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Hatsuki Yura - Ganbare! Koi no Hana

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Kotone
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 22 November, 2012 at 21:04:18

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: Ganbare! Koi no Hana
Source: Ganbare! Memekochan
Tags: La pucelle Seifuu meigetsu Seifuumeigetsu fanzhen0019 karenying kioukiou
BPM: 140
Filesize: 4727kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.1 stars, 193 notes)
  2. fanzhen (4.94 stars, 349 notes)
  3. Hana (5 stars, 497 notes)
  4. kioukiou's Hard (4.79 stars, 329 notes)
  5. Normal (4.37 stars, 250 notes)


Download: Hatsuki Yura - Ganbare! Koi no Hana
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me ~
Normal by me ~
Hard by fanzhen0019 ~
Hard2 by kioukiou ~
Insane by me ~
No_Gu
yeah
kanpakyin
Try this:

  1. 1. Offset: 628ms
    BPM: 140.00
  2. 2. Offset: 154,919ms
    BPM: 128.00
  3. 3. Offset: 156,359ms
    BPM: 120.00
  4. 4. Offset: 156,860ms
    BPM: 82.00
  5. 5. Offset: 158,479ms
    BPM: 80.00


我1ms early
kioukiou
Done. :)

Edit :

Timing修正版 : http://puu.sh/1leBR
Pokie
:oops: 御主人様!
tutuhaha
先占位先占位........
L_P
柯騰好~

hana

00:04:056 (1) - cancel whistle?
00:30:628 (4) - 變成end+2頭whistle?
00:37:485 (6,7) - slider 6 swap whistle, head 7 whistle
00:39:199 (3) - whistle
00:59:770 (5,7) - 這里的背景音樂超好聽的,不如找特定音效出現在這類地方?
01:06:628 (3,4,5,1,2) - 02:16:913 (5,6,7) - 02:30:628 (5,6,7) - ^
01:10:056 - silence這個地方
01:49:485 (1) - whistle
02:20:342 - silence這地方
02:34:919 (1) - finish略嫌大聲
02:36:859 (1,2,3,4) - 同略大聲
02:38:479 (1) - 似乎沒snap?

arrangement/mapping suggestion~
00:00:628 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1lQ5B 類似的?
00:04:056 (1) - 可以小小地跳?
00:04:485 (3) - default combo burst蓋著會幾乎unrankable, 建議拉長到藍線
00:34:056 (4) - 拆,http://puu.sh/1lQ9Z 之類的?
01:44:770 (7) - 移到下個slider的上面,01:45:092 - add a note stacking with the next slider

依然美觀 依然亮麗
這個很有愛啊

下來懶惰弄了...orz
Nymph
Easy:
02:36:859 (1) - 转盘结尾snap

Normal:
02:38:479 (1) - 转盘是想跟最后2个难度一样蓝线起?unsnap

QQ姐:
02:36:855 (1) - 转盘尾静音?

反震:
00:25:485 (1,2,3) - 非等间距故意的么?有点没看出来
00:52:913 (2) - 感觉finish有点多余
02:03:199 (2) - 同上


Hana:
00:05:342 (7,1) - 囧为啥这个间距突然是1.0不是1.2了呢 稍微有点奇怪
00:36:092 (4) - 这蓝线clap很突兀呀
01:41:770 (6) - +whistle?突然断whistle有点意外
kioukiou

Nymph wrote:

QQ姐:
02:36:855 (1) - 转盘尾静音? - OK.
link here : http://puu.sh/1lX2G

Thanks for modding. :)
tutuhaha
把Enable countdown搞掉

[Easy]
00:19:913 (5) - 我觉得应该是在这个slider的尾巴上加finish
00:21:628 (2) - 然后再在这个头上加finish,1的那个finish不要
00:39:628 (3) - 再搞的圆滑点
01:21:199 (1) - 移到X480 Y52【最小格】
01:39:628 (2) - 移到x164 y192 【最小格】
02:17:770 (5) - +NC?
02:33:199 (4,5) - 都拉的再好看一点吧
这哪里easy了啊分明是Normal啦Orz...

[Normal]
00:40:913 (3) - 和后面的1靠的有点紧玩的时候看着有点不爽
01:38:985 (2) - 我个人是不怎么喜欢在spinner后面搞那么紧的节奏特别还是Normal..所以考虑把这个notedelete掉?
01:51:199 (3) - 和前面那个一样
02:36:859 (1,2) - 据说把slider放在改红线的地方会导致尾巴unsnap哦真的大丈夫?
这normal怎么做的比我平常作图还懒.....直接一复制啊....

