Ogura Yui - Daisuki Huwawa

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Rotte

xRayne wrote:

Time for that mod I promised :D
Please take into mind that these mod's are just my opinions. Feel free to take them, or ignore them as you see ^^

Hard Mode
General~ Throughout the map, you have white ticks that have beat's but no notes. Why is this? Some places, I can understand there Not being a beat, but the majority of them do..Thought should state that now, instead of flooding your page with mods.

00:15:095 - Why such a short break here? on purpose
00:55:777 (6,7,1) - Overlapping. fixed
01:19:413 (6) - Odd slider..Not sure if rankable D: to be honest,I don't want to mod it ,but I moded it
01:23:959 (6) - ^ to be honest,I don't want to mod it ,but I moded it
01:50:550 (5) - Slight symmetry fix ^^ I don't find any slight symmetry ?
02:13:731 (1) - This note overlaps this note 02:11:913 (2) Not sure if it's to much of a problem, just something i noticed. Might want to check it out also? no effect in playing
02:20:550 (8) - Move this note 4 squares to the right and then up 4 squares. It's a jump,not 4 squares
02:39:868 (1,2,3,1) - These notes feel kind of random to me. Maybe just me though. fixed
03:16:686 (3) - Slight symmetry on the white square closest to middle of slider. fixed
03:40:095 (5,6) - This overlapping is intentional, right? no effect


Insane Mode
00:01:231 (1) - Just random open space? Why not map something here, or place a break? I don't feel random
00:28:050 (2) - This overlaps with 00:26:686 (6) Just something I noticed. no effect
00:28:050 (2) - Also overlaps 00:28:731 (4) Intentional? no effect
00:37:140 (8) - Overlaps with 00:36:231 (5) no effect
00:36:231 (5) - So move this 3 spaces to the right and 3 spaces up, so the circles match? ^^ I cre I create a NC
00:43:277 (3) - This slider is overlapping with 00:42:368 (10) no effect
00:49:640 (8) - Overlapping no effect
00:58:731 - Another random break? on purpose
01:02:368 (4) - Straighten this slider out? (choose to ignore this if you want, I think i see what you were going for here.) ignored

Overall~ I think this is made very well. I like your placement of notes, and they make a really great flow :3
best of luck to you!
Told you I am a noob modder..xD
thank you for modding :)
Irie Miyuki
[General]
三个diff combo color不同 调整一下吧w

[Insane]
00:24:413 (2) - 建议换成这样

00:37:936 - 加个note
00:39:640 (3,4) - 没叠好
00:44:186 (1,2,3,4) - 换个形状啥的?
00:57:595 (1) - 位置是不是不对..换到x420 y160?
00:59:413 跟着vocal加3个note?
01:13:277 连打?
01:27:822 ^
01:30:322 感觉这一段不该就这么空着的 再加点什么?
01:44:640 ^ 可以节奏慢点 但是补上比较好的感觉
01:48:277 ^
01:50:550 感觉连打不是很适合的样子
02:40:550 连打?
03:44:186 ^
03:52:595 (2) - clap
03:58:731 其实这么多你都空着 后面还有鼓点..弄得我都有点纠结了
04:01:004 再map一点吧o.o

渣比mod 要上课了来不及看其他diff 一会下午大课间我继续QwQ
连错网了打的mod又没了 只是去买了个饭而已! 真是卧槽

[Hard]
怎么用了4种slider velocity 能减少一下么
00:19:186 (6,7,8) - 换成这样的感觉?

00:20:777 (2) - 我真的觉得把clap音空掉了不太好..
00:31:459 (1) - 去掉nc
00:31:459 (1,2) -

00:38:050 (9) - 去掉clap
01:00:322 (6) - NC
01:21:459 (1) - 折返处clap?
01:28:731 (5) - NC
02:02:595 (1,2,3,4) - 整体往右移一点?
02:12:368 (3) - 去掉一个折返 补一个note
02:25:777 (6) - NC
02:34:186 (1) - 折返处clap?
02:41:459 (4) - NC
02:43:050 (2) - 往上拉一点?
02:48:731 (1) - 折返处clap?
02:54:413 (3) - NC
03:46:686 (4) - 总感觉往右移一格更好的样子
03:52:595 (2) - clap?
03:54:868 (8) - 去掉clap
04:28:731 (1) - 去掉nc

[Normal]
00:13:731 (2,3) - 两个近了点?
01:19:640 (2) - 近了?
01:36:459 (3) - 远了?..
02:43:277 (1) - 折返处clap?
02:48:731 (1) - ^
03:32:368 (2) - ^
03:39:413 (2) - 感觉不合适, 在03:39:640下个note吧
03:59:640 (4) - 折返处clap

