Soror wrote:

<3

kazumikos wrote:

Soror wrote:

<3

=D

Zej's Easy

1. 00:42:749 (1) - Move last point to right 1 grid
2. 01:37:593 (5) - Make to this be beautiful.
   
   SPOILER

   

   256,320,97593,2,0,B|304:384|392:384|448:336|456:256,1,270,0|8

3. 02:41:812 (6) - Add clap here
4. 03:03:843 (1) - Remove NC (Same as 01:46:968 (6) -)
5. 03:10:406 - Add a note?

nich95 wrote:

Hi, kazumikos

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Normal

1. 00:21:421 (6,2) - Stack it. forgot :<
2. 02:02:906 (1,2) - Trying don't overlap, Maybe making new player is strange. fixed
3. 02:06:656 (5) - Add NC k
4. 02:56:812 (2) - Move 2nd point to down 4 grids? why?
5. 03:10:874 (2) - Add clap here? i forgot :< and it should be whistle
6. 03:11:812 (4) - ^

Insane

1. 00:19:781 (6) - Slider end at 00:20:132, then move (7) to 00:20:249. uhmmm ok
2. 00:37:359 (2,3) - It's overlap little. Trying don't overlap, would be better.fixed
3. 00:43:452 (3) - Making the slider like 00:42:984 (2) - ok..

That's all that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star

Good luck~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Pie's Hard
00:28:921 add a circle maybe? <--- make slider double
00:32:437 (4) - adjust the shape? it's not that perfect right now. and don't forget your copied one~! <--- fixed
03:10:406 (1) - i don't think its a symmetrical shape <--- it's symmetric
well i really like the pauses and the way you put the spinner~! <--- Thanks ^^

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hello~! sry for my late mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

this is pretty much an insane diff, you may consider to change the name of this diff
sry couldn't find anything... hey it was [Insane] from the start o3o

Normal

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still couldn't find anything........

Zej's Easy

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00:23:062 (4) - clap
03:17:671 (1) - start at 03:17:906?

ezek wrote:

From my modding queue.

Zej's Easy
00:28:218 (1) - Remove NC?
00:46:968 (3) - Move the third grid 2 grids to the left, it looks better.
01:45:093 (5) - Add NC?
01:46:968 (6,7) - Maybe do this:

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02:03:843 (3) - Just like 00:46:968 (3)

ezek wrote:

Normal
Looks fine to me.

Insane
00:16:499 (4) - Do not touch with 00:16:031 (3) these are 1/4 notes o_O
00:47:671 (7,801:44:156 (7) - ) - ^ with 00:46:968 (6) k
01:44:156 (7) - Maybe like this?

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hmm..k
03:18:140 (1,2,3) - Separate them to make the diff more hard. i'll think abt this

ezek wrote:

Pie's Hard
00:40:874 (1) - It's better like this:

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00:41:812 (3) - ^ Just flip vertically..

Sorry but I'd like my forms~ Thx for mod~

Leorda wrote:

Hi kazu-chan

[Zej's Easy]
00:20:718 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?
00:35:249 (4) - ^

Good luck

Leorda wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
* Your hitsounds during kiai time is monotonus, due there is no clap at 4th white tick. Consider to add clap at 4th white tick for following snare sound <--- I'm not love many hitsounds. I think now it's good follow the claps in song~~

00:41:577 (2,3) - Move 1 grid left for making a symetrical pattern (nazi) <--- fixed
Good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hi kazu-chan

[General]
* Snap the preview time to 01:16:734 or 01:17:906? mm ok

[Normal]
00:23:531 (4,1) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern? ok
00:40:406 (4) - Overlapped by hitbursts from previous object (look at test mode for proof). It could be hidden for beginners for some cases (sometimes, beginners are slow to read this) fixed
00:49:312 (5) - ^ k
01:01:031 (3) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners, because some beginners are didn't notice there is a circle under the slider k
02:12:046 (2) - ^ fixed
02:27:281 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider for your hitsound pattern k

Good luck

Nemis wrote:

[Normal]
02:48:843 (1) - Remove new combo k
02:49:781 (3) - Add new combo
03:09:937 (2,1,2,3,4) - What about change these beats' positions? ok.. can you suggest smth? o3o

[Insane]
00:18:374 (1) - Remove new combo done
00:18:843 (2) - Add new combo ^
01:20:718 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many sliders! Use them to create funny jumps D: i ran out of idea D:

Nice map, i like some movements in Insane, good luck

Nemis wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
00:32:437 (4) - Fix this slider's form <--- nope~
00:33:843 (4) - same ^ <--- nope~
01:31:968 (1) - Remove new combo and <---fixed
01:32:906 (3) - Add new combo (i'm not sure) <---fixed
02:19:781 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - This sliders are boring, like the others before these <--- nope~

1. kiai time Inconsistency in Normal diff, you forget to close the kiai on 03:04:312 -

1. 00:26:343 (1) - copy 00:28:218 (1) - and opposite it (or 00:28:218 (1) - copy 00:26:343 (1) - )
2. 00:35:249 (1) - Spacing
3. 00:48:374 (4) - move the last tick up 1 gird (gird level4)
4. 02:39:468 (5) - Try this
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   247,132,159468,2,0,B|263:90|315:45|413:69|443:139|411:198,1,270,0|8

5. 02:41:812 (6) - ^ if except this, spacing problem here orz
   I love your slider and blanket !!!!!

