1. 00:05:970 (1) - Put in ~y:232, regardless of the spacing? (yep, it'll break spacing consistency but it's not hard to catch at all, plus the diagonal flow with previous (2)'s end is much better than horizontal flow~)
2. 00:06:058 (1) - Hmm, idk, based on the trumpet's sound a gradual volume decrease may work here imo (:
3. 00:26:440 (2) - (optional) Curve this slightly to the left flows better to (3) imo~
4. 00:27:851 (3,1) - Why no manual stacking here orz ._.
5. 00:29:264 (3,4,5) - (optional) Hmm, no need to force a perfect triangle I think, I prefer do a triangle with using the space above like this:
   
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6. 00:31:381 (1) - Whistle here sounds dramatic, really >_<
7. 00:45:499 (1,3) - It won't hurt to make these two connected with ~1.0x spacing for a beautiful continuous flow, really (you can also curve (3) more if you want to balance the flow with your next (4)) :
   
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8. 00:48:322 (1,2) - Just my personal thoughts here, I prefer tilted slider waves like this:
   

   272,51,48322,6,0,B|206:56|203:23|137:29,2,135,0|0|8
   355,85,49734,2,0,B|420:90|423:57|489:63,2,135,0|0|8

9. 01:02:440 (1) - Minor stuff, put in ~x:215 y:345 to balance the previous angle?
10. 01:08:087 (1) - Eh... Missing finish here o.o
11. 01:23:617 (2) - Remove the repeat and use a circle before the break? (rather than repeating slider a circle emphasizes that short kiai MUCH better :3)
12. 01:37:734 (3,4) - Uhm, supposed to be slider first than circle I think? (the vocals on 01:38:440 orz ._.)
13. 01:46:205 (3) - (optional) I prefer if this is rotated by ~-6 - -10° selection centre, the tilt makes the flow cuter imo xD

1. 00:06:058 (1) - Same as Beginner, gradual volume decrease may work here because of the trumpet sound~
2. 00:19:734 (5) - Minor stuff, put this in ~x:109 y:312 and the following (1) in ~x:187 y:366? (it'll look less forced imo >_<)
3. 00:24:322 (3,4) - Uhm, I prefer manual stacking like this >_< - also, N:C1 clap fits very much with (4)'s start~
   
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4. 00:27:852 (4) - Same as above about N:C1 clap
5. 00:31:381 (1) - Same as Beginner, whistle will make the spinner end sounds dramatic imo (:
6. 00:34:205 (1) - Uhm, nothing wrong actually, just an improvement to the blanket:
   

   48,76,34205,6,0,B|104:56|132:116|132:116|116:158|127:212|181:235,1,240,4|0

7. 00:37:028 (1,2) - Is it intentional to put clap on (2)? Should be on (1)'s end instead imo...
8. 00:51:146 (1) - (optional) I prefer to continue with the slider's antagonistic direction here though:
   
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9. 00:56:793 (1,2) - Hmm, I do get your point here, but please manual-stack them by moving (2) more to the bottom-right, so (1) will be stacked properly to (3) in play mode~
10. 01:02:440 (1) - (optional) I prefer something moving here, it plays better before the break imo (you can stack it to 00:59:793 (2))
11. 01:09:322 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, this is just my idea, but perhaps CTRL+R both (2,3)? Both will create a small jump to (4), thus delivers more power for the song (:
12. 01:23:617 (3) - Manual-stack in ~x:131 y:186 instead? Looks fancier than plain vertical imo...
13. 01:38:087 (4,5,1) - No need to force them in a straight line imo, an arc like this flows fancier I think xD
    
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14. 01:53:264 (1,2,3) - For a better pentagon on the ending, move
    
    1. (1) to ~x:427 y:186,
    2. (2) to ~x:234 y:114, and
    3. (3) to ~x:152 y:163 (:

1. 00:00:323 (1,2,3,4) - orz, for the beginning it's too plain imo >_< - I prefer accelerated spacing like this, flows really cute especially on autoplay :3 :3
   
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2. 00:03:146 (1,2,3,4) - Adjust this also (copy-paste from above) if you do previous suggestion xD
3. 00:06:058 (1) - Same as previous diffs, perhaps try gradual volume decrease here?
4. 00:12:675 (2) - Move the N inherit section to slider's end or 1/4 after instead? (uhm, that sliderslide... idk if it's intentional, but sounds quite weird ._.) - also applies to the next sliderslides though...
5. 00:19:205 (5) - Minor stuff, curve downward instead so your next (1) will carry this slider's flow?
6. 00:30:499 (4,1) - Just my crazy suggestion orz
   
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7. 00:40:381 (2) - (optional) For me the bezier waypoint's placement is kinda forced, I'd move the bezier waypoints further from center to let it flow naturally:
   

   182,95,40381,2,0,B|219:74|256:92|256:92|296:74|328:96,1,154.000004699707

8. 00:50:617 (7) - Stack this to your next (2)'s end instead perhaps? xD
9. 01:02:440 (1) - Hmm, stack to 01:01:028 (1) instead? (I can see you're aiming for symmetry here though... Continuing the symmetry before the break looks better imo :3)
10. 01:13:028 (4) - I recommend to add whistle on slider's start also, because slider's start is the main point of the instrument I think~
11. 01:25:028 (1) - (optional) A small jump works really well here (I'd put this around ~x:28 y:125)
12. 01:44:440 (8) - Uhm, idk if you think this will be too hard for Hyper but... I really prefer a triangle jump like this xD
    