哎呦我擦老师又来了- - 等会继续

呃,平时不玩normal 不知道应该怎么mod.. 其实我觉得多加点whistle应该也挺好听o.o

不错的图w 等过两天我的星星多了我来射一个w
Mei_coN
Hi,request from PM~~

下列mod均为个人意见,不必强求233

Normal
00:23:050- add clap
00:25:777- add clap
00:28:959- add clap
00:58:277(3)- add clap
01:53:959(3)- add clap
01:56:686(1)- 折返处add clap
01:57:822(2)- add clap
02:00:322(3)- 折返处add clap
02:31:004- add clap
02:53:050- 去掉clap
04:07:822(2)- slider前移到04:07:595


Hard
00:02:822(1,2,3,1,2)- 放到正中吧
00:14:186(3)- slider头尾调转,4叠在3的下面,可以排列得更为对称整齐一些
00:24:868- add clap
00:25:777- add clap
00:26:686- add clap
00:28:504- add clap
00:29:413- add clap
00:30:095(5)- add clap
00:30:550(6)- add clap
00:31:004(1)- add clap
00:32:140- add clap
01:09:868- add clap
01:10:322- add clap
01:20:095(7)- add clap
01:45:095(3)- whistle改到slider的头
01:46:913(6)- add whistle
01:47:368- clap改为finish
01:48:050(1)- add whistle
01:51:004- clap改为finish
01:52:140- add clap
02:01:459(6)- 折返处add clap
02:03:050- add clap
02:05:777(8)- 去掉 clap
02:08:277(6)- add clap
02:08:731(7)- slider尾add clap
02:12:822(4)- add clap
02:36:686(4)- 折返和尾部add clap
02:51:231(6)- 同上
02:52:595(1)- slider头部去掉clap
03:15:777(1)- 到 03:22:822(7)- 这段感觉可以用whistle代替clap
03:16:004(2)- 音效移到slider尾
03:25:777(3)- 折返和尾部add clap
03:54:868(8)- 同上


Insane
00:02:368(1)- 去掉note
00:02:595(2)- 折返处add clap
00:06:004(1)- 去掉slider
00:06:231(1)- add 1note
00:05:095(3)- add whistle
00:06:459(2)- add clap
00:06:913(4)- add whistle
00:07:368(5)- add clap
00:07:595(6)- add whistle
00:08:277(2)- slider尾add whistle
00:09:186(4)- 同上
00:16:913(1)- 到 00:20:095(4)- 这段补上2/4clap
00:21:913(6)- add clap
00:22:822 (3) - add clap
00:23:731(3)- add clap
00:24:413(2)- slider尾add clap
00:26:231(5)- NC
00:30:095(3)- slider头add clap
00:31:004(1)- add clap
00:31:686(1)- slider尾add clap
00:32:822(3)- add clap
00:33:504(5)- 折返处add clap
00:35:322(3)- 同上
00:36:459(1)- slider头add clap
00:37:140(3)- 折返处add clap
00:38:959(2)- 同上
00:40:095(4)- slider头add clap
00:40:777(6)- NC,折返处add clap
00:41:459(7)- slider尾add clap
00:44:868(4)- 没对齐上面的note
00:51:686(2)- 同上
00:52:140(3,4)- slider对调,第4拍add clap
01:01:686(2)- slider尾add clap
01:10:095(5)- slider头add clap
01:11:004(2)- 同上
01:11:913(4)- slider尾add clap
01:12:595(2)- 同上
01:13:731(6)- slider头add clap
01:17:709(7)- 去掉note
01:18:277(2)- NC,slider头add clap
01:21:004(4)- slider头add clap
01:26:459(5)- add clap
01:27:368(1)- slider头add clap
01:29:186(5)- 同上
01:29:640(6)- slider头add finish
01:37:140(4)- slider尾add finish
01:56:231(1)- slider尾add clap
01:58:277(2,3,4,5,6)- 只留下6的finish其他去掉
02:00:095(5)- add clap
02:10:777(3)- 把clap移到4
02:19:413(3,4)- slider对调
02:42:822(1)- slider尾add clap
02:46:459(4)- add clap
03:15:777(1)- 到 03:22:822(7)- 这段感觉可以用whistle代替clap
03:40:777(8)- slider尾add clap
03:50:095(4)- slider头add clap
03:55:550(4)- 同上
04:13:731(3)- add clap
04:18:731(1)- 去掉
04:18:959- add note
04:20:095(4)- slider头add clap
04:26:004(1)- 去掉
04:26:231- add note


音效漏得有点多了,感觉整体的Normal clap音量可以减少些,排列方面再整齐点就好了
DakeDekaane
Hi o/

Moe mod time as requested in-game /o/

[General]

I think the second kiai fountain in your first kiai should be in 01:14:868 instead 01:15:095.

[Normal]
General review and suggestions.
A nice diff to play, it fulfills the role of the easiest diff in the set, I'd only suggest some stuff and ask you to fix some more.
I'd use Approach Rate 5 (+1), 4 is good, but as you have some notes after spinners may disrupt the spinning for newbie players.

