1. Too big notes. CS +1
2. 00:03:876 (1) - These repetitions don't follow music or vocal. Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Add a note at 00:05:092 (2) - Start slider at 00:05:497 (3) - finish slider at 00:06:308 (3) - and add a note at 00:06:714 (4) -
3. 00:22:524 (3) - Make this slider straight please
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:632 (2) - Add a note there. Newbies can get confused with that empty spot and also follows vocals better imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:47:660 (1) - This overlap looks ugly. Please, fix it.
6. 00:56:579 (4) - This note is not stacked properly. Fix it or remove the stack. I would remove the stack but it's up to you.
7. 01:00:632 (1) - Another ugly overlaped slider, please fix it. Suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:119 (2) - This slider has too many repetitions, can confuse newbies and also, it doesnt' follow vocals very good. I Suggest you to change it. Something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Add a note at 01:07:119 (2) - Start slider at 01:07:524 (3) - finish at 01:07:930 (3) - and add a note at 01:08:335 (4) -
9. 01:14:416 (3) - Place this slider properly. It's touching the HP bar.
10. 01:20:092 (2) - Confusing repetitions. Try this, fits better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Remove one repetition so slider will finish at 01:20:903 (2) - and add a note at 01:21:308 (3) -

1. CS +2. Notes are too big.
2. 00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) - First two sliders are good but the other two are not following anything. Try this, it follows vocals much better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Add note at 00:45:835 (3) - , start the last slider at 00:46:038 (4) - and finish it at 00:47:254 -
   If you want the x and y points for slider's cube:
   
   SPOILER

   x:400 y:180
   x:320 y:320
   x:200 y:320
   x:120 y:180

3. 00:47:660 (1) - This slider is touching the HP bar. Fix it.

1. 00:05:497 (1) - To follow vocals with combos, remove NC
2. 00:06:105 (2) - NC
3. 00:07:119 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:08:538 (4) - NC
5. 00:09:957 (4) - NC
6. 00:10:362 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:21:511 (4) - Remove this note. The previous slider follows music perfectly.
8. 00:35:295 (2) - Remove the repeating slider and add notes at 00:35:295 (2) - and at 00:35:497 (3) - It feels less confusing and follows music better.

SPOILER

Mamosora wrote:

http://puu.sh/1ZGCL
Muzu圖做好了~
至於我的Oni圖可留可不留啦(笑

新年快樂^^

Blackshane wrote:

Mamosora wrote:

http://puu.sh/1ZGCL
Muzu圖做好了~
至於我的Oni圖可留可不留啦(笑

新年快樂^^

这个oni留下来的话就8个难度了，unrankable
新年快乐~

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

1. Missing Skin Files:
   spinner-background.png
   
2. Skin Dimensions
   spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 50x50).
   
3. Unused Image Files:
   spinner-background.jpg
   
4. BTW, this BG is a bit HHHH > < （要考虑到家长冲进房门的时别人的感受..当然不换完全没问题）

1. 00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3
2. 00:42:389 (2) - Move it 1 grid left will be better, since it can overlap the tail of 00:39:551 (3), looks better then.
3. 01:09:551 (2) - Maybe there is a missing whistle on the start of slider? I guess it is necessary, it can keep consistent for these whistle.
4. 01:16:443 (2) - Make the beginning of this slider overlap on the beginning of 01:14:416 (3) - , I guess it will look better.

1. 00:00:734 - It can be merged to the previous red timing section, since you only change the volume.
2. 00:03:876 (1) - According to the music, I think putting a slider here is the best way. So why not prepose the next slider here? And also do not forget to put this circle to 00:05:092.
   00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3
3. 00:33:065 (3) - Also according to the music, why not draw a slider such as below? It fits the music better imo.
   
4. 00:43:605 - Since vocal "a" here, so I suggest resolve this slider into a circle and a 1/2 slider.
   
5. 01:18:774 - Wait.. It is a bit difficult to some beginners, and it is discordant in the whole "Lime Bell" diff. 01:18:470 (4) - so it should be a 1/1 slider and following a circle.

