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AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 18, 2013 at 4:49:51 PM

Artist: AiRI
Title: Dreamer (TV Size)
Source: TARI TARI
Tags: opening Kirino Kousaka ReySHeL
BPM: 168
Filesize: 11784kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.9 stars, 70 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 267 notes)
  3. Kirino's Hard (4.94 stars, 238 notes)
  4. Normal (3.88 stars, 116 notes)
  5. ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii (4.81 stars, 327 notes)
  6. ReySHeL's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 431 notes)
Download: AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by Kirino Kousaka
Insane by me
Taiko diffs by ReySHeL
:D
Last edited by Genkishi , edited 29 times in total.
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
For the timing, use only one section with 168,00 bpm. The offset seems to be in the right window, but you can work with this now and do some tweakings to the offset at the end with a full map to test.
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

Dangaard wrote:

For the timing, use only one section with 168,00 bpm. The offset seems to be in the right window, but you can work with this now and do some tweakings to the offset at the end with a full map to test.
Thank you very much! :D
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
I got offset 690(+25) :<
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

Netsukawa wrote:

I got offset 690(+25) :<
Some parts are off with offset 690 so no..but thanks for helping :)
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hey cousin! Why not Resurrect this map? It's a nice map :D
I made I hard diff, I hope you like it: Kirino's Hard

  • Some Mod:
    1. Use "Tari Tari" instead of "TARI TARI" as your source.
    2. Your current offset 665 is kinda off, the beat sounds kinda early so I used 661 on my diff and I recommend you to use that. See if it's good. :D
    3. Don't forget to adjust the Notes and Timing Points if you adjusted the offset.
    4. Add me to the tags if you'll accept my diff. "kirino kousaka"
    5. 01:28:522 - Let the spinners end on this white tick for all diffs. I already applied it on my diff so see if it looks good.
    6. Use 5% of volume on those final spinners, instead of 20%. I also did this to my diff, I highly suggest this because it would fit the ending.
    Aaand Star~ :D
EDIT: My 101st KD ;w; * Tears of joy*
Last edited by Kirino Kousaka , edited 2 times in total.
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
oops, can't star till you resurrect this lol XD
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
i love TARI TARI >w<
could i make taiko diff for this song?
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

ReySHeL wrote:

i love TARI TARI >w<
could i make taiko diff for this song?
You again? xD Well okay that's fine :D
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
finished~ :D

http://puu.sh/1UmA6
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

ReySHeL wrote:

finished~ :D

http://puu.sh/1UmA6
Added :D
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
finished~ :D
Taiko Muzukashii
http://puu.sh/1WOPV
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
decided to look at this one too :)

[General]
  1. bg image is not 4:3 (yours is 1024x764)
  2. looks like you've converted a youtube video to get the mp3. may i suggest a proper 320->192 conversion? link.
  3. remove opening from tags, add ReySHeL to ReySHeL's diff tags.
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:660 (3) - i suggest http://puu.sh/1YzOC instead of one long slider.
  2. 00:49:232 (1) - curve it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601516
  3. 00:51:553 (1) - make it circle + slider instead? http://puu.sh/1YzST
  4. 01:00:303 (3) - flip it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601519
  5. 01:25:660 and 01:26:018 - add notes?
[Kirino's Hard]
  1. 00:11:910 - i can hear a triplet here, but it's not mapped.
  2. 00:12:625 - i don't hear a triplet here, but it's mapped. why would you do that? D:
  3. 00:19:053 - having no note here is a sin. atone for your sins and add a note here.
  4. 00:21:910 - and here?
  5. 00:43:339 - no note here? it would fit in your pattern well and also follow the drum (you have a note at similar 00:47:625 btw)
  6. 00:48:339 (2) - x:120 y:48
  7. 00:50:482 (7) - something should be at start (whistle/finish)
  8. 01:25:125 - this break shouldn't be here, i think.
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:411 (1) - remove this whistle? you don't have one later at 00:15:125 (1) though there parts are almost the same.
  2. 00:14:768 (7,1) - this should either start at 00:14:589 or at 00:14:946
  3. 00:16:553 (1) - end here, add notes at 00:17:803 + 00:17:982 and change 00:18:160 (3) into a 1/2 with a repeat?
  4. 00:26:375 (7) - curve this slider a bit at least? 90-degree-angle-patterns are so 2008 :<
  5. 00:30:660 (5) - give this slider an S-shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601502
  6. 00:40:303 - add a note here since it's the same guitar sound as you have at 00:40:482 (6)
  7. 00:44:589 (3,1) - i suggest to change it like this http://puu.sh/1Yzds to follow lyrics better.
  8. 00:45:661 (1,3) - these parts are different. i suggest to get rid of symmetry and map something else instead of 00:45:661 (1)
  9. 00:53:518 (3) - unsnapped slider (end)
  10. 01:03:875 (2) - nc, since this note follows a spinner.
  11. 01:11:018 (7) - unsnapped slider (repeat and end)
  12. 01:26:196 - add note here.
there :P
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

