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ClariS - Wake Up (TV Size)

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JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo

tine30sakura wrote:

JoJo Insane

00:14:355 (8,9,10) 這好棒
00:36:968 這裡之後改用 normal1的音效比較適合
後面的難度好像都是一樣的建議... normal1和soft1的clap其實可以混著用...
(不過這已經很難改了 設定甚麼的 :lol: ) //是~ 而且这部分我个人还是更喜欢S1的clap~
01:11:514 (1) 這個的間距在下來一點是不是比較好? //这样的话后面就难处理了;A; 实际上现在的间距也不算太难 :>
01:25:832 (2) 跳到下面 //?呃?
01:26:286 (1) 在跳回上面 後面的 (2,3,4) 看要向左還是向右繞菱形 如何?//这里基本上还是保留,但是改成顺时针了 :>
Thanks~
http://puu.sh/OPXF
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

tine30sakura wrote:

for m4m

Insane

00:18:105 +clap
00:18:332 (1) 把whistle去掉改clap
00:18:332 (2) 00:18:332 (1) whistle去掉
00:18:559 (1) 把whistle和clap去掉 (這拍音樂本身有音效) 這裏音效想要凸出音樂,不改。
00:20:832 +clap
00:21:561 (2) +clap
看這樣如何?不太好聽..沒改
其實我覺得在 00:36:968 之前 soft1-clap 這個音效都還可以用 (滿動感的)其實我本來就是這樣用的不過效果好像不太好
00:49:468 (1,2,3,4) 不排正方形嗎 0.0這不就正方形么,歪了而已,fixed

Hard
00:33:332 (2) +soft的finish
00:34:014 +soft的finish
如何 0.0 ?不太好聽

大概就這樣吧，排列其實滿棒的，好譜 Good luck 'u'b
thanks~

EDIT:@JoJo:
00:00:605 (1) - 頭少了個finish?
00:26:059 (1) - 可以調少些點么,有點被吓到
00:29:468 (11) - ^
01:25:604 (1) - 這裏其實應該是clap音而不是finish,01:25:832 (2) - 反之這其實是finish而不是clap
01:24:923 (3) - 尾巴很明顯有finish音。
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Fixed some > </

http://puu.sh/PK4B
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
hi karen o_o/ , as request :P

249's Easy '_'
fine !

Sekai's Normal 'A'
00:44:695 (5) - maybe new combo here since now it's too long :(
00:48:559 (2) - why don't start this slider at 00:48:332 ? I feel it gives more natural and easier to play :lol:
00:55:377 (3,4) - remove these two notes here. I feel it is not intuitive from my playing. , just add slider at 00:55:150 (3) - and end at 00:55:605 (4) - would be nice :oops:
01:09:923 (3,4) - here ^ , maybe.. but if you don't want to follow , I can't force you o..o''
01:25:832 (5) - finish should be here :D for greater sound

Hard 'v'
01:19:241 (1) - I feel like it's easier to read when you move this note on this slider's head >01:19:468 (2) -
(it's a bit hard to read because of spacing = ='')

JoJo 'x'
Nice ~ 'x'

Insane 'w'
Nice ! 'w'

Good Luck , star here xD
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Frost >< fixed most of those stuff~

http://puu.sh/Qxtn
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone
uploaded,thx~
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
irc modded w

