1. Inconsistent Kiai Time at 02:56:779 -
2. Hard和Insane中有没有对齐的绿线：02:15:818 - 03:19:856 -
3. 唔……为什么Insane的起点比其他3个diff要靠前那么多呢…………
4. 然后是Combo Colour，整体上我希望能把颜色弄的再深一些，尤其是Colour3在有视频的情况下很容易看不清approach circle

1. 先大概说下这个diff最主要的问题就是过度使用anti-stream。这种梗偶尔在合适的地方用一用效果很好，但是用太多了就会造成排列的混乱，反而失去了其强化节奏之类的作用。
2. HP可以考虑+1，既然这个曲子整体上就带有一种紧张感的话，HP提高一点也可以有效的强化这种感觉。当然要不要一起吧OD也+1就看你的了。
3. 00:22:823 (5) - 考虑拆成2个Slider？前面anti-stream的分段跳感觉很好，所以用一个slider跳来继续保持这种感觉似乎会更好一些～比如：
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:24:801 (6) - 然后说下这种slider的问题：结束点的00:25:131 - 是一个长白线 (downbeat)，而一般来说这种位置都是节奏/鼓点上的重音，换句话说也就是一个很强的打击音。而Slider本身的特性决定了其首尾是完全不同的——slider尾是轻音，存在感相当的低。在这种情况下，在一个很有力的节奏点上却放了一个很轻收尾就会变得很违和。虽然说在音乐的层面上“听起来”没有什么不同，但是osu毕竟是一个需要点击（打击）的音乐游戏，那么在打图的时候这种差异就会很明显了。
5. 00:29:087 (6) - 和上面那个对比的，Slider从Downbeat开始感觉就好多了。当然说这里是因为这里明显是下一个乐句的开始，所以建议把NC放过来=v=
6. 00:32:549 (5) - 既然已经放了那么多三连了，我想不到在这种音乐本身就有三连鼓点的地方反而不放的理由
7. 00:42:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里，前一组三连00:42:604 (2,3,4) - 是一个白线三连，其特性就是比较硬切断感很强，而后面一个00:42:933 (5,6,7) - 则变成了红线三连又是slider尾带上的过渡连，这就导致了前后节奏不一致形成的“错位感”。音乐这种东西本身就是一种规则，对称，连续并且有着内在的一致性的存在，因此太过随意的放节奏而不是精心的去设计安排就会出现这种“怎么听都觉得别扭”的情况。
8. 00:45:241 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 然后是这里的跳梗。想法本身很不错，但是让人感觉不舒服的地方在于：vocal开始后这里的几个音是非常平而且没有任何变化的一条直线，那么在排列上的感觉也就更倾向于用固定的间距并且在每组之间分开跳，而不是连续变化的间距。这里属于一个我认为的“过度使用anti-stream"的地方。
9. 00:50:186 (1,2) - 节奏上的建议：试试用这种？
   
10. 01:02:549 (4,5,6) - 保持4位置不变的情况下把整个三连的方向顺时针旋转90度？想象一下你光标1->2->3->4移动过来的轨迹:>
11. 01:03:373 (8) - 和之前类似，新一句开始的地方建议NC，不重复这个问题了后面的自己弄吧。
12. 01:06:093 - 这里开始的这段break有一点莫名，或者说是“在没有想到的地方突然出现了一段break”。就我个人而言，这种地方降低sv和spacing来做成一个低速段是很合适的，而且也可以强化后面紧随而来的Kiai。更何况，这一段低速段你后面已经做了一半。
13. 01:24:801 (2,3,4) - 有点不好看，把(2)放到(3)和(4)中间的位置吧
14. 01:25:955 (6,7,8) - 这里三连跳的排列建议和前面类似……
15. 01:40:296 (1) - 这里开始这段减速做的很不错～～
16. 01:54:142 (3,4) - 五角星跳的方向有一点挡手的感觉，试试换成这样？
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:14:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里也是我之前说的，在音乐上没有变化的情况下保持稳定的spacing会感觉更好，后面那处稍微好一点。
18. 02:58:757 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉两个1/2slider就好了，三连反而有些多余
19. 03:11:779 (3) - 这个note跳的位置有些难受，感觉放到右面/上面或者stack到slider尾的话flow会更好

