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neonat
Randomly went to see your map heh.
Easy:
02:52:099 - Not sure if a new combo is needed
Hard:
00:07:813 (2) - Circle 2 and 3 are kinda far from each other
00:10:432 (1) - Because they are all equally distanced apart from each other, it's harder to recgonise that the time gap between circle 4 and 5 is actually longer than the previous few
00:21:147 (7) - Too close to the rest?
02:05:432 (1) - Up to this point I'm getting the feeling you are trying to make it looks nice and symmetrical and stuff, but if the time gaps between the hits are different but the spacing are the same, it is very confusing. Examples are like 02:10:670 (3) and 02:12:575 (6) .
It's just my opinion, but I feel the spacing is not defined and it makes it harder to know when to hit, it occurs throughout the song.
Insane:
00:30:551 (6) - This beat sounds off, maybe let it reverse 2 more times until 00:31:147 and this slider could be a new combo.
00:34:004 (1) - New combo not needed?
00:35:670 (1) - Could be part of the previous combo
00:36:147 (2) - New combo
02:40:670 - 02:47:575 - Could have beats in this portion of the song, in my opinion
03:18:289 (2) and 03:19:242 (3) - seems off, could use different beats instead, maybe don't use sliders

Don't have much time, but this was what I noticed. I'm not really the expert in maps, but maybe you could consider what these opinions. ^^ Hope I helped.
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KeksiikChannel
Okay,thanks for help!Im not a pro but Ill do my best! :)
neonat
Let me know if you made new changes, I'll try it again :D
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Okay.Ive added,changed some few new objects on insane+background and combo colors.
neonat
sacchan has mentioned before, maybe you should try and find a bigger background picture, the one you have right now is quite pixelated
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KeksiikChannel
Ok.I edited the background.Also this background is set for all difficulties.
neonat
Been very busy with studies recently :|

Easy:
01:48:766 (5) - Whistle sounds weird
Hard:
01:41:147 (7) - Start the new combo here instead of the next one
02:24:718 (1) - Don't think you need a new combo here
02:39:718 (8) - You could start a new combo here, like the one before the break before
Insane:
00:27:972 (7) - This sounds off, maybe you could change it if possible.
00:30:591 (6) - My mistake on this one, I think it would be better if it started at 00:30:512 and let it repeat 4 times until 00:30:988
Never really liked whistle haha, it sounded weird in the 2nd kiai time portion~
It's getting nicer :) But I don't have time to really look at it....
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KeksiikChannel
Ok,gotcha! :3
Tata_old_1
First of all clarify that use google translator so my writing may not be the best

general: you should use the snap distance

Easy
01:03:051: that circle (1) only has to have the finish and clap sounds
01:03:528: Circles (2,3,4,5,6) should have only clap sound
01:17:813: that circle clap sound only
01:20:194: that circle (8) with sound and whistle finish
01:44:956: finish sound circle
01:46:861: ^ ^ ^

Hard
00:36:385: whistle rather than place him into the circle clap sound (2)
03:22:813: Putting sound finish the circle (10)
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Okkay!Thanks!
Aeonian Sonder
This song sounds good.

OVERALL: Resnap all of the timing points

[Hard]
00:07:813 until 00:11:623 - Fix the sequence, it's confusing, or try replacing the circles with sliders. Try using distance snap
03:18:051 If the next 10 circles for part of a hexagon, fix the circles that location are the top of the hexagon, and move them to match the bottom circles.
03:31:147 (4,5) - Don't make circles go UNDER a slider

[Insane]
00:36:623 (2) - Fix the location
01:06:386 (4) - Fix the straighness of the slider
02:27:337 (4) - Same as above
02:30:194 (4) - Same as above

You're really CREATIVE, and that's a key thing to have when beatmapping!
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Okay.Thanks!
Aeonian Sonder
OVERALL: GOOD, but remember WHENEVER you change the song's BPM, or somthing like that, ALWAYS resnap the green bars, and the preview point.

[Insane]
01:23:981 - Move this Kiai time to 01:24:004
01:25:908 (6) - Don't make circles over lap the ends of sliders if they come before the slider, it's always confusing to the player
01:32:099 (3) - Same as above
01:33:766 (1) - Same as above
01:54:470 - Move Kiai to 01:54:480
03:25:898 - Move Kiai to 03:25:908
03:27:575 (6) - Like I said before, don't make circles over lap the ends of sliders
03:35:432 (1) - Same as above
04:14:450 - Move to 04:14:480

[Hard]
00:10:432 - Confusing sequence
00:19:718 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a bar
00:54:004 (2) - Fix straightness of slider
01:10:194 (2) - Same as above
01:13:051 (1) - Same as above
01:40:908 (6) - Don't overlap....
04:13:051 - The next two sliders are too far apart
Nocturnal_old
Yeah...just what the world need. More Luke x Miku song....
BUt as long as I don't see a music video of song of this sort. I'll be fine~

Insane MOD:
01:26:956 (2) - Why is there a finish sound effect on this one...?
01:33:766 (1) - Don't overlap sliders with cirles
03:31:623 (2) - Same as first one
03:32:734 (7) - That just from combo 7 to 8 is a LITTLE to large
03:40:908 (5) - Same as first one