senaya wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]
  1. 00:11:910 - i can hear a triplet here, but it's not mapped. fixed.
  2. 00:12:625 - i don't hear a triplet here, but it's mapped. why would you do that? D: fixed.
  3. 00:19:053 - having no note here is a sin. atone for your sins and add a note here. fixed.
  4. 00:21:910 - and here? fixed.
  5. 00:43:339 - no note here? it would fit in your pattern well and also follow the drum (you have a note at similar 00:47:625 btw) fixed.
  6. 00:48:339 (2) - x:120 y:48 fixed.
  7. 00:50:482 (7) - something should be at start (whistle/finish) fixed. added whistle.
  8. 01:25:125 - this break shouldn't be here, i think. removed.
Update: http://puu.sh/1YMrG
Also edited some parts on my own.
Thanks for modding senaya :D
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

senaya wrote:

decided to look at this one too :)

[General]
  1. bg image is not 4:3 (yours is 1024x764)
  2. looks like you've converted a youtube video to get the mp3. may i suggest a proper 320->192 conversion? link.
  3. remove opening from tags, add ReySHeL to ReySHeL's diff tags.
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:660 (3) - i suggest http://puu.sh/1YzOC instead of one long slider.
  2. 00:49:232 (1) - curve it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601516
  3. 00:51:553 (1) - make it circle + slider instead? http://puu.sh/1YzST
  4. 01:00:303 (3) - flip it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601519
  5. 01:25:660 and 01:26:018 - add notes?
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:411 (1) - remove this whistle? you don't have one later at 00:15:125 (1) though there parts are almost the same.
  2. 00:14:768 (7,1) - this should either start at 00:14:589 or at 00:14:946
  3. 00:16:553 (1) - end here, add notes at 00:17:803 + 00:17:982 and change 00:18:160 (3) into a 1/2 with a repeat?
  4. 00:26:375 (7) - curve this slider a bit at least? 90-degree-angle-patterns are so 2008 :<
  5. 00:30:660 (5) - give this slider an S-shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601502
  6. 00:40:303 - add a note here since it's the same guitar sound as you have at 00:40:482 (6)
  7. 00:44:589 (3,1) - i suggest to change it like this http://puu.sh/1Yzds to follow lyrics better.
  8. 00:45:661 (1,3) - these parts are different. i suggest to get rid of symmetry and map something else instead of 00:45:661 (1)
  9. 00:53:518 (3) - unsnapped slider (end)
  10. 01:03:875 (2) - nc, since this note follows a spinner.
  11. 01:11:018 (7) - unsnapped slider (repeat and end)
  12. 01:26:196 - add note here.
there :P
Thanks for modding :D
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi Genkishi~

From my queue :)

[Easy]

00:37:625 (3,1) specing

01:09:410 (3,1) blanket? In order to shape a better

01:18:339 (1,2) ^ too


[Normal]

00:08:518 add note? Hollow beat pattern

00:29:768 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZAde

00:42:089 To the left 1 grid


[Kirino's Hard]

00:06:018 (1) Ctrl+G ?

00:12:803 (4) ^ In order to improve the flow

00:22:089 (1,2,3) Overlap -> http://puu.sh/1ZAkq change please

00:24:768 add note?

