Thx h-728 xD ~
Almost Fixed :3 xD ~

okay here a mod from #modrequest

general
background size its not recomended. try to find an 1024x768
set preview point (in edit mode 'timing' and 'set current position as preview point')
please solve audio leadin (put in all diffs the same lead)
^same in letterbox in breaks
add tags.



normal

01:17:672 (4) - unsnapped slider
01:17:672 (4) - ^
01:17:672 (4) - ^

hard
that start its strange and doesn't fit beats in the song with your notes please try to fix that ... and its really long the part is not really acorded with the song
try to don't spam with spninners and don't make this: 00:37:039 thats kinda horrible and more in hard diff
i took a look fast couse there are a huge part of notes in bad places
and please whats that? XD
00:59:672 (1) -
maybe helps that
waiting more updates ^^

Finish ~ xD xD ~
thanks hitmefast xD xD ~

Arakawa_Nyx wrote:

Finish ~ xD xD ~
thanks hitmefast xD xD ~

yw

today i will take a better look^^
hope changes are done

#cancel kudo star

Done >,< ~
But If There Still a mistake Tell me T_T Maybe I forgot to fix it xD

if you play this map in the CTB version
there is one mistake
the fruit color is white
but the seed color is black
i hope you can fix that mistake

How ? >< change the color ? ><

one more thing i forgot to tell you
the beat in the taiko mode doesn't suit very well
hope you can make the taiko difficulty

Okay >< ~

Note: don't give kudos without reason please. they can be denied and you may be punished ;D

here's the mod i said:

http://puu.sh/HM28 - its an .osu document you need to add this document in the folder of the song
there you can hear the notes hit in some correct places
note: don't full upload with this!!! - delete it before you upload it again

next ... the source its fine couse its from Pandora Hearts but ... remove the 'Pandora Hearts OST' from tags couse its allready in source
for change the colour of fruits/notes w/e go to song setup -> colours and there select better ones imo pure black its kinda bad for any song maybe a really black gray should do the same effect

the blackground image its the same but you changed the tittle of it so the song can't recognice his blackground - iff you're going to change the image for another one delete it from the folder

okay the lead in as i said before its wrong couse the 3 diffs have diferent ones - to correct that you need to go to song setup -> audio and there put a number ... THEN do the same in ALL diffs the song have BTW the lead in should be great at 2

next thing ... letterbox its the same as in the lead all 3 diffs have diferent ones - to solve that go to song setup -> StoryBoarding and put the same value for all the diffs

preview point ... as i said in the 1º post to set a preview point go to ... timing (the one in the menu not the one in the editor) and 'set current position as preview point' AND do the same in all diffs ...

easy:
00:51:958 (2) add new combo

normal
use 1/4 bot 1/6 please.


a lot of work ... good homeworks
enjoy ~

i will come once i see important changes ... hope thats soon ^^
bye~

Sorry for a long time T_T

how to add the document to folder song ? T_T

Change the tag -> Finish ><
Change the color -> Finih >< Black to gray
By the way i change the background for many times, But why the background still blank ? T_T What should I Do T_T

I Finish Fix this beatmap >< but if there still a mistake, please tell me ><
maybe i forgot fix that >3<

Sorry for my poor english >< i can't speak well >< ~

Arakawa_Nyx wrote:

Sorry for a long time T_T

how to add the document to folder song ? T_T

Change the tag -> Finish ><
Change the color -> Finih >< Black to gray
By the way i change the background for many times, But why the background still blank ? T_T What should I Do T_T

I Finish Fix this beatmap >< but if there still a mistake, please tell me ><
maybe i forgot fix that >3<

Sorry for my poor english >< i can't speak well >< ~

Did you use full submission?

OMG xD xD xD ~
It's Work ! >< OMG ~
Thanks Indra145 xD xD

hi!!

[Geral]

BG must be 1024x768 pixels or 800x600
use grid lvl 3!
Slider velocity 0,90
add Preview point --> 00:26:243
Slider tick 1

[Easy]

Drain 3
Ar 3
OD 3

00:00:957 --> omg no hidden beat on easy diff!
00:02:671 --> same
00:03:529 --> same, and same for all map.
Try make the biggining with some sliders.