[Hard]
00:14:770 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这块打起来手感何其纠结....三个slider都是红线开头最后一个还拖拍Orz...
00:22:913 (5,7) - 据说这么重叠现在会被喷,最好岔开一点点
00:50:985 (6) - x352 y248
00:51:413 (7) - x416 y304
^这么看起来好看点
01:21:627 (2,3,4) - 这三个间距这么一看真是太纠结了..虽然懂你想干啥...试试吧3和4的间距调成和2-3间距一样然后后面也移一下?

[fanzhen]
00:44:342 (5) - 真要按节奏摆花样的话这里应该有个分界点,然后试试用不同的方式或者不同的方向继续摆,然后NC也应该是从这里开始的
00:51:199 (3) - 2那边人声是有停顿的,所以实在是不建议在这里跳
00:59:770 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然知道你可能是想跟后面的背景音来控制一下短space,但是玩起来的时候确实不怎么带感...因为人声在这里其实还是很重的...
01:06:628 (1,2,3,4) - 同
01:13:485 (1,2,3,4) - 同
01:42:628 (1,2) - 两块重叠...感觉这边这么摆有点纠结..
01:53:556 (4) - +个nc,少点人喷
然后后面同样节奏的话也可以试试用一样的方法摆^真的
后面的kiai的问题就是那个短space1234没了
然后OD和AR是否设置有点高

[Hana]
00:46:270 (4) - 这里是否有点拖拍?
01:03:413 (X) - 这块没空拍吧?...
01:15:199 (4) - 这边加个NC
01:16:056 (3) - 然后在这边再加个NC,看起来就漂亮多了
后面kiai也有个同一地方不建议空拍的,然后没了
Nichiyouki
Hi, Kotone

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. bg.jpg is 1089x767. Please Please fix this picture is 1024x768.
  2. Disable enable countdown, because it isn't necessary.

Easy

  1. 01:07:485 (5,1) - Switch NC.
  2. 02:11:342 (1,2,3) - I think cause surprise of newbie player for this diff. Please avoid overlapping of notes. Then perhaps, make (2,3) is a slider or remove (2) be better?
  3. 02:34:485 (1,2) - Same as 01:07:485 (5,1)

Normal

  1. Good diff

kioukiou's Hard

  1. 00:19:699 (5) - Move to down 1 grid.
  2. 00:53:770 (5) - Add NC?
  3. 01:06:413 (9) - Move to left 1 grid.
  4. 01:09:199 (6) - Add NC?
  5. 01:39:842 (5) - Move to up 7 grids. It would be more smoothly to play.

fanzhen

  1. 00:38:128 (4) - Add clap here. I was able to observe it in rhythm of song.
  2. 01:03:628 (4) - I feel weird on this note. I think that make it consistent with the vocals by slider end at 01:03:842 be better.
  3. 01:20:770 (4) - ^
  4. 02:13:913 (3) - ^

Hana

  1. 00:34:806 (6) - Move to x:368 y:316 be better?
  2. 01:38:556 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
kioukiou
照著上面的Mod post做了些修改

link : http://puu.sh/1mhZ4

Thanks for tutuhaha and Nichiyouki's modding.
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Kotone ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

  1. Change BG size to 1024*768 pls.
  2. Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.
  3. Remove unused countdown pls.

[Hana]

  1. 01:06:842 (4) - Change new combo to here,looks better.
  2. 02:01:700 (3) - Try move this circle,hitburst almost touch hp bar.
  3. 02:36:859 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

[fanzhen]

  1. AR-1 is better for hard diff.
  2. 00:27:092 (3) - I guess change a 1/2 rhythm on 00:27:199 is better,follow with music.
  3. 00:43:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Too confused and hidden for hard diff.
  4. 00:49:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - Random spacing a bit hard to here,maybe remove (5) is better.
  5. 01:22:699 (3) - Remove this circle,sound better to me.
  6. 02:32:985 (3) - ^
  7. 01:42:413 (2) - ^
  8. 02:03:199 - Remove finish.
  9. 02:10:056 (1,2,3,4) - Try change 1,3 whistle,sound much better.
  10. 02:37:568 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end point).

