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Mika Kobayashi - Bios (MK + nZK ver.)

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meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 22, 2013 at 9:02:36 PM

Artist: Mika Kobayashi
Title: Bios (MK + nZK ver.)
Source: Guilty Crown
Tags: nyquill theme songs collection hiroyuki sawano
BPM: 194
Filesize: 20240kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 705 notes)
  2. Normal (2.91 stars, 251 notes)
  3. Nyquill's Hard (4.83 stars, 632 notes)
Download: Mika Kobayashi - Bios (MK + nZK ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please re-download (Dec. 21, 2013) - change in diff. names.

~ merry xmas ~

Normal (me) - complete
Nyquill's Hard (Nyquill)- complete
Insane (me) - complete
This is my very first SB! ....
this is different version of the original bios song
- most skin elements, bg, and SB made by me
- other skin elements belong to their rightful owners

easy practice ~ one of my first maps Dx

The ruined city is still beautiful
I'm waiting a long time for your return
in my hand a forget-me-not flower.
Last edited by meiikyuu , edited 129 times in total.
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
so yea me and Mokyu Kyuu-chan did a IRC mod. thank god she had the savelog :o

here it is if you want to look
23:39 <Byakugan249> : oh damn D:
23:39 <meiikyuu> : lol wtf rank 1 xD
23:39 <Byakugan249> : you took homu's spot
23:40 <meiikyuu> : D:
23:40 <meiikyuu> : someones gonna take my place anyway :>
23:40 <Byakugan249> : at least you did it right?
23:41 <meiikyuu> : :)
23:43 <Byakugan249> : mayo chiki <3
23:43 <meiikyuu> : <3
23:43 <meiikyuu> : oh do u like guilty crown by any chance?
23:43 <Byakugan249> : didnt see it
23:43 <Byakugan249> : planning to though
23:43 <meiikyuu> : lol ok cool :)
23:43 <Byakugan249> : im watching saki atm
23:43 <meiikyuu> : kk np :)
23:43 <meiikyuu> : do u test maps? :>
23:44 <Byakugan249> : well that depends why?
23:44 <meiikyuu> : i need feedback on a diff xD
23:44 <Byakugan249> : oh?
23:44 <meiikyuu> : if thats alright
23:44 <Byakugan249> : yea i have time...if i can keep up
23:44 <meiikyuu> : :D?
23:44 <meiikyuu> : oh
23:45 <meiikyuu> : http://www.mediafire.com/?9uul5p6qupe9jq2 xD
23:45 <meiikyuu> : do you delete sbs? ;-;
23:45 <Byakugan249> : why would i do that D:
23:45 <Byakugan249> : i always keep them
23:45 <meiikyuu> : D:
23:45 <meiikyuu> : lol idk a lot of pro friends do it
23:46 <Byakugan249> : why? do you?
23:46 <meiikyuu> : no xD
23:46 <meiikyuu> : i made my first sb in that map lolol
23:46 <Byakugan249> : ohh
23:46 <Byakugan249> : lyrics or BGs?
23:46 <meiikyuu> : just bgs
23:46 <meiikyuu> : random slideshows
23:47 <Byakugan249> : OMG that's awesome
23:47 <Byakugan249> : those are my favorite kinds of SBs
23:47 <meiikyuu> : xD
23:47 <meiikyuu> : yay
23:52 <Byakugan249> : hmm
23:52 <meiikyuu> : lol nice
23:52 <Byakugan249> : some of the combos need a bit of work IMO
23:52 <meiikyuu> : lol ok
23:53 <Byakugan249> : 00:57:647 - this break is unnecessary so remove it
23:54 <Byakugan249> : this threw me off guard when the warning arrows appeared
23:54 <meiikyuu> : kk fixed
23:55 <Byakugan249> : 00:30:121 (9) - a NC here because of the tone of the bass changes
23:55 <meiikyuu> : ok
23:57 <Byakugan249> : 00:48:678 (6,7) - IMO this is a bad overlap. try to move these sliders somewhere else, but this is from
23:57 <Byakugan249> : my point of view
23:57 <meiikyuu> : oh , yeah i was trying to maintain spacing lol
23:57 <meiikyuu> : ill think of something
23:58 <Byakugan249> : http://puu.sh/ueGL or you can do this?
23:59 <meiikyuu> : oops i already fixed it xD but okay i see
00:00 <Byakugan249> : oh alright its just a suggestion
00:00 <meiikyuu> : kk~
00:00 <Byakugan249> : 00:54:863 (8) - a NC here because of new lyrics
00:00 <meiikyuu> : ok
00:01 <Byakugan249> : 00:55:946 (1) - since you followed that remove the NC here as it's connected