baka KPY
18:27 kanpakyin: : Hi, I would like to do a IRC Taiko mod with you, do you have any spare time now?
18:27 Netsukawa: : owob
18:27 Netsukawa: : sure
18:27 *kanpakyin is playing (ClariS - Wake Up (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800] [Net's Taikowo] <Taiko>
18:27 kanpakyin: : This map
18:27 Netsukawa: : owo
18:28 *Netsukawa is editing (ClariS - Wake Up (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800]
18:28 Netsukawa: : ok ~!
18:29 kanpakyin: : 00:07:650 (18) - don here?
18:29 Netsukawa: : okey
18:30 kanpakyin: : 00:26:286 (83,84,85) - I think ddk is much better than kkd
18:30 Netsukawa: : ok ~
18:32 kanpakyin: : 00:34:014 (116,117,118) - orz...I would remove the triplet if I were you becuase it doesn't fit the music that
18:32 kanpakyin: : much..
18:32 kanpakyin: : probably change it to 1/2?
18:32 Netsukawa: : sure
18:33 kanpakyin: : 00:39:695 (140,141,142,143) - -__- The triplet follows nothing...would you remove the triplet and make it
18:33 kanpakyin: : like this: x xx x x
18:34 kanpakyin: : x (x)x < (x) this note on blue tick
18:34 Netsukawa: : ermm
18:35 Netsukawa: : or change to 1/2 :D ?
18:35 kanpakyin: : yep
18:35 kanpakyin: : you can
18:35 Netsukawa: : ww
18:36 kanpakyin: : 00:49:923 (179,180,181,182) - Remove all finish and than change it to dddk? It fits the drum sound much
18:36 kanpakyin: : better >_>
18:36 Netsukawa: : 00:51:514 (182) - remove this finish too...?
18:37 kanpakyin: : lol
18:37 kanpakyin: : wait
18:37 *Netsukawa misunderstand
18:37 Netsukawa: : orz
18:37 kanpakyin: : 00:49:923 ~ 00:50:605 - This 4 notes
18:38 Netsukawa: : baka ww
18:38 kanpakyin: : change it to dddk without finish sound >_>
18:39 Netsukawa: : 00:50:150 (179,180,181,182,183) - ddddk ?
18:39 Netsukawa: : orz orz orz
18:39 kanpakyin: : hum? = =
18:39 kanpakyin: : The notes before kiai time
18:39 kanpakyin: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399116
18:39 kanpakyin: : The notes i highlighted
18:39 Netsukawa: : wwwwwwwwww
18:40 kanpakyin: : can you get it now?
18:40 Netsukawa: : I thought it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399120
18:40 Netsukawa: : ww
18:40 Netsukawa: : you said dddk
18:40 Netsukawa: : orz
18:40 kanpakyin: : lol
18:40 Netsukawa: : *d d d k
18:40 Netsukawa: : lol
18:40 kanpakyin: : d d d k <should be like this ._.
18:40 Netsukawa: : Yes w
18:41 Netsukawa: : done !
18:41 kanpakyin: : 00:54:241 (199,200,201,202,203) - ddkdk?
18:42 Netsukawa: : done
18:42 kanpakyin: : 01:27:195 (1) - I would remove the spinner if I were you
18:42 Netsukawa: : ok =w=
18:43 kanpakyin: : 01:26:059 (366,367,368,369,370) - Remove the finish sound?
18:44 Netsukawa: : ok
18:44 Netsukawa: : That's all ?
18:44 kanpakyin: : yep

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Title:Wake Up (TV Size)
Artist:ClariS
Creator:karenying
Version:Net's Taikowo
Source:Moyashimon Returns
Tags:tales of agriculture opening byakugan249 -sekai- sekai netsukawa jojo

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YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
IRC mod with KPY-sama

