1. Easy (2.31 stars, 180 notes)
2. Hard (4.69 stars, 397 notes)
3. Normal (3.99 stars, 214 notes)
4. Paradise Kiss (4.99 stars, 513 notes)

DeathBlood wrote:

hi~
lyrics mod

01:44:861 - なぜ構うの？自分しか、
01:48:443 - 愛せないくせに
02:20:682 - 夢の続きが見たい

They were only these three places.
good luck

1. 先说个ID的错误……Tags里面。。。T12的ID一共有12个T。。。不是10个……lol
2. 就我个人而言我认为3000ms的Audio Lead-in太长了……而你的SB是从-26开始，这就导致了最前面会有一小段漏出屏幕底色的，建议稍微调整一下什么的……

1. AR5+CS4的对于Easy怎么看都太高了，强烈建议两个都降低1
2. 00:45:644 (1,1,2) - 00:52:809 (1,1,2) - 像这种的节奏也是……感觉上更适合用在Normal里～～而且你也有normal呀～
3. 01:12:510 (1) - 不要做成遮挡而是stack到01:10:719 (1) - 头上？

1. 你看你Easy用4号圈Normal却是3号………………

1. 00:08:704 - 感觉上这里可以加个note？同前面的节奏
2. 00:24:823 (5,6) - 嗯……这里我试图的时候读出来的是Ctrl+r后的方向……
3. 00:48:331 (3) - 试试把这个改成一个note？
4. 00:54:151 (4) - ^
5. 01:00:644 (2,3) - 感觉上这里Slider在前note在后比较舒服～
6. 01:04:226 (2,3) - ^
7. 01:08:032 (3) - 考虑向前移动到红线？
8. 01:21:018 (4) - 叠去后面slider头上如何？

1. 00:19:003 (2,3) - 建议还是整合成一个折返吧…………
2. 00:39:376 (1) - 这个反向跳的flow感觉不是很好也…………
3. 00:52:361 (1) - 考虑和前面的(5)叠？
4. 01:02:659 (3,4) - 感觉上这种1/2的slider头尾连会破坏flow。。。做成1/4的间距什么的？（把3延长1/4）
5. 01:12:174 (2) - 打起来虽然没什么问题……但是这里空掉的一个normal音效……唔……总感觉有一点点别扭…………
6. 01:22:137 (2,3) - 同01:02:659 (3,4)的建议～

1. Difficulty Setting: decrease the AR -1?
2. 00:05:794 (3) - nee, make this slider curve like (1)? too make this pattern have more good flow and seems symmetry orz
3. 00:07:361 (4) - how about make this slider blanketing the next slider like this ?
4. 00:15:197 (1) - I guess more be nice to hear if adding finish sound (soft-default) for following the cymbal sounder
5. 00:15:644 (2) - just-- fixed this curve a bit for make this slider tidier blanketing circle (1).. use this code 8''D
   

   296,112,15644,2,0,B|344:172|292:272|200:248,1,220,8|8

6. 00:43:853 (1) - same think with 00:15:197 , but in here add in beginning
7. 00:51:018 (1) - ^
8. 00:58:182 (1) - ^, just add :''D
9. 01:10:719 (3) - honestly, this slider weird to look orz.. change to another shape??
10. 01:22:361 (4) - maybe, this think will broke the spacing consistent, but can you move this into some grid down? slider border is a bit overlap with (3)
11. 01:51:913 (1) - same, add finish (soft-default) in beginning..
12. 01:59:077 (1) - ^
13. 02:15:644 (3) - add clap? seems a bit quite in here since you add some in before and next
14. 02:21:465 (2) - make this slider symmetry between right and left?
15. 02:36:689 (3) - plz move this some grid left so that not overlap with (2).. sorry for nazi think x''D
16. 02:37:585 (4) - add new combo for consistent comboset?

1. 00:07:585 (7) - for following the music, I guess more better if remove this slider. then, add a circle in here and at 00:08:032
2. 00:15:197 (1) - add finish (soft-default) in beginning :''D similar reason about this in easy diff
3. 00:18:331 (1) - maybe, move the 2nd point into x:236 y:128, then the last point into x:232 y:44 for make that seems blanketing the next pattern x''D
4. 00:43:853 (1) - same with 00:15:197 (1)
5. 00:46:540 (3) - in the reverse and the end i gues more better if add clap instead the finish sound orz
6. 00:50:570 (1) - add finish in the end :''D
7. 00:53:704 (4) - same with 00:46:540 (3)
8. 01:10:271 (3) - add finish default in the end
9. 01:14:973 (3) - make this slider curve like (2)? weird to look during gameplay or make the (2) straight like this
10. 01:25:047 - add a note with finish in here?
11. 01:37:585 (1) - add finish in beginning.. sure use default :''D
12. 01:51:465 (1) - ^ in the end
13. 01:54:600 (3) - you know in here same with 00:46:540 ..
14. 01:58:629 (1) - finish in the end (default)
15. 02:01:764 (3) - yeah, same :''D you should know orz
16. 02:18:779 (2) - add finish default in beginning

1. fine.. but maybe for hitsound can use my suggestion like in other diff x''D

1. 00:14:749 (1) - maybe, remove this new combo and add in the next note? for following the pattern and music
2. 00:15:421 (1) - from suggestion above, in here remove new combo
3. 00:30:421 (4) - maybe, fix this slider a bit symmetry?
   