00:07:386 -- > end slider here
00:07:814 -- add circle
00:10:386 --> add circle

00:10:814 (1) - 00:11:243 (2) - more suddenly ditance confuse the bigginers. And we must not do this is easy diff.
Try make a slidder. Create a slider insatead of circle 1 and 2, and other slider instead of 2 and 4.

00:15:100 -- > 1º slipper is too long. 2º No sppiner here, it's non sense.

00:32:243 -- > make sure the sliders don't hide the circles

00:37:386 --> same for this spinner and others

00:41:672 (1) - no long slidders, this ins't a "old map"

01:09:529 - lol too much circles :X and.. you know

01:23:030 - start spinner here

[Normal]

circle size lvl 4
AR 5
OD 5
drain 5 ou 6

00:06:957 - no sliders hidden the circles

Bla bla.. the same stuff i said for Eays diff ;o

[Hard]

drain 6 or 7
circle size 4
Ar8
OD 7

Slider velocity 1,60 seems better but it depends of what you do.

Note for this diff (hard) the same thigs i said for easy diff;



Maybe if you update this i can mod again. Good luck!

Let's do it quick.

> I believe this kind of music has no sense to put kiai. You don't need to put it.
> Slider Tick Rate 2. It sounds purely absurd when you use 3.
> Keep in mind that beatmap is god when you can get the feel of the music, thus you can make a better style
> BPM 140.
> Consider using Distance snap to keep constant spacing.
> It would be best if you avoid stack and overlap on easy and normal diff.
> Consider map all the part, this song has a big chance to have no spinner, I believe. Example, starting from here 00:03:529 the music box still playing.00:06:966 Here too
> For normal, Drain 4, CS 4, AR 5, OD 4.
> For hard, Drain 7, CS 4, AR 7, OD 7.
Need more work after all. Good luck.

Thx R e d ~
almost Finish >3< ~
Hard - Wip ><

Thanks cJJ >< ~
i almost finish it xD ~

Hey, as promised, I changed your BG Resolution to from 960x768 to 800x600
http://puu.sh/OdIi There, you may download it

uaa Thank U so Much Indra145 <3 xD xD ~

[easy]
00:13:386 (7,8,9,10) - use distance snap
00:54:101 (5) - ^

[normal]
00:08:671 (5,6,7) - use distance snap
00:12:957 (6,7,8) - ^
00:14:243 (1) - RNC
00:18:957 (3) - Distance
00:28:386 (4) - ^
00:40:386 (2) - ^
00:43:386 (3) - ^
00:45:958 (6) - ^
00:50:243 (4) - ^
00:55:815 (8) - ^
01:12:529 (6) - ^
01:15:101 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:101 (3) - ^

jarak na jangan ke deketen jadi na jelek dempet2

[Hard]

aq kerem file na aja ,susa njelasin na

Thanks >< ~
Finish ._.v xD

Awesome job mapping! Seems really good! I hope this gets ranked!

~Star~

If you wanted I edited a combo burst for you, if you like?
http://i592.photobucket.com/albums/tt6/ ... -burst.png

Thank You So Damn Much xiceyx !! xD xD xD xD ~~
UAaaa >3< xD xD xD

Arakawa_Nyx wrote:

Thank You So Damn Much xiceyx !! xD xD xD xD ~~
UAaaa >3< xD xD xD

Your welcome!!

hey

General
In the future, if there's only one comboburst, you can just name it comboburst.png

Easy
00:02:671 (6,1) - Too far. In Easy and Normal diffs, you should use distance snap for every note
00:02:243 (5) - Whistle would sound better than clap?
00:03:100 (1) - Whistle (add more whistles in the section to make it less boring ^^)
00:05:671 (5) - in Easy, avoid lots of reverses, maybe confusing for beginners
00:09:529 (5) - move left under (4)
00:15:529 (1) - Delete spinner and map this part, kinda weird in this peaceful song
00:21:529 (2,3) - maybe move down to create variety in pattern, lines might get too boring http://puu.sh/OGnn; same for the next combo
00:37:386 (1) - delete and remap =v= (but if you're gonna use these spinners, i suggest lower the volume of them)
00:46:815 (1) - whistle sounds better than clap
00:58:815 (4,5,6) - again, distance snap..
01:01:815 (1) - Silence the end
01:12:958 (7,8) - too close
01:21:101 (3) - ^ , pulling stuff like this out would be great http://puu.sh/OGuL
01:23:030 (1) - Whistle

