Hi there

[General]
* The last kiai seems doesn't fit (05:04:295), remove it?


[Collab]
00:25:102 (1,2) - Swap new combo
00:34:779 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
00:52:844 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
01:39:618 (6) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl+R) for better flow?
03:15:102 (3) - Shorten to red tick? It seems having a bad rhythm, IMO
03:24:779 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
03:25:263 (5) - ^
05:33:329 (6) - New combo for emphasis?


That's all, hope it's help~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* The last kiai seems doesn't fit (05:04:295), remove it? - Eh, I thought it was kinda cool to have it . If more people disagree I'll remove it~


[Collab]
00:25:102 (1,2) - Swap new combo
00:34:779 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
00:52:844 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
01:39:618 (6) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl+R) for better flow?
03:15:102 (3) - Shorten to red tick? It seems having a bad rhythm, IMO - It's the same rhythm as 01:26:715 (6) though . I changed the hitsound on (4) to finish, to follow consistency from 01:27:037 (7).
03:24:779 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
03:25:263 (5) - ^
05:33:329 (6) - New combo for emphasis? - Ok, if one more person tells me to add new combos here, I'll add it xd


That's all, hope it's help~

Thanks for modding!

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* The last kiai seems doesn't fit (05:04:295), remove it?


[Collab]
00:25:102 (1,2) - Swap new combo
00:34:779 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
00:52:844 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
01:39:618 (6) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl+R) for better flow?
03:15:102 (3) - Shorten to red tick? It seems having a bad rhythm, IMO
03:24:779 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
03:25:263 (5) - ^
05:33:329 (6) - New combo for emphasis?
All OK

That's all, hope it's help~

Thanks for mod ^^

hey CXu ._.
D: it'll be hard to find something because your maps are nearly perfect

General
> Folder seems ok
>i saw that the blur of the SB objecs has a cut off on the edges http://puu.sh/VSPd maybe make them a little bit bigger or something.. but to be honest, i did'nt saw the cut offs ingame ^^ just wanted to mention it
> You can put your .osb file into the .osu file, under [Events], Layer 3 Foreground and delete the .osb after that because it's just 1 Diff. if you have trouble with that you could ask me ingame :0
> is "Disc 2" really worth a tag? wtf

[Collab]
00:05:527 (3) - i don't know if it's fine when you silence hitcircles, i know they are not completely silenced, but i really can't hear anything with 5% volume. See osu wiki ranking criteria - Audio
00:31:876 (1,2) - add this to the previous combo maybe?
00:38:328 (1) - could you adjust that slider to 00:39:296 (2) - ? (with more sliderpoints)
02:00:586 (7) - put that circle under the slider 02:00:263 (6) - cause the 300 from 01:59:941 (5) - covers (7). kills hidden players D:
03:45:425 (4) - the end of this slider is ugly D:
05:25:747 (2) - delete clap?
05:33:329 (6) - when you are on low drain, this break is kinda unfair :0

i really likethe map and the hitsounding :00 it was an honor for me to mod this

Dick wrote:

hey CXu ._. - Hya~
D: it'll be hard to find something because your maps are nearly perfect - I was totally "WAAAAAAAIT I know you?" and then clicked your profile and found > Previously known as Phish. Derp xD

General
> Folder seems ok
>i saw that the blur of the SB objecs has a cut off on the edges http://puu.sh/VSPd maybe make them a little bit bigger or something.. but to be honest, i did'nt saw the cut offs ingame ^^ just wanted to mention it - Well, if someone actually notices this when playing, I'll fix xD
> You can put your .osb file into the .osu file, under [Events], Layer 3 Foreground and delete the .osb after that because it's just 1 Diff. if you have trouble with that you could ask me ingame :0 - Yeah, but hey, I think it's okay to have it as an .osb too, just because
> is "Disc 2" really worth a tag? wtf - Well, it is from the 2nd disc so why not xD

[Collab]
00:05:527 (3) - i don't know if it's fine when you silence hitcircles, i know they are not completely silenced, but i really can't hear anything with 5% volume. See osu wiki ranking criteria - Audio - Should be audible enough, as I can hear it.
00:31:876 (1,2) - add this to the previous combo maybe?
00:38:328 (1) - could you adjust that slider to 00:39:296 (2) - ? (with more sliderpoints)
02:00:586 (7) - put that circle under the slider 02:00:263 (6) - cause the 300 from 01:59:941 (5) - covers (7). kills hidden players D: - Screw hidden players I kinda like the flow better, so keeping.
03:45:425 (4) - the end of this slider is ugly D: - Blah, it's supposed to look a bit woonky. Tried adjusting it slightly, hope it helps a liiiiittle.
05:25:747 (2) - delete clap? - Fine I think.
05:33:329 (6) - when you are on low drain, this break is kinda unfair :0 - Well, just make sure not to \o\ (soevil)

i really likethe map and the hitsounding :00 it was an honor for me to mod this - Thank you

Thanks for modding!

