1. Easy (1.84 stars, 126 notes)
2. Hard (4.77 stars, 370 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 575 notes)
4. Normal (3.15 stars, 169 notes)
5. Record (4.89 stars, 682 notes)
6. Sp3's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1106 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

/me slaps 22haha

No_Gu wrote:

video here : http://puu.sh/MhjE
Jin又开始了。。。

wmfchris wrote:

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[Taiko]
00:22:358 - end with a k sounds better?
00:54:287 - 這幾句連接身不太好 特別是00:55:096 (3) - 這個接回去vocal
02:22:215 - 還是不要用slider把好吵 spinner能提早完事好一點

- 1/6 4連太鬼畜了還是移走把
- 加taiko BG 現在的斬了頭不好看
- 和上一首一樣 略太鬼畜

wmfchris wrote:

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[Taiko]
00:22:358 - end with a k sounds better?
00:54:287 - 這幾句連接身不太好 特別是00:55:096 (3) - 這個接回去vocal
02:22:215 - 還是不要用slider把好吵 spinner能提早完事好一點
^全改

- 1/6 4連太鬼畜了還是移走把
- 加taiko BG 現在的斬了頭不好看
- 和上一首一樣 略太鬼畜

1. beat snap divisior为什么是1/3..resnap不会出问题吗喂?
2. 删书签._.
3. BG吃色真的太重了嘛..(打滚

1. wocao都210BPM了还AR8玩谁呢
2. 00:21:429 (4) - NC
3. 00:25:715 - +break
4. 02:22:287 (2) - 这个note的位置往屏幕中心放，效果会很拔群
5. 02:24:430 - spinner消音
6. 02:48:429 (3,4) - ctrl+R
7. 02:48:858 (2,3,4) - 这里可以尝试做成十字跳即1-3-4-2的顺序

1. 00:25:715 - break
2. 01:09:287 (2) - 还是stack在1和4的交叉处吧 这个234摆得超别扭的但是一时我又想不出来什么其他的更好的办法
3. 01:10:430 (2) - ^
4. 02:24:430 - spinner消音

1. AR+1
2. 00:25:715 - break
3. 02:22:358 (1) - spinner消音

• 
  # 00:43:715 (1) - a slider with a hitsound (clap)===(clap) that ends at 00:44:287
  # 00:44:858 (2) - a slider with a hitsound (clap)===(clap) that ends at 00:45:430

SPOILER

• # slider starting at 00:37:858 and ending at 00:38:858 (HS: top empty and end clap)
  # beat at 00:39:144 (HS: empty)

new rhythm

example

new rhythm

example

Step 1

Step 2

• # set spacing at x0,7
  # put 00:45:215 (2) - in X:388 Y:40 & 00:45:287 (3) - in X:392 Y:60
  # 00:45:430 (4) - in X:376 Y:156
  # 00:45:572 (5) - rotate by 13° and put in X:312 Y:248
  # put 00:45:787 (6) - in X:212 Y:276 & 00:45:858 (7) - in X:188 Y:264

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~ <3~

[Insane]
00:31:358 - There's no sound here in the song, I dont think you should end this slider here... a small tail, I want to stress it ^ ^
00:46:001 - 00:59:858 - This section was really awkward to play for me, don't know what would other think, but the slow down and the sliders starting on red ticks, like (00:47:144 (1), threw me off a lot. slow rhythm begin on 00:46:001 Orz...and 00:59:858 part is little faster Orz..
01:02:358 - Same thing I mentioned before, there's no sound here in the music, I know mappers do that to add more variety to the rhythm, but sometimes is just looks overmapped, especially on high BPM maps like this. But that's just my opinion, and I noticed you have plenty of these in the entire diff, so you decide what to do. ^^' I make sure it well be more fun ^^"...no overmapped Orz...
01:38:572 (1,2) - In the beginning of the map you have a pattern like this, but is separated by beat: 00:27:715 (1,2). Having this separated by half beat but with same distance in chart might turn confusing. This part rhythm is very obvious, I believe it is not difficult to read or play ^ ^....
That's all.

[Record]
00:17:572 (1,2) - damn it! totally couldn't see that coming, are you sure you want to keep this jump at the very beginning? @_@ @_@....I find some test player they like this way..
01:54:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not sure not sure ><~ Wish I could play this map to notice if this is really readable. I guess I'll ask some test players later. when I find some test player I make sure they can read it and play very well <3~

[Normal]
00:28:858 (3) - end on next white tick? not feel very well Orz
00:33:430 (3) - ^FIX~

[Easy]
00:28:858 (2) - end on next white tick not feel very well Orz
00:34:572 (1) - same not feel very well Orz
01:31:287 (2) - I think this slider should start at: 01:31:572 FIX~
01:32:858 (3) - end this here: 01:33:430 FIX~
01:37:001 (3) - I think this doesn't fit, try to do something else.I try it more time but now this way is more easy to read and play Orz

~Thanks~

1. a taiko bg? a poor guy's head is hit for over thousand times

1. SV too low
2. 00:17:430 - add one note
3. 01:12:287 (1,2,3,4) - let the drums be the beginning instead of the ending or reverse-point.
4. and too much focused on vocal which doesn't fit an Insane diff. such as 00:32:715, 00:33:287, 01:00:715. won't list more.