You should try using these sound effects (.RAR)
http://www.mediafire.com/?mjpb5n71t4e0z8p

How to changed to custom sounds effects:
-Put sound effects in song file
-Enter editor, enter song
-Go to the Timing tab ----> Timing setup panel
-Go to the beginning of the song and don't play (because I tell you so :P )
-Highlight all red and blue timing marks (At the beginning of a song, first timing mark should already be highlighted, now press the shift, and click on the last highlight)
-Go to audio section
-Click on custom 1
-Done~
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Okay,Ill do it. It may take a while to change all hitsounds on insane diff.
Aeonian Sonder
I just realised something...WHY 1/6? Should it be 1/4?

and second, when are you going to insert the custom sounds that Dviyk gave 'ya?
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KeksiikChannel
Okay,thanks.I havent noticed neither and about the hitsound pack Im using it but its gonna take some time to adjust hitsounds onto the objects.
Aeonian Sonder
OVERALL: DID you remember to snap ALL the green points in ALL difficulties?
Did you put in the sound files IN the folder?

[Insane]
00:54:480 (5) - Sill overlapping circles, move
03:11:861 (6) - Circle 6 isn't where Circle 2 is, if you're try for a triangle formation

[Hard]
00:22:337 (4) - Raise by one block, if you're going for a hexagon
00:22:813 (6) - Same as above
01:05:908 (2) - Fix straightness
01:10:194 (2) - Same as above
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Im on it and hitsounds are already in the folder.
neonat
Hi ^^ long time no see, how is the map getting along?
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Hi,its been a while. I have improved beatmap quite well.Still I have to manage with placing hitsounds on objects because it sounds strange. :)
happy623
Just passing-by 8-)

The Artist Name should be AVTechNO (since the rule changed?
remove FREE, AVTechNO in the tags since they have been appeared in song title and artist title XD
remove the osb file if you dont do any storyboarding
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Okay,thanks.
Takuneru
Hey !
This is pretty old, but I really liked your map, and it would be cool to see more AVTechNO! ranked.
I'm a real beginner at modding but I'll try to suggest some things to make it better, maybe it'll help you if you try to pick up the beatmap again !
Those are mostly suggestions :3
[General]
Remove AVtechNO! from the source
And it should be "AvtechNO!" with the exclamation mark on the artist.


[Insane]
Pretty great though sometimes I didn't understand what you did there.
00:16:385 (6) - Maybe add a finish at the end of the slider ?
00:20:670 (3) - a clap at the end of the slider ?
00:30:512 (6) - I dunno but... it seems weird to me? You could maybe add a clap at the beginning too, it seems the rhythm here is a bit "blank"
00:34:480 (1) - you may replace it by a stream given the number of slider-repeat
00:37:337 - You may want to add a note here like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1717748
01:31:147 (8) - I would have rather done this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1717779 because of the vocals, and to add more diversity.
01:50:908 (1) - I think the spinner starts too early; you could add more notes before starting it. and starting it at 01:52:337 - for example.
01:54:242 (1) - The whistle at the start seems too much, no hitsound seems better.
02:49:004 - add a note here, near 02:49:242 (2) -
02:50:908 - ^ same. But a slider can do as much if you want
03:44:242 (9) - remove the finish and put it at 03:44:718 (10) - ?
04:13:051 (1) - add a clap here maybe : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1717824
That's all, I really liked your insane !

I did a vastly longer mod for hard and did more for insane but my page reloaded and I lost it... If anything I could help you in-game.
I hope you will revive this project :3
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Thanks for your feedback! As you mentioned,this beatmap is very old.I might consider reviving and reworking my beatmap.
Takuneru

MarTinNN wrote:

Thanks for your feedback! As you mentioned,this beatmap is very old.I might consider reviving and reworking my beatmap.
I would be happy if you did so !
I love AVTechNO! and I am working on CTB mapsets. I was thinking of doing FREE, and that's how I found your beatmap by checking if it was already mapped.
If I can help you in any way feel free to ask me :D
I'll come back to mod more later on as well if you're reviving the beatmap.
Topic Starter
KeksiikChannel
Any help is appreciated,thanks. Ill pm you for a feedback before revival soon.
CrazyrabbitKGE
[General]
Comboburst looks a bit too big to me.

[Insane]
00:13:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be neater. I mean, their positioning looks kinda ugly.
00:27:932 (7) - eh, doesn't sound really right.
00:32:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't see the reason why a stream should appear at this point. It doesn't seem to be fitting the music.
00:34:480 (1) - try following the melody more rather than using that. It makes the map way too easy imo.
03:21:623 (5) - move it to the right a little.
the cursor will be moving only ←↑→↓ in this map. you know what I mean, right? You should use curves way more often.

[Hard]
I'm getting the feeling that many parts are actually harder than insane diff... eh, idk.
02:05:432 (1,2,3) - the circles are placed 2 times further away because of nothing?

[Easy]
not following the music (vocal and instrumental and whatever) at all.

That's all from me!
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