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R e v i v e
@dubbadeni : Most fixed thanks ~ ;)

update : Add Taiko Muzukashii difficulty.
KonataN
Hey, from my modding queue.

no kudos for this

I cant find any bad places! I wonder why Deni raged to me so much about this map? Dx

here, have a star.

Edit:Just because I love Vocaloid <3
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

KonataN wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue.

no kudos for this

I cant find any bad places! I wonder why Deni raged to me so much about this map? Dx

here, have a star.

Edit:Just because I love Vocaloid <3
Thanks >3
Konei
Hey, from my modding queue~

red = unrankable

blue = important stuff

purple = I wanted to mention

black = suggestions and opinions



Easy


In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles

00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners

00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it

00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this

00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here

01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this

01:39:144 (1) ^

01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part

02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow

02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano



Normal


00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead

00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o

00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song

00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission

01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here

01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up

01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~ :D

01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals

02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles



Hard


00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long :o

00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ?

01:47:751 (8) NC


Ok, that's all I can do for now~

Very nice for your first map :)

Good luck on rank~
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

Konei wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue~

red = unrankable

blue = important stuff

purple = I wanted to mention

black = suggestions and opinions



Easy


In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles

00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners

00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it :arrow:Add.

00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this :arrow:Done.

00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here :arrow:Add some.

01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this

01:39:144 (1) ^ :arrow:Change.

01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part :arrow:okay

02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow :arrow:Change.

02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano :arrow:It's not red tick ._.



Normal


00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead

00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o

00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song

00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission

01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here

01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up

01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~ :D

01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals

02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles

:arrow:Fixed all

Hard


00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long :o:arrow:okay.

00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ? :arrow:nope.

01:47:751 (8) NC :arrow:okay.


Ok, that's all I can do for now~

Very nice for your first map :)

Good luck on rank~
Thanks for modding >3
Nichiyouki


Hi, R e v i v e

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 01:49:964 (1) - Use circle or slider instead of using spinner be better.
  2. 02:19:964 - Add circle here?

Normal

  1. 02:10:373 (1,2) - Change is slider instead of 2 circle.

Hard

  1. 00:42:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - The placement of them, is curved that isn't pretty. If make to this code, It will be better.
    156,384,42832,1,0
    224,336,43078,1,0
    304,312,43324,1,0
    388,304,43570,1,0
    472,312,43816,1,0
    472,312,44062,1,0
  2. 01:24:882 (1) - Reduce the repeat the slider 1 time. Then add circle in 01:25:373?
  3. 01:40:620 (1) - Same as 01:40:620 (1) - Add circle in 01:41:111?

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@nich95 : แก้หมดยกเว้นสไลด์เดอร์ที่ลบ repeat แล้วใส่โน้ต ขอบคุณครับต้น >w<
Flask
Request from my queue~

[General]
  1. I'm not sure but Source is Air and tags is vocaloid3? Because I saw Kagamine Len's Ver and Source is Air, Anime too
  2. AIBat v3.0 wrote:

    hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit50.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit100.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit300.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
    hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 180x180).
  3. add "vocaloid" to your tags


[Easy]
  1. 02:24:390 (1) - finish?


[Normal]
  1. 00:02:013 (1) - Don't put any object before the first red line (so Change Offset to 783)
  2. 00:40:865 (1) - Why clap here? It should clap at 00:42:095 (1) - better lol
  3. 00:45:783 - this's so weird ._. maybe turn to 30% vol.?
  4. 01:16:890 (6) - delete this and add a note at white tick? too hard now ;n;
  5. 01:49:472 (1) - no clap?
  6. 02:20:455 (1) - try this
  7. 02:22:914 (1) - Use N:C2 Whistle here too
  8. 02:24:390 (1) - finish?
  9. 02:43:570 (4) - Remove clap


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:013 (1,2,3) - Same as Normal
  2. 00:21:931 (3) - Spacing
  3. 00:40:865 (1) - Same as Normal
  4. 01:01:767 (6) - nc
  5. 01:02:505 (1) - Remove nc (if except^)
  6. 01:31:521 - Why finish? I can't hear anything sound in music ;-;
  7. 01:49:103 - map here please, even you just put a spinner


Good map :D!!! good luck~
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@Flask : Most fixed thanks ;)
[NSER]-Zazalng
Hi Revive I'm Newbie to Mod but i will try it

My Idea is wrong so Sorry i'm newbie to mod map

Color Rule
Pink : It's ok do or not to do it's fine
Black : Please Fix it (by My idea other i don't know)
Blue : Impassive Pass

Let's Start at [Easy]
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[img]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/435644[img]
My hand freeze again oh What the... but i'm sure I got SS
You Pass Easy

Easy Check - 100%
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Normal
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Ahhh... I think it ok i give you pass.


Normal Check - 100%
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Hard
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Great combo and space I find some fail about combo play with flashlight & hidden mod the combo continue and can find next combo.

