1. Easy (2.14 stars, 177 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 377 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 606 notes)
4. Normal (3.92 stars, 253 notes)

silencedays wrote:

Dude....those slider shapes are crazy =.=

1. HP+2 & AR+1 & OD+2!!~~
2. 00:23:201 - Remove clap
3. 00:25:471 (5) - clap
4. 00:31:309 (5) - Touch HP Bar.. I remember it is Unrankable O_O" Try this~ http://puu.sh/MaLW
5. 00:51:417 (4) - clap
6. 01:12:823 (1) - clap
7. 01:12:823 (1) - Hmm.....Orz Maybe change to 2 sliders~~~ It's better! >w<
8. 01:51:417 (2) - How about this beat?
   
9. 02:10:228 (3) - DS is too big o.o

1. HP+1!!~~
2. 01:09:579 (3,4) - Ctrl + R for the flow~
3. 01:15:742 (1) - DS is too small o.o I suggest you stack on 01:13:147 (1) - It's good x33
4. 02:02:444 (1) - Touch HP Bar~
5. 02:07:633 (1) - Hmm.... Same~ DS is too small.. >_>
6. 02:18:012 (4) - 1 Grid down!!~~ Make it to be a nice square!
7. 02:36:174 (1) - Touch HP Bar~
8. 02:41:039 (5,1,2,3) - This is not straight!! QAQ
   If you want to make a straight~ 02:41:687 (2) - Move to [X:436 Y:116] and 02:42:012 (3) - Move to [X:472 Y:16]
9. 03:00:823 (1) - Touch HP Bar~

1. 00:43:147 (3,1) - Plz complete stack~~ x33
2. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit boring T_T.. How about this?? http://puu.sh/Mb48 Make the DS large gradually!!~~
3. 02:22:552 (5) - I don't like this slider QAQ Too twist..

1. 00:10:552 (1) - =w=... Plz put it on the center xDDD
2. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard~ This time make the DS small gradually x33
3. 01:27:093 (5) - A little ugly :<
4. 01:34:390 (2) - ^
5. 01:45:985 (6) - Remove this circle?
6. 02:13:309 (2) - QAQ

Miku Append wrote:

I love you

normal

01:45:579 (5) - nc sorry, no
02:11:525 (6) - nc sorry, no
02:15:417 (5) - nc sorry, no
02:18:985 (5) - nc sorry, no

hard

00:36:498 (4) - you can do like this , change to slider fix


other wwwww↓

easy & normal & hard
02:43:958 (1) - ~ 02:45:255 (1) - Insert break time sorry, no



My first mod ahahahahehehehehe GJ XD~<3

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Hi~

Above all

You need to del insane3.osu file and full submit fix

Easy

00:05:678 - Unsnapped spinner fix
01:02:444 - This timing is uselss fix
01:05:039 - add a circle with clap here? fix
01:45:904 - remove clap and add add clap at (3) because you use this method of hitsound in previous part,and it is good. fix
01:51:742 - add a circle? fix
01:58:552 - There lacks a circle sorry
03:16:390 - Adjust kiai time to end here fix

Normal

01:45:904 - add clap already is clap
then
01:46:228 - add clap (N:C1) fix
01:46:552 - change custom hitsound to N:C1 fix
03:16:390 - kiai ends here fix

Hard

00:20:525~00:21:093 - turn the volume down by 10% sorry
03:16:390 - kiai ends here fix

Insane

00:20:525~00:21:174 - turn down the volumeby 10% sorry
03:16:390 - kiai ends here fix

Good job!!!!

y u c a wrote:

sowwie baka kiiwa im laate

Easy,Normal

not use NC finish D:? D:

Hard

00:51:255 (x) - please add note bakaa sorry, no
00:51:417 (x) - ^! sorry, no
01:15:093 (6) - use slider is better for me~ like insane diff fix
01:20:931 (4) - missed finish fix
01:26:120 (2) - ^ fix
01:31:309 (4) - ^ fix

insane

00:10:552 (1) - put center D:?like hard diff fix
00:23:201 (4) - so that you can put hitsound at (5)! fix
00:36:174 (3) - finish fix
01:31:633 (2) ~ fit for lyris O.O!! beren decides..
02:17:201 (2) - add clap all(expect 02:17:201) fix
02:44:444 (2) - nc? sorry, no

12BARRY21 wrote:

Yo!!~~~~~~

<Easy>

1. HP+2 & AR+1 & OD+2!!~~ change a little
2. 00:23:201 - Remove clap sorry, no
3. 00:25:471 (5) - clap fix
4. 00:31:309 (5) - Touch HP Bar.. I remember it is Unrankable O_O" Try this~ http://puu.sh/MaLW fix
5. 00:51:417 (4) - clap fix
6. 01:12:823 (1) - clap fix
7. 01:12:823 (1) - Hmm.....Orz Maybe change to 2 sliders~~~ It's better! >w< fix in different way
8. 01:51:417 (2) - How about this beat? fix
   
9. 02:10:228 (3) - DS is too big o.o oops XD fix

<Normal>

1. HP+1!!~~ fix
2. 01:09:579 (3,4) - Ctrl + R for the flow~ fix
3. 01:15:742 (1) - DS is too small o.o I suggest you stack on 01:13:147 (1) - It's good x33 i think its fine... such small difference...
4. 02:02:444 (1) - Touch HP Bar~ fix
5. 02:07:633 (1) - Hmm.... Same~ DS is too small.. >_> again, im sorry
6. 02:18:012 (4) - 1 Grid down!!~~ Make it to be a nice square! fix
7. 02:36:174 (1) - Touch HP Bar~ fix
8. 02:41:039 (5,1,2,3) - This is not straight!! QAQ fix QAQ
   If you want to make a straight~ 02:41:687 (2) - Move to [X:436 Y:116] and 02:42:012 (3) - Move to [X:472 Y:16]
9. 03:00:823 (1) - Touch HP Bar~ fix

<Hard>

1. 00:43:147 (3,1) - Plz complete stack~~ x33 fix
2. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit boring T_T.. How about this?? http://puu.sh/Mb48 Make the DS large gradually!!~~ sorry, want to match with Insane
3. 02:22:552 (5) - I don't like this slider QAQ Too twist .. Beren decides...

<Insane>

1. 00:10:552 (1) - =w=... Plz put it on the center xDDD fixxxxxxx
2. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard~ This time make the DS small gradually x33 sorry, no Dx
3. 01:27:093 (5) - A little ugly :< Beren decides...
4. 01:34:390 (2) - ^ Beren decides...
5. 01:45:985 (6) - Remove this circle? Beren decides...
6. 02:13:309 (2) - QAQ fixed overlaping

That's all~ Crazy map =w=b
Bad mod sorry Orz..
GO~ Kiiwa!! \(^w^)/

24,192,73471,5,2
488,192,73796,1,2
68,192,74120,1,2
452,192,74445,1,2
104,192,74769,1,2
408,192,75093,2,0,B|232:180,1,165,2|0

S h i o n wrote:

First look at this map! reminds me of your 'space of soul' XD Kana mapXD

and will finish this mod later


[Hard]
00:56:606 (5,6,7) - such a long slider doesn't fit the lyric , I mean 00:56:606 (5). maybe do the same as 01:07:309 (1) ,01:51:417 (4), etc... Fix
02:35:039 (1,2) - hmm.. I don't really hear why they should jump. 02:39:904 (1,2,1,2) - and same here, you designed a increasing spacing Fix first, leave second o.o second seems right to me... cause of vocal..?
02:48:985 (3) - ^ Fix
rhythm in hard diff is random to me , especially in kiai time. I'll try my best to improve it >~<!!



[Insane]
00:35:525 (1) - should be 1/2 slider imo, now 3/4 makes rhthm a bit complex, especially there's stacked notes after it. Fix
00:44:282 (4) - NRC and NC on (5)? also arrangement of 00:43:796 (2,3,4,5,1) is kinda random now, you can make it better! Fix
00:46:552 (1,2,3) - plays bad to me (I mean flow) Fits music... i don't know how to change D:
00:49:958 (2,3) - this stack may not be very friendly to hidden players. lol hahaha!
00:56:931 (8) - better with NC hmm, at first it did have NC, but everywhere else is have the long combo, so it dosent really look right for random short combo for vocals >~<
00:57:093 (9,10) - ctrl+R makes better flow imo. Changed in a different way! This part was really ugly before... thanks~
00:59:525 (9) - better with NC Same again, sorry~
01:07:309 (7,8,9,10) - NC for (7) and ctrl+R to 7 and 10 ? Don't like this idea, sorry~
01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try something like this Sorry

24,192,73471,5,2
488,192,73796,1,2
68,192,74120,1,2
452,192,74445,1,2
104,192,74769,1,2
408,192,75093,2,0,B|232:180,1,165,2|0

