6,0,P|324:207|388:123,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,123,143314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,124,143554,2,0,P|292:42|336:50,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,196,144514,2,0,P|448:256|356:272,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,200,145234,2,0,P|320:196|284:276,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,145954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,268,159874,6,0,B|250:188|325:181|330:95|249:50|202:105|195:117|199:148|199:148|175:129|160:129|100:136|79:236|163:261|195:229|225:248,1,480,4|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
324,332,161794,6,0,B|360:308|360:308|384:272|384:272|384:236|384:236|384:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,162754,2,0,B|284:56|284:56|256:84|256:84|220:56|220:56|172:56,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,116,163474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,163714,2,0,B|88:196|132:196|132:196|132:280,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,355,164434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,355,164914,2,0,B|340:363|376:331,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,280,165394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,165634,6,0,B|420:40,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,168,166594,2,0,B|316:208|288:248|236:252|192:216,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,109,167554,2,0,B|87:69|115:29|167:25|211:61,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,168274,2,0,B|256:156|284:196|336:200|380:164,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,168994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,100,169474,6,0,B|100:132|100:240,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,340,170434,2,0,B|293:308|293:200,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,171154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,52,171394,2,0,B|236:64|220:104|220:104|132:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,136,172114,2,0,B|42:172|66:212|66:212|94:248|62:292,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,172834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,188,173314,6,0,P|268:180|296:104,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,174034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,113,174274,2,0,P|243:179|323:187,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,175234,12,0,176674,0:0:0:0:
256,88,177154,6,0,P|192:64|136:124,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,205,177874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,178114,2,0,P|188:268|196:164,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,178834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,80,179074,2,0,P|124:36|224:56,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,49,179794,2,0,P|390:37|430:81,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,161,180514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,321,180994,6,0,B|378:321|378:321|328:321|328:321|278:289,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,234,181714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,178,181954,2,0,P|203:122|303:118,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,199,182914,2,0,P|389:255|289:259,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,183634,2,0,L|92:200,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,200,184354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,52,184834,6,0,P|67:6|151:30,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,85,185554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,116,185794,2,0,P|183:162|267:138,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,27,186754,2,0,P|298:6|247:52,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,132,187474,2,0,P|316:188|412:100,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,188674,6,0,P|196:64|168:172,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,220,189394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,220,189634,2,0,P|345:204|376:103,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,103,190594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,159,190834,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,215,191074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,271,191314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,351,191554,2,0,P|124:351|156:271,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,230,192274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,150,192514,6,0,B|258:150|286:178|286:178|314:146|362:146,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,193234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,212,193474,2,0,P|424:255|357:217,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,106,194434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,162,194674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,218,194914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
74,274,195154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,354,195394,2,0,P|158:370|208:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,296,196354,6,0,B|412:296|440:272|440:224|440:224|440:176,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,103,197074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,23,197314,2,0,B|392:23|364:47|364:95|364:95|364:143,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,295,198274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,295,199234,6,0,L|240:296,2,120
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
So much desu
Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
mas o melhor é quando vamos pra baleia~

I may mod this a bit jokingly, because this song makes me laugh because of this. Please try not to take this in an offensive way.

[Easy]