1. Try CS+1? This is a Hard diff but its settings are so low.. You'd better also HD6 AR7 OD5 :<
2. 00:03:470 (2) - I feel a bit weird about this slider, a 1/2 slider is enough to map here in my view. Tripple 1/4 sounds really strange here.
3. 00:14:619 - Needless green timing sections, just remove it

1. 00:09:754 (4) - Overlapping on the (3) is better in my view, then (2) and (5) can keep symmetrical.
2. 00:21:916 (1) - I think newcombo here is better than yours, since it can show the newcombo clearly and it is close to 00:21:714 (9).
3. 00:46:849 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Since when you overlap something, it will have skewing. (You can push F5 to inspect this). So move them to x:304 y:136 to correct this.

1. 00:07:119 (1) - Try jump since the vocal has emphasis.
2. 01:20:092 (6) - Tooooo close ! Where is your spacing? I would rather do jump on this :<

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

1. Missing Skin Files:
   spinner-background.png
   
2. Skin Dimensions
   spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 50x50).
   
3. Unused Image Files:
   spinner-background.jpg k now i can't find probable skin file.. i will fixed it this weekend
   
4. BTW, this BG is a bit HHHH > < （要考虑到家长冲进房门的时别人的感受..当然不换完全没问题）

[Ash Roller]

1. 00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3 k
2. 00:42:389 (2) - Move it 1 grid left will be better, since it can overlap the tail of 00:39:551 (3), looks better then.k
3. 01:09:551 (2) - Maybe there is a missing whistle on the start of slider? I guess it is necessary, it can keep consistent for these whistle.k
4. 01:16:443 (2) - Make the beginning of this slider overlap on the beginning of 01:14:416 (3) - , I guess it will look better.k

[Lime Bell]

1. 00:00:734 - It can be merged to the previous red timing section, since you only change the volume. i think it is ok
2. 00:03:876 (1) - According to the music, I think putting a slider here is the best way. So why not prepose the next slider here? And also do not forget to put this circle to 00:05:092.k
   00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3k
3. 00:33:065 (3) - Also according to the music, why not draw a slider such as below? It fits the music better imo.k
   
4. 00:43:605 - Since vocal "a" here, so I suggest resolve this slider into a circle and a 1/2 slider.k
   
5. 01:18:774 - Wait.. It is a bit difficult to some beginners, and it is discordant in the whole "Lime Bell" diff. 01:18:470 (4) - so it should be a 1/1 slider and following a circle.k

[Blood Leopard]

1. Try CS+1? This is a Hard diff but its settings are so low.. You'd better also HD6 AR7 OD5 :<k
2. 00:03:470 (2) - I feel a bit weird about this slider, a 1/2 slider is enough to map here in my view. Tripple 1/4 sounds really strange here.k
3. 00:14:619 - Needless green timing sections, just remove itk

[Black lotus]

1. 00:09:754 (4) - Overlapping on the (3) is better in my view, then (2) and (5) can keep symmetrical.k
2. 00:21:916 (1) - I think newcombo here is better than yours, since it can show the newcombo clearly and it is close to 00:21:714 (9).k
3. 00:46:849 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Since when you overlap something, it will have skewing. (You can push F5 to inspect this). So move them to x:304 y:136 to correct this.k

[Sky Raker]

1. 00:07:119 (1) - Try jump since the vocal has emphasis.k
2. 01:20:092 (6) - Tooooo close ! Where is your spacing? I would rather do jump on this :<k

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Wonderful!

Frostmourne wrote:

hi

as request from a new mapper

General
would like to know what do the diffs' name mean ? .. it would be nice if you just can follow the formal patter "Easy normal hard insane" something like this is definitely acceptable more than this, if you have the reason , please let me know
My diffs include no GD in osu mode so I decided to use this diffs' name
There is one ranked song of Accel World use diffs' name like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48438
I choose these diff's name because characters correspond to those diff: 1.They are all appear in anime. 2. They are all Sliver Crow's good friends. 3. They are all girls in reality. Then I roughly place them with levels from novels and animes mentioned
wonder why spinner-background.jpg has this resolution. I think it should be 1024x768 to make it proper ratio (because you will see some blank black color on the top and bottom of the screen
Well, all skins made by Ts8zs and i change little about them.
I also find it unsuitable about spinner's skin so I decided to delete spinner's part
Now i turn to Kuria for a permission of using his spinner's skin from his ranked copy of the same song
You have the video in the folder but you haven't added it. Please add it properly to all osu standard diff (don't add into Taiko diffs)
fixed
change Accel world to Accel World in the source for every diff
fixed