Hard Check - 100%
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Overall Result: Become to Ranked Map
You are a great Mapper. i cannot find error in your map anymore. About Taiko cannot mod it because myself cannot play taiko to be Perfect(SS) any map T_T
Good Luck for your Ranked Map
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
ขอบคุณครับที่เช็คแมปให้ >w<
forevehappy
from forevehappy's Taiko modding queue (′・ω・`)ノノ

Taiko Muzukashii
00:53:897 - Increase the sound of a normal
01:56:849 - The sound changed to normal
02:32:259 - ^
02:44:062 (1) - remove,Because it is redundant

01:31:520 (163) - remove,and 01:31:274 add d
01:32:504 - add d

Taiko Oni
00:53:897 - Increase the sound of a normal
01:56:849 - The sound changed to normal
02:32:259 - ^
02:44:062 - ^
02:44:062 (1) - remove,Because it is redundant


00:48:610 (160) - move to 00:48:487
02:44:061 - add k

oh....
After mod after ,I think taiko difficulty doing not complete so I can't find better opinion.
good luck~
Rare
Hi!
all suggestions

[Easy]
00:24:389 (3) - x:324 y:184
00:28:323 (2) - add whistle to start slider then remove whistle to end slider
00:30:291 (1) - add whistle to start slider
00:33:242 (3) - add whistle
00:34:225 (1) - add whistle to repeat point then remove whistle to end slider
00:37:176 (2) - add whistle
00:39:143 (2) - add whistle to start to slider
00:45:045 (3) - add whistle
00:49:963 (1) - add clap
01:40:127 (2) - add finish to end slider
01:49:963 (1) - more curve slider. before: http://puu.sh/16pOH , after: http://puu.sh/16pOp

[Normal]
Drain-1, AR-1, OD-1
looks nice

[Hard]
Drain-1
00:45:783 (3,5) - very confused. Aligned to a certain rhythm.
01:47:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about? http://puu.sh/16q7f
02:12:587 (1,4) - more curve slider
02:21:193 (2,4) - same as 00:45:783 (3,5) -
02:26:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it is difficult to hard. let's use slider.
02:35:701 (6) - add whistle to start slider

good mapset!!
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@forevehappy : most fixed.
@R a r e : Fixed some.

Thanks for modded.
Frostmourne
Hi ! , ชอบม็อดเป็นภาษาไทยอยู่แต่แทบไม่เคยได้ใช้ครับ 55 นานๆทีจริงๆ

Easy
00:02:750 (1) - ถึง 00:17:258 (1) - ใช้ volume 30%
00:18:487 (1) - ถึง 00:45:045 (3) - ใช้ 45% << อย่าลืมแก้เส้นเขียวปรับ vol จาก 60 เป็น 45 % ในช่วงระหว่างนี้ :D
เริ่ม 60% ที่ตรง 00:46:028 (1) - นี้แทน
ตอนเริ่มต้นเสียงมันน่าจะหรี่ลงหน่อย เพราะเพลงยังเงียบๆ แต่หลังๆมันเริ่มดังตามดนตรี , ไม่งั้นเป็น monotone แล้วฟังแปลกๆ
บางทีใส่ whistle ทุกๆ 00:55:864 (2) - , 00:57:832 (1) - (ต้นสไลเดอร์) , 00:59:799 (2) - น่าจะเวิร์ค (ทุกๆบีทแรก) เพราะมันดูเงียบๆไปแปลกๆ (แนะนำให้ใส่ทั้งเพลง)

00:08:651 (2,1) - 1.0 กับ 1.5 spacing , ผมว่าขยับให้เป็น 1.0 ดีกว่า เพราะมันไม่มีเหตุผลอะไรที่จะไปขยับให้มันเป็น 1.5
02:07:668 (4) - finish ที่หางสไลด์ เสียงเข้ากับเพลง คล้ายๆพีคในท่อนฮุค
02:24:389 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ด้วย finish แล้วเลื่อนสปินของเก่าไปวางที่ 02:24:635 (1) - แล้วจบที่ 02:26:356 (1) - ด้วยเสียง finish เหมือนกัน
เพราะว่าเริ่มสปินตรงจุดที่มี finish sound แล้วมันรู้สึกว่างๆ , ใส่ไว้เพิ่มสีสัน

Normal
01:29:307 (1) - เลื่อนขึ้น 3 grid , ไม่สน spacing แต่สนการทับกันของหางสไลด์ตัวนี้กับ 01:28:815 (4) - นี่แทน
01:32:504 (3) - ใส่ clap ทั้งหัว หาง
01:33:979 (1) - ถ้าไม่ตามเนื้อร้อง , ช่วงว่างๆของสปินนี้น่าจะทำโน้ตดีกว่ามั้งนะครับ , รู้สึกสปินมันไม่ค่อยเข้าเท่าไหร่ เมื่อเทียบกับสปินนี้ 01:38:897 (1) -
01:49:471 (1) - ทำไมไม่ใช้ clap ของ N:C1 ?