Rhythm
00:33:476 - You can try this rhythm, fits better in my opinion

00:51:459 (4) - Move to 00:51:231 if following vocals here.
01:42:368 - 01:44:186 - Put some notes in this interval, it looks empty here :c
02:28:959 (2) - Try deleting this and putting a circle in 02:29:186
02:53:277 (2) - Move this to 02:53:504 if following vocals
02:54:186 (3) - Move this to 02:54:413 if following vocals, remember fix the spacing later.
02:56:004 (2) - Try a easer slider, like this, the actual is a bit confusing

03:27:140 - What about trying this, fits more, in my opinion.

03:39:413 (2) - Delete this and put a circle in 03:39:640
04:00:550 (5) - This should be a circle.
04:24:413 (3) - Delete this and put a circle in 04:24:640
04:27:822 (3) - Use an slider like this, easier to read and less confusing, like before.


Placement
00:21:004 (1) - Move this a a bit down, to avoid some coverings by the HP bar of some player's skin, don't forget fixing the spacing for next notes if you do.
:!: 00:22:595 (4,5) - This is very jumpy, fix the spacing here~

Sounds
01:35:550 - Use 60% volume here, or even 65%, 80% is too loud for the change

Aesthetics
00:26:231 (3,4) - This looks a bit weird, you can try putting in another way.
00:48:504 (3,4) - Avoid this overlap, it doesn't looks too bad due to the flow, try something this and keep what you like more.
01:36:231 (2,3) - You can try a different way to put this, make something like a soft curve which begins with the tail of 01:35:095 (1), or make 01:36:459 (3) in a straight line.

[Hard]
General review and suggestions.
Nice Hard, no bad comments about it, just increase Overall Difficulty and HP Drain by 1, this will match the difficulty it should have.

Rhythm
00:15:095 (5) - Maybe put a note here.
02:11:231 (6) - A circle here, you shouldn't finish the stream like this x.x

Placement
00:02:822 (1,2,3) - You can move this to stack (3) with 00:04:868 (1) and don't make too hard the change in the velocity
00:06:459 (1,2,3) - Something like above^
00:45:095 (3,4,1) - Make this flow like a stream, maybe like this, is easier to read
01:28:731 (5) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream
02:10:550 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make the changes in spacing smoother, maybe beginning with 1.3x between (3) and (4), then 1.5x, 1.7x and 1.9x
02:12:368 (3) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream
02:56:004 (1) - ^
03:30:550 (4,5) - Put it like a stream these~ D:
04:27:822 (1,2) - ^ additionally, the flow must lead to the next stream

Aesthetics
03:40:322 (6) - Maybe rotate around 15° anti clockwise to avoid the tiny overlap

[Insane]
General review and suggestions.
Weirdly, I enjoyed this Insane, most of the times I felt in rage because I can't even read the notes, but not this time.
I'd recommend put some breaks, due to the HP Drain, some players are likely to get killed in this intervals without notes.
00:15:095 -
00:58:731 -
01:44:186 -
01:47:822 -

Rhythm
00:14:640 (6) - One repeat more in this.
02:25:890 (2) - Maybe delete this and begin the stream in 02:26:004 (3)

Placement
:!: 00:22:368 (1) - Gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down
00:53:050 (5,6,7) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar
02:31:686 (4,6,1) - ^
:!: 02:52:140 (5) - This gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down
:!: 03:25:095 (5) - ^
:!: 04:17:822 (2) - ^
04:25:322 (4,1) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar
03:44:868 (1) - Make the end of this lead to 03:45:550 (2)
04:27:822 (1,2) - Things like this is what I suggest to do in Hard

Aesthetics
01:00:095 (1) - Are you making this to make the sliderball "wiggle"? if yes, leave as it is, if not, fix with the speed multiplier.

Well, I think that's all from my part, good luck in your way to rank, if you reply this, only put the ones you didn't follow and the reason -w-
Topic Starter
Rotte

Mei_coN wrote:

Hi,request from PM~~

下列mod均为个人意见,不必强求233

Normal
00:23:050- add clap
00:25:777- add clap
00:28:959- add clap
00:58:277(3)- add clap
01:53:959(3)- add clap
01:56:686(1)- 折返处add clap
01:57:822(2)- add clap
02:00:322(3)- 折返处add clap
02:31:004- add clap
02:53:050- 去掉clap
04:07:822(2)- slider前移到04:07:595