00:26:107 (4,5,6) Overlap

00:29:768 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) specing

00:35:750 (2,3) Overlap

00:36:910 (5,6) ^ too

00:50:125 (5,6,7) ^ Change please.. http://puu.sh/1ZAqm

00:52:803 (4,5) Overlap...

00:54:321 (3,4) ^ too..

00:57:625 (3,4) please ! overlap!!

00:59:500 (3) specing

01:06:107 (8,1,2) specing

01:07:268 (3,4) specing too please.. change

01:11:464 (7,8,9,1) Overlap...

01:14:232 (1,2) specing.

01:18:964(1,2) OMG.. please change overlap


[Insane]

00:30:660 (5) This is slider -> change?

00:34:143 (7,5) Stack

00:36:285 (5,6) specing

00:44:053 (1,2) Why is jump pattern... please paste

01:13:964 (5,6,7,8) specing


P.S please this is map specing check :) Good Luck
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]

00:06:018 (1) Ctrl+G ? fixed.

00:12:803 (4) ^ In order to improve the flow fixed, also made some additional changes.

00:22:089 (1,2,3) Overlap -> http://puu.sh/1ZAkq change please fixed.

00:24:768 add note? fixed.

00:26:107 (4,5,6) Overlap What to do with them? No change.

00:29:768 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) specing They're supposed to be jumps XD No change.

00:35:750 (2,3) Overlap No change.

00:36:910 (5,6) ^ too I don't get it. :o No change.

00:50:125 (5,6,7) ^ Change please.. http://puu.sh/1ZAqm fixed.

00:52:803 (4,5) Overlap... No change.

00:54:321 (3,4) ^ too.. I don't see anything wrong with it. No change.

00:57:625 (3,4) please ! overlap!! What!? :o No change.

00:59:500 (3) specing fixed.

01:06:107 (8,1,2) specing fixed. Made some other changes.

01:07:268 (3,4) specing too please.. change fixed. ^

01:11:464 (7,8,9,1) Overlap... What!? :o No change.

01:14:232 (1,2) specing. fixed. Made some other changes.

01:18:964(1,2) OMG.. please change overlap fixed.
Thanks for the mod Gloria Guard! :3
Diff Update: http://puu.sh/20jiR
/me whispers: GG-san, it's "spacing" desu!~ "spacing"~
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Genkishi~

From my queue :)

[Easy]

00:37:625 (3,1) specing

01:09:410 (3,1) blanket? In order to shape a better

01:18:339 (1,2) ^ too


[Normal]

00:08:518 add note? Hollow beat pattern

00:29:768 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZAde

00:42:089 To the left 1 grid



[Insane]

00:30:660 (5) This is slider -> change?

00:34:143 (7,5) Stack

00:36:285 (5,6) specing

00:44:053 (1,2) Why is jump pattern... please paste

01:13:964 (5,6,7,8) specing


P.S please this is map specing check :) Good Luck
Thanks for modding :D
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hi, mod requested from Kirino Kousaka

[Easy]
00:10:660 (2) - A slider ending in 00:11:375 - would be better imo
00:26:375 (4) - nc?
00:53:518 (2) - what about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645442 ?

[Normal]
00:48:161 (2,3) - CTRL+J?
00:51:553 (4) - Remove new combo
00:51:732 (1) - New combo

[Kirino's Hard]
00:14:232 (1) - Remove new combo
00:15:928 (1) - Remove beat
00:16:732 (9) - New combo
00:41:375 (3,4,5) - Ugly pattern, change to something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645614 (don't forget to fix spacing
00:45:482 (1) - CTRL+J
00:49:232 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing (suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645624)
01:08:696 (1,2,3,4) - They are too near from each other - Suggestion: (1) x:384 y:336, (2) x:384 y:248, (3) x:384 y:160, (4) x:384 y:72
01:11:553 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^

