Hi from my mod Q~

• Kiai times on all diffs should be identical

Insane

00:03:122 - better replace on double slider 1\2 and put on white big tick
00:18:203 - make so http://puu.sh/PQsg sounds better
00:23:230(7,8,10) - stack it
00:37:338 - NC
00:41:393 - remove this note very close to the spinner
00:44:474 - NC
00:46:582 - remove this note, not sound here
00:48:852 - replase on double slider 1/2 and put on white tick
00:52:257 - NC
01:01:014(4,5,6) - stack better
01:03:609(1,2,3,4,5,6) - make identical spacing between this notes
01:13:663 - NC

Hard

Looks randomly and ugly ;w; Try make more symmetric patterns ans sliders) And better listen rhythm~

Good luck~ Sorry I'm haven't free time((

1491625364981 wrote:

HI! Here is CLANNAD Modding Queue's mod

General

I think this map almost completed

But have a little mistake

EASY

Great temple. So I will give some advise about sound

00:15:284 - add finish
00:20:474 (3) - add whistle
00:23:068 - add finish
00:43:176 (2) - add clap
00:44:474 (3) - add whistle
00:47:068 (1,2,3,4) - add clap
01:24:690 (1) - add finish

NORMAL

The main Question is distance. place check your distance again

HARD

00:48:366 - Here is too HARD. It is belong INSANE
01:28:582 - finish

INSANE

00:56:960 - I think you can set note in 00:56:960 - 00:57:122 - 00:57:284 -
like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396494
01:28:582 - stop in here and add finish

OK!That is all. Hope those can help you.

WAW! thx for advice that's make the Hitsound is better than before

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~

• Kiai times on all diffs should be identical

Insane

00:03:122 - better replace on double slider 1\2 and put on white big tick
00:18:203 - make so http://puu.sh/PQsg sounds better
00:23:230(7,8,10) - stack it
00:37:338 - NC
00:41:393 - remove this note very close to the spinner
00:44:474 - NC
00:46:582 - remove this note, not sound here
00:48:852 - replase on double slider 1/2 and put on white tick
00:52:257 - NC
01:01:014(4,5,6) - stack better
01:03:609(1,2,3,4,5,6) - make identical spacing between this notes
01:13:663 - NC

Hard

Looks randomly and ugly ;w; Try make more symmetric patterns ans sliders) And better listen rhythm~

Good luck~ Sorry I'm haven't free time((

yay thx 4 mod and advice ,
I aggre if my hard is ugly ;_;
Good luck in your Modding Que ~

uhm....

[I need an SS for Insane play and Replays]

[Give me the replay by post in this forum , Cuz i want to watch human playing this map not auto ]

[Who give the replay i will give u kudos,cuz that's help me to see how people playing my map]

[Insane Diff okay ....not easy,etc]

actually this was 2nd try because in the mid of game I paused it and go somewhere lol http://puu.sh/Q6Y9
Only my opinion

1. I totally disagree with this one 01:15:122 (inherited timing point) it hurt my ears orz (since I was using headphone)
2. some of clap and whistle are not are not placed in the right place
3. Maybe add video?
4. 00:53:717 need more spacing?

Matoryoshika wrote:

actually this was 2nd try because in the mid of game I paused it and go somewhere lol http://puu.sh/Q6Y9
Only my opinion

1. I totally disagree with this one 01:15:122 (inherited timing point) it hurt my ears orz (since I was using headphone)
2. some of clap and whistle are not are not placed in the right place
3. Maybe add video?
4. 00:53:717 need more spacing?

i have comen in your replay
"Wedyannnn" (indonesian oi)
thx 4 your replay

YAP

[Next mod]

coyyyyy JT123 dah lama gk maen bareng ma indra

back to main topic
sesuai request mod,saya datang membantu.....ini dia XD

Easy
Coba pake fitur distance snap deh biar diatur jarak tiap beat biar rapi
01:14:960 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - coba di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Normal
01:15:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - sama seperti d easy,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Hard
01:15:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ini jg sama aja,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Insane
01:15:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - kayaknya smua diff slalu d sini yg tinggal,tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

dari smua diff,beat tidak ada yg false and smuanya pada ketukan yg tepat

then i shall take my leave
btw,good work! and i'm sure your map will be ranked for sure!

shojimeguro wrote:

coyyyyy JT123 dah lama gk maen bareng ma indra

back to main topic
sesuai request mod,saya datang membantu.....ini dia XD

Easy
Coba pake fitur distance snap deh biar diatur jarak tiap beat biar rapi
01:14:960 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - coba di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Normal
01:15:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - sama seperti d easy,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Hard
01:15:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ini jg sama aja,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Insane
01:15:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - kayaknya smua diff slalu d sini yg tinggal,tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

dari smua diff,beat tidak ada yg false and smuanya pada ketukan yg tepat

then i shall take my leave
btw,good work! and i'm sure your map will be ranked for sure!

AHHHWWW THXXX SHOJI
tp kalo dipikir2 btul juga ya kalo akhir combo enk na pake Finish

btw,Indra kompi na lagi jebol

yaa skali lagi trima kasi ya _(._.)_

[Uhm can I get the bubble ]

[btw,i dunno how to get a bubble]

[Next mod if the bubble from MAT isn't come yet]

[NEXTTT MOD ........]