Hard
00:02:822(1,2,3,1,2)- 放到正中吧
00:14:186(3)- slider头尾调转,4叠在3的下面,可以排列得更为对称整齐一些
00:24:868- add clap
00:25:777- add clap
00:26:686- add clap
00:28:504- add clap
00:29:413- add clap
00:30:095(5)- add clap
00:30:550(6)- add clap
00:31:004(1)- add clap
00:32:140- add clap
01:09:868- add clap
01:10:322- add clap
01:20:095(7)- add clap
01:45:095(3)- whistle改到slider的头
01:46:913(6)- add whistle
01:47:368- clap改为finish
01:48:050(1)- add whistle
01:51:004- clap改为finish
01:52:140- add clap
02:01:459(6)- 折返处add clap
02:03:050- add clap
02:05:777(8)- 去掉 clap
02:08:277(6)- add clap
02:08:731(7)- slider尾add clap
02:12:822(4)- add clap
02:36:686(4)- 折返和尾部add clap
02:51:231(6)- 同上
02:52:595(1)- slider头部去掉clap
03:15:777(1)- 到 03:22:822(7)- 这段感觉可以用whistle代替clap
03:16:004(2)- 音效移到slider尾
03:25:777(3)- 折返和尾部add clap
03:54:868(8)- 同上


Insane
00:02:368(1)- 去掉note
00:02:595(2)- 折返处add clap
00:06:004(1)- 去掉slider
00:06:231(1)- add 1note
00:05:095(3)- add whistle
00:06:459(2)- add clap
00:06:913(4)- add whistle
00:07:368(5)- add clap
00:07:595(6)- add whistle
00:08:277(2)- slider尾add whistle
00:09:186(4)- 同上
00:16:913(1)- 到 00:20:095(4)- 这段补上2/4clap
00:21:913(6)- add clap
00:22:822 (3) - add clap
00:23:731(3)- add clap
00:24:413(2)- slider尾add clap
00:26:231(5)- NC
00:30:095(3)- slider头add clap
00:31:004(1)- add clap
00:31:686(1)- slider尾add clap
00:32:822(3)- add clap
00:33:504(5)- 折返处add clap
00:35:322(3)- 同上
00:36:459(1)- slider头add clap
00:37:140(3)- 折返处add clap
00:38:959(2)- 同上
00:40:095(4)- slider头add clap
00:40:777(6)- NC,折返处add clap
00:41:459(7)- slider尾add clap
00:44:868(4)- 没对齐上面的note
00:51:686(2)- 同上
00:52:140(3,4)- slider对调,第4拍add clap
01:01:686(2)- slider尾add clap
01:10:095(5)- slider头add clap
01:11:004(2)- 同上
01:11:913(4)- slider尾add clap
01:12:595(2)- 同上
01:13:731(6)- slider头add clap
01:17:709(7)- 去掉note
01:18:277(2)- NC,slider头add clap
01:21:004(4)- slider头add clap
01:26:459(5)- add clap
01:27:368(1)- slider头add clap
01:29:186(5)- 同上
01:29:640(6)- slider头add finish
01:37:140(4)- slider尾add finish
01:56:231(1)- slider尾add clap
01:58:277(2,3,4,5,6)- 只留下6的finish其他去掉
02:00:095(5)- add clap
02:10:777(3)- 把clap移到4
02:19:413(3,4)- slider对调
02:42:822(1)- slider尾add clap
02:46:459(4)- add clap
03:15:777(1)- 到 03:22:822(7)- 这段感觉可以用whistle代替clap
03:40:777(8)- slider尾add clap
03:50:095(4)- slider头add clap
03:55:550(4)- 同上
04:13:731(3)- add clap
04:18:731(1)- 去掉
04:18:959- add note
04:20:095(4)- slider头add clap
04:26:004(1)- 去掉
04:26:231- add note
音效漏得有点多了,感觉整体的Normal clap音量可以减少些,排列方面再整齐点就好了由于bug,修改了好多的音效,但是这边没做标记,所以就没写了,谢谢Mei_coN的mod
:)
Topic Starter
Rotte

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi o/

Moe mod time as requested in-game /o/

[General]

I think the second kiai fountain in your first kiai should be in 01:14:868 instead 01:15:095. This is to make kiai fountain,and other diff must be use hitsound,and I'm not to fix it.

[Normal]
General review and suggestions.
A nice diff to play, it fulfills the role of the easiest diff in the set, I'd only suggest some stuff and ask you to fix some more.
I'd use Approach Rate 5 (+1), 4 is good, but as you have some notes after spinners may disrupt the spinning for newbie players. use AR5

Rhythm
00:33:476 - You can try this rhythm, fits better in my opinion fixed and add a new rhythm

00:51:459 (4) - Move to 00:51:231 if following vocals here. I don’t following vocals
01:42:368 - 01:44:186 - Put some notes in this interval, it looks empty here :c make something changed,however,not add circles
02:28:959 (2) - Try deleting this and putting a circle in 02:29:186 fixed
02:53:277 (2) - Move this to 02:53:504 if following vocals I don’t following vocals
02:54:186 (3) - Move this to 02:54:413 if following vocals, remember fix the spacing later. I don’t following vocals
02:56:004 (2) - Try a easer slider, like this, the actual is a bit confusing fixed