[Insane]
AR8 please, orz
00:10:214 (4) - Remove beat
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Leader wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]
00:14:232 (1) - Remove new combo No change. :(
00:15:928 (1) - Remove beat No change. :(
00:16:732 (9) - New combo No change. :(
00:41:375 (3,4,5) - Ugly pattern, change to something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645614 (don't forget to fix spacing Made changes~
00:45:482 (1) - CTRL+J Made changes~
00:49:232 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing (suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/645624) They're supposed to be mini jumps :<
01:08:696 (1,2,3,4) - They are too near from each other - Suggestion: (1) x:384 y:336, (2) x:384 y:248, (3) x:384 y:160, (4) x:384 y:72 Made changes~
01:11:553 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^ Made changes~
Thanks for the mod Leader~ :D
Diff Update: http://puu.sh/2eKrg
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
Requested via PM :)
Not bad at all
[General]
AudioLeadIn 0
vv I think these color will be more suitable vv
SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,240,60
Combo2 : 60,240,240
Combo3 : 240,240,60
Combo4 : 240,120,60

[Easy]
OD+1
looks good

[Normal]
OD+1
01:12:803 (2,3,4) - how about this

[Kirino's Hard]
AR+1
should pay attention to Distance Snap (:
00:14:946 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - a bit overmapped :x (2,3,4,5,6) i think is fine, but (7,1,2) make it a bit overmapped
00:23:696 (2,3) - a suddenly jump make me confused, because there had anti jump in 00:16:732 (3,4)
00:24:589 (5) - move a grid up
00:24:768 - add a note with whistle on it
00:59:946 (4,5,6) - how about this
01:06:196 (1,2,3,4) - how about this

[Insane]
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it poligon
01:04:411 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it square
01:12:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - star would be cool in here
01:26:375 - add a note with finish
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old
[MOD QUEUE REQUEST (Taiko only)]
SIGNs
● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:25:660 - ● ?
  2. 00:27:803 (1) ⇒ 00:27:625 ?
  3. 00:28:160 - ● ?
  4. 00:37:089 - delete ?
  5. 00:39:232 (1) ⇒ 00:39:053 ?
[*]01:03:518 ~ 01:24:768
気合パートが少々寂しいような気がします
01:04:857 これを中心とした３連打など追加出来るのでは？

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:31:285 (2,1) - delete ?
  2. 00:48:875 (3,2) - ● ?
[*]00:57:982 ~ 01:00:660
00:58:518 (5,9) などのように ● も挟めるのでは？

[*]
  1. 01:02:893 - ● ?
  2. 01:05:660 - ● ?
  3. 01:06:196 (1,2) - ● ?
  4. 01:15:125 - ● ?



Thank you ~
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Genkishi
Fixed those mods

thanks
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Harez wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]
AR+1 It would be harder, but looks nice, so fixed.
should pay attention to Distance Snap (: I am, this is a hard diff so it's normal to have some infringements used as jumps.
00:14:946 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - a bit overmapped :x (2,3,4,5,6) i think is fine, but (7,1,2) make it a bit overmapped I don't think so. :(
00:23:696 (2,3) - a suddenly jump make me confused, because there had anti jump in 00:16:732 (3,4) Changes made.
00:24:589 (5) - move a grid up fixed.
00:24:768 - add a note with whistle on it There's a note here already, maybe you could not see because of update problems.
00:59:946 (4,5,6) - how about this fixed.
01:06:196 (1,2,3,4) - how about thisfixed.
Thanks for modding Harez! :D

Diff Update: http://puu.sh/2i1oR
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL

0gre wrote:

[MOD QUEUE REQUEST (Taiko only)]
SIGNs
● = don
● = katsu
◎ = big done
◎ = big katsu

* = suggestion
* = strongly recommended
* = mini explanation

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:25:660 - ● ?
  2. 00:27:803 (1) ⇒ 00:27:625 ?
  3. 00:28:160 - ● ?
  4. 00:37:089 - delete ?
  5. 00:39:232 (1) ⇒ 00:39:053 ?
[*]01:03:518 ~ 01:24:768
気合パートが少々寂しいような気がします
01:04:857 これを中心とした３連打など追加出来るのでは？

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]
MOD information
[*]
  1. 00:31:285 (2,1) - delete ?
  2. 00:48:875 (3,2) - ● ?
[*]00:57:982 ~ 01:00:660
00:58:518 (5,9) などのように ● も挟めるのでは？

[*]
  1. 01:02:893 - ● ?
  2. 01:05:660 - ● ?
  3. 01:06:196 (1,2) - ● ?
  4. 01:15:125 - ● ?