01:45:985 (6,1) - don't jump here!.. ...! OMG! Didn't notice... Moved (1)
01:50:769 (1,2) - maybe jump between them Beren Decides
02:44:444 (2) - stacked it on 02:43:958 (1) - feels better to me Fix

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-Remove” J-pop” in the Tags ? Although it’s totally okay if you don’t I keep xD
-Tags add “Boroboro na Ikizama niki NicoNicoDouga” All added
Boroboro na Ikizama is the album name
niki is the person who wrote this song
NicoNicoDouga is where this song actually came from

[Easy]
00:30:660 (4,5) – don’t really like how they overlap, try to fix ? Don't know how to fix ;_; let me think

[Normal]
01:12:174 (3) – x:216 y:240 to make it align with 01:11:850 (2) Fixed
03:02:769 (4) – move to x:412 y:128 in order to stack it with 03:00:823 (1) Fixed

[Hard]
01:52:552 – add a note ? Beren decides
02:33:579 (1) – move the end point to x:272 y:124 Fixed, thanks!
02:35:850 (4) – stack this perfectly Fixed

[Insane]
… too fast to me lol ...me too lol

Good luck

Lissette wrote:

Hi~

[General]
specify what's Beren participation on this mapset. If its a collab add "collaboration collab" to tags Fixed
you have 3 osb file in your folder Fixed
Why don't you add the tags that previous modder pointed? Fixed

[Hard]
00:41:201 (1) - remove new combo, don't see the need of one here No change~
00:49:796 (1,2,3) - this fits better http://puu.sh/Os1i or http://puu.sh/Osla Fixed
00:58:877 (3) - I don't like how this sound, and is awkward to play, shorten 1/4 follow the vocal Fixed
01:17:363 (1,2) - fits better if you remove new combo from 1 and add it on 2 Beren decides
01:19:958 (1) - remove new combo and add it at 01:20:606 (3) - makes more sense to me Beren decides
02:49:147 (4) - the reverse arrow is hidden a bit, make it visible all the time Fixed

[Insane]
00:35:525 (1) - move it up a bit so it doesn't go off screen Fixed
00:50:931 (6) - unstack this, is really hard to see, due to when the reverse arrow goes bigger Fixed
00:51:742 (8) - mew combo? mew moe. No change~
00:50:282 (4) - you can't have 2 kiai fountains so near to each other, make it like Hard diff (same to other like this) Fixed
01:11:525 (2) - make the direction of the slider more clear, pulling the start out a bit more Fixed
01:24:985 (8) - move half beat later, and fix spacing after Beren decides
01:34:390 (2) - move this slider from under 01:33:904 (1) - Beren decides
01:54:498 (1) - Hidden reverse arrow Beren decides Beren decides
02:06:012 (1) - make the path more clear at the end of the slider Beren decides
02:20:606 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - follow the guitar on this combo to keep the flow with prevs combos Beren decides
02:42:336 (1) - why this single combo? Fixed
02:58:552 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by the combo counter Fixed
03:02:282 (4) - unstack this one too No change~

[Normal]
00:26:444 (4) - new combo, since you are following the vocals on the new combo pattern Fixed
01:07:958 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/Otah No change~
01:46:228 (7) - baka you should of do the same as 00:51:742 (1) - on this part, but would look weird a new combo here Yes, i know what you mean ;_;

[Easy]
00:23:850 (3) - new combo, like you did here 00:29:039 (1) - Fixed
01:55:958 (2) - move it down a bit so is not so under the score Fixed
03:08:282 (3,1) - this is confusing for an easy, unstack 3 from 1 end point and 1 from 3 Fixed, but it may be worse now LOL

1. two extra osb files exist....don't know if it doesn't matter or not...
2. uncheck letterbox during breaks because of the video

1. 00:40:715 - i'd like to fill this blank :>
2. 00:59:525 - place a 1/1 slider here to instead of 00:59:850 (3) - ?
3. 01:31:309 (1) - (nazi) make it symmetrical?
4. 01:39:093 (3) - finishes at reverse point and end are heard weird a bit...remove them?
5. 01:45:904 (2,3,4,1) - er.....it's so crowd......
6. 01:52:066 (1) - add a note ?
7. 01:58:552 - the blank here ... i may choose to change the beat here a little:
   

1. 00:26:444 (1) - i suppose two 1/1 sliders here may be better than a 3/2 reverse
2. 01:06:660 (2) - it's hidden partly by prev scoreburst.....
3. 01:38:282 - u may miss a note here if u choose to use red - tick beats,and 01:37:633 (3) - may be not very suitable

1. 00:23:687 - consider adding a note here?
2. 00:28:877 - ^
3. 00:44:606 (1) - remove the finishes at reverse and end
4. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can try to reduce the spacing graduately, or rotate~~?
5. 01:18:012 (1) - a single note here may be better?