[XD]

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
General

Sorry, I couldn't find much because this map already is very good!

Easy

00:13:987 (5) - Maybe remove this? It's hard to see for beginners.
00:38:636 (1) - New Combo
00:57:447 (4) - You could make this slider longer to 00:59:393 It fits better.
01:18:203 (4) - New Combo

Normal

00:13:987 - Add a circle here?
00:19:501 (1) - New Combo
00:46:744 (7) - New Combo

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
General

Sorry, I couldn't find much because this map already is very good!

Easy

00:13:987 (5) - Maybe remove this? It's hard to see for beginners. (i don't think so )
00:38:636 (1) - New Combo (uh-uh)
00:57:447 (4) - You could make this slider longer to 00:59:393 It fits better. (u r right )
01:18:203 (4) - New Combo (uh-huh)

Normal


00:13:987 - Add a circle here?
00:19:501 (1) - New Combo
00:46:744 (7) - New Combo

THX Dubababababa~~

Just random mod. Sorry, my second try at all time

Easy

• 00:11:393-00:14:311 - looks very strange. sliders have not same lengths, use 1/2 snap (because other parts have 1/1 pauses), no rithm (don't follow vocal/music) -> hitsounds broken. It's imposible to play for newbie. Remember - it's diff for players, who play one-two day in osu
  00:13:987 (5) - hidden circle very-very hard for newbie players. you MUST change this
  00:21:122 - there a NC (follow vocals), but you use slider.. delete or move it (and delete NC 00:21:771)
  00:23:717 - ^ probably same problem
  00:33:447 (4) - don't sound here. move to 00:34:095 (with nc)? and add circle on place before
  00:36:690 - NC
  01:09:771 (4) - make it no overlap with 01:11:068 (1)
  01:19:501 (5) - make it no overlap with 01:20:798 (1)

Normal

• 00:23:393 (4) - this slider don't sound. two circle is better or move this slider on white tick.
  00:28:906 (1,2) - very confuse. this repeat points must be visible all time. move one of these
  00:36:690 - probably NC, but you have there slider..
  00:41:879 (2,3,4) - try make it more beautifully http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398494
  00:46:744 (7) - NC?
  00:50:960 (3) - move it (because 300 make it hidden) or stack with 00:49:663 (1). first is better
  01:00:041 (6) - NC?
  01:22:744 (3) - you use hidden circle once on all time. it's can be suprise. change this please

Hard

• 00:16:906 (3) - hidden repeat point it's unrankable. must fixed
  00:37:663 (3) - looks strange. mb move it outside of slider?

Insane

• 00:24:690 (13,1) - too close
  01:22:744 - 01:24:041 - First: NC at 01:22:744, 01:23:230 and 01:23:717. remove others. Second: try ctrl+shift+r 30 on 01:23:230 (1,2,3) and ctrl+shift+r 60 on 01:23:717 (1,2,3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398502

Flow and sliders forms looks not very good. You can make it better
Good luck

DarkTigrus wrote:

Just random mod. Sorry, my second try at all time

Easy

• 00:11:393-00:14:311 - looks very strange. sliders have not same lengths, use 1/2 snap (because other parts have 1/1 pauses), no rithm (don't follow vocal/music) -> hitsounds broken. It's imposible to play for newbie. Remember - it's diff for players, who play one-two day in osu
  00:13:987 (5) - hidden circle very-very hard for newbie players. you MUST change this
  00:21:122 - there a NC (follow vocals), but you use slider.. delete or move it (and delete NC 00:21:771)
  00:23:717 - ^ probably same problem
  00:33:447 (4) - don't sound here. move to 00:34:095 (with nc)? and add circle on place before
  00:36:690 - NC
  01:09:771 (4) - make it no overlap with 01:11:068 (1)
  01:19:501 (5) - make it no overlap with 01:20:798 (1)

Normal

• 00:23:393 (4) - this slider don't sound. two circle is better or move this slider on white tick.
  00:28:906 (1,2) - very confuse. this repeat points must be visible all time. move one of these
  00:36:690 - probably NC, but you have there slider..
  00:41:879 (2,3,4) - try make it more beautifully http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398494
  00:46:744 (7) - NC?
  00:50:960 (3) - move it (because 300 make it hidden) or stack with 00:49:663 (1). first is better
  01:00:041 (6) - NC?
  01:22:744 (3) - you use hidden circle once on all time. it's can be suprise. change this please

Hard

• 00:16:906 (3) - hidden repeat point it's unrankable. must fixed
  00:37:663 (3) - looks strange. mb move it outside of slider?