Dick wrote:

hey CXu ._.
D: it'll be hard to find something because your maps are nearly perfect

General
> Folder seems ok
>i saw that the blur of the SB objecs has a cut off on the edges http://puu.sh/VSPd maybe make them a little bit bigger or something.. but to be honest, i did'nt saw the cut offs ingame ^^ just wanted to mention it
> You can put your .osb file into the .osu file, under [Events], Layer 3 Foreground and delete the .osb after that because it's just 1 Diff. if you have trouble with that you could ask me ingame :0
> is "Disc 2" really worth a tag? wtf

[Collab]
00:05:527 (3) - i don't know if it's fine when you silence hitcircles, i know they are not completely silenced, but i really can't hear anything with 5% volume. See osu wiki ranking criteria - Audio
00:31:876 (1,2) - add this to the previous combo maybe? Okie
00:38:328 (1) - could you adjust that slider to 00:39:296 (2) - ? (with more sliderpoints) Should be okay already, if it's poked on more I'll do it.
02:00:586 (7) - put that circle under the slider 02:00:263 (6) - cause the 300 from 01:59:941 (5) - covers (7). kills hidden players D:
03:45:425 (4) - the end of this slider is ugly D:
05:25:747 (2) - delete clap?
05:33:329 (6) - when you are on low drain, this break is kinda unfair :0

i really likethe map and the hitsounding :00 it was an honor for me to mod this

thx for mod

Great map ;; Not sure if I was of any help.

Nidert wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
AR 10? - uaehuaeh

[Collab]
00:28:812 - Add note?
00:34:779 (5,6,7,8,9) - These aren't really symmetrical, move 8 one grid down.
00:31:876 (6,7) - Sounds better if you remove the note and make it a repeat with the wistle at the end ('tis just a suggestion)
01:42:199 - Add note?
02:43:650 (5,6) - Remove 5,6 and add a slider that goes from 02:43:650 - to 02:43:973 - . Sounds much better
03:27:360 (3) - Random whistle?
03:27:360 (3) - I guess they're not random, but they strike me as odd and I don't really think they fit.
03:39:296 - to 03:57:683 - I mean, these sliders aren't really that pretty xD How about making some prettier ones - no they are superkawaii
03:43:166 (6) - papaya slider, make into banana? (AKA make it prettier http://puu.sh/WcIt ) - amidoingitright http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405528

Great map ;; Not sure if I was of any help.

Thanks for modding!

lol hi there, mod time via my queue~

[Collab]
00:22:492 (1) - add whistle and remove clap+finish, sounds much better
00:30:263 (1,3) - RNC (1) and NC (3) listen to music ><
00:46:392 (5,1) - NC (5) and RNC (1)?
01:34:134 (1) - why change slider speed? since slider have a repeat, just remove green line 01:34:134
01:35:102 (1) - RNC only if you do^
01:45:425 (1) - NC here doesn't make any sense
03:38:973 (1,2,3) - do NC like this http://puu.sh/Wt24 players will be know that next slider is slow + it follows the music
04:08:973 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the music >< make like this http://puu.sh/Wt3d
04:10:263 (3) - NC if you do^
04:25:102 (1,3) - RNC (1) and NC (3)
04:55:102 (1) - RNC
04:56:715 (3) - NC (also you may RNC at 04:56:069 (1) - )

nice job, but personally dislike the NC >< good luck then

Thanks for mods~

Ah right, keeping the NC in my part \o

Hi ~ CXu ~

Checked map for my Random Queue ~

You should add other diff (any mode is fine),since this map is not marathon.

Add 1 or 2 break time point.nonstop is not good idea ~ player will be tired ~

05:33:329 (6) - Remove this circle really no need here.