SPOILER
08:16 kanpakyin: : hi could you have any spare time? I would like to do a irc mod with you
08:17 Byakugan249: : oh? which map?
08:17 *kanpakyin is editing (ClariS - Wake Up (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800]
08:17 Byakugan249: : alright let's go
08:18 kanpakyin: : 00:01:968 (2) - How about placing a whistle here? A whistle sounds great to me
08:19 kanpakyin: : 00:03:332 (4) - ^ if you fix that
08:19 Byakugan249: : no i want that part to be with no whisles or claps... it's more like an introduction to the song
08:19 kanpakyin: : k
08:21 kanpakyin: : 00:20:605 (3) - How about placing some special shape like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399146 you need to do some adjustment on spacing if you want to
08:21 kanpakyin: : change it
08:22 Byakugan249: : ohh that slider. alright i'll do it
08:24 kanpakyin: : 00:27:877 (2) - This slider may make confusion to newbie, I fare that they can't recognize the sliderpath. I would like to simplify the slider if I were you.
08:25 Byakugan249: : ooh uhh sorry this is the best i can come up with :<
08:26 kanpakyin: : ok then, just leave this to bat's judgement. \:D/
08:26 Byakugan249: : i tried adjusting it in the past, but it always turns out bad--alright
08:28 kanpakyin: : 01:00:605 (4) - Since the slider was ended by vocal, so I think a note at 01:01:741 - would be nice.
08:28 kanpakyin: : to follow the vocal
08:29 Byakugan249: : no i feel that it'd be too hard for beginners to clear. it feels as if i'm rushing through the map to get it done
08:31 kanpakyin: : 01:04:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape would be much better if you can use "Create polygon circles" function.
08:31 kanpakyin: : PS, use scale function to adjust the spacing
08:31 Byakugan249: : orz havent used that feature that much...only used it here and there
08:32 kanpakyin: : .__.
08:32 Byakugan249: : because i do my patterns manually...
08:32 Byakugan249: : i don't want a program to do all the work D:
08:33 kanpakyin: : ok...
08:34 kanpakyin: : 01:18:332 (2) - Change to normal hitsound instead?
08:34 Byakugan249: : while the finish is intact?
08:34 kanpakyin: : Remove it if you want
08:34 kanpakyin: : i mean the finish
08:35 Byakugan249: : no i feel that it'll ruin the consistency in finishes for this combo...it'll sound weird for me
08:35 Byakugan249: : if i remove it, it'll follow the drums...in this case, i'm following the vocals
08:36 kanpakyin: : 00:27:877 (2) - Is it impossible to fix?
08:36 Byakugan249: : sorry for me yea...i tried adjusting it, but it always turns out bad in the end
08:37 kanpakyin: : ok then.
08:37 kanpakyin: : 00:49:014 (2) - How about changing the position a bit, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399154
08:38 Byakugan249: : looking at that makes me feel uncomfortable because of the direction it's taking D:
08:39 kanpakyin: : well, that all
08:39 kanpakyin: : please upload the diff with this chatlog thanks~
08:40 Byakugan249: : oh that's it? wow it went quicker than i thought...alright then ty for the mod :D

And here's the diff
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Wake Up -Tv Size-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 50374
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Wake Up (TV Size)
Artist:ClariS
Creator:karenying
Version:249's Easy '_'
Source:Moyashimon Returns
Tags:tales of agriculture opening byakugan249 -sekai- sekai netsukawa jojo

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"wallpaper01_1024.JPG"
Video,0,"Wake Up.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
605,454.545454545455,4,2,1,70,1,0
22877,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
29695,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
30150,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
36968,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
51514,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
51627,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
66059,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
66173,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 253,234,128
Combo2 : 245,151,88
Combo3 : 126,254,155

[HitObjects]
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kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
IRC modded.