[kioukiou's Hard]

  1. HP-1 is better.
  2. No kiai time for this diff?
  3. 00:53:770 (5) - Add new combo,vocal and jump to here.

[Normal]

  1. AR-1(6 is too high for normal diff).
  2. Spacing pretty huge,you can try reduce some?
  3. 00:12:199 (2) - Change a circle on here is better.
  4. 02:36:859 (1) - Unsnapped slider.

[Easy]

  1. HP,OD,AR-1.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~ ps : normal 和 easy 做的太难了 stress...还有QQ姐的diff 我不知道follow 啥了,节奏有点生硬,不过这歌还真是好听 :3

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
kioukiou

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[kioukiou's Hard]

  1. HP-1 is better. - OK.
  2. No kiai time for this diff? - 本身眼睛不好,所以我不喜歡加kiai time :\ ,不過為了避免爭議,我加上了kiai time.
  3. 00:53:770 (5) - Add new combo,vocal and jump to here.- OK,然後在第二段類似的部份也加上了NC.
to Kotone :

最新ver. : http://puu.sh/1n36c

Thanks for Kawayi Rika's modding.
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from PM.

Just suggestions:

[General]
bg.jpg is 1027x768, which is over the maximum allowed size of 1024x768.

[Easy]
00:40:913 (2) - maybe end the slider at 00:41:342? So you can add a clap there. This also fit the music better imo. and is easier for new player to read.
02:36:359 (2) - put the note on the middle axle?

[Normal]
00:25:270 (2) - I think stacking it on the head of next slider (00:25:485 (3)), or deleting this note is better, since current pattern is a little difficult as a Normal.
00:28:056 (1,2,3,4) - just my feeling, this part will make player confused
00:46:485 (2) - same as 00:25:270 (2), stack it on the head of next slider?
00:53:770 (4,5) - since it is only AR5 and you used many 1/2 stacks on slider end, player will think this as a 1/2 stack too. So my suggestion is try to make all 1/2 stacks on slider head, and 1/1 like this under slider end.
02:36:855 (1,2) - make them more symmetric?


[kioukiou's Hard]
End Kiai at 02:34:919 like other diffs?
00:24:199 (7) - you'd better to manually stack the slider (move 1 grid up and right under grid level 4)
01:48:627 (1,2,3) - keep the spacing? Like this:
02:36:359 (2) - maybe move it to the symmetric position of the end of 02:34:919 (1)?

[fanzhen]
00:03:199 (2) - maybe move it to 456,280 or somewhere nearby?
I think this position makes it flow better.
00:42:199 (1) - I didn't find any strong support for this 3/4 slider, maybe remove it? It is similar to 00:49:056 (2), which is a 1/2 slider.
00:58:913 (1) - there is vocal at 00:59:128, so change the pattern to follow it is better imo.
01:03:628 (4) - same as 00:42:199 (1). To follow the vocal at 01:03:842, this slider should be 1/2 slider.
01:05:770 (1) - the slider is not so symmetric with itself, you can adjust it like this(under grid level 4):
01:10:485 (1) - 01:20:770 (4) - ^ and 2nd Kiai
01:52:485 (1) - same as 00:58:913 (1)

[Hana]
00:00:628 (1) - maybe move it to 80,200?
I think this position makes the whole pattern flow better.
00:35:770 (3,4) - when I play this, I feel a little weird since there is no beat at 00:36:199(there should be a clap here). So I think you can change the pattern and rhythm like this:
Then you can add a clap on the head of 00:36:199 (5). The clap is important to keep the completeness of hitsounds set.
00:45:628 (2) - the short slider is too much curved imo. Just not so beautiful.
01:24:199 (4) - since you use symmetric patterns here, I suggest you moving this slider to 256,296:
The spacing is only from the head of (3) to (4), bacause the cursor will stay on the head of the kick slider when play.
01:38:556 (1) - the note is close to previous spinner. Imo, ending the spinner at 01:37:913 and adding a note at 01:38:342 is a better choice. It is more suitable for the music as well. About the position of this note, I think you can consider stacking it on the end of 01:39:199 (4).
01:49:913 (3) - how about curving it like this:
On the one hand, it flows better with (1,2); And on the other hand, it is symmetric with 01:49:056 (5), and this repeat emphasizes the music well.
02:18:413 (2) - maybe you can add a note here? I feel a little empty here since you didn't use jump like previous Kiai.
02:26:985 (3,4,5,6) - I think 5/7 streams are better than current pattern. For playing, it is unexpected since you use 5 stream in previous part. For rhythm, the drum should be 5 stream, and the piano should be 7 stream.
Curisu
PM requested by moemoebakaying❤!
sry 4 looooooooooooooog delay (pa