03:27:140 - What about trying this, fits more, in my opinion.fixed and add a new rhythm

03:39:413 (2) - Delete this and put a circle in 03:39:640 fixed
04:00:550 (5) - This should be a circle. however I think slider is okey :)
04:24:413 (3) - Delete this and put a circle in 04:24:640 I like previous slider
04:27:822 (3) - Use an slider like this, easier to read and less confusing, like before. fixed


Placement
00:21:004 (1) - Move this a a bit down, to avoid some coverings by the HP bar of some player's skin, don't forget fixing the spacing for next notes if you do. fixed
:!: 00:22:595 (4,5) - This is very jumpy, fix the spacing here~ fixed

Sounds
01:35:550 - Use 60% volume here, or even 65%, 80% is too loud for the change fixed

Aesthetics
00:26:231 (3,4) - This looks a bit weird, you can try putting in another way. fixed
00:48:504 (3,4) - Avoid this overlap, it doesn't looks too bad due to the flow, try something this and keep what you like more. fixed
01:36:231 (2,3) - You can try a different way to put this, make something like a soft curve which begins with the tail of 01:35:095 (1), or make 01:36:459 (3) in a straight line. fixed

[Hard]
General review and suggestions.
Nice Hard, no bad comments about it, just increase Overall Difficulty and HP Drain by 1, this will match the difficulty it should have. OD+1 HP+1

Rhythm
00:15:095 (5) - Maybe put a note here. I don't think add a note is a good idea
02:11:231 (6) - A circle here, you shouldn't finish the stream like this x.x previous queue is well

Placement
00:02:822 (1,2,3) - You can move this to stack (3) with 00:04:868 (1) and don't make too hard the change in the velocity mod a little
00:06:459 (1,2,3) - Something like above^ previous queue is good
00:45:095 (3,4,1) - Make this flow like a stream, maybe like this, is easier to read fixed some place
01:28:731 (5) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream fixed
02:10:550 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make the changes in spacing smoother, maybe beginning with 1.3x between (3) and (4), then 1.5x, 1.7x and 1.9x fixed
02:12:368 (3) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream fixed
02:56:004 (1) - ^ fixed
03:30:550 (4,5) - Put it like a stream these~ D: fixed
04:27:822 (1,2) - ^ additionally, the flow must lead to the next stream fixed

Aesthetics
03:40:322 (6) - Maybe rotate around 15° anti clockwise to avoid the tiny overlap fixed

[Insane]
General review and suggestions.
Weirdly, I enjoyed this Insane, most of the times I felt in rage because I can't even read the notes, but not this time.
I'd recommend put some breaks, due to the HP Drain, some players are likely to get killed in this intervals without notes.
00:15:095 -
00:58:731 -
01:44:186 -
01:47:822 -

I don't think it is strange ,because everyone explain rhythm is not same :)

Rhythm
00:14:640 (6) - One repeat more in this. I think previous slider is well
02:25:890 (2) - Maybe delete this and begin the stream in 02:26:004 (3) fixed

Placement
:!: 00:22:368 (1) - Gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down removed
00:53:050 (5,6,7) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar fixed
02:31:686 (4,6,1) - ^ fixed
:!: 02:52:140 (5) - This gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down fixed
:!: 03:25:095 (5) - ^ fixed
:!: 04:17:822 (2) - ^ fixed
04:25:322 (4,1) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar fixed
03:44:868 (1) - Make the end of this lead to 03:45:550 (2) fixed
04:27:822 (1,2) - Things like this is what I suggest to do in Hard fixed

Aesthetics
01:00:095 (1) - Are you making this to make the sliderball "wiggle"? if yes, leave as it is, if not, fix with the speed multiplier. Ignored,my idea of mapping is well

Well, I think that's all from my part, good luck in your way to rank, if you reply this, only put the ones you didn't follow and the reason -w-
thx for modding :)
Topic Starter
Rotte

Irie Miyuki wrote:

[General]
三个diff combo color不同 调整一下吧w

[Insane]
00:24:413 (2) - 建议换成这样 ok

00:37:936 - 加个note 用别的办法改的
00:39:640 (3,4) - 没叠好 弄好了
00:44:186 (1,2,3,4) - 换个形状啥的? 嗯...好吧
00:57:595 (1) - 位置是不是不对..换到x420 y160? 这个真没注意...
00:59:413 跟着vocal加3个note? 不跟vocal
01:13:277 连打? slider即可
01:27:822 ^ 没动,后边倒是改了下
01:30:322 感觉这一段不该就这么空着的 再加点什么? 个人感觉空着好些
01:44:640 ^ 可以节奏慢点 但是补上比较好的感觉 个人感觉空着好些
01:48:277 ^ 个人感觉空着好些
01:50:550 感觉连打不是很适合的样子 就这样搞吧...
02:40:550 连打? 改slider折返了
03:44:186 ^ 就这样搞吧...
03:52:595 (2) - clap 改了
03:58:731 其实这么多你都空着 后面还有鼓点..弄得我都有点纠结了 这个地方没空吧....
04:01:004 再map一点吧o.o 空着好些

