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ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)

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Chewin
-w-/
suzutsukikanade
wow
Darksonic
O.o
Sure
ClariS <3
Some suggestions on IRC

Log
16:49 ykcarrot: : I suggest increasing stack leniency. because you used 1/2 stacks many times
16:49 osuplayer111: : how much should I increase it? :3
16:50 ykcarrot: : SL 4 works well?
16:51 osuplayer111: : ok, let me try :D
16:52 ykcarrot: : it seems there are no problem with 4
16:53 osuplayer111: : ok, changed :3
16:53 osuplayer111: : something else?
16:54 ykcarrot: : uhmm..
16:54 ykcarrot: : don't you use 1/8 slider at this time?
16:54 ykcarrot: : 01:03:605 -
16:55 osuplayer111: : do you suggest to use it there? :3
16:55 ykcarrot: : well.. it's up to you
16:56 ykcarrot: : 01:02:583 (2) - delete?
16:58 ykcarrot: : 01:12:242 (9) - add whistle to reverse arrow
16:59 ykcarrot: : 00:14:514 (1) - similar with above, but add it to head
17:00 ykcarrot: : that's all for now
17:01 osuplayer111: : thanks :D
Kawayi Rika
<3 Lovely
Suimya
=w=/
Yuzeyun
Hey hey !

Can I make a taiko for this map, please ? =w=/
Topic Starter
Andrea

_Gezo_ wrote:

Hey hey !

Can I make a taiko for this map, please ? =w=/
Sure, but I must like it ^^
Mercurial
Dunno.


General


  • I think the title (Short Ver.) is not allowed anymore.
    Nothing else to poke about.


Easy

  • OD +1 for consistency with other settings.
    00:07:014 (1,2) I'd add a NC in the second slider, it fits better imo http://puu.sh/FSON
    00:14:696 (2) Vocal/Rhythm changes deserves a NC.
    01:19:696 (1,2) Same as 00:07:014

Normal


Hard


Insane

  • 00:14:287 - Add a Note, fits better with the music and it has a better playability with the next slider.
    01:05:424 (6) Why not a NC? http://puu.sh/FT16
    01:33:378 - Same suggestion as Hard.

Good Job Everyone, specially Hard diff, it has the best patterns on the entire mapset.
rEdo
[Sekai's Easy]
00:18:605 (1) - looks a lot more neat when you move it by a grid to the left (along with the other notes, obviously)
00:53:151 (1,2) - swap combos
01:09:514 (1) - once again, would look better if moved a grid to the right
01:27:696 (1) - I don't think it's necessary to add a new combo just for two notes.

[Chewin's Normal]
00:16:787 (4) - maybe move that a little bit higher, so it would remind of a uncompleted pentagon along with previous notes?
00:20:424 (1) - not really sure if this new combo is necessary
00:25:878 (1) - doesn't look neat, you could try moving it around so it forms a perfect triangle along with 2, 3
00:41:787 (1) - unnecessary new combo?
00:58:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - these finishes are totally overused.
01:22:242 (1) - extend it by a 1/1?

[cRyo's Hard]
00:32:696 (6) - a little bit nazi here, but imo it plays a lot better when moved a bit lower ;)
00:34:514 (3,1,2,3) - spacing, these notes are too close to each other. maybe increase the distance between them while shortening the snap on the brown notes?
00:41:787 (3) - would look a lot better if moved a bit to the left.
01:32:696 (1) - maybe something like this instead?

