+Star

Awesome & insane maps on that beatmap who should go approved imo.

Stared, great song, great map

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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Aqua Easy]
wasnt updated


[Aqua Expert]
00:40:80() - feels conspicuously empty
00:43:50 (1) - partly hidden
01:46:57 (1) - end with a finish
03:40:42 (1) - finish
04:19:65 (5) - end with a finish


[Kyo]
01:26:57 (2) - stack under 2
03:28:11 (1,1,2) - spacing
03:34:27 (4) - stacking
04:20:23 (1) - end with a finish


[Larto]
00:46:19 (5) - clap
00:54:46 (4) - kinda hard to read
01:23:50 (2) - believe me when i say this bpm change is unintuitive
01:29:65 (1) - remove whistle
02:09:46 (1) - start 1/2 earlier



[osuplayer]
01:11:96 (2) - stacking
01:54:46 (2) - move 1/4 later
03:43:50 (1) - stacking


[Gladi]
looks good

Thanks for modding.
Applyed all except:

Larto:
00:54:46 (4) - kinda hard to read - Uhm? If you mean you cant see where the slider go: You just can hold your mouse over the middle till you see it. so no problem
01:23:50 (2) - believe me when i say this bpm change is unintuitive - Larto wants his BPM change so i will let it in

quick playover all diffs to check...


oops

[Aqua Expert]
max score 17mil


[Kyo]
max score 12mil


[Larto]
looks ok


[osuplayer]
max score 15mil


[Gladi]
max score 14.7mil



o0 something about score vs. diff isnt exactly lining up...ANYWAYS whoever mods this next, be sure to check with peppy on those max scores there. bubbled.

Like it.

Starred

Going for Approved now

[Aqua's eeeeEeasssSSSssyyyyYYyyYyyYyYyYYyYY]
00:34:27 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Notice your spacing here. Now look at this 00:38:89 (1,2,3). Same spacing, faster notes, no transition. It's a little off putting for an easy difficulty.
00:55:23 (1) - (suggested, not required) split this repeating slider into 2 or 3 sliders, it's a little boring (nazi)
01:01:77 (1,2) - random spacing?
01:15:42 (1) - spacing is wrong, should be closer to sliders
01:48:12 (1,2) - this spacing should be the same as this one 01:49:66 (1,2) to match the ones that come after (fragmented speech ftw)
02:23:12 (1) - spacing is wrong, should be closer to the (2) in the previous combo, move the rest of (1)'s combo accordingly
03:03:50 (1) - delete this note and extend the spinner to 03:03:50
03:13:50 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is inconsistent with the map and itself

First off, the map plays perfectly. It sounds fine and whatnot. But, I gotta ask, are you using Distance Snapping or doing this by eye? What grid level are you using? I'm not trying to nazi this, but the spacing is just, inconsistent and a little sloppy. I say that only as positive criticism. No offense.

[Aqua Expert]
Same thing with this one, I'll spare you the list. Some of the things in this one however, are Insane/Expert appropriate in my opinion (i.e. the jumps), but other things are just a little sloppy. Run through it and make sure it makes sense to you (check the spacing on a combo and compare it with the next combos spacing. Hopefully, these spacings are the same. If not, make small adjustments, it will only improve your map. Promise!

[Gladi]
This is fine Gladi, but what's with the new combos everywhere? A lot of them don't make sense

[Kyo]
I really enjoy this

[Larto]
same

[osuplayerrrrrrr]
this map is so you =p

again, not getting on your case for no reason Aqua. I encourage you to seek other opinions!

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popped my bubble but now i guess it should be fixed

ready for approved

<Aqua's Expert>
00:42:92 (2) - most people can`t notice that
plz fix this

btw scores are not a big deal if it is for approve


EDIT:now it`s fine for me rebubble for approve

Alace wrote:

<Aqua's Expert>
00:42:92 (2) - most people can`t notice that
plz fix this

btw scores are not a big deal if it is for approve

Fixed

Takes a bit long before its approved. will a star help to get it recognized more?

why is my bubble popped? D:

alace rebubbled it >.<

If you do any upload
your bubble will change to a star
checked
rebubble

thanks for rebubbling.

come on bats i need bubbles xD

2nd bub

Eh...I didn't really find much problems when I took a look upon it...

Other than Andrea's (osuplayer's) difficulty isn't exactly 'keyboard-breaking'. But whatever.

I can't approve this due to my experience, so I'll just leave this BAT star here. <3

Why is this not yet ranked?
I <3 it.

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^Yay Tapdancingmetroid. >w<

Oi, it needs a medium. Easy is too boring, but the others are far too hard for me right now

epic

10/10

Larto's Insane has the wrong offset for the last timing section ._.