1. 00:49:527 (3) - 这里也是我在Insane里说的那种Slider尾停在强音上的问题。并不是说完全不可以，但是大多数情况下效果不好。
2. 00:59:252 - 建议这里可以考虑加个note过渡一下
3. 01:05:021 (1,2,3,4) - 建议(2)(4)交换位置变成逆时针转，并且整体旋转一个小的的角度，比如：
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:587 - 同Insane，这个break我建议做上东西。
5. 01:19:691 (2) - 这里其实有个slider轨道被一堆hitburst给挡住的问题……
6. 01:27:109 (1) - 这个地方跳要比stack的感觉好的多的多，我猜你用stack的原因之一是自己把自己给堵到右上角之后没地方跳了:>
7. 01:37:164 (1,2,3) - 考虑这三个跳的大一些和前面的三角跳做出一个对比来？因为这里vocal拉了一个高音上去
8. 01:42:933 (5,6) - nazi一下，横平竖直的地方这俩slider没放平，后面有几个弧线slider也有类似问题，自己对着grid看下头尾的位置就明白了
9. 01:47:384 (2) - 这个建议放到后面白线（01:47:549 - ），前面留个空拍听着舒服～
10. 02:58:757 (1) - 建议拆成2个1/2 slider

blackabyss wrote:

hi o// from my queue.

[Easy]

00:29:746 (1,2) - don't stack in easy diff. because newbie may hard to read the following note. fixed
00:31:724 (2) - add finish fixed
00:36:999 (1) - ^ fixed
00:42:274 (1) - you shouldn't use double reverse in easy map.
it's may break the combo if the newbie didn't know double reverse. so, remove it and you may put a note here 00:43:593
and add finish the entire of this slider and a note here 00:43:593
I think newbies may miss the rhythm, maybe double reverse could be easier.
00:55:461 (1) - add finish eh..
00:44:252 (3,4) - don't stack these two. just put those seperated. fixed
01:05:680 (4, 5) - ^ ^
01:16:560 (1) - add finish on the tail of slider add finish on the head sounds better imo.
01:20:516 (3) - ^ ^
01:21:175 (4) - NC fixed
01:21:834 (1) - remove NC ^
01:23:483 (2) - NC ^
01:24:142 (1) - remove NC ^
01:24:142 (3) - don't stack this please ^
01:28:428 (3) - add finish on the tail of slider i guess u want me to add finish on 01:29:746 (3) - ?
01:30:406 (4) - add finish on the reverse fixed
01:36:340 (3) - finish on the tail ...
01:50:186 - unnecessary green line for this diff. if you isn't use it for easy, just remove please. here, 02:46:724 and here too 02:51:834 fixed
01:51:175 - from this part, until here 01:54:472 you should add whistle at second and fourth white tick. like this http://puu.sh/1CZ42 added some whistles
01:53:483 (1) - remove NC i think now is better
02:06:010 (1,2) - don't stack with sliders no.3 please. ;u; fixed
02:32:713 (1) - don't stack please. ^
02:56:120 (1) - add finish? nope, i have added finish on 02:56:779 (2) - already.
03:01:395 (1,2) - don't stack please. newbie may hard to see the following note fixed
03:08:648 (3) - add finish on the tail
03:11:285 (3) - ^
03:13:922 (5) - add finish on the head
03:15:241 (1) - ^
03:22:494 (2,3) - add finish?

sorry for long-nazi-mod ;w;. but overall this diff. pattern is very cute

[Normal]
00:29:087 (1) - add finish on the head fixed
00:31:724 (3) - ^ ^
00:52:823 (1) - finish? ^
01:02:054 (3) - add finish on the head
I've added finish on 01:00:735 (1) - , maybe it will be a little noisy if finish exists too much?
01:49:362 (1) – remove NC fixed
01:49:856 (2) - NC ^
02:39:472 (2) – add whistle on the head? ^
02:40:790 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:46:230 (2) - ^ ^
03:09:966 (2) – add finish on head ^
03:15:241 (5) – add finish ^

[Hard]

00:31:724 (1) – add clap on the head
00:36:999 (1) – add finish
00:42:274 (1) - ^
00:44:911 (5) - ^
00:55:461 (5) - ^ and NC
00:55:790 (1) – remove NC
01:04:691 (4) – add finish on the tail?
01:19:197 (1) – add finish on the head
01:29:746 (1) - ^
01:44:582 (2) – remove whistle on the head, and add whistle on the tail
01:53:483 (1) – add finish on the head
02:00:076 (1) – Remove NC
02:00:406 (2) – NC
03:02:054 (1) – remove NC
03:07:329 (1) - add finish on the head
03:09:966 (1) - ^
fixed some and it's useful. Because I don't know much about hitsounds :3

Sorry, just for now… I can’t mod insane map.
Over all, your map is very interesting with such beautiful pattern, imo.
/throws star/
Gogo rank~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii Irie ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[Easy]
01:00:735 (1) - I think it's maybe better to place around 00:59:746 (3) ~ ? nope, but i put a slider instead.
01:24:472 (2) - Unstack. fixed
02:00:076 (1) - Move to 02:00:406 and end at 02:01:395 a little strange because i think it's no way there's a hitsound at 02:00:900
02:40:955 (1) - Make this slider equal to 02:39:637 (1) fixed