1. 00:26:769 (3) - change the curve to follow your flow ? like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:877 (2) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:59:201 (8) - highly recommend a ctrl+r for better flow~
4. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - similar suggestion to Hard
5. 01:46:552 (3) - two notes may be better~~
6. 02:40:552 (2) - ctrl+r?
7. 02:42:336 (4,1) - spacing...why it's not the same to the stream...?
8. 02:43:715 (6,7,8,1) - .....o....m.....g.............
9. 02:58:552 (2) - a confusing slider here....

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO

1. Delete "Aki Akane - Flash B ack.osb" and "Akiakane - FlashBack.osb" since they're useless.
2. Add silent sliderslide hitsounds ? They're really noisy to me.. ToT
3. 02:55:634 (1) - You need to resnap this kiai section in all diffs.

1. Just mention, the SV of this diff is not an integer.
2. 02:41:363 (1,2) - ehh, would be nice if you don't overlap this note. :>
3. 03:06:012 (1,2,1) - This part is really confused to beginners. Bad overlapping, bad stacking.

1. 01:30:012 (3) - My suggestion is, starting this slider 1/2 earlier, to fit the vocal here.

1. 00:27:093 (4,5) - This spacing/pattern is confused, even it's doubled but players would read this as 1/2 easily during playing.
2. 00:36:498 (4) - Add clap, I guess ?
3. 00:48:336 (2) - 0.03x is not on purpose right? So need to re-stack.
4. 00:49:796 (1,2,3) - No, please don't use 1-reverse-slider after a 2-reverse-slider, really confused!! T_T
   
   This looks much better to me.

   
5. 00:51:742 (2) - Just comment, really hard to know this is a 3/4 during 1st play since there is no slider ticks...
6. 00:58:877 (4) - mah.. In my view this slider is a mess, not fit to the song/rhythm completely. Have to change.
7. 03:07:633 (6,1) - This is a 坑... Well, the spacing is increased so suddenly. >_> By the way, some players may click circle six 1/2 early, try asking some friends to test to see which parts need to be re-arrange.

1. 00:56:606 (7,8) - Why not using the same DS to 00:55:958 (4,5) ? The current one is so hard and confused.
2. 01:11:525 (2) - Ehh? Spacing issue. It's unrankable whatever this is on purpose or not.
3. 01:49:958 (4,5,6) - Regard this as a part, you'll see the spacing you're using is really confused and hard to read. So, when you map the 1/4s, plz be consistent with the DS (I mean, always using half-DS or something similar to help players distinguish the 1/2s and the 1/4s). Plz plz plz... OAQ
4. 01:57:255 (1,2) - ^Same, and plz check the whole diff by yourself. I won't list them all~
5. 02:42:174 (3) - Stack this better~
6. 02:43:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Just comment~ So insane = =...
7. Well, I don't like the DS in this diff, players need to devote their best mind to read them~ xD Perhaps because I'm a noob. TwT

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~~
sorry for my late >.< moe

[General]

1. two extra osb files exist....don't know if it doesn't matter or not... Fixed
2. uncheck letterbox during breaks because of the video Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:40:715 - i'd like to fill this blank :> 00:41:039 - is the start of a loud beat, so its better to start here and have a pause before for a more dramatical effect
2. 00:59:525 - place a 1/1 slider here to instead of 00:59:850 (3) - ? Sorry~ ;A;
3. 01:31:309 (1) - (nazi) make it symmetrical? XD
4. 01:39:093 (3) - finishes at reverse point and end are heard weird a bit...remove them? I think i'll keep, they fit?
5. 01:45:904 (2,3,4,1) - er.....it's so crowd...... Curved movement to make pentagon ~_~
6. 01:52:066 (1) - add a note ? Added note!
7. 01:58:552 - the blank here ... i may choose to change the beat here a little: Changed in my own way thanks!
   