Insane

• 00:24:690 (13,1) - too close
  01:22:744 - 01:24:041 - First: NC at 01:22:744, 01:23:230 and 01:23:717. remove others. Second: try ctrl+shift+r 30 on 01:23:230 (1,2,3) and ctrl+shift+r 60 on 01:23:717 (1,2,3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398502

Flow and sliders forms looks not very good. You can make it better
Good luck

uhm.... Yess very thx
but ,your mod is not all i use to my map ,cuz many people said i don't have to change to many

yap

[NEXT MOD]

awwww, I love this map
but i newbie player ._.
I can't help many
and this is my first post

[easy]

00:03:284 (3) -not Shaped well
00:06:041 (2) - ^
00:48:690 (5) - -1 revers aro

[normal]

00:33:122 (4) - not shaped well
00:35:717 (4) - -1 revers aro
00:36:690 add note
01:21:771 (2) - not shaped well

[hard]

01:00:690 (2) - not shapped well
00:54:041 (6,7) - change same as 00:54:366 (8) -
00:31:825 (2) - change with reverse aro
00:41:555 (2) - not shaped well
00:04:906 (1) - ^

[insane]

uhmm... no comen





that's all my mod
I hope this map will be ranked soon

OumaZhu wrote:

awwww, I love this map
but i newbie player ._.
I can't help many
and this is my first post

[easy]

00:03:284 (3) -not Shaped well
00:06:041 (2) - ^
00:48:690 (5) - -1 revers aro

[normal]

00:33:122 (4) - not shaped well
00:35:717 (4) - -1 revers aro
00:36:690 add note
01:21:771 (2) - not shaped well

[hard]

01:00:690 (2) - not shapped well
00:54:041 (6,7) - change same as 00:54:366 (8) -
00:31:825 (2) - change with reverse aro
00:41:555 (2) - not shaped well
00:04:906 (1) - ^

[insane]

uhmm... no comen





that's all my mod
I hope this map will be ranked soon

wow , thx for mod _(._.)_
i look your mod is good
i must reshape the notes

Ok, here comes my mod~

Make sure you know what the colors I use mean.

red = you have to change it

blue = I would like to know why you don't want to change

purple = I wanted to mention it for you thinking about it

black = suggestion etc.


General

Uncheck countdown and letterboxes during break, beacuse there are no breaks

remove JT123 from tags, because the beatmap creator can be found without his name in tags



Easy

You use your hitsounds in a inconsinstent way, so it's really cracky to listen to them

You should take a hitsound pattern like this


black = clap white = no clap

That's easy to follow and sounds well


00:11:393 (3) allign with 1 and 2

00:17:555 (2) allgin with 1

00:17:555 (2) make it a bit rounder for a perfect blanket with 1 like this: http://puu.sh/R0C9

00:29:555 (4) This slider looks pretty ulgy >.< Change it a bit: http://puu.sh/R0D5

00:43:176 (2) ugly, make it look like 1

00:51:609 (2) you can make this more neat by changing it like this: http://puu.sh/R0Nz

00:57:447 (4) change to this: http://puu.sh/R0Ox

01:02:636 (3) change to http://puu.sh/R0PA


Normal


Same about hitsounds like in Easy

00:28:906 (1,2) Stack them perfectly http://puu.sh/R0S8

00:41:555 (1) allgin with 2

00:53:230 (5) This are too many repeats, because newbies often have problems with so many repeats, change into: http://puu.sh/R0U8

00:55:501 (1) This long slider is not really fitting, you should follow the vocals in this part



Hard


Same Hitsound problem


00:15:933 (1) Very ugly :/ Make it like 3

00:17:879 (4) ^

00:19:176 (6) ^

00:37:663 (3) Stack it perfectly with 4's end

00:39:933 This part is to empty, map it



Uhm, you should look at your sliders and try making them look nicer, also you must fix this hitsounds


Good luck for ranking~

Konei wrote:

Ok, here comes my mod~

Make sure you know what the colors I use mean.

red = you have to change it

blue = I would like to know why you don't want to change

purple = I wanted to mention it for you thinking about it

black = suggestion etc.


General

Uncheck countdown and letterboxes during break, beacuse there are no breaks

remove JT123 from tags, because the beatmap creator can be found without his name in tags

SPOILER

Easy

You use your hitsounds in a inconsinstent way, so it's really cracky to listen to them

You should take a hitsound pattern like this

SPOILER

black = clap white = no clap

That's easy to follow and sounds well


00:11:393 (3) allign with 1 and 2

00:17:555 (2) allgin with 1

00:17:555 (2) make it a bit rounder for a perfect blanket with 1 like this: http://puu.sh/R0C9

00:29:555 (4) This slider looks pretty ulgy >.< Change it a bit: http://puu.sh/R0D5

00:43:176 (2) ugly, make it look like 1

00:51:609 (2) you can make this more neat by changing it like this: http://puu.sh/R0Nz

00:57:447 (4) change to this: http://puu.sh/R0Ox

01:02:636 (3) change to http://puu.sh/R0PA


Normal


Same about hitsounds like in Easy

00:28:906 (1,2) Stack them perfectly http://puu.sh/R0S8

00:41:555 (1) allgin with 2

00:53:230 (5) This are too many repeats, because newbies often have problems with so many repeats, change into: http://puu.sh/R0U8

00:55:501 (1) This long slider is not really fitting, you should follow the vocals in this part



Hard


Same Hitsound problem


00:15:933 (1) Very ugly :/ Make it like 3

00:17:879 (4) ^

00:19:176 (6) ^

00:37:663 (3) Stack it perfectly with 4's end

00:39:933 This part is to empty, map it



Uhm, you should look at your sliders and try making them look nicer, also you must fix this hitsounds


Good luck for ranking~

hammmzzz....My map have many problem in Hitsound X_X
yess i have change it
btw ,What is the letter box ?