[Normal]
- Change distance spacing to 1 fixed
00:34:362 (3) - Line with (1) fixed
00:34:691 (4,5) - Line with (2) ^
01:27:604 (4) - Place at x:336 y:308 ^
01:32:054 (2) - Line with 01:31:230 (6) ^
01:35:351 (1,2) - Place where 01:33:702 (1) was for a nicer flower pattern. ^
03:14:582 (3) - Make this line with (1) and make sure to fix (4)'s spacing as well. ^


[Hard]
- Set distance spacing to 1 or higher for a hard diff. ok
00:33:373 (4) - Stack where (2) was. ^
01:17:713 (4) - Stack with (2)'s slider end properly. I tried to put it together everytime but it doesn't work
01:19:691 (2) - Slider end stack with 01:19:032 (4) fixed
01:41:450 - Add a circle ? ^
01:52:659 (5) - Move 2 grids up. ^
02:54:224 - Break is too short, remove it. ^
03:02:054 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing these notes out a bit more. ^
03:15:571 (2,3) - Place at x:192 y:80 ^


[Insane]
- HP Drain Rate +2 I'm afraid of some parts of the map may not allow passing with HR, so HP+1
- Distance spacing 1 or higher. fixed
01:18:538 (8) - New combo ? ^
01:29:746 (6) - ^
03:00:571 (6,7,8) - Place where 02:59:005 (3) was placed. ^
03:02:713 (2) - Stack with (1) or space this more farther. ^


Well mapped ~
Good luck with rank! >w<

Athena Tennos wrote:

还没rank么。。快rank！~

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~ mod for your request before~~
嗯……就中文吧

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Inconsistent Kiai Time at 02:56:779 -
2. Hard和Insane中有没有对齐的绿线：02:15:818 - 03:19:856 - 改了
3. 唔……为什么Insane的起点比其他3个diff要靠前那么多呢…………
   因为打I难度的人从来不特别注意歌是不是吵吵 但是新手玩歌从来都是听歌为主的 怕前奏把新手下跑._.
4. 然后是Combo Colour，整体上我希望能把颜色弄的再深一些，尤其是Colour3在有视频的情况下很容易看不清approach circle

改了~

[Insane]

1. 先大概说下这个diff最主要的问题就是过度使用anti-stream。这种梗偶尔在合适的地方用一用效果很好，但是用太多了就会造成排列的混乱，反而失去了其强化节奏之类的作用。
2. HP可以考虑+1，既然这个曲子整体上就带有一种紧张感的话，HP提高一点也可以有效的强化这种感觉。当然要不要一起吧OD也+1就看你的了。 都加了 之前HP低是因为曲子有不密集的部分 HR会很容易死 所以HP设定的比较低
3. 00:22:823 (5) - 考虑拆成2个Slider？前面anti-stream的分段跳感觉很好，所以用一个slider跳来继续保持这种感觉似乎会更好一些～比如：
   不少人提了。。所以还是改了吧
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:24:801 (6) - 然后说下这种slider的问题：结束点的00:25:131 - 是一个长白线 (downbeat)，而一般来说这种位置都是节奏/鼓点上的重音，换句话说也就是一个很强的打击音。而Slider本身的特性决定了其首尾是完全不同的——slider尾是轻音，存在感相当的低。在这种情况下，在一个很有力的节奏点上却放了一个很轻收尾就会变得很违和。虽然说在音乐的层面上“听起来”没有什么不同，但是osu毕竟是一个需要点击（打击）的音乐游戏，那么在打图的时候这种差异就会很明显了。
   其实长白线那里只有一个底鼓在 所以有点纠结 而且目前比较满意现在这个梗(看着好帅)所以如果能想出更好的梗的话会马上改._.
5. 00:29:087 (6) - 和上面那个对比的，Slider从Downbeat开始感觉就好多了。当然说这里是因为这里明显是下一个乐句的开始，所以建议把NC放过来=v= 我最一开始NC就是在这里给我改没了TAT
6. 00:32:549 (5) - 既然已经放了那么多三连了，我想不到在这种音乐本身就有三连鼓点的地方反而不放的理由 当时脑残了。。
7. 00:42:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里，前一组三连00:42:604 (2,3,4) - 是一个白线三连，其特性就是比较硬切断感很强，而后面一个00:42:933 (5,6,7) - 则变成了红线三连又是slider尾带上的过渡连，这就导致了前后节奏不一致形成的“错位感”。音乐这种东西本身就是一种规则，对称，连续并且有着内在的一致性的存在，因此太过随意的放节奏而不是精心的去设计安排就会出现这种“怎么听都觉得别扭”的情况。
   跟着鼓点下的。。推测一下应该也是一个渐强烘托气氛的原因。。
8. 00:45:241 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 然后是这里的跳梗。想法本身很不错，但是让人感觉不舒服的地方在于：vocal开始后这里的几个音是非常平而且没有任何变化的一条直线，那么在排列上的感觉也就更倾向于用固定的间距并且在每组之间分开跳，而不是连续变化的间距。这里属于一个我认为的“过度使用anti-stream"的地方。
   懂了 其实还是不太明白anti-stream啥意思 包括flow也不清楚 大致意思是明白 但是没梗lol 还是想到了就会改
9. 00:50:186 (1,2) - 节奏上的建议：试试用这种？
   