1. 00:17:430 - add note
2. 00:44:430 (1,2,3,1) - curse the track and less spacing
3. 01:03:001 (1) - soft or volume down for the ending
4. 02:05:572 (1,2,3,4) - stream here?
5. 02:07:858 - add note
6. 02:10:144 - ^
7. 02:39:072 (2) - remove

1. 00:27:715 (1) - sliderticks too loud and confusing. try the default one but with low volume. this happened everywhere so I won't list more. also in Easy

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. a taiko bg? a poor guy's head is hit for over thousand times

FIX

[Insane]

1. SV too low 玩的时候没什么大问题，当初设定时候觉得再高就和record一样了
2. 00:17:430 - add one note K
3. 01:12:287 (1,2,3,4) - let the drums be the beginning instead of the ending or reverse-point.K
4. and too much focused on vocal which doesn't fit an Insane diff. such as 00:32:715, 00:33:287, 01:00:715. won't list more.

没问题

[Record]

1. 00:17:430 - add note K
2. 00:44:430 (1,2,3,1) - curse the track and less spacing=_=||K
3. 01:03:001 (1) - soft or volume down for the ending K
4. 02:05:572 (1,2,3,4) - stream here?K
5. 02:07:858 - add note跟歌词，有停顿，玩起来也OK
6. 02:10:144 - ^^
7. 02:39:072 (2) - remove K

[Normal]

1. 00:27:715 (1) - sliderticks too loud and confusing. try the default one but with low volume. this happened everywhere so I won't list more. also in Easy K

Kiiwa wrote:

萌萌哈哈

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Day without homework = MOD TIME MOFO~ <3~

[Easy]

• 00:36:858 (1,2,3,4) - This does not fit the song at hand very well. Delete (2) and move 00:38:144 (3) - back so that it starts on 00:38:001 and ends on 00:39:144. Then, move (4) forward to the next red tick on 00:39:715. Here is a picture for reference. FIX~
• 00:41:287 (1,2,1,2) - Just like above, these 4 sliders don't match the music and don't play well. Try doing this. FIX~
• 01:34:144 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty much the same as above. Re-arrange the notes so that is follows the music better. FIX~

[Normal]

• 00:36:858 (1,2,3) - Same problem with Easy occurs here. The beats just don't fit the music and throws the player off. To fix this, I suggest re-arranging like so. I dont think it follow the music :L...no change
• 01:32:858 (3) - End this slider on 01:33:430 - to fit the lyrics. FIX~
• 01:34:144 (1) - Start this slider on 01:34:001 - and end it on 01:34:572 -. That way it will fit the music. FIX~
• 01:36:429 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I feel like a broken record. Rehashing myself, this part doesn't really match the music and that makes it really hard to play. FIX~

[Hard]

• 00:55:430 (1,2,3) - I find these sliders unintuitive since it throws the players off with the inconsistent repeats. I think you should change the pattern up like so. I dont think it follow the music :L...no change

[Record]
* Tick rate 2 because of the sudden slow downs. FIX~

[Insane]
* Again, tick rate two FIX~

• 00:20:572 (2) - Turn this slider so that it faces 00:20:858 (1) - and rightly flows better. Kinda odd the way it is. FIX~
• 00:29:430 (1,2,3,4) - Hrm, this anti jump does not work and it's not like you use often in the map, so re-map it. FIX~
• 00:35:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^ FIX~

Overall, this is a good map and I'm quite impressed. Although, it's a little rough around the edges. I suggest you fix those up before moving ahead. Star for now.

Jarby wrote:

02:40:144 - Please add an uninherited section here on all difficulties to reset the metronome. Will not affect timing, but it is necessary for the pulse to be correct on the menu.

Er, that's all. I'll bubble after.

SapphireGhost wrote:

It's been too long. Not a lot to say here other than some design comments.

Record
- It's a good map for the most part, but I feel like the map could have been a bit neater/more structured. Still not bad.
00:36:858 (3,4) - Increase the spacing between (3) and (4) here, otherwise it looks too small. FIX~
01:16:144 (4,5,6) - Looks better if the sliders don't overlap. sorry but not enough space Orz///
01:40:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is very unreadable with Hidden, try to move (3,4,5,6) so you can see them more. FIX~
01:46:715 to 02:06:144 - Nicely mapped, probably the best part. Thank you
02:47:144 (2,3,4) - (3) needs more space between (2) and (4) so it's clear when to hit them. FIX~

Insane seems alright, I don't have any problems with it.

Hard
00:17:572 (1,2) - I guess it's not so bad, but because of the low Approach Rate this is hard to read (mostly with Hidden).FIX~
02:57:858 (2,3) - For the last jump, I think this is a bit too much, more like 2.0x spacing is better.FIX~

Normal
- Good, just remove the overlap in some places:
00:37:858 (2,3) -
00:45:572 (1,2,3) -
02:07:287 (3,1,2) -
FIX~
Easy
01:51:287 (2,1,2) - Lastly, remove the overlap here.
FIX~
That's it, just poke me when you're done.