渣比mod 要上课了来不及看其他diff 一会下午大课间我继续QwQ
连错网了打的mod又没了 只是去买了个饭而已! 真是卧槽

[Hard]
怎么用了4种slider velocity 能减少一下么 感觉没啥啊...
00:19:186 (6,7,8) - 换成这样的感觉? 弄了

00:20:777 (2) - 我真的觉得把clap音空掉了不太好.. 这个估计是忘了
00:31:459 (1) - 去掉nc 嗯好
00:31:459 (1,2) - 这个没弄

00:38:050 (9) - 去掉clap 没去
01:00:322 (6) - NC 脑残了
01:21:459 (1) - 折返处clap? 嗯好
01:28:731 (5) - NC 脑残了
02:02:595 (1,2,3,4) - 整体往右移一点? 挪不动...
02:12:368 (3) - 去掉一个折返 补一个note 这里没差
02:25:777 (6) - NC 脑残了
02:34:186 (1) - 折返处clap?
02:41:459 (4) - NC 脑残了
02:43:050 (2) - 往上拉一点? 关键是拉不上去....
02:48:731 (1) - 折返处clap? 好的
02:54:413 (3) - NC 换了个地方NC
03:46:686 (4) - 总感觉往右移一格更好的样子 左移了._.
03:52:595 (2) - clap?
03:54:868 (8) - 去掉clap 留着吧
04:28:731 (1) - 去掉nc 留着呗

[Normal]
00:13:731 (2,3) - 两个近了点? 不近啊
01:19:640 (2) - 近了? 也不近啊
01:36:459 (3) - 远了?.. 这个可能么...
02:43:277 (1) - 折返处clap? 嗯好
02:48:731 (1) - ^ 改了
03:32:368 (2) - ^ 改了
03:39:413 (2) - 感觉不合适, 在03:39:640下个note吧 弄好了
03:59:640 (4) - 折返处clap 改了

哎呦我擦老师又来了- - 等会继续

呃,平时不玩normal 不知道应该怎么mod.. 其实我觉得多加点whistle应该也挺好听o.o

不错的图w 等过两天我的星星多了我来射一个w
谢啦 :)
meiikyuu
request from in-game

Normal
  1. 00:13:277 (1) - move one grid up (so that 2 will perfectly curve over the note)
  2. 01:13:277 (1) - remove NC
  3. 01:14:868 (3) - and then NC here (new line in vocal)
  4. 01:32:368 (1) - remove NC here, and NC on next note (follows instruments)
  5. 01:36:913 (3) - NC here, and remove NC on next note
  6. 01:41:913 (2) - i'm not sure about the slider end sound, it might be unrankable if it's totally mute. maybe increase to 20%?
  7. 02:56:913 - you should try to drag break start here instead :P it works ~


Hard
  1. 00:14:868 (4) - stack perfectly with 00:14:186 (3) - please
  2. 00:24:186 (1) - remove finish, it's unnecessary in this part of the song imo, and also its still a quiet part of the song
  3. 03:25:777 (3) - use whistle on reverse, not clap


Insane
  1. 01:07:368 (4,5) - the distance between these two look kind of abnormal compared to the other jumps..? :s try highlighting 01:07:595 (5,6) - and ctrl+G, reverse selection
  2. 04:24:640 (2) - add clap at beginning
  3. 04:25:322 (4) - add clap on beginning and on the reverse


nice map (:
Topic Starter
Rotte

meiikyuu wrote:

request from in-game

Normal
  1. 00:13:277 (1) - move one grid up (so that 2 will perfectly curve over the note)
  2. 01:13:277 (1) - remove NC
  3. 01:14:868 (3) - and then NC here (new line in vocal)
  4. 01:32:368 (1) - remove NC here, and NC on next note (follows instruments)
  5. 01:36:913 (3) - NC here, and remove NC on next note
  6. 01:41:913 (2) - i'm not sure about the slider end sound, it might be unrankable if it's totally mute. maybe increase to 20%?
  7. 02:56:913 - you should try to drag break start here instead :P it works ~


Hard
  1. 00:14:868 (4) - stack perfectly with 00:14:186 (3) - please
  2. 00:24:186 (1) - remove finish, it's unnecessary in this part of the song imo, and also its still a quiet part of the song
  3. 03:25:777 (3) - use whistle on reverse, not clap