The BPM here is definately 185.


[Insane]
00:01:231 - You have an unsnapped timing section here
00:02:798 - remove, add a quarter note slider instead to match the guitar riff
00:05:393 - Add a note, it follows the sax better
00:07:176 - Remove this note, and start the 1/4 note sliders here instead
00:08:149 - Start the spinner here, the rhythm here should look like this now http://puu.sh/R4bV

00:09:933 (1) - snap this to here 00:09:609
00:10:420 - start this combo here 00:10:257 - instead
00:12:041 -add a note
00:12:202 (7,8) - move these over 1 tick
00:18:041 - add a note here, then move the rest of the combo over one tick
00:25:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - snap this entire combo back one tick

00:41:717 - Add a note to this stack here, and move the slider over one tick, and have it end here 00:42:203
00:47:555 - Add a note here and move the reverse over one tick

00:52:257 - Change this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4kB

00:55:176 - Start new combo, then make this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4lP

00:56:798 - this rhytym works better http://puu.sh/R4nh

01:10:906 - Add a note

Great job for a first map , Your sliders and patterns and such look great, just make sure in the future you follow the rhythm of the music more closely.

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Easy]

00:13:014 - spacing error
00:15:609 - x:56 y:248
00:27:609 - move 1 grid up
00:33:447 - move 1 grid up for the parallel
00:44:474 - spcing error
01:00:041 - move 2 grid down
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:19:501 - remove clap,finish mix with clap that is a bit loud.

[Normal]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:19:825 - I don't think finish fit this note.
00:23:393 - Finish doesn't fit the music here.
00:24:690 - spacing error
00:28:257 - ^
00:57:122 - If you want add a finish hitsound,I think you can move this finish to 00:57:447
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:18:203 - add a NC

[Hard]

Slider velocity is too high for a hard difficulty.

2.2 or 2.4 would be better to play.

and switch slider tick rate to 2.

[Insane]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:41:555 - add a NC
01:14:960 - This spinner is too faster..I mean that should get at least 2000 points on auto mode.
01:17:879 - remove some finsh.

Good luck!

HanzeR wrote:

The BPM here is definately 185.


[Insane]
00:01:231 - You have an unsnapped timing section here
00:02:798 - remove, add a quarter note slider instead to match the guitar riff
00:05:393 - Add a note, it follows the sax better
00:07:176 - Remove this note, and start the 1/4 note sliders here instead
00:08:149 - Start the spinner here, the rhythm here should look like this now http://puu.sh/R4bV

00:09:933 (1) - snap this to here 00:09:609
00:10:420 - start this combo here 00:10:257 - instead
00:12:041 -add a note
00:12:202 (7,8) - move these over 1 tick
00:18:041 - add a note here, then move the rest of the combo over one tick
00:25:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - snap this entire combo back one tick

00:41:717 - Add a note to this stack here, and move the slider over one tick, and have it end here 00:42:203
00:47:555 - Add a note here and move the reverse over one tick

00:52:257 - Change this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4kB

00:55:176 - Start new combo, then make this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4lP

00:56:798 - this rhytym works better http://puu.sh/R4nh

01:10:906 - Add a note

Great job for a first map , Your sliders and patterns and such look great, just make sure in the future you follow the rhythm of the music more closely.

hammm...I 3/4 of your mod i don't aggre about it ._.
thx for mod _(._.)_

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Easy]

00:13:014 - spacing error
00:15:609 - x:56 y:248
00:27:609 - move 1 grid up
00:33:447 - move 1 grid up for the parallel
00:44:474 - spcing error
01:00:041 - move 2 grid down
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:19:501 - remove clap,finish mix with clap that is a bit loud.

[Normal]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:19:825 - I don't think finish fit this note.
00:23:393 - Finish doesn't fit the music here.
00:24:690 - spacing error
00:28:257 - ^
00:57:122 - If you want add a finish hitsound,I think you can move this finish to 00:57:447
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:18:203 - add a NC

[Hard]

Slider velocity is too high for a hard difficulty.

2.2 or 2.4 would be better to play.

and switch slider tick rate to 2.

[Insane]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:41:555 - add a NC
01:14:960 - This spinner is too faster..I mean that should get at least 2000 points on auto mode.
01:17:879 - remove some finsh.

Good luck!

your mod very helpfull
thx for mod _(._.)_

Special thx:
Arn0ld : Mod my map so detail

O_O O_o o_O

Fake Dx

Arnold0 wrote:

Special thx:
Arn0ld : Mod my map so detail

O_O O_o o_O

Fake Dx

True XD

[Yess,Next Mod]

[I have change the BPM ]

Hi~ mod time~ :3

Sorry for the late x,x

[General]

I agree with TTTTTTTTTTTT's kiai time suggestion, in 01:15:609

[Easy]

Even if I felt fine the map and FC in the first play, I want to see how a beginner pass this, idk, but there are a big spacing inconsistency, I'll give you some tips, follow if you want, or make your own fixing, trying to keep the same spacing, I skip some of them since it looks fine, I conserved some parts in 0.8x and some other in 1.0x, another tip, try don't change spacing between notes in the same combo, this is for Easy and Normal.