   lol这暂时没改 容我观望一下
10. 01:02:549 (4,5,6) - 保持4位置不变的情况下把整个三连的方向顺时针旋转90度？想象一下你光标1->2->3->4移动过来的轨迹:> 改了
11. 01:03:373 (8) - 和之前类似，新一句开始的地方建议NC，不重复这个问题了后面的自己弄吧。 lol改了
12. 01:06:093 - 这里开始的这段break有一点莫名，或者说是“在没有想到的地方突然出现了一段break”。就我个人而言，这种地方降低sv和spacing来做成一个低速段是很合适的，而且也可以强化后面紧随而来的Kiai。更何况，这一段低速段你后面已经做了一半。
    这里从一开始就没打算加东西,因为听编曲,除了基本没怎么变的吉他声,还有1/1的底鼓,就剩vocal了 感觉不太好跟,而从01:11:285开始又加入了一个吉他,鼓点也开始变得多样,就比较容易map了 但愿我的狗耳没聋没把其他声音听成吉他w
13. 01:24:801 (2,3,4) - 有点不好看，把(2)放到(3)和(4)中间的位置吧 好
14. 01:25:955 (6,7,8) - 这里三连跳的排列建议和前面类似…… 也改了
15. 01:40:296 (1) - 这里开始这段减速做的很不错～～ OvO
16. 01:54:142 (3,4) - 五角星跳的方向有一点挡手的感觉，试试换成这样？ 好
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:14:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里也是我之前说的，在音乐上没有变化的情况下保持稳定的spacing会感觉更好，后面那处稍微好一点。
    lol 之前改的时候把这条漏了orz 等我下次改的时候改上
18. 02:58:757 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉两个1/2slider就好了，三连反而有些多余 删了一个note
19. 03:11:779 (3) - 这个note跳的位置有些难受，感觉放到右面/上面或者stack到slider尾的话flow会更好

改了lol
整体来说这个diff做的很不错，只是细节上很多地方还显得粗糙需要精加工。顺便想吐槽下前面那么多NC mod之后NC还是乱……

[Hard]

1. 00:49:527 (3) - 这里也是我在Insane里说的那种Slider尾停在强音上的问题。并不是说完全不可以，但是大多数情况下效果不好。
2. 00:59:252 - 建议这里可以考虑加个note过渡一下
3. 01:05:021 (1,2,3,4) - 建议(2)(4)交换位置变成逆时针转，并且整体旋转一个小的的角度，比如：好lol
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:587 - 同Insane，这个break我建议做上东西。同insane..
5. 01:19:691 (2) - 这里其实有个slider轨道被一堆hitburst给挡住的问题…… 改了一下 不知道好点没有lol
6. 01:27:109 (1) - 这个地方跳要比stack的感觉好的多的多，我猜你用stack的原因之一是自己把自己给堵到右上角之后没地方跳了:>
   哼跳给你看233
7. 01:37:164 (1,2,3) - 考虑这三个跳的大一些和前面的三角跳做出一个对比来？因为这里vocal拉了一个高音上去 OAO 好主意
8. 01:42:933 (5,6) - nazi一下，横平竖直的地方这俩slider没放平，后面有几个弧线slider也有类似问题，自己对着grid看下头尾的位置就明白了 改了
9. 01:47:384 (2) - 这个建议放到后面白线（01:47:549 - ），前面留个空拍听着舒服～ 嗯
10. 02:58:757 (1) - 建议拆成2个1/2 slider lol也改了

唔……早上7点了没时间看Normal和Easy了，Hard做工很扎实，不错。

想办法去找些有经验的modder帮你在细节上把把关尽量的把图做到完美的程度吧，给个星标支持下先:>

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* For Easy, Normal, and Hard diff, can you map at beginning? It seems mappable for me, like Insane diff


[Easy]
00:42:274 (1) - The slider with more than 1 repeating slider are not allowed for easy diff, because it can be confusing be beginners
01:56:120 (2) - Add clap at tail slider


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:31:724 (3,1) - Swap new combo?


[Hard]
* Some spacing are pretty inconsistent through this diff. Can you make it consistent through this diff (except for jump pattern)?


Good luck

00:31:724 (3,1) - Swap new combo?