  • AR seems a bit too high for an easy diff, considering you already have that beautiful Normal over there. AR -1 pl0x (and maybe OD as well if you do this).
  1. 00:23:554 (2) - This slider is partially offscreen. I dunno if this is rankable, but as far as I know this is kinda annoying for CTB players and may be unrankable so yeah.
  2. 00:25:954 (5) - 2-repeat sliders usually make beginners so sad they want to cry for their broken slider. Maybe remove one repeat then add a note 1/2 later?
  3. 00:36:994 (4) - You could make this slider 1/2 shorter to give a better variation to the rhythm instead of those 1/1s everywhere.
  4. 00:47:074 (4,1) - These sliders are overlapping. If you move (1) a bit down, that'd make you the pattern beautiful.
  5. 00:54:274 (1,3) - The first point in (1) is not perfectly aligned with the red point. This may be nazi but uhhhhhh please fix it. Same for (3).
  6. 01:00:034 (3) - You could make this slider 1/2 shorter, then add a beat 1/1 later. A different-than-1/1 rhythm is always welcome.
  7. 01:03:874 (1) - Same as 00:47:074.
  8. 01:08:194 (x) - You could seriously add some beats here, feels kinda empty now. But yeah, just your choice.
  9. 01:19:714 (5) - Where is the clap that should be at the beginning of the slider?
  10. 01:26:914 (1) - You could add a whistle here, but just personal opinion.
  11. 01:36:034 (1) - A whistle here sounds WAY better than a clap.
  12. 01:40:354 (1,3) - Same as 00:54:274. Copypasting makes me sad.
  13. 01:49:954 (1) - ghafdjsklsfdçasfdkjsdhfgdsh
  14. 01:55:714 (1,3) - HADJKLDÇLSKJHGSDFGHJDKLÇ
  15. 02:05:314 (1) - I'm already crying.
  16. 02:10:114 (4) - You could, seriously, add some beats here. You don't really have a break to make it empty so yeah.
  17. 02:22:594 (1) - Use a soft hitsound here instead of a finish. There isn't anything in the music that fits with that finish.
  18. 02:39:874 (1) - THE UGLINESS OF THIS SLIDER HITS ME WITH THE STRENGTH OF A THOUSAND NEEDLES
  19. 03:19:234 (1) - Could add something here as well.
[Kiddo's Normal]

  • Why are the combo colors different? If you don't change it, I'll report you to the modding police. WEEOOO
    Besides, there's not much to mod here besides this (really nice) normal could look a lot better, to I'll get into extreme nazi mode and try to point out the problems in your sliders.
  1. 00:25:474 (4) - The right side of this slider is a grid upper than it should be. ):
  2. 00:37:714 (4) - ^. You probably copypasted this slider a lot more times in the song so please fix it. It seems kinda nazi, but imo it's really noticeable ):
  3. 00:39:874 (3) - You could move the red point 2 grids left so the blanket is a bit better.
  4. 00:51:394 (2) - Assymetrical ):
  5. 01:00:034 (4) - Same as 00:39:874 (3).
  6. 01:14:674 (4) - You could add a new combo here. Even though most combos in this diff are like 5-7 notes, this combo seems a bit unnecessarily long.
  7. 01:48:034 (1,3) - These sliders look a bit ugly.. You used a much better wave slider on 02:52:114 (5). Maybe use it for here?
  8. 02:05:314 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe make these a straight line? They look kinda weird as it is.
  9. 02:09:154 (4,1) - This new combo should be in (4). Fits much more with the song.
  10. 02:51:394 (4) - Same as 00:39:874 (3) .
  11. 03:08:674 (1) - Move two grids left, this currently blankets very badly with the other note.

[Hard]

  • Uhhh it may be just here but this difficulty is HORRIBLY glitched and therefore unmoddable. You may want to call me to check it later. ok
    Combo colors are different. AGAIN.
  1. 00:48:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - lol, gg
  2. 01:01:474 (7) - Maybe stack this with (5)'s start so it doesn't look ugly?
  3. 01:17:314 (3) - why is this offgrid ):
  4. 02:24:754 (1) - Same as easy diff.
  5. 02:45:154 (5) - New combo, this combo is way too long and asfghasdjklf


    I personally am not a big fan of this difficulty because of the extremely huge amounts of copypaste, but the song itself is a huge amount of copypasting so yeah.
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
heya

[Easy]
  1. i think those sliders are little bit fast :/
    - 00:48:514 (1) - drum finish is better then whistle
    - 01:14:914 (1) - delete NC
    - 01:49:954 (1) - same issue 00:48:514 (1) - with here
    - 02:47:554 (4) - touching HP bar
    - 03:02:913 (4) - try more up location, little bit off screen?
    -
[Normal]