00:01 <meiikyuu> : yeah
00:02 <Byakugan249> : 01:03:369 (2) - try to make 2 like http://puu.sh/ueIs this. it flows a lot better during gameplay IMO
00:02 <meiikyuu> : ok
00:03 <Byakugan249> : 01:05:534 (4) - *nazi* move this up a bit because it's touching the slider
00:03 <meiikyuu> : touching which slider o.o
00:04 <Byakugan249> : it's touching (3)
00:04 <Byakugan249> : which is the slider
00:04 <meiikyuu> : ok
00:05 <Byakugan249> : 01:15:121 (2) - this kind of bothered me a bit, so i suggest stacking this note on (7) to make it less
00:05 <Byakugan249> : confusing
00:06 <Byakugan249> : or you can make (1) look the same as (3)
00:07 <meiikyuu> : :o
00:08 <Byakugan249> : hmm?
00:10 <Byakugan249> : if you think it looks bad you can ignore it
00:10 <meiikyuu> : i kinda like it the way it is lol..
00:11 <Byakugan249> : alright then if you want to leave it then i guess its fine
00:11 <meiikyuu> : :'D
00:11 <Byakugan249> : 01:36:925 (8) - this should be a NC. it follows the piano
00:12 <meiikyuu> : ok
00:13 <Byakugan249> : 01:56:719 (7) - here too. this time it's the tone of the singer
00:13 <meiikyuu> : k
00:13 <Byakugan249> : 01:59:193 (4) - ^
00:13 <Byakugan249> : 02:00:431 (1) - and here
00:14 <meiikyuu> : ok
00:14 <Byakugan249> : 02:11:565 (9) - i havent seen a combo this long in a while but you know what im gonn say
00:14 <Byakugan249> : gonna*
00:14 <meiikyuu> : lul
00:15 <meiikyuu> : ik
00:16 <Byakugan249> : 02:28:884 (1,2,3,4) - do http://puu.sh/uePv this. the current one looks too easy
00:17 <meiikyuu> : lol oh
00:18 <Byakugan249> : 02:33:833 (7) - NC here because the lyrics change
00:19 <meiikyuu> : k
00:19 <Byakugan249> : 02:43:729 (1,2) - is the spacing here intentional?
00:20 <Byakugan249> : 02:56:101 (6) - same as 02:33:833
00:22 <meiikyuu> : yeah kinda
00:23 <Byakugan249> : then i guess its fine
00:23 <meiikyuu> : xD ok
00:23 <Byakugan249> : 03:01:049 (1) - this slider can look a lot smoother
00:23 <meiikyuu> : o
00:25 <Byakugan249> : 03:08:472 (7,8,9) - try http://puu.sh/ueTK this. it kind of looks like an A if you ask me
00:27 <meiikyuu> : xD
00:28 <Byakugan249> : 03:15:894 (5) - NC. the tone of the singer changes
00:30 <meiikyuu> : k
00:31 <Byakugan249> : i guess i'll stop for now. for this map focus on the NCs. listen to where the vocals and instrumental
00:31 <Byakugan249> : change.
00:31 <meiikyuu> : lol alright
00:31 <meiikyuu> : thanks a lot ^^
zeroclover
468 posts
Joined December 2010
zeroclover
GENERAL
  1. Your SB no need Letterbox during Breaktime, because no letterbox showed when break time
  2. AudioLeadIn: 1625, are you sure use this number lol?
  3. add "dkun" in your tag, if sunset finished or maybe now
  4. remove "MK+nZk - Bios (MK + nZK ver.) (meiikyuu).OSB" in your song folder
  5. better use stack leniency = 4 than 10, some sliders and circles not stacked beautifully
Void
  1. OD +1,
  2. in beginning of song ( guitar lead ), it were following 1/6 beat snap
  3. 00:31:668 (1) - try make this look more symetric as 00:32:286 (2) - ??
  4. 01:11:410 (6) - dont stack, maybe place like this
    SPOILER
  5. 03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - move, snapped with x line
  6. 03:39:709 (1) - end slider at 03:40:173 -
  7. 03:54:090 (4) - move, stack at 03:54:863 (7) - slider end point
  8. 04:15:585 (2) - move, stack at 04:14:812 (3) - slider end point
about timing point and sb stuff
  1. 00:00:431 - remove green line
  2. 02:01:668 - remove 1 green line (u have 2 same inherit point here)
  3. 01:39:400 - can u make something awesome about spinner hitsound here? :), spinner hitsound sound bad here
  4. 03:15:894 - from here, SB look weird D:
Sunrise
  1. 00:57:338 (4) - why stacked?
  2. recheck your spacing, because this is normal mapset
Sunset
  1. i ignore this, because still in progress . PM me if you finish it, i will mod it later
done ~
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

zeroclover wrote:

GENERAL
  1. Your SB no need Letterbox during Breaktime, because no letterbox showed when break time ok
  2. AudioLeadIn: 1625, are you sure use this number lol? yeah im fine with it lol
  3. add "dkun" in your tag, if sunset finished or maybe now once we finish the diff
  4. remove "MK+nZk - Bios (MK + nZK ver.) (meiikyuu).OSB" in your song folder ok
  5. better use stack leniency = 4 than 10, some sliders and circles not stacked beautifully
ok

Void
  1. OD +1, fine
  2. in beginning of song ( guitar lead ), it were following 1/6 beat snap ty, didn't change for now but ill look more into this
  3. 00:31:668 (1) - try make this look more symetric as 00:32:286 (2) - ?? fixed
  4. 01:11:410 (6) - dont stack, maybe place like this
    SPOILER
    fixed
  5. 03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - move, snapped with x line moved it more to the center
  6. 03:39:709 (1) - end slider at 03:40:173 - guess it works
  7. 03:54:090 (4) - move, stack at 03:54:863 (7) - slider end point fixed
  8. 04:15:585 (2) - move, stack at 04:14:812 (3) - slider end point
fixed

about timing point and sb stuff
  1. 00:00:431 - remove green line no because i need the default finish sound for this section
  2. 02:01:668 - remove 1 green line (u have 2 same inherit point here) o.o ty for pointing it out
  3. 01:39:400 - can u make something awesome about spinner hitsound here? :), spinner hitsound sound bad here if ur talking about the finish at the end of it, i think it sounds fine xD..
  4. 03:15:894 - from here, SB look weird D:
ok ;-;

Sunrise
  1. 00:57:338 (4) - why stacked? kk
  2. recheck your spacing, because this is normal mapset
fixing ~~

Sunset
  1. i ignore this, because still in progress . PM me if you finish it, i will mod it later
ok thanks!

done ~
thank you very much!
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
no tags? consider adding some

[Sunrise]
00:00:431 (1,2,1) - make this symmetrical
02:00:431 (2) - you can use 01:59:193 (1) to rotate 180°
04:12:802 (5,6) - move to x:176 y:56 like this


[Void]
00:22:080 (1) - move to x:368 y:300
00:22:544 (2) - then 1 grid left
00:25:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this placement...it will do a better effect
00:30:121 (1) - finish at start
01:00:276 (2) - try stack with 00:59:039 (6) or just put it to x:356 y:212
01:03:369 (2) - ctrl+r?
01:04:915 (7) - useless note, should be a slider start at 01:04:760
01:06:771 (6) - make it look nice
01:12:492 (9) - try to stack with 01:10:946 (3)
02:21:461 (1) - try to stack with 02:20:688 (5) ?
02:23:008 (7) - delete and replace it. (when place a slider first then place a circle to the head or tail of the slider will be better)
02:41:255 (5) - newcombo......
03:16:822 (4) - ctrl+r
03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this (1.20x spacing here)
--------------------------------------------------
OK That's all :3
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck with Rank..
also Nice SB <3
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
no tags? consider adding some yeah i will sry

[Sunrise]
00:00:431 (1,2,1) - make this symmetrical
02:00:431 (2) - you can use 01:59:193 (1) to rotate 180°
04:12:802 (5,6) - move to x:176 y:56 like this
ok to all