ZHSteven wrote:

蛋疼试试standard的mod-.-

这个是我第一次给standard mod。。可能都在说废话。。
如果没用就别给kd了-。-

[EZ----super nazi attack!!]

00:51:505 (2) - 感觉有点问题。。和前面的slider感觉不对口。。往上提一点？好
01:03:043 (4) - 往上提2个grid 好O O
01:27:109 (3) - 有点怪。。。还是感觉2个slider的对接问题。这个没感觉有啥别扭
01:35:021 (1) - 这个是和前面故意不在一条线上么？0.0 …………没看懂
02:06:010 (1,2,3) - 感觉一个向下的弧度会比向上的好。同上
02:06:670 (3) - 缺一个note的感觉、、 改成了一个1/1 slider 但是比较蛋疼的是vocal是在红线停的 也就是为啥前面你觉得少个note
02:08:648 (1) - 向上斜一点？
02:34:691 (1,2) - 感觉这俩应该往前提一拍。
03:01:395 (1,2,3) - 吧2做成个向上的弧度？


[NM-----syncopation]

是我打开方式错了么？感觉开始的弱起节奏只有在太鼓里面常见到。。放到normal里面不好吧。。
00:37:988 (4) - 这个slider感觉与前面的严重不搭调。。QAQ 我就只会拉这一种滑条你逼我。。
00:40:626 (4) - ^^
01:00:735 (1) - suggestion 好

做成向上的弧度会好点吧

02:09:307 (3,4) - 这俩在好好拉一下吧。。有点丑
02:47:384 (4,5) - 真的有必要用切分节奏么？跟vocal来的。。
02:48:208 (1,2) - 这里的节奏可以试试1+3而不是3+1 同上

整体感觉切分节奏太多了，导致节奏下的有点空。。再同上

[HD----inconsist spacing]
00:42:109 (7,1) - 这俩note很违和。。删了一个w
00:58:098 (1) - 往右移一点，对应前面的排列
01:00:076 (7) - 重新拉一下吧。。
01:13:263 (1) - 这个我感觉重叠会更好 好
01:45:571 (1) - 按你前面排列的尿性来看。。不拉出去一点么
03:04:362 (1) - 稍微感觉有点画蛇添足 这个时间间距我得拉多大._.
03:09:966 (1,2,4) - 这仨是怎么回事。。感觉你能拉出更好的slider啊 你看这个重叠梗

整张图spacing有点问题的感觉。。再查一下吧（对不起我错了我知道这工作量很大。。

[IS---out of my hand]

01:04:691 (1) - 建议改成三个note
01:52:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 可能是因为我是ctb mapper，对map整体的连贯性相当执着。在我看来这里的重叠是对连贯性的破坏。我实在是没梗了我会兰说
02:22:164 (4) - 为啥要突然减小间距？（我感觉这里足够放个大跳。。。lol 我也不知道暑假我咋想的 不过现在看着也不差
02:18:538 (3) - 按前面的感觉看这个应该在右边 为了照顾后边w

好吧我其实打不了insane。。
感觉长串是不是有点过多了？有些地方可以用折返slider代替的：（e.g.01:15:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ， 02:53:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
都insane了还那么在乎连打个数 别这样嘛 我以前想放deathstream来的ww



我射！！！

L_P wrote:

如果看过我的mod应该知道我很懒ww

[Insane]
General：常觉得跳与不跳的抉择有待改善，有些跳与不跳之间的间距有点蛋疼，flow会比较难乔。

00:21:175 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这边明明有梗但是铺的很粗糙，音乐这样下来对我来说是觉得不大适合竖横排列。试试看 http://puu.sh/1KIFY 之类的 重新排了一下OAO 现在感觉排note好有意思233
00:21:999 (3) - 这感觉上不要whistle更顺耳 去掉了lol
00:28:593 (5) - 我是觉得放note比较好啦 直觉这种东西 up to you
00:44:582 (1,2) - 这俩可以用短slider跳 或0108slider不懂你们怎称呼 连打换了两个 但是后面的没有鼓点 怕不合适._.
00:45:241 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这边音乐给我的感觉会比较纠结状，间距不必渐大...当然间距变大触手喜欢 嘛 这被挑刺多了 换梗233
01:15:076 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里觉得没跟鼓点很没有要kiai了的感觉 音效跟了两个clap lol
01:35:021 (5,6,7,8) - 这里算是整首歌非常漂亮的一段旋律。 可以的话想出更炫的梗、排列出来 待我想个梗出来就换
03:15:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:40:296 (1) - 这一段做得有点粗糙，不但没梗排列也不漂亮，可以试试看变换的间距 这里好像刚被sco夸过QAQ
01:51:175 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这边slider接去anti-jump有点怪，不如都用两个音两个note这样排列 也换梗了 但不知为何感觉换得一样蠢

我随便放的，但就是这意思
02:38:977 (1,2) - 节奏是不是放反了 与上个combo一样跟vocal不好吗改了O O
03:03:208 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里会觉得要不就大跳，要不就跟前面这堆03:02:054 (1,2) - 排在一起 当初也是排在一起的 结果好几个人都让我改T T

whistle在某些地方有点乱，但是因为歌的关系没差多少（耳机烂一点的话根本听不出来啊...