Map stuff fine to me ~ Nice BG ,song and map ~

Maybe you can find me recheck ~ Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ CXu ~

Checked map for my Random Queue ~

You should add other diff (any mode is fine),since this map is not marathon. - orz, I'll poke someone to make a taiko xD

Add 1 or 2 break time point.nonstop is not good idea ~ player will be tired ~ - I think it's fine. The slow part at 03:39:296 - acts like a break imo. Aaaaaand we wanted to map the whole song xD

05:33:329 (6) - Remove this circle really no need here. - There is a sound here though, and I think ending the map at 05:30:505 (5) - feels a bit off ><

Map stuff fine to me ~ Nice BG ,song and map ~[b] - Thanks

Maybe you can find me recheck ~ Good luck ~[/b] - Ok, thanks~

Thanks Rika

OKAY WELL
cxu requested a mod from me
this map is kind of long
the sliders are really pretty
nothing stood out when I played through it
but I'm gonna carefully go through it
AND TRY MY BEST
to find stuff that
can be improved
>w<

00:09:938 - add spinner ending at 00:11:174
00:17:703 - add spinner ending at 00:19:644
00:20:528 - add spinner ending at 00:21:778

WELL
I liked these spinners when I first tried them, but then I keep wondering if they're actually an improvement or needless overmapping...
I'll leave them here anyways~ maybe you'll like them ;_;

01:26:715 (6,7) - this is awkward to play to me, and I also think it flows and sounds better if you shorten the slider to the red tick
there's not really anything in the song to justify ending it on the blue one I don't think

01:32:521 (4) - NC
--01:32:844 (1) - remove NC
--01:34:134 (1) - remove NC
01:35:425 (2) - NC

01:35:425 (1) - should end at 01:35:586
--01:35:747 - add slider ending at 01:35:098, remove note at 01:35:098
--looks like this - http://puu.sh/XrG0

01:39:941 (7) - NC
--01:40:425 (1) - remove NC

02:10:102 - this spot sounds empty, maybe add a note? ^^;

02:21:876 (4) - - NC
--02:22:844 (1) - remove NC

02:23:812 (7) - NC

02:36:876 - also sounds empty~ maybe change like this http://puu.sh/XrNX :> (selected note is at 02:36:715)

02:38:005 (6) - NC
--02:38:328 (1) - remove NC

02:39:618 (6) - NC
--02:40:586 (1) - remove NC
--02:40:908 (2) - NC

02:42:199 (1) - remove NC
--02:42:360 (2) - NC

02:54:779 (8) - NC
--02:55:425 (1) - remove NC

03:15:102 (3,4) - same as 01:26:715 (6,7)

03:16:070 (6) - change like this? http://puu.sh/XrTU

04:30:263 (1) - remove NC
--04:30:908 (4) - NC

04:32:037 (1) - remove NC
--04:32:844 (4) - NC

04:51:392 (2) - gosh I think this needs to be changed
probably like this
http://puu.sh/XrYU
(don't forget to re-add the finish)

05:19:618 (1) - remove NC
--05:20:102 (2) - NC

uwah
it ended up mostly being NC stuff
oh no ;_;
well I tried. . .
I hope it's helpful lol
the map is really good, and the song is nice~
So long though ;_;

Silynn wrote:

OKAY WELL
cxu requested a mod from me
this map is kind of long
the sliders are really pretty
nothing stood out when I played through it
but I'm gonna carefully go through it
AND TRY MY BEST
to find stuff that
can be improved
>w<

00:09:938 - add spinner ending at 00:11:174
00:17:703 - add spinner ending at 00:19:644
00:20:528 - add spinner ending at 00:21:778

WELL
I liked these spinners when I first tried them, but then I keep wondering if they're actually an improvement or needless overmapping...
I'll leave them here anyways~ maybe you'll like them ;_;
^ Something like that. I kinda want this part to be SLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW yeah.

01:26:715 (6,7) - this is awkward to play to me, and I also think it flows and sounds better if you shorten the slider to the red tick
there's not really anything in the song to justify ending it on the blue one I don't think - mm, if you listen, there is this woosh type of sound (I suck at describing sounds), which is what I'm trying to "replicate" kinda with the 1/4. No changes for now.

01:32:521 (4) - NC
--01:32:844 (1) - remove NC
--01:34:134 (1) - remove NC
01:35:425 (2) - NC

01:35:425 (1) - should end at 01:35:586
--01:35:747 - add slider ending at 01:35:098, remove note at 01:35:098
--looks like this - http://puu.sh/XrG0

01:39:941 (7) - NC
--01:40:425 (1) - remove NC

02:10:102 - this spot sounds empty, maybe add a note? ^^; - I'll have to say no here. I like these kind of pauses sometimes, and I think this one fits pretty good ^^"

02:21:876 (4) - - NC - Short combo is kinda derp imo.
--02:22:844 (1) - remove NC

02:23:812 (7) - NC - ^

02:36:876 - also sounds empty~ maybe change like this http://puu.sh/XrNX :> (selected note is at 02:36:715)

02:38:005 (6) - NC
--02:38:328 (1) - remove NC

02:39:618 (6) - NC
--02:40:586 (1) - remove NC
--02:40:908 (2) - NC

02:42:199 (1) - remove NC
--02:42:360 (2) - NC

02:54:779 (8) - NC - Same as earlier chorus.
--02:55:425 (1) - remove NC

03:15:102 (3,4) - same as 01:26:715 (6,7) - Same.