   320,304,30421,2,0,B|328:252|408:208|480:256|488:320,2,220,10|12|8

4. other fine, but same in here using hitsound suggestion like other diff x''D also, asdfghjkl slider :''D

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

1. Well, AIBat is telling me you have an unused image: sb\c5.png. Remove it if it's not used.
2. 00:00:868 - Add a red line here so that the downbeat is correct.
3. I have a little bit of problem seeing your 3rd combo color, especially in the beginning >< Might just be me, but maybe either remove it or just not use it for the first part?
4. I'll just say it now, this map is greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat >w<

1. 00:07:361 (4) - Not sure about readability since it's a shortslider and starting on a red tick. You could just extend this so it starts at 00:07:137 to avoid anything, but it might be fine as-is too.
2. 00:38:032 (3) - Clap
3. 00:56:391 (1) - A loop might be very confusing for a total beginner. If you can, are you able to change this shape? ><
4. 01:04:003 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap on beginning?
5. 02:51:465 (1,2) - Lower volume a bit since the song is fading?

1. 01:23:256 (4) - NC?
2. 02:51:913 (3,4) - Same as Easy.

1. 01:46:092 (5) - Clap on end?
2. 01:56:391 (3) - The whistle on sliderend here sounds a bit off ><
3. 02:18:779 (6) - Standard soft-hitfinish on the sliderhead?

1. 00:21:018 (4,1,2,3,4) - Well, since you're at it, you could make a pentagon here xD
2. 00:34:898 (6,1) - You should probably spread this a bit more, as it looks like 1/2 while it's not.
3. 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,1) - I see it's a gradual increase in spacing, but I still think it looks better if it's even. Well, if anything, 00:43:741 (4,1) 1 gridlvl4 to the right :p
4. 01:01:764 (1,2) - Can you rework the distance here somehow? Because of the semi-jump at 00:58:182 (1,2), this part really looks like a 1/4 too, so yeah >< Atleast move it more to the top-left or something.
5. 02:51:913 (3,4,5) - Same as Easy and Normal

CXu wrote:

Hi Beren. PM mod request~
Damn I'm slow orz.

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~ okok
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

[Color guide]

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

[General]

1. Well, AIBat is telling me you have an unused image: sb\c5.png. Remove it if it's not used. deleted
2. 00:00:868 - Add a red line here so that the downbeat is correct. added
3. I have a little bit of problem seeing your 3rd combo color, especially in the beginning >< Might just be me, but maybe either remove it or just not use it for the first part? sry no orz
4. I'll just say it now, this map is greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat >w< thanks xD

[Easy]

1. 00:07:361 (4) - Not sure about readability since it's a shortslider and starting on a red tick. You could just extend this so it starts at 00:07:137 to avoid anything, but it might be fine as-is too. k
2. 00:38:032 (3) - Clap k
3. 00:56:391 (1) - A loop might be very confusing for a total beginner. If you can, are you able to change this shape? >< k
4. 01:04:003 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap on beginning? k
5. 02:51:465 (1,2) - Lower volume a bit since the song is fading? k

[Normal]

1. 01:23:256 (4) - NC? k
2. 02:51:913 (3,4) - Same as Easy. k

[Hard]

1. 01:46:092 (5) - Clap on end? k
2. 01:56:391 (3) - The whistle on sliderend here sounds a bit off >< ?_?
3. 02:18:779 (6) - Standard soft-hitfinish on the sliderhead? k

[Paradise Kiss]

1. 00:21:018 (4,1,2,3,4) - Well, since you're at it, you could make a pentagon here xD k
2. 00:34:898 (6,1) - You should probably spread this a bit more, as it looks like 1/2 while it's not. its ok :3 no change
3. 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,1) - I see it's a gradual increase in spacing, but I still think it looks better if it's even. Well, if anything, 00:43:741 (4,1) 1 gridlvl4 to the right :p k
4. 01:01:764 (1,2) - Can you rework the distance here somehow? Because of the semi-jump at 00:58:182 (1,2), this part really looks like a 1/4 too, so yeah >< Atleast move it more to the top-left or something. k
5. 02:51:913 (3,4,5) - Same as Easy and Normal k

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Man, I can't mod ><
Great job! Have a star since I really can't find a lot and I like them sliders

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
红线要868那一条就够了，全难度统一。好

[Easy]
00:05:794 (3) - 这样节奏会不会比较合那个电声。。http://puu.sh/Yno1 改了
00:42:734 (3) - 为什么和00:28:629 (4) - 这里整成了不同的样子？虽然不是什么问题 尝试改成一样但是后面的note都要移位太复杂了 就没改
01:32:659 - 这么短break，还不如删了加点啥（或者Easy不太合适。。那就长点和Normal那样）删了..

[Normal]
没啥问题也实在没啥特色……我觉得2哈还是太横平竖直了点就是。。。

[Hard]
00:13:853 (2,3) - flow感有些不对，如果2可以离远些，把3反过来，45转上去会自然些？ 好
00:44:077 (1) - 我自己是没跳的感觉。。即使是小跳。跳了~
00:45:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这里先叠起来的话，67的叠就显得没那么特别了，建议改正常移动 嗯
01:51:913 (1) - 上面俩问题重复次 ^

[Paradise Kiss]
00:47:435 (1,2,4,5,1) - make this larger a bit. ok
00:54:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:40:271 (4) - too dangerous you know. i know...changed
01:51:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - should make the spacing consistent here imo. ok
01:54:823 (1,2) - ..but this one could be a jump? 找不到好位置跳就没跳......
02:33:107 (1) - ...not sure but i prefer to change this to another shape.changed

Beren wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

Nice map Nice SB.