Normal
HP -2
OD -1
& like Easy, keep distance snap for the whole thing

00:04:814 (7) - move somewhere here so it's not too far away from the other notes
00:05:671 (1) - Whistle
00:06:957 (4) - hm need to silence that slider slide
00:09:529 (7) - Whistle
00:12:957 (6) - Delete finish
00:15:529 (1) - like easy, delete and remap would be better i think
00:24:529 (2) - avoid overlaps if possible http://puu.sh/OGzZ
00:27:100 (3,4) - way too far for Normal
00:29:243 (6) - finish at end?
00:37:386 (7) - bring out (using distance snap ofc)
00:46:815 (1) - delete and remap
00:51:958 (1) - Whistle
00:54:529 (6) - Whistle at beginning
01:00:636 (1) - Delete, use a slider instead
01:09:101 (4) - Delete note, bg music is slient
01:11:244 (4) - Whistle
01:12:529 (6) - Whistle at beginning
01:12:529 (6,5,6) - another far spacing to watch out for
01:21:101 (3) - Whistle at end

Hard
00:03:100 (2,3) - Spacing these out would be more challenging http://puu.sh/OGFW
00:05:671 (1,2,3) - Space these out, these are called anti-jumps btw
00:05:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:11:564 (2) - Start on white tick instead of blue
00:15:100 (1) - Delete and remap
00:18:100 (2,3,4) - Space out
00:21:636 (3) - Delete clap, sounds off
00:22:065 (6) - ^; maybe putting whistles would be better
00:27:207 (4) - claps in the middle sound a bit weird
00:30:207 (8,9) - delete claps
00:33:958 (10) - NC and maybe not so many reverses
01:00:851 (2) - really love this heart, but off rhythm orz

Good luck!! Love Pandora Hearts!

....another yuki kajiura.. *nosebleed*
why no taiko diff here too.. <-- completely nosebleeding

Thank You LunarSakuya !! ><

sacchann wrote:

....another yuki kajiura.. *nosebleed*
why no taiko diff here too.. <-- completely nosebleeding

omoo
oh yeaah taiko diff ~
How to make Taiko diff ? x_x ~

Pandora Hearts <3

you got my star~

May will mod it if in the mood :3

.....i will make the taiko diff for this yukikajiura map asap <-- still nosebleeding

o/
sorry if the mod wasn't help you at all


[General]

[Easy]

[Normal]
I'll skip this.

[Hard]


good luck with this map!

sorry, a little bit lazy because I'm feeling sleepy and I was doing this while I'm doing my homework orz (that's why I skip the normal)

I think the artist should be "Kajiura Yuki", no "Yuki Kajiura", because in the previous ranked beatmap the artist name was that
and sure because rule about western name blahblah :3
P.S. you should fullsubmit for fix this
no kd..

Matoryoshika wrote:

Pandora Hearts <3

you got my star~

May will mod it if in the mood :3

Thanks For The Star ! >3< ~

sacchann wrote:

.....i will make the taiko diff for this yukikajiura map asap <-- still nosebleeding

Omoo xD xD How to make taiko diff ? x_x''
#still don't understand ><

Matoryoshika wrote:

o/
sorry if the mod wasn't help you at all


[General]

1. Delete .osb if you don't need it
2. You should set the prevew point with 'Timing > Set Curret Position as Preview Point'
3. This song's BPM actually is 70 right?
4. Because this song is verry... how should I say it '-' maybe you need silence hitsound to replace current sliderslide
5. Some notes are overlap
6. No need to put 'Pandora Hearts' again in tags since they already in Source
7. Also capital words in tags aren't needed CMIIW so you may want to fix it
8. Provide a better comboburst http://puu.sh/OQe5 remember, the max dimension of combo burst is 500x767 (already fix that with this one) I know it's not quite clean.... sorry
9. Remove the 'letterbox during breaks' in [Hard] diff for its consistency (F4 > Storyboarding Tab)
10. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Easy] : 2000
    - [Hard] : 2023
    - [Normal] : 2000

