Hi, from the Queue!
General
01:44:766 - Ending kiai here and starting 01:46:701 - here again is not right, 01:46:701 - the second start doesnt match the sound, you should delete these sections so theres a whole kiai part
- 02:00:249 - Same here
02:48:637 - This kiai also should be deleted, it doesnt fit
03:50:572 - And again like this ^Normal01:25:895 - Add a circle to give better transition
01:29:282 (1) - Remove NC
Hard00:31:701 (2,3,5,1,2) - Spacing is changing, you should choose one constant spacing.
- 00:32:669 (5,1) - 00:31:701 (2,3) - are not like the following spacing
00:40:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The whole spacing is wrong here especially 00:41:862 (5,6) - this01:18:153 (5) - NC
01:30:491 (1) - Remove NC
03:37:024 (1,1) - This is a little unreadable due to the hitburst at 1, i disagree with this pattern, try to avoid it by moving the slider a little left03:37:024 (1) - Remove NC
Insane00:22:991 (6,7,1) - Spacing is inconsistent
00:26:137 (3,4) - ^
00:44:766 (1,2) - ^
00:52:024 (5,1) - Wrong spacing
01:25:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - Streams doesnt relate to anything in the BG music, it needs to be changed to something matching the song01:37:991 (5) - NC to show the jumps
01:44:766 (6,1) - Inconstistent spacing, it needs to be more away
02:00:250 (10,1) - ^02:09:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack them properly
02:16:217 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing again
02:38:959 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:40:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:42:346 (5,1) - ^
02:46:701 (6,1) - Inconstistent spacing, it needs to be more away02:51:540 (6,1) - Reverse NC
(Jericho2442 Mod)ok just a light mod atm to get rid of some of the unrankable issues
00:25:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing here is a lil inconsistant, just needs a small cleanup
00:35:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why 2 different spacings here?, the song doesnt ask for a jump or antijump at this moment so it kinda feels out of place, i would advise to remove the jump section of this pattern and the pattern before it, it makes it flow much better
00:40:895 (1,2,3) - again this jump feels forced, there is not really a need for it
00:44:766 (1,2,3) - broken spacing here, all these are the same timing and also not a jump, yet the spacing is broken, make the spacing of all these 3 notes the same
00:52:508 (1) - needs a lot more distance from the pattern before it, where it currently is makes it feel ugly to play because the song is still strong yet your map stops and goes nowhere.
01:22:508 (2,1) - again make these closer, the pattern before it is a slow flowing patten then suddenly this jump, feels too sudden and out of place
01:34:362 (5,6) - either remove the jump here or add a jump at 01:36:298 (6,7) - bacause your breaking your own pattern
01:45:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern needs much more distance from the pattern before it, its waay too close
01:48:637 (6) - stacking this on the bottom of the slider before it flows much better
02:00:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the same problem, the spacing is too close to the pattern before, maybe v flip this
02:38:959 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels out place, at this point in the map you have a faster flow then suddenly this comes and slooooows it down way too sudden, i advise to remap this part to keep the fast flow going
02:44:040 (3,4) - this jump is too far, shorten it
02:47:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - again with being too close to the pattern before it, apply the same suggestions everytime you have copy pasted a section i guess
02:58:314 (1,2,3) - this is totally unrankable, two completely different timings used with the identical spacing with one small combo. needs fixing
03:00:250 (1,2,3) - again the same here
03:02:185 (1,2,3) - again
03:04:120 (1,2,3) - again here
GL