00:13:338 (4) - NC and don't place it too close to previous note, put it down, around x:456 y:288, try to keep spacing consistent.
00:15:609 (1) - Same for this, keep spacing, at this distance it could be misshit too early~
00:26:960 (1) - Move to x:296 y:144 and 00:28:257 (2) - to x:384 y:208
00:31:501 (1) - 1 grid right, if you do:
00:42:852 (3) - 1 grid right
00:47:717 (2) - Maybe on x:456 y:200
00:51:609 (2) - This looks bad, you could try copying the shape of 00:49:663 (1) - and re-arrange this with 00:52:906 (3,4) -
00:55:501 (2) - x:328 y:248
00:57:447 (4) - Move this closer to previous note
01:00:690 (2) - x:392 y:200
01:04:582 (5) - This get hidden by 01:02:636 (3) hitburst, you could move it like this
Copy 01:02:636 (3) shape for 01:03:609 (4), put 01:02:636 (3) in x:272 y:128, 01:03:609 (4) in x:192 y:120 and 01:04:582 (5) - in x:344 y:160
01:07:176 (2) - 1 grid down
01:09:771 (5) - x:376 y:216, if you do: 01:11:717 (1,2,3) - Move this a bit down
01:20:798 (5) - NC

[Normal]

I felt the same for Easy diff, it maybe looks nazi, but all these is for conserving spacing the same, as in Easy, follow that you want or make your own fixing~

00:09:447 (1) - 2 grid left
00:14:636 (3) - If this is not a jump, fix spacing
00:18:203 (5) - NC
00:23:393 (4) - NC and fix spacing in this, if it's necessary, change the slider form x,x, I'm lacking of ideas, sorry
00:28:906 (1,2,3) - Select all these and move them to x:440 y:232
00:31:825 (2) - 2 grid left, 1 grid up
00:36:366 (5) - NC
00:37:014 (6) - x:32 y:216
00:37:987 (7) - x:120 y:68
00:41:555 (1) - 2 grid left
00:44:149 (5) - 1 grid right, 1 grid up
00:52:257 (4) - NC
00:57:122 (4) - 1 grid right
00:58:420 (6) - ^
01:01:663 (4) - x:344 y:160
01:01:987 (5) - x:424 y:172
01:02:636 (6) - NC and move to x:296 y:240
01:03:609 (7) - x:304 y:160
01:05:230 (1) - 1 grid right
01:07:176 (4) - x:456 y:208
01:09:122 (3) - 1 grid left
01:10:095 (4) - x:392 y:320
01:11:717 (2) - Too close, move it to x:288 y:96
01:20:149 (4) - x:424 y:112
01:23:717 (5) - x:240 y:88

[Hard]

00:18:528 (5) - NC
00:28:582 (5) - ^
00:29:879 (10) - Try to do this slider less "squeezed"
00:34:095 (5) - NC
01:07:825 (6) - ^
01:22:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Lots of circles, even for hard imo, try to make some sliders, but the pattern is nice for me ;w;, you can ignore this

[Insane]

00:23:393 (11) - NC
00:52:095 (7) - ^
00:53:717 (13) - ^
01:17:068 (7) - ^
01:20:798 (7) - ^

This still needs work~, good luck~ c:

[VERY THX 4 DakeDekaane]



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I think This map is almost done

[insane]

00:24:690 (5) - i think this slider is to long
00:34:095 (1) - add clap
00:36:852 (6,7) - R clap
00:38:474 (3,4) - ^
00:39:609 (6,7) - add clap
00:50:636 (2) - R clap
00:50:798 (3,4) - add slap
01:17:555 (2,3) - stack with 01:17:068 (1) -

[hard]

00:01:663 (1) - slider end 00:01:987
00:02:149 add note

That's only i can mod so far

Aloiz wrote:

I think This map is almost done

[insane]

00:24:690 (5) - i think this slider is to long
00:34:095 (1) - add clap
00:36:852 (6,7) - R clap
00:38:474 (3,4) - ^
00:39:609 (6,7) - add clap
00:50:636 (2) - R clap
00:50:798 (3,4) - add slap
01:17:555 (2,3) - stack with 01:17:068 (1) -

[hard]

00:01:663 (1) - slider end 00:01:987
00:02:149 add note

That's only i can mod so far

hooo
thx 4 mod _(._.)_ that's can help me

From my modding queue

[General]
Use the Distance snap, this map is random distanced! All diffs are more hard of what they are (except insane)

[Easy]
00:13:014 (4) - Distance it more from 00:11:393 (3) -
00:15:609 (1) - Distance it more from 00:14:311 (6) -
00:20:474 (3) - Move it as the screen http://puu.sh/XI6D
00:21:771 (1) - Move it one square to down in the grid level
00:24:365 (3) - You should make it better
00:29:555 (3) - Same ^
00:31:501 (1,2,3,4) - Move them as the screen http://puu.sh/XI7E
00:33:447 (4,1,2,3,1) - Use distance snap to distance them
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders better, they aren't easy for beginners!
01:00:690 (2) - Distance it more from 01:00:041 (1) -
01:05:230 (1) - Distance it more from 01:04:582 (5) -
01:20:798 (1) - You should make it better
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