[Easy]

1. IMO, this diff is too hard there are some parts that beginner can't take (I guess) just like 00:00:529 ~ 00:04:386 or 00:26:243 ~ 00:30:100 I bet 8/10 newcomer can't pass it because it confusing, it happens because it has lower AR so you should consider about it, (just like you play insane with easy mod, lol)
2. As you can see the star spread is more than 2 stars (2.64)
3. Suggest: Try to play with mouse only (especially if you bad at it :3) to tess your easy diff
4. 00:53:243 (3,4,5) - I think it was too hard for easy, because you should do a little jump.

[Normal]
I'll skip this.

[Hard]

1. SV 2 is too high, I don't know if it's unrankable or not, you may can ask MAT/BAt, and SV 2 would not fit the song that has 'slow' BPM
2. It would be better if you make the slider's curve more curve and looks better/have nice looking
3. Yeah, AR8 also too high for me and this is hard diff right
4. There are some overlap notes here
5. Should have more slider anchor for long slider and more curving for nice looking slider
6. 00:11:672 (2) - the slider is too long maybe? the slider tail should stop at white tick instead blue tick
7. 00:30:100 (7,8,9) - I think it's not good to put 3 notes here (as a stream), it is more like overmapped
8. 01:00:529 (1,2) - If you want to make the slider like http://puu.sh/OQ8E then... click slider (1) > Ctrl C > paste it > hightlight it > edit > flip horizontally > Ctrl R
9. 01:06:315 (5) - this clap feels awkward
10. 01:17:030 (7) - make the slider shorter 1 tick

good luck with this map!

sorry, a little bit lazy because I'm feeling sleepy and I was doing this while I'm doing my homework orz (that's why I skip the normal)

Work In Progress

Yasora wrote:

I think the artist should be "Kajiura Yuki", no "Yuki Kajiura", because in the previous ranked beatmap the artist name was that
and sure because rule about western name blahblah :3
P.S. you should fullsubmit for fix this
no kd..

but i can't rename the artist x_x if i rename, my map will turn to "Not Submited Yet" x_x ~

#Sorry for my poor english ><
hehe

you should change the artist name without exit from editor,
example, you open hard first, then rename the artist. after that, save (don't exit) and ctrl + O (open other difficulty) click "Normal". then, rename into same artist. same step for other diff.
after rename all, don't exit from editor, submit the beatmap like usually but choose "fullsubmit" (:

well, this beatmap is completed right? move into pending beatmaps orz

please don't give kudosu for this post ><

if you still not understand, pm me in-game x''D

Still can't rename the artis name x_x
if i rename my map will turn to "Not Submited Yet" x_x ~

sure that's will be like that
as I said when rename, don't quit....

Not sure if this still works... t/24443
no kd or rapes.

Yoooo

[General]

kalo km masang circle na teken "alt" tahan biar rapi

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/411900
km ganti grid na jadi medium ,jangan pake small ntar slider na jelek


[easy]

00:01:386 (3) - contoh na ini ,coba km teken "alt" tahan nti posisi na mindah2 sendiri ,tinggal km arahain aja
kalo da ganti 1itu ganti semua dah XD

00:57:101 (2) - bentuk na jebi lengkungin (uba grid na dulu)
00:57:958 (3) - ^

[normal]

aq mungkin bantu hit sound na dolo
teken "R" untuk Clap

00:01:386 (3) - Clap
00:06:529 (3) - ^
00:31:815 (3) - ^
00:41:672 (1) - pret,slider e elek bentuk na bagusin
00:53:672 (5) - terlalu atas sampe nyentuh bar HP


sementara gitu dolo aja dah
soal na km mesti banyak memperbaiki bentuk slider ama distance na