[General]
建议slidertick clap垫多个hit做底音 tick上的clap和普通clap现在听起来稍微有些不协调
手头没audio editor啥的ry sry

[EZ]
00:38:342 (1) - y=217 我蛋疼
01:50:342 (5,6) - 咦点解用NC1
02:05:770 (1,2) - vol+10(参照00:55:485 (1,2)

EZ做的很美其实我找不出issue啦rofl

[NM]
奇葩设定强烈建议取缔 AR-1
00:38:342 (1,2) - 和之前的中规中矩spacing严重不合
02:28:914 (3) - x,y 382,224
02:36:325 - timing问题 你这里的tick音有点违和

[QQ姐]
00:40:056 (1,3) - vol-10 ; 00:40:485 (2,4,5) - vol+5
01:10:270 - +clap ; 01:10:699 - -clap
01:20:127 (5) - 嘛曲度好像怪怪的 建议下
400,72,80127,2,0,B|411:106|400:160,1,70

01:40:056 (6,7) - spacing略怪 7的slider尾貌似没对准grid和8 9 1对应
01:46:056 (3,4,5,6) - 前面一直1/2 1/4正常节奏这里蓝线尾slider貌似有点奇怪...3-4还可以的话 5-6感觉自创节奏略重
02:12:627 (8) - 好长combo不NC吗(slap
02:14:985 (2,3) -


400,48,134985,2,0,B|396:90|384:128,1,70
360,196,135413,2,0,B|327:226|284:246,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[反震大萌妹]
刚开头soft-clap好怪lol
00:18:413 (2,4) - 对齐
00:34:056 - +fin?
00:42:199 - +clap
00:43:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 感觉略破坏连贯
01:03:628 (4) - 貌似没必要拉到蓝线?
01:20:770 (4) - ^(感觉kiai段这种挺多其他不提了
01:58:806 - +circle

[哈娜]
00:16:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 疾走感十足的stream...不过好像有点突兀
00:50:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序调一调更带感(其实是我蛋疼不过我觉得五边形--五角星更符合人体工学?(炸
287,114,50985,5,0,0:0:0
193,282,51199,1,0,0:0:0
168,88,51413,1,0,0:0:0
301,231,51628,1,2,0:0:0
110,193,51842,1,10,0:0:0
02:02:342 (1,2,3,4) - 突然hitsounds空白了有点...感觉是跟电音但是前面没这样的3/4自然怪...
02:29:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形好歪
Topic Starter
Kotone
Since fanzhen can't use computer,I will change for him

L_P wrote:

柯騰好~

hana

00:04:056 (1) - cancel whistle? k
00:30:628 (4) - 變成end+2頭whistle? 沒理解錯的話
00:37:485 (6,7) - slider 6 swap whistle, head 7 whistle不懂為何
00:39:199 (3) - whistlek
00:59:770 (5,7) - 這里的背景音樂超好聽的,不如找特定音效出現在這類地方?求提案
01:06:628 (3,4,5,1,2) - 02:16:913 (5,6,7) - 02:30:628 (5,6,7) - ^
01:10:056 - silence這個地方調小了
01:49:485 (1) - whistlek
02:20:342 - silence這地方調小了
02:34:919 (1) - finish略嫌大聲40如何
02:36:859 (1,2,3,4) - 同略大聲
02:38:479 (1) - 似乎沒snap?k

arrangement/mapping suggestion~
00:00:628 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1lQ5B 類似的?不懂為何
00:04:056 (1) - 可以小小地跳?改。
00:04:485 (3) - default combo burst蓋著會幾乎unrankable, 建議拉長到藍線改。
00:34:056 (4) - 拆,http://puu.sh/1lQ9Z 之類的?改。
01:44:770 (7) - 移到下個slider的上面,01:45:092 - add a note stacking with the next slider先留

依然美觀 依然亮麗
這個很有愛啊 thx :)

下來懶惰弄了...orz

Nymph wrote:

反震:
00:52:913 (2) - 感觉finish有点多余
02:03:199 (2) - 同上
這兩個先留,其他改了 thx!

tutuhaha wrote:

把Enable countdown搞掉k

[Easy]
00:19:913 (5) - 我觉得应该是在这个slider的尾巴上加finish
00:21:628 (2) - 然后再在这个头上加finish,1的那个finish不要效果不好
00:39:628 (3) - 再搞的圆滑点k
01:21:199 (1) - 移到X480 Y52【最小格】k
01:39:628 (2) - 移到x164 y192 【最小格】有分別么!
02:17:770 (5) - +NC?k
02:33:199 (4,5) - 都拉的再好看一点吧不好看么..
这哪里easy了啊分明是Normal啦Orz...你的E比我更難好嗎!

[Normal]
00:40:913 (3) - 和后面的1靠的有点紧玩的时候看着有点不爽先留
01:38:985 (2) - 我个人是不怎么喜欢在spinner后面搞那么紧的节奏特别还是Normal..所以考虑把这个notedelete掉?
01:51:199 (3) - 和前面那个一样
02:36:859 (1,2) - 据说把slider放在改红线的地方会导致尾巴unsnap哦真的大丈夫?這個是有辦法解決的大丈夫
这normal怎么做的比我平常作图还懒.....直接一复制啊....遲點改啦!...大概

[fanzhen]
00:44:342 (5) - 真要按节奏摆花样的话这里应该有个分界点,然后试试用不同的方式或者不同的方向继续摆,然后NC也应该是从这里开始的改了~
00:51:199 (3) - 2那边人声是有停顿的,所以实在是不建议在这里跳先留
00:59:770 (1,2,3,4) - 虽然知道你可能是想跟后面的背景音来控制一下短space,但是玩起来的时候确实不怎么带感...因为人声在这里其实还是很重的...
01:06:628 (1,2,3,4) - 同
01:13:485 (1,2,3,4) - 同還好吧..orz
01:42:628 (1,2) - 两块重叠...感觉这边这么摆有点纠结..不懂為何orz
01:53:556 (4) - +个nc,少点人喷不用吧,很多人這樣放的...吧
然后后面同样节奏的话也可以试试用一样的方法摆^真的
后面的kiai的问题就是那个短space1234没了????
然后OD和AR是否设置有点高還好

[Hana]
00:46:270 (4) - 这里是否有点拖拍?不覺得...
01:03:413 (X) - 这块没空拍吧?...我不一定要跟著放吧
01:15:199 (4) - 这边加个NC
01:16:056 (3) - 然后在这边再加个NC,看起来就漂亮多了 哦哦哦,改完後想到個不錯的梗,謝
后面kiai也有个同一地方不建议空拍的,然后没了thx :P

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Kotone

fanzhen

  1. 00:38:128 (4) - Add clap here. I was able to observe it in rhythm of song.
  2. 01:03:628 (4) - I feel weird on this note. I think that make it consistent with the vocals by slider end at 01:03:842 be better.
  3. 01:20:770 (4) - ^
  4. 02:13:913 (3) - ^
    Seems its fit the songs so much,no change

Good luck~
Without fanzhen diff,I changed all of mine~
thx :P

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Hana]


[*]02:01:700 (3) - Try move this circle,hitburst almost touch hp bar. touch hp bar is ok!

[notice]

[fanzhen]

  1. AR-1 is better for hard diff. I need more suggestion for this
  2. 00:27:092 (3) - I guess change a 1/2 rhythm on 00:27:199 is better,follow with music. I don't think so..
  3. 00:43:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Too confused and hidden for hard diff.At the all it is hard+,ok for me
  4. 00:49:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - Random spacing a bit hard to here,maybe remove (5) is better.^
  5. 01:22:699 (3) - Remove this circle,sound better to me.ok
  6. 02:32:985 (3) - ^ok
  7. 01:42:413 (2) - ^no..
  8. 02:03:199 - Remove finish.ok
  9. 02:10:056 (1,2,3,4) - Try change 1,3 whistle,sound much better.I don't think so..
  10. 02:37:568 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end point).ok

[Normal]

  1. AR-1(6 is too high for normal diff).AR6 fits the map so much.
  2. Spacing pretty huge,you can try reduce some? I don't think so..
  3. 00:12:199 (2) - Change a circle on here is better.I don't argee
  4. 02:36:859 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
ok

[Easy]

  1. HP,OD,AR-1.
ok

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~ ps : normal 和 easy 做的太难了 stress...还有QQ姐的diff 我不知道follow 啥了,节奏有点生硬,不过这歌还真是好听 :3 說真的我完全不覺得難

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
Topic Starter
Kotone
萌妹另post以此表達萌妹的萌力

Curisu wrote:

PM requested by moemoebakaying❤!
sry 4 looooooooooooooog delay (pa
你那天去推妹子了?