[Void]
00:22:080 (1) - move to x:368 y:300 ok
00:22:544 (2) - then 1 grid left ok
00:25:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this placement...it will do a better effect ok
00:30:121 (1) - finish at start ok
01:00:276 (2) - try stack with 00:59:039 (6) or just put it to x:356 y:212 stacked with 6
01:03:369 (2) - ctrl+r? i kind of remapped the area to make it play better xD
01:04:915 (7) - useless note, should be a slider start at 01:04:760 ok
01:06:771 (6) - make it look nice ok
01:12:492 (9) - try to stack with 01:10:946 (3) i stacked 3 with 9 instead
02:21:461 (1) - try to stack with 02:20:688 (5) ?
02:23:008 (7) - delete and replace it. (when place a slider first then place a circle to the head or tail of the slider will be better) ok
02:41:255 (5) - newcombo...... ok
03:16:822 (4) - ctrl+r no change, sry ><
03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this (1.20x spacing here) ok
--------------------------------------------------
OK That's all :3
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck with Rank..
also Nice SB <3 ty ^^
thanks for the awesome mod~ fixed a lot
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Hope you get it ranked someday x3 I love this song x33
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time :3

[Sunrise]

00:04:451 (2) - It's very nice to look, but it's a little jumpy (has 1.2x spacing instead 1.0x), it has no matter for me, but newbie players, get trapped by spacing in Normal diffs (I suposse this is Normal), you could try to move it a little higher.
01:31:668 (4) - Move it to x:404 y:68 for keep spacing and a nice triangle with the slider end/start.
01:36:925 (1) - Same spacing thing, you should move this combo higher, beggining with this slider
02:26:410 (1,2) - Jump? If not, keep the spacing on 1.0x

Good luck c:
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time :3

[Sunrise]

00:04:451 (2) - It's very nice to look, but it's a little jumpy (has 1.2x spacing instead 1.0x), it has no matter for me, but newbie players, get trapped by spacing in Normal diffs (I suposse this is Normal), you could try to move it a little higher. eh? o.o its still snapped with 1.0x spacing
01:31:668 (4) - Move it to x:404 y:68 for keep spacing and a nice triangle with the slider end/start. ok fixed ~
01:36:925 (1) - Same spacing thing, you should move this combo higher, beggining with this slider ok
02:26:410 (1,2) - Jump? If not, keep the spacing on 1.0x ok fixed

Good luck c:
thanks!
Nyquill
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Joined February 2011
Nyquill
o

http://puu.sh/10gjU

fffffffff a full length diff takes me way too long. Sorry for how slow I was lol.
meiikyuu
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
nope ur fine :) thanks a lot!
zeroclover
468 posts
Joined December 2010
zeroclover
sunset diff was good, i have no point to nazi mod here
just fix inconsistent inherit point for sunset diff
00:00:431 - should 45% volume, or better remove, because u have timing point there
02:01:668 - remove 1 inheritpoint

overall : it was nice hard diff

dont kudosu, helplessmod
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
Nyquill
http://puu.sh/10IEH

badum
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
The volume of soft hitsounds is too low for me... I suggest increasing it by at least 10%
Title: Bios (MK + nZK Ver.)?
There are two 'meii biosbg.jpg', one in song folder and one in SB folder. Delete the SB folder's bg which is unused.

[Sunset]
00:23:626 (3) - nazi - move 1 grid down to stack with 00:22:235 (5)?
00:26:410 - add a note to follow the vocal?
00:29:503 (5,6) - nazi - the space between them is different from 00:28:884 (3,4)
01:04:760 (1) - finish on head?
01:17:750 (3,7) - stack them?
01:50:534 (5,6) - not so symmetric
01:56:719 (1) - finish on head?
01:59:193 (1) - ^
02:37:544 (4,5,6,7,8) - change the position like this? Looks better to me:
SPOILER
03:08:472 (1) - finish on head?
03:10:018 (5,6) - not so symmetric

[Void]
00:43:111 (5,6) - make them symmetric?
01:04:760 (1) - miss a finish on slider head?
01:14:657 (1) - ^
01:24:554 (1) - ^
01:29:503 (1) - ^
01:34:451 (1) - ^
01:39:400 (1) - move to 01:39:477 and add a note with finish here? (like [Sunset])
02:11:565 (1) - add finish on head?
03:08:936 (9) - the overlap looks weird to me, so move it down a little?
03:16:513 (3,4) - nazi - move up a little to make some space from 03:15:894 (1,2)?
03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - gradually decrease the volume?

That's all I can find. GL~
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General] will look at the sb stuff when i get back
The volume of soft hitsounds is too low for me... I suggest increasing it by at least 10% adjusted a bunch
Title: Bios (MK + nZK Ver.)? Dx
There are two 'meii biosbg.jpg', one in song folder and one in SB folder. Delete the SB folder's bg which is unused.