[Hard]
00:48:867 (1,2) - 间距有点问题吧 改了._.
00:59:417 (4,5) - ^太近，且5换NC为佳 好的._.
Hard有乱造的嫌疑 有点看不下去（扶额头 其实在修正spacing问题(sco和Leorda)提之前我还是挺满意hard的 结果现在._. ._.

Insane真心觉得不像是1st beatmap，但是既然做的好要求自然会高一点 (其实第一个完成的完整diff没传过 因为做完I以后再也没动力了 这是累计的第二个完成1diff的
给几个建议吧:)
想到了梗下了梗就要多利用，这往往就是一个好图与神图的差别哦， 可以多围绕着梗设计
排列....这问题并不是作图多就能够解决了（望向2哈）slider与note 跳与不跳 之类只能够吸收或者靠天分
天分这种事情与我无关，学习的话建议多研究盈盈的图 科林的图
还有。。。Hard 多花心思吧orz

这图值我两颗星但现在+40了只是浮云 留给比你更需要的人吧 譬如说我自己呵呵

加油咯 要到bubble的话可以找SG搅 charles虽然人气低 但就因为人气低所以比较得空 都可试试
ps leorda是廢材以後可以不用搶他的queue

Vmx wrote:

Hope you don't mind a live video that I made, still can't believe it's your first map, amazing. Sorry it's a bit laggy and I didn't manage to fc since I kept missing at the end, but still got S.

Haruka wrote:

Taikos and bg as promised. Just extract all contents from the puush into the song folder, and we're good to go!

1. 00:41:944 (1) - d ... For a consistency with the Other Pattern.. 00:38:977 (1,1,2,3,4) (?
2. 00:49:856 (4) - Yeah.. I just think this need be a kat..
3. 00:55:131 (5) - This too... (I don't know if you preffer follow always the Drums.. Remember.. This is a Muzukashii... Imo Is recommended follow the Song with a Pattern Consistency.. )
4. 00:59:582 (1) - This can be a d.. xD
5. 01:05:680 (5) - kat
6. 01:31:724 (1) - d For a consistency in 01:31:065 (1,2,1,1) .. Why? Just change it a Will sounds better (? xDDDDD
7. 02:25:461 (2,1) - This sounds better like ''k d'' only because 02:22:823 (1,1) - ewe
8. 03:04:856 (x) - Add a note d

1. 00:10:296 (1) - ........... Really?............ Suggest: Delete it... This don't make the beatmap Hard... If you know what I mean :/ ... I'm not a good Taiko Player... but this is .... Strange.. Just A recommendation..
2. 00:13:593 (1) - This need be ''d'' because 00:10:955 (2) -
3. 00:18:867 (1) - d. Eyup~
4. 00:21:175 (1) - I know this is Rankeable but.... The 60% of the players hates this... Because we have new players always.. And is a good point for the haters... Recommended for avoid future problems... Change it to a normal ''d''. o.o)b
5. 00:56:450 (2) - ''k'' for Pattern consistency.
6. 00:57:768 (4) - ''k'' for
7. 00:58:098 (1) - ''d'' pattern
8. 00:58:428 (1) - ''k'' consistency >:D MUAHAUSAUSASADSASNMJNED BKL NASD tomato.
9. 01:40:461 (4) - Why this... Erase this... pls this.. omg this.... donarudo desu (I listen de Drum but.... Erase it.. Really.) JUST A SUGGT MEN
10. 02:25:461 (2,1) - ''k d'' Is much better imo..
11. 02:37:329 (1) - D

DaxMasterix wrote:

Mod at Request uhuyuuhuy
This song is like Leia wtf.. ikr lool

Makar's Muzukashii:

1. 01:05:680 (5) - kat sure
2. 02:25:461 (2,1) - This sounds better like ''k d'' only because 02:22:823 (1,1) - ewe yup
3. 03:04:856 (x) - Add a note d wanted to provide a break after the finisher here :c. The rest of the suggestions were ignored because I am focused on following the drums, and the suggestions pointed out make everything "too consistent" to the point of it being boring imo.