Chatlog
19:00 kanpakyin: : [Insane]
19:00 kanpakyin: : 00:07:877 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider?
19:01 karenying: : don't wanna use whistle here,no
19:02 kanpakyin: : 00:14:695 (9) - How about making it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399086
19:04 karenying: : 不好,這裏好像不太適合
19:05 kanpakyin: : 00:22:423 ~ 00:36:968 - 不怕麻煩的話試試在這裡種草..在1.3拍上面加上NC1的clap
19:06 karenying: : 等會我試試看,先把其他改了
19:07 kanpakyin: : 00:57:650 (3) - 和slider平衡?
19:07 kanpakyin: : slider(1)-
19:08 karenying: : 平衡的,不信你疊上去試試
19:09 kanpakyin: : 01:08:559 (5,6) - 有可能在這裡放個jump麼? 我看到你前面這個位置也是jump]
19:10 kanpakyin: : 01:25:832 (7) - Jump? 我看這裡有個斷奏
19:11 karenying: : fixed
19:13 kanpakyin: : [jojo]
19:15 kanpakyin: : 00:07:082 (2) - 這個note有點怪... 感覺不適合2連
19:16 karenying: : 我覺得還好吧..
19:17 karenying: : 恩..還是改了
19:17 kanpakyin: : 00:10:150 (7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399098 感覺這樣舒服點
19:19 karenying: : 還好 而且這個改了後面就怪了,不改
19:20 kanpakyin: : 00:13:786 (7) - A whistle at the end of the slider?
19:21 karenying: : k
19:22 kanpakyin: : 00:26:968 (4) - Same as 00:13:786
19:23 kanpakyin: : 00:36:173 (2) - 刪clap? = = 違和
19:23 karenying: : whistle k
19:24 karenying: : clap刪了更違和,不
19:24 kanpakyin: : 00:46:854 (6) - new combo?
19:25 karenying: : k
19:25 kanpakyin: : 01:08:786 (9) - ...這slider...我覺得崩了
19:26 karenying: : k
19:27 kanpakyin: : 01:12:877 (4,5,1) - 感覺很危險
19:28 kanpakyin: : 這個留這看看把
19:28 karenying: : 誒為啥
19:28 kanpakyin: : 有2BAT會說 太遮
19:28 kanpakyin: : 然後blablabla
19:29 karenying: : 到時先算
19:29 kanpakyin: : Net 係讀?
19:29 karenying: : yes
19:30 kanpakyin: : 咁我最後先mod Taiko
19:31 karenying: : 佢走左點算
19:31 kanpakyin: : 走左啦? = =
19:31 karenying: : 我話如果一陣
19:32 kanpakyin: : 咁我去mod先
19:35 kanpakyin: : 同佢mod緊
19:36 karenying: : ~
19:51 kanpakyin: : done with taiko
19:51 karenying: : ~
19:51 kanpakyin: : [Hard 'v']
19:51 karenying: : hai~~
19:52 kanpakyin: : 同Insane o.o 晤介意可以係果個位種下草
19:52 karenying: : 然後呢
19:53 kanpakyin: : 01:05:605 (3) - add a finish here?
19:54 karenying: : 草不種了感覺效果不太好
19:55 kanpakyin: : 01:16:741 (2) - 在尾巴換Normal hitsound? 去掉finish
19:56 karenying: : 沒刪f不過改了nor hit
19:57 kanpakyin: : 01:20:605 (1) - Spinner spin有點嘈 降一下vol?
19:57 karenying: : 上面那個finish沒改
19:57 kanpakyin: : 恩
19:58 karenying: : k
19:59 kanpakyin: : [Sekai]
19:59 kanpakyin: : 00:05:605 (3) - Remove a reverse?
20:00 karenying: : 咦我幫他改嘛
20:01 kanpakyin: : 他不在把
20:01 karenying: : 改了
20:01 kanpakyin: : 間距需要調教麼?
20:02 karenying: : 我會弄好的別擔心
20:02 kanpakyin: : 00:07:877 ~ 00:17:650 - 違和clap
20:03 karenying: : 沒辦法,還好吧╮(￣▽￣)╭
20:04 kanpakyin: : 00:21:514 (7) - Slidertick改NC2? o.o
20:04 karenying: : k
20:05 kanpakyin: : 00:48:559 (2) - 移到00:48:332 - 外加一個reverse/note
20:05 karenying: : 哎說起來jojo的tick要改音量..
20:05 kanpakyin: : 00:49:695 (1) - 刪clap改whistle
20:05 kanpakyin: : 恩 0.0
20:06 karenying: : 等等
20:06 karenying: : 00:48:559你沒copy錯?
20:07 karenying: : 你沒update么!
20:07 kanpakyin: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399136
20:07 karenying: : 你再看
20:08 kanpakyin: : 00:48:332 - 加note 00:48:559 (2) - 這slider移去00:48:786 -
20:08 kanpakyin: : 不對麼 o.o?
20:09 karenying: : 咦
20:09 kanpakyin: : (o'ω'o)
20:09 karenying: : http://puu.sh/QGEh這裏是這樣
20:09 karenying: : http://puu.sh/QGEh
20:09 kanpakyin: : = =
20:10 kanpakyin: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399139 .....奇怪了
20:10 karenying: : 難道是我沒up
20:10 karenying: : 反正ok了
20:10 karenying: : 我先up一下
20:11 kanpakyin: : 恩好
20:11 karenying: : k
20:12 kanpakyin: : ok了
20:13 kanpakyin: : 01:02:423 (5) - nc一下 這串combo有點長了
20:13 karenying: : k

Good map.
Find 2-3 mods and I would be happy to bubble this.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
usu :3

General
nothing.

