Thank you, waiting for Aldwych to fix his diff. :3xxheroxx wrote:
GeneralHard
- • Why didn't you change the video offset? Just look 01:16:248 ~ 01:17:858 for example, -300ms is much better imo. Also, make it consistent between your diffs, right now in Normal is -475ms and in Hard/Insane is -775ms. Urgh I thought I fixed it.
- • 01:03:362 (1,2) - You made this jump on purpose? If I were you I'd keep spacing consistent here. (if you want to keep it then avoid this ugly overlap D:) what the hell is this slider doing here o.o fixed
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Keep doing the same whistle pattern as before (00:37:590 (1,2,3,4) and 00:50:476 (1,2,3,4)), this apply to all the next similar patterns as well (01:16:248 (1,2), 01:29:133 (1,2,3,4), 01:42:019 (1,2,3) and so on). If you don't want to add these whistles then remove the one placed on previous similar patterns too. Done I guess
• 01:06:583 (1) - You added a single combo for the "sha sha sha", good idea, but if I were I'd add a single combo to the next similar patterns to keep a contistency. (01:13:026 (3), 02:04:570 (4), 02:17:456 (4) etc.) Done
• 02:49:670 ~ 03:00:744 - If I were you I'd add a new combo every 8 white ticks, all these combos are not necessary imo. Done.
Insane
- • 00:40:711 (16,1) - Meh, try this spacing? Done
• 00:41:214 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, try to make this pattern better: The spacing becomes too big then D:
• 01:03:362 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing I wrote about Hard diff. ~
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - "it was supposed to looks like boobs, but like a mustache", ok, but make this stream simmetrical at least, right now it looks really weird. It's already symmetrical o.o
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same thing here. This one wasn't xD
• 03:29:133 (9,10) - Uh... what? It's a bug, I suppose, fix this spacing. Fixed ...
That's all, enjoy this nazi mod! o3o/
Call me again after your fixes.
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Orange Caramel - Shanghai Romance
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Topic Starter
Plop! ¦3
La boââte!
Aldwych's NormalThank you!
• 00:35:576 (2,3) - Move these sliders 1/1 earlier and add a circle at 00:37:590. ok
• 00:38:999 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:40:409. Ok
• 01:13:831 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Spacing here is kinda messed up, try to make a more natural flow: Ok, thanks!
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• 01:27:523 (4) - Try this pattern: Ok, why not, but i don't see why i must change here? Anti-flow?
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• 01:45:241 (1) - You added a whistle here so you should add one at the previous sliders too to keep a consistency. (00:53:697 (1) and 01:00:140 (1)) OK
• 01:50:476 (x) - Start a slider here and end it 1/1 later. (or just add 2 circles) Tried to make a nice pattern
• 02:29:133 (4) - Add a repeat. (or add a circle at 02:29:939) Prefer circle
La boââte!
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Hard
Insane
- • 01:45:241 (1,2,3) and 01:51:684 (1,2,3) - Why here 00:53:697 (1,2,3) and here 01:00:140 (1,2,3) you didn't add whistles? Keep hitsounds consistent.
• 03:10:610 (3) - Add a new combo like you did in the previous kiai.
• 03:18:261 (2) - ^
Insane
- • 01:07:187 (3) - Remove clap from start and add it at the end.
• 01:30:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Well, select all these circles and spam ctrl + h, as you see this stream is not perfectly simmetrical, but if you want to keep it like this then np, you barely notice this misalignment while playing.
• 02:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
• 03:10:610 (1) - Reverse this slider. (ctrl + g)
Topic Starter
Fixed everything !
Wiiii <3
no.
Gabe was supposed to mod it.
Gabe was supposed to mod it.
Hi Kurai chan ~ 
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ That's all ~ nice korean song ~
Call me back ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[Hard]
- 00:24:704 (1,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
- 02:18:664 (1) - Use curved slider? looks much better to here,like this.
[Aldwych's Normal]
- AR-1 is better IMO.
- Add finish on these point,sound much better. SPOILER01:06:583 -
01:19:469 -
01:58:127 -
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OK ~ That's all ~ nice korean song ~
Call me back ~
Topic Starter
Everything fixed, thank you Rika-chan ! :3
Ça fait un mois que je te demande. D:Gabe wrote:
no.
Gabe was supposed to mod it.
OK ~ Looks much better ~
Baby ~ Sha Sha Sha GO <3
Baby ~ Sha Sha Sha GO <3
Nya!! <3
nice k-pop song~\o/
SHANGHAI SHANGHAI SHANGRATS
Awesome, congratulations. <3
Gratz \o/
ty for giving us this map, i love it Q__Q -cries of luck- loljk
gz :3
gz :3
Gratz~
gratz!!!!!
Gratz Kura :3