FAST AND SHOT MOD CUZ I HAVE HOMEWORK AND I NEED GO TO SLEEPP... F*CKING SCHOOOOOOOOOOOL ;A;
Btw... good taikos.. Good luck <3 <3

1. 00:10:296 (1) - Change to K? This spinner is so short it doesn't even show in editor derp. All it is is dk or kd, which doesn't fit the music nearly as well a finisher would imo. Short spinners also play kinda awkwardly when they are only two notes you already know all of this hurr
2. 00:27:274 (1,1,2) - tbh I really do not like this variation of using kdd instead of ddk :/ use ddk (or maybe even kdk if you -really- want some variation here).
3. 00:32:549 (1,1,2) - ^
4. 01:56:697 (2) - so awkward to play being the only thing like this ;w; try dk at 01:56:615 to make it easier but still have the same structure? or something similar like dkd
5. 01:59:417 - using ddkdk here makes this section flow/play better imo.
6. 02:05:845 - since this triple is so close to the note before it an with a speedup, the transition feels a bit confusing to me (plus its on the upbeat). Even though the music might suggest using it a bit later, I would highly suggest moving the 1.0x timing point to 02:05:680 instead so that it feels more natural (down beat, 1/1 after slow note, etc).
7. 02:43:098 (3,4) - dd? long k stream so hard with 1/4 finisher too ;w; (and if you do this maybe do d or dd at 02:11:615 too)
8. 02:48:373 (3,4) - ^^^^ PLZZZ
9. awesome taiko is awesome

Haruka wrote:

more changes from Kokatsu's mod ww

Nyquill wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:944 (5,3,4) - Should throw claps on these, and at the end of (4). added
00:55:461 (1) - Should be a finish on this? added
01:03:373 (1) - There should also be a finish on the start of this. added
03:02:713 (2) - Finish on this?

[Insane]
00:46:807 - Would be nice if you added a note here. Would bring a change to the 1/2s that would make the pattern remain interesting.
I followed vocal here, but would change the pattern if add a note here. Will consider it, remain for now xD.
00:57:109 (9) - Heading from (1-8) is a really repetitive back and forth motion (slowly increasing in spacing). Suddenly decreasing spacing going in the opposite direction here may be a bit jarring. A fairly simple fix would be http://puu.sh/2tqxq.
looks ok for me now..
01:04:691 (1) - Should throw a clap on the beginning of this slider as well (snares). added
01:05:186 (2,10) - Throw claps on these as well for the snares. added
01:11:285 - The snares in this section are also REALLY heavy to be throwing only a soft whistle on them. If you want a better effect, perhaps you should throw a normal sampleset on specific sliders, but keep additions at soft http://puu.sh/2tqD4. These will go well on things like the beginning of 01:11:944 (2), 01:12:439 (3), beginning of 01:13:263 (5), etc.
(you really should have claps on every white tick in the kiai)
eh.. added some claps on sliders but still soft sampleset
02:15:814 - Timing setup says theres an inherting point here? It looks snapped, but move this to 02:15:818 just to snap it for sure. fixed
03:06:010 (5,8,1) - Claps on these? added a clap on 03:06:010 (5,8,1) -

In my opinion, hitsounds could use a lot more work. But this map is very cool, so I wont hold it back because of that.

I told makar to get 2 taiko mods. Call me back when those are done!

Kokatsu wrote:

Makar requested Taikomods, will mod the whole thing however.

General

Why is Xakyrie in tags? Make sure to remove her and her previous nick (xcherry) from the Tags. fixed
Try to get the same BG (or some other) in 16:9 ratio for Standard?
The settingjump from Normal to Hard is too harsh, I'll give suggestions for both diffs in their modboxes.
I think the reversearrow was hard to see on yellow sliders, you might want to look for something with more contrast.

Easy

00:07:988 (1,1) - The time between spinnerend and first note is a bit small, you could move the slider somewhat closer to the center to compensate that. fixed
01:36:010 (2) - Delete? Could use a small break here. ok
01:57:768 (2) - Angle this 45° up, looks better. fixed and changes its shape xD
02:06:670 (3,4) - Delete (4) and use a reverse on (3) instead? This calm passage doesn't need all vocals to be mapped. Would also fit better to the upcoming (2). fixed
02:32:713 (1,2) - No stacks on Easys please. fixed
02:56:779 - This x0,75 section felt wrong, just stick to x1,0. Spacing gets irritating when you swap back and it's weird to have a different spacing for these notes aswell. You should resnap all notes then. fixed
03:09:966 (3) - Ctrl+j and space this, looks and plays better.

fixed

Normal

You should use HP and OD of 4 here, if that's too high for you, use OD 4 at least.

I generally disliked the ammount of stacking here, mainly because you mixed up 1/1 and 1/2 stacks too often.

00:25:461 (2,3,1) - Increase this curve by a bit for a better flow.