[General]
建议slidertick clap垫多个hit做底音 tick上的clap和普通clap现在听起来稍微有些不协调
手头没audio editor啥的ry sry好,下次改。

[EZ]
00:38:342 (1) - y=217 我蛋疼 k
01:50:342 (5,6) - 咦点解用NC1 ?????點解唔用NC1?
02:05:770 (1,2) - vol+10(参照00:55:485 (1,2) k

EZ做的很美其实我找不出issue啦rofl

[NM]
奇葩设定强烈建议取缔 AR-1 好吧,你們都欺負我。
00:38:342 (1,2) - 和之前的中规中矩spacing严重不合
02:28:914 (3) - x,y 382,224k
02:36:325 - timing问题 你这里的tick音有点违和 消音。

[反震大萌妹]
刚开头soft-clap好怪lol大丈夫!
00:18:413 (2,4) - 对齐k
00:34:056 - +fin???
00:42:199 - +clapk
00:43:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 感觉略破坏连贯
01:03:628 (4) - 貌似没必要拉到蓝线?
01:20:770 (4) - ^(感觉kiai段这种挺多其他不提了其實有啥問題
01:58:806 - +circle不懂為何

[哈娜]
00:16:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 疾走感十足的stream...不过好像有点突兀求改善提案
00:50:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序调一调更带感(其实是我蛋疼不过我觉得五边形--五角星更符合人体工学?(炸不懂為何
287,114,50985,5,0,0:0:0
193,282,51199,1,0,0:0:0
168,88,51413,1,0,0:0:0
301,231,51628,1,2,0:0:0
110,193,51842,1,10,0:0:0
02:02:342 (1,2,3,4) - 突然hitsounds空白了有点...感觉是跟电音但是前面没这样的3/4自然怪...求改善提案
02:29:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形好歪大丈夫!
萌妹好萌好萌好萌好萌好萌
Melophobia
This song ,,♥‸♥,,

[General]
Size of the current BG is not acceptable, It needs to be under 1024x768.
Also it's quite large (over 1MB), Better to compress it a bit.

[Hana]
00:20:878 (3,1) - Does the spacing really need to be this huge? It doesn't fit music very well and I found it kind of uncomfortable.
02:36:859 (1) - Unsnapped.

[fanzhen]
The tags need to be same throughout difficulties; Remove the extra space between "karenying" and "kioukiou"
00:52:913 (2) - Remove finish from the beginning. There's no notable sound here to support it, And it's inconsistent with 02:03:199 - .
01:10:485 (1) - This newcombo cannot seem to be necessary
01:12:413 (2,1) - Space them at 1.0x please. Currently it looks too crowded.
01:15:199 (3) - Should be stacked under (1) correctlym, Not a big deal though.

[Hard]
00:24:199 (7) - Considering the level of this difficulty, This pattern is kinda hard to read imo. Maybe you can unstack them a bit for better readability.
01:07:056 (1) - Remove finish from the end of this slider and add to the beginning of the next slider? Same for 01:20:770 (1) - , 02:17:770 (3) - , And 02:31:056 (1) - .
01:21:627 (2) - ^
02:18:842 (7) - this combo is quite long compared to the rest, How about adding it here?
02:34:485 - the current kiai time is inconsistant with other diffs; What's the reason to end the kiai time here? the actuall point where melody changes is at 02:34:913 - , So it's the best place to end kiai time isn't it?

[Easy]
Go to the .osu file and remove "SkinPreference:Default" in [General].
00:34:056 (1) - Remove newcombo from here or Add newcombo to 01:44:342 (5) -
01:07:485 (5) - Add newcombo here
02:12:199 (2) - I dislike stacking a note under slider end because it's kinda hard for beginners to read rhythm. consider unstacking please.

I love your map so much >< Call me back for a recheck whenever you want!
Topic Starter
Kotone
I will change later
thank you <3
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