[Normal]

1. 00:26:444 (1) - i suppose two 1/1 sliders here may be better than a 3/2 reverse 3/2 reverse is much more exciting ;D
2. 01:06:660 (2) - it's hidden partly by prev scoreburst..... No change
3. 01:38:282 - u may miss a note here if u choose to use red - tick beats,and 01:37:633 (3) - may be not very suitableNo change

[Hard]

1. 00:23:687 - consider adding a note here? Hmm, makes the map a little to busy? so maybe not...
2. 00:28:877 - ^ ^
3. 00:44:606 (1) - remove the finishes at reverse and end Opps, fixed XD
4. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can try to reduce the spacing graduately, or rotate~~? want to keep simple, so no change. Besides, fits the music fine as it it?
5. 01:18:012 (1) - a single note here may be better? Beren decides

[Insane]

1. 00:26:769 (3) - change the curve to follow your flow ? like this: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:877 (2) - ^ Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:59:201 (8) - highly recommend a ctrl+r for better flow~ Fixed
4. 01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - similar suggestion to Hard Sorry
5. 01:46:552 (3) - two notes may be better~~ Beren decides
6. 02:40:552 (2) - ctrl+r? I think its more awkard with CTRL+R, because these sliders alternate between moving up and down
7. 02:42:336 (4,1) - spacing...why it's not the same to the stream...? Fixed
8. 02:43:715 (6,7,8,1) - .....o....m.....g............. XD
9. 02:58:552 (2) - a confusing slider here.... Changed

that's all ~~~ it's really ...crazy >.< gl with rank~

deadbeat wrote:

[General]
there are still 3 osb's Second time i fix, should be ok now

[kiai]
02:54:985 - 02:55:633 why isn't this aprt kiai as well? Changed the kiai
03:10:552 - 03:11:201 not sure why this part isn't kiai oh my kiai is all different now :< changed so it matches with 02:06:985 - 03:10:877 - and 01:12:823 -

[Easy]
01:12:823 (1) - maybe consider removing the new combo and keeping it blue since its still part of the chorus. or maybe have it as a single note at 01:13:147 Hmm, i agree, changed
01:15:093 (3,4) - maybe make this a slider? Nah~


[Normal]
01:15:742 (1) - remove nc? Start of sepprate vocal, all other diffs have new combo here too (except easy for design purpose

[Hard]
01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe do something a little more interesting with these? random idea sorry, mentioned this to other modders before too orz

[Insane]
01:01:958 (1) - remove nc, its still in the kiai and make the nc the following slider err, its only place i can put so 01:02:444 - to 01:02:687 - can become this combo colour without seeming weird
01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, maybe do something a little more interesting here like with hard sorry, mentioned this to other modders before too orz
02:42:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - x.x everyone says this, but its not too hard when playing lol

[Side note]
Not sure if you really need those spinners at the start of the map. It feels weird to start all of a sudden with vocal i find. And its too hard to map the break between spinner and vocal start, so its best to have a break ~
02:43:958 - 02:45:255 you seem to like leaving this part unmapped :/ If i mapped here, there would only be one break in the diff for like 3mins? I think its too much lol
song hurt my ears. map is good though looooool akiakane is hard to listen to 10 times in a row let alone 600+ for mapping orz
lol E,N,I,H How to fix retarted diff ordering D:?

JoJo wrote:

Hi hi ~ Sorry for delay ~ > < Hi~ its ok XD
Even you have not fixed the mods above me, but perhaps I won't have too much time next week ~ So ~ Sorry if there is something repeated > < okkkkkk

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO

[General]

1. Delete "Aki Akane - Flash B ack.osb" and "Akiakane - FlashBack.osb" since they're useless. Fixed third time LOL
2. Add silent sliderslide hitsounds ? They're really noisy to me.. ToT Don't like QAQ sorry
3. 02:55:634 (1) - You need to resnap this kiai section in all diffs.Fixed!

[Easy]

1. Just mention, the SV of this diff is not an integer. XD Easy is so moe
2. 02:41:363 (1,2) - ehh, would be nice if you don't overlap this note. :> Move a little
3. 03:06:012 (1,2,1) - This part is really confused to beginners. Bad overlapping, bad stacking. Remap second time XD

[Normal]

1. 01:30:012 (3) - My suggestion is, starting this slider 1/2 earlier, to fit the vocal here. Prefer to have break then slider

[Hard]

1. 00:27:093 (4,5) - This spacing/pattern is confused, even it's doubled but players would read this as 1/2 easily during playing. Your right, added note at 00:27:255 -
2. 00:36:498 (4) - Add clap, I guess ? Fixed
3. 00:48:336 (2) - 0.03x is not on purpose right? So need to re-stack. Fixed
4. 00:49:796 (1,2,3) - No, please don't use 1-reverse-slider after a 2-reverse-slider, really confused!! T_T Changed in my own way
   
   This looks much better to me.