03:16:070 (6) - change like this? http://puu.sh/XrTU - Yeah why not.

04:30:263 (1) - remove NC - Same NC pattern as before.
--04:30:908 (4) - NC

04:32:037 (1) - remove NC - Sure
--04:32:844 (4) - NC

04:51:392 (2) - gosh I think this needs to be changed
probably like this
http://puu.sh/XrYU
(don't forget to re-add the finish)

05:19:618 (1) - remove NC - I like it as it is~
--05:20:102 (2) - NC

uwah
it ended up mostly being NC stuff
oh no ;_;
well I tried. . .
I hope it's helpful lol
the map is really good, and the song is nice~
So long though ;_;

Thanks for modding, Silly

Hi there~~mod from queue
sorry for my late >.<

[Collab]

1. you may need to reduce HP by 1 for low speed sections 0.0
2. I'd like to choose slider tick rate 2 for these long sliders which looked empty a bit.
3. 00:28:328 (3,4) - a confusing spacing due to the music i suppose, it may better to place a jump between phrases but not inside.
4. 00:42:360 (4) - i may choose to remove this note to follow the prev beats (00:41:231 (7) - )
5. 00:43:812 (8) - move next NC to here?
6. 00:48:973 (5) - ^
7. 01:21:876 (3,4) - two 1/2 sliders here may be better than only notes
8. 02:01:715 - i'd like to add a note here~
9. 02:29:618 (1,2,3) - a triangle but not line may suit the music ~
   
10. 02:48:166 (4) - move it to 424:92 for better flow?
11. 02:52:844 - insert a kiai fountain here?
12. 03:06:392 (5) - the flow here is weird because of the jump before....hmm...move it to 364:236? have a try >.<
13. 03:14:457 (3) - i'd like to place a 1/2 slider here for beat consistent
14. 03:33:650 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+r for better flow?
15. 04:41:553 (4) - a single note here may be better?

that's all and good luck with app ~

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
sorry for my late >.<

[Collab]

1. you may need to reduce HP by 1 for low speed sections 0.0 - mmm, should be fine imo
2. I'd like to choose slider tick rate 2 for these long sliders which looked empty a bit. - Well, I kinda dislike tick rate 2 for the rest of the map, and I think tick rate 1 is okay for the slow part too, so no change~
3. 00:28:328 (3,4) - a confusing spacing due to the music i suppose, it may better to place a jump between phrases but not inside.
4. 00:42:360 (4) - i may choose to remove this note to follow the prev beats (00:41:231 (7) - )
5. 00:43:812 (8) - move next NC to here?
6. 00:48:973 (5) - ^
7. 01:21:876 (3,4) - two 1/2 sliders here may be better than only notes - I kinda like the circular flow here, and I think too much 1/2 clicking might be tiring, so I guess it should be fine
8. 02:01:715 - i'd like to add a note here~ - Hmm, maybe, I'll think about it, not adding for now.
9. 02:29:618 (1,2,3) - a triangle but not line may suit the music ~ - Meh, I kinda like this line xD
   
10. 02:48:166 (4) - move it to 424:92 for better flow?
11. 02:52:844 - insert a kiai fountain here? - Mm, thought I'd rather not make too many kiai fountains
12. 03:06:392 (5) - the flow here is weird because of the jump before....hmm...move it to 364:236? have a try >.< - x364 y236 is very far I changed the pattern, so it's hopefully better now
13. 03:14:457 (3) - i'd like to place a 1/2 slider here for beat consistent - Same pattern as before.
14. 03:33:650 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+r for better flow?
15. 04:41:553 (4) - a single note here may be better?

that's all and good luck with app ~

Thanks for modding! Updated with f e a r's fixes and mine

Whoops that graveyard. Kinomi is being slow yeah.

tell kinomi to hurry up

Silynn wrote:

tell kinomi to hurry up

I think most of us forgot about this map LOL

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