00:10:744 (3) - You should make it better
00:12:041 (5) - Same ^
00:13:663 (2) - Same ^
00:22:095 (2) - It's not stacked
00:25:987 (1) - Move it one to left in the grid level
00:34:420 (2) - You should make it better
00:42:528 (3) - Same ^
00:44:474 (6) - New combo
00:47:717 (3) - You should make it better
00:49:014 (5,1) - Same ^
00:52:257 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:05:230 (1) - Put it as the screen http://puu.sh/XIda
01:06:852 (3) - Distance it more from 01:05:555 (2) -
01:10:744 (1) - You should make it better
01:20:798 (1,2) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

I don't mod sliders and distance in Hard and Insane diffs 'cause the errors are the same.

[Hard]
00:54:366 (7) - Move it one square to up in the grid level
01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of beats to be in hard diff
01:13:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same ^
01:22:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

[Insane ]
01:22:744 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Please change this D:
Create streams with 1/4, they looks good
Map from 1:24:203 to 1:25:663

PLEASE, use the distance snap and make all slider's form better! Anyway, good luck

Nemis wrote:

From my modding queue

[General]
Use the Distance snap, this map is random distanced! All diffs are more hard of what they are (except insane)

[Easy]
00:13:014 (4) - Distance it more from 00:11:393 (3) -
00:15:609 (1) - Distance it more from 00:14:311 (6) -
00:20:474 (3) - Move it as the screen http://puu.sh/XI6D
00:21:771 (1) - Move it one square to down in the grid level
00:24:365 (3) - You should make it better
00:29:555 (3) - Same ^
00:31:501 (1,2,3,4) - Move them as the screen http://puu.sh/XI7E
00:33:447 (4,1,2,3,1) - Use distance snap to distance them
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders better, they aren't easy for beginners!
01:00:690 (2) - Distance it more from 01:00:041 (1) -
01:05:230 (1) - Distance it more from 01:04:582 (5) -
01:20:798 (1) - You should make it better
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

00:10:744 (3) - You should make it better
00:12:041 (5) - Same ^
00:13:663 (2) - Same ^
00:22:095 (2) - It's not stacked
00:25:987 (1) - Move it one to left in the grid level
00:34:420 (2) - You should make it better
00:42:528 (3) - Same ^
00:44:474 (6) - New combo
00:47:717 (3) - You should make it better
00:49:014 (5,1) - Same ^
00:52:257 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:05:230 (1) - Put it as the screen http://puu.sh/XIda
01:06:852 (3) - Distance it more from 01:05:555 (2) -
01:10:744 (1) - You should make it better
01:20:798 (1,2) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

I don't mod sliders and distance in Hard and Insane diffs 'cause the errors are the same.

[Hard]
00:54:366 (7) - Move it one square to up in the grid level
01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of beats to be in hard diff
01:13:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same ^
01:22:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

this is hard not easy

[Insane ]
01:22:744 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Please change this D: (cool man)
Create streams with 1/4, they looks good (i don;t think so)
Map from 1:24:203 to 1:25:663

PLEASE, use the distance snap and make all slider's form better! Anyway, good luck

thx 4 mod

Hi~~
M4M from King's Lair!

[Easy]
Okay I suggest you to resnap all notes with distance Snap x0.8 or x0.9 here.
Also it would be nice if you could rework some sliders, especially the short ones.
Make them straight instead of curved that makes stuff much easier for you

[Normal]
Same Problems as in Normal here: You must resnap all note with distance snap. This is important!

[Hard]
[Insane]
Okay Insane looks actually quite good.

All in all this is a good first map.
If you could fix the spacing between all notes with distance snap enabled this would turn out to be a proper map.
You can use the AIMod to find all spacing errors btw. Just go to "File" and then to "Open AIMod".
Also you need to practice to make curved sliders, here's a good thread where I learned how to make them:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Alright, Good luck and have fun Mapping!

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi~~
M4M from King's Lair!

[Easy]

1. 00:11:393 (3,4) - Spacing Error, fix it with distance snap.
2. 00:13:014 (4) - Add New Combo.
3. 00:14:311 (6,1) - Spacing Error.
4. 00:29:555 (3) - Ugly Slider: Try this http://puu.sh/XIUu / Also move it down a bit, it crosses the lifebar otherwise.
5. 00:33:447 (4) - Move it down one grid.
6. 00:35:717 (2,3) - Spacing Error.
7. 00:41:230 (1,2,3,4) - Bad Cluster, better try this: http://puu.sh/XIXH
8. 01:14:311 (3,1) - Spaaaciiiing :3
9. 01:23:393 (3) - Slider crosses lifebar, move it down a few grids.