   
5. 00:51:742 (2) - Just comment, really hard to know this is a 3/4 during 1st play since there is no slider ticks... ~_~
6. 00:58:877 (4) - mah.. In my view this slider is a mess, not fit to the song/rhythm completely. Have to change. your right, changed
7. 03:07:633 (6,1) - This is a 坑... Well, the spacing is increased so suddenly. >_> By the way, some players may click circle six 1/2 early, try asking some friends to test to see which parts need to be re-arrange.Changed

[Insane]

1. 00:56:606 (7,8) - Why not using the same DS to 00:55:958 (4,5) ? The current one is so hard and confused. Reduced spacing
2. 01:11:525 (2) - Ehh? Spacing issue. It's unrankable whatever this is on purpose or not. ??? not unrankable =w= changed anyway
3. 01:49:958 (4,5,6) - Regard this as a part, you'll see the spacing you're using is really confused and hard to read. So, when you map the 1/4s, plz be consistent with the DS (I mean, always using half-DS or something similar to help players distinguish the 1/2s and the 1/4s). Plz plz plz... OAQ Beren decides
4. 01:57:255 (1,2) - ^Same, and plz check the whole diff by yourself. I won't list them all~ Beren decides
5. 02:42:174 (3) - Stack this better~ Fixed
6. 02:43:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Just comment~ So insane = =... ...XD
7. Well, I don't like the DS in this diff, players need to devote their best mind to read them~ xD Perhaps because I'm a noob. TwT

Nice map overall, star'd :>

Milkshake wrote:

hey doublepost

Tags: J-Pop Beren Collaboration Collab Boroboro na Ikizama niki NicoNicoDouga

J-Pop?~_~ isn't it suppose to be J-rock

Reisen Udongein wrote:

orz i'm so late! sorry

[General]

add 'toysfactory' on the tags Fixed

you still have three .osb files @_@ or maybe i should re-dl it Already Fixed

i saw that 'Flash B ack' on everywhere, maybe fix it?
Hmm, I don't know... I think the current makes more snese..?

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 - > 0.9 Fixed

00:21:904 (2) - why clap on the tail though there is no drum snare sound :3? It creates nice rythem
00:31:309 (5) - move this to x:48 y:8 so that it can be much more visible and be triangle-shaped? Fixed
00:41:039 (1) - DNC this and NC 00:42:012 (2) - here? for following the drum,vocal. No change
01:02:120 (1) - what this sudden color-change means? just curious. Outside of kiai time, so it's the ugly red
01:12:823 (2,1,2,3,4) - how about arranging these notes much more accurate pentagon shape? Fixed
01:15:742 (4) - NC here like normal diff? Fixed
02:10:228 (3) - add clap on the tail Fixed
02:14:120 (2) - ^ [color=#FF00000]Fixed[/color]
02:18:012 (4) - NC here and DNC 02:19:309 (1) - same reason as [*]00:41:039 (1) - Changed in own way~
03:11:850 (1) - add finish Fixed

[Normal]

00:21:255 (1) - ctrl + r , add clap on the tail? Clap is already there
00:35:525 (1) - make this little bit curvy so that sliders flow well? like this http://puu.sh/YGAD ok
00:53:687 (2) - how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/YGBz (ctrl + h , j and x:164 ,y:184 ) Sorry~
01:13:147 (1,2,3,4) - add some green lines about decreasing volume like easy diff, and add whistle on 4. Fixed, thanks!
01:26:120 (1,2) - something like this is much better to me. http://puu.sh/YGEt Hm, I think it's fine as it is :3
02:18:985 (5) - add finish on the middle of this

[Hard]

wow challenging hard 0_o XD

00:27:742 (1) - remove 1 return to follow vocal? ok
00:56:931 (6) - ctrl + r for better flow? ok
01:13:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about arranging these like this? http://puu.sh/ZA8K (gradually decreased spacing) Sorry, no
01:35:525 (2) - add finish on the end ok
01:39:093 (1,2,3) - just default finish is much better to listen in my opinion..? Beren decides
02:19:309 (4) - add finish on the head Beren decides
02:23:201 (6) - NC Beren decides
02:35:039 (1,2) - quite sudden jump here though it's hard? maybe ctrl + r here? Changed~
03:04:390 (5) - add finish on the middle of this ok
03:06:985 (5) - add finish on the tail ok

[Insane]

Nicely done. i like it


good luck~ :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

Edit: wow, i just noticed Kiiwa had a double rank...