Ash Roller
01:07:119 (1) - remove NC here , it's too short compared to the rest in this diff
01:20:092 (1) - ^
All fixed

Lime Bell
00:11:984 (1) - should have finish sound here as you add in Ash Roller
00:33:065 (3) - clap on the first point of slider plzz , this feels empty cuz you add on every first down beat before
01:02:254 (1,2) - ,00:46:038 (4) - , 01:15:227 (1,2,3) - some sliders like this are hard to read by beginner (the spinner that has repeat more than one)
I hope you will not bring this kind of sliders into the next map in the future
All fixed

Blood Leopard
change to HP 5 , it's quite unbalance here
00:48:268 (2,3,4) - these notes are under the hitburst of stream from 00:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and it looks really hard to read, hopefully see you avoid something like this in the future too
All fixed

Black Lotus
this diff is overmapped , it's bad thing when you put something like
00:23:437 (2) -
00:23:639 (4) -
00:24:247 (7) -
00:24:653 (10) -
00:26:882 (3) -
00:27:288 (5) -
00:35:396 (3) -
and so many on the point that the music doesn't sound in the reality
keep in mind that I'm not sure if you can get ranked with this overmapping but I know this is the first map and Insane+
hope you won't do something like this in the future
01:07:119 (5,6) - this distance is just ridiculous , you have to move 01:07:119 (5) - and 01:07:322 (6) - to other position far away from this right now because it is confusing , as you see , (5) is really close to (4) which has the almost same distance as (3) to (4)
I do this diff for stream so maybe it has many overmapped parts
I would change some part I also fell not suitable.. But others I want to remain
Others all fixed

Sky Raker
HP-1 OD-1 , as this diff is supposed to be an Insane , Black Lotus should have the greater setting of difficulty
00:45:430 (2,3) - similar problem to the Black Lotus diff , the distance looks totally the same as 00:44:416 (4,5) - so it is really confusing you should move 00:45:835 (3) - far away from (2) to adjust the proper spacing
01:26:578 (1,2,3,4) - move these whole notes to x:180 y:224 , 01:26:578 (1) - this note will completely stack with 01:25:565 (3) - and the overlapping at 01:26:984 (3) - will look better
All fixed

for all Taiko diffs
reduce all volume in the timing mode to around 60-70 % because the music is not that loud but the whole notes sound really noisy if you compare them
Fixed

It's good enough for the 1st map.. , let me know when you're done fixing!

1. The sliderball's direction cannot follow the correct way after repeating, and map specific skin.ini is still not available now. I highly suggest you get something else for sliderb.png(s).
2. combo number is really difficult to tell for my eye.
3. spiner-background is kind of not same theme with your other skin elements.
4. the resolution of your video is kind of odd for a widescreen one. and a bit low compared with 1k bitrate. here is one for you: http://puu.sh/26dD9
5. source: Accel World
6. kuroyukihime in tag -- I think it should be separated as koroyuki hime?
7. maybe do a horizontal flip to your hitburst?
8. place your first ending-KIAI section at 01:11:984 in all diffs. it fits much better than current one

1. 00:14:416 (1) - add 1 repeat? there does be something and a slider jump also would be great for the strong vocal.
2. 00:21:714 - claps from here became quite loud. plz down the volume. and I suggest you keeping them all in same volume. difference between 50 and 70 is really huge and you should use them carefully. (same thing also happens in other standard diffs, I won't repeat.
3. 00:47:660 - you should make the hitnormal audiable since here, otherwise players are hitting the air. (soft 70, if you need a number)
4. 00:48:470 (5) - what's this slider for. not vocal, nor instrument as I see.
5. 00:57:389 ~ 00:59:619 - why ignored the 3/4 vocals from here.
6. 01:16:849 (1) - i know you wanna keep same shape with 01:16:038 (3) but, this is a big fail as a 3/4 slider usage. highly suggest you keep 1/2 length and cover vocal.
7. 01:28:200 (9) - this note reminds me that... how about add a note at 00:11:984? it also fits there as a note before spinner.