[249's Easy '_']
nothing wrong. but maybe you can improve your skill on making sliders, slider shapes can me more beautiful if you improve them :3 maybe have a try in the future~


[Sekai's Normal 'A']
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:46:514 (3) - this feel very weird that the slider stops at the red tick, 00:47:423 should be a much better place to let the slider stops at imo, it fit the vocal or the drums much more.
00:49:695 (1) - maybe let the spinner starts at 00:49:468 ? cuz the vocal kinda of give me this feeling.
01:09:241 (1,2,3,4) - nothing wrong, but just feel a little sudden and weird that you suddenly change the rhythm to double double notes :3 maybe just my personal feeling, just a remind here.
01:15:605 (1,2,3,4) - compared with 01:09:241 (1,2,3,4), I think this part fit the music more :p


[Hard 'v']
Issue
..OD+1?


[JoJo 'x']
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:241 (1) - ....to my personal feeling, I really dislike this spinner.... very sudden and seems didn't fit the music very much...and it cut off the consistent of the hitsounds...


[Insane 'w']
fine.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Nymph :3

http://puu.sh/QKNy
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
yes ik Nymph...i currently working on that atm :)
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo

karenying wrote:

EDIT:@JoJo: //才发现这个x.x
00:00:605 (1) - 頭少了個finish? //Added.
00:26:059 (1) - 可以調少些點么,有點被吓到 //干脆去掉了finish
00:29:468 (11) - ^ //这里还是保留了.
01:25:604 (1) - 這裏其實應該是clap音而不是finish,01:25:832 (2) - 反之這其實是finish而不是clap
01:24:923 (3) - 尾巴很明顯有finish音。//OK都改了~

kanpakyin wrote:

19:13 kanpakyin: : [jojo]
19:15 kanpakyin: : 00:07:082 (2) - 這個note有點怪... 感覺不適合2連
19:16 karenying: : 我覺得還好吧..
19:17 karenying: : 恩..還是改了 //喔...
19:17 kanpakyin: : 00:10:150 (7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399098 感覺這樣舒服點
19:19 karenying: : 還好 而且這個改了後面就怪了,不改//嗯，保留保留
19:20 kanpakyin: : 00:13:786 (7) - A whistle at the end of the slider?
19:21 karenying: : k //k
19:22 kanpakyin: : 00:26:968 (4) - Same as 00:13:786
19:23 kanpakyin: : 00:36:173 (2) - 刪clap? = = 違和
19:23 karenying: : whistle k //k
19:24 karenying: : clap刪了更違和,不 //同意
19:24 kanpakyin: : 00:46:854 (6) - new combo?
19:25 karenying: : k //嗯
19:25 kanpakyin: : 01:08:786 (9) - ...這slider...我覺得崩了
19:26 karenying: : k //哪儿崩了...
19:27 kanpakyin: : 01:12:877 (4,5,1) - 感覺很危險
19:28 kanpakyin: : 這個留這看看把 //打死也不改
19:28 karenying: : 誒為啥
19:28 kanpakyin: : 有2BAT會說 太遮
19:28 kanpakyin: : 然後blablabla
19:29 karenying: : 到時先算

Nymph wrote:

[JoJo 'x']
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:241 (1) - ....to my personal feeling, I really dislike this spinner.... very sudden and seems didn't fit the music very much...and it cut off the consistent of the hitsounds... //先保留/_\ 我很喜欢的说..
.
Thanks all =3=
http://puu.sh/QXwi
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi karen, mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
Clear :3

[249's Easy]
00:44:241 (1) - You can make it more curved blanketting it with 00:43:332 (4) in such a way you can overlap the 00:45:605 (2) with 00:43:332 (4).
I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400508 It's more flowing and enjoyable to play :3
216,148,44241,6,0,B|212:88|268:40|328:60,1,160,4|8
320,156,45605,1,0
416,164,46059,2,0,B|419:224|364:272|304:252,1,160,4|8
236,196,47423,1,0
00:47:877 (1) - I can hear a finish 00:48:786 from the music. I highly suggest you to use a finish on this slider's end, it sounds perfectly :3
01:06:059 (5) - To keep consistency with 00:51:514 (1) you have to use New combo on this circle removing it from 01:06:514 (1) instead, it fits much better
01:09:695 (1) - What an ugly slider we have here. Use this code, it's more flowing and the blankets with 01:08:332 (3) and 01:11:514 (2) are much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400512
340,68,69695,6,0,B|404:136|376:176|328:216|392:276|432:296,1,240,2|8
01:18:559 (3) - I really don't like how this whistle sounds on this slider's tail. Finish is really much better instead