[osubaka's Insane]
I said all the stuff on irc already, but lost the log, so I'm gonna just rewrite them here
00:12:696 (6) - I'll stick to my opinion that you should add a new combo here.
00:29:060 (8) - move it a bit higher, so the distance between (7) and (1) is the same?
00:31:560 (6,8) - either (8) is too high or (6) is too low
00:43:151 (3,4,5) - they play a lot better in a separate combo, oh come on!
01:31:333 (5) - add a new combo here?


it's been a while since I modded, huh.
Tenshi-nyan
inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
Yuzeyun
Here is the taiko, I hope you'll like it ! =w=/

By the way, while testing it, I found a different offset than yours, 418 seems to be more on-beat on my side, proven by my accuracy : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361502 (While I got around 98,5% with the old offset)

The offset I found is in the map with the inherited re-snapped : http://puu.sh/FTfB

Good luck for your 156th rank, gogo 200 \:D/
rEdo

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
like always, I see you crying like this, just saying. u mad?
Mercurial

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

inb4 rank in 7 days.

like always.
Sadly, complaining will not do anything, you just need to do your best in your maps, and be happy.

This is just a game.
Low
Hello, Andrea.

General

- Your background is not in the correct dimensions. Because of this, you may want to find a better quality BG in order to avoid black letterboxes on the side for people using 1024x768 resolution.
- Remove (Short Ver.) from the song's title due to the new rule.
- Remove -Sekai- from the tags, it can't be searched on the osu website.
- I'm not sure, but the offset seems slightly off. (I think Gezo has fixed this by the time I post this.)

Sekai's Easy

- Add +1 to the OD. 1 for any stat is much too easy. You may also want to add +1 AR. The low AR makes some of the patterns feel really cluttered and slow.
00:42:242 (3,4) - Remove the redpoint towards the end of these sliders. They're barely noticeable and make the slider look less visually appealing.
00:46:333 (2) - This should be one grid to the right in order to be aligned with (1).
00:59:514 (2) - One grid to the left to be aligned with (4).
01:08:605 (5) - One grid up for the same reason.
- This difficulty has decent flow. In my opinion, you need to work on making your sliders better looking and making your patterns more aligned. It's only for the better!

Chewin's Normal

00:44:060 - Unused timing section here.
00:50:424 (4) - You should make the claps on this slider quieter just like they are in the music. Don't make them too quiet, though. It's nice to get hitsound feedback when you hit a note.

cRyo's Hard

00:33:833 (2) - This slider looks a bit odd to me. Something like this may fix the problem.
Well made. Flows very nicely and the sliders are pretty good.

Insane

00:34:969 (6) - This is hard to notice while playing because it blends in with the girl in the background's hair! Please unstack it.
00:58:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern is extremely repetitive and boring. It would be nice to have some variation in it!
01:03:605 (11) - This 1/8th slider is complete overmap. It's not in the music and makes no sense.
01:26:560 (1) - Another map was unranked for having two sliders in the same place like this. For this one, it's with 01:25:424 (2). Please change it.

Good luck! Also, if you denied any of my suggestions, I would like to know why with a legitimate reason. If you don't, I shall hunt you down.
Milkshake
let's map the same song in short ver. 358486 times!! yeahhhhhh
Suimya
Mercurial

Milkshake wrote:

let's map the same song in short ver. 358486 times!! yeahhhhhh
I lol'd.
Deif
You should prolly add "osuplayer111" to tags now, right? lol don't kds this
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks everyone for modding, mostly fixed everything.

As for the title, please take a look here ^^

Oh, someone please make a Taiko BG for me T_T

Thank you lolcubes <3
DerekMcD
Just my own suggestions...

[Easy]

All sliderticks that used with a clap should be moved to the white tick and ends on the red tick, it's better. If you want to...

00:12:690 (5) - It's better if you move this to x:92 y:76
01:08:973 (5) - Unsnapped.
00:16:781 (3) - Fix the spacing.
00:17:236 (4) - ^
01:08:599 (5) - Fix this slider a little bit, to be like 01:07:236 (3).


[Normal]

01:15:872 (6) - Better if you move this to x:300 y:280?


[Hard]

00:08:145 (2,3) - It needs to be a little futher, like this spacing, 00:09:508 (1,2,3).
00:25:872 (1) - Is it better if you move to x:120 y:44?