1. HP-2 AR-1 OD-1
2. 01:01:031 (3) - finish?
   well made!

1. 00:40:874 (6,7,8) - Try this?
   
   SPOILER

   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/439562
   

   324,69,40874,2,0,B|334:23|383:4|440:24|442:85,1,160
   386,128,41577,1,0
   443,184,41812,2,0,B|433:230|384:249|327:229|325:168,1,160

   So great o.o!!!!

1. 01:44:156 (7,1) - Do a blanket like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

Flask wrote:

wa kazu-chan :O!

[General]

1. kiai time Inconsistency in Normal diff, you forget to close the kiai on 03:04:312 - ah sure

[Normal]

1. HP-2 AR-1 OD-1 fixed, im keeping this AR though :v
2. 01:01:031 (3) - finish? mm i dont hear finish here o_o
   well made!

[Insane]

1. 01:44:156 (7,1) - Do a blanket like this? k
   
   SPOILER

   

Flask wrote:

wa kazu-chan :O!

[General]

1. kiai time Inconsistency in Normal diff, you forget to close the kiai on 03:04:312 -

[Zej's Easy]

1. 00:26:343 (1) - copy 00:28:218 (1) - and opposite it (or 00:28:218 (1) - copy 00:26:343 (1) - )
2. 00:35:249 (1) - Spacing
3. 00:48:374 (4) - move the last tick up 1 gird (gird level4)
4. 02:39:468 (5) - Try this
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   247,132,159468,2,0,B|263:90|315:45|413:69|443:139|411:198,1,270,0|8

5. 02:41:812 (6) - ^ if except this, spacing problem here orz
   I love your slider and blanket !!!!!

Pink Agate wrote:

MOD form CLANNAD Modding Queue
sorry ,just mod Zej's Easy

00:59:624 (4) - new combo?
01:29:624 (4) - new combo,I think is important
01:44:624 (4) - ^
02:16:499 (4) - new combo?
02:46:499 (4) - new combo
03:01:499 (4) - ^

good map ,good luck

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
AR -1 <--- FIXED
OD +1 <--- FIXED
03:12:749 (2) - This was kind of obscured by the hitburst from 03:10:406 (1) - <--- Not think what I will be change it~ In game It's looks ok~~~

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:499 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Give around 2 beats for this BPM.
02:33:843 (1) - This is iffy. (soon after a spinner)
03:05:249 (1) - Too soon
fixed :v
[Insane]
00:46:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not really understanding all these little 5-hit streams riddled throughout. Feel odd to play considering the held vocal.
Otherwise this is nice.
k
Be careful when updating the maps. They're all version 9, and sometimes when moving to version 10 the green lines will be moved around. Make backups and make sure everything is ok after uploading.

Garven wrote:

Sorry, lost my tabs and forgot about this >_>

[Easy]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
00:48:374 (4) - I don't recommend having a short repeat slider with more than one repeat in an Easy - especially when you have another hit object so soon afterward.
00:55:874 (1) -
02:05:249 (4) - ^
02:12:749 (1) - ^
01:48:140 - Break, okay. 02:02:906 - playing, cool. 02:18:140 - A break again? Feels way too soon, and you're sitting around for another 10 seconds. zzz
New combo usage is a little weird. I like what you did with the kiais. Think you could apply that same new combo pattern to the rest of the map? At least reduce the usage at the end of the map.

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
00:53:531 (1) - Since you changed the other one, I'll point out the other ones, I guess.
00:57:281 (1) -
02:07:593 (1) -
02:14:156 (2) -
02:34:781 (1) -
02:36:656 (1) -

1. Confirmed the artist and stuff just in case and blah blah blah everything is fine!
   I'm worried about the hitsounds' volume - I believe it's a bit too low, and I can't hear them in some sections. But this is up to you, it isn't so much that it disrupts the gameplay or something like that.

1. The slidertick. Can you use 1? I mean, I can't almost hear them and they could represent a problem for a player that doesn't yet fully understand how sliders work, since you would combo break a lot if you can't follow properly.

1. 00:36:890 (3) - This feels so odd considering the rythm you've been following... I really recommend moving this to 00:36:656 (3) - and adding something at 00:37:124. That's much more intuitive. Keep hitsounds consistent, careful with that.
2. 00:51:421 (3) - This is ULTRA nazi but can you move the middle sliderpoint 1 grid up so that the blanketing looks a bit better?
3. 00:52:124 (1) - It seems pretty pointless to have such a short combo here, I suggest removing the new combo.
4. 00:55:874 (1) - Likewise, I suggest the following: Remove the new combo here, then add a new combo at 00:57:281 (4) -, and then remove the one at 00:58:218 (1) -.
5. 02:14:156 (1) - To keep it consistent with the new combo pattern, why not adding a new combo here?
   
   Maybe I'm being too exquisite with the new combos, you should evaluate how much you're willing to change of that and tell me, I'll act consequently.

1. Ha, the end is fantastic!

Garven wrote:

The tick rate should be set according to the music. The players will figure out how sliders work quickly enough.