  • - 00:25:474 (4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/27Yn5 feels better for me
    - 01:51:874 (1) - add finish on start
    - 02:16:834 (1) - delete whistle on end
    - 02:17:554 (3) - add whistle on start and delete clap
    - 02:54:274 (3) - hmm i think this overlap isn't look good try change this?
    - 02:39:874 (1) - finish on end
[Hard]
  1. i think some parts are made by c&p haha

    - 00:11:554 (2) - delete clap here? i can't hear any clap sound
    - 00:23:074 (1) - delete NC and 00:23:554 (3) - adding it here
    - 00:25:234 (1) - delete NC
    - 02:39:874 (1) - try soft finish here
    - 02:44:434 (4) - why you didn't add whistle on start of this slider? ( you added it in other kiai times )
    - 02:45:634 (3) - add finish on start
    - 02:48:274 (6) - same ( so can i omit other sliders? you may know this )
    - 00:34:274 (1,2,3) - i think using 1/3 Beat Snap Divisor is better like this? http://puu.sh/27XMI
    - 03:08:194 (7) - NC
good luck with it! nice song xD
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Uguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-

[General]
I think it would be great if you used slider speeds on this map, I think 1.20x on the kiai on every difficulity would be great

The hitsounds blend in with the song a way too much so you can't barely notice them. I think 70-80% works better with this song.

You know.. I wouldn't mind playing at least one of the bridges on the song :<

In the middle eight, it would be so sexy if you used the drum hitsounds instead of the normal ones.

[Easy]
I would like to see tick rate 2 in this diff because it's in every other difficulty and it fit much better.

00:23:074 (1) - Move up 3 grids (Level 4) to fit better with (2)

00:25:954 (5) - I would like to see the endpoint moved 3 grids to the right and the middle point moved one grid to make it all sexy and aligned.

00:42:754 (1) - I think this looks much better if you move it up and improve the shape this could look so much better, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645422 (Don't forget to do it at all the other copy-pasted parts of this)

02:11:074 (1) - That's waay too steep of a jump for an easy... Like a easy should have jumps at all.

02:15:874 (5) - It feels like that slider should look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645434

02:47:074 (3,4) - This just looks so...... Ugly.. Can't you please move this circle out of the slider.

03:04:834 (2) - Stuff touching the HP bar is unsexy. You know what to do <3

[Kiddo]
So many ugly overlaps that could be avoided D:
Can't you just please use DS 0,9x in the verse and just avoid those overlaps

[Hard]
<3

00:36:994 (6) - I suggest you do this with the slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645444 In general there is a lot of sliders that could be aligned much sexier in this diff.

00:48:514 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make these 3 circles into one slider to make it easier to get that the stream is in 1/3

00:50:434 (1) - It's looks so weird that this is stacked when there was a motion in the stream, If you use the other suggestion you could move up the stream a little bit.

-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Tag:
+kiddo-kun
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
modding key

this is unrankable.
this should be highly considered.
this is just a normal suggestion/praise.