1. 00:10:565 (2,3,4,5) - kind of odd and senseless, simple 3/4 rhythm works much better imo, like 00:11:173 (6,7,8).
2. 00:11:883 (1) - this starting place is X. add note at 00:11:984 and put the spinner after that.
3. 00:15:227 (1) - 1/2 repeat-slider is kind of misleading here cuz of the obvious 3/4 vocal. highly suggest you do the same with 00:18:470 (1) here.
4. 00:20:092 (1,2) - no, this is out of music. you can choose using 4 1/2 notes to cover the drums or a 3/4 repeat slider to cover the vocal. (I suggest the first one)
5. 00:22:322 (4,5,6) - we rarely use 2 triples so closely, cuz they play and sound bad. try remove (5) and rearrange the spacing around here.
6. 00:43:200 (3,4,5) - almost the same issue with 00:10:565 (2,3,4,5), and for here, you also missed vocal at 00:43:403. 3 1/2 notes or something like that is much better.
7. 00:47:660 - you should make the hitnormal audiable since here, follow the suggestion in Sky Raker (and do the same thing in other standard diffs.
8. 00:48:673 (2,3,4) - kind of overmapping.
9. 01:08:741 (1,2) - this 3/4 not good. vocal here is 1/2 and nothing special at 01:09:045
10. 01:11:984 (1,2,3) - highly suggest you keep this same with 01:12:795 (4,5)
11. 01:19:281 (1,2) - NG 3/4 again.
12. 01:20:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - can you make this blanket look better?
13. 01:23:741 (7,8,9,10,11) - overmapped, I'd suggest you use 3 notes instead of 5
14. 01:25:464 (4) - consider removing this, almost the same issue like my first line about this diff.

1. 00:17:457 (2,3) - make this 1 1/1 slider for the vocal?
2. 00:20:092 (1,2) - 4 1/2 notes fit better here imo
3. 00:37:119 (1,2,3,4) - suggest make this a 1/2 rhythm
4. 00:38:741 (3) - ^
5. 00:52:119 (5) - ^
6. 01:11:578 (5,1) - broken spacing
7. 01:18:470 (1) - use 3/4+1/2 slider is much better than a repeat.
8. 01:19:281 (2,3) - this 3/4 is not good. vocal is all 1/2 and nothing at 01:19:585.
9. 01:24:551 (5,1) - broken spacing cuz of the copy paste.

1. stack leniency 7, the 1/1 stackings are broken!

1. lower the volume before 00:15:227, also do this in other taiko diffs.
2. 00:13:403 - add don
3. 00:34:078 - add don
4. 00:51:308 (202) - move to 00:51:511
5. 00:52:119 (206) - move to 00:52:322
6. 01:00:835 - remove?

1. 00:21:714 - seems you kept following strictly to vocal even the intro part is over, which is not good in a taiko oni and for this song imo. Such as the empty at 00:22:322 and 00:23:943 and 00:24:349, these blanks are some place where the music is still going without any obvious change but you stopped. That's kind of hurt. Things like this happened a lot in this diff x_x.
2. 00:33:369 (141) - and here, I think 1/2 can do much better than a 3/4 rhythm. You're ignoring many places such as heavybeats or unique rhythm, and focus only on vocal.
3. 00:34:484 - obvious triple here.

1. blanks like 00:00:633 ~ 00:01:241 and 00:02:254 ~ 00:02:862 are annoying me.
2. 00:31:950 (1) - remove?
3. 00:32:457 (1) - ^
4. 00:44:619 - add don?
5. 00:51:308 (1) - remove?
6. 00:52:119 (2) - ^
7. 00:54:349 - add don?
8. 01:06:106 (1,2,1,1) - 1/2 rhythm fit better here imo
9. 01:11:984 ~ 01:14:214 - I think you should do something around the 3/4 vocal instead of triple and 5s (which is already filling this oni diff)
10. 01:17:356 (2) - remove? the vocal does have a clear end
11. 01:21:916 - add don?
12. some place I think is too much, could be better if you separate them into some parts: 01:17:660 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1), 01:19:079 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2), 01:23:335 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1).
13. 01:28:302 (1) - remove

1. you forgot to set the make taiko diffs' first KIAI ends to 01:11:984.