Insane
  1. 01:07:368 (4,5) - the distance between these two look kind of abnormal compared to the other jumps..? :s try highlighting 01:07:595 (5,6) - and ctrl+G, reverse selection
  2. 04:24:640 (2) - add clap at beginning
  3. 04:25:322 (4) - add clap on beginning and on the reverse


nice map (:
Fixed all :)
HelloSCV
From your queue!
M4M request :D

Normal
01:16:004 (1) - delete NC
01:36:913 (1) - add finish
01:54:186 (4) - delete clap on start
02:21:459 (2) - like this? http://puu.sh/1B6V3
02:29:186 (2) - clap

Hard
00:05:095 (3) - add clap on end
01:29:186 (2,3,4,5) - change to slider like 01:28:731 (1) - this
02:12:822 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:56:459 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Insane
00:34:186 (6) - touch HP i guess
00:37:140 (3) - this slider's reverse arroaw was hidden
00:46:231 (10) - add note here with NC? ( if you do this you need to 00:46:459 (1) - delte NC )
00:54:413 (3) - maybe ctrl + G?
01:07:595 (5) - delete finish and 01:07:822 (6) - add finish
01:44:186 (1) - add finish
02:08:731 (4) - touch HP bar
02:51:913 (4) - add clap on start
03:24:868 (4) - delete slider end's clap and 03:25:550 (5) - add clap
03:52:822 (1) - remove NC
04:29:868 (1) - add whistl

cute song xD good luck for rank!
x847606653
酱油。

总感觉BG质量有点差,是错觉么。
两种combo color好像,不考虑换一种么?

Insane
00:01:913 (2,3,1) - 这样好看点嘛?
http://puu.sh/1B8kM
00:02:595 (2) - 如果上面改的话,这里移动到188,296调整一下形状。
00:18:731 (6) - 删掉?
00:26:913 (3) - 听着有点怪,换成两个note?
00:43:731 (4) - ctrl+G?
00:49:640 (8,1) - 这种overlap不要?
00:51:004 (4,2) - ^
01:02:822 (5,6,7) - 三连听起来不和谐,换成slider?
03:48:504 - 加个note?

Hard
00:18:050 (3,4) - 移动到256.20?
00:37:140 (7) - nc?
02:01:459 (6,1) - overlap

Normal
00:19:413 (2) - 移动到484.184?
00:43:959 (4) - 改成这样?
http://puu.sh/1Boyp

以上,祝好运
Topic Starter
Rotte

x847606653 wrote:

酱油。

总感觉BG质量有点差,是错觉么。 BG换了
两种combo color好像,不考虑换一种么? 拆的比较开,所以暂时先保留

Insane
00:01:913 (2,3,1) - 这样好看点嘛? ok
http://puu.sh/1B8kM
00:02:595 (2) - 如果上面改的话,这里移动到188,296调整一下形状。嗯...
00:18:731 (6) - 删掉?
00:26:913 (3) - 听着有点怪,换成两个note? 我觉得这样挺好
00:43:731 (4) - ctrl+G? 先留着吧...
00:49:640 (8,1) - 这种overlap不要? 好了
00:51:004 (4,2) - ^ 这个不太影响吧
01:02:822 (5,6,7) - 三连听起来不和谐,换成slider? 直接5 stream
03:48:504 - 加个note? 直接5 stream

Hard
00:18:050 (3,4) - 移动到256.20?加了个jump
00:37:140 (7) - nc?
02:01:459 (6,1) - overlap 弄了

Normal
00:19:413 (2) - 移动到484.184?嗯..
00:43:959 (4) - 改成这样?
http://puu.sh/1Boyp

以上,祝好运
谢啦
S o r d a
from in-games

[overall]:
  1. you should tagchange hakamada hinata


[Insane]:
  1. 00:13:731 (2,3,4,5) - i dont like this place you can change this?
  2. 00:37:140 (3) - slider reverse hard to look i guess
  3. 00:57:595 - how about this? http://puu.sh/1BNml
  4. 01:49:868 - this freen line useless?
  5. 04:29:413 (6) - slider end finish


[Hard]:
  • you should check volume why 64,56,24 ?



[Normal]:
  1. fine

nice map ~
good luck!
Topic Starter
Rotte

S o r d a wrote:

from in-games

[overall]:
  1. you should tagchange hakamada hinata
Fixed

[Insane]:
  1. 00:13:731 (2,3,4,5) - i dont like this place you can change this? Fixed a lot
  2. 00:37:140 (3) - slider reverse hard to look i guess Fixed
  3. 00:57:595 - how about this? http://puu.sh/1BNml Fixed
  4. 01:49:868 - this freen line useless? remove previous line
  5. 04:29:413 (6) - slider end finish add it


[Hard]:
  • you should check volume why 64,56,24 ? fixed



[Normal]:
  1. fine

nice map ~
good luck!
Thanks a lot~
RikiH_
Ohai, m4m from my queue. Sorry for late :o