Thank you ~

all fixed >w<
thanks for mod :)

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2joE2
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2joEj
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥

[General]

• bg.jpg is 1024x764, should be 1024x768. Resize it~

• Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii : 1963
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni : 1963

Put here 2000 and delete from standard diffs~ it's not need here

• On Insane different kiai time what on another diffs~

Kiai #2: Starts on 01:14:946, ends on 01:26:375
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:14:946, ends on 01:23:518 <--- should be

[Insane]

00:07:982 - Here better add note, it sounds more rhytmicaly what now.
00:09:768(3,4) - stack it a bit better http://puu.sh/2jQxc
00:15:125(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo looks very wrong and not pleasant. http://puu.sh/2jQRX This patter will be more playable and looks nicer~(note 2 and 5 in previous note 6, copy slider 1 and ctrl+H, note 4 x124 y256 and note 6 x388 y 268)
00:17:803 - replace on finish, sounds more pleasant here
00:23:518 - add finish.
00:29:232 - 00:40:660 - On this part finishes sounds a bit ovrmapped~ Better leave on second downbeat and delete another, It will be sounds consistency and more melodic.
00:33:696(1,2,3,4,5) - make this pattern more symmetric http://puu.sh/2jQQX
00:40:668 - unsnapped grren section, snap to 00:40:660
00:45:660 - here better remove NC and add on slider 3.
00:47:268(5,6) - this notes not sound here, delete it and put 1 note on on white tick, it's better follow for music
00:51:732 - remove nc and add on slider 4. It's better follow for music.
00:53:339 - remove nc and add on slider 3.
00:54:768 - ^
00:53:518 (3) - unsnapped slider end
01:00:750 - Start spin here and end 01:02:803, after put pattern http://puu.sh/2jQXX Sounds much better for this moment in the music.
01:25:839 - If you will be better follow for music, then put this pattern http://puu.sh/2jR6H and move grin section on next blue tick.

[Kirino's Hard]

00:06:018 - 70% sounds vrery loud >.< use 50% for comfortable play
00:07:089 - This slider not sound here absolutely. Replace on 2 notes 1/2.
00:19:232(1,2) - looks as overlap~ Make slider 1 more roundish http://puu.sh/2jRyy.
00:26:196(6) - plz fix this overlap, http://puu.sh/2jRBb
00:35:482(2,3) - make it a bit more playable http://puu.sh/2jRD3
00:36:196(4,6) - brrr plz fix this overlaps, it looks very ugly and uncomfortable for play.
00:39:053 - Here you should add note, for better rhythm and smooth transition
00:39:232(1,2,3,4) - make identical distance between this sliders for better pattern.
00:41:196(2,3) - wrong spacing, fix it
01:01:910 - The same with spin what on Insane

• To be honnest diff looks very dirty and ugly, plz fix all ovelaps and make blankets more roundish, It will be looks more pleasant for players.
• Plz check all NC~ Will be better if you will be put NC on down beat, it's better follow for music and for consistency.
• Where use soft sound better put more finishes. It will be more interesting, only claps sounds veryyyyy boring~

[Normal]

00:36:018 (2,3) - stack it better
00:40:660(1,1)- make it more symmetry http://puu.sh/2jRXd
00:42:089 - remove here nc and add on next slider, if you put nc on every second downbeat then put it on all diff.
01:03:518 - very close to note, http://puu.sh/2jRZs this will be more playable for normal players.
01:18:875(4,5) - fix this blanket http://puu.sh/2jS3F

And the same suggestions with hitsounds what on Insane~

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00:26:375(1) - up it a bit for better flow~ http://puu.sh/2jS7J
00:26:375 - add finish here
00:34:232 - if you add note here, you will be better follow for vokal and it will be more playable for begginers
00:42:089 - remove NC
01:10:660(2,3) - 1 grid up for symmetry http://puu.sh/2jSb0
01:18:518(2) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/2jSda

Map looks nice but a bit dirty :P I hope after some mods it will be amazing :3 Good luck~
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