General
  1. Offset is 490. (How has no one else noticed how off it was?)
  2. The mod is listed in offset 514 for convenience.
  3. Tags are inconsistent. Add Kiddo-kun to your diffs, CDFA.
  4. As LunarSakuya mentioned, add "Up All Night" to the tags, as it's the album name.
  5. I like this song, so have a mod~
Hard
  1. Since there's a part that is copy and pasted, apply them as needed to the other section.
  2. 00:12:754 (5) - Perhaps move this so the endpoint of 5 hits 3, it looks and flows better. If so, change spacing on the next combo to compensate.
  3. 00:13:474 (1,2,3,4) - In regards to above, you could also have 3,4 go off the Y-axis such as this.
  4. 00:15:874 (1) - Recompose this slider so it curves better, such as the other sliders in the map.
  5. 00:16:834 (3,4,5,6) - Perhaps reposition the notes to be a little more like this? It would play and look smoother.
  6. 00:22:354 (4) - Move this slider back a bit towards the right so the middle tick overlays the middle of the previous slider. If you're going to overlay sliders like these, do them properly.
  7. 00:37:714 (7) - ^
  8. 00:39:874 (4,5) - Perhaps fashion it a bit more like this, in regards to above.
  9. 00:53:074 (4) - Move this a bit to the left so this slider intersects with the middlepoint of the previous slider.
  10. 00:54:274 (3) - Lower this by two grids so 3 hugs 4 completely.
  11. 01:21:874 (5,8) - These two sliders could be composed much better. Smoothen them out.
  12. 01:35:794 (1) - This section is a C/P of ^, apply as necessary, please.
  13. 02:17:554 (6) - Move this slider so it hugs the previous one as well? reference here.
  14. 02:50:434 (4,5,6) - Lower six a bit so it matches even with 4,5. Notice the slider tick.
Easy
  1. 00:19:714 (2) - I would suggest adding a note right after this at the white tick, or extend the slider to do so. The slider doesn't follow the beat.
  2. 00:23:554 (2) - Part of this slider goes over half a circle off the grid. Move it in, compensate for the sapcing. If possible, have the middle of the slider on the X-axis?
  3. 00:25:474 (4,5,1) - In relation to above, perhaps change this so 1 lands in the middle of the screen?
  4. 00:38:914 (1,3) - These two are off from each other, c/p + flip?
  5. 01:01:474 (4) - A bit nazi, but move the endpoint down by one tick to align.
  6. As the section above is c/p'd with the next, please fulfill the changes as necessary to the section after.
  7. 03:02:913 (4) - Match the middle points for slider composition.
  8. 02:47:554 (4) - The blanket over 3 is off, fix this slider.
Kiddo-kun's Normal
  1. I have no qualms about this. Great job!
[Luanny]
8,248 posts
Joined April 2011
[Luanny]
Shit mod :D

[Hard]

00:24:490 (5,1,2,3,4) - the flow here is somehow weird because (5) doesn't give much space to place notes, so..
you can rotate (5) like -24° (i like this number) and make something like this
SPOILER

(3) is stacked with the beginning of (5)
would be something like this
flows much better imo
it is ok if you don't mind this little overlap that is pretty easy to read anyways[/spoilerbox]
00:34:810 (3) - this is too close from (1) imo
try this?
SPOILER

you will have to stack (5) to (3) later and it won't affect spacing between (6) and (5) so don't worry
00:53:050 (4,1,2,3) - again the flow is weird.
SPOILER
this is prettier~
(3) is rotated 19° and you will have to fix the spacing between the next notes (4) and (5) but it won't be a problem
SPOILER
01:24:730 (2) - I'd rather do this
SPOILER
01:35:770 (1,2,3,4) - well, same thing I said in the beginning
01:38:410 (6) - aheuaehauehaue you could stack it with (2) omg this suggestion was so useless
01:43:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - holy shit perfect flow *splorgs*
01:54:490 (4,1,2,3) - needs more sexy curves
SPOILER

and it won't even affect the spacing
01:57:610 (5,6) - invert to this like you did before?
SPOILER

make it right, obviously, i just changed the points randomly
02:39:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this is so sexy

[Normal]

I'd be nazi here and say you need to make better blankets on places like 00:19:714 (1) - and 00:39:874 (3) - but let it be
nothing for this diff

[Easy]

00:38:890 (1,2,3) - blankeeeeeeeeeets
00:54:250 (1,2,3) - oh you

well, same thing, make better blankets and fadfadadg
nothing else

;_; I hope it was useful
good luck o3o


EU SOU NISSIN OURFALI
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:23:050 (4) - why the red follow point? Makes the slider look weird and isnt distinct enough to look intentional

[Kiddo]
01:57:370 - was expecting a note here
I'm sure you know this and I honestly don't care but I'm guessing someone else will - lots of your sliders are not perfectly symmetrical

[Hard]
00:48:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this kind of came out of the fucking blue and failed me when I'd been at full health all map. You're gonna inspire a loooot of rage if you keep it.
01:47:530 (7) - ok this has bugged me every time. MAKE IT PERPENDICULAR TO THE PART OF THE OTHER SLIDER IT CROSSES. Pls and ty
02:56:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this to me seems like a much smoother way to introduce the stuff i objected to at 00:48
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
trying to do my best for get a mod orz.