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13. 01:54:499 (4) - Move it somewhat lower (~x:369 y:324)? The arc formed will give a cuter impression towards the ending imo (:

1. 00:02:440 (5,5) - Uhm, add whistle to both (5), as the hitsounds you did on Hyper?
2. 00:06:058 (1) - Same as previous diffs, perhaps try gradual volume decrease here?
3. 00:16:911 (6,7,1) - Put a bit further (~x:401 y:123) to make this shows correctly in play mode, due to stacking's nature?
4. 00:19:205 (5) - Minor stuff, but I'd put the endpoint a bit more to the left (~x:122 y:144) to dramatize the last arc~
5. 00:32:617 (5) - Hmm, rather than placing it in the center I prefer to continue the jump like this though:
   
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6. 00:36:675 (12) - (optional) Uhm, I'd slightly curve this upward instead because of your next (2,3,4)'s direction >_<
7. 00:47:793 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Here, perhaps try to make these continuous like this? xD
   
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8. 00:52:028 (6) - I prefer to manual-stack this on ~x:230 y:90 though, will be more intuitive imo...
9. 01:02:440 (1) - (optional) Put in the far-bottom instead (~x:256 y:368) to deliver more power before the break?
10. 01:13:028 (3) - Same as Hyper, I recommend to add whistle here because this should be the pressure point of all whistles imo...
11. 01:24:675 (5) - Not a must, but if you're following the vocals previously a whistle here doesn't sound bad though~ (yep, the vocals are distinctive enough)
12. 01:41:617 (9) - (optional) Again about triangle jump, move this to ~x:354 y:61 for a triangle jump like I suggested on Hyper?
13. 01:41:970 (1,2,3) - orz, why don't you manual-stack (2) like this instead? It'll give a continuous flow with (3), and it gets a better feeling instead of manual-stacking it to the bottom-left imo xD
    
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14. 01:48:146 (3) - For me, stacking this to (17) instead of (1) looks less forced in play mode though...
15. 01:52:205 (2,3,4) - Rather than curving all three upward, try to curve (3,4) slightly downward instead - gives a gorgeous flow imo (:

Niva wrote:

[General]

-> Current Preview Time is usable, but... I prefer PreviewTime:96234 orz, epic part :3 я бы вообще на глори поставила xD

[Beginner]

1. 00:05:970 (1) - Put in ~y:232, regardless of the spacing? (yep, it'll break spacing consistency but it's not hard to catch at all, plus the diagonal flow with previous (2)'s end is much better than horizontal flow~) I think it's okay, I like when this note is in center
2. 00:06:058 (1) - Hmm, idk, based on the trumpet's sound a gradual volume decrease may work here imo (:Yeah! Added
3. 00:26:440 (2) - (optional) Curve this slightly to the left flows better to (3) imo~ no, I leave my version to be consisten with previous long slider C:
4. 00:27:851 (3,1) - Why no manual stacking here orz ._. fixed orz
5. 00:29:264 (3,4,5) - (optional) Hmm, no need to force a perfect triangle I think, I prefer do a triangle with using the space above like this:
   
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   There is a square xD
6. 00:31:381 (1) - Whistle here sounds dramatic, really >_< yeeewwwww, added! >_<
7. 00:45:499 (1,3) - It won't hurt to make these two connected with ~1.0x spacing for a beautiful continuous flow, really (you can also curve (3) more if you want to balance the flow with your next (4)) : Fixed
   
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8. 00:48:322 (1,2) - Just my personal thoughts here, I prefer tilted slider waves like this: Added your variant
   

   272,51,48322,6,0,B|206:56|203:23|137:29,2,135,0|0|8
   355,85,49734,2,0,B|420:90|423:57|489:63,2,135,0|0|8

9. 01:02:440 (1) - Minor stuff, put in ~x:215 y:345 to balance the previous angle? Fixed
10. 01:08:087 (1) - Eh... Missing finish here o.o My bad orz >_<
11. 01:23:617 (2) - Remove the repeat and use a circle before the break? (rather than repeating slider a circle emphasizes that short kiai MUCH better :3) Nooo, I love when kiai and break start with end of the 1/1 slider. Really love
12. 01:37:734 (3,4) - Uhm, supposed to be slider first than circle I think? (the vocals on 01:38:440 orz ._.) uh, I can't read the rhythm, I'm noob %D Fixed
13. 01:46:205 (3) - (optional) I prefer if this is rotated by ~-6 - -10° selection centre, the tilt makes the flow cuter imo xD Fixed!

ryuu wrote:

[General]

а да. ещё. как-то..как-то.
мапсет. бегиннер, нормал, хупер и ановер. вычеркните лишнее, называется.
обычно в этой версии вместо нормала идёт стандарт о.о не обязательно :О во многих же нормал

[Beginner]

00:39:852 (1) - вот этот слайдер я бы закгнула как-нибудь. (потому что не люблю именно такую форму. когда одна часть обводит, а другая прямая) а. да. я именно про верхнюю имею ввиду часть :о Я не знаю, что еще сделать да и мне норм :3

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