Okay I suggest you to resnap all notes with distance Snap x0.8 or x0.9 here.
Also it would be nice if you could rework some sliders, especially the short ones.
Make them straight instead of curved that makes stuff much easier for you

[Normal]

1. 00:15:609 (1,2) - Too high they cross the lifebar, move them a bit down.
2. 00:22:095 (2) - Deactivate grid snap and move that note to x: 235 y:161 to stack it perfectly with (1).
3. 00:23:393 (1,2) - Spacing Error.
4. 00:27:933 (4,1) - Spaaacing Error.
5. 00:30:852 (3) - ^
6. 00:42:528 (3) - Too high, move it down!
7. 00:44:474 (6) - Flip this Slider horizontally with ctrl+j and fix spacing afterwards so it won't overlay with (4).
8. 00:54:203 (3,1) - Spacing: They are to close together!
9. 01:11:717 (2) - Move the Slidertail down, it crosses the lifebar.

Same Problems as in Normal here: You must resnap all note with distance snap. This is important!

[Hard]

1. 00:04:257 (8,1) - Spacing: Too close.
2. 00:13:014 (5,6,1) - Make it like this: http://puu.sh/XJf2
3. 00:21:771 (3,4) - Spacing: Too far away.
4. 00:22:906 (5,6) - ^
5. 00:29:879 (6) - Unrankable Slider: It is forbidden to make slider slower with so many red Sliderpoints.
6. 01:00:365 (1,2) - Spacing: Too close.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:798 (5) - Add Finish.
2. 00:52:582 (4,5) - Spacing: Too far away

Okay Insane looks actually quite good.

All in all this is a good first map.
If you could fix the spacing between all notes with distance snap enabled this would turn out to be a proper map.
You can use the AIMod to find all spacing errors btw. Just go to "File" and then to "Open AIMod".
Also you need to practice to make curved sliders, here's a good thread where I learned how to make them:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Alright, Good luck and have fun Mapping!

thanks you
it's very helpfull

Hey there~

[OVERALL]
I played your diff's, just to take a quick look. I saw your sliders aren't your best thing, so have this nice link: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
This thread shows you what you have to know about sliders.

Your patterns also lack a bit of creativity, so I'll help you with that later. because right now, I'm going to focus on your sliders.

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3) - This slider is ugly. Move the middle anchor 3 grids to the left to make it better.
00:14:311 (3) - Move the ending anchor back to the middle of the slider ending and put an anchor in the middle and then move it 2 grids up.

Hmm.. What's with all the ending anchors being so far away from the slider ending? Here, have a list of them so you can fix it;


I also mentioned ugly sliders, so you should fix all of these above. Probably even more if I forgot some.

Hmm.. Also the hitsounds.. Did you know that you can also place a hitsound on only the Slider start and/or Slider end?
Well, have a list of hitsound errors..


[Normal]

Same things as the previous difficulty, so I'll make 2 lists again:



Like I said, I'd only focus on sliders. But yeah. I mentioned a lot of them now for easy and normal, so you would be able to find them in the other diffs yourself.

I'll mod your map again if you fix all of these sliders. Then, I'll also help you with patterns. We can discuss this in-game. So, catch me up in-game if you're ready.

Ayu wrote:

Hey there~

[OVERALL]
I played your diff's, just to take a quick look. I saw your sliders aren't your best thing, so have this nice link: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
This thread shows you what you have to know about sliders.

Your patterns also lack a bit of creativity, so I'll help you with that later. because right now, I'm going to focus on your sliders.

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3) - This slider is ugly. Move the middle anchor 3 grids to the left to make it better.
00:14:311 (3) - Move the ending anchor back to the middle of the slider ending and put an anchor in the middle and then move it 2 grids up.

Hmm.. What's with all the ending anchors being so far away from the slider ending? Here, have a list of them so you can fix it;

List of fail slider endings and ugly sliders

00:11:393 (3) -
00:13:014 (1) -
00:14:311 (3) -
00:17:230 (2) -
00:20:474 (3) -
00:22:420 (2) -
00:24:365 (3) -
00:26:960 (1) -
00:28:257 (2) -
00:36:690 (1) -
00:38:960 (3) -
00:41:230 (1) -
00:43:501 (4) -
00:44:474 (1) -
00:49:663 (1) -
00:51:609 (2) -
00:54:203 (1) -
00:56:149 (3) -
01:00:690 (2) -
01:02:636 (3) -
01:03:609 (4) -
01:05:230 (1) -
01:07:176 (2) -
01:09:771 (5) -
01:11:717 (1) -
01:15:609 (1) -
01:18:203 (3) -
01:19:501 (4) -
01:20:798 (1) -
01:22:095 (2) -
01:23:393 (3) -

I also mentioned ugly sliders, so you should fix all of these above. Probably even more if I forgot some.

Hmm.. Also the hitsounds.. Did you know that you can also place a hitsound on only the Slider start and/or Slider end?
Well, have a list of hitsound errors..