[General]
Add Artist names? as Zayn Malik blah blah

[Kiddo's Normal]
01:18:250 (2) - uhm, the slider is a kinda weird here, change the position, maybe.
02:05:290 (4,5,6,7) - Make more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2ojyR

[Easy]
CS+1
00:13:210 (3) - add circle
03:19:210 (1) - give shape the slider.

[Hard]
hum, yellow, pink, green and skyblue combo colors? o3o change it ~

all its okay~
good luck
Cobra
352 posts
Joined June 2012
Cobra
M4M if thats cool

General
Timing points are unsnapped since you changed the offset. An easy way to fix is to subtract 24 from each of your timing points.

Easy
00:42:730 (1,3) - i cant tell but it looks like these dont line up in the middle. to do this, start the slider from the middle as if it were backwards, then reverse it's selection. the slider will end at the middle perfectly. then just copy paste flip
00:46:090 (4) - make the points like this, more symmetrical
SPOILER
00:58:090 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - copy paste D: why not a new pattern, there are plenty of ways to do this
01:08:410 (1) - asadjfsajakdw
SPOILER
01:40:330 (1) - so much copy and paste arghhhhhhhh
02:47:621 (4) - symmetry that bitch up
SPOILER

Normal
circle size +1?
02:26:410 (2) - add a note so all diffs break start on the white tick
this is a nice diff but there is definitely noticeable copypaste :|

Hard
00:46:090 (7) - because of (5) this looks funny. i suggest changing it.
01:01:450 (7) - move this 6 units up so its on top of (5)
02:22:570 (1) - this spinner has a finish in easy diff, make it so here
02:43:690 (3,4) - maybe do this? and try to find more places to do this, it looks nice
SPOILER

nice mapset, good luck
my head hurts

also: since you aren't replying to mods here, could you maybe reply to my mod in a PM? i really like to know what people think of my modding, thanks CDFA
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'll just reply to it here if you want me to.

Cobra wrote:

M4M if thats cool

General
Timing points are unsnapped since you changed the offset. An easy way to fix is to subtract 24 from each of your timing points. ;A;

Easy
00:42:730 (1,3) - i cant tell but it looks like these dont line up in the middle. to do this, start the slider from the middle as if it were backwards, then reverse it's selection. the slider will end at the middle perfectly. then just copy paste flip
00:46:090 (4) - make the points like this, more symmetrical
SPOILER
00:58:090 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - copy paste D: why not a new pattern, there are plenty of ways to do this
01:08:410 (1) - asadjfsajakdw
SPOILER
01:40:330 (1) - so much copy and paste arghhhhhhhh
02:47:621 (4) - symmetry that bitch up
SPOILER
Changed all of the symmetry stuff, just making a blanket statement instead of reply to each.

Hard
00:46:090 (7) - because of (5) this looks funny. i suggest changing it. 5 is gone by the time 7 appears, so I'll keep it to make the pretty pattern.
01:01:450 (7) - move this 6 units up so its on top of (5) similar dillema to the above.
02:22:570 (1) - this spinner has a finish in easy diff, make it so here Will do so.
02:43:690 (3,4) - maybe do this? and try to find more places to do this, it looks nice
SPOILER
That's actually a technique that I use a lot :3. Will clean it up.

nice mapset, good luck
my head hurts

also: since you aren't replying to mods here, could you maybe reply to my mod in a PM? i really like to know what people think of my modding, thanks CDFA
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
nice song & mapset ;) GL anyway :D
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