1. 00:43:200 (1,1,1) - cancel new combo
2. 01:19:281 (1,2) - i means this 3/4 is not good (short as NG), the vocal is all 1/2 here and I think that can work better with 01:20:092 (3,4,5,6) .

1. 01:11:984 (1) - spacing, it needs x1.00 distance with the previous 01:11:578 (5).
2. 01:24:957 (1) - ^

1. surprised by the improvement, good job.
2. 01:15:126 - add don here, and remove 01:15:329 (368), might do adjustment about the rhythm after this, thus add don at 01:15:937
3. 01:16:545 (375) - remove, add don at 01:17:153.
4. 01:22:727 - add don, remove 01:23:031 (406).
5. 01:24:146 (412) - big ka

1. 01:28:302 (1) - i still think a removal is better.

Colin Hou wrote:

rebubbled, 元宵节快乐

raririn wrote:

哎 真是好长时间了呢
加油

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

..
好..
好事多磨

Zeroarg wrote:

Go ranked *w*

OniJAM wrote:

Thank you all. But I maynot repending it soon, just because my study...
I will try to remap this beatmap.
I want to fix two Insane diffs into one. and add Futsuu and Kantan diff for Taiko, 7K EZ NM HD SHD for mania.
so it will be 12 diffs then.
But just wait until middle of June.

1. Timing: offset (+12).
2. Hitsound: Fixed some weird places/parts.
3. Pattern embellished.
4. Useless new combo wiped off.

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

mingmichael wrote:

hey Oni here the mods that you requested to me~

[Muzukashii]

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

[Oni]

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

goodluck!

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

ts8zs wrote:

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

OniJAM wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

不好意思没和包子你和@Mamosora 说就把你们俩的Oni和我remake的だ部分拼成了Collab Oni...
“だが、すべて、私の私利私欲のために”
电脑被小学生占领了一天今晚改图还有包子放心不会没你事的……

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

~Ash Roller~

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

~Lime Bell~

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

~Sky Raker~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

~Black Lotus~

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

tetsutaro wrote:

***中文開首語還沒有寫好，就只放banner算了***

[基本]
<太鼓> 因為黃色連打、旋轉音符不是必須打擊的元素，所以用法與應援團滑條有不同。下面再作詳細的解說。
使用衝衝時間煙火不當：Offset 71996 的調時區間改至 75238 (比下一區間差1毫秒)

[太鼓梅級] 目測難度：梅級1星
音符總體以2拍分隔為主實在太稀疏。開首時 (00:15:239 前) 這樣還OK，但是衝衝時間 (01:02:266~ )麻煩再加強。以下附上本家コネクト譜面作參考用：

コネクト 3/3/3/5

00:33:077 (20) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (32) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓竹級] 目測難度：竹級3星
00:33:888 (35) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (56) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓松級] 目測難度：松級7星
00:00:645 ~ 00:15:239 - 開首開太猛，衝衝時間被比下去了。建議只跟鋼琴音

[太鼓鬼級] 目測難度：鬼級8星

[Ash Roller]
除了總體1拍節奏悶得很之外都沒有問題

[Lime Bell]
也是悶。A段建議採用完全歌詞取向
00:36:320 (3) - 前移1/2拍; 00:37:131 (4) - 前移至00:36:726開始，延長成2拍長; 00:37:739 (5) - 改成2個單體音符
00:39:361 (3) - 前移1/2拍，延長成1.5拍長或是00:39:969加單體音符

Mamosora wrote:

嘛... 上傳者是你 給你的.osu檔也是你的財產了w
remap辛苦了 有甚麼需要幫助的可以隨時PM我~

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ from my queue
please tell me what did you fix and did not fix.
Sky Raker

1. 00:56:185 (2) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 01:10:374 (1,2,3,4) - it can be boring to player. change like -> Nice idea
   
3. 01:27:401 (5) - make reverse slider -> Okay
   
4. 01:28:212 - add circle here Okay

Black Lotus

1. 00:04:699 (7) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 00:11:996 (3) - place here -> Fixed
   
3. 00:29:428 (4) - ctrl + g Changed in my way
4. 00:30:644 (3,2) - overlap perfectly Fixed
5. 01:10:780 (2,3,4) - doesn't fit as well. -> Okay
   

GL