[Void]
00:43:111 (5,6) - make them symmetric? okay
01:04:760 (1) - miss a finish on slider head? okay
01:14:657 (1) - ^ its fine, its not rly an emphasizing part
01:24:554 (1) - ^ okay
01:29:503 (1) - ^ okay
01:34:451 (1) - ^ okay
01:39:400 (1) - move to 01:39:477 and add a note with finish here? (like [Sunset]) no change for now, but i think i will change if someone else mentions this
02:11:565 (1) - add finish on head? sorry i kind of want that part silent ><
03:08:936 (9) - the overlap looks weird to me, so move it down a little? fixed
03:16:513 (3,4) - nazi - move up a little to make some space from 03:15:894 (1,2)? fixed
03:30:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - gradually decrease the volume? ill think about it..

That's all I can find. GL~
thanks ^^
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill

popner wrote:

[Sunset]
00:26:410 - add a note to follow the vocal? I'm not really following the vocal in this section am I.
Did everything else, thanks for modding. http://puu.sh/11a7z
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
hey hey~ Mod~

Sunrise
nothing o3o

Sunset
00:09:554 (3,4,5) - I dont like the random whistles on the end of the sliders :c
00:31:049 (2,3,4,5,1) - Fix the distance spacing
01:49:296 (1,3) - Ugly sliders D:

Void
00:20:534 (1) - New combo
00:24:245 (7) - Dont let it stack with 6 or else it looks like those sliders in the beginning of the song >3<
01:10:327 (3) - Clap
01:12:183 (9) - Remove clap at the sliders's end
01:51:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try placing them somewhere else ;;
02:17:132 (1) - Clap on Slider's end
03:05:998 (1,2,3) - Hmm,,, I dont like this pattern alot,,, Try to make something else with it >3<
03:17:750 (1) - clap

Good luck with the map~
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

SkyDevil wrote:

hey hey~ Mod~

Void
00:20:534 (1) - New combo fixed
00:24:245 (7) - Dont let it stack with 6 or else it looks like those sliders in the beginning of the song >3< keeping cuz i think it fits with the flow of the song ><
01:10:327 (3) - Clap fixed!
01:12:183 (9) - Remove clap at the sliders's end fixed nice catch
01:51:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try placing them somewhere else ;; ok i tried something for now..
02:17:132 (1) - Clap on Slider's end fixed
03:05:998 (1,2,3) - Hmm,,, I dont like this pattern alot,,, Try to make something else with it >3< i moved one of those sliders lol
03:17:750 (1) - clap fixed

Good luck with the map~
thanks!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
...

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>Sunrise
  1. 00:10:327 - ...idk why, but the finish of 00:10:018 (2) (which is placed here) sounds jarring... Maybe reduce the volume to 25%?
  2. 00:34:760 (1,2) - The rhythm is pretty odd... Maybe make them like this ((4) is previously (1) and (1) is previously (2), plus there's a circle 1/2 after the new (1))?
  3. 00:36:925 (4,5) -^ (Yes, there's a circle at the end, also).
  4. 00:57:338 (4) - This should be NC'd, IMO. It somehow fits with the song. Even I don't know why... Might it be because the song is pretty silent on the break right after this note?
  5. 02:15:276 (4,1) - The spacing is 0.88x here (around 0.9x), while, from my observation, the normally-used DS here is 1.0x. Intentional?
>Sunset
  1. 00:10:327 (8) - The S:C1 finish is... really unfitting. S sample w/ 25% volume should do.
  2. 01:18:059 (4,5) - You shouldn't make them flow linearly, IMO. The flow is really... weird, I have to say. Ctrl+G (it's the new Ctrl+R, if it's not obvious yet) (5)?
  3. 03:15:585 - Add a circle (with clap) here? Placing something at the red tick (I'm referring to 03:15:740 (6)) one (1/1) beat after the previous note is something that I would not recommend here, and there should be something to connect (6) and 03:15:276 (5). If you want to keep this kind of rhythm, though, it's okay, but you should stack (6) on 03:15:894 (1)'s head. That somehow works wonders to me.
>Void
  1. 00:10:327 (8) - Same as Sunrise.
  2. 01:01:513 (2) - I swear, going linear equals to making a bad flow here. Ctrl+G?
  3. 03:18:678 (6) - ...This should be NC'd because it's the beginning of a completely different sequence of patterns. I can't really understand how your combo placement works, but yeah...
  4. 04:12:802 (7) - ^
Okay. Every diff is cool (this includes Nyquill's diff \:D/), I must say, especially Void. It was fun playing that (:

Good luck on the way 8-)
Konei
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