Good luck and a star for you.
tutuhaha
Remove (Short Ver.)
PreviewTime: 65872
Don't use hitsound 5%, change to 10%

Easy:
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 ---> 1.00
^this is a bug
00:50:418 (1,2) - This part maybe is a litter bit hard in easy.
01:18:599 (3) - add whistle

Normal:
Don't use hitsound 5%, change to 10%

Insane
01:25:417 (2) - add whistle

no many things can talk Orz...Good map!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for mod, fixed some stuff.
Suimya
jossieP
nexus tag please *v*
Amyrina_old
so cute ><
Miya
Sekai told me that i can make normal diff for this map. But it's been filled up by other people. Oh well, good luck with this map Andrea~
Chewin
Chewin
Sorry for the double post.

[General]
http://puu.sh/G1Eo Taiko bar covers the font :\

[Sekai's Easy]
CS +1? o.o
00:13:145 (6) - You should reduce this slider by 1/2 to follow the voice.
00:43:145 (4) - x:432 y:192 to improve the blanket
01:11:327 (4) - Same. Reduce by 1/2
01:21:327 (3) - I think it's better if you move this slider on the next red tick, so it starts when the vocal starts. Much easier for beginners:

01:27:690 (1,2) - I don't like this blanket, you could fix in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361926
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[cRyo's Hard]
00:18:599 (1) - Try to ctrl + r it? It flows better in my opinion
Awesome ;3

[Insane]
01:18:827 (5) - Userei NC qui e lo rimuoverei da 01:19:736 (1)
<3
Suimya
Thanks Chewin >w<

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Snowy Dream
ww ?
Change the creator's name to Andrea?
Topic Starter
Andrea
Everything updated :3
-kevincela-
Shiau :3

[Sekai's Easy]

  1. 00:09:508 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:11:327 (3) - ,since you are pretty much using the same New combo pattern on the following patterns?
  2. 00:17:236 (4) - Little spacing error,fix it by moving this 1 grid down
  3. 00:29:508 (5) - Replace the finish at the beginning with a whistle?
  4. 01:08:599 (5) - 1 grid up to fix the spacing and to make 01:07:236 (3,4,5) - a symmetric pattern?
  5. 01:18:599 (3) - 2 grids down,again for the same reason as above
[Chewingum's Normal]

  1. 00:18:599 (1) - E' una piccola cosa,ma se vuoi fare questo pattern simmetrico potresti mettere questo su x:184 y:256 :3
  2. 01:01:554 (5) - Piccolo errore di blanketing con 01:00:645 (4) - ,risolvi muovendo questa nota 1 grid a sinistra
[cRyo's Hard]

  1. 00:58:145 (4) - CTRL+R here?
[Insane]

  1. 01:05:417 (1) - Io muoverei il New combo a 01:06:099 (2) -, per seguire la voce della cantante piuttosto che il tamburo
Come al solito sexy map,buon speedrank! :3
Chewin
Grazie kevin avevo già fixato, ma visto che andrea non ha aggiornato °_°

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Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated, thanks ^^
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER

iMercurial wrote:

Hard

  • 01:33:378 - Spinner until 01:34:969 maybe? http://puu.sh/FSXQ
    Well done. i think slider is better :3




Good Job Everyone, specially Hard diff, it has the best patterns on the entire mapset. (ღ˘˘ღ)♥
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rEdo wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]
00:32:696 (6) - a little bit nazi here, but imo it plays a lot better when moved a bit lower ;)
00:34:514 (3,1,2,3) - spacing, these notes are too close to each other. maybe increase the distance between them while shortening the snap on the brown notes?
00:41:787 (3) - would look a lot better if moved a bit to the left.
01:32:696 (1) - maybe something like this instead? SOMEONE111 changed it already, im lazy to put it back B(
other fine for me~
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Jacob wrote:

cRyo's Hard

00:33:833 (2) - This slider looks a bit odd to me. Something like this may fix the problem. i dunno...i think its not that ugly ww
Well made. Flows very nicely and the sliders are pretty good.
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Koro McAlpine wrote:

[Hard]

00:08:145 (2,3) - It needs to be a little futher, like this spacing, 00:09:508 (1,2,3).
00:25:872 (1) - Is it better if you move to x:120 y:44?
both fine for me
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Chewin wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]
00:18:599 (1) - Try to ctrl + r it? It flows better in my opinion i wanted to use only 1.0 spacing during 1st kiai, but well why not ww
Awesome ;3 (ღ˘˘ღ)♥
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-kevincela- wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]

  1. 00:58:145 (4) - CTRL+R here?
it will be too far....