[Sekai's Normal]
00:20:832 (4) - What about to use New combo here? I think it flows better because you can keep a single combo with 00:18:105 (1,2,3) that are 3 1/2 sliders
00:40:605 (5) - New combo and remove from 00:41:968 (1)
01:02:423 (1) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add it on the slider's start? Maybe with a lower volume if you think that it sounds too loud :3
01:16:968 (5) - ^ and use New combo here

[Hard]
01:20:605 (1) - I would move this spinner 1/4 later adding a circle here instead, because it seems that there is a missed sound here:

01:27:082 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 plz, the sound is really much better.

[JoJo]
00:06:741 (6) - 1 grid down to avoid the overlap with 00:05:832 (4) that in my opinion breaks the flow
00:09:468 (6) - New combo?
00:13:105 (6) - ^
00:16:741 (6) - ^
00:20:377 (7) - ^
00:24:014 (6) - ^
00:26:059 (1) - I would use a finish here, it's much better imho
00:27:650 (6) - New combo
00:31:286 (6) - ^
00:50:150 (6) - This circle touched the hp bar. Consider to fix this
01:05:832 (8,9,1) - I think it's enough confusing after a jump.
01:15:377 (7) - CTRL + R flows better
Good map, just small suggestion especially about comboing

[Insane]
00:14:241 (8) - To follow the whistle sound, maybe add new combo?
I really liked this map nice :3

That' all!
Good luck with rank >w</
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Chewin wrote:

Hi karen, mod request from my modding queue :3

[249's Easy]
00:44:241 (1) - You can make it more curved blanketting it with 00:43:332 (4) in such a way you can overlap the 00:45:605 (2) with 00:43:332 (4).
I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400508 It's more flowing and enjoyable to play :3
216,148,44241,6,0,B|212:88|268:40|328:60,1,160,4|8
320,156,45605,1,0
416,164,46059,2,0,B|419:224|364:272|304:252,1,160,4|8
236,196,47423,1,0
thanks but no thanks. after what Nymph said, i feel that this would be the perfect opportunity to practice my slider shapes.
00:47:877 (1) - I can hear a finish 00:48:786 from the music. I highly suggest you to use a finish on this slider's end, it sounds perfectly :3 whoops that was a mistake...fixed >.<
01:06:059 (5) - To keep consistency with 00:51:514 (1) you have to use New combo on this circle removing it from 01:06:514 (1) instead, it fits much better i'm not following the vocals, but i'm following the instrumental. i want to change up my pattern for this part.
01:09:695 (1) - What an ugly slider we have here. Use this code, it's more flowing and the blankets with 01:08:332 (3) and 01:11:514 (2) are much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400512
340,68,69695,6,0,B|404:136|376:176|328:216|392:276|432:296,1,240,2|8
alright...i guess i'll work on my wave sliders in the future.
01:18:559 (3) - I really don't like how this whistle sounds on this slider's tail. Finish is really much better instead hmm i think kpy suggested this but i ignored it...fixed.

That' all!
Good luck with rank >w</
ty for the mod :D

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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Chewin :3 fixed the combo stuff~ but i dislike the finishes there sorry ><

http://puu.sh/RaER
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
[249's Easy '_']
00:07:877 (6) - I think it will be better if you remove the clap here o.o
00:10:150 (2) - (nazi)move the 2nd tick to (x=400,y=328)
01:00:605 (4) - (nazi)move the 2nd tick to (x=76,y=112)
01:06:514 (1) - Ctrl+R *2
01:18:559 (3) - why finish here ...