List of hitsound errors

00:14:311 (3) - Only put a finish where you click, so only on (3)'s start in this case.
00:26:960 (1) -
00:31:501 (1,2,3) - Finish spam, also they sound ugly.
00:41:230 (1) -
01:19:501 (4) - Finish error
01:23:393 (3) -

[Normal]

Same things as the previous difficulty, so I'll make 2 lists again:

List of fail slider endings and ugly sliders

00:10:744 (3) -
00:12:041 (5) -
00:13:014 (1) -
00:13:663 (2) -
00:14:636 (3) -
00:16:582 (2) -
00:17:555 (4) -
00:18:528 (2) -
00:22:420 (3) -
00:23:393 (1) -
00:24:690 (3) -
00:26:311 (2) -
00:27:933 (4) -
00:28:906 (1) -
00:29:879 (2) -
00:31:825 (2) -
00:33:122 (4) -
00:34:420 (2) -
00:35:717 (4) -
00:36:366 (1) -
00:37:014 (2) -
00:42:528 (3) -
00:44:474 (6) -
00:47:717 (3) -
00:49:014 (5) -
00:49:663 (1) -
00:52:257 (1) -
00:53:230 (2) -
00:54:203 (3) -
00:57:447 (5) -
00:58:420 (6) -
01:00:690 (3) -
01:02:636 (1) -
01:03:933 (3) -
01:05:555 (2) -
01:07:501 (5) -
01:09:122 (3) -
01:10:744 (1) -
01:11:717 (2) -
01:12:690 (3) -
01:15:933 (2) -
01:16:906 (3) -
01:18:852 (3) -
01:20:798 (1) -
01:21:771 (2) -
01:23:068 (4) -

List of hitsound errors

00:23:393 (1) - Well this is only one this time, because here again you use unneeded finishes.

Like I said, I'd only focus on sliders. But yeah. I mentioned a lot of them now for easy and normal, so you would be able to find them in the other diffs yourself.

I'll mod your map again if you fix all of these sliders. Then, I'll also help you with patterns. We can discuss this in-game. So, catch me up in-game if you're ready.

yess i already fixed all these slider

Hi~ Sorry for the delay..

You should work more harder~ Good luck

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the delay..

　
[General]
-- Every difficulty has quite lots of distance problems, so I won't mention every. (Minor jumps in Easy difficulties don't look good)


[Easy]
00:19:825 (2) - Distance
00:26:960 (1) - ^
00:31:501 (1) - ^
00:38:311 (2) - ^
00:33:447 (4) - 1 Grid up
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - Organized distance please
01:13:663 (2) - Delete Finish
01:14:311 (3) - Add Finish


[Normal]
00:14:636 (3) - Distance
00:20:474 (6) - 1 Grid Left
00:23:393 (1) - Make some change for the distance
00:30:852 (3) - Make a Triangle with (1,2)
01:24:690 (1) - Add Finish


[Hard]
00:03:284 (7) - Add New combo
00:04:906 (1) - Delete New combo
00:06:690 (3) - Add New combo
00:23:717 (6) - ^
00:25:825 (1) - Delete NC
00:26:960 (2) - Add NC
00:26:508 ( ) - Add a note?
00:54:366 (7) - Stack to (6)
01:02:311 (7) - Add NC
01:03:609 (1) - Delete NC


[Insane]
-- btw, can 01:15:771~ could be playable?? hahaha cookiezi can play that

00:03:122 (7) - New combo?
00:08:149 (11) - Finish
00:08:474 (1) - Start at 00:08:311, end at 00:09:447
00:43:825 (5) - Stack with (3)
01:24:041 (4) - Stack with (1)

You should work more harder~ Good luck

thx 4 mod

Thanks for choosing our queue! I hope my mod can be useful to you and sorry for late...

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/10QkF

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3): Short this spinner to 00:12:041 and add a note in 00:12:690.
00:15:609 (1): Move this slider to 00:15:284, short this spinner to 00:15:933 and add a note in 00:16:582.
00:19:176 (1,2,3): Make spacing like this: http://puu.sh/10QCI
00:24:365 (3): End slider in 00:25:663: http://puu.sh/10QLA
00:33:447 (4): End slider in 00:34:095 and add a note in 00:35:068.
01:03:609 (4,5,1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RLo
01:11:717 (1): Move slider to 01:12:041, end in 01:13:014 and add note in 01:11:717
01:14:960: Add a note?
01:24:690 (1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RRd


No kds for now
Too much tired for mod now. Will edit this post with mods for the others diff tomorrow.

BL-Daisuki wrote:

Thanks for choosing our queue! I hope my mod can be useful to you and sorry for late...

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/10QkF

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3): Short this spinner to 00:12:041 and add a note in 00:12:690.
00:15:609 (1): Move this slider to 00:15:284, short this spinner to 00:15:933 and add a note in 00:16:582.
00:19:176 (1,2,3): Make spacing like this: http://puu.sh/10QCI
00:24:365 (3): End slider in 00:25:663: http://puu.sh/10QLA
00:33:447 (4): End slider in 00:34:095 and add a note in 00:35:068.
01:03:609 (4,5,1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RLo
01:11:717 (1): Move slider to 01:12:041, end in 01:13:014 and add note in 01:11:717
01:14:960: Add a note?
01:24:690 (1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RRd


No kds for now
Too much tired for mod now. Will edit this post with mods for the others diff tomorrow.

okey I waiting for you :3