Thx for mod!

http://puu.sh/G8xg
Suimya
thanks for modding~

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osu file format v9

[General]
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[Metadata]
Title:Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Artist:ClariS
Creator:Andrea
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Nendoroid Generation
Tags:PSP Opening Alice Clara Chewin cRyo[iceeicee] Gezo osuplayer111 Sekai

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Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated :3
Konei
Good luck with this one :)
kanpakyin
Hi. osuplayer111 oops, Andrea.

[General]
  1. SliderMultiplier in .osu file of sekai's easy is 0.99999999999. I'm not sure it will affect the gameplay or not but I recommend fixing it to 1 if possible.
  2. Other looks clear.
[Sekai's Easy]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:22:236 (1) - I can't find a reason that it needs 5% volume here. The music keep going so I don't think 5% would show a cool effect here. Thus I highly suggest removing this.
    2. 00:48:145 (3) - How about move this down a bit to align (2)- and (4)- ?
    3. 00:50:418 (1,2) - I think the rhythm is too weird for me. I would put a 3/4 slider here (with a reserve) and then put a note at 00:51:327 - .This way is much better for me.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 01:11:327 (4) - Maybe just me, I think a whistle fits the music quite well here.
    2. 01:20:418 (2) - The slidertick sounds weird here. I prefer a original slidertick rather than this, but well, this is up to you.
    3. 00:07:008 (1) - Probably add a whistle at the beginning of the slider to increase the striking feeling of playing?
[Chewin's Normal]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:22:236 (1) - Same as Easy.
    2. 00:55:418 (x) - I feel like placing a note here because it has a sound from background music but well, leave this to you.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:43:372 (1) - How about adding a S2 clap at the end of the slider to fit the clap sound on the music background?
    2. 01:20:417 (1) - The slidertick sounds weird here. I prefer a original slidertick rather than this, but well, this is up to you.
[cRyo's Hard]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:13:145 (1) - How about moving this up a bit then it can align to (5.6)- and it will be more beautiful imo.
    2. 00:22:463 (1) - Same as Easy
    3. 01:07:690 (1,2,3,4) - I think a jump here would be much better because you had placed a jump at 01:05:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - so I was expecting some jump here with same melody.
    4. 01:09:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^Same.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:07:008 (1) - Probably add a whistle at here to increase the striking feeling of playing?
[Insane]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:20:645 (2,3,4) - I think it would be better if you could make this jump larger than before becuase it is under my consideration of insane diff and the extremely strong accent of the music. It will be more fun if you change it.
    2. 01:10:417 (1) - I would add a new combo here or 01:11:554 (2) - because I can see you new symmetrical pattern was started.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:07:008 (1) - Probably add a whistle at here to increase the striking feeling of playing?
[Gezo's Taiko Oni]
  1. 85% sounds too loud for me. I personally prefer normal 65% volume. It should be enough.
  2. 00:06:554 (1) - I found that a kat fit the music very well here. Consider it?
  3. 00:31:099 (1,1,2,1) - This 2-plets pattern didn't fit the music that well, I would prefer simple 1/2 or triplet here. I doubt any 2plet pattern would fit the music here.
  4. 00:32:008 (1,2,3,1,1) - ddkkd?
  5. 01:29:963 (2) - 01:30:872 (4) - 01:31:781 (2) - change it to kat?
nothing actually wrong.
Find more mods before calling me for a recheck. More Taiko mod would be nice.
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