Hard
เพลงนี้ bpm ไม่สูง , ใช้ Approach Rate ที่ 7 ฟิตกับเพลงมากกว่าครับ
00:08:406 (1) - 00:09:144 (3) - 00:09:882 (1) - และต้น slider 00:11:849 (1) - กับ 00:13:816 (1) - พวกโน้ตเสียงเปียโน น่าจะลอง whistle ดูนะครับ แอบเข้า :D
00:17:996 (3) - ไม่สมดุลใน play mode , เลื่อนลง 1 grid ดูดีขึ้น
00:22:423 (4) - เลื่อนมาที่ x:248 y:340 เพราะว่า ถ้าสนกับ spacing มาก , หัวสไลด์นี้มันจะชนกับตัวเก่า , ทำให้โน้ตเกิดทับกันไม่สวย เลื่อนไปตรงจุดที่บอกน่าจะช่วย balance ระหว่างตัวก่อนหน้ากับตัวหลังมากกว่าเดิม
00:46:275 (5) - ขึ้น phrase ใหม่บางที new combo ไหมครับ?
01:20:210 (6,7) - เลื่อนซ้ายและขึ้น อย่างละ 1 grid , ตัว 6 กับ 5 มันยังชิดกันเกินไป ไม่เท่ากับที่ 5 ชิด 4
01:32:259 (9) - นิวคอมโบ น่าจะดีกว่า , เสียงเปลี่ยนกับคอมโบมันค่อนข้างยาวเกินไป
01:34:103 (5) - อาจจะใส่โน้ตเพิ่มได้ เพราะเสียงมันเข้ากับเสียงร้องของ IA
01:49:226 (6) - นิวได้เหมือนกัน , ขึ้นท่อนใหม่ :D

แมพอย่างปราณีต -_-'' Star !! , good luckkk
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@Jeep : แก้หมดยกเว้น

00:18:487 (1) - ถึง 00:45:045 (3) - ใช้ 45% << อย่าลืมแก้เส้นเขียวปรับ vol จาก 60 เป็น 45 % ในช่วงระหว่างนี้
เริ่ม 60% ที่ตรง 00:46:028 (1) - นี้แทน
ตอนเริ่มต้นเสียงมันน่าจะหรี่ลงหน่อย เพราะเพลงยังเงียบๆ แต่หลังๆมันเริ่มดังตามดนตรี , ไม่งั้นเป็น monotone แล้วฟังแปลกๆ
บางทีใส่ whistle ทุกๆ 00:55:864 (2) - , 00:57:832 (1) - (ต้นสไลเดอร์) , 00:59:799 (2) - น่าจะเวิร์ค (ทุกๆบีทแรก) เพราะมันดูเงียบๆไปแปลกๆ (แนะนำให้ใส่ทั้งเพลง)
:arrow: ตรงท่อน Kiai ใส่มันคงไม่เหมาะ (whistle ไม่ตรงบีท)

ขอบคุณเน้อที่มาม๊อดให้ o/\o
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

General

  1. Add 'Lia' to tags, because she sang the original.
  2. Silencing sliderticks is unrankable, delete the files.
  3. Delete the .osb-file in your songfolder, becouse you don't have a Storyboard and make a full submit.
  4. Slidertickrate isn't the same on all diffs, i prefer to change Normal and Hard to 1

Hard

  1. 01:07:423 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC
  2. 01:39:636 (1,1,1) - ^
  3. 02:19:718 (1,1) - ^

Nice map, i really love the hitsounds <3 Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

General

  1. Add 'Lia' to tags, because she sang the original.
  2. Silencing sliderticks is unrankable, delete the files.
  3. Delete the .osb-file in your songfolder, becouse you don't have a Storyboard and make a full submit.
  4. Slidertickrate isn't the same on all diffs, i prefer to change Normal and Hard to 1
:arrow:Fixed all.

Hard

  1. 01:07:423 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC
  2. 01:39:636 (1,1,1) - ^
  3. 02:19:718 (1,1) - ^
:arrow:Sry, I think it's unique of this map ^^
Nice map, i really love the hitsounds <3 Good luck ^^
mintong89

mint's Taiko Modding/Guest Diff Queues <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Your Muzukashii is too easy, you can renamed it as Taiko Futsuu (Taiko Normal)

00:23:405 - k
01:20:946 - k
01:21:438 - d
01:25:864 - k
01:26:848 - k
01:31:766 - k
01:32:012 - d
01:42:586 - k

[Taiko Oni]
01:31:520 - K
02:05:209 - k
02:13:447 - k
02:44:061 - re
02:44:307 - move to 02:44:061

ok~
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@mintong89 : Fixed all, thanks for modded ^^
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