00:34:691 (4,5) - Unstack?
00:50:186 (1,2,3) - This seems overmapped, (3) should start where (2) is at the moment, that's the long-dragged note in the vocals. Try this:

01:01:724 (2,3,4) - That's what I meant with mixing stuff up. 'Till there only were 1/1 stacks and because of the lack of 1/2 for the last few stanzas, I'd really recommend to unstack these to get players into the rhythm again.
01:15:900 (1) - There is no way a new player can predict this slider is going to have a second reverse. Split this up into two 1/2 sliders.
01:26:450 (1) - ^
01:29:087 (1) - ^
01:35:351 (1,2) - I'd prefer them spaced, but here it's up to you.
01:46:560 (2,3,1,2) - Here you mix them up right after another, so first a 1/2 stack, then a 1/1 stack. This is not that readable for newer players so please space them all or at least space the 1/1 stack.
02:50:845 (1) - Same as above, split this up into two sliders.
02:51:834 (3,4,5,6) - You did it again. Maybe replace (3,4) with a slider this time and space (5,6)?
03:09:307 (1) - You know what.

almost all fixed_(:3JZ)_

Hard

If you choose to go for HP 3 in the Normal, reduce HP by 1 in this diff. done

00:39:307 (7) - Add a clap on Sliderend?
00:43:263 (4) - If you did above, add one here aswell.
00:44:746 (4) - ^
00:49:197 (2) - You've forgotten to add a clap on sliderhead. fixed
00:57:768 (1) - Clap again. You should also remove NC here, it doesn't serve any purpose. fixed
01:04:527 (4) - Try out this shape, transition to next note is better: fixed

01:17:054 (2,4) - Customstack this, looks better IMO.
01:21:175 (1,2,3,4) - Why is (1) spaced different from the rest of the combo? Would be nicer if all would have the same spacing. changed its spacing and looks better imo.
02:01:395 (5) - Another clap here wouldn't hurt. added
02:19:856 - Why this weird spacing for this part? Just keep it regular. looks nice for me
03:22:494 (2) - ctrl+g on this one? fixed.

Insane

OD +1, 7 is too low for the hardest diff. OD8 is quite hard to HR because of the slow part

00:11:944 (7,1) - Add NC on (7), remove it from (1). You currently seperate parts of the music which belong together.
00:13:263 (6) - Add NC. there is no need to change nc imo..
00:58:098 (1,2) - That spacing is irritating, stack (2) on (1) or use a 1/2 gap between them.
01:01:230 (2,3) - I found it hard to read, maybe because (3) had the hitburst of (1) still on top of it's head. You might want to reposition (3).
01:03:867 (2,3) - ^
01:15:076 (4,5,6,7,8) - The irregular spacing here looks odd, space them all with the same DS.
01:48:208 (1,2) - Again, this looks like 1/2, space them correctly.
01:49:527 (1,2) - ^
02:17:219 (1,2,3) - This spacing is confusing aswell, I thought it would be 1/4 on my first try. You might want to increase it a bit or reverse the whole pattern (start with huge spacing and diminish it with each combo). changed a little bit
02:51:834 - You had circles as your streampatterns for the whole map, why not use something else here?

changed a little bit
Good luck.~

emmy wrote:

★★

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Continue with this awesome song and map...

- ArC - wrote:

pls, update it!

ts8zs wrote:

From QQgroup
居然一年了._.
[Insane]
个人观点:移动和节奏连接与我相斥 所以有什么冲突的话 mapper观念优先._.
我懒 懒得写理由……我的mod前后用鼠标比划一下大概能明白一半._.
00:23:483 (7) - 移到6头
00:24:472 (3) - 移到弧1中心
00:25:296 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:28:593 (5) - 去掉一个回返 加个note在本NC1尾部
>00:29:087 (1) - Ctrl+G
>>00:29:417 (2) - 移到3头
>>>00:29:582 (3) - 移到用3包住4
00:34:362 (1) - ._.
00:36:175 (8,9,10) - 改法类似 00:29:087
00:37:494 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/923170
00:39:307 (10) - 复制8稍微移开一点._.
00:44:499 (9) - 违和感._.
00:46:889 (3) - 移到2下面 NC
>00:47:054 (4,5,6) - 调整间距._.
00:57:109 (9,10,11) - 改成三个滑条……算了 上截图 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/923188
>00:58:098 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/923185
01:14:746 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:16:560 (1) - 没顺应上面弧度._.
01:17:713 (4) - 右移
01:27:439 (2,3) - 互换位置注意音效._.
01:41:944 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/923197
01:48:538 (2) - 稍微跳一下没关系吧……有slidercircle护体呢._.
02:14:582 - 这段好._.
02:22:164 (4) - 改成折返._.
03:08:483 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G
03:09:307 (6) - Ctrl+G
03:11:450 (2) - 上移一点包住1
03:16:724 (4) - 移到3的延长线上而不是反跳._.
03:22:164 (8) - Ctrl+G 突然看出真是一年前的图._.
就这样吧 不是很喜欢这种类型的……有点头疼._.
我喜欢比较活泼的歌._.