Normal

I'm not sure about Star Rating 3.12, try to decrease it until it is < 3

00:37:140 (3,4) - A bit weird, move 3 grid up, they play well (Arrange spacing after this)
00:43:959 (4) - x:240 y:28 please!
00:58:277 (3) - This self-overlapping is a bit strange...
01:14:868 (1) - Delete NC
02:22:368 (4) - Symmetric with the previous 2? It's weird
02:25:322 (2) - x:316 y:52 orz
02:38:050 (1,2,3) - Can you arragne them to make a triangle?
Add a spinner from 03:15:095 to 03:16:459 ?
03:18:277 - Add a note with clap in the center of the grid, it feels empty
03:20:095 - ^
03:21:913 - ^
03:23:504 - ^
04:00:322 (5) - Start this slider here?
04:27:822 (3,4) - Banket them a bit better :V

Hard

01:09:413 (7) - Repeat 1 grid down
01:29:868 (6) - Silence slider's tail, it sounds better imo
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4) - Take the whole pattern and move 3 grid down
02:10:550 (3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are a bit nazi for an hard diff, but I think you can keep them lol
03:17:368 (4) - There obviously is a clap in the song, so add a clap and keep adding claps every two lines, if you know what i mean
03:29:413 (1,2,3) - I'd keep using soft hitsounds here...
04:06:686 (1,2,3,4) - The whole pattern 4 grid down

Insane

00:01:231 (1) - Why this NC?
00:07:595 (6,1) - I'm not sure about this spacing. It's the same between 5 and 6 and it's weird
00:14:640 (6) - Replace with a 1/4 stream
00:52:481 (4) - It sounds really bad here, start it on the red line please!
01:52:368 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is asymmetric and really strange, please fix
02:19:754 (4) - Same thing as before
02:51:913 (4,1) - Try to blanket them somehow
03:17:368 (4) - Same thing as hard with claps!
03:44:868 (1) - Replace with a stream

Nice map, good luck :3
Topic Starter
Rotte

RikiH_ wrote:

Ohai, m4m from my queue. Sorry for late :o

Normal

I'm not sure about Star Rating 3.12, try to decrease it until it is < 3

00:37:140 (3,4) - A bit weird, move 3 grid up, they play well (Arrange spacing after this) fixed with other ways
00:43:959 (4) - x:240 y:28 please! fixed with other ways
00:58:277 (3) - This self-overlapping is a bit strange... fixed
01:14:868 (1) - Delete NC fixed
02:22:368 (4) - Symmetric with the previous 2? It's weird fixed with other ways
02:25:322 (2) - x:316 y:52 orz fixed with other ways
02:38:050 (1,2,3) - Can you arragne them to make a triangle? no
Add a spinner from 03:15:095 to 03:16:459 ? This spinner is too short ,not add
03:18:277 - Add a note with clap in the center of the grid, it feels empty no
03:20:095 - ^ no
03:21:913 - ^ no
03:23:504 - ^ no
04:00:322 (5) - Start this slider here? Add some objects
04:27:822 (3,4) - Banket them a bit better :V it's well

Hard

01:09:413 (7) - Repeat 1 grid down ok
01:29:868 (6) - Silence slider's tail, it sounds better imo not silende...
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4) - Take the whole pattern and move 3 grid down ok.
02:10:550 (3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps are a bit nazi for an hard diff, but I think you can keep them lol fixed
03:17:368 (4) - There obviously is a clap in the song, so add a clap and keep adding claps every two lines, if you know what i mean fixed
03:29:413 (1,2,3) - I'd keep using soft hitsounds here... normal is good
04:06:686 (1,2,3,4) - The whole pattern 4 grid down ok

Insanewait a minute

00:01:231 (1) - Why this NC?
00:07:595 (6,1) - I'm not sure about this spacing. It's the same between 5 and 6 and it's weird
00:14:640 (6) - Replace with a 1/4 stream
00:52:481 (4) - It sounds really bad here, start it on the red line please!
01:52:368 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is asymmetric and really strange, please fix
02:19:754 (4) - Same thing as before
02:51:913 (4,1) - Try to blanket them somehow
03:17:368 (4) - Same thing as hard with claps!
03:44:868 (1) - Replace with a stream

Nice map, good luck :3
lkx_Shore
饶了我...声线太幼我接受不了QAQ
Topic Starter
Rotte
如果之前我问你要过mod的话,现在你只需要mod Normal和Hard

If I asked mod for you,you can mod N&H diff only,because I want to remake Insane diff
Topic Starter
Rotte
About bpm.
This bpm heard by me,not software,if you want make me mod this bpm to 132,forget it plz
Mixagji
sorry for super delay and short mod orz

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:04:859(2) - clap?
00:05:541(3) - clap
00:08:268(3) - newcombo same 00:04:632 as
00:08:495(4) - clap?

[Insane]
oh remaking ;)

I do mod again when completed Insane.
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