[Sekai's Normal 'A']
00:03:332 (4) - (nazi)move the 2nd tick to (x=272,y=164)
01:16:286 (3) - I suggest you NC here 'A'

[Hard 'v']
00:29:014 (7) - 折返上为什么有clap o.o 听起来好奇怪
00:33:559 (1) - Ctrl+R?
01:11:286 (7) - 这样会好看点吧o.o 第二个tick(x=220,y=292) 第三个tick(x=220,y=212)

[JoJo 'x']
00:11:286 (10,11,1) - 这是啥orz 看不太清 NC在2上？
/ \没啥但是觉得好奇怪啊

[Insane 'w']
nothing to see~

[Net's Taikowo]
00:50:605 - consider K here?
01:26:968 (368) - i think k will be better :?

T^T真mod不出啥 star
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo

Chewin wrote:

[JoJo]
00:06:741 (6) - 1 grid down to avoid the overlap with 00:05:832 (4) that in my opinion breaks the flow //Yah I see your point but sorry I don't wanna destroy the triangle there~
00:09:468 (6) - New combo?
00:13:105 (6) - ^
00:16:741 (6) - ^
00:20:377 (7) - ^
00:24:014 (6) - ^
00:26:059 (1) - I would use a finish here, it's much better imho //This used to be a finish...but people think that was too loud so I changed it..
00:27:650 (6) - New combo
00:31:286 (6) - ^ //New combos all fixed~
00:50:150 (6) - This circle touched the hp bar. Consider to fix this //meh..Cannot find a good way to fix this T_T, but I have tested many times, this won't cause confused =v=
01:05:832 (8,9,1) - I think it's enough confusing after a jump. //Kept.
01:15:377 (7) - CTRL + R flows better //No sorry~
Good map, just small suggestion especially about comboing

raririn wrote:

[JoJo 'x']
00:11:286 (10,11,1) - 这是啥orz 看不太清 NC在2上？//大丈夫desu~我都是在重音下NC的/ \
/ \没啥但是觉得好奇怪啊
顺便改了点细节并且拆掉了那个被吐槽很多次的spinner / \
Thanks guys =3=
http://puu.sh/UUnw
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone
will upload after net's reply =w=
thanks all
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

raririn wrote:

[249's Easy '_']
00:07:877 (6) - I think it will be better if you remove the clap here o.o i disagree. i did this to represent a new pattern, and to follow the bass.
00:10:150 (2) - (nazi)move the 2nd tick to (x=400,y=328) i don't see a difference so no.
01:00:605 (4) - (nazi)move the 2nd tick to (x=76,y=112) ^
01:06:514 (1) - Ctrl+R *2 why? give me reasons.
01:18:559 (3) - why finish here ... because it emphasizes the vocals in this part.
no changes made but ty for the mod.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
seems fine

good luck!
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika

raririn wrote:

[Net's Taikowo]
00:50:605 - consider K here? ok ~
01:26:968 (368) - i think k will be better :? it's k already = =+
Thank you for mod !

Edit : Karen will fix that =w="
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

Chewin wrote:

[Hard]
01:20:605 (1) - I would move this spinner 1/4 later adding a circle here instead, because it seems that there is a missed sound here:k
01:27:082 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 plz, the sound is really much better.sorry,no

[Insane]
00:14:241 (8) - To follow the whistle sound, maybe add new combo?k
I really liked this map nice :3

That' all!
Good luck with rank >w</

raririn wrote:

[Hard 'v']
00:29:014 (7) - 折返上为什么有clap o.o 听起来好奇怪我覺得不錯誒
00:33:559 (1) - Ctrl+R?不太好
01:11:286 (7) - 这样会好看点吧o.o 第二个tick(x=220,y=292) 第三个tick(x=220,y=212)k
Sekai's diff fixed by him and sent to me already :P
uploaded~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Rechecked, everything look good to me.

Bubbled!
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YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
hurray gogo rank :P

EDIT: that offset needs to be changed. when i played it, the finishes sounded a dit delayed and it doesn't sync up to the music...i feel that the correct offset is 584 since it syncs to the music correctly.
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Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika

Byakugan249 wrote:

hurray gogo rank :P
>< !
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecked, everything look good to me.

Bubbled!
Rank gogo *w*
Starred :3
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

Byakugan249 wrote:

hurray gogo rank :P

EDIT: that offset needs to be changed. when i played it, the finishes sounded a dit delayed and it doesn't sync up to the music...i feel that the correct offset is 584 since it syncs to the music correctly.
I will ask someone to check it tmr.Thanks for remind :p
EDIT:v thx kpy: > v
Last edited by Kotone , edited 1 time in total.
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin

Byakugan249 wrote:

EDIT: that offset needs to be changed. when i played it, the finishes sounded a dit delayed and it doesn't sync up to the music...i feel that the correct offset is 584 since it syncs to the music correctly.

Current offset is perfectly fine for me. However, 584 is totally off for me, the drum sounds in the song won't fit the metronome if I use 584 and most of the part are weird when I use 584 as the offset.

6/9/2012 Edit:
Mapper self pop the map is due to change of name.
Rebubbled.
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[General]

*Weird offset, I feel it late.

[Easy]

00:27:877 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426211 see, this does not give a good result with mmslider, and it would be confusing for a newbie that is willing to play it. I suggest you to readjust the shape (with making it symmetrical) or to find another shape. P:

[Normal]

00:49:468 (1,1) - I would not consider this part good for a normal difficulty, the recovery time is too short :V

[Hard]

sweet

[Taiko]

wow.

[JoJo's]

00:11:286 (5,6,1) - 01:04:014 (5,6,1) - You know. Explain why please. Do you really think this makes the map better without causing any confusion? S:
00:37:650 (3,4) - stack these better
01:13:332 (1,2) - considering that, a player would confuse the (2) circle with the end of the slider. Dunno what to do at this point... add a new combo on 2?

[Insane]

that's really good!
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

00:49:468 (1,1) - I would not consider this part good for a normal difficulty, the recovery time is too short :V
Nah :I I think it's fine, they both on white ticks so yeah =w=/ i'm gonna keep it.
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
i made a curved slider instead to make it simple. i tried adjusting the loop, but it's the best i can come up with. ty for the mod.

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JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo

Armin wrote:

[JoJo's]

00:11:286 (5,6,1) - 01:04:014 (5,6,1) - You know. Explain why please. Do you really think this makes the map better without causing any confusion? S://Firstly, I makes them because I want to try something new, I dislike to stack 3 notes in the same place so. 2ndly, do you really think this would make players feel confused? Plz, this is an insane, and I really can't find any reason to miss it. So I'm sorry I wanna keep them.
00:37:650 (3,4) - stack these better //ah, 00:37:650 (3) - I don't know why but this circle was in a wrong place. Fixed now~
01:13:332 (1,2) - considering that, a player would confuse the (2) circle with the end of the slider. Dunno what to do at this point... add a new combo on 2? //No, the approaching circle is very clear to read. And players would know here is 3/4 slider+note as well from 01:06:059 (1,2,3,4,5), so no problems here. And, since it's not stacked, it wouldn't be missed even if hidden mode is on by the way.
Thanks for mod~
http://puu.sh/138gd
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
sry Armin, but I don't think the offest is wrong(late) at any rate. Strictly speaking it's 2~3ms off to me, the current is fine enough tho
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

Armin wrote:

[General]

*Weird offset, I feel it late. ya asked LKs to check it,and we don't think it should be change
and I changed 01:16:968 (4) - to normal hitsound in Insane
also 00:34:014 (2) - added a whistle at the end of the slider in hard
updated :P Thx for modding~
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone
Where is armin==...
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
Oh, sorry for the wait.

Rechecked and rebubbled.
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
營
:>
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Hi.

[Easy]
  1. 00:50:155 (3) - Consider to change a pattern like below. To read the timing will become easier for the beginner.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:519 (5) - I felt something wrong on a repeat. This slider shouldn't be 3/2-beat-length.
  2. 00:48:337 (2) - Reading many repeats is kind of hard for the normal-player. Make it 1-beat-length?
  3. 01:18:791 (1) - I think this spinner should start from 01:18:564.
[Taiko]
  1. 00:00:155 (1) - Oh, which sound is this note following?
  2. 01:02:655 (248) - Move it to 01:02:882? It fits the music more.
  3. 01:18:564 (x) - Should add a note here.
The offset seems fine to me.
Call me back after fix :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks Suzully :3 fixed everything~

http://puu.sh/16is7

Note: Kotone you should remove -Sekai- and add Sekai-nyan in tag list :3
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